/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.7028493]

If you are a /int/ermediate or /beg/inner in art, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.

>STICKY:
Completed: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98
New collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
w/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
Hardcore: https://hackmd.io/7k0XRnIQR6SValR77TDfZw?view

>PYW and give your feedback
What can be improved? are there any resources videos or books you'd recommend to them? maybe a redline or a technique, be specific

Previous thread >>7025483

[Anonymous No.7028497]

>>7028473
>>7028474
No. Look in the mirror.

[Anonymous No.7028498]

>>7028493
nice format lmao

[Anonymous No.7028501]

wip
backgrounds are hard, what do?

[Anonymous No.7028507]

>>7028493
you forgot the title retard

[Anonymous No.7028524]

I've been working on my faces a bit and now I'm trying something that isn't a study but I'm struggling with stylizing, the lips, and the hair. I think the neck might be wonky too

any advice? should I just study those individually or should I keep doing the whole face? maybe a mix of both?

[Anonymous No.7028525]

>fucking up the format this badly
nu /ic/, not even once.

[Anonymous No.7028528]

It takes years to get this good.

[Anonymous No.7028532]

cogito ergo sum

[Anonymous No.7028538]

[Anonymous No.7028540]

One of 3 sketch's I did 2 weeks ago is this acceptable poseing and yes I did use a reference which you guys can probably tell by looking at it

[Anonymous No.7028548]

>>7027238
>>7028475
>hurr durr polished turd
it's true but you'll also never learn how to finish pieces (painting, backgrounds, whatever) if you never try it

[Anonymous No.7028552]

I make the heads too big every time

[Anonymous No.7028557]

second last one

[Anonymous No.7028560]

Crits? I need to work on hair.

[Anonymous No.7028568]

>>7028540
>>7028557
Less chicken scratching or at the very least go over it in a new layer with cleaner lines. It'll overall look nicer and make your problem areas like anatomy more obvious for correction and not hidden away behind a dozen random lines.

[Anonymous No.7028573]

>>7028568
Gotcha pal brb

[Anonymous No.7028582]

>>7027179
I added colours and a simple background
I also changed the legs since they were causing me discomfort

[Anonymous No.7028593]

>>7028493
>Bad OP
Check!
>No title
Check!!
Tasteless + retarded NGMI /beg/let
Do it again and I'll start posting and shitting /beg/ like the good old day.

[Anonymous No.7028594]

Haven't drawn in years, never actually read any books or guides, never posted for critique, and never actually improved. I think I just puke up things. I want to actually improve but I think I'm too retarded, and I also get carried away and never actually pay attention to the technical side of things. Also, I don't think I can actually draw without reference, if I do it ends up looking like psychotic scribbles.

[Anonymous No.7028595]

>>7028582
i'll be wary of you too

[Anonymous No.7028597]

>>7028582
I think her ribcage might be sticking out too much under her boobies

[Anonymous No.7028599]

I'm new to using a graphics tablet

I drew this in Krita, I found that Paint.net's smoothing was too weak. I cranked up the stabilizer on Krita, is that something I should try to move away from? I find my lines get pretty jittery and jagged without it, but also when I use the stabilizer it kind of feels like what I draw on the screen is a little bit off

[Anonymous No.7028600]

>>7028594
Have you considered doing the complete opposite of all of that?

[Anonymous No.7028601]

>>7028600
perhaps

[Anonymous No.7028603]

>>7028501
update
the perspective feels slightly weird, I'm not sure what to do about it.

[Anonymous No.7028604]

>>7028599
turn off all the nannies and just get good. Also loomis

[Anonymous No.7028605]

>>7028594
you're just another self crab. Stop making excuses and do what you need to. You already know the answer

[Anonymous No.7028608]

>>7028604
So no stabilization at all?

I read drawing from the shoulder is supposed to make lines really smooth. But how the hell do people get the fine control to draw details like that? Is it just pure skill with the shoulder muscles?

[Anonymous No.7028615]

>>7028608
Keep practicing until it becomes second nature. Draw 100 straight lines for warm up or something like that.

[Anonymous No.7028624]

>>7028615
Are there any bad things that can arise from relying on the stabilizer too much?

[Anonymous No.7028627]

>>7028608
>>7028608
ditch the stabilization, is not worth it right now get good. use a textured brush its easier to handle, turn off size by pressure or at least make it really subtle.

c) pencil-4-soft is a nice place to start.

[Anonymous No.7028629]

>>7028624
your work will look plastic and uncanny

[Anonymous No.7028636]

>>7028605
I wish I did but I don't even know where I would/should start, as there is an overwhelming amount of resources. le choice paralysis meme or whatever.

[Anonymous No.7028637]

>>7028636
just stop making excuses. Download Fun with a Pencil and just do the whole book and shut up

[Anonymous No.7028638]

>>7028627
>turn off size by pressure
shit, that was one of the reasons I got the tablet

I assume turn it off for now because it's another part of the tablet to learn to use?

Why do textured brushes make it easier?

[Anonymous No.7028646]

>>7028638
>shit, that was one of the reasons I got the tablet
start without variable brush size get comfortable making lines first, later you can play around with the size curve most of the time you don't really need that extreme of a line variation.

>Why do textured brushes make it easier?
just like IRL making two strokes overlap is easier with a pencil than a fineliner due to the texture helps to hide that overlap. the combination of texture+antialiasing makes drawing more manageable. With practice you will have the muscle memory to work with any brush you like.

[Anonymous No.7028654]

>>7028636
Just draw, this meme is designed for you, pick up a pencil. Hell, you could even pick up a stick, and start drawing on the sand.

[Anonymous No.7028663]

I have a lot of trouble with cosistency in the armpit area

[Anonymous No.7028665]

horse

[Anonymous No.7028668]

>>7028665
I think you need to give hamm's animal book another read.

[Anonymous No.7028673]

Getting back into it
I am so fucking angry seeing others rise above me. I want to get better as well.
Fucked up today but have this shitty ethot doodle.
I will try again tomorrow.

[Anonymous No.7028701]

>>7028673
here anon, use this as motivation

[Anonymous No.7028704]

>>7028603
It only looks like the first couple of blocks have two point perspective. Every line heading towars the right needs to converge on the same vanishing point

[Anonymous No.7028720]

reposting from prev thread

[Anonymous No.7028721]

>>7028701
>>7028673
moar of this

[Anonymous No.7028723]

The next square will be an enormous ass, i hope so

[Anonymous No.7028732]

>>7028720
looks cute!

but why are her fingers so sharp and detailed compared to everything else?

[Anonymous No.7028735]

>>7028732
started line art too early (started with hands)
i was gonna line the whole thing after getting feedback

[Anonymous No.7028736]

tried my hand at colouring again

[Anonymous No.7028738]

>>7028735
fair enough

I like the details on the shirt

However her left leg (viewer's right) looks a bit...off. I feel like it looks too low and should be moved up, right now it looks a bit like it's dislocated.

Picrel i think this angle looks a bit more natural although you'd have to redraw the lower leg and knee

[Anonymous No.7028745]

>>7028538
live love laugh

[Anonymous No.7028787]

[Anonymous No.7028794]

[Anonymous No.7028805]

[Anonymous No.7028826]

started copying bridgman

[Anonymous No.7028849]

>>7028826
THIS NIGGA FELL FOR BRIDGMAN! PRANK EM' JOHN!

[Anonymous No.7028854]

Is drawing supposed to be sort of boring in the beginning? It takes so much mental energy just to draw things I'm not really that interested in. Just copying from life is getting old, but I know I have to do that

[Anonymous No.7028858]

having a shoeless oc changes a man

[Anonymous No.7028859]

>>7028854
>[...] but I know I have to do that
No you don't. The sooner you realize art isn't some sort of linear path you need to follow the faster you'll grow.

[Anonymous No.7028860]

I won’t contribute to this thread, either.

[Anonymous No.7028861]

>>7028859
Is there an other way to learn to draw that doesn't start with first learning how to see? That's where I'm at right now still

[Anonymous No.7028862]

>>7028861
The problem is that you said you were not interested in what you were studying... so seek things you're interested in. It doesn't matter if it's an image or if it's from life. Of course from life the brain is able to grasp 3D better but in essence it's the same. What matters most is that you keep interest high.

[Anonymous No.7028879]

>>7028721
>>7028673

Used to go by Niquidoll.

Draw this ethot in your style

[Anonymous No.7028906]

how do I go about feeling pinching, stretching, pressure, twisting, etc?

[Anonymous No.7028910]

>>7028826
I'm sorry for you

[Anonymous No.7028923]

>>7028879
drained my balls in 2 seconds flat

[Anonymous No.7028925]

>>7028879
This feels wrong but I don't know why

[Anonymous No.7028929]

>>7028906
grab a sponge and twist it, pinch it, fuck it, eat your own cum even on the coldest of nights.

[Anonymous No.7028934]

Thoughts on the design and color palette before I finalize this?

[Anonymous No.7028937]

Another day, another painting, feeling like a child prophet today. How is everyone doing?

[Anonymous No.7028939]

>>7028906
One of the reason why I want to get a girlfriend is so I can have someone to touch and reference with.

[Anonymous No.7028972]

Im genuinely confused on what to do

[Anonymous No.7028973]

>>7028972
Get used to this feeling

[Anonymous No.7028974]

Liners, brush pens and some red ink. So far, I know that the values are off (first time using colour), her left hand looks like a mutated wank-claw and her head is way too big. Anything obvious to you that a permabeg like me cannot see?

[Anonymous No.7028976]

>>7028972
Joshua Graham?

[Anonymous No.7028977]

>>7028973
Ive been practicing form but I just don’t “feel” it

[Anonymous No.7028978]

>>7028925
Head too small, shoulders aren't round, angle of arms going down are incorrect.
Your drawing is too inaccurate and not stylized enough to stand on its own.

[Anonymous No.7028982]

>>7028925
Is she supposed to have what appears to be cheek jowls, anon?

[Anonymous No.7028984]

>>7028982
Look at the ref, she's pouting.

[Anonymous No.7028987]

>>7028978
I see, thanks

[Anonymous No.7029005]

Did some adjustments …

[Anonymous No.7029026]

>>7029005
Left eye need a bit correction, right hand is out of perspective but it easily can be fixed when colored, and left leg is a bit too small.
But overall good work.

[Anonymous No.7029029]

>>7028603
finished
how'd I do?

[Anonymous No.7029033]

>>7028974
shit drawing but nice abella anderson.

[Anonymous No.7029037]

>>7029029
Cute, perspective is fucked but who cares, add some value on character, light, shadow etc.

[Anonymous No.7029045]

>>7029029
Is that Edward from Cowboy bebop in frog suit doing minecraft shit?

[Anonymous No.7029047]

>>7029045
no it's my deeplore minecraft waifu

[Anonymous No.7029048]

>>7029037
>perspective is fucked but who cares
nu-/ic/ in the wild.

[Anonymous No.7029050]

>>7029047
It is now Edward from Cowboy bebop from now. Too bad, so sad.

[Anonymous No.7029052]

>>7029029
Middle blocks between the girl and the monster have the wrong perspective, but otherwise it's cute, and you did a nice job coloring it.

[Anonymous No.7029056]

>>7029026
NTA but I am curious looking at it what is wrong with the perspective on the right hand? Is it not small enough given that it would be further away than the other hand or something?

[Anonymous No.7029065]

>>7029026
Appreciate the feedback, not sure about what you mean about the hand…

[Anonymous No.7029094]

Still trying to figure out what I want my finished stuff to look like.

[Anonymous No.7029100]

>>7029094
Her arm is too short.

[Anonymous No.7029116]

>>7029056
>>7029065
I'm not him but the whole arm is indeed odd if you think about it in 3D. The upper and lower arms feel too short. I think the hand gesture itself is ok but the arm looks broken. I can't redline sorry but it's a shame since the piece as a whole is looking great. Try to revisit it in some way.

[Anonymous No.7029120]

>>7029116
I see, I think the way I did the folds of the cloth might be the issue since I didnt notice earlier.

[Anonymous No.7029132]

My best body drawing so far. I had no how to draw bodies a couple weeks ago, so I'm happy with my progress so far.

[Anonymous No.7029135]

Question about anatomy: How is it that picrel looks good even though you can only see 2 sets of Nappa's abs? Shouldn't his trunks go higher up his waist if they were to cover his lower set of abs?

[Anonymous No.7029137]

>>7028925
Fuck i didn't save the ref

[Anonymous No.7029138]

Does anyone have that little torso shorthand tip that shows the torso and hips being divided up as two overlapping diamonds? I just randomly remembered it and it's been helping somewhat but I can't find it anywhere. It might've been a pic or a youtube video, I can't fucking remember.

[Anonymous No.7029139]

>>7029132
Did you trace the pose, or did come up with it yourself?

[Anonymous No.7029141]

>>7029139
Reference, but I do draw torsos from Imagination, which why you can see me bullshit a lot of anatomy in the legs and arms.

[Anonymous No.7029155]

I did a Fishtank study

[Anonymous No.7029156]

I have the most retarded question, but, WHAT should i draw?

[Anonymous No.7029160]

>>7029156
youre right, that is a retarded question.

[Anonymous No.7029163]

>>7029160
:(

[Anonymous No.7029164]

>>7029156
Unpopular opinion but if you don't know what you want to draw you don't want to draw. In short, you're ngmi.
I'll still give you suggestions - nature is good to draw for begs - trees, rock formations, landscapes.

[Anonymous No.7029171]

>>7029137
>>7028925

Here you go >>7029169
Jannies keep flagging it because "requesting free work"

[Anonymous No.7029172]

>>7029005
>Reverse bunny
Coom.
I love your lines. Is it CSP?

[Anonymous No.7029176]

>>7029156
Skulls are always my default. I scribble them on receipt paper at work between customers and get yelled at by my manager.

[Anonymous No.7029187]

>>7029156
Draw Robots. There is a dire scarcity of mechfags.

[Anonymous No.7029195]

>>7029164
That's not an unpopular opinion, anon. It's just dumb.

[Anonymous No.7029213]

I'm happy with how it looks. I have spent too much time with it anyway and I want to draw more coom.

>>7029172
Thanks, it is Procreate. But the brush is just the regular round brush you find in every software.

[Anonymous No.7029217]

>>7028673

[Anonymous No.7029218]

>>7029187
This is my endgoal i'm just not sure how to get there. I try to draw machinery (i'm machinist, i'm constantly surrounded by it) but it's a bit too hard to me at this point.

[Anonymous No.7029221]

>>7029218
Check out "Scott Robertson How to Draw" and go one step at a time. If your goal is to draw mech stuff then you definitelly have to put perspective as the thing that rules everything you do. So do that and the more you ingrain it the more stuff you'll find to do.

[Anonymous No.7029223]

>>7029218
>i'm just not sure how to get there
The best way to start is to draw the things you have around you. Also look up Syd Mead works. I like his aproach to design.

[Anonymous No.7029226]

SAME OLD SHIT

[Anonymous No.7029230]

>>7029221
Holy shit this is the exact thing i need, thanks anon
>>7029223
Yeah he's great. I liked Turn A as well.

[Anonymous No.7029233]

I'm scared to draw.

I haven't finished the sticky because I can't force myself through the paragraphs without immediately jumping down the page or getting pulled away by all sorts of bullshit.

I've bought Bridgman, Loomis, Keys to Drawing, Drawing from the Right Side, a 1300 dollar Cintiq, sketchpads and pencil sharpeners like Proko said, and I touch none of it. Furthest I've gotten is Keys to Drawing, I got to the foot exercise, couldn't find a position to sit and draw my feet in, got mad and I haven't touched it in days.

I can't PYW because I don't have any W to post. I have some, but the more I post at how nothing's happening, the more people are gonna notice it's me and throw up walls at me like Howie and I'm just going to be another meme so I'm scared to even ask for help.

I don't know what to do or where to focus, what to practice or how much time I should spend just drawing the cartoons I want to, and how to forgive myself for it not looking like I want it to. I'm just a big fucking schizo and I hate it. I hate being so broken and dumb and inactive and overthinky and I can't TALK to anyone about it.

What do I do? How do I untangle all this? Should I just ditch all the craft and practice and get into drawing at all daily? I tried that, but I just hated the way it looked, but I can't ask YOU guys how to fix that because it'd either be too broad and vague or I'd have to be specific and then you'd remember me and I'd be a big meme if I'm not already. I'm scared to post, scared to draw, scared to fail my goals and I will if I can't get myself back together but I don't know who or what's the right questions to ask.

What the fuck do I do? I can't just quit, I locked myself into a several thousand dollar investment, and I don't want to give up, not really. I just want to give up when I'm actually trying, because I don't feel like anything I try is making a difference.

[Anonymous No.7029234]

>>7029233
The fabled nodraw blogposter...

[Anonymous No.7029236]

>>7029233
Nobody cares.

[Anonymous No.7029239]

>>7029230
It's probably in the book thread btw. Looking forward to see your stuff.

[Anonymous No.7029241]

>>7029217
good job

[Anonymous No.7029243]

i hereby cast this turd into wip hell for the rest of eternity

[Anonymous No.7029248]

>>7029233
The permabeg's lament. Imagine using the time you spent writing your moaning and bitching into actually drawing

[Anonymous No.7029250]

>>7029221
>>7029230
>Scott Hackerson
Filthy fucking HACK who sold his soul out to NFT and proompt fraudsters who doesnt even draw anymore.
He will give you his sanctimony about autistix bullshit NOBODY has used in a fucking century and then go on to trace over 3D models or just prompt the image from AI.
Dont listen to that nigger.
Just download AUTOCAD or Blender if you want to be some mech autismo

[Anonymous No.7029254]

>>7029213
>Just Round Brush
Really? It looks great.
I would love to see your take on the ethot that was posted.

[Anonymous No.7029260]

[Anonymous No.7029264]

Final iteration
2 succubus torturing a downed angel

[Anonymous No.7029265]

>>7029264

[Anonymous No.7029288]

>>7029265
Kek

[Anonymous No.7029310]

[Anonymous No.7029314]

[Anonymous No.7029321]

>>7029135
His tail and shorts are hiding the rest of his abs.

[Anonymous No.7029323]

my deviantart OC persona (male)

[Anonymous No.7029327]

>>7028673
cursed attempt

[Anonymous No.7029332]

>>7029327
Protip: don't fully draw the lip, a single line between the mouth is all you need, imply the top and bottom by light value.

[Anonymous No.7029333]

>>7029234
>>7029236
>>7029248
I tried drawing something sat staring at the page for ten minutes, made a line and it turned into vent art. But I guess it’s better than usual, I picked up a pencil today.

[Anonymous No.7029335]

>>7029333

[Anonymous No.7029339]

>>7029333
>>7029335
It's really not that hard bro.

[Anonymous No.7029340]

>>7029335
I’m tired now, I’m not sure what else to say.

[Anonymous No.7029343]

>>7029340
Forgot last pic.
>>7029339
I hate the little pictures for being so bad, and I twist and tweak at attempts to improve, so I just hate myself and the process the whole way though.

[Anonymous No.7029345]

Wanting to improve on the composition more on this one.

[Anonymous No.7029349]

>>7029343
Try drawing simple things like bugs and flowers.

[Anonymous No.7029353]

Last page I did.
Do I just work on figures more? I want to draw better but I also want to keep the amount of time I spend per page limited.

[Anonymous No.7029359]

>>7029343
>>7029335
>>7029333
nice composition, I think it would be more powerful if you were to use your blood as ink.

[Anonymous No.7029378]

[Anonymous No.7029391]

>>7029343
>>>/adv/
Your issues go deeper than being unable to draw.

[Anonymous No.7029396]

>>7028493
hey dumbass, you fucked up the OP

[Anonymous No.7029407]

>>7029343
>>7029339
>>7029333
You remind me a lot of myself desu. Get checked for ADHD and learn what it's doing to you. I spent 30 fucking years not understanding why I felt like existing was hell until I got diagnosed.

[Anonymous No.7029412]

>>7029335
Too many words and not enough circles and ellipses. Get your ass back to practicing and remember to use your shoulder.

[Anonymous No.7029413]

Hello beg, it took "only" 7 tries before i was content with my beg figure in this one pose. And it is still beg

>>7029353
draw some background for the middle vacuum between the two mini panels
>>7029345
expand the ocean to the right and put there an island, ship or fish peeking from water? Also i have to point out her thighs are TURBO LONG and the connection leg>torso looks wrong
>>7029333
it looks to me like you have the writers gene instead of drawer. anyway do keys to drawing, copy all the shit in it + do projects. it tells you exactly what to draw
>>7029323
>white plastic garden chair
are you from brazil or mexico?
>>7029265
ART
>>7029135
as long as you use appealing shapes and dont VIOLENTLY break the general idea of how human body looks like it will look good. simple as
>>7029132
nice, now hand over your gains
>>7029094
booba
>>7029029
kino + art
>>7028972
>>7028594
pick up an art book and do it. easy
>>7028937
this is very cool
>>7028854
just pick more fun objects to draw. tanks, booba, landscapes, cats...
>>7028794
i bet you have fun while drawing this one
>>7028665
cute and coomable but has ZERO horse features
>>7028599
stabilizers are beg trap. you are supposed to force your hand to "Stabilize itself". After you get gud you can turn it on for pieces where you need it, not for practice
>>7028582
BOOOBA
>>7028532
cool and exotic as usual
>>7028524
my beg opinion about faces is: use reference of existing person and just stylize it. ideally a person with 999 selfies from all angles so your OC will always have perfect face

[Anonymous No.7029421]

I get the sense a lot of japanese illustrators put a ton of practice into line control/quality, I'm tinkering with it too and I think it's working. Feels like you have so much more mastery over the pencil and you're not fighting it all the time

[Anonymous No.7029428]

>>7029413
At the rate you're going you will get out of /beg/ tier in 120 years. Switch up your method.

[Anonymous No.7029429]

Ignored by Pawell again.

[Anonymous No.7029430]

>>7029421
Yes anon, drawing clean and purposeful lines is good for art.

[Anonymous No.7029432]

>>7029429
You and me both buddy. Guess it’s up to us to just make it ourselves then

[Anonymous No.7029435]

>>7029432
we're gonna have to piss with precum hanging from our dicks

[Anonymous No.7029436]

>>7029413
pawell, i love, you what is your end goal, please reply,

[Anonymous No.7029438]

>>7029430
Not clean and purposeful but more being able to draw any kind of line I want, perfect straight, perfect arc, etc.

[Anonymous No.7029442]

>>7029435
STFU lunacringe soda

[Anonymous No.7029447]

>>7029413
>are you from brazil or mexico?
Italy

[Anonymous No.7029448]

>>7029442
then why you reply to me

[Anonymous No.7029451]

>>7029447
oh what are you trying to say
that I'M NOT ALLOWED TO DRAW HERE????

[Anonymous No.7029452]

Enough for the night

[Anonymous No.7029453]

>>7029452
is it for the moment and will he see me as Job??

[Anonymous No.7029454]

>>7029436
Honestly, looking at him is just inspirational.
He's the embodiment of the human spirit.
He keeps getting raped and mogged by art on every level everyday, and yet he keeps getting up on his feet and going back for more.
He might die fighting art, but maybe his children will keep going and maybe one day a great artist will be born from Pawell's genes.

Talentless jobbers always go at it the hardest, maybe as a reminder that we should also give our best.
You shouldn't care what his endgoal is, you should be wondering why a retard can do what you can't.

[Anonymous No.7029462]

well im gonna have to draw more

[Anonymous No.7029463]

[Anonymous No.7029464]

>>7029407
I have severe ADHD and I was very similar to him pre-medication too. It really is an endless nightmare cycle of procrastination and learned helplessness. I hope he's able to get treatment for that shit.

[Anonymous No.7029467]

>>7029463
you tryin' to gateKEEP me? always with the gateKEEPIN'

[Anonymous No.7029469]

I don't remember these threads being so autistic. But I only visit once in a while

[Anonymous No.7029478]

>>7029407
>>7029464
Not everyone who has mental issues needs "ADHD" meds. If you need those to cope it's on you, anon may just need to sort himself via other means.

[Anonymous No.7029480]

>>7029478
oh im sorry
lemme go draw

[Anonymous No.7029481]

>>7029451
>>7029453
>>7029462
>>7029467
Jesus fucking christ, Soda. This shit needs to stop, you're cluttering up the thread with low effort scribbles and retarded replies to random anons. Either post drawings with real effort and give actual criticism or FUCK OFF.

[Anonymous No.7029482]

well imma draw more sennran kagura with the good ol' line eyes

[Anonymous No.7029484]

Trying to get back in the habit

[Anonymous No.7029485]

>>7029484
omg PITBULL???

[Anonymous No.7029486]

[Anonymous No.7029487]

>>7029484
Also one to-may-to and one to-mah-to, you decide which is which

[Anonymous No.7029489]

>>7029485
A mutt with some pit in him. As far as I can tell he avoided getting the baby eating genes

[Anonymous No.7029490]

>>7029478
You're right, it very well maybe something else and he needs to see a doctor to discern his mental issues but it just seems very similar to my own experience. Either way, he needs to get his life in order before stressing out over drawing.

[Anonymous No.7029491]

>>7029469
Only a few autistic people, the rest are mentally okay. They draw means they are fine. It is the no draws that is shitting it up.

[Anonymous No.7029495]

>>7029469
>>7029491
nice buzzwords

[Anonymous No.7029496]

>>7029491
what are you trying to say that im not allowed to draw???

[Anonymous No.7029500]

>>7029349
I tried with a stag beetle and a simple flower. I got mad near the end and gave up
>>7029407
I do have ADHD, clinically diagnosed, but the stimulants only made me stop drawing altogether and the vyvanse made me unable to do anything but whatever I was focusing on thirty minutes after ingestion so I stopped taking those. Cognitive therapy didn’t work, guy heard my /pol/ beliefs and the sessions turned into trying to pathologize them instead of adhd focus.

[Anonymous No.7029501]

>>7029481
Giving it (you)s only encourages it. Esdeath and the schizo of stagnation eventually stopped spamming when people stopped replying to them.

[Anonymous No.7029502]

>>7029413
i have to know, are you in a rush? why is everything you draw so rushed and sloppy?

[Anonymous No.7029506]

>>7029412
I tried drawing more of those but the paper kept scooting on me and I realized I don’t even know what the fuck this is for so I stopped.
>>7029412
>it looks to me like you have the writers gene instead of drawer
No one reads fanfics of a visual medium. Not just for the priors of trashy material, no one has time to unpack writing instead of just looking at art. If I want to ever express this in a sharable way that people can and will choose to enjoy, I have to learn art. The generals for this show are aware I’m a crazy schizo, I’m not going to be able to pay someone else to make this. If I’m ever going to make people care about all the ideas I have, I HAVE to draw them. I honestly wish I didn’t, I wish I had the money and neurotypical rizz to just contact and pay someone to draw these things themselves, but I don’t. I have to be the one to care enough to make it real, because>>7029236

[Anonymous No.7029508]

>>7029500
Forgot pic on this one.

[Anonymous No.7029510]

>>7029508
You drew two images when you need to draw thousands.
Follow this videos exercises.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZnvXBh341I

[Anonymous No.7029519]

>>7029500
If you're old enough, look into microdosing.

[Anonymous No.7029520]

>>7029413
>a person with 999 selfies from all angles
that's a good idea, thanks man
I'll try and find some accounts like that

or ig I could take a bunch of selfies too. Gotta remember that making my own refs is an option

[Anonymous No.7029523]

but first, the martyr

[Anonymous No.7029552]

How do i start caring about things?
I've got 12+ hours of free time on my hands all day every day. Tried getting into art but i just don't fucking care to learn loomis or brent or vilpp or whatever the fuck but i wish i did.
Should i just stfu and kys

[Anonymous No.7029557]

>>7029506
Just keep practicing. It took me almost a month to master freehand circles/ellipses by drawing them for 3 hours straight a day and filling up sketchbooks full of them, its pure muscle memory. You don't need to go to the same extremes since I'm a perfection obsessed autist, but it does take a while to get comfortable with circles and ellipses, they're tricky to learn. You use them to draw circles, cylinders, spheres etc. in perspective. Learning them will also make drawing curves easier. Take your sweet time, no one is holding a gun to your head.

[Anonymous No.7029559]

>>7029552
I didn't know what Howie had was contagious. Seems like we get 10 of you guys every thread.

[Anonymous No.7029568]

>>7029500
>/pol/ beliefs

Well there's part of your problem. You DO need Cognitive therapy for that. I've been down that road too and /pol/ is a fucking poison that rots your brain, and I guarantee it is affecting your mental health a lot more than you realize, as it did mine. But I'm sure that's not what you want to hear, digging yourself out of the neonazi shit is something only you can do.

>>7029506
And stop worrying about the fucking circles. Just draw with sloppy circles. Nobody except tryhards in this shitty thread can tell and nobody's head is a perfect sphere anyways.

My drawtax for shitting up the thread with drama. Trying to figure out what the fuck faces are. Everyone I draw looks like a drug addict.

[Anonymous No.7029570]

>>7029568
Forgot the pic you fucking gaywad

[Anonymous No.7029576]

>>7029570
I like bottom right. He looks like an old timey boxer.

[Anonymous No.7029580]

Just got back home, warmed up with some from the hsoulder exercises I found on youtube

I turned off all smoothing/stabilizing and pressure sensitivity

[Anonymous No.7029584]

>>7029576
Thanks babe, it's a porn guy on twitter.

[Anonymous No.7029588]

Pro vs crab

[Anonymous No.7029604]

There is no shortcut to getting smoother lines with hand drawing, is there?

Just lots of practice?

[Anonymous No.7029605]

>>7029486
very nice, I have trouble with hard intense lighting, good job

>>7029580
gmi attitude

[Anonymous No.7029608]

>>7029604
Quit thinking in shortcuts, you've barely taken your first step

[Anonymous No.7029610]

>>7029604
Practice

[Anonymous No.7029634]

>>7029604
Why do you want smoother lines? Ask yourself the question, is it because you like smoother lines, or is it because you want more control, or is it something else? If you can't draw smooth lines, hell, lean into crooked lines, maybe you find joy and fun creating, stop struggling so much when you are first starting, there is no right way or wrong way. May the gods and muses guide you, good luck!

[Anonymous No.7029643]

I'm sorry for shitting the general up with howie-isms. It will happen again.

[Anonymous No.7029650]

>>7029634
Seconding this. Learn to draw what you WANT to draw, not what you feel like you should learn. Then eventually you will see how certain fundamentals apply to what your end goal is, and then you will have the drive to actually grind them out and it won't be a boring fucking slog. Stop forcing yourself to grind shit that bores you.

[Anonymous No.7029652]

Sort of study of someone else’s art I like

[Anonymous No.7029670]

>>7029652
Great shapes

[Anonymous No.7029672]

>>7029608
>>7029610
Fair enough

>>7029634
>>7029650
I want to draw smooth lines cause I want to draw OCs and I like how smooth the lines look in the Studio Mir style pics

I traced them before but I realize now that's not a good habit, so I want to try to hand-draw in something like that style.

However I also want to add some of my own distinction which I'm not sure how. I think that'd be getting ahead of myself however.

[Anonymous No.7029673]

This is the third and latest picture I ever drew. I know there's a lot to improve but what I want to know, is the perspective right? Did I manage to make the Goblin in a poncho and fox look 3d, if that's the right way to say it? Also in the background does the distant forest blend together with the grassy field and does the sense of distance look right? I'm trying to improve on one thing at a time so I don't get overwhelmed but any critique would be appreciated.

[Anonymous No.7029688]

>>7029501
you're right, im gonna have to draw more yor

[Anonymous No.7029689]

with yor on paper

[Anonymous No.7029692]

we're gonna have to draw more uh
yor
some nikke, SENRAN kagura and of course, TAIMANIN ASAGI & FRIENDS

[Anonymous No.7029694]

>>7029673
well, is that goblin playing a joke on me? is it for the moment AND WILL HE SEE ME AS JOB???

[Anonymous No.7029696]

>>7029673
It's cute. Tree is flat, it needs values. Highlights in general would add more form (or 3D as you put it). Also there is no forest, just grass and more grass behind it. Try a tighter composition, it feels very empty and the objects in the distance feel out of place.
Keep it up, this bleeds soul.

[Anonymous No.7029698]

>>7029696
oh but not my yor draw is not cute
i see i see
....bias ass

[Anonymous No.7029703]

Dying in pastel.

[Anonymous No.7029705]

>>7029703
This gives me feelings of terror

[Anonymous No.7029706]

>>7029705
no i actually like this one

[Anonymous No.7029720]

Trying to get back into the swing of things.

[Anonymous No.7029733]

>>7029698
Every opinion is biased and subjective. And this is an art critique board. Learn to deal with it.

[Anonymous No.7029739]

>>7029696
I wasn't thinking too much about the background. I thought a mountain would look cool but after looking at it for a bit, it was very out of place and looked off. I changed the background so it looks like a forest at night and added a layer of cloth behind the Goblin to make his poncho a little less flat.

I tried to make the tree a little less flat but I feel retarded, I can't do it. So I guess I will be done with this piece, learn from it and I will go grind some fauna and highlights.

[Anonymous No.7029740]

[Anonymous No.7029743]

>>7029733
how about you deal with your hemorrhoids

[Anonymous No.7029747]

>>7029353
blog?

[Anonymous No.7029763]

>>7029413
>pick up an art book and do it. easy
Which one

[Anonymous No.7029779]

>>7029652
This is awesome

[Anonymous No.7029781]

>>7029763
you just pick one up my nigga
confused beanie wearing lady with question marks

[Anonymous No.7029783]

Did a lot of sketching today to make up for weeks of inactivity

[Anonymous No.7029786]

>>7029783
I like the faces now draw the rest of their bodies

[Anonymous No.7029787]

>>7029783
this guy is still around?
is this what they call, sketchlet?

[Anonymous No.7029788]

>>7029783
are you manually changing value or is that all pressure control?

[Anonymous No.7029792]

>>7029786
Okay will post more full bodies

>>7029787
Yes, but I do more finished art traditionally

>>7029788
I do both, depending on the brush

[Anonymous No.7029798]

>>7029501
well im gonna have to keep drawing or meet my fate

[Anonymous No.7029803]

Man, this retard keeps posting low effort doodles
I knew he was a schizo tranny the moment he first posted and begged for attention.
do us a favor and kill yourself

[Anonymous No.7029807]

>>7029803
>I knew he was a schizo tranny the moment
Which one?

[Anonymous No.7029809]

>>7029792
do you mind saying (roughly) what your brush setup is?

[Anonymous No.7029810]

some not-so recents, working my way back into the habit. I have no clue where the energy I had during high school went, it feels like my energy for personal things is tapped when I have my moments of free time.

[Anonymous No.7029811]

>>7029807
not gonna reply to him but he made 3 shitty posts in a row.

[Anonymous No.7029819]

>>7029811
that's why we ain't gettin' no (you)s
ain't gettin' no bitches ain't gettin' no paper ya feel me?

[Anonymous No.7029823]

>>7029809
It’s easier just to share it, I do 90% of the stuff with this:

https://files.catbox.moe/n174dq.artstudio_brushes

If I need some textures or colour jitter, I use random default ones on Artstudio

[Anonymous No.7029825]

>>7029233
If keys to drawing didn’t click, just do Betty Edwards. If that doesn’t click, just do Proko’s beg course. Actually, if you’re retarded enough that working through a book is too self-directed for you to handle, just skip to Proko’s course. A course to work through is probably better for you right now than a book. Because it’s a regimented thing that treats you like a dumb baby (because in art terms we ARE still just dumb babies when starting out) and holds your hand every step of the way. And if Proko’s course somehow isn’t autistic enough, then do DrawABox until lesson 4.

TLDR: do Proko’s basics course. I recommend you buy it. It’ll be easier than trying to pirate it and it will help hold you accountable and the actual website will be better at coddling you.

[Anonymous No.7029837]

but first some more yor

[Anonymous No.7029843]

>>7029803
ngl I thought he was gonna actually try to improve and he did show some promise a while ago but I guess not

[Anonymous No.7029847]

>>7029739
I like the changes you made, brought the focus back to the little guys.

[El Barto No.7029849]

>>7028493
so uh does anyone know a good method for perfectly even arm-lengths? mine’s kinda fluctuate all over the place

[Anonymous No.7029861]

>>7029843
>a while ago but I guess not
What do you mean, "a while ago", he hasn't improved at all.

[Anonymous No.7029863]

>>7029861
I remember seeing him stop spamming so much and posting some more deliberate pieces a few months ago. I guess that only lasted for a week

[Anonymous No.7029869]

>>7029863
Oh really... like what?

[Anonymous No.7029872]

>>7028532
Beautiful

[Anonymous No.7029883]

I've been wanting to draw my Half-dragon woman for a while now, and I found a fantastic reference for her. I want to make sure it's conveyed she's cocky, and I want to make sure that the general pose/anatomy is good. Any tips/redlines?

[Anonymous No.7029888]

>>7029863
Well AS I REMINISCENCE , through our JOYFUL. SUMMER TOGETHER. he promises we made, all the daily letters Then, all of a sudden everything seemed to EXPLODE (pow!) now, I gaze out my window sugar, down a lonesome road
DISTANT LOVER

[Anonymous No.7029893]

we're gonna have to draw more uh, senran kagura. for the thread and save the series from the GOTCHA hell and in the hopes they put out a new game however i am going to play the new runner game they showed last month

[Anonymous No.7029895]

i hope people join me ITT in drawing Senran Kagura in my cause of saving the series i already have the character sheets saved in case you cannot rely on my own drawings here is a hikage character sheet because everyone likes hikage
hold on i gotta draw more hikage

[Anonymous No.7029897]

hold on i gotta draw more hikage

[Anonymous No.7029908]

>>7029897
Dude if you’re gonna spam nonsense and reposts and unfinished portraits, just make your own thread to shit up. I like your art, but you’re not contributing to the thread when you do stuff like this:
>>7029897
>>7029888
>>7029837
>>7029819
>>7029688
>>7029689
Etc., etc., etc.

Keep it to posts like >>7029893 or >>7029260, where you’re showing us something fresh that you put some effort into. Or >>7029523 where you’re making an effort to improve and showing growth, or post new studies like >>7029692.

You can do this kind of schizo thing to derail and destroy AI spam threads, that’s pretty based. But don’t shit up our generals, man. You’ve been pretty cool recently, for a while now. Don’t throw away that goodwill you’ve built up. I’m an unironic fan of your art, and frankly I don’t see that changing. But to be honest, all the trash you’re regurgitating itt is kind of making me like you less as a person.

[Anonymous No.7029917]

>>7029895
Where'd you get the reference sheets? I've liked SK's art style and those could come in handy for me as well.

[Anonymous No.7029920]

Does anyone have the PDF for the Morpho Face Head and Neck book? Seems like every other book is available as a pdf but that one.

[Anonymous No.7029922]

>>7029672
I understand what you want to achieve, and now I can tell you what to do, if you want Studio Mir style, you will have to trace. You might think trace over what? Over your art, this is the secret that most Japanese artists share openly but somehow fallen on deaf ears. To gain extremely clean and beautiful lines, you have to redraw overdone drawings. This means the line-art process is probably more than twice, you are re-drawing, shaping it again and again on top of your original drawing, how many times? Until it feels right. Now, instead of jumping straight into character design, do an apple. Draw an apple, lower the opacity of the apple sketch, and draw on top again, until you get the organic shapes of the apple that you like. When you find out what you really like, the line art will show. Good luck!

[Anonymous No.7029931]

>>7029908
then i will have to suppress my hyphy mode and post more serious drawings but my nigga pawell didn't give 'em (you)s so it must mean it's not good
so i will have to put my Hyphy Mode on standby.

[Anonymous No.7029932]

it's not schizo, it's hyphy mode.

[Anonymous No.7029935]

>>7029917
through a lot of google and yandex searchin here i got another one if you want this time included from the website where i saved it from
go anon, go and draw your favorite senran to your hearts content
We can draw Rin if we want to, we can leave your friends behind.

[Anonymous No.7029945]

:¢

[Anonymous No.7029949]

>>7029935
This character has such an arrogant demeanor that makes you want to hate-fuck her till she begs for forgiveness. This artist is very good at drawing arrogance.

[Anonymous No.7029950]

>>7029935
>>7029895
Artist name is Nan Yaegashi, not sure if this is the said guy. Is this Nan Yaegashi?

[Anonymous No.7029954]

>>7029950
yeah i think

[Anonymous No.7029957]

>>7029935
Much appreciated.

[Anonymous No.7029969]

>>7029954
Man, this dude can draw, good characters. The linework itself is simple yet expressive, perfect.

[Anonymous No.7029972]

>generic pinup poses
>no story
>nothing of interest
most of you won't make it

[Anonymous No.7029977]

>>7029972
>no story

Just a few post above >>7029945
Dude have an entire world built.

[Anonymous No.7029984]

Thoughts? Improvements?

[Anonymous No.7029993]

>>7029922
Damn, I didn't know of that secret.

As one gets better, the need to redraw lines becomes less and less I hope?

[Anonymous No.7029995]

>>7029429
I wonder if I'm just "competent" enough to be ignored because I seem to know what I'm doing, but not good enough for people to praise my work.

[Anonymous No.7030004]

>>7029993
No, redrawing lines is like bread and butter.

[Anonymous No.7030014]

I did some trad. Personally I think it looks a bit dirty from erasing too much and her lower leg perspective is a bit fucked but overall i like how it came out.

I want to eventually do those sick linearts with ink and fineliners

[Anonymous No.7030016]

>>7029995
Why would you want people to praise your work, in the end, do art for yourself.

[Anonymous No.7030018]

>>7029977
You pick wrong post. it is just redraw of work that have some ideas by someone(me) who doesn't have them.

[Anonymous No.7030031]

>>7029984
Maybe focus on composition. The top is a lot busier than the bottom with all the hair and folds drawn. The eye shoots down to the skirt. Maybe consolidate lines up top, be more frugal with all the folds and business

>>7030014
Very cute and good

[Anonymous No.7030048]

>>7030031
Would you say the details on top are excessive, or that there is just an unequal balance, and if the bottom was as detailed as the top then it would be fine.

[Anonymous No.7030072]

>>7029747
Don't really have one but I can give my comic link
https://m.tapas.io/series/Wings-Of-Daera/info
https://wingsofdaera.cfw.me/

[Anonymous No.7030079]

>>7029763
depends on your current skill level and on what you are interested in.

prebeg? pic related. cannot draw backgrounds? pick perspective book. are your figures trash? pick figure book.

easy

[Anonymous No.7030080]

moving on to hands and feet studies at this point. I'm using a combination of Eliot Goldfinger and Michael Hampton to learn.

Link to my previous "draw every day" 30 day challenge. feedback appreciated.

https://files.catbox.moe/ke0p48.png

>>7030014

the best part about this is that I knew what character it was supposed to be just by looking at the thumbnail. I think there's some fuckery in the area where the leg and pelvis join - I can't quite put my finger on it. it looks nice anon.

>>7029883

the gesture reads well, and her expression makes it look like she is challenging someone. I think you succeeded there. the arm closest to the viewer is too short and small. if she relaxed her arm down by her side, her fingertips would barely pass her buttcheeks.

[Anonymous No.7030081]

>>7030080

[Anonymous No.7030121]

>>7030079
Keys to Drawing is supposed to take 3 months? I guess I'm just retarded

[Anonymous No.7030130]

Hello, I've been drawing "seriously" for ten years now, and this is my level. I've seen about as much advancement in a decade as some people see in a year. The last couple years, I really enjoyed drawing, and could do it for hours on end. But lately I've been feeling extremely demoralized at my lack of improvement, and I struggle to even open Krita, let alone draw more than a single figure.

This is some of my better comic work, and the figures took way longer than they should have. I practically had to trace the two on the far bottom right to get the proportions correct. Been feeling like absolute shit about my art this whole past month.

How do I get past this roadblock? How can I start improving at a reasonable rate? How do I draw faces more consistently/recognizably? How do I get cleaner lines? How do I add better structure without sacrificing gesture and form? Any other problems that stand out? Please help.

[Anonymous No.7030144]

>>7029481
>>7029501
This, ironic attention still is attention
Stop giving any of it and go draw

[Anonymous No.7030148]

>>7029908
Stop giving the faggot attention ffs

[Anonymous No.7030151]

>>7030130
>I practically had to trace the two on the far bottom right to get the proportions correct.
if thats the reason you trace you should stop, start measuring, scaling up something you like is good for this 1:2 is a good practice

>How do I get past this roadblock?
Ask for help IRL, take some classes.

>How can I start improving at a reasonable rate?
draw things out of your comfort zone, from your comic i sense you recycle the same shots over and over. use bigger panels, do close ups to focus on emotion. think as a cameraman. I like this analysis of tsuksasa hojo paneling:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XfNqJq2lKak

Your studies/figures look good but seems that you don't apply anything you have learn in your work.

[Anonymous No.7030158]

>>7029972
This is /beg/ retard

[Anonymous No.7030170]

>>7030130
>xitter/tumblr tier artstyle
i'm going to puke

[Anonymous No.7030171]

>>7030016
I want to affect people.

[Anonymous No.7030172]

>>7030170
Pyw

[Anonymous No.7030173]

>>7030170
>Whining and complaining about somebody who's drawing comics
>Not drawing anything yourself
I'M going to fucking puke,

[Anonymous No.7030188]

May I ask, how does this look for a female body in terms of basic construction shapes? I think she might look a bit stocky for a normal female

[Anonymous No.7030190]

>>7030170
I'm not into that either but you don't have to act like filth. Either offer advice or shut the fuck up.

[Anonymous No.7030191]

>>7030130
You need to work for someone in the industry that you respect. Find mentorship, say you will work for necessities. Find someone to show you how it is done. 10 years, this is hard to watch.

[Anonymous No.7030206]

>>7030190
you do it first

[Anonymous No.7030243]

Today is about an eternal struggle between good and evil but not as hard as finding a trad wife. hahahaha

[Anonymous No.7030337]

i am very lost

[Anonymous No.7030349]

>>7030190
here's some advice
kill yourself you fucking tourist

[Anonymous No.7030351]

>>7030206
>>7030349
You don't have to reply to me twice. You could get your meds instead.

[Anonymous No.7030356]

>>7030130
cute blond lole

[Anonymous No.7030388]

>>7030151
>start measuring, scaling up something you like is good for this 1:2 is a good practice
Retarded question incoming, but how should I measure? Like put an actual ruler over the reference picture, and then over my canvas? Or do you just mean eyeball it more carefully?

>>7030170
Me too.

>>7030191
I don't think a real life mentor is in the cards for me. I doubt I could get any industry work, and I'm not really interested in it. There's one guy who commissions me, but I think it's more out of pity than anything else.

>>7030356
Please don't call her that lol. But thanks.

[Anonymous No.7030434]

any help? im trying to make it look like the hand is stretching out of the water

im a retard who used graphic tablet for maybe like 8 hours total

[Anonymous No.7030478]

[Anonymous No.7030512]

>>7030388
>but how should I measure?
with whatever you feel comfortable with, I use a simple drawing compass (without the metal neddle), other people use 2 pens like chopsticks, others a ruler or even their fingers. But the main goal is the same getting the proportions and placement right, it isnt to have exact copy. Overtime you will just wing it (hopefully).

>>7030434
I would play with the idea (thumbnailing) and searching for a line that looks like what you envision. Nice hand btw.

[Anonymous No.7030520]

New thread? No one fuck it up this time.

[Anonymous No.7030530]

tips/crit before i render?

[Anonymous No.7030536]

>>7030520
It's just me or /beg/ is getting slower? Also the new threads are taking a while to being created...

[Anonymous No.7030560]

>>7030530
Thumbnail looked like one of those scat/fart fetish drawings from the colors. Would reconsider changing those.

[Anonymous No.7030587]

>>7030536
The opposite actually. This thread was only made yesterday, threads used to last up to three days. it's why the threads are taking longer to make, the guy who makes the edited thumbnails would usually have more time to make them.

[Anonymous No.7030595]

>>7030587
Oh, that makes sense

[Anonymous No.7030608]

Did an experiment with direct line art rather than doing any under drawing or construction
>>7029945
Looks great
>>7029931
Nice studies. It’s interesting how expressively you drew the breasts and with such apparent ease, too. The hands are great, and your pecs are improved over the last attempt, good job. >>7029984
I think it’s super cute. The dress is perhaps a little bit poofy around her waist, but maybe not. Anon might have a point about the top being a little busy. You could consolidate some of the folds like he said, and maybe get rid of some of the wrinkles around the buttons, and just do a couple to imply there are wrinkles there and let the viewer’s mind fill in the rest. I think going with a medium complexity in her shirt might be neat, and the drawing would go from simple to medium to busy from her skirt to top to hair.
>>7030014
Based
>>7030081
That foot in the middle is superb and the line work is great too
>>7030188
Reads female. A bit stocky, might want to bring her shoulders in or narrow her ribcage a little because by the time you add the flesh of her arms, her shoulders may be slightly broad. But she could just be a stocky dwarven peasant lass.
>>7030243
Looks cool
>>7030337
Yeah, just keep going. These look decent. You just need mileage imo. You’re beginning to get Emma’s likeness with the orange figure, good job. >>7030478
Interesting, you draw far better than you render. Your lines are near /pro/, imo. Try looking at some reference of nicely rendered boobs and tummies, also remember the pubic mound. I think the colors are good, but it’s the values where it falls a little flat. Maybe do a grayscale version or just convert it to grayscale so you can check the values. It might just be this drawing though, because I’ve seen you do better before, iirc
>>7030530
Looks weird, I like it. Compositionally, I think you should have some darkness framing the figure, like a darker atmosphere. Very cool tho

[Anonymous No.7030613]

>>7030608
probably a long shot, no pun intended, Teruyoshi akiyama? Nice sharpshooter and elbow.

[Anonymous No.7030631]

>>7030613
Thanks!
Looks like his name is Jorge Llames >>7026282

[Anonymous No.7030639]

I broomed my sidewalk and driveway today.

[Anonymous No.7030642]

>>7026282
fuck same tourney "Munich 2013 ISSF World Cup" kek, the glasses akiyama wore caused an impression on me!

[Anonymous No.7030660]

>>7030560
mmmmh gassy...

[Anonymous No.7030678]

Trying to improve head construction, am I going in the right direction?

[Anonymous No.7030691]

>>7030642
You speak as though you were there. Were you? What’s going on?

[Anonymous No.7030700]

Havent drawn in years, drew raditz. I've never coloured digitally before, or in general really. What do you think and what should I do differently? I wanted it to look like a real frame from the show. If you squint atleast.

[Anonymous No.7030723]

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[Anonymous No.7030734]

>>7030608
>Interesting, you draw far better than you render. Your lines are near /pro/, imo. Try looking at some reference of nicely rendered boobs and tummies, also remember the pubic mound. I think the colors are good, but it’s the values where it falls a little flat. Maybe do a grayscale version or just convert it to grayscale so you can check the values. It might just be this drawing though, because I’ve seen you do better before, iirc
Appreciate the feedback, Im not too familiar with painting risque stuff so this was an interesting experience, its not perfect but I liked it. About the rendering, I'm not really sure in what I wanna strive towards so I pretty much experiment in every drawing. Weird you dont like the values, also I always check my values in grayscale as I render.

[Anonymous No.7031005]

>>7030608
Removed most of the button wrinkles and added more details around the skirt to draw the eyes away from the torso. Probably going to redo the hair to use bigger shapes instead of individual strands as well. Thank you for the feedback.

[Anonymous No.7031102]

>>7030349
That's not how the tourism insult works you fucking retard.

[Anonymous No.7031859]

>>7028493
Some things I was trying to do in this piece:

1. Hatching is getting better, but I'm still not sure if I'm spacing the lines far or close enough.

2. I'm making my own texture brushes, and I used one of them in the background. I know I didn't cover the outlines with the texture brush well. I don't know if the character in the work should also have texture as well.

3. This work is supposed to be monochromatic, with the value being rendered using hatching. I don't know if this is a good combination for the aesthetic appeal of this work.

4. The leaves on the background don't really look like leaves in my opinion, even though the contour shape of those leaves are correct. Maybe I'll add the veins and sticks of the leaves next time to make them look more obvious.