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pyw. rate and get rated

>> No.7011696

>>7011571
Where's the OP art?

>> No.7011715

>>7011571
I'm shy you go first

>> No.7011722

>>7011715
I'll go if you go first too. You started the thread after all.

>> No.7011727

>>7011722
I'll go after this guy

>> No.7011731

>>7011696
>>7011715
>>7011722
>>7011727
None of you draws.

>> No.7011734

>>7011731
pyw

>> No.7011736

>>7011731
GOOD MORNING SIR PLEASE DO THE NEEDFUL AND POST WORK AND BOBS AND VAGENE

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>>7011571

>> No.7011746

>>7011731
Post

>> No.7011748
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Posting a somewhat older one, I don't have much else on hand

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>>7011748
oh, and I made a quill and wrote this

>> No.7011751

Love this thread, great work guys! Keep being you.

>> No.7011753

>>7011751
kek

>> No.7011759
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7011759

>>7011751

>> No.7011769

>>7011759
Based Moai anon

>> No.7011776
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>>7011571
>>7011750
mid /beg/. cool calligraphy tho

>> No.7011778
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7011778

Recent stuff
Haven't committed to real study in a while. I feel high beg and hope to become an entry level int very soon.

>> No.7011779

>>7011778
*As in, I only recently started studying, and plan to continue

>> No.7011782
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>> No.7011791

>>7011776
You've clearly been studying musculature and anatomy, anon. Good on you, keep going.

>> No.7011793
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>> No.7011794

>>7011750
Swear words with calligraphy is reddit tier humor that gets stale after 2 pictures. You get perma/beg/ on the choice of subject, and on the execution... it's cool.

>> No.7011798

>>7011793
>
>>7011782
int
>>7011778
high beg
>>7011776
high beg
>>7011748
mid beg
>>7011738
pro

>> No.7011800

>>7011776
High int, adv if i could see other poses

>> No.7011803

>>7011800
His shit is completely unreadable. Are you retarded?

>> No.7011805

>>7011798
>7011776
Mid/High int*
I didn't see the piece that well at first

>> No.7011808

>>7011803
But look at the body. It does have technical skill in it.
Its only kind of blurry because of how the background its rendered

>> No.7011814

>>7011803
Body
It is readable, it's very atmospheric, I'd love to see what you can render

>> No.7011819

>>7011808
Composition is a fundamental. He can be no higher than high /beg/.

>> No.7011821

>>7011819
The mona lisa is high beg because it's just a bust portrait

>> No.7011823
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>> No.7011824

>>7011821
You’re prebeg if the only classical painting you know is the Mona Lisa

>> No.7011825
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>>7011808
There's an unblurred version but I blurred it cause I felt it took focus away from the focal point

>> No.7011826

>>7011824
Jesus christ I used it because it was a readily known painting that lacked composition
Pyw retard

>> No.7011828

>>7011819
Yeah you got a point there but I would leave it at low int then.

>> No.7011830

>>7011821
>crabbing Leonardo fucking Da Vinci
This is why I do not trust the judgement of any of you unserious niggers no matter how level headed you may think you are. You're all fucking retarded

>> No.7011831

>>7011821
A bit of a stretch there

>> No.7011832

>>7011826
>lacked composition
Do you fucking UNDERSTAND the meaning of composition at all????? Are you out of your mind? Seriously what the fuck is your problem?

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>>7011830
>>7011831
I said that because i don't agree with their point

>> No.7011835

>>7011826
Pyw right now you imbecile

>> No.7011836

>>7011825
>I felt it took focus away from the focal point
Ironically enough it did the opposite.

>> No.7011837

>>7011834
You fucking lied because you disagreed with them? What are you, 5?

>> No.7011839

>>7011835
I already did :-(

>> No.7011840

>>7011834
Don't be sad anon. We all make errors in judging sometimes.

>> No.7011841

>>7011800

It's not high int or adv, it' high beg but the artist seems to have a lot of potential

They still need to work on stuff like composition, and making sure they're using/implying the proper structure and lighting for things with their rendering

>> No.7011843

>>7011819
What's wrong with the composition? You've been going "MUH COMPOSITION" without stating what is even wrong with it lol.

>>7011836
Huh, it does? I feel like it's too noisy which drags the viewers away from the focal point

>> No.7011848

>>7011839
So far nothing posted here is above mid beg so nothing you say can be taken seriously. I'd like you to go outside and take a deep fucking breath. Think about every stupid thing you've said in this thread. Think about what you've done. You can't spend the rest of your life being this much of an idiot.

>> No.7011852

>>7011848
Where's your work?

>> No.7011854

>>7011843
Blurring it just worsen up the whole piece making it even noisier, that's why at first said it was beg. But how you did the character on itself proved me wrong.

>> No.7011859

>>7011848
NTA but critique everyone then.
I want to improve so If you pointed out why it would be very useful.

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really dont know where i stand
this took 3 hours

>> No.7011888

>>7011848
>it's another /pyw/ thread where everyone who posts gets called /beg/ tier

Like clockwork. Fucking Kim Jung Gi were he alive still could post a completed work and some of you anons would call him a /beg/.

>> No.7011890

>>7011848
>mid beg
>why
>iT JUST IS OK?
lol ok retard

>> No.7011894

>>7011571

>> No.7011896
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7011896

>>7011776
int
>>7011782
int
>>7011793
mid beg
>>7011823
high int
>>7011872
beg (keep it up! It looks like you put in good effort)

>> No.7011898

>>7011852
Up my ass. When I make work that I know is worth posting in a couple months, trust me you will know.
>>7011859
Okay. I will only focus on one. The other children have nothing of interest to offer me.
>>7011776
>Anatomy
As another anon said, good anatomy, yet you do nothing of interest with it. The skin peeling off the arms feels very cheap horror, illicits no reaction. Skin peeling off limbs does not get any pity from me. Why not burn his perfect hair and scalp? Why not peel off the skin from his stomach and show his arms hugging his organs? It might be important to the story youre trying to tell, but my cold indifference to his skin has already factored into my boredom.
>composition
You do several things right. There is a clear diagonal relationship between the burning forest in the background, the monster in the middle, and the boy, and the cylindrical diagonal body at the bottom left and top right accentuate this relationship. The other retards refuse to see this and call your composition bad, don't listen to them.

However the way the monster's neck is horizontal clashes with the composition in a jarring way. I'll accept this if it is intentional and supposed to add to the monster's effect on me, otherwise, no. The size of the boy is bad. If he burnt the forest he certainly should be bigger than the monster, otherwise his scale being too close to that of the monster makes it seem as tho the monster and the boy are competing for my attention. My eye is led nowhere. Small, Medium, Big. It's a simple rule.

>color
Your colors ruin everything for me. The monster's glow distract from everything when it is a small part of the story. This would be somewhat appropriate if it was terrifying, but it isn't. There's too much attention on it for no reason at all.
I've ran outta characters and I've already spent too much time here. There's more to say about color, the generic expression, and the pointlessly dark middleground, but meh you'll figure it out.

>> No.7011900

>>7011898
>The other children have nothing of interest to offer me
cringe

>> No.7011902

>>7011898
Dude lol

>> No.7011903

>>7011898
>That first response
LMAO

>> No.7011908
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7011908

posting my shitty sketches

>> No.7011912
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>>7011571
My best art, took two days to make

>> No.7011921

>>7011898
>your composition is good
>except for the elements like composition of color and size of the objects failing to create a focal point and leading the eye
???

>> No.7011925

>>7011898
pyw

>> No.7011926

>>7011898
I bet my left nut that this is the traced toilet nigger. Just ignore and move on, there’s no point in arguing with a schizophrenic wall.

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>>7011898
>When I make work that I know is worth posting in a couple months, trust me you will know.

>> No.7011941

>>7011900
>>7011902
>>7011903
>>7011921
>>7011925
>>7011926
>>7011935
Yet not a single one of you has pointed out anywhere I'm wrong. Yeah that's what I fucking thought. I really need to stop drawing for myself and start creating work for an audience so when some annoying faggot says pyw I can shut them up and move on.

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Posted this thing already like 3 times but It's the only latest thing I have that isn't in a sketchbook lmao

>> No.7011944

>>7011941
Wait a second you're the cunt who has like 7 threads on watch looking for easy bait attention.

Guys stop answering him so he can click the little x on the thread watcher and leave us alone

>> No.7011949

>>7011944
>schizo ramblings

>> No.7011950

>>7011944
Yep, that literally made everything he said worth 0 unironically.

>> No.7011958

@7011912
you draw like you got brain damage

>> No.7011959

permabeg btw
Verification not required

>> No.7011960

>>7011843
NTA but I'd like to hear your thought process on the composition

>> No.7011978
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7011978

>>7011748
mid beg

>>7011750
Amazing skill! no idea how to rate you but the lines are pretty clean

>>7011782
Very high in my heart :)
Low int

>>7011793
High beg

>>7011823
Please add a bg, still very high quality.
High int

>>7011825
Without blur is definitely better!
Low int

>>7011863
Get a better scanner god damn it >:c
High beg

>>7011872
Take your time to construct the proportion of the body and face, I feel like you jumped into painting too early. Keep it up :)
Mid beg

>>7011896
Clean shadow and cool design, I like her a lot.
Low int.

>>7011908
Mid beg, keep it up, those sheck are cute and wholesome.

>>7011942
Mid beg.
you have a great style going for the character but I can feel that background is new to you, leep working on it and learn how to use that grass brush and keep an eye on it as its grawing on the right tree.


I think I am a Low int but I'll let you be the judges!

>> No.7011984

>>7011978
Fair self assessment imo. The two thi gs really keeping that drawing back are the placement of the right arm, and the flowing cape. I'm sure you'll notice that the arm looks stubby, because the arm seems to emerge far lower (and firther out) from his body than his shoulder should allow. I'd find a reference for the cape, if I were you, the continuity of the fabric doesn't quite make sense, and I feel it could be a bit more dynamic and have a more striking composition of shapes. The fabric is somethong to work on, but I'm certain that the arm is just an oversight.

>> No.7011985

>>7011794
Eh, yeah, that's why I only made one though. What do you think I should have written?

>>7011978
Thanks!

>> No.7011986

Keep getting skipped
It never even began

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>>7011571

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master copy + drawing on my own

>> No.7012013
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>> No.7012017

>>7011978
actually high int anon, I think you're starting to get a really good grasp on form and character

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>>7011571
reposting this because i've barely drawn at all in the last week, it's over

>> No.7012026

>>7012013
Holy shit, high /int/
>>7012021
low /int/

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>>7011571
people say they can tell skill level even from sketches so I'll post one here

>> No.7012045

>>7012027
Which one is yours though?

>> No.7012060

12 out of 17

>> No.7012076
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>>7011571
I really want to reach /adv/ level
took a month off, hopefully I can reach it by the end of the month

>> No.7012079

Who's gonna critique you If you don't critique others?

>> No.7012095

>>7012013
Low pro or pro methinks

>>7012076
Low /int/ imo, still a ways to go.

>> No.7012101

>>7011995
Mid /beg/

>>7011978
High /int/ ngl

>>7011912
Low /beg/

>>7011896
Mid-high /int/, awesome

>>7012027
Just /int/ or high /int/, can't really tell with a sketch

>> No.7012121

>>7011738
high int lol

>>7011748
low beg? hard to tell

>>7011750
beg

>>7011759
beg

>>7011776
low int but the color choices are what hold you back in my opinion, you might be way better

>>7011778
hight beg

>>7011782
int

>>7011793
high beg

>>7011823
int- or high int depending on how quick you can make this

>>7011825
int

>>7011863
int

>>7011872
high beg

>>7011896
low int

>>7011908
high beg

>>7011912
low beg

>>7011942
beg

>>7011978
low int

>>7011995
beg

>>7012006
beg

>>7012013
adv or pro

>>7012021
int

>>7012076
beg

>> No.7012167

>>7012079
i prefer doing it seperately

>> No.7012172

>>7012167
Yeah, I got proven wrong just now either way. That's a good thing though.

>> No.7012196

>>7011748
mid beg
>>7011776
int
>>7011778
high beg
>>7011782
int
>>7011793
beg but good appeal

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I'd like some crit too if it's not too much to ask

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>>7011571
gonna focus on improving this year

>> No.7012212

>>7012201
Pretty good anon, I don’t personally find it super appealing but technically I’d say you’re low int. You could work on learning how to incorporate your line work into your colouring style

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2023 year of art
appreciate rate

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>> No.7012282

>>7012266
Master

>> No.7012285
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7012285

If I didnt rate you its because I'm not sure.

>>7012201
work on your hair, also high beg

>>7012216
>>7011978
high beg

>>7012006
>>7011896
low int

>>7012204
>>7012013
>>7011823
high int

>> No.7012295
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top left is most recent, ref on all, added two trad pieces so it isn't all digital

>> No.7012299
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Friends, if you want to rate each other's drawing skills, you need to post series, or else it's very hard to get a picture of your abilities. That's why any art school that's worth their money asks for the same

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>>7011571
will gladly take any brutal crit as well

>> No.7012301
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ngmi, might as well quit

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>>7012299
Thanks for the intel anon. ill do it the next time I post.

>> No.7012305

>>7012285
how do I upgrade to low Int?
From
>>7012216

>> No.7012331

>>7012305
Apply some dinamism or perspective into your paintings, speccially the ones where you have something big and small in the same frame, most of them look flat composition wise. Also you could in principle improve a lot by just practicing how to render with just the round brush and the soft one. Your bottom left work is my favourite one color wise. It as also a very sharp rendering. I liked the one in the top middle too, but the overall colors are a bit murky to my taste.

>> No.7012334

>>7012331
Understand, will work on improving.
Thanks for the advice!

>> No.7012352

>>7012331
Damn anon, you give good advice. So sad you didn't rate more anons

>> No.7012355
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7012355

All my efforts are aimed at drawing anime style, I receive criticism to improve.

>> No.7012357
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>>7012355
Ups wrong file, this is it:

>> No.7012378
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7012378

Top two are my most recent works, bottom two are my favorite works from 2023. If I have any criticisms for myself, it's that I hide behind my style too much.

>>7012301
Low to mid-beg. You're only ngmi if you think you are.

>>7012295
Low-int. Your style and inking is great (especially bottom right) but you could work on your colors for some of your pieces. They look somewhat bland and unsaturated (and if that's your goal, there are better ways to pull it off) but otherwise ok for the most part.

>>7012285
Mid-int mecha but high-beg backgrounds. Based AC art but don't blur your backgrounds with filters!!

>>7012013
High-int to pro based off of this, but I would love to see some finished works

>>7011776
High beg/low int. Other anons already mentioned this but while your anatomy is great, the figure just does not fit into the rest of the illustration. The colors are nice, but once again only with regards to the figure. Its shadows and lighting imply that it's daytime despite the fact that it's very clearly night, and there's no reflect light coming from the dragon/snake creature.

>>7011793
>>7011908
>>7012357
low beg

>>7011778
>>7011872
>>7012006
>>7012076
mid beg

>>7011942
mid beg but sovl

>>7012201
high beg

>>7012216
>>7012266
high beg/low int

>>7011782
>>7011896
>>7011978
>>7012027
>>7012021
>>7012300
low int

>>7012204
Low/mid int. Good art but the rendering on those shadows is simply unforgivable. Also don't blur your backgrounds!!!

>>7011823
Mid int only dragged down by an uninteresting bg. bretty good otherwise.

>> No.7012383

>>7012378
>>7012076
meant to put this one under mid beg but sovl as well

>> No.7012399

>>7012378
>low beg
I know I'm beg but that's too much

>> No.7012403

>>7012399
Are you the one who thinks they can draw because you drew goblin tits

>> No.7012404

>>7012403
Damn, we got a hater here. Explain why though.

>> No.7012408

>>7012404
Not a hater, you just have to accept that you are a beg so you can improve. No use of anatomy. It's a simple drawing. Don't hate it but you are not a high beg, you are not approaching intermediate.

>> No.7012409

>>7012408
>Not hate
>Are you the one who thinks that can draw?
You were the one that started being an asshole.
Still, I of course know I'm beg, but at least low/mid. If I didn't have any pride in my pieces (even a little) I wouldn't even post them.
I don't think because something is simple is inherently bad either.

>> No.7012411

>>7012409
At least your art is better than shad

>> No.7012412

>>7012411
Ohh I see what it is.
You are a coom hater. Understandable.

>> No.7012415

>>7012412
Not that shad, anon. The other one

>> No.7012416

>>7012415
No idea what you are talking about

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right one is a wip

>> No.7012421

>>7012409
>but at least low/mid
And they said you were low beg
>I don't think because something is simple is inherently bad either.
Something that is beg isn't bad either. It just means you are not very skilled
>You were the one that started being an asshole.
Yeah, but i don't hate your art, I'm just bored and I think that it's gay to not recognize your skill level.
>>7012412
Not a coom hater, hate those who's coom attempts to hide their lack of skill el oh el

>> No.7012422

>>7012416
https://x.com/shadmbrooks/status/1727895111932293282?s=46&t=0BwyRF4kDKLPsbGpSOM1ag

>> No.7012425

>>7012421
>it's gay to not recognize your skill level.
I accept that I'm beg and want to improve. What I don't accept is slander.

>> No.7012426

>>7012425
>Labeled low beg
>No I'm not
>You're low bet
>Okay but i'm at least low or mid beg
>Now this is slander
Ok.

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>>7012426
Spelling error

>> No.7012429

>>7012426
>Are you the one who thinks they can draw?
Idiot.

>> No.7012430

>>7012429
Just being an asshole
Of course you can draw, anyone can draw
Just low beg
Later

>> No.7012431

>>7012399
If you're the goblin anon, I've reconsidered and put you in mid beg tier. Your art is lacking in a few departments but it's still marginally better than the begs I see in the /beg/ threads. Goblin tits aren't my thing either but I don't think my biases towards them should affect your ranking.

>> No.7012433

>>7012431
There’s not much of a difference anyway, how brushed your ego have to be

>> No.7012434

>>7012433
It wasn't much about the ego, at first I really wanted an explanation about why I was there to know the BIG flaws that made it go there, but then you started like that and it all escalated.

>> No.7012454

>>7012434
>at first I really wanted an explanation about why I was there to know the BIG flaws that made it go there
Well, you should've just asked me immediately instead of getting into an argument with the other anon lol. Either way, the main problems are that the image looks pretty flat, and the anatomy is not great. The goblin girl in general just looks awkward; her pose is stiff, her shackles aren't fully in perspective and has a lot of anatomy mistakes in general. I'd recommend doing some basic gesture/figure drawing exercises and studying anatomy from other artists who draw goblins.

>> No.7012455

>>7012454
Will do

>> No.7012528
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some recent anime sketches I made and a colored, hoping to become int this year
thanks anons

>> No.7012541
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Rip me a new one with some critique

>> No.7012563
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Mini oil portraits (2.5x3.5in.) took a couple hours each. Top right and bottom middle wip. Top right is an experiment with layers and glazing

>> No.7012582

This thread made me realize this entire board is a frenzy of crabs pulling each other down. Fuck you all.

>> No.7012581
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Wanna rate some, but honestly my level of skill in comparison to everyone else itt seems massively inferior so it feels wrong to rate.
Would be curious to know what the experienced artists think of my colored pencil drawing.

I’m looking to get better in realism this year and I want my main medium to be colored pencil.

>> No.7012583

>>7012582
I don't see how that is the case.

>> No.7012590

>>7012582
I agree with you, but why this thread of all things? This one contains relatively low schizo content so far.

>> No.7012622

reminder to never give up !

>> No.7012633

>>7012582
most of the time people just get their feelings hurt for getting a reality check

>> No.7012637

>>7012633
t. Toilet tracer

>> No.7012639

>>7012637
anon...you--
never mind

>> No.7012672

>>7011984
Thanks anon, you are right I wing both of those and rushed the cape a bit.
Should have use more ref and I'll be carefull next time I do flowing fabric in addition to going back to shoulder and arm anatomy.

>>7011995
Mid beg

>>7012006
master study is low int but the drawing is mid beg to me

>>7012013
Very clean! High int or , please give it some color and if you nail it you go to pro :)

>>7012021
High beg

>>7012076
Mid beg, keep it up anon. Correct that hand and work on the hair and you'll get there.

>>7012201
You got a good grasp on anatomy but it doesn't quite work, both arm looks stiff the hair is over rendered.
High beg soon low int, keep it up!

>>7012204
Too much chroma on the face but it's a nice piece.
Mid int, that BG could be a bit more worked on.looks like you dropped that mountain halway trhough.

>>7012216
Well done anon!
High beg and with some more work on rendering ( a bit muddy and unpolished) you'll soon be low int.

>>7012266
Mid beg, careful with the face proportion.

>>7012285
High beg for me, really ?
Chroma is a bit strong and your character still looks floaty even with background.
Still very competent piece, mid int soon to be high int.


>>7012295
Very cool style, Low int plese do some more backgrounds :)

>>7012300
Low int

>>7012357
Mid beg

>>7012378
Bottom left is really cool with that perspective.
A bit difficult to judge your style varies a lot.
i'd say high for both blue piece and low int for the red and yellow

>> No.7012676

>>7012076
You’re going to need to reach high /beg/ first

>> No.7012680

>>7012418
Mid-beg

Keep practicing shota-kun

>> No.7012785

>>7012680
they arent shota but aight, care to give more in-depth critique on what i need to fix?

>> No.7012789

>>7012785
Right one is very stiff and flat.
Left one is better, top half looks alright but the legs are fucked up, also your lines are scratchy.

>> No.7012792

>>7012789
care to post your work?

>> No.7012795
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How'd I do?

>> No.7012797

>>7012795
High beg. You need to sit down and really learn how to draw a human face properly

>> No.7012813

>>7012378
high int

>>7012528
low int

>>7012541
lowint

>>7012563
high beg

>>7012581
beg

>>7012795
int

>> No.7012840
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>> No.7012844

>>7012352
Who are you, I will give it a shot.

>>7012378
Hard to rate given that none of them look propertly finished but bottom left gives me int vibes just for the linework on the girl and prespective alone.

>Based AC art but don't blur your backgrounds with filters!!
but that's why I blur the BG, because it's an afterthought and its beg! :(

>>7012672
>High beg for me, really ?
you are on the verge of goin low int, but the way you drew the boobs bothers me a little, right boob should be a little streched vertically given that she as the right arm all they way streched up. The linework quality holds you back. Also the way you painted the head looks way too "painterly" compared to the rest of the body.

>> No.7012860

>>7012418
Ugly.

>> No.7012867
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>> No.7012871

>>7012860
pyw

>> No.7012898
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>all these considered "mid beg" art that's way better than mine
Not posting my shit Jesus Christ I thought I was making progress after seeing my year recap.

>> No.7012908

>>7012898
It's not like you would post anyway

>> No.7012913

>>7012898
when someone calls an artist beg and dont post work they are just crabbing

>> No.7012926

>>7012797
Damn, I thought they were pretty good.

>> No.7012972
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>>7012926
they are getting there, colors are pretty nice. I especially like the skin-tones on the blond. You need to train facial planes and values. You might want to study the 'asaro' head, a simplified head emphasizing basic forms/planes, either buy a physical model or use a good photoset. here's a little paint over. I lost the og cheekbone look out of habit, but I hope it's helpful to see.

>> No.7012990

>>7012212
>>7012285
>>7012378
>>7012672
thanks for the rates, looks like I'm a bit further behind than I thought... I think a big factor is I can't quite draw poses as dynamic as I want yet

>>7012844
who you're replying to isn't me, but assuming it's for me, thanks for the crit. I'll see what I can do on some similar muscle girl wips

>> No.7012996

>>7012913
I meant art that anons consider mid beg that are leagues better than mine.

>> No.7013003

>>7012996
Being mid beg is not a bad thing, it means that you have the fundies at least somewhat settled and you're on your way to int.

Remember that most people can't draw for shit to begin with, so being in the transition from doodles to something truly appealing is, in my mind, very inspiring, especially if your art has SOVL

>> No.7013027

you all don't realize how far above you the pros are (knowing the dunning-kruger effect doesn't protect you from it), which consequently leads you to devalue the /int/ level too.

>> No.7013031

These threads are infuriatingly fucking stupid

>> No.7013032

>>7013027
What makes you think that?

>> No.7013035

>>7013031
And yet you won’t pyw or rate. Thanks for the bump I guess.

>> No.7013075

I’m a 6 or 7. Thank you.

>> No.7013130

>>7012972
Damn, thanks for that.

>> No.7013133

>>7012972
didn't improve it at all

>> No.7013150
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Feel like I'm halfway decent but beg nonetheless lmao

>> No.7013226

>>7013031
The key is to draw an attractive woman floating in space and you will great rated at least high beg presuming you have decent fundamentals.
Posting art with a background or of a complex subject is going to get you rated lower just because anons are inherently more critical of what they can see vs what they cannot see. Most of the genuine begs here are also inflicted with coomer brain rot, so they are inherently more forgiving of art that tickles their fancy. I receive an ego jerk following this advice every thread. Godspeed anon

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>>7012216
Newest piece

>> No.7013352
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>>7011748
Mid beg ig

>>7011776
Adv render and anatomy skills, but color palette and composition is not quite at the same lvl


>>7011863

Good comp, but some values mesh together, not sure if the photo or your rendering


>>7011896

High beg

>>7011978
Solid on every aspect but still int

>>7012013
Adv

>>7012027
Mid int

>>7012378
V unique appeal. Pro

>>7013150
Beg, but good on you for doing full compositions and colouring, i just do doodles or single characters

>> No.7013382

>>7013352
>beg but good on you

Thanks, I LOVE MAKING ART I LOVE IT ARRAAAAAHHHG

Also, would you say mid beg or high beg? I'm gonna keep grinding obviously but I'm just curious to check whether I should keep practicing fundies or try out and practice background more, or both.

>> No.7013383

>>7012563
>>7012813
Thanks anon. Is there anything (besides no background/body) that stands out in particular?

>> No.7013461

pro
>>7012013
>>7012378
high int
>>7011823
mid int
>>7011978
>>7012027
>>7012204
>>7012285
>>7012355
>>7013352 mid/low int
low int
>>7011776
>>7011782
>>7011863 higb beg/low int
>>7011896
>>7012021
>>7012295
>>7012300
>>7012528
>>7012541

high beg
>>7011778
>>7011793
>>7012076
>>7012201
>>7012216
>>7012563
>>7012795
>>7012840
>>7012867
>>7013348 high beg/low int

mid beg
>>7011872
>>7011908
>>7011942
>>7011995
>>7012006
>>7012266
>>7012418
>>7012841
>>7013150
low beg
>>7011748
>>7011912
>>7012357

>> No.7013486
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>>7011571
Alright here is mine

>> No.7013492
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>>7011571

>> No.7013495
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thoughts from the class

>> No.7013540

>>7013495
So lets recap.
A japanese salaryman is sitting down anoyed by life in general. So he starts thinking about doegirls because hot.

But oh no:
he gets captured by Dr Vlad
the Genderbender Lad. And gets injected with the poison that not only turned the frogs gay but also remade him into an elfgirl.
Upon the discovery of his now fully developed,humongous, fabricstreching mamary glands, reaches an epiphany that an elfgirl is what he (now a she) was always meant to be.
She, for the first time since middleschool, is happy.

I just wanted to shitpost and Im not sorry. Good job though

>> No.7013564

>>7013540
High int shitpost

>> No.7013565

>>7013133
Retard

>> No.7013601
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>> No.7013683

>>7013383
I think it looks pretty good, work bigger and that should allow you to see how you handle more details and brushwork, other than that it has potential to be easily int, also look up Greg Manchess work in case you already haven't.

>> No.7013703
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7013703

been having lots of fun drawing since i got back into it last year, hoping to get better at actual anatomy this year

>> No.7013731

>fundamentals
These have lost their meaning in this board

>> No.7013771
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>> No.7013867

>>7011776
high bet, work on composition and materials
>>7011782
int, make a bit more use of value ranges, nice stuff
>>7011793
cool, high beg
>>7011823
work on local color, int
>>7011872
making bad drawings is ok but being lazy never is, beg
>>7011896
lovely, commit to lineart or render edges but don't leave it messy, low int
>>7011942
background is a bit empty, beg
>>7011978
your lines are clean but it looks bad when there's a lot close together, reduce and simplity shapes in your sketch, at thumbnail size it looks like pro work, gj, low int
>>7012013
very cool, pro
>>7012076
you've got good observation skills, keep going and you'll improve quickly, beg
>>7012201
try to use as few blending layers as possible, work on drawing, beg
>>7012204
good eye, you know how to make a drawing look nice, use nice photos and artwork as reference to keep improving your visual library, mid int
>>7012216
work on drawing, high beg
>>7012285
background is too busy on color and values are a bit boring, close to greatness, low int
>>7012295
cool stuff, great lines, maybe work on more involved backgrounds and compositions, int
>>7012378
love it, adv
>>7012418
keep going, high beg
>>7012541
proportions don't look good and feels a bit boring, if you have a story to tell add more elements or improve at expressions and gesture, low int
>>7012563
really like these, great colors, adv
>>7012795
you're getting too cought up in the rendering, spend more time sketching and refining instead of detailing, also don't be afraid of higher color saturation, low int
>>7012867
lovely linework and expression but doesn't feel sexy or appealing as a pin-up, study pros you like, int
>>7013150
very interesting, get good at thumbnailing and quick sketching with values, don't always go to lineart, beg
>>7013348
work on values, high beg
>>7013352
awesome, would love to see renders, pro

>> No.7013887

>>7013863
I really like this
Don't know how to rate because it is beyond my skill but it's cool!

>> No.7013899

>>7013771
Poor Basilisk War Droid

>> No.7013945

>>7013867
ty for the crit!

>> No.7014177
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>>7013863
Would say mid to high int

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>>7011759

>> No.7014473
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r8?

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>> No.7014935

great thread and I honestly want to give back and rate, but I have no idea how to evaluate

>> No.7014953

>>7014935
Just say what you think of the piece and move on. Doesn't need to be THAT tryhard.

>> No.7015055

Lmao! The amount of High /int/ and Pros who didn't post here (I know they all lurk and crab people here). They gotta be scared lol.

>> No.7015068

>>7015055
I'm not scared!

>> No.7015070

>>7014473
I give it 5 out of 6 great houses.

>> No.7015098

>>7015070
thanks my n'wah

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Just rewatched some episodes of HiHi Puffy AmiYumi show, it was very nostalgic

>> No.7015149

I'll bite

>> No.7015151
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Stuides from today.

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god fucking dammit I forgot the image

>> No.7015391
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>> No.7015399
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I think I'm in need of some critique

>> No.7015401

>>7013899
They deserved it for being a clanker.

>> No.7015432

>>7013226
That's exactly why I think this shit is fucking stupid. It's literally a dick measuring contest between patients of the micropenis enlargement clinic

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>> No.7015522

>>7012867
Mid-high int

>> No.7015553
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7015553

Haven’t posted here in couple of years but ic got on my radar again so figured I’d participate for the good old time sake.

>> No.7015558

>>7015553
It`s worse than ever now.
You are mid int, good one.

>> No.7015570

>>7015558
Hard to imagine ic getting worse than it already qas. At least nosebro doesn’t draw anymore, that should be something at least.

>> No.7015573

>got rated /int/ once so never have to use these threads again
feels good man

>> No.7015589
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I wanted to try doing nfsw. Here's some sketches.

>> No.7015643

>>7015553
Legit think it’s beautiful, I don’t know why everyone is trashing you.

>> No.7015685

>>7015553
omg it’s louhi. It’s sashay, I’m >>7014473
Funny to run into you in this cesspool

>> No.7015788

>>7015589
love the feel of these bro keep it up

>> No.7016014

>>7015553
>i message you to check up (tell you youre ngmi)
>you delete me out of anger
>you go on ic
>they are still mean
>they mention my name
>i see the post.

Do an ear study and add me back!

>> No.7016325

>>7016014
Naaw, I deleted you because you creep on every woman on ic and try to insert yourself into their lives when no one likes it and I’ll keep it that way. How about instead of telling others they’re ngmi you apply your critique to yourself and actually tried to improve?

>> No.7016348

>>7016014
is this nose kek

>> No.7016364
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Feel free to critique if you have any please.

>> No.7016367

>>7016325
ngmi

>> No.7016369
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Posting my current WIP

>> No.7016370
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>>7015399
The wrist on the left hand is weird. her body look way too stiff... and her ribcages should really bulge out a little, the lines don't show enough dimensiones. the crotch also need some fixing, but I don't really know what to say other than that the left leg is a clue. Her knees are weird too, and i see that you might be trying to hide the feet behind the other one , making the pose really unnatural. Hope it helps you!

>> No.7016380

>>7016348
yeah, I'm the ic in "ic got on my radar".
I'm currently buying a house to innawoods-schizoid-max

>> No.7016414

>>7016325
You a woman? Post tits.

>> No.7016417

>>7015151
low int
>>7015152
mid int
>>7015391
low int
>>7015399
high beg
>>7015518
mid beg
>>7015589
mid int
>>7016364
mid beg
>>7016370
mid beg

>> No.7016757
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>>7011571
here it goes

>> No.7016762
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/trad/ reporting

>> No.7016766

>>7016761
High /int/ to /adv/. There's some issues there but it's hard to critique without more context.

>> No.7016829
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Just drew this, should drawn the shirt behind the stomach though cause now the posture doesnt look right

>> No.7016968

>>7016370
Makes sense. Yea, thank you.

>> No.7016976
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here's a gif

>>7015589
furwife supremacy

>> No.7017512

where’s my pro rate

>> No.7017535
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>> No.7017562

>>7016762
High int

>> No.7017576

People who don't draw based af.
If you call yourself an artist then you should commit suicide

>> No.7017580

>>7017576
kek

>> No.7017796
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Ive a job in animation so I can't post any of that. Rate this instead

>> No.7017815

>>7017796
die

>> No.7017837

>>7017815
:(

>> No.7017850

>>7013486
high beg
work on perspective
>>7013492
low int
>>7013601
low int
work on perspective
>>7013864
mid int
draw hands
>>7014177
high beg
work on gesture/shape design
>>7014501
mid beg
work on form/gesture, doesn't look 3d enough
>>7016757
mid int
perspective on tail is off
knees are off
can work on shape designs

>> No.7017882
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120cmX80cm

>> No.7017894

>>7017882
high /beg/ schizo

>> No.7017898
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7017898

bg shamelessly stolen from sinix.

>> No.7017899

>>7017898
>shamelessly stolen
/pro/ because you know what's up

>> No.7017900

>>7017899
thank you anon :)

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>> No.7018680
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7018680

>> No.7018682
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7018682

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7018696

>>7011571
First attempt at drawing in 15 years.

>> No.7018792
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>>7016417
Damn, I gotta step it up. Thanks anon.

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>> No.7018949

>>7018914
mid/low int? I would like to see a completed piece it's hard to judge off of this. lines are nice and confident. with good understanding of shapes and forms

>>7018857
mid beg

>>7018792
high int, maybe adv. berry nice anon

>>7018696
>>7018682
low beg

>>7018680
>>7018678
mid beg? you are symbol drawing still I think.

>>7017898
high beg

>>7017882
mid beg, high soul

>>7017796
low int. Knowledge of shapes and form without full confidence of when to simplify them.

>>7017535
mid int

>>7016829
high beg, work on perspectives and do some figure drawing. The colors are nice

>>7016762
high int

>>7016761
high int. You make choices with your forms and I respect that

>>7016757
low int

>>7016976
mid/ maybe high int. I like it

>>7016370
high beg, in here is a mix of areas where you understood form and areas of flatness.

>>7016369
mid int. Looks great

>>7016364
mid beg

>>7015553
high int i think

>>7015518
low int, but ambitious. keep it up

>>7015391
mid int. this rules anon

>>7015152
mid int, the arm closest to the camera is a little awkward perhaps.

>>7014501
high beg, understanding of shapes but not the 3d form.

>>7014473
mid int, the style is nice

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>> No.7019150

>>7014501
MID BEG - lines are a bit too erratic, rendering is kind of blotchy, face is drawn nicely. Not sure if this is a personal style, might influence rating.

>>7015151
LOW INT - proportions are very nice, and good attention to detail. I only looked at the top drawings.

>>7015152
HIGH BEG - nice rendering, I personally dont like the cartoonish style, but yours suggest a good level of technical competence.

>>7015391
MID INT - very nice rendering, higher rating if the subject was more "complex".

>>7015399
MID BEG - some things look off anatomically, clean up chicken scratch lines which dont really add anything to the drawing.

>>7015518
LOW INT - environment nice - figure needs work

>>7016762
MID INT - Rendering is very nice, a good fleshiness/naturalness to the subject - Anatomically, the arm to the left looks off, I think you struggled with the foreshortening of it.

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first time drawing a skeleton

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here's what I did in the past 30 days

>> No.7020234

>>7011776
Blog?

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tried drawing an oc without any reference
could I get some advice?
I need some direction on how to improve

>> No.7020302

no rate means I’m pro

>> No.7020369

>>7020302
This.

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Why not

>> No.7021262

>>7020302
pyw

>> No.7021311

>>7019381
Suit Bunnies look like something from Rimworld. Good stuff annon

>> No.7021848

>>7021262
I already did

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This is the only decent thing I've drawn recently. I've stagnated really badly, and this one piece took way more time and effort than I'd like.

>> No.7023868

>>7022418
Mid /beg/
If you learn color theory it'll push your work up. Do some value studies and learn about hot/cold.

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currently working on colors and brushwork

What should I be working on?

>> No.7024208

>>7020618
You're getting there anon. Aside from regular advice (fundies, etc.) do a few more studies on drapery, especially when it comes to robes. Keep going!

>> No.7024433

>>7012378
I have a small critique for the top left. The top of the water looks too uniform, as if there’s a white net cast over it, instead of the rough water I assume you’re going for.

>> No.7024434

>>7012431
Not the goblin anon but can you point out the specifics in the way he fails anatomically?

I saw:
Girl’s arms
King/dad’s legs are flat + left hand fingers are weird, right arm lacks foreshortening

Is there more I’m missing?

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>> No.7024450

>>7017882
Better than Guernica

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is this /pro/

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Yo /ic/, ii o tenki desu ne, rate, when I will make it? This year will be my year.

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>>7024152
Colors.

The problem with using direct photos is that it's pretty obvious when an artist is using it as reference. It's a really common problem when learning how to color, and I say this now so that people don't learn bad habits.

If you are to view people in daylight settings, you'll find shades of blues, purples, and greens in darker areas.

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>>7011571
sketch

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>>7011571
Here's my recent work.

>> No.7027804

>>7011571
I think it's fair to say that most artists are at least object rotators.

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>> No.7028971

>>7027804
I’ll rotate your object with my dick, faggot!

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Hey guys I'm really shy, but I've been proud of my work lately. I'd like to think I'm atleast low-int but when I was looking through this thread it feels like I'd have more in common with mid-beg to high-beg artists. What do you guys think?

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