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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5h_7_81_odA
10 years of cris practicing animation
thoughts?

>> No.6957222

>>6957214
2015 was a good effort, wonder why he didn't continue in that vein.

>> No.6957223

>>6957222
*2014 I mean, with the jump at the end.

>> No.6957731

>>6957214
Nice. I have less than 2.

>> No.6960001

>>6957214
I give it a big ol' MEH...

>> No.6960441

Going to be a dick on this, but its bad.

1. The video is nothing but idle poses and crude movement shots. I dont see anything to give me a benchmark on skill level. .

2. You need to start from the basics and build up from there. There is reason why every animator does the bouncing ball exercise. Because EVERYTHING its a bouncing ball.

3. You're splitting your focus everywhere between drawing, animation, and 3d Stuff(modeling, rigging, texture). Which its fine if have the time and dedication to it. but your animation (which is the only thing i'm focusing on) seem to have stagnated.

So if you want feedback or materials to help improve your animation. i'll reply back, but you should decide what area of art you want to focus on.

>> No.6960876

Thoughts? I'm trying to learn writing and animation

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LmEVpqht39A

>> No.6960881

>>6960441
Don't fucking bother dude. Some people just can't be helped. Not everyone has the right mental faculties. You think people haven't seriously tried to help them plenty of times before?

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6960887

>>6960876
This is a powerpoint. Where is the animation?

>> No.6960891

>>6960876
Is this some kind of multi-layered bait?

>> No.6960915

>>6960887
Did you even watch the video?

>>6960891
Is this your way of being passive-aggressive?

>> No.6961077

Different anon but dick anon>>6960441

There no animation, its just a bunch of still images. shit it even fails to be a proper storyboard . Where is camera and staging? even a 1990s tv sitcom has better chracter staging and camera work. So what do you want to be, a writer, animator or storyboard artist. Becauer your bad at all 3

as for your comment of
" way of being passive-aggressive?"

in this thread you're the second person who things with grade school level work asking for feed back. SO it becomes a multi level trolling or bait attempt of people posting bad art, then getting mad about it. is the art the bait or the reaction? in a never ending chain of bad art and over reaction

>> No.6961082

what the fuck HAPPENED after 2014

>> No.6961101

>>6957214
2017 was a tough year for me as well

>> No.6961338

>>6960876
>>6960915
kill yourself groomer