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Character design discussion, critiques, etc.

Post good ones, bad ones, your own, whatever. Just be sure to say something about the design

>> No.6902610
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Time to repost this from a different thread. Why the fuck did the Hazbin team remove the little character design variation that was left in favor of an eye-searing red that bleeds into every background?

>> No.6902617

>>6902610
Less work I guess? Looks like they simplified her design more. Could be that it’s faster to draw/animate like this.

>> No.6902685

>>6902617
They needed to choose a color that wasn’t also a major part of every background

>> No.6903037
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Introduce more body types

>> No.6903518

>>6903037
didnt she get super pissed at this video?

>> No.6903544

>>6903037
I fucking hate "fix your art" youtubers. fucking fix your own art first

>> No.6903566

>>6903544
im stuck in the middle. It should be renamed something like 'in my style' instead of 'art fix'. Maybe even just 'art edits' since that's more accurate.
>>6903518
based if true

>> No.6903724

>>6903518
Did she? I need to see that

>> No.6903756
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Whaddya think of her?

>> No.6903762

>>6903756
looks like a tranny

>> No.6903783

>>6903762
>>6903756
It's not like it's a bad thing but it's a little bit too ambiguos. If anything needs his male characteristic more enhanced like a bigger skull or even a more notorious bulge.

>> No.6903786

>>6903762
>>6903762
Nah, I think she’s just sour grapes to you

>> No.6903836

>>6903756
he's cute

>> No.6903853

>>6903836
Thank you

>> No.6905215
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Some character designs I've made.

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>> No.6905220

>>6905215
Maybe add some orange to the lower portion of his body so that it’s not entirely concentrated in the hair. You can probably find some sort of motif, like the slanted line of the shirt that can be repeated elsewhere for a visual through line. Otherwise, I like the silhouette and evident personality. I also like how the concentrated detail of his freckles and hair draw to viewer’s eyes to his face

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>> No.6905227

>>6905216
Do these characters appear together frequently? If so, give them a more similar or complimentary palette. I love this dude. Very creepy, great shapes

>>6905219
This guy is kind of a cluster fuck. Either repeat the spiral design elsewhere ir don’t have it at all. Otherwise I like the ruffles.

>> No.6905231

>>6905220
Thanks for the information, I'll keep that in mind! I was trying to go for a Peter Pan motif/ color scheme, cus he's basically like if a boy who's trying to live out being in his imagination world, and acts like a little shit to get his way basically on omniscient tyrant who has a small fuse.

>> No.6905239

>>6905231
You can probably just rip directly from the original Peter Pan palette and make slight modifications.

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>>6905227
Yes, they all are together! They are like a ragtag little gang, the reason why I chose some of the designs being odd and cooky is because it's supposed to be made by a child (Lionel) and he goes into his imagination land to go on adventures to live out his dream of being a hero. Soon the dragon guy was his first imaginary friend hence why he makes no sense. Lionel being in control of the imagination realm is basically a child tyrant and doesn't see the citizens/ others as people and if he doesn't get his way he basically kills them. The rest of the gang (other then K.K the "villain") doesn't know he's basically a dictator because they are designed to be his friends more. K.K (similarly to the gang is designed to be the villian.) is the only one who knows he's evil and tries to convince other denizens that he's really the evil one

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Im going to make the stupid question: Thoughts on her design? I've come a long way, but I think I finally got her perfected. Still, I could use some critiques.

>>6902610
This is stupid, primarily due to the color scheme. Old one had it right by keeping a fair contrast between reds and blacks with yellow as an accent color. Now that black has been turned into an accent color, the whole scheme is completely off balance.
>>6903756
It is admittedly pretty ambiguous, unless that is what you were aiming for, I'd suggest you to tone up her female traits slightly, like small eyelashes, smaller hands, stuff like that.
Also I dont quite see what this character is supposed to be, I see some desert clothes, but that's a baseless guess, you may want to give her clothes a more sense of purpose, maybe...? Either way, nice style, I dig her hair and face.
>>6905215
>>6905216
>>6905219
>>6905221
>>6905241
Nice designs and very expressive artstyle, I really dont know what else to say because these kind of wack designs are not my thing, but these are really good.

>> No.6906650

I never made any character before and I want to make a female cyberpunk-ish character, so far I have decided her hair style, her bionic arms, and some of her background story/lore (she's an android). However, I have a problem when it comes to color harmony and her outfit. I dont know what kind of outfit that my character should have and what kind of color that'll create some harmony with her apparel, etc.
For example, I was thinking about having a blue haired character, what kind of color that is suitable with blue? Should her outfit 'represent' her characteristic? I heard in some of char design lecture that outfit could be used for representing what kind of character he/she is, and now I'm confused
Thanks for any help.

>> No.6906654

>>6903756
>>6906585
Ren is meant to look more ambiguous. She’s a dancer, wearing a leotard, puffy ballet pants, and ballet shoes. The sash around her waist is just there to add more red. Thank you for your input! I’ll see if I can make it more identifiable