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1-10 scale edition

>> No.6798666
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>>6798640
Last thing I drew last night

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>>6798640
>1-10 scale edition
would rather get rated on the nodraw-pro scale

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>> No.6798700

>>6798666
I can’t tell what’s going on. Beg.
>>6798668
Mid to High beg. Ladies face is cute but the guy‘s face is horrendous. Bottle she’s holding needs some help. Anatomy isn’t bad.
>>6798670
Creature is interesting and your values are alright. They define form but the range is a little too narrow, makes your work thumbnail poorly and appear to blend together. Mouth doesn’t really seem “dark” enough to appear concave. Probably high beg low int.

>> No.6798703

>>6798668
High beg
>>6798670
Mid beg, but high soul
>>6798666
High beg

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>>6798666
took me a minute to see she's pushing her thumbs into someone's eyes, 4/10 beg
>>6798668
i like their poses, but i'd also like to see more energy in them, 5/10 beg
>>6798670
i'll agree with the other anons on this one, more contrast to help feel out the forms better. 6/10 beg

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Mods don't like it when I funny animal post
https://files.catbox.moe/r4svj6.jpg

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been trying new stuff, trying to up appeal. hope it’s working

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I have two sides

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>>6799548

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>>6798640

>> No.6799731

>>6799715
Beanerbro is a solid int, but since you're trad I but you up to high int

>> No.6799767

>>6799548
looks great, how long have you been drawing?

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>>6798640
ok why not. posted this a few days ago

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>>6798805
The boobs make it work but without she looks like a human question mark, lol.

>> No.6799864

>>6798823
Difficult to rate a sketch that's not even finished
>>6798824
Low int, good fundies but a bit plain
>>6799548
High int and maybe even low pro, very good use of colors
>>6799715
Mid int
>>6799828
High beg. Might be a biased rating as I'm really not a fan of the eyes sliding off the face look

>> No.6799865

Cant post pictures

https://litter.catbox.moe/1u6yiy.png

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Been trying to learn painting lately.

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>>6799864
Dave and Bambi faces canonically slide off the face.

>> No.6799914

>>6799828
Low beg
You literally only ever draw one thing and you always hide hands and feet
Get out of your damn comfort zone for once

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6799939

How am I looking?

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Double dipping

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>>6798805
I really really like this but feel like you need to lean into the expression more
Also no hiding hands... we see you!

7/10 very promising nice art

>> No.6799959

>>6798670
Drawing from the right side of the brain?

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I'll post the shit I just finished, trying to grind more lately to get better so I'd like to know where I stand.

>> No.6799966

>>6799950
NTA but jesus that's actually a huge improvement. How do you get over Loomis/study brainrot and actually make expressions like this? It always feels wrong to do

>> No.6799974

>>6799959
I read it but never did any of the exercises, why do you ask?

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>>6799914
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=m1nty (gallery for reference)
I draw hands all the time actually. When I don't show hands/ feet it isn't because I lack confidence, some poses just don't show them. Though the reason why I don't draw feet (and hands to an extent) as much as I should is because the characters I've liked for years now either have very stylized feet that are basically stumps or no hands/feet at all.
>You literally only ever draw one thing
Which is?

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>>6799833
Valid critique, but I wasn't going for realistic. Huge african tribes woman tits tend to be unappealing with out a little cartoon magic.
>>6799950
That does look noticeably better. Expressions are something I need to work on, they're all a little stoic at the moment pic related.

>> No.6800009

>>6799963
10, because I like it.

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>>6800009
Yay, someone likes my work besides my mom! Thanks anon. Back to drawing more.

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Been waiting for this.

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>> No.6800090

>>6799978
If this is your comeback piece I'm sticking with my judgement low /beg/
>And that is?
Don't act smug, it's that boring, baby's first design, round headed, curly haired oc
I've seen emojis with more characterisation

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Was hoping to find a progress thread but whatevs.

>> No.6800161

>>6800159
Before>after

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I feel like I've been progressing quite a lot this year, but I need to do better poses
here are a few deliveries from some past co threads

I lack creativity though I need to step away from girls floating in voids for sure

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>> No.6800203

>>6800090
NTA but what the actual fuck is your damage?

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Not even a properly finsihed piece but it's all i got

>>6800159
mid beg. I genuinely can't think of one thing that look better in the new version. Everything from form, colouring, lineart. perhaps i could give you some points fro trying to make the lighting harsher but one google search will reveal that a campfire won't ever produce this much light anyway and the characters would be way more in the dark.

>>6800084
Low int. I guess there is a 50/50 chance that you wanted to drive the most attention to the hand or that you didn't realise that if you want the face to be the main focus you ought to put that ball of light behind it

>>6799963
low int. He licked the the flat side of the sword and then turned it towards us to see, jsut seem to be a weird placement to me. Ans the shoulder that is suppoused to be further away from us is noticably longer thsn the one that's closer

>>6799941
mid beg purely because the fact that you chose this picture in particular says something. Try to be more precice with the lines. Or if you wanted to make it intentionally messy lean more into it because currently it looks more like you couldn't draw the line in one go

>>6799939
HIgh int/low pro. One problem i had with it is that i couldn't figure out what was even happening. Is the bug creature coming from the mans back? is the man a part of it's body? I find the whole positioning of the two of them a bit awkward. The rendering looks great though

>>6799867
high beg. First thing that stood out to me is the ear, I think looking at one reference would help you with that. The hwole facial structure is all over the place too but decent attempt non the less. Kudos to you for trying to vary the hue and tone of what you're shading with and not just using the same colours for the whole face, even though it seems you did it with an overlay layer

>>6799865
high beg. I think the bat he has on his back is a bit too horizontal. could look more interesting if it was a bit more tilted imo

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>>6800090
>You always draw the same curly haired OC
NTA but, arent you mistaking her for another artist? The critique of "always drawing the same blonde girl" doesnt apply to her of all people, specially when you look at the gallery.
>t. Probably the artist you want to criticize

>> No.6800236

>>6800205
cursed beg

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>6800090

>> No.6800239

>>6799548
You've been posting this same image for a while now. Do you even draw?

>> No.6800245

>>6799983
>Valid critique, but I wasn't going for realistic. Huge african tribes woman tits tend to be unappealing with out a little cartoon magic.
You just made a mistake. Accept the valid critique, say thanks, and stop coming up with BS excuses.

>> No.6800248

>>6800205
beg with zero sense of appeal

>> No.6800255

>>6800205
This is the result of PYW... cursed beg ranking others arbitrarily and badly. Anon you are not in a position to rank anybody, and I strongly suggest you focus on your own work.

>> No.6800256

>>6799548
>Art
>...ificial Intelligence

>> No.6800259

>>6800255
This. A hundred times this.

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>>6800090
>Gives no reason as to why it's bad, just "it bad!"
Lol.
>Don't act smug, it's that boring, baby's first design, round headed, curly haired oc
Ok? That OC isn't even mine, sorry you can't see the beauty in a cute simple design though. Also that is quite literally the third thing I've drawn of her in four months, to call that "all I ever draw" is unironically schizophrenic. This clearly isn't even the first time we've spoken yet for some reason I've never seen you post YOUR work, how about you show us?
>Inb4 you either ignore this and run away or turn out to be bbcchan
>>6800233
>t. Probably the artist you want to criticize
Actually no I've encountered this guy before unfortunately.

>> No.6800278

>>6800255
I did put my own work exactly for this reason, seems a bit cowardly to me to not do that. I'd say this whole ranking system is arbitrary and for fun so i see no problem with me joining in. Besides if the benchmark to ranking people was being pro this thread would have no interaction at all

And because it seemingly wasn't obvious to you, I can focus on making my work better and comment on other people's work at the same time, these two aren't exclusionary

>> No.6800281

>>6800205
I laready told you this in the last thread. Your "criticism" is a waste of time. You rate stuff based on your skewed perception of appeal, which is subjective.
Stop spending so much time on the internet and instead go draw.

>> No.6800293

>>6800233
Also, what's your name? Your art looks cute.

>> No.6800294

>>6800281
I wasn't in the last thread, but maybe you should take your own advice on this

>> No.6800298

>>6799767
About a year.
>>6799864
Thank you, but I personally think low pro is a bit overrated.
>>6800239
Nah, Im too busy being a dick on /ic/ and this work in particular makes nodraws seethe.I also did this >>6799550

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What's this style of face called? I see it a lot in beg tier artists and i fucking hate it.

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>>6800274
here my work - I drew this 30 minutes ago no ref
>>6800203
honestly, it's because about a year ago I was drawing like this guy too and I would still be drawing like that if it wasn't for getting out of my comfort zone

>> No.6800335

>>6800315
>That static pose and expression, fucked up gun, rudimentary unfinished rendering and colors, poor understanding of fabric folds, baby hand, and *gasp* are you HIDING that other hand?!
Please. Do you at least have something finished I can judge?

>> No.6800342

>>6800315
>that head
>that hand
>that gun
glass houses + throwing rocks

>> No.6800350

>>6800315
sorry but she mogs you

>> No.6800398

Why do so many fags who give criticism get angry at the person they're critiquing for no reason?

>> No.6800410

>>6800205
No offense but this has an uglyness I can't even describe. It looks morally wrong and I think you're a bad person just from this art you mad.

>> No.6800411

>>6800298
>Thank you, but I personally think low pro is a bit overrated.
Of course it is. People that rate others here have no idea what they are talking about and especially have no artistic eye. A total beg will rate you higher than somebody that is more skilled. To me for example you are high beg at best.

>> No.6800417

>>6800294
I draw for a living. Coming here for me is just a hobby. Same as for you with drawing.

>> No.6800419

>>6799978
The main issue with your stuff is that you hide your lack of artistic knowledge, or better said, lack of interest in actually improving, behind heavy stylization.

>> No.6800423

>>6800410
Kek'd so fucking hard.

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>>6800274
>That OC isn't even mine
But it could! I was a nosy bitch and checked the R34 posts, apparently the creator abandoned her, so maybe you could take her for yourself, please dont let this character die, she is so cute!
(I also found out artist wiped her whole gallery, do you have some of those draws of her saved?)
>Actually no I've encountered this guy before unfortunately.
My bad lol. It's just that "drawing nothing but the same curly-haired blonde girl" is an extremely specific piece of criticism I've gotten quite often from this board, hence me thinking anon was referring to me instead.
Plus, If /ic/ had a penny for every curly-haired blonde girl, it would have two pennies, one coming from you, one coming from me lmfao.
>>6800293
Thanks! it's KarmaColorCat on Xwitter. Im still on hiatus from the site due to commission work, so most stuff in there are draws from last year, but feel free to check in!

>> No.6800431

>>6800419
Gotta love how you never elaborate. Is there something *actually* wrong or are you just not a fan of the stylization? Cause if there is you should at least be able to tell me what's wrong instead of "it's bad because.. IT JUST IS OKAY?!"

>> No.6800464

>>6800411
What a waste of dubs to say that you don’t draw.

>> No.6800465

>>6800308
I guess the "I'm trying to be both realistic and stylize to impress you"

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Latest two pieces

>> No.6800488

>>6800427
I'm pretty sure the creator abandoned her due to my rule34 but it's so weird. I posted it to rule34 (ONLY r34) then four hours later they abandoned her publicly. My question is how often do you gotta check rule34 to catch that and why does vanilla art on rule34 matter? I also got a strange anon saying that she belongs to me now. She was already my favorite character of theirs but now I'm gonna make sure she's never forgotten!!
>I also found out artist wiped her whole gallery, do you have some of those draws of her saved?
Yes but I lost my phone a few days back and luckily all my images were backed up but now they're extremely out of order! This wouldn't be that big of an issue if I didn't have 12,000 images saved, lol. If I find them I'll show em though.
>"drawing nothing but the same curly-haired blonde girl" is an extremely specific piece of criticism I've gotten quite often from this board
That's the strangest thing I've heard all day.. I wonder if it's the same schizo. Jeez I can see why you'd think he was talking about you though that's nuts. Curly haired blonde girls RULE btw, might draw a lot of em just to piss off lord schizz.
>Thanks! it's KarmaColorCat on Xwitter
Heh, Xwitter. But also I was not expecting that you'd already be following me!! It's weird that I didn't get notified. I remember your style though, very good shit. Also wow, good on you for getting all those commissions!

>> No.6800495

>>6800479
soulful beg

>> No.6800499
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>>6798666
>BEG 2
>>6798668
>BEG 3
>>6798670
>BEG 3
>>6798734
>INT 1
>>6798805
>INT 1
>>6798823
>BEG 2
>>6798824
>INT 1
>>6799548
>PRO 1
>>6799550
>INT 3
>>6799715
>INT 3
>>6799781
>BEG 2
>>6799828
>BEG 3
>>6799867
>BEG 3
>>6799939
>INT 1
>>6799941
>BEG 1
>>6799963
>INT 1
>>6800016
>BEG 3
>>6800084
>INT 1
>>6800159
>INT 1 both
>>6800177
>INT 2-3 varies per artwork
>>6800192
>INT 1
>>6800205
>BEG 3
>>6800315
>BEG 3

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>>6800499

>RATING CRITERIA

1 - 3 BEG
>Lacking in at least 2 of the fundamentals of art.

4 - 6 INT
>Competent in at least 2 of the fundamentals of art but lacking in others.

7 - 9 ADV/PRO
>Very competent in at least 2 fundamentals of drawing without displaying any obvious deficinecies in the others.

10 MASTER
>Exceptional competency in all fields. Artist that will be rememberd and studied for their mastery in years to come

FUNDAMENTALS
Not in any particular order

COLOR
>Value control etc. for monochromatic work

COMPOSITION
>Storytelling falls in this as well as the presentation of the work

REPRESENTATION
>Anatomy, architecture, proportions etc. basycally the abillity to accuratly represent whatever you are trying to)

DRAFTSMANSHIP
>Line quality, brushwork. The skill and dexterity with which you use the chosen medium)

>> No.6800505

>>6800410
Next time at least don't hide behind that no offense

>> No.6800512

>>6800505
Dont feel bad it's clearly an exaggerated joke

>> No.6800514

>>6800431
No, there's nothing wrong with the stuff you draw in itself. The problem is that the stuff you draw doesn't show if you are a good artist or not.
The only thing I could criticise is your lack of confidence when it comes to lineart.
It's basically impossible to tell you anything more than that.

>> No.6800523

https://youtu.be/Xz3kNHJeG3M

>> No.6800530

>>6800514
>The problem is that the stuff you draw doesn't show if you are a good artist or not
What does this mean though? I am truly at a loss. Could you show me what you believe good art looks like? (For the love of god don't show me some hyper realistic painting. If you can't show me a cartoon that fits the bill I will assume you're simply not a fan of the stylization)
>The only thing I could criticise is your lack of confidence when it comes to lineart
Strange, I've had a lot of people say they like the lineart the most

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>>6798734 here

>>6798805
classic extended ribcage, 3/10 int
>>6798823 >>6799941
not enough to rate my guy
>>6798824
you're onto something, 4/10 int
>>6799548 >>6799550
really fond of the latter, 9/10 int
>>6799715
splendid work anon, 5/10 int
>>6799781
bit hard to look at, 4/10 beg
>>6799828 >>6799978
genitalia, 2/10 int
>>6799867
too many anatomical errors man, 5/10 beg
>>6799939
i'd like more anguish in his eyes, 9/10 int
>>6799963
a bit stiff but i like the idea, 3/10 int
>>6800016
the hatching's a bit much, 5/10 int
>>6800084
very rough, 6/10 int
>>6800159
your gains are all over the place, 8/10 beg
>>6800177
nice assortment, 5/10 int
>>6800192
the jawbreakers, 3/10 int
>>6800205
tunnel vision on the face, 5/10 beg
>>6800315
same as the previous, 3/10 beg
>>6800479
nice vibes, 7/10 beg

>> No.6800586

>>6799550
High int
>>6799715
low-mid int
>>6799781
style/10
>>6799828
style/10 but probably low int
>>6799867
high beg
>>6799939
High int
>>6799963
high beg, fundamental anatomy is really bad. Stop turd polishing
>>6800016
Int. I hate hatching like this but gj
>>6800084
Very cool composition, a little muddy. Anatomy on that arm/hand looking shaken. Very close to being great. Low int.
>>6800159
mid beg, low appeal.
>>6800177
High beg, anatomy and faces are really bad in some of these.
>>6800192
High beg, very uninteresting to look at.
>>6800205
Beg. Again, very unappealing to look at. Fundamentals are sort of present but your taste are not. Faces are not good and poses are very stiff.
>>6800315
Mid Beg. Colouring isn’t really doing anything for the form and the face isn’t really there yet. Try some more interesting poses.
>>6800479
Mid beg. Good effort on trying some interesting poses and including backgrounds. More effort than most in this thread. Anatomy is shaky and appeal is low, though.

>> No.6800592

>>6799966
So basically you need the expressions to be visible from a thumbnail size, also exaggerate expressions by 50% if you think you are not doing expressions well enough
Expressions that feel "too much" while you are beginning are actually probably closer to what you want
Also compiling and studying anime doujin faces is a really good idea for bumping up expressiveness

>>6799983
Still looks great and cute, I like that face a lot!
You are going to be a really great furry artist
I disagree with the other anon and agree with you, cartoon magic works. People seem to forget how much faces in drawings use cartoon magic, of course it can tastefully be applied to the rest of pictures if you master fundies first

>> No.6800602

>>6800586
Yes, I am trying to push myself into more perspective whilst continuing my anatomy studies.

But how exactly do I increase appeal?
Master studies of certain styles? Or is it something that comes naturally?

>> No.6800603

anyone open this thread to peep the new ratings and then get confused when you go through them because of how widely inconsistent they are

>> No.6800605

>>6800603
I just take the rating I get the most as my "official" rating and accept that as my rating.

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>>6800315
>>6800335
here it is more polished
>>6800350
I don't see it but to each their own

>> No.6800632

>>6800205
could someone be so kind as to give me more of an explonation as to why it is unappealing? I obviously can't see it and can't really work on it unless i know

>> No.6800656

>>6800632
I will try to help
The colors are dull and not appealing (minus the background, I think it has really nice colors)
The faces, frankly, have nigger noses

I think you should pick a palette based off of an artist who has good colors and experiment with those, also pick some art with facial anatomy you like and put it at 30% in one layer and study the proportions on the art
Imposing a face you drew over another piece of art and studying the differences in proportions would also be a good idea

>> No.6800660
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>> No.6800667

>>6800602
Appeal will increase naturally as you get better at anatomy, composition, and rendering. I think right now what’s bringing down your appeal is largely related to skill level. Your rendering does not add much to the figure. The linework on the faces is very harsh and doesnt have much variance in line weight. Outlines are complex but the actual drawing feels (especially on the fish woman) very stiff and flat.

But there are other elements to it, which are best learned (imo) from observing the stylization choices of artists you think have high appeal. Honestly just having good taste in color and composition can carry a piece much further than raw fundies

>> No.6800681

>>6800667
Alright! So keep grinding and studying then!! IM GONNA MAKE IT!!!

>> No.6800691

>>6800681
>no (you) for me but one for this guy
I despise you and wish harm upon your art career and family
I hope you stay beg and keep horrible faces and bad colors.

>> No.6800701
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I Need to finish this one

>> No.6800707

>>6800701
Where's the legs

>> No.6800724

>>6799548
i like the drawing but the fact that someone would rate this withing 100 miles from a pro proves that you should stay the fuck away from these threads. look at the halo, the foliage, the formless collar, the mindless wrinkles in the clothes, the lineart or the perspective mismatch between hair, face and glasses. its a nice drawing though, not trying to talk trash

>> No.6800732
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>>6800707

>> No.6800735

>>6800691
>>6800581
I thought you were the same anon >:C
No need to be mean. I am nearsighted enough that I didn't catch it.

Let it be known, anon...I WILL FUCKING MAKE IT AND SURPASS ALL MY ENEMIES AND NO CRABBY BASTARDS WILL STOP ME.

>> No.6800749

>>6800724
literally we are all doomed

>> No.6801346

>>6800499
>>6800504
it'd be cool if next time you could add which area you think the drawing is lacking in

>> No.6801364

>>6800724
I agree I would rate that maybe mid to high int but def not pro

>> No.6801586
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6801586

How did I do?

>> No.6801615
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>>6798640
my largest piece

>> No.6801724

>>6801364
That's high beg at best. Ints should be able to understand perspective and proportions. Both of which that drawing lacks.

>> No.6801732
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>> No.6801733

>>6800530
>What does this mean though?
It means that heavily stylized drawings like these can't be used to rate your skills. Simple as that.
They are the equivalent of the mickey mouse face people learned to copy and draw on the sides of notebooks.
The -correct- proportions, perspective, etc. can be dismissed because they are hidden underneath the stylization.
The only thing that can be commented on, as I said, is the lineart which isn't smooth and drawn in one stroke, but instead is "sculpted", which shows that you aren't confident with your strokes.
Unless you are doing that on purpose. Though the problem is that it doesn't come across as voluntary.

>> No.6801734

Fuck this fag ass thread. Fuck you all-

>> No.6801735
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>>6801732

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>>6801734
You poor thing.

>> No.6801786

>>6801736
You dont even know why Im seething fucking smoothbrained retard

>> No.6801790

>>6801786
It doesn't matter. That's exactly what you sound like, my dear autistic mongoloid.

>> No.6801795
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Behold! 32 likes on X.

>> No.6801797

>>6801615
Sniff/10

>> No.6801802

>>6799867
Im gonna go out on a limb and say you're int.
Yeah it's not all even, but you have enough qualities that put you above the beg. Study loomis, and get your faces right, and then you are above most the people that post here.

>> No.6801810
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6801810

trying to draw again after a month of no draw.

>> No.6801822

>>6801810
Can't stop seeing a dwarf with skinny legs and two massive arms

>> No.6801824
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>>6801822
draw it out right now!
i dont see it at all and forced the fuck out of this...
>sees thumbnail
KEK okay i see it now wtf

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>> No.6802165
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6802165

I've never finished a drawing. I only fill my canvas with dudes and then clear it for hours every day.

>> No.6802249
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6802249

no, i don't study
no, i don't know about anatomy
no, i don't know about colour theory
no, i don't know about perspective
no, i don't know about how shadows work
nevertheless, i'm having fun

>> No.6802251
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6802251

>>6802249
something i just made for the deviantart composition badge thing

>> No.6802272

>>6802249
>no, i don't study
>no, i don't know about anatomy
>no, i don't know about colour theory
>no, i don't know about perspective
>no, i don't know about how shadows work
>nevertheless, i'm having fun
cringe af
post your art and shut the fuck up. this is not a poetry contest.

>> No.6802310

>>6801733
If you honest to god cant see the skill through the stylization you might be retarded. Lineart being sculpted isn't a bad thing either. Sounds much more like you just have a closed mind when it comes to art than anon genuinely not having skill

>> No.6802318

>>6800607
A little better but still stiff and lifeless as ever. What is she even doing with that other hand? It's almost like you were originally hiding it for a reason other than lack of confidence because showing it would be out of place, what a concept!

>> No.6802332

>>6802272
why we angry

>> No.6802388

>>6801724
Damm, there are still people nitpicking appart this drawing just because someone liked that much?

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>> No.6802399
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>> No.6802413
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6802413

It looked better before I colored it :(

>> No.6802520

>>6802310
>If you honest to god cant see the skill through the stylization you might be retarded.
You see, the problem is I don't see any skills behing that stylization. I pointed out the very amateurish line art several times already.

>> No.6802522

>>6802332
Oh no, you don't like harsh truth. My bad, lil snowflake.

>> No.6802620

>>6801735
Low beg high soul. I'd eat at any burrito place that has this painted directly on the wall.
>>6802249
Forced lazy soul. You couldn't pay me to eat your burritos.

>> No.6802621

>>6802249
>>6802251
These are amazing... blog?

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>> No.6802654

>>6802635
blog?

>> No.6802670

>>6802520
NTA but making an appealing style requires skill. that anon has a decent grasp of anatomy and to somewhat of an extent color theory which is an objective measurement. personally I love the chunky soulfulness of his lines but i could see how itd be a negative if you didnt enjoy it. im curious as to what you believe a good cartoon would be though

>> No.6802695

>>6802654
That's shinH, not some random retard from /ic/

>> No.6803185

>>6802522
>snowflake
>2023
Anon…

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>> No.6803249

>>6803245
11

>> No.6803253

>>6803245
Kino

>> No.6803256

>>6800660
I already follow you

>> No.6803452

>>6803245
Good stuff if it's really yours.

>> No.6803517

>>6802413
I liked the left/right foot mixup in the OG too.

>> No.6803519

>>6803245
8.2
>green lantern
>not lighting the body with green light

>> No.6803539

>>6803245
https://www.artstation.com/beargio
this you, anon?

>> No.6803541

>>6803539
prob not, why post something from a year ago?

>> No.6803942

>>6802399
/beg/ 3/10

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6803998

>>6798640

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>>6798640
/beg/ reporting for duty

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6804035

>>6803998

>> No.6804118

>>6804012
/beg/ but cool concept 4/10

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6804122

>>6798640
I was told it's bad and now I'm curious how bad it is.

>> No.6804139

>>6804122
1, a bored child with lots of time could do this, no skill required whatsoever.

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rate and critique? advice on how to indicate skin texture better?

>> No.6804638

>>6804217
5/10 low int

>> No.6805237

>>6804035
3

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>>6798640

>> No.6805503
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>>6804118
how do i improve myself senpai?

>> No.6805517

>>6801735
2
>>6801810
3
>>6802249
7
>>6802399
4
>>6802413
6
>>6803245
10
>>6803978
6
>>6803998
3
>>6804012
5
>>6804035
3
>>6804122
2
>>6805479
2
>>6805490
3
>>6805503
4

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6805650

A study of joseph joestar, live any critiques too

>> No.6805986

>>6805650
Love this shading
>>6804012
>>6805503
This looks fucking kino. Reminds me of that Renalla Bossfight in Elden Ring

>> No.6806019

>>6805650
His face is too narrow
Spend more time in the construction phase. Really get that accuracy going.

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>> No.6806070

>>6800701
guys we found the pro

>> No.6806659

>>6805650
why the long face

>> No.6806736

>>6798640
https://youtu.be/vvv1SPtMPxM?si=rWbMrQO6kDr_JIgf ,

>> No.6806844

>>6803245
I love his little shoes!!!!

>> No.6806888

>>6805517
These are mine:
>>6805479
>>6805490
It took me 7 months to get to that point, at this rate how long will it take for me to get to low int?

>> No.6806889
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>>6802390
I'm hijacking your ref

>> No.6806891
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6806891

Finished this one yesterday, not sure if I should paint it

>> No.6806894
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I need to work on color choices...and a lot of other things.

>> No.6806898
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6806898

>>6798640
drawing i made last year

>> No.6806943

>>6806898
4
>>6806894
3
>>6806891
6
>>6806889
5
>>6806026
5
>>6805650
4
>>6805538
8

>> No.6807006

>>6805517
>>6806943
how do these translate on the ic scale

>> No.6807120
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>> No.6807433

>>6807006
Sadly they don't translate at all. Look at his score. You'll notice that scores he gave were almost random, based on his whimsy rather than actual technical proficiency of artists he scored.

The only use this thread have is as a reminder not to waste our time with beginners who don't know shit, yet insist on talking.

>> No.6808120
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A character from a commission I did recently.

>> No.6808131

>>6807006
0-9 => beg
10 => int

>> No.6808183

>>6808120
obviously you have chops, but i hate this so much

>> No.6808194

>>6808183
What do you hate about it, anon?

>> No.6808203

>>6808194
okay one thing for example --the cheap figure ground relationship makes Mr. look like a Halloween cardboard cutout, the shadow he's casting on the ground is going in the completely wrong direction. makes the whole picture really uncanny.
and then there's the design itself, which is gross
ofc it's supposed to gross me out, so it's effective at least in that way.

>> No.6808216

>>6805503
Looks like you could use some grindin on better composition n lineart. I can see you got a grasp on colors n drawing. I recommend studying artists you like

>> No.6808221

>>6804217
Learn hatching

>> No.6808222

>>6808203
Honestly, this character was originally a part of a bigger illustration. I posted it separately for this thread and didn't pay much attention to how the shadow was looking, but you're right, it does give off cardboard-y vibes. I'll fix the values & the shadow placement if I decide to post this character on other platforms.

>> No.6808246

>>6808222
checked
in some places the mirrored construction // overall figuration works, but in areas like the top shoulders and his upper right arm lose out to rendering and become flattened
there are a few color theory bones tho pick as well, and you deserve to hear them, but i am frankly too tired to go into it at length. the issue is concerning the relationship between the highlights and shadows. observing nude models under similar lighting conditions should elucidate what im pointing to, or maybe another anon can step in

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hey guys rate this jak i made

>> No.6808281
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Recently finished this

>> No.6808351
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>>6808216
i admit, i suck at lineart because i'm too used to chickenscratching with pencil
plus its pretty hard to draw with a mouse for those digital drawings
i'm still learning my compositions though, because composition is cool

>> No.6808522
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My most recent attempt at illustration.

>> No.6808547

>>6807006
Idk its a 1-10 scale thread shouldn't that be obvious... imagine it like a fucking grade in school. 6/10 = 60%, 7/10 = 70%, etc etc.

>>6807433
Shut up, rope yourself, cope, seethe, mald, didn't ask anyways

>>6808131
Kek

>>6808120
8
>>6808257
2
>>6808281
6
>>6808351
6
>>6808522
6

>> No.6808631
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favourite piece this year

>> No.6808635

>mine got ignored by everyone
Eh...

>> No.6808697

>>6808221
any resource you'd recommend to learn hatching? any example you could provide on how it would improve texture?

>> No.6808698

>>6808246
Are you taking about the relationship between darkest area under light and brightest area under shadow?

>> No.6808835
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>>6808246
Is this any better, anon?

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rate critique and advice on how to improve what to work on?

>> No.6808931

>>6808547
lol, you got mad after being called out on your bullshit? Retard.

>> No.6808938

>>6807120
This is fantastic!!!

>> No.6808942

>>6806070
Thanks :3

>> No.6809038

>>6808921
Radical/10

>> No.6810368
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Can I get a rate on this one please? Did it ages ago, and I feel like I've forgotten how to render like this.

>> No.6810487
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Did this few months back

>> No.6810566

>>6808547
>Shut up, rope yourself, cope, seethe, mald, didn't ask anyways
NTA, but he is right. You have no idea what you are talking about. Your ratings are useless.

>> No.6810567

>>6810368
>I've forgotten how to render like this.
Good for you. It's shit.

>> No.6810569

>>6810487
Good stuff. Even fantastic stuff, if any of these are from memory and not copied.
No matter the case, you have very confident strokes. GG anon.

>> No.6810615

>>6808931
are you saying my maid marian isnt a 6 :(

>> No.6810664

>>6803978
>>6810615
NTA but anon your Maid Marian is great fuck I really like it.

>> No.6810876

>>6810487
that's the good stuff

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>>6810664
thanks anon

>> No.6811551

>>6800084
this is sick

>> No.6811560
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6811560

Tattoo design

>> No.6812738

>>6800245
(you)

>> No.6812769

>>6808194
It looks too smooth. Add some more texture, hairs veins, slime. Stuff that'll give it some more depth

>> No.6812775

>>6810487
adv

>> No.6812874

>>6810566
Wasn't even the same guy, one of those original ratings was mine, other was some other guy
Just sounds like you're pissed you got rated garbo

>> No.6812876

>>6811560
3
>>6811379
3
>>6810487
7
>>6810368
2
>>6808921
4
>>6808631
6
>>6808835
7
>>6808522
4
>>6808281
4
>>6807120
8.5
>>6806898
4.5
>>6806891
8.5
>>6806026
5

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>>6810487
>a few months back
>6/28/23
>mfw

>> No.6812917

>>6800315
Yeah sorry but the other anon is better even if she "hides behind stylization"
I mean Christ, what the fuck is that gun?

>> No.6815208

>>6799939
what's with the retards, this is awesome full pro

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>> No.6817168
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6817168

Hello powerlevel, its been too long

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>>6798640
tried some new stuff

>> No.6817856

>>6810487
sexy all around

>> No.6818067

>>6817854
Int. Well done.

>> No.6818069

>>6808921
Saved.

>> No.6818076

>>6798666
>>6798668
>>6798670
>>6799781
>>6799867
>>6799939
>>6799963
>>6799978
>>6799828
>>6800084
>>6800159
>>6800192
>>6800205
>>6800315
>>6800479
>>6801586
>>6801732
>>6801735
>>6802134
>>6802165
>>6802390
>>6802399
>>6803978
>>6803998
>>6804012
>>6804035
>>6804122
>>6804217
>>6805479
>>6805490
>>6805503
>>6805650
>>6806894
>>6806898
>>6808257
>>6808281
>>6808631
>>6810368
>>6811379
>>6811560
>>6815308
beg

>> No.6818079

>>6798734
>>6798805
>>6798824
>>6798823
>>6799548
>>6799550
>>6799715
>>6800177
>>6800660
>>6802413
>>6802635
>>6806026
>>6817168
>>6817854
>>6800581
int

>> No.6818080

>>6803245
>>6806891
>>6810487
pro

>> No.6818083
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6818083

>>6815308
Hello skarr! I thought i would be the worst artist in the thread.

>> No.6818085

>>6818083
you are

>> No.6818087

>>6818085
Shut up spic faggot and go draw instead of sending me countryball memes and asking me to translate shit.

>> No.6818127

>>6818069
Thanks for the ego boost anon wagmi

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i got 2 more

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>>6818193

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>>6818193
>>6818194

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6819445

>>6810487
Guh damn,i like the wiesel. 9/10

>> No.6819464

>>6819445
based ZoV drawfag

>> No.6822635
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currently a wip. but I'm curious

>> No.6822795

>>6819445
zovl

>> No.6822899

>>6799828
based.

>> No.6822901

>>6800177
good

>> No.6822974
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can i get?

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>> No.6823582

>>6798823
if you finish this, do you mind posting it?

>> No.6823612
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did this quick ink from imagination today. Idk how to combine pics and at the same time make it less than 4 megs so ill post a drawing from observation later depending on if im called beg or not

>> No.6823632

>>6806894
fellow buffy enjoyer. Anyone that likes Angel more than Spike is a retard. He loves Buffy without a soul. Angel needed some gypsy curse to love her.

>> No.6823735

>>6822780
int

>> No.6823755

>>6800632
Well it isn't finished, first of all. Your lineart is very clean and smooth, but also somewhat stale and methodical. There's no shading. There's no texture. The background is rough, which clashes with the minimal, clean subject. The characters are floating around with no presence. Your character designs include fantastical elements like gradiating to a bright color for the scales and hair, which clashes with your flat-color rendering. There's no story being told, despite the fact that this is clearly a narrative composition. The piece lacks direction, which should be easy to establish with the one girl pulling on the other. She should either be pulling slightly into the foreground or the background, instead of the movement being ambiguously 'sideways'. Some kind of contour needs to be represented, either with lineart/hatching, or with shading. The wing looks flat, instead of projecting behind her into space.

Symbolically these characters are unappealing, as mean, dangerous dragons which would probably bite you, which are in the guise of harmless girls. The art has no message that they are dangerous, so it seems like the art itself is unaware of how we would feel about the girls, and trying to present them as people we would want to be friends with. I don't want to be friends with them, they would probably bite me and then make fun of me for bleeding. If the art specifically highlighted the duality of being cute girls and dangerous lizards, like showing the sorrow of being unable to effortlessly connect with others, or showing the poison in their gaze as they size you up to eat you, that would speak to the audience a lot more. But "I'm quirky, I would bite you" is not something anyone wants to see.

>> No.6823759

>>6802251
Making art for deviantart badges is the highest motivation.

>> No.6824400

>>6800205
Which Wikihow article is this?

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>>6798640

>> No.6824615

>>6824564
looks like it could be published

>> No.6824663

>>6824564
>seductive 3/4 anime girl with no distinct eye level
social media goyslop tier, just needs decent color

>> No.6824684

>>6824663
U sound bitter

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>>6799550
love the color palette

>>6800479
im proud of you anon for those perspective trials

>>6800701
love the legs tail (also rendering)

>>6802390
nice keep going

>>6803245
im proud of you this is it

>>6805479
i enjoy looking at it good job

>>6805490
very nice space

>>6810487
try not to look like "im a guy that is drawing prodigy", you can draw so make good drawings not toilet paper shit plz

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>> No.6825057

>>6800255
>You need to be good at art to judge art and its mistakes
You're a fucking retard lmao

>> No.6825264

>>6824663
Man now that you said it, I see it. Every bit of it is the same level, like we're looking at her through a telescope.

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>>6800701

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toasting a new bread

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>> No.6827653

bump

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sure why not

>> No.6831422

bump

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the color palette was given to me

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first pixel art

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>> No.6833498

>>6800084
Push it a little further and you'll be better than most of the faggots present in this thread. Remember to add fill lights and rim lights to reinforce the shape.

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>> No.6833593

>>6825732
It's really good, but i think you might want to look into classic fairy tale illustrators and make the head a bit more humanized

>> No.6834099

>>6833412
I see a bug getting fucked by a human on the thumbnail.
Send help.

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>>6834373

>> No.6834446

>>6799550
>>6798805
>>6799963
>>6800084
>>6801810
>>6802249
>>6808631
>>6822780
Gonna need some blogs here friends.

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>>6798640
Textless version to spare you at least some cringe

>> No.6834467

>>6834454
So these aren't just comms? This is just what you do

>> No.6834476

>>6834373
6.5 Body
4.5 Face
>>6834374
6 Face
7 Hands

If only you could put them together
>>6833553
Put him in a damn scenario. This style looks so bad in a void, which is a shame
>>6833413
3.5. boring
>>6833412
Whatever style you're going for. You nailed it.
And that style gets a 2.5 outta 10
>>6833403
You should have given it right back
>>6833410
Adding color did nothing to this. It would look better as a black and white sketch.
>>6833411
Flat faced, flat chested. and rubber knees. I get the flat chest was a choice.
>>6825732
Awesome. I want to see more. You are heads and tails above anyone here.
>>6825348
Fun, somewhat original, and decently shaded. I dont think I need to point out the mistakes, as you probably see them. It's relatable as a former tradfag,
>>6824689
Its' fine, but lower your res nigger
>>6824564
If it didn't have the screen tones it would be as lifeless and generic as every other big tiddy anime chick in a void as the rest
But you added that. So be default, you uninspired work is automatically better. Congrats

>> No.6834503

>>6834467
I mean I only do comms that I'm really excited about in the first place, you thought I was doing this for the money or something?

>> No.6834512

>>6834503
Kinda. The first post of yours I saw was a giantess, and you mentioned it was a comm.
I'm just not used to that fetish I guess.

>> No.6834515

>>6834512
Nah I'm very passionate about the stuff I draw. This is my outlet for my cringe fetishes that mostly developed in my childhood.
My first real comm ever was a bbw yuri comm and I learned my lesson after struggling to push through that. And I only did that because I felt like I owed the person for taking a risk on a beginner artist like myself

>> No.6834528

>>6834515
Welp, I'm glad you are able to draw what you are passionate about. I guess there is a postiive about this fetish. You learn scale, and technically you should be able to draw to scale people as well. I suppose its' one of the more practical (from an art form) kind of things to draw. I am curious, with this stuff, is it the fear of the woman, or just the fact shes' a giant? or both? Cause I liked the film Attack of the 50 foot woman

>> No.6834549

>>6834528
Yeah, always trying to improve fundies regardless. I would like to produce professional quality work eventually.
And it's a femdom thing. I just love sadistic and abusive women who always get their way. The size or muscle mass is just a vehicle to express their power. I want it to be a completely unfair matchup so it's hopeless for the victim, even better if they struggled helplessly. The sexy sadistic narcissist gets nothing but inordinate, undeserved amusement and pleasure, while the innocent helpless victim suffers due to nothing but her whim. I got issues. I appreciate the interest

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>>6834373
>>6834374
Nice facial expressions
>6834476
>

>> No.6834572

>>6810487
How/what have you been studying to get to this level?

>> No.6834574

>>6834549
Alright I get it. I too have a femdom thing, but it's when they are weaker than men, and have to use other methods, likes violence. Same but not the same. Hey at least we aren't footfags

>> No.6834585

>>6834574
I have plenty of art focused on girl feet. Don't talk shit about fetishes in the same breath that you're admitting to having one mang. Cool that you're into femdom tho

>> No.6834588

>>6834585
Nah, we're done here. Anything in common I had with you can be chalked up to this very nice rye Im drinking. I'm just glad I didn't link my work

>> No.6834596

>>6834588
yeah yeah, kys or whatever

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>>6834446
@goblinkingart on the twit

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>>6834446
@nemojona

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>>6798640
i hope my body can take it

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>>6833593
Funny you say that, the head was actually based pretty closely on an Arthur Rackham illustration.

>>6834476
Thank you, I really appreciate that. I've actually had a lot of internal anxiety and strife about the fact that I've never been good at the conventional digital art styles, or at getting that high-appeal polish on my stuff. But I found different influences, mostly Heavy Metal Magazine artists, and found a different route I've been happy to commit to. Recently I think I've broken through and can finally represent my vision, and it looks stylish and appealing to me. I'm at @checkerworks if you want to see more.