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/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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6672813 No.6672813 [Reply] [Original]

How do I improve this?

>> No.6672824

bump

>> No.6672850

do you draw for wikihow?

>> No.6672966

>>6672850
No, why? It's certainly not basic as wikhow art is it?

>> No.6672973

>>6672966
It is more complex and requiring in skill than WikiHow art is, but the rendering makes it look like it would belong there.

>> No.6672983

The main mast is wrong. You've got the sail on the wrong side. Go look at ref.

>> No.6673002

>>6672966
>>6672973
could be a wikihow artist's passion project

>> No.6673079

>>6672813
this is fucking horrific

>> No.6673085

>>6672813
this is so fucking gay please stop making art. We need to stop giving Chads drawing software

>> No.6673195

>>6672813
This looks like something I would have seen on 9gag in 2013

>> No.6673240
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6673240

>>6672813
Cool work anon, here's my quick take

>> No.6673293

draw it again but better

>> No.6673307
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6673307

>>6672813
I like how bold you are, don't lose that

there are a lot of problems with the construction and rendering but I will only criticize the subject and composition (I am still learning the second)

I assume you wanted something endearing and to show how immersed you are while creating this amazing and happy one piece world, but quite honestly showing your sad and lowly saturated and room and face is quite depressing. if that was the objective, it was not dramatic enough, not enough contrast.

now on the composition, it is messy, as you don't know where to look first or where the highlight of painting is. is the luffy your your face? in addition, there are to many breaks in your patining which make it difficult to guide the eyes. I would try to align the boat with the pen and your face to make the eye movement smoother.

if you decrease the lighting and the saturation on your face, it will make it more dramatic and depressing. if you want to show how glad you are while painting, perhaps I would take a completely different take.

>> No.6673308

>>6673240
that's nice

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>>6672813

>> No.6673438

>>6672813
Better colors, colors are why this is rough

>> No.6673492
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6673492

>>6672813
I have no idea but maybe make the fantastical elements brighter and more vibrant

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>>6672813
I actually laughed, good job /ic/

what separates a professional from a hobbyist is attention to detail!

>> No.6673893

>>6672813

This is an insult to one piece

>> No.6674146

is that pewdiepie

>> No.6674165

>>6674146
i think it's ryan gosling

>> No.6674203

>>6672813
Pretty cool art bro, keep it up

>> No.6674847

This is alright. You didn't have to post it here.

>> No.6674864

>>6672813
you should first and foremost save the filename as something recognizeable