/salt/ - Sexual art stylization thread

[Anonymous No.6399248]

Previous thread >>6375011

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western styles can coexist here.

>Rules & Guidelines
1) Any form of cartooning styles is welcome; submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge, any tips are certainly welcome for all beginners.
4) Do to not be afraid of asking for critique, please be specific on what help you need!
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.

>Community Resources
>>>/ic/courses
>>>/ic/artbook
characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy

>NSFW image resources
pornpics.com
female-anatomy-for-artist.com/
realbooru.com
hegrehunter.com

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

[Anonymous No.6399273]

>>6399248

[Anonymous No.6399275]

>>6399273

[Anonymous No.6399277]

>>6399275

[Anonymous No.6399353]

>>6399248
Op is interesting but she just seems bored and disinterested in what she's doing. like it doesn't make the picture fun.

[Anonymous No.6399361]

any rendering advice? I know doing it in greyscale and then coloring it isn't as good as going straight to color but it's all my pea brain can handle

[Anonymous No.6399453]

>>6399248
hello i wanted to know how do i draw benis bagena and diddies :DD
i started practicing separate body parts and would like some steb-by-step tutorials for absolute beg morons
or any advice in general

[Anonymous No.6399509]

progress

[Anonymous No.6399776]

>>6399509
I wouldn't know how to address it but the smaller drawing on the left looks fucked up, like she's missing a few inches between her ribcage and hips
the rest looks good though

[Anonymous No.6399968]

while i continue with this drawing, any of oyu have advice on how i can make this have more readability?
line weight? coloring the lines on the insides with lighter colors and then making the outside lines on the limbs and such have darker lines?

I know that art is a process, but this is looking so messy to me right now. I don't draw armor often, and this armored character is very monster-like with horns on his body.

Any advice is appreciated.

[Anonymous No.6400052]

Do you have girl pooping art that depicts scenes like this?

[Anonymous No.6400203]

[Anonymous No.6400204]

>>6400052
>grenade rounds in binder
expleen

[Anonymous No.6400285]

>>6400203
That kinda looks painful for Miruko

[Anonymous No.6400848]

Ok so i wanted to make my lineart more interesting and decided to start going through the parts where i had pointlessly thick lines and start erasing bit by bit.
I am not done obviously as you can see with half the drawing not being this way

Is it a good idea to use that on the tentacles to make them look more slimey?

[Anonymous No.6400963]

>>6399248
eyyy thanks OP, I think that was a WIP before I finished it and the armour alt >>6399353 thanks anon, you're right she's meant to look dominant/menacing but her face and eyes are too relaxed
>>6399277
cute faces as usual and that 3/4 view one in the middle looks really appealing. it's up to you and your style choice but if I can crit anything is the shapes for her belly/hips being reduced too much, if it's something you think would suit you look at how the pros draw shapely bellies, folds, etc
>>6399361
look at how the pros use a mix of large, med and small shapes to hint at muscles and landmarks. this is really effective already with simple shapes. if you're after rendering workflow advice, as long as you keep your shapes in dif layers you have quite a few options available, using the shaded layers as multiply on top of flats, or alpha locking those layers so you can paint over them with handpicked colours, or do the whole thing in greyscale and meddle in some gradient maps. also not sure if that indent under her left nipple makes sense it makes her boob look deformed
>>6399453
doxxy's nsfw tutorials, study other benis and bachina artists, draw from ref
>>6399509
like anon said I think her upper body needs narrowing as shoulders look too wide. super satisfying rendering as always
>>6399968
contrast in values, I think the monster's arm and dick being the same value as the guy's body makes it hard to read, make the monster all one darker value. watch out for things like having heavier linework 'inside' the silhouette like on the tricep and forearm, you can see it even from the thumbnail, those clumps draw attention to non-focal areas
>>6400052
wow. your work?
>>6400203
solid construction as ever, her face looks a touch too long and his eyes not quite looking at her but maybe it's early to say
>>6400848
not sure what you mean but the line weight is a bit disorganised here. sliminess is usually achieved with specular lights and a look of "wetness"

[Anonymous No.6401020]

>>6400963
>doxxy's nsfw tutorials
thenks anon :DD

[Anonymous No.6401094]

>>6400963
>not sure what you mean but the line weight is a bit disorganised here. sliminess is usually achieved with specular lights and a look of "wetness"
Not sure what you mean but its done

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/103320918

[Anonymous No.6401259]

>>6399248
Fuck Shit Piss. My discord friend blocked me on all accounts after i drew his green haird OC with a swimsuit. He said he'd retweet it over discord but he never did. So I sent him a simple message over twitter "Retweet"
>blocked my ass
Fuck these European homo shitstains. Use the websites intended features or log the fuck off.

[Anonymous No.6401706]

advice on coloring? Frankly I have no idea what I'm doing and I could really use some resources to learn how to make my art look less garish

[Anonymous No.6401930]

[Anonymous No.6401931]

>>6401930

[Anonymous No.6401966]

>>6400963
tried shifting hawks' vision and making mirukos' face a little rounder, thanks for the second set of eyes

[Anonymous No.6401973]

made a new account trying to spread my stuff around
https://twitter.com/chocobabka

[Anonymous No.6402107]

more dead than my nan in here, what's happened? where are you all at :(

[Anonymous No.6402118]

>>6401706
Specify what you mean by garish. Apart from fundies, there is a style that we wish to achieve, maybe an artist of inspiration. I have a goal for you. Tell me what you dont like about your art, specifically. And tell me some artists that you do like.

[Anonymous No.6402119]

>>6401930
>>6401931
Lurker here these are breddy nice so far

[Anonymous No.6402310]

>>6401931
Somebody send a knight in shining armor to save him!. He's in trouble,
>>6401973
Word of advice. Stop doing 4chan drawthread requests. They only have a 15% success rate to actually gain a follower. Since most people on 4chan don't use Twitter anyways. But your new stuff looks good.

[Anonymous No.6402325]

>>6399273
i love how you draw those faces

[Anonymous No.6402392]

>>6402118
It's hard for me to put my finger on it, but I dislike how my art tends to have lots of highly saturated colors without any harmony between them. I'd also like to use colored lineart but I don't really understand what colors to use and where to use them. Lastly, I have a lot of trouble finding a balance between using hard and soft shadows.

Some artists I really admire are Mariel Cartwright (Kinucakes on twitter), Nisego, and Alex Ahad. I'm attaching a Nisego drawing I found that is basically my goal as an artist.

Thanks so much for your feedback by the way! This has been a very useful exercise and I really appreciate the help.

[Anonymous No.6403190]

>>6402392
comparing your art to the one you have sent i have a few things i would point out.

It looks like you have a grasp on "hue shifting", but there's also something else to consider when it comes to color and that is value. How light or dark something is on your screen.
there are two ways to check your value:
1. if you are on windows, you can assign color modes to your screen. One of them is monochrome. I have this set to a hot key (something like c+shift+windows?) do i can switch back and forth with ease.
2. fill a layer above your whole work with white. set it to "saturation". turn it on when you want to see your values.

If you want your art to have the vibe of the art that you sent, try matching the skin values to that one. You'll see that there is a large range from white to black

Second, try a smaller brush size. Your lines are much thicker than the art that you have sent.

my only other advice to give is.. hwve you studied color theory yet? It comes naturally to some people, but if it hasn't for you, I'd try one of those tumblr era color pallete challenges where you only use the 5-6 colors in a pallete that you like. Over time, it will come naturally. I still copy colors from existing pieces, because some times it helps when i have no clue what to do for the colors.

[Anonymous No.6403270]

>>6403190
This is all really helpful! I'll definitely try one of those color palette challenges, and I can see what you're saying about the values. Thanks so much for your advice!

[Anonymous No.6403364]

>>6403190
>>6403270
Just steal the colors of whatever it is you are studying with the picker tool. Anime tends to be very saturated so until you get a feel for recognizing how to pick the colors yourself in your program of choice without cheating, you can do that. Personally I tend to underestimate how saturated something is when I pick colors. Another thing that might throw you off is working on a white background. I usually do lineart and coloring on top of a very light cool gray (contrasts with skin well and is easier on eyes, and even traditional paper is never pure white due to lighting), and you can leave it that way until you're done assuming it's just a figure floating in a void.

[Anonymous No.6403529]

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[Anonymous No.6403547]

[Anonymous No.6403551]

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[Anonymous No.6403913]

>>6403547
really nice faces, any specific inspirations for that kind of style?

[Anonymous No.6403932]

Animation style design

[Anonymous No.6403984]

>>6402107
I’ve been demoted from art poster to lurker

[Anonymous No.6404186]

>>6399248
choco malk

[Anonymous No.6404365]

>>6399248
Lads I started learning to draw so I can make my own degen fetish art and I've got to say I'm having even more fun than I thought.

[Anonymous No.6404620]

Figuring out how to color genitals. They're weird.

[Anonymous No.6404659]

>>6403913
Thanks. I get a few compliments about my faces whenever I post here so I made an inspo chart of artists I like who draw cute girls. I tried emulating their art, not to say that I'm successful but my, style such as it is, is a result of trying to draw like th8jddms
em.

[Anonymous No.6404662]

>>6404659
also one more lewd post because i like her faces

[Anonymous No.6404925]

Midner

[Anonymous No.6405095]

>>6404925
that's your best brush work yet, love the way you did the grass and the trunk (idk if it's a trunk) - and I just checked the filename but thought I'd leave this in because it doesn't read as a wolf , it's a better texture for grass than fur if that makes sense. but think about this: the texture looks better on those non-focal parts than it does on the hair and helmet, which are part of the focal part but look plasticky. the helmet would have small scratches, patches of hard edges where it was hammered into shape, and the hair does not read as hair at all, and that bit at the top looks unfinished. time for some hair studies, look at some inspo. if you care, I dont wanna be enforcing my own subjective priorities on you
>>6404662
love your style, looks like you get your results super quickly and effectively, the lines aren't clinically clean and have some life to them, and you still get this very appealing style, especially the faces yeah. do you have a twatter?
>>6404620
good studies, idk what else to say, keep at it
>>6404365
great to hear. it's not my cup of tea but you're having fun with it. study artists of a similar, cartoony style and copy their anatomy shapes, some of yours are looking a little amateurish; the legs-knee-thigh area, the breasts look incomplete, the head a bit too small. nice expression and colours on the face, very appealing
>>6403984
the fuck you mean, I hereby promote you to poster
>>6404186
alright, put some more work in, this looks rushed and careless
>>6403932
yeah nice tanlines, simple lines, nice hands, the gesture looks a bit awkward. yeah good. nothing else to it, post animations.

[Anonymous No.6405106]

>>6405095
>the fuck you mean
i’ve given up anon, upper management at /ic/ determined i’m just ngmi. i’ll sit around and look at everyone’s nice gmi drawings until i’m fired

[Anonymous No.6405126]

>>6405106
I don't trust any of the management here to make any rational rather than emotional choices but I also don't want any limp-dicked employees that seem so defeated for no apparent reason; I ask this with all the respect for your wishes as possible: do you even want to be here anon? to be drawing ass and tiddies and the odd depraved fetish? is it time to move into greener, cleaner pastures?

[Anonymous No.6405148]

>>6405126
there’s not even any cleaner pastures for me to go to at this point anon, i’m putting the pen down and i’m going to the slaughterhouse instead. i’m tired of this cycle of fooling myself that i’m gmi and i never do. i wish i could draw all the somewhat creepy dick and ass nobody else will but i guess i am just too much a limp dicked jobber employee after all

[Anonymous No.6405155]

>>6405148
not them but if youre giving up anyways could i at least see something youve drawn?

[Anonymous No.6405162]

>>6405095
Yeah hair is my weakpoint, but ill keep it. Its hard to paint strands (like irl) without it being too clashing to the rest of the pic
I had a lot of fun painting the wolf despite not knowing what I was doing, though

[Anonymous No.6405185]

>>6403984
>>6405106
>>6405106
>>6405126
I feel ya anon. /ic/ unironically hates anime inspired artwork. Americans are only interested In futa. It's easier to promote my safe for work accounts anyways. No sense in drawing porn if faggots are just going to block me anyways. I've been stuck at 42 followers and I think they've passed away from old age. The captcha gets tiring after awhile. Expecting anybody from asg or salt to replybwith something funny. But get no reactions from anybody in return. The new thing is a.i because some people simply don't care about who draws the picture. Most popular artist ignore people anyways. It's only natural that this would happen.

[Anonymous No.6405193]

>>6405162
When you post a picture on Twitter. Make sure to delete the previous picture that has a small error. When save the pictures I get duplicates because of that. And I don't like how every single picture is a different separate post too. I like to switch back and forth when comparing alts. I'm your numba 1 fan. You also need to retweet more.

[Anonymous No.6405199]

>>6405162
that pic I posted was a bad example for your artstyle, it doesn't and shouldn't have so much detail, but I think if you were to use the exact same techniques but with a different brush you'd get a better (imo) result than using the hard round bush, because then you're edges look rounded and bubbly which doesn't suit hair, while a simple, textured brush can do most if not all the work for you. on another note, having every "clump" of hair" of the same size with little variation can also look a bit plasticky, it's good to use the small/medium/large rule and have some variation of the shape itself too
>>6405148
you never 'make it' and I wish we would globally understand what the books and films and biographies have taught us, you don't strive for a singular goal and sit there waiting for death, you develop a steady pattern of habits that you like and struggle with some purpose as a reward, and wait for death. if you're struggling but feeling like you have no tangible purpose or realistic goal you will of course lose motivation. if your goals were to make stuff you like and improve on what you made yesterday you could be winning every day, but if you choose to compete for likes or fame or money then you're leaving it too much to chance. what do you want?

[Anonymous No.6405203]

>>6405199
Nta. But all that I want is the money desu. I need money to buy stuff. And in return I can buy more art stuff. Like a drawing tablet.

[Anonymous No.6405206]

>>6405203
yeah fine, that's a realistic goal too. what's stopping you? not to sound condescending but the "how do I get commissions" or "more followers" conversation has been had plenty of times here with some good answers, it's usually a mental block or lack of confidence. it does suck to go about this weird niche business without any real life people to motivate or give us advice, or to even feel like we're part of something (and that's why I try to post here more often because it's all we have) but even without that extra push you can get that money to buy stuff. also a good tablet can be bought for really cheap, I still use my bamboo and a better one can be bought for about £30

[Anonymous No.6405230]

>>6405206
Alright. But you just wouldn't understand my situation because you're not me. For starters I mostly get ignored. And the people that commission me don't go above 10$. It's just not worth it. I'm out.

[Anonymous No.6405243]

>>6405230
you might get ignored because of this very vague, open-ended posting. it's hard to help someone who asks for help and then doesn't elaborate on their situation besides "I get ignored". by who? the thread? twitter? so do most of us. advertise to people who go above $10 then. you probably put out a commissions sheet saying you do full figures for $10 because you were desperate and now those same followers and return customers don't expect to pay more, is that surprising? I am trying to help/bounce ideas around with you and I understand the doomposting I'm tempted to do sometimes too but it doesn't take us anywhere

[Anonymous No.6405250]

>>6405155
it’s nothing amazing and it’s unfinished but here’s something from last thread >>6386032
>>6405185
you might be onto something anon
>>6405199
i don’t even really want much, just a following of a hundred or two. knowing my stuff is worth paying money for would be nice too but it’s not my overall goal. i draw what i like but i guess that’s just not good enough.
i’m not even sure a steady pattern matters much though. i follow artists on insta who post pretty randomly: a few times one month, once another month and/or not at all for months with zero/one or two tags yet, they always rack in consistent numbers. not anything more than 40 likes average, sure, but it’s better than my average of 10 with tags

[Anonymous No.6405283]

>>6399248
thoughts? too busy? too shit?

[Anonymous No.6405744]

done with this

[Anonymous No.6405891]

>>6405095
>>6404662
thanks! I don't have much time to draw so I started taking cues from busy artists who just draw quick sketches like these to get their on paper rather than work on one polished piece over weeks in between their professional work. Hope to polish a little more and make my lines a bit cleaner while still keeping them to under an 1 hour, 2 at the most for more elaborate stuff.

My twitter is full of gore and high impact sexual violence :<

[Anonymous No.6405918]

>>6405891
im a whore for gore

[Anonymous No.6405934]

>>6405891
Would you get janitor sweeped if you sent your twitter?
>>6405283
mushroom dick, cum's OK i guess. Whats going on in the ... knee area? are those his socks? .. idk his dick looks gross :(
>>6405162
i really like the colors here ^__^ i enjoy the painterly style>>6405744
love the shading

[Anonymous No.6405939]

Progress on this. Tell me what you think.
I'd like some advice on how to draw hair. I want to like drawing it, but I always struggle anyways.
Also, I know the small one's face here doesn't make sense of the anatomy. You can feel free to redline it, i don't mind. I made the choice to make his face that way - why? idk.. Because I didnt want to draw his face again :P the armor was already hard for me here. I'd rather improve on the face at another time. But feel free to chew me out for it anyways lol

[Anonymous No.6405967]

>>6405939
apologies if I'm misjudging you here but it doesn't sound like you want objective crit or that you're that concerned with making changes to this, you already got crit for that same pic you already posted and didn't bother replying so I don't wanna bother either
>>6405891
very cute, simple and expressive, subject matter looks a little dicey so I appreciate the blurring. would love to see a fully finished piece although your sketches already have a lot of people
>>6405891
green haired chick on the top left looks a little disproportionate to the main pose. maybe it's a specific character trait but the definition being solely on the abs looks weird, either like it should be softened or the rest of the body matched in definition. but it's easy to nitpick when the rest of it looks near-enough professional, it's an interesting composition, great rendering, the hair shapes are really nicely done, expressive hands, cute expressions best toaster here 10/10 would follow again
>>6405283
props for putting in the work and making it so detailed. it looks a bit scruffy, there is a lot going on and it's a bit busy but if this was the last panel of big build-up it could work. not sure whether to recommend re-working this with better construction (her torso looks to be in the wrong perspective and just floating there, I can't 'understand' how it's connected to her bottom half) and cleaner linework or just starting another piece and calling this one done. I'd say start another, focus on getting a good base first and then add details after.

[Anonymous No.6405980]

>>6405918
>>6405934
Alright I'll post but if any drama happens on my account because of this I'm blaming you two specifically https://twitter.com/Ratsandworms_
Literally do not click if you're not into guro it's all I post these days.

>>6405967
Thanks! I try to keep mind that people don't like non-con and sexual violence. But I also kind of want people other than guro degenerates seeing my work because I'd like an audience that at least can find artistic merit or give better feedback.

I will polish up a piece in this style some day but since I doubt I'll ever be able to support myself with art alone I will only be able to draw now and then in the foreseeable and I'd rather get all my ideas saved as a CSP file than just try to polish one really good piece. Then down the line if I ever finally get to spend more than a day on an illustration I'll be spoilt for choice on what to polish c:

Here's a soft consensual lewd I did though, I think vampire love bites can't be too extreme

[Anonymous No.6406060]

>>6405967
There's more to the drawing than just the face and the cock, bruv
nothing about the body? the lines? I'm going to color this too, and paint over it. Forgive me if i sound debilitated but its fuckin 4chan , most often i get called a downy, a fag, autistic, and a woman and then some crit on the lines
I did say i wanted crit on the hair, too?

to sum it up: im keeping the value thing in mind for the coloring stage,and I'm stating that the face is something I'm not going to fix in this one but I appreciate any criticism on it anyways. I'll probably use the advice in the future

[Anonymous No.6406156]

Finally forced myself to finish this. Can I get a critique? Also how do I improve my abysmal construction method https://streamable.com/u5b0lq

[Anonymous No.6406221]

>>6406156
there's no construction there just lines being placed and then corrected, which can work once you're more experienced but for complicated pov shots I'd use it, personally. if you want to use construction study the masters, study some vilppu, it's basically drawing boxes and spheres and eggs for ribcages and yogurt pots for pelvises, and then to draw them in perspective which adds to the difficulty.
as for everything else: the expression is kinda there but everything is so plain and simplified, the head is practically a circle, the ass and legs are two lines, there's just not much form or shapeliness to it. add some more 'randomness' to the hair, draw some ears on her. and the background seems kinda silly, if anything it should be inverted so she's leaving a drop shadow on a white floor rather than a white glow in a black void

[Anonymous No.6406234]

>>6406221
Thanks for the suggestions especially the construction references. I also really struggle with faces and hair so I’m probably going to have to do some really dedicated practice for that.

[Anonymous No.6406316]

>>6399248
Commission I'm working on

[Anonymous No.6406364]

>>6406316
It took a while to realize who you were. You're usually in the furfag containment thread. As always, garbage. I think you should refund whoever commissioned this cause it's one thing to just be a shitty artist but it's another to sc someone out of their money because they don't have good enough judgement to not buy your art.

[Anonymous No.6406370]

>>6406156
It looks like shit. There's your critique.

[Anonymous No.6406462]

>>6406364
Sure. You're right.

[Anonymous No.6406472]

>>6406364
pyw. you won’t because it’s garbage and your only outlet is crabbing every single salt thread to cope over your own lack of skill.

[Anonymous No.6406505]

>>6405939
Killer lineart but it's kinda hard to read rn. Maybe when you lay the shadows it will be easier

>>6406364
Holy shit ultra crab, pyw dummy

[Anonymous No.6406509]

>>6406316
hard to read, is the part to her right meant to be a close up/x-ray?

[Anonymous No.6406545]

>>6406509
Sure. Why not.

[Anonymous No.6406556]

>>6406370
Why do you do this in every thread? Nobody would care if you at least bothered to explain why something looks like shit. Be useful for once or gtfo

[Anonymous No.6406583]

Wip crits welcome

[Anonymous No.6406640]

Any tips on how to draw lace lingerie?

[Anonymous No.6406647]

>>6406370
Thanks for the tip

[Anonymous No.6406652]

>>6405939
Will he be saved? !!!!!!!!!

[Anonymous No.6406722]

>>6399277
>>6399275
>>6399273
Is this an mlp character?

[Anonymous No.6406848]

>>6406652
Nope he's going to get prolapse after this <3

[Anonymous No.6406889]

>>6406583
I like it, very soulful

[Anonymous No.6406926]

>>6406583
Is this several pieces of paper stuck together?

[Anonymous No.6407135]

>>6406505
>>6400963
Here's some value changes.

I'm not happy with the colors. There's some drawing on the right side to shwo what i was going for with the colors, and after a lot of editing and coloring again.. i still don't think i grasped the colors.
Still not done btw. I just want to get a feel for the colors that I want to do before doing some rough painting over.

[Anonymous No.6407292]

>>6405199
Ill keep at it. Gets especially hard when the hair is some weird abstraction like pic related im working on

[Anonymous No.6407316]

>>6407292
Draw something Japanese. I'm tired of those characters.

[Anonymous No.6407620]

Looking to see if I can improve in appeal with the anatomy and inking

[Anonymous No.6407662]

>>6406926

yes :v

cardstock, i initially started with the bunch of girls, then used dollar store spray adhesive to "expand the canvas" much akin to what you do digitally. just spray part of the piece you want to attach and attach as carefully as you can, trying to get the most space without comprimising the illusion its all one scene.

Also the image had to be scanned four times and arranged because my scanner bed wasn't big enough. This is what the picture looks like irl

[Anonymous No.6407666]

>>6407662
y tho? no digital? I guess this is ok, just is pretty obvious that it is pasted on sorry to say.

[Anonymous No.6408288]

>>6407666

Nice trips SATAN

no im not trying to hide that fact, i was planning on digitizing it at some point i guess my digital art always comes out janky idk i just dont have the patience for a stabilizer and have kind of a shaky grip thats obvious in digital and i guess its just easier to hide in traditional >>

[Anonymous No.6408373]

>>6407662
>>6408288

is this the same artist? Ok ur art is actually good in digital. I just thought for a sec that you were saying that the paper doesn't look pasted on. If this process works for you I'm not judging.

[Anonymous No.6408547]

>>6407620
Very cute style! Do you have any more?

[RM No.6408739]

I'm gonna risk it and ask:
What can I do to improve on his "hair" and should I continue with this?

[Anonymous No.6408786]

>>6408739
bro.............
well this is thankfully not even sexual art related but it reads like Thomas, and also a bit like Sonic with the spiky hair. you could give him a train driver's cap... idk why I'm replying to this wtf man
only you know if you 'shoud' continue with this god bless

[Anonymous No.6408794]

>>6408739
Needs a flamethrower. Tbh

[RM No.6408800]

>>6408786
If I were to add a train driver cap, I'd have to relocate the chimney stack, probably at the back, where the neck connects to the torso and that would create a new problems with his wardrobe...

In this one, I tried a more simple solution and extended the black band part to look like hair.

[RM No.6408862]

Last one for now, I decided to do away with the chimney, although it looks like he's using a Sonic hood.
Dammit!

[Anonymous No.6408870]

>>6408739
I’m not even upset

[Anonymous No.6408954]

>>6408739
>>6408800
>>6408862
wtf are thomas the tank engine gijinkas doing here in salt? did you mean to go to alt?

[RM No.6408968]

>>6408954
I've never heard of "alt" if this board isn't the place for this type of art, then I'll post somewhere that's more appropriate.

[Anonymous No.6409204]

>>6408968
>>6331844

[Anonymous No.6409238]

>>6408373
>is this the same artist?

yes

>Ok ur art is actually good in digital.

daww thanks ><

>I just thought for a sec that you were saying that the paper doesn't look pasted on.

I'm not trying to hide the fact, it is what it is. I like keeping it somewhat rough in traditional

>If this process works for you I'm not judging.

It's not really my process typically, outside of scanning in traditional works and reworking them digitally.
Pic related was probably the most complex and careful i did a digital work.
The picture with all the glued parts is a /v/ drawthread request actually lol and i just wanted to do something equally good in traditional as digital i suppose.

[Anonymous No.6410546]

>working on comm
>lines, flats, simple shading so far
>send update
>"looks great!"
>spend another three hours working out some nice shading
>first using layer modes then just handpainting it
>starting to look good, really proud
>add a few highlights and send update
>"oh, great! I thought that version was done already
>have you done the cock version yet? the big veiny cock i wanted
>like this ref here (spams multiple pictures of cocks, dick and balls all over my screen)
>this huge veiny cock for my thin feminine donut steel
>you done that yet? put the cock on her?"
I got so invested in the art and the painterly style that I forgot I'm working for these degenerates. I want out man. Or at least not drawing genitals anymore, just wholesome, softcore stuff. It's killing my soul. But I'm worried I'll get even fewer comms. Do I make a new account? Or make an announcement that I'll only draw softer stuff from now?

[Anonymous No.6410552]

>>6410546
I'm the opposite. I have fun drawing stylish genitals.. but it's harder to make a cohesive picture with them.

[Anonymous No.6410565]

>>6410552
I don't mind drawing genitals when they're stylish and proportional and pretty but every god damn comm with genitals involved has to be comically oversized or from a different species altogether I'm done with it, it's so tasteless, it's like American food no subtlety just ungodly amounts of sugar and flavouring and no care for balance. Post your genitals

[Anonymous No.6410566]

>>6399248
Can someone help me unfuck her heels, and anything else that stands out? Please ignore the size smut

[Anonymous No.6410567]

>>6410566
have you looked at how other artists draw heels? Do they look like what you've drawn? Have you looked at reference before vaguely asking us to help you with two pairs of small lines?

[Anonymous No.6410568]

>>6410567
If you’re just going to be a sarcastic prick then just fuck off

[Anonymous No.6410571]

>>6410568
No no I wasn't being sarcastic I was telling you exactly what you needed to hear. That's how you unfuck it, you look at reference and see how the shape is meant to look compared to what you've drawn. I could also say if you're going to be so sensitive don't ask for crit in the first place you insufferable faggot, fuck outta here

[Anonymous No.6410575]

>>6410571
I get it you're trying to be the epic quirky 4chan tough love guy. I’ve looked at references and clearly something is getting lost in translation. Just telling someone to google it bro isn’t a critique it’s just obnoxious

[Anonymous No.6410578]

>>6410575
Post the references I'll help you out

[Anonymous No.6410582]

>>6410578
Sorry I’m not trying to be a dick I’m irritated at how simple it probably is and how much time I spent on it. Threw a bunch of the refs I’ve been using into a collage. I keep getting this weird tube looking thing that’s terrible

[Anonymous No.6410583]

Thanks btw

[Anonymous No.6410584]

>>6402392
yo dis is some fukkin DOPE ass art man

[Anonymous No.6410614]

>>6410566
From what I see is that the eyeline is centered on the ass and heels. That's incorrect and you ca5n have both from what I believe. I hope this helps. I must sleep.

[Anonymous No.6410647]

>>6399248
UUUUAAAAAAA SEEEEEEEEX UAAAAAAAA SEEEEEX my entire existence has truly become SEX

[Anonymous No.6410648]

>>6410647
So this is what being a dickbrain does to your art. I'm glad I avoided this affliction kek.

[Anonymous No.6410656]

>>6410648
you avoided drawing altogether that's why you are not gonna pyw lmao

[Anonymous No.6410759]

>>6410656
Nah, I won't post it because I'm well known and I don't want to ruin my good reputation by coming across as toxic.
Nice try though kek.

[Anonymous No.6410954]

>>6410759
yeah sure, i've used that excuse before, you really have no work to post

[Anonymous No.6410963]

>>6410546
You can only get out when you have enough money to get out. That is how it works. Also make a SFW account where you post nice things to show what you can do.

[Anonymous No.6411150]

>>6410566
the drawn ref you posted is pretty much perfect for your pose/angle so I'd just copy it desu, no shame in that and as long as you're not tracing it you'll be applying your own style to it unconsciously so it won't look out of place. this could also be part of your style so take it with a subjective pinch of salt but the pelvis looks a little too low down and/or the legs too short.

[Anonymous No.6411165]

>>6411150
Yeah at this point may as well just to finish, lessons learned I guess. I also promise it's not the style, I'm still trying to learn how to draw better proportions but I'll keep that in mind for the next one. Thanks for the help

[Anonymous No.6411237]

>>6410954
Keep seething. It's a delicious snack.

[Anonymous No.6412273]

wip. any crits?

[Anonymous No.6413191]

>>6412273
I can critically confirm this looks like a wip
nice dynamic perspective, expressive face. nothing else to say for now

[Anonymous No.6413238]

>>6412273
here's my attempt, tough angle without a ref
try to get more overlap to sell the perspective

[Anonymous No.6413382]

https://www.twitter.com/_Milkshot

[Anonymous No.6413995]

some loose lines and flats for the render road ahead

[Anonymous No.6414000]

How long does it take you to finish a drawing

[Anonymous No.6414055]

>>6414000
3 months

[Anonymous No.6414194]

Alien dinosaurs about to get some dark meat.

[Anonymous No.6414204]

>>6414194
Slimebro wtf

[Anonymous No.6414213]

>>6414204
At least it wasn’t another ss x anthro drawing! Been doing too many of those lately.

[Anonymous No.6414225]

>>6414194
its funny and creative keep doin you babe

[Anonymous No.6414244]

>>6414194
Slimebro what artists do you follow, and what inspires the themes in your work?

[Anonymous No.6414371]

[Anonymous No.6414440]

[Anonymous No.6414442]

>>6414440

[Anonymous No.6414465]

>>6414440
>>6414442
my fucking dick

[Anonymous No.6414619]

>>6414244
On hentai foundry I follow disarten, au, and Ben Morbez. I like damsel in distress stuff, like pulp magazine covers from the 60’s and 70’s.

[Anonymous No.6414666]

>>6414440
How long did it take you to get good like that?

[Anonymous No.6414670]

>>6414440
How does an ass almost kill someone?

[Anonymous No.6414992]

>>6399248
Muh Oc
>>6405095
Thanks for the crit. I tried taking more time

[Anonymous No.6415122]

>>6400848
To be honest man, I dont even understand whats goin on in your pic, its really unreadable
Where does the random hand with the sword come from? Is it her arm? really doesnt look like its part of her body

[Anonymous No.6415278]

>>6414465
lmao I'm happy to hear
>>6414666
thanks anon, I'm flattered. I've been drawing seriously since 2010,when I was 16. So yeah, took me a while. I think maturing as a person is super important.So really, only when I was around 22, I really started focusing on art as if it were a blue colar job.

>>6414670
I can't spoil it, but that's why I'm writing a short story!
I'll just say a big ass is very heavy

[Anonymous No.6415550]

wanna copy sparrow artstyle
how do make good highlight 4 skin?
how to render skin good?
help me ic bros

[Anonymous No.6416212]

>>6415550
>how do make good highlight 4 skin?
>how to render skin good?
By not copying sparrow.

[Anonymous No.6416311]

>>6416212
criticism not very constructive
what do if not that?

want same art style not realisti shading

[Anonymous No.6416474]

>>6416311
You talk like the green guy from the Bionicle movie

[Anonymous No.6416615]

I’m not going to be able to draw for a while. My iPad uploaded my kinky art to the family iCloud account and my mom saw them so she’s taken away my iPad.

[Anonymous No.6416695]

>>6416615
Amazing, post it here we're family too

[Anonymous No.6416732]

>>6416474
english not first language mine

[Anonymous No.6416871]

>>6415550
Rendering is not your biggest issue. Learn your proportions and your landmarks.

[Anonymous No.6416923]

>>6400963
I tried looking for some good artists that draw more chubby women. Thanks for the heads up though, I definitely need to work on that more, the chubbyness of my drawing. I really appreciate it.
>>6406722
No, but thanks for the compliment, though.

[Anonymous No.6416928]

>>6415122
the idea was actually closing your arm and then trying it so that it can't open.(the tentacle wraps around the wrist and armpit so that she can't open it)
I thought about it too but i had no idea how to make it more clear.
At the same time i wanted to make sure she was holding on her sword no matter how bad it got.
If you have any tips i would like to hear them honestly

[Anonymous No.6417003]

>>6416923

[Anonymous No.6417005]

>>6417003

[Anonymous No.6417027]

Might as well post this for some criticism, I do want to learn to do more perspective, such as a upwards facing shot.

[Anonymous No.6417358]

>>6416871
>your landmarks.
what this mean?
know proportion but this i not hear before

[Anonymous No.6417819]

progress

[Anonymous No.6418322]

Are there any notable jap doujin artists who do trad work? I need a way to cope with only working with physical materials

[Anonymous No.6418431]

Does anyone have good sources for drawing mouths? I really like drawing prominent lips but most examples I can find of other artists tend to only do them in neutral/pouty expressions. I keep trying to draw them in embarrassed expressions and really struggle.

[Anonymous No.6418814]

[Anonymous No.6418863]

>>6418814
nice soraka and nice horse cock
the base of the cock seems to be connecting too high up its touching where the abdomen ends

[Anonymous No.6418947]

>>6399248
>me lurking in the threads.

bump

[Anonymous No.6418976]

>mfw client wanted smaller tits

[Anonymous No.6418984]

>>6399248
What happened to mar3 ten
Did they rage quit

[Anonymous No.6419017]

Gemmie

[Anonymous No.6419035]

>>6418976
the nerve of some people, really

[Anonymous No.6419151]

>>6416695

[Anonymous No.6419606]

>>6418984
Many anons stop posting here. Drawings NSFW is just not a viable option anymore for most anons. We have to blame A.I, the Twitter shitstorm. And lack of retweets.

[Anonymous No.6419615]

>>6417819
pretty good but they need more meat on their arms because they look very weird proportion-wise right now.

[Anonymous No.6419632]

>>6414442
The vacuum sealed shirt ruins it. Fabric doesn't stick to breasts like that, it drapes over them and if you want to make it pornier just render the shirt more see-through instead

[Anonymous No.6419738]

>>6419606
>we have to blame everyone else but ourselves
classic /ic/ copium inhaling.

meanwhile,terrible shit like picrel is getting 600 retweets in 15min lmao. Dude has 200K+ Followers and almost 3000 patrons.

literally go learn about business before crying about it.

[Anonymous No.6419865]

>>6419738
>200K followers
>584 likes

[Anonymous No.6419887]

>>6419865
>584 likes
>in 16 fucking minutes

damn, you really are fucking retarded

[Anonymous No.6420082]

>>6419887
>In 16 fucking minutes
>200K INSTANT followers

[Anonymous No.6420086]

>>6419738
>Ptreon

[Anonymous No.6420455]

How do I draw good-looking piss?
Give me some references.
Everything I try seems flat and uninspired or like "gooey-looking".
I want to make my commissioner happy but I don't know what I'm doing.

[Anonymous No.6420826]

Experimenting with color from grayscale on an old sketch, I have no real idea what I'm doing but I figured I'd post it

[Anonymous No.6420828]

>>6420826
here's the grayscale version

[Anonymous No.6421888]

I haven't drawn in months Q.Q

[Anonymous No.6421909]

3 pic comm of Bea and Melony from Pokemon wrestling I finished today. Just got another 3 pic comm for the same characters from new client who seems to want to see more of the match

[Anonymous No.6421985]

>>6419738
My pride presents me from begging for retweets.

[Anonymous No.6422203]

>>6400052
Is this anne frank? anon did you draw anne frank pooping?

[Anonymous No.6422566]

Did a speed figure with a ref. Can someone point out the flaws for improvement

[Anonymous No.6422654]

>>6422566
instead of doing speed figures you should be doing accurate figures

[Anonymous No.6422700]

>>6422654
Jeez that shit huh

[Anonymous No.6422721]

>>6422700
nta but it's just too simple and quick for us to give you any viable feedback. there's no definition to anything and looks as plain as can be. give us your goals and maybe a sheet of 5-6 figure studies and we can help. it's a little lazy to spend about 5 minutes on something and then ask for some vague advice "for improvement". put effort into your work, we'll put effort into the crits. and always mention what you want specific crits on. for your figures; do anatomy studies and ways to make them more interesting than blobs. study foreshortening with overlapping lines, do quick gesture studies alongside the more developed anatomy studies so you can learn to counterbalance your poses, add rhythm, make your figures more interesting.

[Anonymous No.6422736]

Drawing horny orc lady

[Anonymous No.6422832]

>>6422721
Idk I guess my thought process was just try to mimic the shape. The reference pose is what it is. I'll admit it's not the most exciting but getting anything even closely approximating to this in a reasonable amount of time is an achievement for me. although I did have to improvise everything that wasn't her ass so my lack of ability certainly shows. Just a drill anyway

[Anonymous No.6422844]

>>6422832
Jfc just kys retard

[Anonymous No.6422928]

>>6422832
if you want to improve your figures, do studies of full figures in good lighting, plenty of reference/websites for out there, do some gesture drawings like I mentioned etc, but if you wanted to make a full piece out of this I'd still find a better reference with the full body and not an awkwardly cropped picture of a beautiful phat ass, good taste

[Anonymous No.6423110]

>>6422566
Do these things.
>>6422832
>>6422721
Please PLEASE learn fundies. It sucks but you will improve
>>6422844
Also what's with the hostility in these threads lately? people are going to stop posting here if retards keep lashing out like autists. Seriously cut that shit out it's embarrassing as fuck to read.

[Anonymous No.6423414]

>gwenfag hasn't posted
im sad

[Anonymous No.6423633]

[Anonymous No.6423782]

>>6423110
You assholes have been like this forever. It’s your own fault if you were too stupid to notice.

[Anonymous No.6423859]

>>6422736
Looking pretty cool.

[Anonymous No.6423881]

>>6423633
Really cute shapes!
I think the hatching kind of clashes with how emphasis on shapes, might look cleaner if you did simple cell shading instead?
also post blog please?

[Anonymous No.6423921]

>>6400963
>>6399248
Hot character anon, I just enjoy demoness stuff

[Anonymous No.6423998]

[Anonymous No.6424019]

>>6423998
>not a horse cock
otherwise really cute

[Anonymous No.6424021]

>>6424019
i wanted to see how cursed would soraka look without a horse d

[Anonymous No.6424193]

>>6423881
Thanks!
Yeah, I’m trying to make hatching work currently, think I’ve got to try harder to have it gel with my drawings. Study some other artists closely.
Cell shading would for sure have looked better. Oh well, onto the next drawing, I guess.
Blog is https://twitter.com/8hoursjunksleep

[Anonymous No.6424266]

more raka

[Anonymous No.6424268]

>>6424266
better res

[Anonymous No.6424330]

>>6423110
>>6423782
The toxic people in these threads Is probably the only thing that stops me from posting here. At least on discord when an imaginary name is attached to the person they act with a bit more humility.

[Anonymous No.6424384]

>>6424193
thanks, really great stuff

[Anonymous No.6424475]

>>6424330
How about you stop being a pussy assed faggot?

[Anonymous No.6424483]

Asses

[Anonymous No.6424901]

>>6424475
I think you’re the one person itt that manages to embarrass themselves more than the begs that post shitty art. Congrats

[Anonymous No.6425050]

>>6419035
bigger pls

[Anonymous No.6425070]

>>6424483
is this AI?

[Anonymous No.6425097]

>>6425070
Nope

[Anonymous No.6425396]

>>6425070
Not yet

[Anonymous No.6425527]

>>6420828
Progress

[Anonymous No.6425531]

>>6421888
Progress
sorry quoted the wrong post before

Also does the pose look fucked up to you?

[Anonymous No.6425534]

[Anonymous No.6425539]

>>6425534
Wow you're like a pro or something

[Anonymous No.6425566]

How to mangakas do it? How do they put out so much sequential content and keep the quality so high?

Im so burned out and my hand hurts.

[Anonymous No.6425571]

How do I get out of the symbol drawing trap

[Anonymous No.6425574]

>>6425566
If your hand physically hurts, you're not giving yourself enough breaks. Also feel free to not work on whatever you're drawing and work on something else, or watch something, etc if you're feeling burned out (unless it's on a deadline ofc)

I know the whole 'hair covering the guy's face' is a meme in hentai, but you really are losing a good amount of emotion from doing so the eyes/eyebrows are the most expressive parts of the face. Remove all of the silly text and you can easily assume the dude is just bored or some shit, except the middle-center drawing.
>big pointy ratto nose
good shit tho

[Anonymous No.6425598]

>>6425531
I like that pose a lot. The face is nice too. I think the biggest issue in this would be the legs. On my phone so I can't redline but to me they feel like they're missing any sprcific anatomical volume, they're kind of like a bent sausage. Nice feet though

[Anonymous No.6425623]

>>6425566
Don't fuck around with your wrist. That's serious business. Look into ergonomic solutions for what you're doing, how you do it and where it hurts. There's all sort of devices and techniques available that might look dumb and feel awkward at first, but actually work: like that fat-ass grip you put on your stylus for an ergonomic grip, and ergonomic mice that you need to almost re-earn how to use.

Also cute rat. That nose looks too simple at first glance, but it somehow works and looks real cute. At least at this level of general detail.

[Sage No.6425649]

>>6425598
I know exactly what you mean now that you nention it. It's like a solid cylinder all the way through. I can adjust that no problem, thank you

I've been working on drawing more appealing feet even though it's not really my thing. Glad it's paying off

[Anonymous No.6425911]

>>6425531
I love how you draw faces, everything about her expression is gorgeous, and she's got nice shapes going on everywhere
>>6425566
God damn this is great work, do you find sequences of photos to use as reference, is it half reference half imagination? really nice crisp lines. get a wrist brace, or improvise like me and wrap a sock around it. make sure you stretch those tendons and fingers and get into some kinda physical that involves your hands. it's climbing for me. and dead-hanging helps everything from grip strength to the tension in my back

[Anonymous No.6425942]

[Anonymous No.6425963]

>>6425566
Each full body sex pose should take you 30 minutes to an hour to do. Each face reaction should be like 5 to 10 minutes
If your not working that fast your not good enough to draw at mangeka speeds.
Maybe in 2-3 of constant drawing. Speed comes with skill
If you do draw that fast, lol shitty ligamemes lol

[Anonymous No.6425971]

>>6425566
That looks really good what's your process

[Anonymous No.6426047]

>>6425531
and
>>6425566
blogs?

[Anonymous No.6426218]

>>6420455
Try doing studies of some regular water pours and then apply that to what you're trying to do.

[Anonymous No.6426381]

>>6399275
If this *isn't* MLP-shit, do you have a twitter or pixiv?

[Anonymous No.6426515]

I ain’t exactly happy with my skills at expressions, but at least it’s fun to draw these things.

[Anonymous No.6426561]

>>6426515
NOOO NOT MARSHALL VANDRUFF

[Anonymous No.6426604]

[Anonymous No.6426624]

why do the pictures here look so soulless and empty?

[Anonymous No.6426663]

>>6426624
Why do you not pyw?

[Anonymous No.6426670]

>>6426624
>why is the quality in an amateur drawing general so low?
we're really asking the incisive questions now

[Anonymous No.6426790]

>>6425571
Upside down Stravinsky (ie read the sticky)

[Anonymous No.6426817]

Fuck you I quit

[Anonymous No.6426818]

>>6426561
Lmao was not my intention at all but it's hilarious you made that connection.

[Anonymous No.6427072]

rough hard round study
could I get some feedback/redline on the PITTA?
And the upper body in general, ignore the hips for now, that's just roughed in for now

[Anonymous No.6427166]

>>6425574
>>6425623
I tend to procrastinate on my art a lot so when I hit a wind i don't want to stop. The pain isn't so much from my wrist just overall hand and fingers feels cramped. I was more thinking about the burn out factor I got about half way and wanted to work on something else. It started to feel like a real slog and I cant imagine going through it all a few more times to ink and render yet the pros just turn this stuff out week after week.

As for the long bangs covering his face: These characters are from a story im writing, I didn't think at the time how the bangs would abstract his face and ill probably avoid them in the future. Another annoying thing to realize too late is how much the tail gets in the way of nice ass shots.

>>6425623
Thankies, no to the photo sequence and yes to the half and half. I had the idea that I wanted him to rotate her over time and went with it. the stuff in the middle was 100% me and the stuff on the right was just straight up ref copying after I really burned out and wanted to get done.

As for activity that uses my hand i thought it was the opposite, I have been trying to do everything (even mouse using) with my left hand to let it rest.

[Anonymous No.6427186]

>>6425963
The whole thing was 12/13 hours. Which is about 4 hours longer then anything I can usually stand. the whole thing feels like the sketch layer but I just cant spend anymore time.

>>6426047
I quit social media but you can find me posting here on 4chan all the time.

>>6425971
>That looks really good
Thankies, if you like my style and want some critique from me I would be happy to try and help.
>what's your process
I try to visualize, then I draw what I see through a series of loose sketches. Then I set transparency to 15% and draw over it a few times with each iteration looking closer and closer to my ideal. Sometimes it works and sometimes I need to pull up refs. Sometimes that also doesn't work then I just give up and sulk.

[Anonymous No.6427340]

>>6426604
you should probably go look at a goat leg before you try to draw one

[Anonymous No.6427341]

>>6427340
You're right on that one for sure. I never did any nsfw art so stuff like genitals breasts and weird limbs like this I need to study for a bit. Thank you for the pointer.

[Anonymous No.6427342]

>>6426817
You never actually started properly, so it's not a big loss, don't worry too much about it.

[Anonymous No.6427532]

>>6426817
>What your child sees when mommy tells them to eat their vegetables

[Anonymous No.6427661]

[Anonymous No.6427869]

How can I improve this composition? I'm trying to make more of an effort to not leave backgrounds blank

[Anonymous No.6427918]

>>6427661
More.

[Anonymous No.6427926]

>>6427869
It looks decent already, nice and central, triangle composition like what you have there is pretty much the go-to.

Pretty much break the elements of the image down into basic shapes and fit those basic shapes together until it looks "right". Keep rule-of-thirds in mind when placing the shapes compositionally.

[Anonymous No.6427975]

>>6410566
I did this quickly so it's a bit ugly but I think it's because of the line of sight, you should have more "volume" on your shoes.

[Anonymous No.6427986]

>>6426515
i like this, you have some nice soft lines and the the anatomy looks great. blog?

[Anonymous No.6428158]

[Anonymous No.6428375]

>>6427975
Kind of inverted position to show more off? I agree that looks a lot better. Thanks for taking to time to help

[Anonymous No.6428525]

>>6419632
stfu
sick and tired of people like you and I'm not even that anon

[Anonymous No.6428640]

>>6428525
What did he say that was incorrect?

[Anonymous No.6428711]

[Anonymous No.6428796]

>>6428375
No problem. Look there https://previews.123rf.com/images/ghoststone/ghoststone1702/ghoststone170200145/74089217-vue-de-dos-debout-belle-jeune-femme-fille-blonde-en-robe-rouge-et-talons-chaton-regarder-arri%C3%A8re-col.jpg

The line of sight is above the shoes this is why the heel of the shoe goes behind the shoe. Even if the line of sight was close to the ground you would still see the heels like this.

[Anonymous No.6429006]

[Anonymous No.6429008]

>>6428796

[Anonymous No.6429011]

[Anonymous No.6429498]

reference used
is line thickness gud?
crits / tips
also how color skin gut?

[Anonymous No.6429545]

>>6428640
matter of opinion, but I like the “boob pocket” aesthetic. This is the sexual alt thread, the purpose is porn and aesthetic over realism. It looks good as it is, the artist changing it to fit anon’s interests to be closer to that in his misrepresentative pic isn’t going to be beneficial except to make the image less pornographic. its equivalent to saying “no woman wears her panties that tight to show camel toe like that!” its not meant to be realistic in the first place, especially in a god damn porn thread

[Anonymous No.6429584]

>>6429545
>the purpose is porn and aesthetic over realism.
This, too many artists fall for this trap. If the art is too good I can even coom

[Anonymous No.6429607]

>>6401706
find an artist you like and steal their coloring
>>6404620
hide them with a black bar or mosaic problem solved
>>6406156
>>6429498
draw from real life
>>6427869
fill the background with women or men or women and men

[Anonymous No.6429662]

>>6427869
a day late so you probably already moved on but I would have done it liek this.

[Anonymous No.6430040]

>>6429662
Caught it just in time, thank you. I think it looks better, less cramped

[Anonymous No.6430136]

[Anonymous No.6430141]

>>6429545
>the purpose is porn and aesthetic over realism
based and moe pilled
some people like 30 inch dicks guzzling bucketloads of cum. others like nasty girls making inhumanly sadistic faces. if the best you can do is reality drop the pencil and go grab a camera

[Anonymous No.6430213]

>>6430136
take it to /lsg/ pedonigger

[Anonymous No.6430370]

[Anonymous No.6430377]

>>6430370
I like this a lot. Great gesture and I love the aesthetic of the 1px (or whatever) brush

[Anonymous No.6430379]

>>6430377
Thanks! I usually work with a soft medium sized brush, so doing the lineart like this was quite a challenge.

[Anonymous No.6430491]

[Anonymous No.6430521]

>>6401259
maybe it sucked

[Anonymous No.6430553]

>>6425566
This is really cute

[Anonymous No.6430743]

[Anonymous No.6430766]

>>6429662
>>6430040
Based, Both.

[Anonymous No.6431053]

[Anonymous No.6431450]

[Anonymous No.6431461]

>>6431450

[Anonymous No.6431558]

>>6424901
Sorry you’re a baby who can’t handle any criticism.

[Anonymous No.6431605]

>>6430213
STFU FAGGOT

[Anonymous No.6431805]

>>6431461
there is a lot about this thats really nice and a lot thats really bad what the fuck?

[Anonymous No.6432545]

Drawing more lineart. Trying a different way of doing eyes.

[Anonymous No.6432547]

>>6431461
This is pretty cool rendering.

[Anonymous No.6432551]

>>6430040
I love this! I've been enjoying checking out your back catalogue and that's not some sort of pun.

[Anonymous No.6432553]

think I copied the reference too closely, at least with her body.

[Anonymous No.6432556]

>>6432553
Is she on like a dumpling or something?

[Anonymous No.6432557]

>>6432556
you mean the orange thing? It's supposed to be a blanket

[Anonymous No.6432558]

>>6432557
Think it's time to brush up on some drapery then anon

[Anonymous No.6432562]

>>6425531
Yes, the turning of the waist to the bottom area. I don't have reference but I'm pretty sure the body can't do that, you'd have to modify the angle ot the torso and maybe add something else like her legs resting on a bed or something like that to justify it, but it's mainly on how you can see her butt cheeks on all its planes when holding that pose, in reality you'd see half of that round shape, that obviously alters the angles of the leg as well, and so does it's pose, and don't confuse it with perspective, you being higher on the camera doesn't mean you'd see it all, this is a anatomical problem mainly, it's a good idea to do a few thumbnails for these kind of poses before jumping into a final, it's not necessarily too difficult of a pose, but it'll save you time later.
Also, her face is really good, lots of personality in it.

[Anonymous No.6432571]

>>6432553
This one would look good with a light/shadow area, right now it's fully in shadow, add some light source maybe on her face and it'll pop out more, but looking it closer it seems it had a light source, but it's not clear and looks like shadow, always make the disctintion so you don't get your halftones or reflected lights mixed up, otherwise you'll image will become flat.

[Anonymous No.6432590]

>>6432553
I used levels on the image, just to adjust the values a bit, didn't go too far but you could squeeze out the light and shadow difference more if you wanted, it messes with the saturation and colors though, using the color balance menu helps too, I'd advice checking a tutorial about it because you can actually fiddle with some color ranges using the hand icon and sampling from the image directly.
I added a simple gradient to frame it, it's a cheap trick, but obviously you could do more than this and your actual piece would require some previous planing and careful value/color choice before jumping into color blending or layer adjustments, it helps but it won't do the job for you.

[Anonymous No.6432610]

>>6432590
>>6432571
idk why it came out so dark when I posted it here. It doesn't look that way in the other places I posted it. Lemme try again

[Anonymous No.6432622]

>>6432610
Still looks dark, maybe you need to check your screen adjustments, perhaps it's adjusted too light, making you choose darker colors. The other option is that you didn't export it for web, go to file>export>export as, then check the convert to SRGB option (bottom right in the color space bracket).
Remember you can inspect your file and in color space it should say SRGB (sometimes doesn't, no idea why, but as long as it doesn't look wrong on web...).

[Anonymous No.6432624]

>>6432622
I tried exporting it as a jpeg instead. I don't wanna post it too much though so I'm not spamming the thread with it so if it doesn't work here I'm just gonna give up

[Anonymous No.6432626]

>>6432624
now it's too bright and saturated

[Anonymous No.6432631]

>>6432626
Try this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X8nYJnCMn-0&ab_channel=PhotoshopTutorialsbyLayerLife
Let me know if it worked out for you.

[jubilo !4ZIk2IeNng No.6432691]

>>6432624
not to be a big debbie downer but this is hyper-focusing on the "finishing" touches to a piece like saturation and levels control when originally you mentioned copying the reference too closely, which is sort of the step 1 of starting your pieces. as much as this stuff you're currently discussing is really important, would you want to post your reference so maybe we can help you make it more appealing? like with the shapes used, some asymmetry, making the cloth more believable etc

[Anonymous No.6432749]

>>6432691
ignore the name I used to shitpost

[Anonymous No.6432982]

>>6432691
I was at work so late reply but this is the reference I used for my drawing.

[Anonymous No.6432989]

>>6432691
also I can post a link to the deviantart where I posted that drawing. The colors actually look normal on the website compared to here.

[Anonymous No.6432992]

>>6432982
>>6432624
lmfao adding the blanket to avoid drawing hands

[Anonymous No.6432997]

>>6432992
lol yeah, I'm super terrible at drawing hands so I just try to avoid them

[Anonymous No.6433015]

>>6432997
That way you never get better.
You improve every time you fail
I highly suggest doing dedicated hand studies.

[Anonymous No.6433025]

>>6433015
I probably should but right now I’m just looking for critique on her head and body

[Anonymous No.6433167]

>>6432624
>>6432982
>>6432989
the angled, super colourful background is disorienting, make it horizontal and at eye level, it also doesn't help you've lowered her ass compared to the ref, it looks more like it's a downward pov of looking at her leaning on your legs. the blanket is so awkwardly placed and rendered, I only know it is one because you said so, even if you're scared of drawing hands you can get away with just drawing simple, cartoony wedges to fit the rest of the pic. the face is really cute.
i said it before here and most of it applies to this too; >>6422721. this is too low-effort and simple to warrant any further crits. if you really want practice and viable crits on your figures and heads, draw up lots of them so repeated mistakes can be pointed out and improved on, not 4x copies of the same pic with saturation adjustments

[Anonymous No.6433186]

>>6433167
I wasn't trying to post the same pic over and over, 4chan just made the colors all wrong for some reason. When I posted it on pixiv and deviantart the colors looked normal. I tried to export the drawing and change the file type to see if it would fix the issue but it doesn't seem like it did, that's the reason I posted it over and over again.

[Anonymous No.6433257]

>>6433186
okay thanks for addressing the last part of my post only lol, post some figure studies in future not just one finished piece that you posted already anyway. no negativity intended, just trying to make sure you don't fall for the same trap I and other artists did starting out; getting too precious about one piece and making very minimal progress instead of making way bigger gains by 'failing a lot' and making sheet/canvas full of studies instead

[Anonymous No.6433277]

>>6433257
I actually had her butt higher but I thought it too high at first so I lowered it

I thought I did her body okay enough, the issue I had with it was that I felt that it looked too much like an anime girls face on a real body and as I said before that I over-referenced >>6432982
instead actually making it into its own thing

I did put effort into it, if I didn't care I wouldnt've finished it. I guess I was looking for a different kind of critique here. I was mostly interested in hearing about how her body and face looked

[Anonymous No.6433315]

>i was looking for crits on the body and face
>the butt could be lowered as it skews the perspective on the rest of the body
>i think the butt is fine
>the body is too simple
>i think the body is okay enough
>i was looking for a different kind of critique. about her body and face.
the last 20 posts itt have been a total waste of time tbqhwyf

>>6432545
arms look a little too short. that bit of her dress above the armband part isn't "wrapping" around the torso well, I'd even get rid of it and show more of her back to emphasise the foreshortening. the linework is satisfyingly crisp as ever

>>6431461
that face is something, looks like an unflattering caricature, I guess it's intentional. cute rendering. that hand looks beefy as all hell. rendering is simple and effective.

>>6431053
>horsecock futa
not my thing but works as a quick sketch I suppose. very dramatic lighting.

[Anonymous No.6433328]

>>6433315
>i think the butt is fine
I didn't say that, I said I actually had it higher at first but then I lowered it because I was worried it was too high. Pic related is the sketch I started out with. Shows the position her butt was at

>i think the body is okay enough
I explained my issue with the way I did her body. that I over-referenced it and didn't stylize it enough.

I guess I just expected a different critique besides that her body is too simple

[Anonymous No.6433388]

>>6433328
Not much of it is visible idk what else you want to hear bro.

[Anonymous No.6433431]

>>6433388
I’m not sure what you mean by visible

[Anonymous No.6433451]

>>6433328
oh yeah post it again man!!! post it again so we can all obsess over this subpar fucking attempt at copying reference!! no hands bro!! sick!! the whole body you want "critiques" on is just arms , balloon tits and 1/3 of her lower body, what else could we realistically help you on? what does it matter if you've already posted?
what kinda critique did you want? and be specific because we've asked three times and you just say "different..." different how? do you want it to look like a specific artist? more realistic? more cartoony? this is problem number 1 with asking for critique, don't be vague. we've already explained the foreshortening and perspective is off, there is no gesture because it's completely boring and symmetrical, the anatomy is oversimplified. we've covered most of the fundamental basics and you're still posting the same damn pic with no elaboration just "I guess I just.. well I guess... sigh, ugh.. you know, I just..." fucking hellfire man we can't decide what you want for you. it's borderline spam. you've got more attention than everyone else combined, for 1/10 of the effort put in. don't get butthurt to be told that, yes although there is some effort involved, it's not the best attempt at appeal. draw it again, draw more, draw 20 figures, draw 10 gesture drawings, go and fucking improve instead of clinging onto this piece latching onto "b--bbut it's okay e-enough!!"
yes, mad, suck my entire ass.

[Anonymous No.6434411]

>>6432997
bad news, you're terrible at drawing blankets, too

[Anonymous No.6434413]

Haven’t drawn anything in several months now, and it’s good to be drawing again. This is something I’m working on, figured I’d be even more encouraged to draw if I shared it online.

[Anonymous No.6434417]

>>6420826
>>6420828
>>6427072
>>6429011
g-guys... hello...

[Anonymous No.6434418]

Working on this. I want to get out of my comfort zone and make nice backgrounds.

[Anonymous No.6434421]

>>6434413
is that a dog dick or a long foreskin? Kind of looks like tin man's hat
>>6434418
I think gravity should be pulling the booba straight down if they're that big. The sketch you have above her seems more accurate.

[Anonymous No.6434428]

>>6434421
Well, it’s a monster’s dick. I’ll have to change that if you think it looks like something else.

[Anonymous No.6434441]

>>6434428
No, it works as a monster dick. Maybe some spikes or horns or weird coloring would sell that a little better

[Anonymous No.6434450]

>>6434441
Good advice, anon! Thanks!

[Anonymous No.6434454]

>>6434421
Does this look better?

[Anonymous No.6434476]

>>6431558
Tell you what I’ll post mine after you post yours

[Anonymous No.6434981]

>>6434417
Hi, anon. You’re doing great!

[Anonymous No.6435007]

>>6434417
hi anon. look at your posts from an outside perspective. you posted something, apparently with a very wishy-washy "meh, guess I'll post this... here it is..." with no further elaboration on what you're trying to emulate or what specific things you want critiques on.
it looks okay. it's a greyscale-colour study. there's not much sexual tension in a figure just stood there already completely naked
>>6427072
the "pitta" are 4 lines sketched in, assumingly from reference. we don't know what you're trying to achieve. you conveyed the 3d form of the upper torso nicely, though again there's low effort in completing it on the other side.
if you put low effort into your studies and posts, don't expect much effort from other anons in trying to help. sorry.

[Anonymous No.6435076]

>>6435007
Which posts itt are yours?

[Anonymous No.6435272]

>>6435076
a handful

[Anonymous No.6435780]

New bread ----->

>>6435776
>>6435776
>>6435776
>>6435776

[Anonymous No.6435819]

>>6433315
Thanks anon, I'll have a go at fixing it.