/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.6387143]

how do i improve. pic is one of my later drawings. i’ll put some other old ones in thread.

[Anonymous No.6387145]

[Anonymous No.6387147]

[Anonymous No.6387154]

[Anonymous No.6387168]

>>6387143
see a doctor for the parkinsons. early treatment might help.

[Anonymous No.6387170]

>>6387143
What exactly are you looking on improving? Who are some artists you look up to?

[Anonymous No.6387187]

>>6387168
sounds like envy bro.
>>6387170
yeah, pretty big question which is kinda why i’m here lol. off the top of my head, anatomy, faces, composition, proportions, design (?) ,very vague i know.
i like a lot of concept artists and illustrators. these drawings i posted i had in mind like Richard Lyons who did Uncharted 4 work and stuff

[Anonymous No.6387189]

>>6387145
>>6387147
learn face anatomy. your faces are shit.

[Anonymous No.6387199]

>>6387189
interesting take

[Anonymous No.6387203]

>>6387199
It's not a take faggot. Now go open a book.

[Anonymous No.6387207]

>>6387187
Ok I see. Well first I suggest 1:1 copying some of his pieces you like. Since you're looking for general improvement then drawing on the right side of the brain, loomis and Vilppu drawing manual is good foundation. His stuff looks a bit rigid to me so if that's what you really want maybe stick with loomis.

[Anonymous No.6387210]

>>6387203
very interesting. can you draw faces? especially ones with likeness to irl people. can i get some pointers or something you overzealous nigger ?

[Anonymous No.6387214]

>>6387207
aight

[Anonymous No.6387215]

flat as fuck, add values

[Anonymous No.6387223]

>>6387215
nope. that’s gay and cringe and i’m not jumping into color yet. i’m not done with what i’m doing rn

[Anonymous No.6387226]

>>6387210
>can you draw faces?
Yes I can.
>can i get some pointers
There's nothing I could teach that loomis/reilly/huston/vilppu couldn't.

[Anonymous No.6387229]

>>6387226
i somehow don’t believe you. maybe pick a book? lmao

[Anonymous No.6387250]

>>6387229
I'll try to redline your faces when I have some time.

[Anonymous No.6387258]

>>6387250
look over your busy schedule for me bro

[Anonymous No.6387276]

there, now go sell it on etsy

[Anonymous No.6387364]

>>6387276
lmfao you put a filter on it and a red box with half opacity. wow. avant- guard and beautiful

[Anonymous No.6387395]

>>6387143
Do longer more precise lines. Work on your line weight.

[Anonymous No.6387400]

>>6387364
not him, but hehehe niggger, pyw

[Anonymous No.6387402]

>>6387395
aight cool
>>6387400
that is my work you dumb bitch

[Anonymous No.6387440]

>>6387143
Draw we your guns in more difficult perspectives, pussy

[Anonymous No.6387448]

>>6387440
did and done post your work pussy you probably suck balls

[Anonymous No.6387459]

>>6387448
You're 4-months kun, aren't you? I recognize the same strategy of pretending to be a beginner and hiding your true drawing skills by making your lines and forms scribbly, but I can tell you can actually draw well.

[Anonymous No.6387487]

>>6387448
why not add some shading and value to it.

[Anonymous No.6387493]

>>6387448
not any of them, but do know that they arenn't wrong

[Anonymous No.6387531]

Full body in action, scenes, colors, closeups of faces, rendering, stories. Depends what direction you want to take it really.
Also if those are from reference make some not from reference.
You're not bad but what you post is always the same so far.
Kinda like anime girl busts.

[Anonymous No.6387545]

>shitty uninteresting floating military torsos
>no color
>scribble lines
>shitty detail
>cries at every valid criticism

i love to see it

[Anonymous No.6387694]

>>6387448
The scale and geometry on that mk16 is fucked. You could start with that, proportions and depth is something you will always find usefull.

[Anonymous No.6387751]

>>6387143
>>6387154
Now draw them as sexy or cute gals and get the big bucks.

thank me lata

[Anonymous No.6387766]

>>6387751
Draw them being injured too

[Anonymous No.6387768]

>>6387766
>>6387751
guns facing perfectly parallel as the camera are so lazy

[Anonymous No.6387776]

>>6387768
Let's see your guns.

[Anonymous No.6387783]

>>6387776
that gun is somehow wonkier than op's

[Anonymous No.6387810]

Mirroring what this anon said. >>6387531
You need to have something going on with the scene otherwise it's just uninteresting torsos. Also pay attention to the proportion of things. In
>>6387143
Your battery cap for the Eotech is fuck huge in comparison to the sight window. It's a little thing, but /k/ommandos are autistic and that type of shit sticks out a lot.
>t. /k/ fag that likes to draw and paint

[Anonymous No.6387902]

>>6387189
I dunno man, I've seen people that look like that, they look pretty human to me

[Anonymous No.6388216]

>>6387776
perspective on the stock and top of the barrel don't match the receiver

[Anonymous No.6388217]

>>6387487
like i said before. not into color and not ready to put the time into learning color. i see a lot of people who suck at drawing go into coloring their shit and it looks gay. >>6387545
huge cope
>>6387751
cringe and gay
>>6387768
no it’s not it’s the best way to show the most interesting parts of the gun faggot

[Anonymous No.6388220]

>>6387694
the scale on the gun is fine it’s just the scale of helmet and nvgs that’s wonk. ive done it right before tho

[Anonymous No.6388224]

>>6388217
Still the poses are boring and flat. If you had an art booth at a convention I might pass by and go "hmm kinda cool lines". But that's all. I wouldn't drop any money on your work. Find some way to sell me your work. People here are giving you ample ideas.

[Anonymous No.6388225]

>>6388224
yeah no i get it. there was a time i’d do more interesting poses. not sure why i stopped. i should get into that more. but also selling art is gay and i’ll never draw for anything to be sold lmao. im a studying architect i’ll probably go into architecture or illustration of concept design/product design

[Anonymous No.6388229]

>>6387364
lmao it actually made it a lot more appealing

[Anonymous No.6388232]

>>6388229
looks like shit lmao

[Anonymous No.6388237]

>>6388217
>value? oh yeah value, that's like colour or something, right?
>wow wow wow you like girls? that's like so gay man, cringe
>no no no, it's not that I can't draw guns in a different angle, I was just showing it off
why are you even here? because it's definitely not for criticism

[Anonymous No.6388242]

>>6388237
lmao mad. i got good criticism already it’s juts not from fags like you that post shitty trace line art and do the same parallel gun shit because you can’t draw. also yeah bro, the values and color in your art really does hide the fact that it sucks. which is exactly why i won’t jump into that like a beginner like you lmao

[Anonymous No.6388244]

>>6388232
very ironic my man! lmao

[Anonymous No.6388245]

>>6388237
just to flex his shitty high beg scribbles let the boy think hes good before going back to getting single digit engagement on social media

[Anonymous No.6388246]

>>6387143
>how do i improve
Study the masters

[Anonymous No.6388247]

>>6388245
it’s shitty high beg and i know i need improvement. so i came to flex. no yeah that makes sense for your 70iq brain huh

[Anonymous No.6388249]

>>6388246
very real. for a moment i was but it’s sort of hard with him since he does everything from scratch anyways. was doing stuff like this though

[Anonymous No.6388251]

>>6388247
yea its cuz nobody claimed you were smart, go ahead grind out more 10 minute sketches of stock photo operators from call of duty loading screens with your nervous marty mcfly forearm spasms.

[Anonymous No.6388253]

>>6388251
lmfao nice save dude. bet you won’t pyw tho cuz u suck

[Anonymous No.6388254]

>>6388253

[Anonymous No.6388255]

>>6388253
i got no problem with comparing my art to yours lmao

[Anonymous No.6388259]

>>6388254
hilarious
>>6388255
lmfaoo yeah dude maybe you should. you need to take like 10 steps back into drawings and leave painting for the big kids

[Anonymous No.6388264]

>>6388259
coming from the spacially challenged child who drew this lol

[Anonymous No.6388268]

>>6388264
belt weight. looks the exact same in the ref picture bozo. but nevermind that, back to your work you felt the need to share. i like how you didn’t bother drawing what’s under the robe so his hands just come from ?????? lmfao

[Anonymous No.6388274]

>>6388268
>i like how you didn’t bother drawing what’s under the robe so his hands just come from ?
hahah hey genius ill give u a clue whats under the robes. his body. fucking retard thats how clothes work LMAO. post your reference u used on that image lemme see how you turned a professional shutterstock photo into a unreadable mess of scribbly public hair

[Anonymous No.6388276]

>>6388274
hahahhaha cope harder. you didn’t bother drawing under the robe and now his hands don’t align with his body haha. now leave coloring to the big boys

[Anonymous No.6388288]

What a trainwreck of a thread and what an unpleasant person to interact with. I regret posting in this shit thread.

[Anonymous No.6388311]

>>6387751
disgusting. I want men in full tactical gear, not sluts with guns

[Anonymous No.6388379]

Best ic thread in ages desu dunning krugers talking shit while posting non meme art has become such a lost artfrom on this board that I actually miss it.

[Anonymous No.6388658]

>>6387751
>prints out
>grabs box of crayons
gonna color the fuck out of her

[Anonymous No.6388789]

>>6388249
late you seriously asking how to improve with drawings like this?
You can’t just look at it and see where you need to improve?

if you said this is just a practice drawing that’s one thing
but you actually need people to point out where to improve on THIS?

FUCKING THIS??

[Anonymous No.6388829]

>>6387143
i think overall your work is fairly competent depictions of people standing around in military gear.
Since you only want to work with graphite, your main concern, in my opinion, would be establishing a sort of visual hierarchy with the values. The way your drawings are now, many small unimportant details are extremely dark compared to the actual figure and especially his face, making basically a set of randomly scattered dark focus points in a mostly detail laden light gray image that make no sense.
As a second point, i'd reommend studying geometrical shapes. At the moment, your lines are sort of where they are supposed to be, but are a bit jumbled (as you probably tried to copy lines, and not forms) and difficult to read as 3D objects.
Something like the upper and lower lines of the belt in your image are best drawn as single coherent lines, with the loops drawn on top afterward. i think this exemplifies really well that you were concerned with copying the lines of each segment between the loops instead of understanding them as parts of the same thing.