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Previous Thread:>>6353674

>Guidelines:
1. [THE MOST IMPORTANT] Don't post too revealing works (especially porn). If you think it's too lewd, post a censored copy here and link to Catbox, Imgur, or any off-site that hosts images for your works. Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. Do not post child photo references, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to this general's PPH (posts per hour/thread activity), please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Do not start or bring any drama in here

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your lolis
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>> No.6385971
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Collab offer from prev thread

Do you wanna do an /lsg/ collab for Black friday?

i was thinking of a loli whorehouse, or a store that sells lolis or robo-lolis and we all draw a different one trying to pursuade the viewer into buying them during the Black Friday sale.
We could do one pic each or do a big-ass pic with all out pics in it.

Anybody interested?

>> No.6385991

>>6385971
no, sounds disgusting

>> No.6386038

>>6385971
I don't think there are enough artists for a collab.

>> No.6386067

>>6385969
default brush?

>> No.6386262

>>6385971
I'll be travelling for the weekend, but if it stays open for long enough, sure I'll add something.

>> No.6386291 [DELETED] 

Careful Vice just dropped a Video exposing you Pedos
>While talking about Lolis and Shota they also talk about below 18 characters in general

>> No.6386303 [DELETED] 

>>6386291
Are you going to at least link to the video?

>> No.6386311 [DELETED] 

>>6386303
Here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=amOjy_4sNTg&t=3

>> No.6386313 [DELETED] 

Ups here lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ky3HqvT3M8E&t=18

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>>6386313
Thanks.
I'm usually no conspiracy theorist but I'm starting to see connections with this and the latest Pixiv controversy.
It's kinda funny how the only people they could find to back up their main premise of the video were a literal tranny and someone who's clearly mentally retarded.

>> No.6386350 [DELETED] 

>>6386335
>Comments off
>Video not available in Japan
>Not uploaded on the JP channel

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>>6386350

I was thinking about this some more and then I wondered why they never mentioned a single statistic in that video.
Turns out there's a very clear reason why, pic related.

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>>6386596
based mutt raping little girls

>> No.6386755

i can try something. Hopefully i don't have to color, not that good at it yet. Any kind of prospective i should aim for?

>> No.6386770

>>6386755
Anything that isn't neutral is good imo, tho for lolis it's probably more fitting if it's slightly from above

>> No.6387209
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reminder that western lolis are trash

>> No.6387408

i dont knkw what to draw, where do i get prompts

>> No.6387409

>>6387408
draw my wife

>> No.6387454
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Can you guys help me out

I'm trying to come up with a good composition for this, is this fine?
I did like a triangle composition (pink) and cut off part of the pics strategically, like the bubble on the top and the mushroom on the right.
I was also thinking of cutting off part of the girl from the frame but i feel ljke her not being cut off adds some contrast.
I also have some issues making her face the bubbles, and not really sure if the legs and perspective is correct, i tried wrapping lines around the form but still it feels off

Any help is appreciated. Thank you

>> No.6387462

>>6387408
second

>> No.6387475
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>>6387209
Shut up faggot

>> No.6387477

>>6387475
>uncanny face
>weird hand gesture
cute feet though

>> No.6387481

>>6387475
Meh.

Alke is the only westoid I know to draw decent lolis.

>> No.6387486

>>6387475
uhh source

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>>6387209
do they

>> No.6387745

>>6387481
diathorn is great also

>> No.6387790

>>6387454
I'm not very good with comps but I fear that the triangular shape may bring attention to the top bubble and or bottom-right mushroom, but it's unclear at this point.
Where is the horizon line?

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I'm new to rendering and are wondering how to make similar rendering like pic related

>> No.6387826

>>6387797
base, shade, blend, fix

>> No.6387855

>>6387797
It seems like purely soft shading, other than very specific parts, like the cast shadow from her hair.
Then hard brush for reflected lights.

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why so dead

>> No.6388260

>>6388256
Nice, inspired by Fkey?

>> No.6388261

>>6388260
No, more like copied from.

>> No.6388266

>>6388261
keep seething retard
>>6388260
Yea, he is my main inspiration

>> No.6388343

>>6388256
nice studies and sketches,
You should try designing one or two original characters in the FKEY style.

>> No.6388355

>>6388256
These look very charming, are you planning to colour them?

>> No.6388665

>>6387730
who is this child?

>> No.6388722

>>6388343
>>6388355
Thank you
Maybe i'll color them some day later

>> No.6388724

>>6388722
The original artist already did that for you.

>> No.6388737

>>6387730
wasn't she from an old Soviet-era movie?

>> No.6388801

>>6388261
Yeah, that's not inspired by, that's straight out aping his style.

>> No.6389006

>>6387486
iDFER

>> No.6389036

>>6388665
Masha
https://youtu.be/xoK5FdP3udw
>>6388737

>> No.6389136

>>6385969
can i have a questions regarding media here ?
mainly what about pixiv did it started nuking artists ?
also what about baraag ? it says error, was it nuked alongside with every artist that was there ?

>> No.6389147

>>6389136
Baraag's infrastructure was getting overwhelmed by twitter refugees so they defederated until their infrastructure gets an upgrade. It's still running but you need a baraag or a pawoo to see anything. Signups won't be back til next year most likely.

>> No.6389197

>>6389147
>It's still running but you need a baraag or a pawoo to see anything.
i have account but it says to type mail and
i think i used 10 minute mail for lurking only and some fake name
but k i trough it was nuked
also what about pixiv ?

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>>6387209
reminder to keep trying, wagmi lolibros

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study

>> No.6389636

>>6389604
kinda reminds me of ono no imoko
are you studying him?

>> No.6389651

>>6389197
>also what about pixiv ?

We don't know. We assume they are gonna make it so that you can't take money in exchange for loli art but they might have a different interpretation than we think that allows loli art but bans the AI CP images that is flooding the site. We will only know when they start enforcing the policies in december.

>> No.6389804

Cute and funny studies

https://files.catbox.moe/tc2hyu.png
https://files.catbox.moe/btnjhr.png

>> No.6390296

>>6389636
I learned some tricks from his art

>> No.6390353

>>6389651
>but bans the AI CP images that is flooding the site
oh God make it happen

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Hmm something is off with the body, proportions? Not stylized enough? Any help?

>> No.6390660

>>6390296
good job, looks pretty good. only thing bothering me are the hands being too small
>>6390487
going by the wireframe, the upper legs are way too long. you need to make them shorter
for loli proportions you'd go for something like 4-5 heads tall and I counted close to six on your drawing

>> No.6390824

>>6389804
oh nice studies...
>pubic hair
nvm

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>>6387730
Yes, they suck and aren't even "lolis" just very poorly drawn ugly children.

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>> No.6391632

yes, freckles again https://files.catbox.moe/muc5jg.png
>>6388256
we're busy shitposting on /sp/ stickies

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>>6391585
colored

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>>6389804
mind sharing your source material? both of these look similar to previous drawings I've seen, namely the chair one

>> No.6391827

>>6391282
Why are you posting photos of my family on 4chan sir?

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>>6391809
>age 18

>> No.6391879

>>6391872
lick my tight pink slit

>> No.6391994

at this point, i have no idea what a loli is

>> No.6392076

>>6391040
why do westerners suck so bad at character design?

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>>6391809
I use sankaku to find refs usually. I don't remember artists, but I found these ones searching loli+uncensored. There's a lot of good stuff there.

>> No.6392283

>>6392280
Oh, yeah, and those are not quite refs btw, more like copy material in this case.

>> No.6392284

>>6392280
>loli+uncensored

Loli+monochrome for fuck sake. I've just woken up, sorry

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wip

>> No.6392645

>>6389604
lost all soul after re-doing the lineart

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>>6392639

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>>6392694
reworked a few things

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i don't know why but when doing proportions from memory, it just looks bad but when i just copy the proportions it looks better.
Why?
I'm pretty sure i got them the same.
left is what i did from my head, middle and right is just copy prportions

>> No.6393622

>>6393477
just count them heads bro

>> No.6393644

>>6393477
This is what happens when you 'just draw'

>> No.6393651

>>6393644
its funny because he didn't "just draw". he listened to every "advice" from /ic/ and now is a permabeg

>> No.6393678

>>6393644
>>6393651
why are you guys so mean?

>> No.6393981

>>6393477
That actually sounds pretty reasonable to me. Alot of what i draw doesn't translate well from my mind really good but i work at it until it looks right. sometimes it takes a while but in the end it often looks really good but far removed from what i originally set out to make

>> No.6394015

>>6393477
Your faces are getting better. Keep it up. At the very least you're not a failed Mammoth copy.

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my current wip

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>>6394053
update

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wip
>>6394053
>>6394097
anon, those are child bearing hips, not child hips. come on
also, right forearm is too short

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>>6394144
you might want to work on the dog because I think that it was a polar bear
thanks for the critique
looking good otherwise anon
here's the colouring I did, gonna study how to colour metal armour a bit before I tackle that.

>> No.6394214

>>6394211
That pouch tho

>> No.6394257

>>6394211
heheh
thanks bro

>> No.6394264

>>6394211
Nice
I like the hips, lolis come in all shapes and sizes

>> No.6395041

https://litter.catbox.moe/g7dk64.jpg
I don't feel like I'm learning anything from this.

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recent wip

>> No.6395372

>>6395355
pls add more soul

>> No.6395401

>>6395372
ok ill try my best anon

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>>6395372

>> No.6395566

>>6395041
I really like the torsos (especially those two limbless ones in the middle), arms and feet maybe need some more work.

>> No.6395583

>>6395041
Decent lolis.

>> No.6395684

>>6391282
Me on the right.

>> No.6395741

can i get critique or what i messed up on?>>6393475

>> No.6395749

>>6393475
you need to draw the toes instead of just blocking out a shape of the foot/shape it better
your colors when you shade look subdued and would benefit from a deeper understanding of colour/ it looks a bit washed out
the hat would have fallen to the ground right now its defying gravity.
your linearts been looking cleaner now a days so thats good

>> No.6396040

>>6395749
thanks anon, ill make notes and study on coloring and toes.

>> No.6396132

Why is open discussion on how to make child porn allowed on this board?

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drew this today

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>>6394211
worked a bit on this one

>> No.6396741

>>6396519
Are you thinking of adding a bg?

>> No.6396855

>>6396741
I'm not decided yet.
I tend to struggle with backgrounds.
but we'll see what happens

>> No.6397166

is webtoons a scam?
where should i host manga I make?

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