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Previous Thread:>>6353674

>Guidelines:
1. [THE MOST IMPORTANT] Don't post too revealing works (especially porn). If you think it's too lewd, post a censored copy here and link to Catbox, Imgur, or any off-site that hosts images for your works. Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. Do not post child photo references, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to this general's PPH (posts per hour/thread activity), please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Do not start or bring any drama in here

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your lolis
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>> No.6385971
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Collab offer from prev thread

Do you wanna do an /lsg/ collab for Black friday?

i was thinking of a loli whorehouse, or a store that sells lolis or robo-lolis and we all draw a different one trying to pursuade the viewer into buying them during the Black Friday sale.
We could do one pic each or do a big-ass pic with all out pics in it.

Anybody interested?

>> No.6385991

>>6385971
no, sounds disgusting

>> No.6386038

>>6385971
I don't think there are enough artists for a collab.

>> No.6386067

>>6385969
default brush?

>> No.6386262

>>6385971
I'll be travelling for the weekend, but if it stays open for long enough, sure I'll add something.

>> No.6386291 [DELETED] 

Careful Vice just dropped a Video exposing you Pedos
>While talking about Lolis and Shota they also talk about below 18 characters in general

>> No.6386303 [DELETED] 

>>6386291
Are you going to at least link to the video?

>> No.6386311 [DELETED] 

>>6386303
Here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=amOjy_4sNTg&t=3

>> No.6386313 [DELETED] 

Ups here lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ky3HqvT3M8E&t=18

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>>6386313
Thanks.
I'm usually no conspiracy theorist but I'm starting to see connections with this and the latest Pixiv controversy.
It's kinda funny how the only people they could find to back up their main premise of the video were a literal tranny and someone who's clearly mentally retarded.

>> No.6386350 [DELETED] 

>>6386335
>Comments off
>Video not available in Japan
>Not uploaded on the JP channel

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>>6386350

I was thinking about this some more and then I wondered why they never mentioned a single statistic in that video.
Turns out there's a very clear reason why, pic related.

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>>6386596
based mutt raping little girls

>> No.6386755

i can try something. Hopefully i don't have to color, not that good at it yet. Any kind of prospective i should aim for?

>> No.6386770

>>6386755
Anything that isn't neutral is good imo, tho for lolis it's probably more fitting if it's slightly from above

>> No.6387209
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reminder that western lolis are trash

>> No.6387408

i dont knkw what to draw, where do i get prompts

>> No.6387409

>>6387408
draw my wife

>> No.6387454
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Can you guys help me out

I'm trying to come up with a good composition for this, is this fine?
I did like a triangle composition (pink) and cut off part of the pics strategically, like the bubble on the top and the mushroom on the right.
I was also thinking of cutting off part of the girl from the frame but i feel ljke her not being cut off adds some contrast.
I also have some issues making her face the bubbles, and not really sure if the legs and perspective is correct, i tried wrapping lines around the form but still it feels off

Any help is appreciated. Thank you

>> No.6387462

>>6387408
second

>> No.6387475
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>>6387209
Shut up faggot

>> No.6387477

>>6387475
>uncanny face
>weird hand gesture
cute feet though

>> No.6387481

>>6387475
Meh.

Alke is the only westoid I know to draw decent lolis.

>> No.6387486

>>6387475
uhh source

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>>6387209
do they

>> No.6387745

>>6387481
diathorn is great also

>> No.6387790

>>6387454
I'm not very good with comps but I fear that the triangular shape may bring attention to the top bubble and or bottom-right mushroom, but it's unclear at this point.
Where is the horizon line?

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I'm new to rendering and are wondering how to make similar rendering like pic related

>> No.6387826

>>6387797
base, shade, blend, fix

>> No.6387855

>>6387797
It seems like purely soft shading, other than very specific parts, like the cast shadow from her hair.
Then hard brush for reflected lights.

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why so dead

>> No.6388260

>>6388256
Nice, inspired by Fkey?

>> No.6388261

>>6388260
No, more like copied from.

>> No.6388266

>>6388261
keep seething retard
>>6388260
Yea, he is my main inspiration

>> No.6388343

>>6388256
nice studies and sketches,
You should try designing one or two original characters in the FKEY style.

>> No.6388355

>>6388256
These look very charming, are you planning to colour them?

>> No.6388665

>>6387730
who is this child?

>> No.6388722

>>6388343
>>6388355
Thank you
Maybe i'll color them some day later

>> No.6388724

>>6388722
The original artist already did that for you.

>> No.6388737

>>6387730
wasn't she from an old Soviet-era movie?

>> No.6388801

>>6388261
Yeah, that's not inspired by, that's straight out aping his style.

>> No.6389006

>>6387486
iDFER

>> No.6389036

>>6388665
Masha
https://youtu.be/xoK5FdP3udw
>>6388737

>> No.6389136

>>6385969
can i have a questions regarding media here ?
mainly what about pixiv did it started nuking artists ?
also what about baraag ? it says error, was it nuked alongside with every artist that was there ?

>> No.6389147

>>6389136
Baraag's infrastructure was getting overwhelmed by twitter refugees so they defederated until their infrastructure gets an upgrade. It's still running but you need a baraag or a pawoo to see anything. Signups won't be back til next year most likely.

>> No.6389197

>>6389147
>It's still running but you need a baraag or a pawoo to see anything.
i have account but it says to type mail and
i think i used 10 minute mail for lurking only and some fake name
but k i trough it was nuked
also what about pixiv ?

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>>6387209
reminder to keep trying, wagmi lolibros

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study

>> No.6389636

>>6389604
kinda reminds me of ono no imoko
are you studying him?

>> No.6389651

>>6389197
>also what about pixiv ?

We don't know. We assume they are gonna make it so that you can't take money in exchange for loli art but they might have a different interpretation than we think that allows loli art but bans the AI CP images that is flooding the site. We will only know when they start enforcing the policies in december.

>> No.6389804

Cute and funny studies

https://files.catbox.moe/tc2hyu.png
https://files.catbox.moe/btnjhr.png

>> No.6390296

>>6389636
I learned some tricks from his art

>> No.6390353

>>6389651
>but bans the AI CP images that is flooding the site
oh God make it happen

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Hmm something is off with the body, proportions? Not stylized enough? Any help?

>> No.6390660

>>6390296
good job, looks pretty good. only thing bothering me are the hands being too small
>>6390487
going by the wireframe, the upper legs are way too long. you need to make them shorter
for loli proportions you'd go for something like 4-5 heads tall and I counted close to six on your drawing

>> No.6390824

>>6389804
oh nice studies...
>pubic hair
nvm

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>>6387730
Yes, they suck and aren't even "lolis" just very poorly drawn ugly children.

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>> No.6391632

yes, freckles again https://files.catbox.moe/muc5jg.png
>>6388256
we're busy shitposting on /sp/ stickies

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>>6391585
colored

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>>6389804
mind sharing your source material? both of these look similar to previous drawings I've seen, namely the chair one

>> No.6391827

>>6391282
Why are you posting photos of my family on 4chan sir?

>> No.6391872
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>>6391809
>age 18

>> No.6391879

>>6391872
lick my tight pink slit

>> No.6391994

at this point, i have no idea what a loli is

>> No.6392076

>>6391040
why do westerners suck so bad at character design?

>> No.6392280
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>>6391809
I use sankaku to find refs usually. I don't remember artists, but I found these ones searching loli+uncensored. There's a lot of good stuff there.

>> No.6392283

>>6392280
Oh, yeah, and those are not quite refs btw, more like copy material in this case.

>> No.6392284

>>6392280
>loli+uncensored

Loli+monochrome for fuck sake. I've just woken up, sorry

>> No.6392639
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wip

>> No.6392645

>>6389604
lost all soul after re-doing the lineart

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>>6392639

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>>6392694
reworked a few things

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i don't know why but when doing proportions from memory, it just looks bad but when i just copy the proportions it looks better.
Why?
I'm pretty sure i got them the same.
left is what i did from my head, middle and right is just copy prportions

>> No.6393622

>>6393477
just count them heads bro

>> No.6393644

>>6393477
This is what happens when you 'just draw'

>> No.6393651

>>6393644
its funny because he didn't "just draw". he listened to every "advice" from /ic/ and now is a permabeg

>> No.6393678

>>6393644
>>6393651
why are you guys so mean?

>> No.6393981

>>6393477
That actually sounds pretty reasonable to me. Alot of what i draw doesn't translate well from my mind really good but i work at it until it looks right. sometimes it takes a while but in the end it often looks really good but far removed from what i originally set out to make

>> No.6394015

>>6393477
Your faces are getting better. Keep it up. At the very least you're not a failed Mammoth copy.

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my current wip

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>>6394053
update

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wip
>>6394053
>>6394097
anon, those are child bearing hips, not child hips. come on
also, right forearm is too short

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>>6394144
you might want to work on the dog because I think that it was a polar bear
thanks for the critique
looking good otherwise anon
here's the colouring I did, gonna study how to colour metal armour a bit before I tackle that.

>> No.6394214

>>6394211
That pouch tho

>> No.6394257

>>6394211
heheh
thanks bro

>> No.6394264

>>6394211
Nice
I like the hips, lolis come in all shapes and sizes

>> No.6395041

https://litter.catbox.moe/g7dk64.jpg
I don't feel like I'm learning anything from this.

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recent wip

>> No.6395372

>>6395355
pls add more soul

>> No.6395401

>>6395372
ok ill try my best anon

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>>6395372

>> No.6395566

>>6395041
I really like the torsos (especially those two limbless ones in the middle), arms and feet maybe need some more work.

>> No.6395583

>>6395041
Decent lolis.

>> No.6395684

>>6391282
Me on the right.

>> No.6395741

can i get critique or what i messed up on?>>6393475

>> No.6395749

>>6393475
you need to draw the toes instead of just blocking out a shape of the foot/shape it better
your colors when you shade look subdued and would benefit from a deeper understanding of colour/ it looks a bit washed out
the hat would have fallen to the ground right now its defying gravity.
your linearts been looking cleaner now a days so thats good

>> No.6396040

>>6395749
thanks anon, ill make notes and study on coloring and toes.

>> No.6396132

Why is open discussion on how to make child porn allowed on this board?

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drew this today

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>>6394211
worked a bit on this one

>> No.6396741

>>6396519
Are you thinking of adding a bg?

>> No.6396855

>>6396741
I'm not decided yet.
I tend to struggle with backgrounds.
but we'll see what happens

>> No.6397166

is webtoons a scam?
where should i host manga I make?

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How's this?

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wip but looking for any crit
i'm thinking of turning the outfit into two pieces. the top and the skirt piece.

>> No.6398418

>>6398412
I feel like you draw the same 3 poses all the time. Leg and ass on the right is too far out.

>> No.6398430

>>6398412
Like the big smile, long flowy hair and the pose looks like shes having fun

>> No.6398434
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>>6398412
Personally would prefer shorter and slender legs.
Main problem is the balance, you need to determine your ground and gravity so when you draw characters they won't look like they're about to fall.
Pose could still work just depends on composition.

>> No.6398442

>>6398434
hmmm. to me it looks like shes having fun at the beach and then turned around and looked at the viewer as she was frolicking. Like catching a playful moment mid-action. but that's just my thoughts probably. Though i like your thoughts aswell
Also what's the redline background area? it looks kinda neat

>> No.6398451

>>6398442
>mid-action
That was my first thought, like running and looking back at the viewer, but we go back to the balance thing, you don't run with toes first.
always try to reenact your poses, helps you se if it's awkward or not.
>redline background
it's a truck.

>> No.6398463

>>6398451
LOL. seriously thought it was something else.
I thought the bumper was a circular table, the tire was a table leg, the license plate in the center was some paper lying on the table or something, the thing above was a modern light fixture, and the car lights was just some offscreen stuff. basically a room

>> No.6398472

>>6398463
Holy shit now I see the table, wtf.

>> No.6398476

>>6398413
>i'm thinking of turning the outfit into two pieces. the top and the skirt piece
Worry about these later, we have a more pressing problem, she looks adult.
Well ok, lolis comes in different forms not sure what age range you were going for but this looks post pubescent to me.
Try browsing loli artists and see what body type you like.

>> No.6398507

>>6398476
gatekeeping bullshit
sage

>> No.6398552

>>6398451
>it's a truck.
kek

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>>6398476
ah i see. I can fix that later today. For some odd reason my last 5 lolis have ran into similar issues. Strange features of how i would normally draw are showing up, especially that i like to draw tall. This one was just the right combo for being harder for me to tell.

So then how about this one? Just in case i'm making the same mistake.

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>>6398476
ah i see. I can fix that later today. For some odd reason my last 5 lolis have ran into similar issues. Strange features of how i would normally draw are showing up, especially that i like to draw tall. That one was just the right combo for being harder for me to tell.

So then how about this one? Just in case i'm making the same mistake. also a wip

>> No.6398616

>>6398603
It's pretty good. anatomy, posture, proportions, you have a really good grasp of it, the issue is still the same. Forget all the things you learned on how to draw adult women, they're not the same creatures.

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Better?
>>6398418
I moved her right ass and leg a bit in, what are the 3 poses in question? I usually try to play with the angle a bit, but not for this one.
>>6398430
Thanks
>>6398434
Yeah she's supposed to be running away, and turning to look at the viewer.
>truck
She'd be fine, the truck wouldn't.

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triying

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>> No.6399649

>>6399409
It's good, but her right arm seems weird.
Her upper arm is too long isn't it?
>>6399560
Cute, there's something strange about the girl on the right's feet. I guess it's just a rough sketch in the end.

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YUG is so under-appreciated
guy been drawing beautiful girls for 20 years yet not famous

>> No.6400967

>>6399649
Sank you
It's just my way of putting feet in perspective is exaggerating it's form a bit

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>> No.6401611

Can you guys help me,.
I have an xp-pen 12, it a smaller end screen tablet and when i draw i don't know how much i should zoom in and what brush size to use, sometimes i end up goig to 600% other times 80%. My pen is too thick at times and other times way too thin.
How do i know what to do?

>> No.6401944

anybody know this copy pasta?
https://vt.tiktok.com/ZS88j8KBW/

cunny love is cunny life
one day i hope for a cunny wife
as i arise in the morning i gaze upon my cunny wife yawning
with eyes like dazzling gems and gems 10/10
all i know is all is well in life when i have myself a cunny wife

i think igave some of it wrong

>> No.6401949

>>6401944
cringe bro

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>>6402027

>> No.6402113

>>6402094
I don't get it, doesn't the eye brow kinda curve around the forehead and isn't straight?

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>>6402113
just look at the mirror or at references
imo your brows are wierd and stop putting further eye in perspective

>> No.6402128

>>6402125
right thanks

>> No.6402130

>>6385969
How do you start with this stuff? Do you just think of a character, draw it, repeat and get more risque gradually and keep doing that until you get good?

>> No.6402136

>>6402130
First fap to your favorite loli artist 's work. While you're beating it observe what makes your dick happy or brings a bit more blood down there, it likely has a reason for that. Like this pose is hot, that angle is nice.
Then just trace/copy that shit down and try to make it your own, make notes in order to cement it in.

>> No.6402142

>>6402136
Can I do it without beating off? I remember hearing Shadman say nofap makes your horny art better.
But solid advice anon. I remember telling myself to be more analytical with the media I consume, but I just forgot it again along the way.

>> No.6402149

>>6402142
I recommend fapping to naked bare cunny. You could do it post nut with some clarity but you may not find it appealing anymore and prefer to do something else that's not related to naked kids.
Might as well use your fap time for drawing too..

Observe what your favorite artist does to make the hair look like that, the eyes so cute, the tummy so errotic. Trace that shit, if you copy you may get shit wrong or think it's a certain way but be way off.
Trace it and make notes, make notes good enough to do it on your own, try doing it on your own and compare.

/asg/ recommends doing this as well as some other artists.
Copy pros until you become one.

>> No.6402241

>>6402149
Got it, thanks anon.

>> No.6402247

>>6402241
Fapping aside I got the idea to save stuff I want to copy and make the filename a reminder for what I like specifically and want to replicate in an image

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piisu piisu

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>>6394144
fucking gave up on this. wanted to do some lantern lighting but it's way more than I can chew
I will only go for simpler compositions for a while. tired of dropping my projects due to my own lack of skill
hope this one is easy enough

>> No.6403090

>>6403088
Shame... imo it looked like it had a ton of potential.
>tired of dropping my projects due to my own lack of skill
Same.
As for your pic, to me she feels a bit rigid.
If she's supporting her body weight on her hands her shoulders should be higher, closer to her head, I think.

>> No.6403093

>>6403088
finishing your project, failing and reviewing will let you get higher faster than not finishing them

>> No.6403119

>>6403090
thanks, that shouldn't be too hard to fix
>>6403093
I need some presentable pieces to make a blog. it was my new year's resolution
I know I'm supposed to push beyond my comfort zone but I feel I'm skipping too many steps at this rate

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Again, trying to get more into backgrounds and such.
Anything? And which one looks better? I'm leaning for 3rd.

>> No.6403240

>>6403216
i like 2, i feel like playing with the contrast and hues helps it more.
3 feels a bit too much like its blue only with not as much value and not much variety in the hues used.
The purple in 2 adds some red, pink an blue to it and brings out the city, they way you've done it make it look like you've added some blue too.
That said you dont want too many colors as it can ruin a piece. I feel like 2 is a right amount.

That said you could be trying to bring out the girl by making the back blend together and give the girl some ascent color when you do render her.
Or could make the girl bluer when you render her in order to make her fit in to the background in 3 and make it all moody-night-like.

>> No.6403242

>>6403240
>>6403216
also if you do use 2 add some value, 3 has a good amount but could always use some to make stuff pop

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>>6403240
>3 feels a bit too much like its blue only with not as much value and not much variety in the hues used.
I wanted to give it a more relaxing tone, like this.
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=7838103
That's why I'm heavily leaning towards 3.
And yeah, I need to make her stand out more. I could do some cheap tricks like blurring the background.

>> No.6403264

>>6403243
Yep do that but also maybe add some more value to buildings or something
The pic you showed used a lot of value near the left bottom and some to the right.

>> No.6403265

>>6403264
>The pic you showed used a lot of value near the left bottom and some to the right.
Yes but the buildings occupy most of the background. If I give it more value it will increase the contrast of it, making Alice stand out even less, no?

>> No.6403290

>>6403265
you could play around and make some buildings darker than others like what your example did and make things on the edge of the canvas more darker to bring out the centre more

>> No.6403340

>>6403216
bg is too noisy. compress your value ranges. the bg itself looks like clip-art and the perspective is all messed up. use more reference if you have no idea what you're doing. if I were you i'd scrap the bg instead of trying to fix it.
>>6403243
here far bg, near bg, character and foreground have distinct value ranges. it's not as noisy as your picture because the bg is rather blurry in comparison to the character.

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>>6403340
forgot image.

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Thoughts on this and where to get it?

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>>6403389
i got one

somebody a few threads ago told me and i got one

Its pretty decent and easy to pose.
You can take pics and use perspective and anatomy knowledge make that into something
I got another before from some chink amazon brand and it was deformed and hard to set up.
Couldn't get a refund as that took too long to get to me.
I'd recommend a good one like this.

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>> No.6403632

>>6403389
Why pay when the little girls on the street are free?

>> No.6403746

>>6403603
She has 4 finders on her left hand.
I don't like the way her chin and neck are look, personally.
That roundness on the chin just doesn't work very well imo. But I guess that's more of a personal take than a critique.

>> No.6403805

>>6391585
hair perspective is off and I can tell you're drawing the face first and then the sape of the head. I'd suggest you work on that a little

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>>6403805
how's this?
thanks for pointing that out for me

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>>6403341
>>6403340
I'm not gonna redo the bg at this point, I think I improved the perspective and also lowered the building and toned down the value range with the lights as you suggested, and kept a bit of red in the middle like the other anon said.
Also added some light to make her pop out more.
Maybe my biggest concern now is if I'm picking the right colour for her skin under this light.

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>>6404271
way blue imo

>> No.6404451

>>6403389
I got fake Chinese ones in the past, I also have a few legit figma figures of characters I like. Never got any real use of either and I'm not sure I want to pose it and trace over it but it's an option.
I imagine it can be useful if you always have it on your desk and always play around with it, to get your mind to immerse more and more in the forms/shapes of the body.

>where to get it?
I would make sure to order from Amiami or any 100% certified Japanese seller to avoid bootlegs.

>> No.6404452

>>6404271
looks good

>> No.6404461

>>6403542
>>6404451
Thanks bros

>> No.6404534 [DELETED] 

https://discord.gg/4MMYNDw2ss
lolibros wanted
wokefaggots not

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>>6404534

>> No.6404549

>>6404534
Don't click, unironic server with law breaking content in General.

>> No.6404608

>>6403603
left thigh is a little too short when compared to the right. arms as well feel very awkward, not sure what it is about it, I think they might be too short as well, I don't like that they're both held up, maybe having one hand down would look better? Head shape could use a little work too, her ear is too close to her eye, but I think that's not a major problem since it's anime

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Not normally into loli but this request was pretty cute

>> No.6404793

>>6404718
Pretty cute, maybe tone down the waist to hips ratio a bit since it makes her look like a short flattie more than a loli imo.

>> No.6404806

>>6404718
Good proportions for someone who supposedly doesn't enjoy loli I would say, but I agree with >>6404793

>> No.6404829

>>6404718
That's not a loli body

>> No.6404844

>>6404718
Thanks for the tip, the person I'm making this for probably will prefer narrower hips, they are deep into loli

>> No.6406604

dead general

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>> No.6406731

>>6406702
>2. Do not post child photo references, legal or otherwise.

>> No.6406864

>>6401944
would you date a 24 year old if her bmi was low and she got frequently mistaken for a 16 year old
hahaha asking for a friend

>> No.6406873

>>6406702
this is so cute, i love how they made her smile that much

>> No.6406937

>>6406864
Did you post this on the wrong thread? it has nothing to do with lolis. Loli is not a synonym for underage girl, in case you didn't know

>> No.6406940

>>6406702
Why even be an artist anymore

>> No.6407049

>>6406731
It's so cute though!
It's not sexual or anything.
Just a father and his daughter being made into anime.
On a side note.
How does one determine how many heads tall a 7 year old would be in anime form?
I feel like theres only like 3 types baby, 5 year old and 10 year old.

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i have question about
>>6406702

Do you normally show under the chin?
it doesnt look that cute and i see many artist not include it even if the angle would have it

>> No.6407226

a single Arab schizo is drawing more than this entire general kek

>> No.6407229

>>6407226
Excuse me, but who are you talking about?

>> No.6407306

>>6407061
I try to avoid it because it always look weird when I do it

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>>6407061
I think a good artist can show under the chin and make it look nice enough see picrel

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>>6407061
>>6407338
Personally this is how I would approach this angle. I know many anime-style artists try to hide this difficult shape, but even if you want to "cheat" this way, you need to know how the jaw would normally curve

>> No.6407383

>>6407061
You don't show under the chin unless you are looking at it. You show the shadow that the chin casts to give the illusion that its there.

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