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Previous Thread:>>6346238

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4. Do not start or bring any drama in here

>General Resources

>Specific Resources

>Drapery to clothe your lolis

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A

>> No.6353785

the night chilean mong stole /lsg/'s spirit

>> No.6353822

what happened to the last thread

>> No.6353825
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How's this so far?
I wanna give it a background in the future

>> No.6353923

I like the composition that you have come up with in this drawing. However, I think that the girl in the background on the left is positioned a bit too far away for her partners. That aloofness suits the demeanor conveyed by her expression and posture, but it's harder for the viewer to appreciate the details when she is so small in relation to the rest of the picture.

Therefore, my suggestion is that you bring her slightly closer to the other girls, just enough for the viewer to be able to see her face more clearly, without having the need to zoom in on the drawing.

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>> No.6354001

make the left girl smaller or further away to sell the composition better

>> No.6354026

>Yes Lolita, No Touch!!

>> No.6354055

why do so many artists, that I absolutely know is a spic/flip/slav/nonhumans IRL, try so hard to LARP as a honorary aryan in twitter? from using nipspeak in profiles and comments etc.
shitposty tone but this is a genuine query.

>> No.6354067

also maybe try some overlap so they all kinda blend together, first two close to the camera are great but unless the third is the mc or special, she looks a bit lonely

>> No.6354149

whats the point if the threads will just be deleted at random?

>> No.6354166

How else are you supposed to make your favorite Comic LO artists follow you on social media?

>> No.6354404

Honorary aryans are those who aren't aryan but push for aryan beliefs and societies
You don't larp as one you basically align with aryans or you don't
As I see it aryans need all the help they can get

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>> No.6354564

"shut up, spic", "dumb esl", etc.

>> No.6354854
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Update, once again I'm trying to get deeper into backgrounds and such.
I'll see what to do here, I could make the girl smaller and also separate the other two so that she doesn't stand out as left alone, but I do wanna keep some overlapping.

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Can I ask for some criticism, please? do you think the head is too big? is there anything you don't like about this drawing?

>> No.6354969

I think the head is fine. Her right eye seems a bit bigger than the left, and her right foot seems to not follow the same angle as the leg, like it's awkwardly twisted inwards.
Pretty cute tho

>> No.6354988

Oh... I have not noticed that, my fault.
Thank you very much anon I appreciate all your help. Then it's time to fix those eyes and foot.

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>> No.6355276

What. What the fuck is this? Some OC from doki doki panic or what?

>> No.6355282

A early design of peach from mario

>> No.6355461
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Couple of pumpkinspicelatte studies


>> No.6355536
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It's good, but I think the eyes look strange

>> No.6355564

Yeah, always struggle with faces

>> No.6355569

To be fair, pumpkin's faces are kinda weird, but he makes them work.

>> No.6355919

why don't you just cut the middleman and study Mochi instead?

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>> No.6356034

She is cute, I like the perspective.

>> No.6356053

Sank you anon

>> No.6356059

It's cute. I think her ear is placed a bit too high, like it's connected to her head by the forehead or something.

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io wearing that stupid outfit from the other thread
>made more studies in the past month than I did the entire year
GMI, I kneel

>> No.6356263

Who's Mochi anyway?


Ty, anon. Hope so.

>> No.6356268

>Who's Mochi anyway?
An artist.

>> No.6356270

Looks pretty nice overall. I still have trouble dealing with the contrast between anime and realism, like the neck's thickness.
I think maybe her abs on the bellybutton area are too defined. And maybe her hand could be more femenine.

>> No.6356272

He's the guy PSL is imitating.

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Idk, looks quite mediocre to me. Maybe this guy contributed a lot for the lolicon, but I'm a newfag, I love haguhagu, muk, alke, pumpkinspicelatte, syamonabe and pastime much more.

>> No.6356302

Obviously you get to decide who to study from, but if you are going for something like puimpkin's style I do think it makes sense to take a look at his stuff.

>> No.6356304

He doesn't really do illustrations like pumpkin. He's more of a manga guy like haguhagu and he's god tier at that.

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thank. yeah probably went overboard with the belly button. I keep trying to achieve that sculpted look white datura gives his girls
about the hands it's gotta be due to the redpills from the OP image. never would I know I'm supposed to draw the hands bigger

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Where does the light come from? I feel like it would make more sense for the other side of the abdomen to be shaded if the light comes somewhat from above.
Anyway, here's my "take" on it, it's fine if you discard it, this isn't my style but I do find defined anatomy interesting.

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No, you didn't over do it. It looks weird because it's not well executed. Group your values and work on the edges. Also what >>6356337 said. The shadow looks inverted. Pick a light source or two and make sure it's consistent. It doesn't have to be accurate.

>> No.6356351

Also the clothes are flat as hell.

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>> No.6356631
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an attempt. i am not much of an artist though, but these were my thoughts...

>> No.6356637

fucking awesome

>> No.6356817
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>Idk, looks quite mediocre to me
I'll admit that many of mochi's color illustrations have ugly colors and values but he's extremely strong at line drawing/perspective and his manga from the last 5 years are excellent refs

>> No.6356822

How do I imitate mochi without looking like a psl ripoff?

>> No.6356832

did you remember your mastodon pass yet?

>> No.6356949

Imitate one of the PSL clones instead. Nobody will know.

>> No.6357168

does the boxed vagoo method apply for lolis as well or nah?

>> No.6357217

these look great yeah, thanks a lot. I'll rework it with those in mind
so you anons think the light source isn't clear enough? I thought the highlights on the face plus the rimlight would suffice to give it away, but it's supposed to be coming from the top-right
>i am not much of an artist though
what do you mean, that's a pretty sexy hand. thanks for the revision

>> No.6357293

You need to group your shadow shapes more. If you want to add detail in a light area, you can paint slightly darker, but don't use the values you used in the shadow area. This is key to clarity. If it still doesn't click try cell shading more, without blending.

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Can you give me some criticism on this , there's something about it that just feels off to me.

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I think her ear is too high. And I would realign things a little bit.

>> No.6357447

thanks anon !

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>> No.6357748

love the style

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>> No.6358147
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Here is drawing that made everyone mad

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Gaze direction doesn't feel quite right and Eyebrows.

>> No.6358345

My pics get deleted in minutes for much less

>> No.6358440

i've been wasting time

>> No.6358444
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This tutorial led me to research about ikabara and, while I do find it cute, gasatroptosis is terrifying, do children have stomachs like that?
Do men in their thirties who develop bellies have that? Is it reversible despite how deformed it looks in these pics?

I didn't intend things to go down this path...

>> No.6358478

oddly not half as terrifying as milk teeth

>> No.6358530
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whenever someone draws lolis with those bulging bellies, this is what they're likely actually getting off to.
Not kinkshaming by the way, fetishes comes in all forms and shapes after all.

>> No.6358563

>le generic loli artstyle
is good mate but next time try to do something other million loli artists hasn't

>> No.6358565

oh hi they unbanned you

>> No.6358598

pyw, 'mate'

>> No.6358647

no ref doodle

>> No.6358650

Anatomy is lacking a bit.
Look at her left hand and wrist for example.
There is also some perspective issues. The feet and the shoulders are drawn in different perspectives.

>> No.6358664

anything else, like the proportions or the head? also thanks.

>> No.6358710

The potbellies (ikabara) you see in loli art are because of "younger persons" having weaker abdominal muscles. Japanese people see it as a sign of youthfulness and tend to depict it a lot.

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>> No.6359020

Man I love your stuff.
I think the top-left girl's scalp should be a tad higher.

>> No.6359025

I meant calf muscle, sorry.

>> No.6359033

Thank you
Yeah maybe you are right
It's the whole lower body part gives me headache and i still trying to figure how to make it look apealing to myself

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I forgot.

>> No.6359444

Don't wanna create a new one? That'd be cool, y'know all we have on boorus etc. are either with some context behind it or are request deliveries, a place where you just casually upload drawings would be epic

>> No.6359470

Is that it? I thought there'd be something esoteric or (more) practical

>> No.6359799

any better?

>> No.6360878
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Sketches from flatdesign and some haguhagu hyper angle studies


>> No.6360884

Sup, Splooge. Nice work.

>> No.6360900

And some studies from other artists, like Alke and someone else


>> No.6360902

source on the first one? Well drawn btw

>> No.6360926

Ty, that's Alke (alkemanubis)

>> No.6361231

Damn good, I love the 4th one

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>> No.6361377

Interesting style.
I think her right arm is super long tho.

>> No.6361378
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Had a try at drawing Illya, does it look any good?

>> No.6361383

i'm just doing whatever after copying yoshinari and morpho

>> No.6361400

Honest question. Is loli and shota just other words for pedo?

>> No.6361403

She would appear to have no neck, maybe because her left shoulder is so high. And her left arm is very thin.

>> No.6361405

idealized pedo

>> No.6361409

No. Look at your ref again and try to copy it properly.

>> No.6361506
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I've added in flander, how dose it look ?

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I finished this.

>> No.6362128

your rendering has the soul but be careful with the amount of white on the eyes, especially between the eyeball and upper eyelid. could be intentional but flandre's got them crazy eyes
I feel her right foot is out of perspective and the inside of the right sleeve shouldn't be visible. personally I'd also use shadow shapes to define the knees instead of solid lines
pretty cute nonetheless

>> No.6363195

It's cute, tho the hands, mainly her right hand, look lazy.

>> No.6363662

anyone know some good loli/todd artist to use as reference?

>> No.6363664

Depends a lot of what style you are going after.
I think Healthyman is really good, and there's plenty of stuff of him online.

>> No.6363675

I was looking for him but I didn't remember his name, ty

>> No.6363714


Check out artists mentioned in this post, mb u'll love some of them.

>> No.6363722

I will do it, ty

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damn forgot to post this last weekend
never planned to apply this much effort to a meme drawing but hope it looks better

>> No.6363945

Yeah, looks much better now. This render kinda reminds of ra or white datura

>> No.6364166
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hi hello can i have yours feedback on a nsfw loli comic i made https://exhentai.org/g/2364187/3a3a2c486e/

>> No.6364181
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test wip

>> No.6364387

Good effort but the anatomy is still too janky for a hentai, since it's where anatomy either makes it or breaks it. The torso especially needs attention because the way you're drawing the waist reads like a man's torso as in the angle between the rib muscles and the lower torso is too acute.
Maybe you're going for a specific artstyle but I don't think you should define the chest muscles with thick lines like that either. I like how Ponsuke does torsos, for instance https://exhentai.org/s/9a69e21c1f/2081513-119

>> No.6364604

that's good to hear cause he's one of my aspirations, among a few others
now to replicate the process on my tens of WIPs

>> No.6364682

general resources is down

>> No.6365240

Far more productive than everyone in here.

>> No.6365288

loli comes from the 1955 russian novel lolita
shota comes from the 50s mecha manga tetsujin 28 from its kid protagonist shotaro
both words are slang for little girl + little boy now

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>> No.6365603

are there prompts?

>> No.6366016

Considering most lolicons literally hate pedos no

>> No.6366034

Eh, those people are just fronting to save their reputations.

>> No.6366041

under how many layers of irony do you need to be to believe this kek

>> No.6366047

"Lolicons" who are obsessed about constantly proving to everyone how much they totally completely just hate pedos usually have more to hide than the ones who don't give a fuck

>> No.6366052

>t. assmad pedos

Get the fuck out of our thread, you're not welcome in the community

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loli general? in my /ic/? more likely than you think.

Here's a Miku

>> No.6366140

sekksu nahida
I just started genshin a bit over a week ago and have been too addicated to genshin to draw or do anyrlthing else.
wish i could stop

>> No.6366148

At least you are still able to enjoy games

>> No.6366157

If you like it, AND are willing to spend money on it, do it on the bp. The grind will make you go crazy later on.

>> No.6366161 [DELETED] 

It's a cutesy word for pedophile just like every other cutesy word pedophile that gives thrown about.

>> No.6366162

It's a cutesy word for pedophile just like every other cutesy word for pedophile that gets thrown about.

>> No.6366448

>trans guy
wouldn't they have a vagina

>> No.6366478

They can have literally anything there these days.

>> No.6366543

Looks good anon

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>> No.6366743

Copied mammoth.

>> No.6366748

cute, arms look a bit long though

>> No.6366750

Forgot to fix the thigh on Hoshino. Bummer.

>> No.6366752

Are there still platforms to post loli porn?

>> No.6366785


our community

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There are a few problems imo. I agree with the other anon that her arms look too long (see rightmost).
There's also a balance issue, but I don't think it's the torso and legs.
While she would be unbalanced on this pose, it's a fairly common thing to draw girls in poses like these. I think the issue may be on the arms, it feels like you didn't know what to do with them, or at least with her left arm.
Also the legs are weird. One leg is bent so her left foot is higher than the other, but the perspective makes it seem like it shouldn't.
Yuzu's lower body feels estrange, as if it was dis-attached to her upper body.

>> No.6366840

>(see rightmost).
Sorry it's leftmost*, I moved her arms to go along her torso .

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>> No.6366910

hi retard newfag here
what software you are using and which brush ?
asking cause my line work looks FAT
or maybe it's cause i draw on a6 sheet
i'm using krita digital ink 1 precision and 2 fineline

>> No.6366914

Photoshop CS6, for sketching I use the last brush on the first row, it's just a regular hard round brush with density tied to pen pressure, I also set line width to pen pressure, if your lines are fat that's probably what you are missing.

>> No.6367232

one foot is behind her the other is more infront
i though the socks would convey this better

>> No.6367432

Pretty cute, her right arm and hand doesn't match her pose tho, like you didn't know what to do with it.

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made some changes
nice i love oversized weapons

>> No.6368076

thanks anon

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>> No.6368323

You should draw in her collarbones and more neck definition anon

>> No.6368329

looks like traced cp and her rib cage is deformed

>> No.6368332

Looks pretty good, nice focus on the torso anatomy

>> No.6368342

tracing cp until you internalize it is the hidden secret to becoming a loligod like mammoth, wysteriary and はおきふい

>> No.6368343

Her torso seems very long doesn't it?

>> No.6368349

all shit artists

>> No.6368356

>t. lolipleb

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>> No.6368365

You sound jealous

>> No.6368374

I absolutely love cute and round loli bellies!

>> No.6368380

Choose one.

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>> No.6368433

What am I supposed to be seeing there? Redline it, dumb crab.

>> No.6369386

bros having fun

>> No.6370556

Thats really cute anon, good job

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Thanks. I wanna finish it but I don't know how to make the colors work so well.

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couple doodles I made while attending my online classes
that wouldn't hurt, yeah
that sky is on fucking point

>> No.6371245

Constanza lole
also, love the energy on thar baseball bat

>> No.6371257

it's important to have fun sometimes right

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new pokegirl of elite four

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Pretty good stuff anon. Here's my most recent one.

>> No.6371610

someone's jelly

>> No.6372271
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what is this clothing/undergament called?
it's like underwear but kinda see through and mesh like

>> No.6372763

not this particular one, just in general.i think it's a type of lingerie

>> No.6372927

Kill yourself, the two terms are completely unrelated

>> No.6372928

That is absolutely fucking disgusting and any artist who does that is immediately called out and disowned
That can literally damage people's careers and reputation, stop spreading dangerous rumors and misinformation you disgusting groomer fuck

>> No.6372941

>That is absolutely fucking disgusting and any artist who does that is immediately called out and disowned
i fucking hate tracers too

>> No.6372944

kill yourself pedo

>> No.6373221

cute! i like this a lot more than the previous one, the pose is really fun.

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>> No.6373272

One of those is not like the others.

>> No.6373286

How is Mammoth still popular then?

>> No.6373386

Because of pedo groomers invading our community

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>Draw homosex ironically
>Surprised you attract a bunch of unironic homosexuals
>Why am I surrounded by a bunch of faggots? Buttpirates are raiding muh community!
You're a special kind of stupid.

>> No.6373392

ah, the thread had artists posting for a split second, now it's back to its usual brainrot argument and finger pointing.

>> No.6373393

You can't fix stupid.

>> No.6373394

It's good but the pose doesn't fit.
If she was lifting something like that her legs should be straightened up imo.

>> No.6373404

because you're more prone to be accepted by non-lolicon japanese artists (non-artists too obviously), than non-lolicon westoid artists

>> No.6373415

how do I get better with hair

>> No.6373416

Post it. Hair is complicated and there are not as many resources as for faces and such, so you may have to simply grind and do studies.

>> No.6373702

Anon so much thanks for this painting I love it so much everytime I unlock my phone a joy fills me through my soul you are gonna make it bro keep it up!!!

>> No.6373928

can someone repost the "How to draw Moe (basic)" mega? it got taken down

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>> No.6375125

First time trying to draw a loli
How did I do

>> No.6375127

Well, I would start by reducing her ass. I would also consider simplifying the nose, it doesn't necessarily have to be the usual dot but yours is too much imo.
Any artist you drew inspiration from?

>> No.6375139

Noted. I do think I went a bit overboad with the ass. I really struggle with hips and usually make them look weird.
>Any artist you drew inspiration from?
None really. That's just """my style""".

>> No.6375144

I agree with the other anon, were you trying to go for something specific? idk, chubby maybe?

>> No.6375161

meta platforms inc

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will try to push her more to the soft side
I hope the foreshortening makes sense too

>> No.6375315

I'm a bit worried about her forearms, they kinda look like Popeye's

>> No.6375325

should I make it thinner at the wrists/extensors to compensate or just thin out the arms all around? I'm going after that specific loli build

>> No.6375356
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Arms looks blobby and her shoulder is in a "pulling" position instead of a more restful position. Also, is that line the horizon line? The perspective reads top down because of the difference of her arm and the ass, but it's not quite that either. Post the ref.

>> No.6375367

ref is https://img3.gelbooru.com/images/08/bf/08bf3d4198e7b43caefd06eceadf5e8d.jpg
waist up was thought out as you can see
also, most of the curvature of the forearms are due to the flexors, right? I remember seeing something from teal that the flexor follows the palm's orientation, and I tried to follow that concept when drawing the arms

>> No.6375385
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Yeah, the should makes sense there because she's pulling her arm back. It's not quite top down but the legs make more sense since you can see it's a bed. I forgot the names but the muscles are like this. The top part leading to thumb side starts thick in the middle and the bottom part leading to pinky side is thicker in the middle and thin at the start. The silhouette of the arm doesn't change too much if you rotate the hand although the shape is just more defined if the thumb points inward. I suggest using multiple references if none quite match what you want to do otherwise you might as well be drawing from imagination.

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sitting poses are tough to pull off by imagination, yeah. my objective was studying the feet this guy draws so I felt like winging it at the rest
thanks again redliner-senpai

>> No.6375405

Ah I see, but if that was your intent you could have gone full footfag and put more time on the feet and way less on the upper body. Remember, practice smart.

>> No.6375590


holy fuck
this is horrible news for pixiv

>> No.6375600

Is it just a ban on international users payment? Pixiv is not for foreign user.

>> No.6375614

on all user payment.

>> No.6375648
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>> No.6375677
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I can't believe the end is right here in front of me.

>> No.6375732

Time to search for pixiv links in the archive and help staff to remove content they don’t support

>> No.6375755
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fucks sake man, what is this bullshit
pixiv is actively working to kill itself in record time
>my lolicon heroes are forced to stop posting cause they now need to work a day job in order to meet ends

>> No.6375761

Wait, are they banning loli art from booth and Pixiv fanbox?

>> No.6375802

Kill all pedos.

>> No.6375807

>i-its just a drawing
A drawing of what?

>> No.6375819

Of a fictional character. Are you committing murder when you draw someone being killed?

>> No.6375822

Chemically castrate yourself

>> No.6375829

Answer the question, or you simply can’t?

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How's this? I'm not sure if I should make her left hand hold her leg or not, or make both hands hold her legs.

>> No.6375848

Torso is way too long so the pose makes no sense. Use reference.

>> No.6376469

Who are the best lolicon artists on pixiv? I would like to analyze

>> No.6376563

muk monsieur

>> No.6376574

Why are pedophiles also always like this
Just universally the worst people to talk to

>> No.6376670

Go ahead and start with your country's politicians then. Oh, you don't actually mean actual pedos but people that just draw cartoons?
What a great moral person you are, right up there with the Charlie Hebdo shooter.

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I think I'm gonna wrap this one up. I wanna get more into scenery and backgrounds.

>> No.6376825

Looks unfinished to me.

>> No.6376833

Yeah, I'm keeping it very simple in terms of coloring, don't know if I should try to push it forward. This is pretty new to me.

>> No.6376872

You should ask the characters you kill in your videogames how they feel about being murdered you sick fuck get help

>> No.6376874

Ask Japan you baitnigger

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>> No.6377118
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Thanks for the feedback 'i tryed to mimic the anime with the deltoid being apparant and a very flat chest i'll try to make it better next time
also thanks for the artist i didnt know him

Thjanks i wish i was more productibe desu the hardest thing for me is having disipline and the stuff where you need to care about result while staying professional

>> No.6377211

Not loli at all

>> No.6377301

Great work!

>> No.6377394

I would consider keeping bodies simpler. I know it comes down to style, and that western style usually goes for more details, so take it as an opinion.
Here for example, the shape, or rather form, of the body is shown through fairly light shadows, not lines.

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>> No.6377588

How to make loli not look like teenager?

>> No.6377595
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It's kinda hard imo, because most tutorials and resources on how to draw girls focus on young / grown women.
You are gonna have to pick up an artist or artists that you like and see what they are doing different.
Obviously keeping a big head-to-body ratio, big eyes and foreheads, etc are no brainers.

>> No.6377622

Use reference

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>> No.6378247

You can't post full nudity here since it's loli, should delete the pic before you get banned / warned.

>> No.6378258
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Don't know if this counts as a proper redline or this is what you want but I would really, really tone down her ass.

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Not sure if posted this before but meme

tried to make it look like a whiteboard marker but not sure if it looks right

>> No.6378324
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no way is this black souls?!?!
I thought it was something else entirely.
You finally drew Alice again!!

Thank you for alice, she looks a bit different from daughter alice though.

>> No.6378328

Well, that one is Alice Liddell.
Imouto Alice > Daughter Alice > Hag Alice.

>> No.6378346

inshallah brother
my mother caught me drawing that io wearing the skimpy outfit and by her reaction, she probably agrees with scott as well, deep inside

>> No.6378348

lewd the daugter!

>> No.6378355

>Hey look Im a slut!... BUT PROGRESSIVE

>> No.6378386

I want to get more serious about drawing. I've improved a lot in 3 years, even though I only draw occasionally, and I use a mouse and a pirated version of Photoshop from like 2015.
I want to start using a tablet. But it's a world I'm unfamiliar with. Should I get one with a screen or just the surface?

>> No.6378394

You should probably watch some youtube videos with people working on either. I'd argue most professional artists use tablets with screens.
As for me, I've been using a wacom intuos pro m for like 7 years and have no intention of upgrading any time soon, I honestly don't know how much my stuff would improve if I went into a screen tablet.

>> No.6378448

you just removed all ass form one side tough, just a reduction would have been enouhg, I am more concerned at how high the hips are.

>> No.6378492

draw on paper and scan it to sai or whatever, did that for two years

>> No.6378515

Nothing's particularly wrong for the cartoon style but the ass seems too big for a loli.

>> No.6378529
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That's still pretty early. I suggest just start using non screen tablets as early as now, I can assure you, non display vs display tablets makes no difference, it's a matter of what you got accustomed to.

>> No.6378588

Isn't it hard not knowing where the pen is going to touch the canvas?

>> No.6378607

Eventually it'll become natural, you won't think about where things are anymore.

>> No.6378658

What method is that?

>> No.6378659

Your mum, son

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>> No.6378860

Too big in general, I would make her body overall smaller, otherwise she doesn't look like a loli.

>> No.6378864

low amount of curves / no curves 4-5 heads

>> No.6378865

just zoom out

>> No.6378963

but that's forbidden..

>> No.6378979

No it isn't. I don't get why you guys are so against using reference.

>> No.6378986

Not everyone lives in a place where cp is legal anon

>> No.6379345

Why are you bringing that up out of nowhere? It has nothing to do with using reference or not.

>> No.6379346
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Don't need CP. You can just look up biden pictures instead.

>> No.6379446

What's up with her head and neck? And her right knee seems to be going inwards.

>> No.6379469

He is using AI now

>> No.6380122

could be Latina
I mean, Latinx

>> No.6380408

janny's been pretty based lately but i'll try not to push my luck https://files.catbox.moe/xcat7v.jpg
just some progress from yesterday since loli street is kinda slow atm. I tried adding a more intricate shadow pattern on her face just so I could practice the crazy stuff white datura does on the shadow terminator but every hard edge I put in seems to add 10 years to her age. very frustrating
kino as fuck

>> No.6380422

i need to learn ai loli bros... i'm too retarded for computer stuff though...

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that's too bad :DD

>> No.6380504

shadows are a bit inconsistent. particularly the on the feet and legs.

>> No.6380508

nice looking feet

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>> No.6380523

go back

>> No.6380668
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Hey cutie can you do a peace sign for me real quick? We confirmed that India's been releasing spy cyborgs around the block to steal info and I'm compelled by the law to ask this whenever I spot suspicious activities such as omission of hands or melting "hair". Crazy times we're living in, eh

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It's better than before for sure. White datura seems to use hard brushes for blending, no? Are you gonna try to blend it like that? Or maybe I'm just seeing this.
Also, if you are trying to imitate his style, I think he draws chins pointier.

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i wanted to do a background but just gave up, since rendering took too long, overall this took like 5 hours.
i spent most of my time trying to fix the anatomy and make changes here and there, the sketch was done in like 15 mins

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I like it, it's pretty cute. I don't know how you drew it so fast it takes me that much time just to come up with a sketch.
I wouldn't make the legs bend to 90°, to me that looks uncomfortable. I would rather do something like picrel.
As for the background, not sure how you went with it, but as for me every time I try to draw a girl and then give it a background, I end up giving up. Basically, if I'm gonna draw a full pic with bg I have to be decided about it from the beginning, otherwise it'll always look off.

>> No.6380845

i just do figure drawing a ton and got used to doing sketches fast.
my only issue is that when i do that i end up with tons of problems with anime and proportions so i spend like an hour or more so fixing it up.

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>> No.6380906

How can meatbags even compete ??
This permabeg >>6380834 has been drawing for 6 years and still has 0 idea how anatomy works lmao

>> No.6380917

Sirs, this is the lolisho drawthread. You already have many designated AI shitting threads to post in.

>> No.6380920

The only real good use for AI

>> No.6380943 [DELETED] 

>equating cp drawings and real cp by proxy of the former being per chance an AI modification of the latter thus criminalizing both without distinction whether they're AI or hand drawn via AI detection tools
yup yup

>> No.6380946

If you can't tell that pic from a real kid you should touch some grass

>> No.6380948

>equating cp drawings and real cp by proxy of the former being per chance an AI modification of the latter, thus criminalizing both via AI detection tools without distinction whether they're AI or hand drawn
yup yup

>> No.6380952

Doesn't matter. People generate AI cp and turn cp photos into pictures through AI so all imagery of sexualized children will be outlawed through AI image detectors.

>> No.6380956

All imagery of sexualized children is already outlawed

>> No.6380959

And Japan will be forced to follow suit if they wish to stay in contact with the rest if the civilized world. The Fanbox crackdown being the first step. Their lolisho otaku community or trading and dealing with the rest of the civilized world, the choice is theirs.

>> No.6380962 [DELETED] 

I predicted this a few months ago. Jack off to your overrendered AI shlock as much as you can, the monkey's won't pass you by.

>> No.6380964

I predicted this a few months ago. Jack off to your overrendered AI shlock as much as you can, the monkey's paw won't pass you by.

>> No.6381064
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Do you guy draw eyeballs from this angle when drawing anime?

I've seen some artist just make the eyeballs flat
even concave inwards similar to how almost all anime figures look like if you seen any
I've seen some artist curve them like this bit i dont think it works unless it's more realistic, more moe/larger eyes would look bad with eyeball curves. They'd rather do what disney does with mickey and always just show characters in a few poses and change things around to not look weird

>> No.6381067

I would consider rethinking her expression. Is she surprised? startled?
I always drew them flat, never paid attention desu.

>> No.6381069

i was thinking kinda like she fell over and speechless or shocked, but yeah i can change it

>> No.6381070

It's your decision how you want to draw x, y and z

>> No.6381071

I mean, do whatever you like, I'm just saying I don't understand what her expression is trying to convey.
It still looks cute tho

>> No.6381537

'draw the rest of the fucking owl' but instead of circles and owls it's cubes and puffy vulvas

>> No.6381542

Pyw and I might listen to your advice

>> No.6381557

i'm not good, sorry. it's why i was asking for advice in the first place.
basically whether semi-realistic lolis should have puffy vulvas or whether they're as flat as their chests

>> No.6381564

yeah pretty lazy but it's just placeholder. I'm supposed to push toward darker, more saturated shadows in order to match the detailed feet from the ref but I wasted too much time before realizing the shading on the face can't be too dark either or else it gets too dramatic for this kind of drawing
thank. hopefully I can pull off the render too
I think the does that thing when you use the blending tool on two values that are too disparate from each other and end up with a hard edged intermediate band. but he also seems to use airbrushes and shit
but I'm more interested in his style of rendering rather than drawing. I try to draw closer to some other favorites

>> No.6381658

thread is ded but post anyway

>> No.6381659

ugly pussy nooo

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>> No.6381665

good as always

>> No.6381666

It's interesting, you did a really nice job with the foreshortening on the second girl.

>> No.6381702

You must be a very good visualiser

>> No.6381745

Either that or he got certain "references"

>> No.6381909
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noticed that too, they either draw the eye inside boundaries of the face or don't draw it at all hiding it behind the profile,
which is a shame cuz when an eye bulges out or it's eyelashes are visible from behind the nose the characters' faces start to be not just visible but even felt, like as if they could be touched

>> No.6382578

some /int/s prefer to learn and study than develop some fancy art style mr krabs

>> No.6383430

But what if loli no liek?

>> No.6383602


>> No.6384426
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Any critique you can give on my Pan give it to me, thanks fags

>> No.6384432

Pretty nice colouring, except on the hair imo.
The light looks muddy, like you rendered it with a hard brush. Not sure if that's what you intended but, but I don't think it looks very good.

>> No.6384514

just fug her until she loves it :DD

>> No.6384662

Do you wanna do an /lsg/ collab for Black friday?

i was thinking of a loli whorehouse, or a store that sells lolis or robo-lolis and we all draw a different one trying to pursuade the viewer into buying them during the Black Friday sale.
We could do one pic each or do a big-ass pic with all out pics in it.

Anybody interested?

>> No.6384738

I don't think we have enough people around, but I guess it could be fine.
I would let it open for the entirety of the thread's duration tho.

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