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>Welcome to /salt/
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western styles can coexist here.

>Rules & Guidelines
1) Any form of cartooning styles are welcome; submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge.
4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.

>Community Resources
>mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy
>>>/ic/artbook

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

>Image reference
modelindexdatabase.smugmug.com/browse (pw: croquiscafe21)
hegrehunter.com

>> No.6286884

yep cum

>> No.6286894
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>> No.6286974
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cyperpunk gremlin

>> No.6286992
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>>6286876
Working on the furniture...

>> No.6287050

>>6286974
i like :)
>>6286992
love the energy in your forms

>> No.6287088

>>6286718
Uoooh verry nice.

>> No.6287098
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>> No.6287101
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work in progress. I'm happy with how its coming along so far.

>> No.6287102

>>6286992
LOVE how angular and chunky everything is

>> No.6287131

>>6286974
trend hopper...

>> No.6287272

>>6287098
I'm trying to understand but what the hell is the robot holding, the pelvis or a leg, and supposedly the thing on the ground is human?

>> No.6287287

>>6287098
Overall it's interesting but the budget constraints are showing. His sfw has more appeal.
>>6287272
It's rebecca from cyberpunk turned into a sex toy I'd assume.

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just finished this comm

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>>6287101
updated this. I tried to fix the legs because the way it was, they were different lengths. if the bend was at the same spot, the extended leg would be much shorter, now they're a bit more proportionate i think.

>> No.6287541

>>6286992
soul

>> No.6287587
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6287587

What do you think of my drawing of link?

>> No.6287613

>>6287587
femboys are not my thing but for ppl who like femboys i think the appeal is there for sure! nice cock.

>> No.6287660

>>6287587
Good drawing but the hips and pelvis area are far too feminine looking

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>>6286876
https://art.ngfiles.com/images/2743000/2743273_owd5238_asdf-6.png?f1663760743

>> No.6287798
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I'm not used to drawing this type of angle

>> No.6287799
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I got a my fancy new printer. I'm trying to get this comic done asap so I can try to print and bind physical books.

>> No.6287845

>>6287287
ok

>> No.6287849

>>6287798
Seems kind of unnatural that her hand would be facing that way

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>>6287587
it doesn't look like a dick, it looks like a pita vienna sausage, with respect to the body, the hips are too round, here I leave a reference:

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>>6287098
a robot with a fucking caterpillar between its legs, lmao

>> No.6287874
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6287874

finished two comms today

>> No.6287903
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>>6287874
Thanks for rubbing it in...

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>>6287287
ye i'll admit i rushed it a bit cause i wanted to strike while the iron's hot, i don't usually do the flavor of the week fanart thing but i wanted to here

>> No.6287935

>>6287903
its ok anon, i only mentioned that i did two today bc it virtually never happens for me

>> No.6288186
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I hate coloring

>> No.6288190
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>>6288186
pt. 2
Swimsuit Succubus is a great lewd reference

>> No.6288372

>>6286992
she looks broken all over

>> No.6288698
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This is something I've been working on for probably way too long but would love to hear what people think about what could be improved.

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Currently trying to make a pin up of Tenn from invader Zim and her in a disguise. It’s attempting to look like an old school pin up.
>>6288698
This thing’s anatomy is broken all over. Her vagina and anus are stapled on. Both are too low. Hand has disproportionate fingers. The pinky is the thickest finger and the thumb Is nonexistent.
The face has issues too. The mouth having strange teeth positioning. The eyes having bad wrapping on her head. The torso is the wrong angle for her position as well.
There’s far too many issues to point out so I recommend you trying to look at a model first and drawing from reference. You show also look at how eyes change in perspective.

>> No.6288836

Do any of your family or friends know about the stuff you draw?

>> No.6288847

>>6288836
No. When I tell them as a hobby I make 50 dollars average a week on commissioned artwork I think they think I draw flowers or sunsets or something. They're very incurious.

>> No.6288853

>>6288836
They know that i draw school girls and stuff. so they hate anime, so they don't question any further.

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>>6288836
when I was 15 my mom found katawa shoujo drawings on my computer. we never talked about it but she banned me from using the internet for a year
>>6287587
>>6287428
very cute
>>6286974
blog?
very cute

>> No.6288890

>>6288847
>>6288853
>>6288868
I want to get into this stuff but hiding from my family is gonna be awkward lol

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>> No.6288951

>>6288836
Ive shown a few people some of my recent things, and mostly people i expected to be more open minded and receptive. I got good reactions. When i wanted to start drawing pron my gf said she would support me and encouraged it, but i dont think she likes seeing ass and titty monsters

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>>6288698
What the fuck is that??? No offense, but, the vagina looks very bad, it looks like a pair of cracked testicles, Lmao

>> No.6289022

>>6288868

but what kind of drawings, sexual hentai type?

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>>6289022
you betcha

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>>6289036
rightly so, all lesbians, i agree with your mother

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>>6286992
Tried to go fast; around 5 hours.

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>>6289036
I thought it was something more like this, but your mother was right, damn lesbians

>> No.6289088

>>6288951
>my gf said she would support me and encouraged it
>i dont think she likes seeing ass and titty monsters
same. it's hard to draw when my gf is around because she'll occassionally look over at what I'm drawing and see half my screen is a combination of porn and hentai i'm using as a ref for drawing women with proportions she and no one else has.
Just get that vibe of slight judgement and fueling potential insecurity.
/blog

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To the anon who gave me some advice on the last thread, I hope you can see this.
I tried to correct the drawing and now I think it looks so much better, so thank you.
I hope you think so too.

>> No.6289110

>>6288836
Everyone around me knows I draw porn. Family doesn’t care, but tbf they’re not very conventional and after my problematic past I think they just gave up on morals and are proud of me for finding smth I can make a living off of. Brother is a fellow degen otaku so he doesn’t give a fuck.

Friends think it’s funny/cool and it’s never resulted in bad reactions. Even my teachers in art school knew lmfao. Given that I was the only one in class that was actively making a living by drawing.

I think it depends on how much you make desu. Most people if you’re able to make a living off of it they respect that. If it’s JUST hobby I think you’ll get some side eyes.
Even people who disdain hentai usually say “hey if it pays the bills” lol

>> No.6289131

>>6286894
are you a woman?
this reads like what someone without a dick imagines dicks are like

>> No.6289153
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face down ass up from the front will be the fucking death of me.

>> No.6289157
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I'm currently building a portfolio.
Is this quality good enough for comissions?
I'm not talking about resolution, the original is massive, I mean like is it appealing enough?

>> No.6289204

>>6289157
Coomers have low standards. Try it I guess.

>> No.6289218

>>6289157
>is this quality good enough for commissions
Have you seen the kind of art coomers commission? The bar is super low. When it comes to examples for commissions the importan part is making sure the example matches the level of quality possible given what you charge.

I've seen people offer full color nsfw sketch sheets for $10 and people charge $60 for a single full body line art.

>> No.6289479
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6289479

Trying out a new scanner I just bought. :)
>>6287506
Very cute, I like it.
>>6287796
Hey, how do you post works like that? Is that a website?
>>6288190
I like your shading.
>>6288822
That artwork is fucking wild, and nice critique.
>>6289072
Not bad for five hours, anon. Really nice.
>>6289097
Not that anon who gave you the advice, but it's nice to see you took it and improved in your work. Keep it up.
>>6289153
Are you having a problem with that position from the front, because 3/4 angle it looks pretty good.

>> No.6289659

>>6289110
My mom wants me to quit drawing because it's not "paying the bills". My patreon earnings is only around 2 dollars. I have a few fans but Twitter hates me. Probably time to give up.

>> No.6289675

>>6288822
Thank you for being constructive. I've already fixed the clubfist.
>>6289010
Better than "Looks fine" Gives me something to fix. I'll make you proud, anon.
>>6289659
There's a difference between giving up and a tactical retreat. You can get a day job to pull in some cash, but don't give up on what you really want. Use that time to get better or cultivate an audience instead of endlessly grinding. Actively learn and when you open back up for bussiness maybe you won't need that day job.

>> No.6289679
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6289679

we wippin

>> No.6289712

>>6289659
or get a normal job and continue drawing outside of work you retard

>> No.6289717
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6289717

decided to try some color practice on this one

>> No.6289732

>>6289659
Yeah it turns out you can't just all-in on art and magically end up getting anything stable. You've got to be real talented and real lucky to do that. Just do the smart thing and get a job and keep drawing and posting.
>>6289479
No its specifically the 3/4 view that fucks me. I keep wanting to have grounded anatomy but showing off tits, waist, and ass at the same time makes all those sketches feel wonky.

>> No.6289862

>>6289659
2.5 years ago someone here advised me not to go all out in trying to 'make it' with comms and patreon but I was too stubborn and arrogant and essentially wasted those years. unless you have the money to support yourself for 3-5 years until you're good, you have a good following, more requests than you have the time to take on, etc etc, get a part-time job at least and do this on the side. I owe rent, I owe wips, I owe finished work because I'm financially insecure and can't ever quite 100% focus on drawing when I could be flipping burgers for 16 hrs a week to make that money I need.
tldr listen to mommy, come back to the coom later

>> No.6289914
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6289914

thanks in advance for any critique. I'm enjoying this brush for line art a lot

>> No.6290156
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should I open DMs on twitter?
idk if that's a good idea or not. Why not just have people comment?

>> No.6290205
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>>6289732
Don't be afraid to use reference material to help you get a better understanding of what you're trying to draw, anon. Trace it a few times if you need to so that you get a good idea of the form of the body; know that in some face down ass up pictures, you can't always see her face, her tits and her pussy and ass ALL at the same time.

>> No.6290209
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>>6289479
>>6290205

>> No.6290214
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>>6290209

>> No.6290235
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Random encounter

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>>6290209
>>6290209

>> No.6290505

>>6290156
I've literally had "open dm's" for a year. If you're a nobody like me. I wouldn't worry about it.
>>6290205
Is that you anon? I'd feel more comfortable drawing if you could pose reference for me.

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>>6290505
>I'd feel more comfortable drawing if you could pose reference for me.
nigga

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>> No.6290795
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was a little bricked up when I drew the one on the left so I figured I'd post to salt

>> No.6290841

>>6289072
blog?

>> No.6290843
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I've never drawn something like this before. Please let me know what you think!

>> No.6290992
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>> No.6291044
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Fellas is it gay to fuck your clones?

>> No.6291050

>>6289679
Nice puss
urethra should be a little higher imo

>> No.6291071
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>>6291050
danke
ill have to look at it again

>> No.6291291
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didn't really have a plan when I started so Im running some iterations
any suggestions?

>> No.6291401

>>6287131
No one will suck your dick for being a contrarian. The series was good and just came out and Rebecca very likeable. Cope.

>> No.6291444

>>6290205
It was for a request. Dude gave me a pose reference and the portions weren't right so I was trying to make it make sense.
>>6290505
Bro how old are you? You know there's an entire internet full of porn?

>> No.6291447

>>6291401
>No one will suck your dick for being a contrarian. The series was good and just came out and Rebecca very likeable. Cope.
I will cope. But at least I can love and hate myself honestly for being a contrarian.

My creative passion far exceeds boreing trends.

>> No.6291454

>>6291444
>Bro how old are you? You know there's an entire internet full of porn?
Yeah, and most of it is kinda distasteful imo. I mostly browse hentai.

>> No.6291529

>>6291071
This is so good until you zoom in her face.

>> No.6291696

>>6291529
Well I'm always down for improving
What do you think needs to be fixed?

>> No.6292193
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6292193

I've started practicing figures a lot lately, no real intention to go very realistic as far as shading or style, but I've been grinding it out and I think things are looking ok??? This is just a non-character in a floaty pose. Quick hour or so start to finish

>> No.6292196

>>6291696
Actually don’t listen to me. It’s just personal preference. I tend to draw more neotenous faces so I suppose that’s where my bias came in. My bad anon.

>> No.6292200

>>6287587
cute
dick doesn't look good
needs to be more refined (rendering, lines) to be fappable
>>6287660 doesnt get the appeal, don't listen to him

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>>6292193
This is another example, also quick but a less terrible pose

>> No.6292729

>>6288868
>blog? very cute
Ty
@cranihum1

>> No.6293123
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I could call it a study but desu I dont think I learned anything from this, just wanted to draw frames from my fav video lol

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just finished this one

painting is hard

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>>6293343
alt version for shits and giggles

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>>6289072
Another fast one

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>>6286876

>> No.6293531

>>6293123
video source?

>> No.6293553

>>6293354
Nice seeing it finished! Good work anon.

>> No.6293589

>>6293521
Please drop your socials. I rly like your art

>> No.6293843

>>6293531
idk but heres the mp4
lj9z1i (streamable url)

>> No.6293868

>>6293460
nice art by why a crab, i see many artist drawing crabs. did i not get the memo?

>> No.6293873

>>6293868
crab in a bucket is top tier /ic/ saying and this board is full of crabs with 'advice' meant to keep you at their level forever

>> No.6294707

>>6293873
Pretty much why I stopped posting art on this shithole board.

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>>6292225
did a lot of quick drawings today, skipping the color phase for now. where am i going wrong the most?

>> No.6294749
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>>6294733
this is with the non-final lines mostly filtered out

>> No.6294873
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6294873

second feels weird and wrong but somehow more interesting than the firs, what do you think?

>> No.6294886

>>6294873
Did you only add the leg line to the second? If so then the leg line implies more detail but then there’s no more detail so the leg line looks out of place.

>> No.6294887

>>6294873
You just added better linework to the right leg, how does it feel weird/wrong?

>> No.6294898
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6294898

it's time to make use of AI generated shit if you want coombux

>> No.6294911

>>6294873
>>6293589

>> No.6294938

>>6294898
Which ai did you use?

>> No.6294971

>>6294911
@S4mCooper
name is a placeholder till I think of something better

>> No.6294981
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>>6294873
The line you added to the inner leg makes it looks more anatomically accurate. It shows the separation of her quads and her inner leg. The line on her hip looks out of place though because its looks like her buttcheek is peeking out from behind her hips. If you get rid of that extra line and connect the two tapered ends it would add a bit of "motion" to the pose, like she spinning or getting ready to throw a kick or something.

>>6293553
Thanks, it was challenging doing a more "painterly" style but at least I got some experience rendering metallic surfaces, lol.

This is a rough sketch of the next piece Im going to be working on. Its a lil' kinky

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>>6286992
>>6289072
>>6293460

i get that this is the syle you're aiming for, but your lines look so blocky I'm suspicious you don't know how to draw complex curves.
(pic related for context and yes, it IS my art.)

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6295440

workin on this one

>> No.6295519

>>6294938
stable diffusion with some furry data set

>> No.6295603
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Colored an old sketch to practice blending modes on a grayscale base. I feel it came out decent, but I might need to push the values more next time.
Weird taste, yeah. However, I feel there's a lot of potential in scenarios that aren't exactly "hardcore sexual activity", but are still very much erotically charged.

>> No.6295794

How many frames would be enough for a simple penetration loop?

>> No.6295855

>>6295794
If you're really trying to laze it, I'd say 3, in/out and one that is 3/4ths between the 2 to give it some sense of spacing. With that and some attention to how long each frame shows you would get something readable at least

>> No.6296191

Your rendering is really nice, but the hidden arm looks really unnatural. I would think her arm would be over the sofa. It looks a little weightless as a result. Everything else is looking gorgeous though, fr

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Why is the anal exposed?

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>>6286876
sexual assault thread

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commissions boring ugh

>> No.6296733

>>6296298
commissions are usually boring :-(

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finished this comm, ik im bad at drawing armor

>> No.6297948
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I've yet to finish the background but how do I make this more appealing? I like how I've done the stretched/near-see-through fabric but for a pinup this feels kinda bland

>> No.6297963

>>6297948
Boobs r good, add more dimension and shading to the ass, and make the background lighter and simple or solid colored.

>> No.6297974

It’s the same exact pose you drew last time with the broken torso but standing.

>> No.6298009

>>6297963
thanks man, you're right about the ass it looks too flat. I gotta work on a steampunk garage looking thing for the background though, which is a whole other challenge

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>> No.6298076
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K-Dash in da house!

This one is an old painting from 5 years ago.

>> No.6298089

>>6298076
better than your current work

>> No.6298102

>>6298089
How come? My style has evolved over the years...

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>>6294749
I'm doing a little rendering practice now. This is my first shot using gradients and some blur tricks on the shades. Is this look good, or should I lean into simpler shading?

>> No.6298295
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>>6298190
Because you have more of a cartoonish style to your work, I would suggest you try out a shading technique that's called cut-edge, or think more along the lines of Batman The Animated Series. I think your work will definitely benefit from more simple styles of shading rather than an airbrushed look. Simplify your shadows to just the flat colors and one shadow color. Hope this helps.
>>6290329
Thanks for the love, anon. I appreciate it.
>>6290505
No, that's not me, I looked up that reference picture for you on the internet. I'm flattered though, no homo. XD
>working of a free request for /h/, just wanted to share some Liru

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>>6295421
My older art is very soft and curvy, pic rel. I just grew out of it (not that it's bad) I'm a big fan of straight lines and geometric construction now.

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>>6298295
thank you for the advice, I agree and actually was just experimenting with that kind of method after posting that last one, here I did some scratchy pencil-style shading, then a couple layers of soft fill shadows and highlights. I like this turnout a lot actually

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>>6297840
i like this quite a bit. would make a few changes to his face though

>> No.6298433

>>6298400
Wonderful! Better than 99% of ic. Keep going!

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>>6286876
I've made this one. /v/ said to put it on here.

>> No.6298481

>>6298433
thank you!
>>6298445
looks good, the guy is pretty stiff in his pose imo, like his back is too straight. the girl could have more expression in her shoulders maybe. they just don't look as tired as i think you want them to be

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pinup comm

>> No.6298570

>>6298562
Reminds me of those generic porn ads plastered all over porn sites.

>> No.6298588

>>6298570
>that's kind of the point

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>>6298562
>van gogh in the bg
well done
>>6298400
gonna throw this last one in here today, I'm liking the way these lines and shadows are turning out waaay more than the first shot from today. is it too blurry? I did the trick of duping & blurring the lines with a low opacity, which helps add volume but maybe looks too airbrushy?

>> No.6298702

>>6298068
Jesus Christ is this idiot ever going to finish anything?

>> No.6298741

>>6289679
stinky

>> No.6298757

>>6295603
based

>> No.6298772

>>6291071
very nice endresult but could still need a bath

>> No.6298790

>>6298741
>>6298772
its better when theres some musk

>> No.6298884

>>6298431
good point with the eyes, thanks for pointing that out, will change that up before the final version

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>>6298295
Delivery for /h/.
>>6298614
Looks pretty good. You made the shadows a lot more simple and see how much more clean and cartoony your work looks? I would probably only add a few highlights here and there, because her entire body looks oily right now. Less is more. Your work reminds me of R.Crumb and Larry Welz, that sketchy 60's and 70's underground look. The proportions look really exaggerated and funky, nicely done. :)

>> No.6299029

do horny artists ever fap to their own work?

>> No.6299040

>>6299029
all the time

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>>6298431
alterations made, thanks for the advice!

>> No.6299280

Critique?

Think I'll formally learn about lighting and shading tomorrow (finished this before sleeping)

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>>6299280
fug

captcha: ASSRGN

>> No.6299381

>>6299281
bad composition, characters take up too little space, not enough space for details
Are you drawing porn or furniture?

>> No.6299500

>>6298481
Wow, finally some good advice. The draw was pretty weird in my eyes, glad to know why.
But I don't understand the... 'more expression in her shoulders'. Could you clarify?

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>>6299280
>>6299281
I think what I would work on would be the expression on the girl's face laying back, receiving. She has this look on her face that says, oh hey look, I found a quarter!; when it should be more sensual, more alluring, even for a cartoon. You'll start to develop this the more you practice. Also, clean up what's going on down there where the action is, it's hard to tell what the girl giving, is doing. It almost looks like she's pulling on the pubic hair, holding on for dear life trying not to fall off the bed. Again, you'll do better on this as you practice some more. Be careful with your bed sheet folds and the pillow, make sure the lines follow the dips of gravity on their bodies and the head, the edge of the bed can definitely use more bed sheet curves, too. Continue with your learning about lighting and shadows, just be sure to learn about these other things alongside that learning, too. I hope this helps, keep on drawing!

>> No.6299637

>>6293123
lmao noticed the balls way too late
that ass is crazy phat for a dude

>> No.6299837

>>6299500
Sort of a similar thing to the guy's pose, I think her whole torso could be pushed more to show how she's leaning on the bed, or to show some reactive action from getting her ass smashed. In general both of them are in the right position but i don't read much movement

>> No.6300345

>>6299837
I see what you mean. I'm retarded to those things. When I was done with this I was pretty much satisfied with the results. But a day later it sounded really weird in my eyes (just like this sentence). I have a lot to learn when come to details, glad to finally have some helpful interaction on this damned site.