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/lsg/ - Loli & Shota General Anonymous Mon Sep 5 07:05:11 2022 No.6258466 [Reply] [Original]

Previous Thread: >>6241696

>Guidelines:
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2. Do not post child photo references, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to this general's PPH (posts per hour/thread activity), please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Keep all outside drama from other generals, boards, or outside communities from /lsg/.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your lolis
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
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>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 07:52:09 2022 No.6258508 >>6257640 >humans hate air

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 10:12:30 2022 No.6258661 >>6258508 >cows hate grass

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 10:26:41 2022 No.6258678 File: 375 KB, 1326x1762, misogi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:05:33 2022 No.6258717 >>6258678 thread off to a good start

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:36:09 2022 No.6258756 https://files.catbox.moe/s5imad.jpg slowly chipping away at it

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:41:06 2022 No.6258759 >>6258661 >pigs hate mud

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:46:02 2022 No.6258760 >>6258759 jews hate money

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:47:52 2022 No.6258764 Why was my pic deleted janny-kun

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:50:16 2022 No.6258766 >>6258760 dogs hate walks

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 11:55:24 2022 No.6258769 >>6258764 I missed the post can you catbox it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 12:40:05 2022 No.6258818 >>6258678 Best picture in the thread. >>6258764 Jealous rage.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 12:55:52 2022 No.6258842 >>6258766 >bears hate honey

Anonymous Mon Sep 5 13:23:33 2022 No.6258876
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>>6258764
The picture looked amazing. Only issue I may have is with this area. It feels kinda strange how the neck connects to the ear imo.
Maybe because I'm used to lower ears in anime

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 13:24:21 2022 No.6258880 >>6258876 No, the ear is definitely fucked. And it's not just how it's connected to the neck.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 13:32:29 2022 No.6258893 no

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 13:34:27 2022 No.6258897 >>6258842 >ants hate sugar

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 14:27:24 2022 No.6258953 >>6258897 >cats hate milk

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:03:38 2022 No.6258990 >>6258818 It's also the only picture in the thread, so what was your point again? >>6258717 Hardly. If you'd stopped fanboying him just for a minute you'll easily spot all the mistakes in the drawing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:06:57 2022 No.6258994 >>6258990 And it will stay as the best picture. If it's for critique it's fine, but nitpicking better artists for the sake of it is just another way of coping with one's /beg/ness.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:29:22 2022 No.6259020 File: 219 KB, 1500x1624, 1643514801790.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I wanna try pushing my angles again, how is this so far?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:38:07 2022 No.6259030 >>6259020 Is she supposed to be twisting her hips to the side? It looks awkward. It also doesn't look as foreshortened as it could be. I suggest using ref.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:38:15 2022 No.6259031 >>6259020 The drawing is skewed to the left. Try flipping canvas to see what I mean.

Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:40:27 2022 No.6259035
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>>6259030
>Is she supposed to be twisting her hips to the side?
Yes
>>6259031
I intended to do something like this, how do I find references for this specific angle? is there a keyword on gelbooru / pixiv?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:46:23 2022 No.6259040 File: 226 KB, 1536x2048, kom_inu-1325035607844823040-20201107_082121-img2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6259035 on booru the tag is from_below.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 15:54:49 2022 No.6259046 >>6258953 soda hates pop

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 16:11:09 2022 No.6259070 >>6259040 Alright thanks

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:01:04 2022 No.6259303 >>6258466 So it's not just loli general now? I thought the shota part was getting dropped

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:08:42 2022 No.6259320 >>6259303 Whoever tried to push that (including micuck) realized I gave 2 shits and backed off.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:16:33 2022 No.6259333 >>6259320 >micuck Haha, that's a good one.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:17:24 2022 No.6259336 >>6259020 How long does it take you generally to draw 1 pose? You spend quite a while it seems.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:25:38 2022 No.6259351 These threads are in dire need of diversity, where are my trap shotas at?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:25:44 2022 No.6259352 >>6259336 Usually it takes too much, this one >>6259020 I made in around 20 minutes, but this one >>6256154 on the right took over an hour. I wish I was faster, but then again I like the first step of sketching much more than any other part of drawing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:32:54 2022 No.6259363 File: 71 KB, 515x523, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6258678 >>6258769 https://files.catbox.moe/b5aizv.png

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 18:35:12 2022 No.6259368 >>6259363 >>6258678 This reminds me plenty of mammoth's style. I think her right leg may be too short, unless there's some foreshortening I'm not seeing. Will you color it once the drawing is done?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:33:20 2022 No.6259477 >>6259352 Thanks for the insight. I figured that was the case but didn’t think it would take that long.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:36:33 2022 No.6259481 >>6259351 There's a poster on these threads that starts shit anytime anyone draws anything other than loli.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:37:35 2022 No.6259483 https://www.visuabusters.com/booru/item/979 drew this the other day. kind of proud of it... Have never done... values like this before...

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:37:40 2022 No.6259484 >>6259481 As it should be

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:40:04 2022 No.6259489 >>6259483 Head's too big for the body bro.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:40:12 2022 No.6259490 >>6259483 I like it

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:40:47 2022 No.6259492 >>6259489 no, that’s the charm

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:54:40 2022 No.6259525 >>6259483 I didn't know you posted here, what is this site?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 19:57:05 2022 No.6259532 >>6259489 the proportion seems correct to me... But maybe I should've widened her torso a bit more... >>6259490 thank you. >>6259525 this is my own website, made for my friends and I.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 20:11:14 2022 No.6259556 >>6259363 blog?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 20:27:39 2022 No.6259592 >>6258990 >>6259363 all I see is the shoulder is a bit too narrow, and not much else how about you point out the mistakes?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 20:49:48 2022 No.6259650 anyone know the sauce? found on /b/ but no results https://litter.catbox.moe/ccmyyt.jpg

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 20:57:37 2022 No.6259665 >>6259040 I could kiss you, but that'd be gay

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 5 23:27:53 2022 No.6259895 >>6259665 so what if it is

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 05:54:07 2022 No.6260261 >>6259633 >>6259627 lmao homo faggots

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 07:03:18 2022 No.6260314 I legti don't know how to work with refferences other than copying it exactly

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 09:13:23 2022 No.6260424 File: 418 KB, 834x1874, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i feel lik i may have messed up the shoulder and the jaw

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 10:04:51 2022 No.6260462 https://litter.catbox.moe/eeeg65.jpg Futa and loli, yes, no?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 10:47:37 2022 No.6260496 any crit?>>6260424 i tried doing the pillow thing like louise-anon suggested

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 10:53:38 2022 No.6260503 >>6260496 You're too focused on applying your fundamental knowledge and making things look correct that it's making your drawings stiff. Draw looser and make adjustments afterward.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 10:58:47 2022 No.6260509 >>6260503 don’t listen to this idiot i think it looks fine

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 10:59:35 2022 No.6260511 >>6260509 Nice reverse crabbing

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:03:25 2022 No.6260518

>>6260511
You’re the one reverse trolling telling him to go back to loose scribbling. The pillow method at least provides you a plan albeit one shouldn’t use it by the textbook, but deviate. Both louise-anon and that guy are already doing so. My crit would be since they draw too slow, practice of figures regularly with that method would increase their output but….quality >quantity in his case since louise anon produces good work despite spending the extra minutes one 1 figure.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:05:01 2022 No.6260523 >>6260503 >Draw looser what does this mean, i don't understand sorry. Do you mean hold my pen looser, and focus on smoother softer lines? Do you mean more loose with my fundamentals and not focus on making them right?

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:10:37 2022 No.6260529

>>6260518
Completely disregarded my point as just "scribbling." No, it's not "scribbling." You could be combining a mix of the pillow method and a looser, gestural way of sketching so you don't get stiff poses like what he posted. The whole point of drawing digitally is that you can do a cleaner pass on top of a rougher sketch. It's not to say that you should abandon simplifying the body into simple shapes like the pillow method, but gesture should be taken into account, which is why I suggested drawing looser to start.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:13:57 2022 No.6260535

>>6260529
You don’t know if that drawing is a 2nd or 3rd or 9th pass unless he discloses it. If the drawing turned out >stiff< it has nothing to do with the amount of underpasses one uses. In fact, I think that would make your work even stiffer relying on too many passes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:17:19 2022 No.6260538 >>6260535 You cherry picked one sentence in my post and ignored the rest. Either reread and actually address what I said or pyw please. I need to see the skill level of someone who is this dense.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:22:51 2022 No.6260545

>>6260538
I didn’t skip over what you said. I already said >>6260518 to deviate from the textbook. Mainly the topic of contrapposto and the method they’re using. If you’re being too textbook about it, your drawing ends up looking stiff. That’s what I’m getting at.

And (you) still did not provide any examples of what you mean by “stiff” other than “use more layers bro, lol”. Assuming you know the amount of layers they’re using and thinking that’s what’s at fault here. What the real problem is it’s because he JUST TRIED a brand new method. So he is being >>>>literal<<<< about the process. Just practice more and he’ll be more lose.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:23:50 2022 No.6260547 >>6260545 loose* it’s morning, I just woke up. don’t hit me kudasai.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:24:53 2022 No.6260548 >>6260545 Pyw

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:25:10 2022 No.6260549 >>6260545 >>6260538 you're wasting time on someone who, despite been drawing only anatomy for 6 straight years, is still obviously perma/beg/ go draw instead

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:26:44 2022 No.6260554 >>6260549 It’s never a waste of time to help people unless they’re a chronic tweaker.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:29:00 2022 No.6260556

>>6260545
It's not about layers. You're taking that sentence way too literal. I only made that comment because it's what I went through when I was starting which was focusing too much on making everything clean and correct on the first sketch. Which made me way slower and made my drawings stiffer. Honestly other anon is right, this is a waste of time. I should be drawing. You're all on your own.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 11:42:36 2022 No.6260564
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What this nigga needs to do is draw trad more. Excessive analness for fundies and construction is an exceedingly prevalent digitalcel issue. Gesture (no, not the line of action kind), looseness and feel for shapes is something you inevitably and naturally acquire as you draw trad. There is no way you can draw trad a lot and not pick it up unless you are clinically retarded.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:07:15 2022 No.6260580 >>6260564 Your work and not the first anigirl reaction image you find on google images, please?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:14:31 2022 No.6260585 File: 491 KB, 688x991, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ok so how do i draw loose? google just said be relaxed and youtube just says don't be rigid. You might as well tell me to be happy or sad when drawing.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:15:50 2022 No.6260588 >>6260585 Practice 30 second gesture drawings

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:20:34 2022 No.6260592 File: 167 KB, 1065x1331, CEE17C20-AE7A-432F-AB61-CEB989922495.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6260585

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:23:03 2022 No.6260594 >>6260588 i used to do that but people told me to stop, ill try again thanks >>6260592 thanks im not sure what i got wrong though

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:25:31 2022 No.6260599 >>6260594 Nothing, it’s a 30 second example.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:26:41 2022 No.6260602 >>6260599 Maybe I’ll make a video for you if I have time for explanation

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 12:27:40 2022 No.6260604 >>6260599 >>6260599 oh ok, i'll try them, thanks

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 13:52:17 2022 No.6260703 >76 posts >only 4 people have posted their work

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 13:53:06 2022 No.6260704 >>6260703 It's your fault it became that way.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 13:54:40 2022 No.6260708 >>6260704 No, it's all thanks to the schizo who gets his jimmies all rustled everytime 2000 or that odi guy posts among other things. I'm inclined to believe you're him.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:02:26 2022 No.6260720 >>6260585 Just relax and stop thinking about it. I've never seen someone who had absolutely no intuition for art before. No wonder all your art is so stiff.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:02:51 2022 No.6260721

>>6260424
I don't think this looks very stiff, but you could maybe make her a bit more loose, it's up to you.
You could maybe lower her head, usually when you raise your arms the shoulders raise to around the heigh of the chin-mouth.
>>6260585
I like this one
>>6260462
The loli looks cute

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:04:16 2022 No.6260723 >>6260462 YES

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:24:42 2022 No.6260749 >>6260704 Wrong person, dork.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:32:07 2022 No.6260762

off topic but I use an xp-pen 12 and i feel like the drivers mess up my pc.
It's hard to explain but i don't download viruses or anything malicious yet my display drivers act weird, ike i see graphical glitches on screen and other stuff, like my screen starts flickering.
This only started happening since i used xp-pen divers, two of my laptops just ran so slow i couldn't do anything, i had to get a new hard drive and i have no idea why this happened at all.
My new desktop has some weird issues now too.
Are xp-pen tablets known to cause this issue?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:33:34 2022 No.6260766 >>6260762 >>6242547

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:35:00 2022 No.6260772 >>6260762 You can’t have these issues if you are a proud owner of the Apple Ipad Pro 12.9 2018 - 2022. You simply cannot.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:52:31 2022 No.6260818 Zbrush or Blender if I want to make 3d stuff?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 14:58:31 2022 No.6260828 >>6260818 They're completely different tools. Ask /3/, retard.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 15:00:01 2022 No.6260832 >>6260828 Stop being rude!

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 15:04:18 2022 No.6260841 >>6260828 /3/ will shit on blender because it's free and they already wasted hundreds of dollars on other programs. Blender is perfectly fine.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 15:12:41 2022 No.6260860 >>6260818 Zbrush if artistic and actual skill Blender if completely technical and can make good results relying solely on numbers and logic

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 15:33:14 2022 No.6260910 File: 68 KB, 900x900, yaa gomen gomen.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6260704 I didn't mean to do it teehee, Gosh! I'm just such a klutz sometime...

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>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 16:17:44 2022 No.6260999 >>6260978 Best in the thread

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 16:18:36 2022 No.6261000 >>6260978 HOTE. Got a social??

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 16:20:01 2022 No.6261003 >>6260978 Janny being giga gay again. It wasn't even nsfw. What a shame.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:35:21 2022 No.6261131 File: 909 KB, 768x768, outbound.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tick tock

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:36:24 2022 No.6261134 >>6261131 Not art. >>>/g/

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:49:07 2022 No.6261156 File: 318 KB, 2048x1406, 1604722007934.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6261131 Amazing, thank you for sharing made my heart go doki doki

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:50:03 2022 No.6261160

from last thread's requests https://files.catbox.moe/vv5ya3.png
need to know if it's everything in the right place before going onward. nevermind the lonely lollipop down there, I realized it'd take forever to draw a garden of those so I'll leave it for the painting
>>6260424
I like the doll joints and the synthetic limbs but you really should use a smaller brush size when doing those bangs on the face cause it adds too much noise to it with all the pointy bits and stuff

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:51:45 2022 No.6261164 >>6261160 This looks extremely awkward and stiff, particularly the head. She's also got that 1000 yard stare going on.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 17:53:07 2022 No.6261167

>>6261160
Her forearms feel too long to me, especially her left one.
I also think she feels a bit stiff, but not too much, maybe around the neck area.
Other than that, the bottom of her shorts, I'm assuming that's a very early sketch, right? because those wrinkles seem weird.

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 18:11:22 2022 No.6261199

>>6261164
okay, I'll exaggerate the head angle some more
>>6261167
noted. arms should be easier to fix than the head
>those wrinkles seem weird
lol yeah just placeholder. it's supposed to be one of those bloomer style shorts. I was a bit more worried about the pose and proportions

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 18:19:26 2022 No.6261219
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This one's gonna be really rough. I'm a permabeg with clothes, and I have no idea how to draw the hair on the area I duplicated to the left. I don't think it would make much sense for her to sit on her own hair, so I'm trying to draw it laying behind her on the bed.
Any help?
>>6261199
>it's supposed to be one of those bloomer style shorts
Yeah I thought that was the case. The pose itself may need some more thought, I think she would be a bit unbalanced with so much weigh leaning towards the front, unless she was kneeling on the ground or something, and the neck and upper torso seems too tense imo.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 18:24:27 2022 No.6261229 >>6261219 >I don't think it would make much sense for her to sit on her own hair, so I'm trying to draw it laying behind her on the bed. Yeah, that's how it works irl. Looks ok. You could draw more of the hair flat on the bed.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 19:26:20 2022 No.6261360 File: 57 KB, 530x469, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6258818 >>6260999 Thanks >>6259368 No, I don't color. >>6259556 >>6261000 Got none.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 20:04:47 2022 No.6261445 >>6260978 >>6261360 gib link deleted again

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 20:34:41 2022 No.6261513 >>6261360 Stop uploading nsfw and just link it to catbox.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 20:40:41 2022 No.6261525 >>6261513 Hey, more work for him if he’s doing it on purpose just to own the mods.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:00:23 2022 No.6261568 >>6261513 NTA, but tell the janny to stop being a salty faggotron. That wasn't even remotely nsfw.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:02:22 2022 No.6261571 >>6261445 Use the archives >>/ic/thread/6258466#p6261360

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:15:21 2022 No.6261598 >>6258466 does anyone has some materials on ponpu or lilandy or mrpotato ? i'm kinda digging these styles

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:23:24 2022 No.6261607 >>6261571 The artist probably deleted that himself.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:30:53 2022 No.6261619 >>6261607 >t. damage controlling Janny We're on to you cunt. Calm the fuck down with your little power trip already.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:32:57 2022 No.6261624 File: 77 KB, 640x480, 1397671693817.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >he does it for free

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:34:20 2022 No.6261630 >>6261219 I wish my work was as cute as yours

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:44:25 2022 No.6261643 >>6261630 /lsg/ mentorship program

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:50:36 2022 No.6261649 >>6261643 You just know someone is going to end up with at least five years bunking next to Tyrone. >ayo whatchu in fo' >n-nothing just some doodles of a thousand year o- >pick up my muhfuggin soap nigga

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:53:01 2022 No.6261654 >>6261649 >you get paired with thaddeus mcmichael not a bad deal

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:54:28 2022 No.6261658 >>6261654 That black guy is a complete anomaly and you're not going to see his kind in there.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 21:57:00 2022 No.6261661 >>6261658 I wouldn’t see any because I’d be the only one.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 22:49:29 2022 No.6261776 >>6261661 thaddeus, when did they let you out?

Anonymous Tue Sep 6 22:51:23 2022 No.6261780
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>>6261776
I was fortunate enough to see one of his first posts from /biz/ when he was released. Don't tell me this guy is posting here right now and that's him you're replying to.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 22:58:04 2022 No.6261798 >>6261780 I was joking and that's probably not him. Although, I wouldn't be surprised if he lurked or shitposted in this general before. I've noticed people from all corners of the western lolisphere appear here briefly.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 6 23:14:12 2022 No.6261824 File: 23 KB, 200x300, E454E34C-B591-4721-8480-C978FBF830E4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6261624

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 00:08:56 2022 No.6261889 >>6261824 most based VN ever made

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 04:15:51 2022 No.6262198 >>6261824 Didn't they go to jail? Bunch of Germans. Not sure what the rules are like over there.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 05:07:36 2022 No.6262234 >>6262198 according to the infamous wikipedia page, lolicon is completely legal there unexpected to say the least but good for you kraut friends

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 05:26:24 2022 No.6262260 File: 459 KB, 1802x1530, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] she looks kinda fat here, i don't know if i did it right

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 05:53:12 2022 No.6262304 File: 463 KB, 1802x1530, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6262260 fixed up the head a bit, i don't know if igot her torso right, as her head covers most of the top at this angle

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 08:27:36 2022 No.6262486

>>6262260
where is her weight distributed? where is her right arm? is she resting with her hip on the sofa and the elbow on the floor, or is she in the process of falling?
try doing this pose with your own body. note where your hip and shoulder axis are. this should tell you more on how to approach the illustration.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 12:34:37 2022 No.6262698 poses https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65xSeZuk3MI https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKFYjY9ruhE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTlfx8ffLTk

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 13:29:19 2022 No.6262746 File: 1.69 MB, 2340x4160, IMG_20220907_092713282.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I drew a loli during a class, I am not a lolicon but I was inspired by Etna from Disgaea, a game I played when I was younger.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 13:45:38 2022 No.6262758 >>6262746 Is like Aeon Flux as a loli

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 13:59:04 2022 No.6262773 >>6262746 you should be careful drawing lolicon during class, you could get in trouble!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 14:03:59 2022 No.6262776 >>6262773 Nobody cares, I am like a ghost. Also, this is not hentai.

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 14:17:25 2022 No.6262785

>>6262773
Man that reminds me of this time in college when I showed sone girl my sketch book. I didn’t think I drew that many little girls in it but it was enough for her to notice the pattern and asked “so what’s up with all the little girls?” I didn’t think there was anything weird about it at the time because I was kinda autistic and they were all fully clothed and wholesome pics. I don’t remember how I explained it away but it was really embarrassing but I didn’t really learn my lesson from it. I still draw a disproportionate amount of little girls and post it like it’s normal. Lol maybe I’m more autistic now

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 14:22:50 2022 No.6262793 >>6262785 I learned to draw boobs specificaly to reduce the suspiciousness of my notebooks...

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 14:28:12 2022 No.6262800 Based janny deleteing all of the cancer from this thread has inspired me to apply to be a janny in the future and keep my own perfered generals squeaky clean in the future. Cracking down on autism is the only way to save ic.

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:22:14 2022 No.6262857

>>6262260
This is a pretty hard thing to draw.
I feel like you didn't get her weight on the couch right, but I don't know how to help you there because I don't know how to do it myself.
I think maybe it would be uncomfortable to be in that position with her legs and feet up, you'd have to tense the lower back. She should probably keep the feet resting.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:23:24 2022 No.6262859 >>6262800 >it's good that 4chan is censoring things like twitter now i feel a "go back" is called for right now

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:26:19 2022 No.6262864 I fell in love with a Genshin character today for no reason at all and I stopped playing Genshin. But I reinstalled the game and I’ll put down $100 until I roll for (her). What is this feeling? It’s OVER.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:28:14 2022 No.6262868 >>6262864 Oh um, right, I found a newfound purpose for drawing and it’s for (her).

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:29:41 2022 No.6262869 >>6262864 >>6262868 Post the bitch already.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:38:34 2022 No.6262886 >>6262869 She’s NAL. I know I memed characters like Klee in the past but I did so ironically. She’s actually true love.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:44:49 2022 No.6262898 >>6262859 >now newfag, I...

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:55:27 2022 No.6262906 >>6262886 >She’s NAL.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 15:57:21 2022 No.6262907 >>6262906 Hai, sou sou. NAL.

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 16:01:25 2022 No.6262913
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>>6260721
thanks, i kinda wanted a higher head but i'll keep what you said in mind
>>6261160
thanks
I was a bit confused on how to do the tummy for the doll parts to be honest, like out a regular one or like seperate the torso from the pelvis in. I kinda messed up with the hair yeah, it's the same brush size though.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 17:45:12 2022 No.6263045 Where did all the artists go?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 17:45:35 2022 No.6263046 >>6263045 We are drawing, it just takes time to reach something to post.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 17:51:28 2022 No.6263057 >>6258466 How do you draw teens? I got commissioned a HS comic and all my chars look like 30yos because that what HS aged people look like on t.v.

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 17:55:19 2022 No.6263063

>>6263057
Big eyes / foreheads. Usually roundish chins (tho depends on the style, at the very least they shouldn't be very pointy), very few and simple features, avoid putting too many details, the "cleaner" the face looks, the younger the character will seem.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 17:57:14 2022 No.6263064 >>6263057 like 14-15yo? I'd go for loli-ish facial features but on an adult's body around 6 heads tall

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:01:40 2022 No.6263071 >>6263057 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n01OSShDWi0

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:22:20 2022 No.6263107 >>6263045 everyone is watching the apple keynote probably

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:22:53 2022 No.6263108 >>6263045 Moved on to somewhere better, which is completely understandable.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:24:52 2022 No.6263111 >>6263108 Good for them. I wish them the best. Anyway…

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:26:03 2022 No.6263113 >>6263111 Seething janitor hands wrote this post.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:27:37 2022 No.6263118 >>6263057 See the chart in the book within the sticky in the OP.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:42:31 2022 No.6263141 >>6263045 Not posting my art here ever when there's actual pedophilic post and content freely posted here.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:45:12 2022 No.6263144 >>6263108 Twittercord isn't better, just a different kind of shit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:53:41 2022 No.6263156 >>6263108 There aren't many good places for lolicon artists, however.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:54:28 2022 No.6263159 >>6263064 That's exactly what's making it not work. Teens don't have adult bodies, even 18-20yos still look wonky sometimes. I think it's the arms, legs and some facial features like ears and eyes being off-proportion.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:55:38 2022 No.6263161 >>6263156 Pixiv. It's easier to learn Japanese than to deal with woke bullshit and hypocritical moderation.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 18:58:27 2022 No.6263162 File: 58 KB, 220x176, 5634596F-4170-4316-9BBE-54FE7F8FF6EC.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6263161 Okay bye. So anyway….

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 19:02:13 2022 No.6263167 >>6263144 How is the twitterdiscord thing anyway?

Anonymous Wed Sep 7 20:11:12 2022 No.6263262
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why are you guys so cringe, pathetic and miserable?
Nobody uohhhhs, cunny posts, talks about lolis, posts cute girls, talks about artists or anything.
On the odd occasion somebody does post it, you get mad at them.
You just stay mad and want others to be mad.
Most of you faggots dont even draw to boot.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 20:17:43 2022 No.6263273 >>6263262 >Nobody uohhhhs, cunny posts, talks about lolis, posts cute girls, talks about artists or anything. All of this is prohibited conduct.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 20:26:53 2022 No.6263279 >>6263262 It’s just Aunty Dotty being mad again. Everyone else is busy enjoying life outside of this website.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 20:29:49 2022 No.6263282 >>6263279 Uh, misspelled his name. Oh well, he isn’t important enough.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 21:54:45 2022 No.6263402 This guy makes some nice stuff https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpd0n9H-HdK4GplD5RGvIDg/featured how hard is it to learn what he’s doing?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 23:02:51 2022 No.6263472 >>6262859 >what do you mean you'll mass delete my derailment attempts that's... that's not fair! I'm going to make ic great again and all you'll be able to do is seethe

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 7 23:57:25 2022 No.6263526 >>6263472 So anyway…

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:03:23 2022 No.6263530 cringe general. you should have at least 1 loli drawing to post by now.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:05:39 2022 No.6263531 >>6263530 >by now You usin’ a stopwatch or something?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:19:13 2022 No.6263545 File: 1.20 MB, 1596x2089, 390.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:22:33 2022 No.6263552 >>6263545 Good balance, nice gesture. Not a fan of the western style desu, but regardless I'd consider shortening her neck. Nice work.

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:23:35 2022 No.6263554

>>6263545
Also, forgot to say, it's a quick 1 hour warm up since I've been away from drawing digitally for a while now. I want to write this short comic and I'm playing with the visuals and style. Probably will be this watercolour look but I'm not sure about the style itself.

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:32:59 2022 No.6263567

>>6263552
The western aesthetic is kinda to divorce the idea about being just plain lolicon. The comic I want to write is kinda like this Bait-and-switch twist about one of the main girls being molested by her brother, older kids and some adults and I will give tons of hints to that along the short story to see if anyone can point out what is truly happening beneath the surface, so if I go full lolicon it denounce a little it's the true nature of the story but if I use some artsy more serious aesthetic I think any normal reader will be tricked in to thinking it's just some gays ass western comic about childhood with some weird stuff in the mix.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 00:43:51 2022 No.6263589 Any loli AI in the making lolibros?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 01:30:57 2022 No.6263662 >>6263589 AI being used to create cheese pizza is why it's gonna get got.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 01:36:29 2022 No.6263671 >>6263589 Stable Diffusion, install only on linux for now though

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:17:57 2022 No.6263806
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I wanna try to get deeper into backgrounds / full pictures.
Aside from an obvious lack of overall details, how are the values?
Looking at it zoomed out (like a thumbnail) I think the light coming from the window creates too much contrast and ends up leading the eye towards it, I wanna make it clear that the room is all dark, so even tho it's nighttime there's more light outside, hence the light on the room comes from the window.
If anyone knows a good reference for this it'll probably help a lot.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:24:50 2022 No.6263815 >>6263046 I stopped drawing. I'm AI main now

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:26:12 2022 No.6263818 >>6263159 My 15 year old (f.) cousin could easily pass for a 10 year old.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:27:44 2022 No.6263823 >>6263806 You have the perspective inverted on the bed, nonny. Cute girl though, no complaints with her

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:29:56 2022 No.6263825 >>6263823 >the perspective inverted on the bed I don't get it

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:39:26 2022 No.6263838 File: 904 KB, 3202x2672, Screen Shot 2022-09-07 at 8.31.03 PM copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6263825

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:45:19 2022 No.6263846 >>6263838 Alright, I wasn't taking vanishing points into consideration for the initial sketch but I'll keep it in mind.

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:52:44 2022 No.6263857

>>6263815
>>6263806
I really like this but I feel like you're doing a disservice to your skills and time by showing the whole bed and more of the room, sure you're addding more adding more information and didn'tdo anything wrong,, but you're not really showing anything new.

Like if there was some giant dude sleeping in the bed and that small girl big dude would add to to the composition and would look good. Or was after a party and there was shit around the room, the state of the room would add to it or something to make the right side of the picture more interesting.

Like you could cut off most of the picture, show the girl and show enough to indicate the bed and it would look more appealing.

Saito Naoki talks about this in his book and how people ruin art by showing the whole body and not realises that less is sometimes more.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 03:57:10 2022 No.6263863 >>6263857 Yeah I get it. I mentioned there where details missing, but I guess that wouldn't really fix the issue. I'll see what to do, I may crop it a lot. Thanks.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 04:34:18 2022 No.6263923 >>6263806 Make the bed cover a lighter color than her dress. Instant pop out.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 04:36:16 2022 No.6263926 >>6263838 They're diverging the right way, you retard. It's almost an orthographic perspective so who cares

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 04:42:28 2022 No.6263942
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>>6263926
This post here is precisely why you cannot properly critique someone because you run the risk of infuriating a cocksucking fanboy.
>It's almost orthographic perspective who cares
You're the primary reason why people stagnate, ironically you're doing collateral damage trying to defend your little fap artist that helps you get your balls to drop.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 04:55:39 2022 No.6263966 >>6263942 Filtered by a simple word? you didn't address any point. Stop giving advice, micuck. You don't know shit about perspective.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 05:06:07 2022 No.6263988 >>6263926 >>6263966 what the fuck? you're wrong, so why do you have such an attitude?

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 05:27:36 2022 No.6264016

>>6263838
Just eyeball that shit and move on. This autistim is why nobody here ever makes anything creative, you fags are slaves to perfection rather than making visually appealing art. Ffs, You put plumb lines on the bedsheets as if was an error for the sheets to hang off a bed like a dumbfuck.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 05:45:17 2022 No.6264034 File: 1.91 MB, 220x164, michael-jordan-smiling.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6261131 Tic tac???

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 06:06:00 2022 No.6264049
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>>6263806
Pretty appealing artwork, and overall great work. I have a few minor suggestions:
- Consider cropping the canvas vertically to the girl. Your current canvas size would be fine IF she was in a detailed room and the environment was a more important part of the artwork. But there's a lot of dead space on the right with nothing interesting.
- Minor perspective issues on the girl. The cup needs to be redrawn (should be facing more downward) and the girl's left shoulder looks crooked because of the hair overlap. You should probably move all that hair behind her shoulder.
- The pillows look glued on the headrest. Make them a little more angled backwards, and add some thickness to the sides
- It's weird how the girl's hair has a solid curtain shape at the back. Add some small gaps to make it look more natural
- The frills on her right leg could maybe have more flare

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 06:54:28 2022 No.6264087 >>6264016 Basic perspective isn’t perfectionism you perma/beg/. And I complimented the drawing he did of the loli herself you faggot. So quite acting like I’m craving by giving simple advice for the bg.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 08:06:46 2022 No.6264158 File: 149 KB, 1366x604, Gura-chan 12.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I tried to draw my oshi in different outfits.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 13:14:42 2022 No.6264533 >>6264158 If you drew this, it looks really good, tho there's little to see on the outfits

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 13:51:44 2022 No.6264571 >>6264087 You're a faggot and your redline is shit

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 14:02:36 2022 No.6264588 >>6263838 >redliner can't even draw arrows properly This general is endless entertainment.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 14:06:02 2022 No.6264596 >>6264588 In his defense I draw my arrows like that, too. In one swoop. Sort of like drawing a star that you learned in kindergarten.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 15:55:39 2022 No.6264755 File: 1.02 MB, 1641x2919, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] crit? I know the dude's left hand isn't holding anything, i made the bucket too comically big and forgot

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:05:52 2022 No.6264770

>>6263806
It doesn't feel like she's properly sitting on the bed. Almost like she's slightly levitating.

>>6264755
It feels like two different drawings merged into one. There's a lack of cohesion between the two subjects and what's supposed to tie them.
You can resolve the stiffness by exaggerating your gesture/sketch more. Right now it'd be difficult to fix the drawing as it is. I'd crop the girl and have her look to a weird creature or something as she is now.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:06:01 2022 No.6264771 >>6264755 Both figures need to be drawn relative to the horizon line.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:06:57 2022 No.6264772 Any lucky using AI for loli art?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:07:02 2022 No.6264773 >>6264755 Does this unironic permabeg have a name?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:08:20 2022 No.6264777 >>6264773 The pedoanon

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:12:38 2022 No.6264783 >>6264770 i legit have no clue how to make it less stiff, she's standing, am I meant be making her bend more than she is now? i feel like she'd fall if i add more gesture. Same with the dude, if i bend him more is would look weird.

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:12:49 2022 No.6264784
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>>6264755
A couple of things.
First, I think she's way too long... I'll leave that up to you, I don't know what style you are aiming towards.
Second I agree with the other anon that this looks like two unrelated drawings pasted together, I think with the angle on the man's feet you should reposition the girl like picrel.
You would have to redraw the bucket, the edit I made is insufficient.
As a side note, I think the girl's expression is too weak considering what's happening.
Maybe her eyes should be open wide, smaller pupils?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:13:18 2022 No.6264787 >>6264773 at least he draws you know what I’m about to say next and it starts with “unlike”

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:13:39 2022 No.6264788 >>6264784 Also forgot to mention I don't think she looks too stiff considering she's just standing. And the balance is well done.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:13:49 2022 No.6264789 >>6264784 now the water wont hit her.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:14:10 2022 No.6264790 >>6264789 I know, that's why I said >You would have to redraw the bucket, the edit I made is insufficient.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:14:29 2022 No.6264792 >>6264784 alright thanks, i wanted to make her smaller but somebody always keeps saying the head looks too big so i end up juust doing regular people proportions

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:17:37 2022 No.6264796

>>6264571
You’re a /beg/ and desperate for anything you can ad hom. My “redline” was literally just me using the straight line tool to show the direction of all anon’s perspective lines. And I dunno why I’m disputing this with you. The anon who drew the things already responded and took the critique like a professional. So fuck off

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:20:47 2022 No.6264799 >>6264796 It’s a pretty nit picky thing to point out. The cropping advice was fine and wouldn’t matter if he was going to have cropping in mind.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 16:57:14 2022 No.6264862 File: 1.02 MB, 1543x2924, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ok i tried making the guy's left arm reach in the background more, and make the bucket at an angle. This way the water tilts towards the fore-ground and on to her.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 17:00:51 2022 No.6264869 >>6264796 NTA but the reason why the perspective appears wrong (it isnt) is because they sheets are not laid uniformly on the bed. Look again and you can see the far side touches the ground while the close side is merely halfway down the frame.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 17:30:13 2022 No.6264953 >>6264862 I'm not sure about how you redrew the guy's feet. I understand he's placing his left foot forwards, but to me it looks awkwardly like his legs have different lengths. I like that part more how it was before desu

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 17:51:31 2022 No.6264982 >>6264588 >you have to draw perfect arrows for some shit you scribbled our but redlining perspective really upsets me Ngmi

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 17:59:52 2022 No.6264993

>>6264869
Wtf are you talking about? The artist took the advice and didn’t make these retarded excuses you faggots are. If that was the explanation he would have said so. That still would change the fact that the horizontal planes of the top and bottom of the mattress moved towards each other as they moved toward the foreground. Inverted perspective. The top and leg of the head board lines did the same thing. The sill line for the window wasn’t in line with anything else. I specifically didn’t redline the sheets because they are variable. I even circled the parts each line was supposed to be connected to to clarify but apparently that went right over your heads.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 18:01:09 2022 No.6264995 I want an AI that can make a loli daughter for me

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 20:31:38 2022 No.6265199 Behold! The constructoid begins to chimp out elsewhere >>6265184

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 20:33:34 2022 No.6265200 >>6265199 >constructoid I'll humor you, post your work.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 20:47:06 2022 No.6265217 >>6265199 Are you the guy who automatic romatic maiden draws (or at least pretends to) while using construction then tell everyone that you don't construct? Go be a deceiving cunt elsewhere.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 21:49:46 2022 No.6265316 >>6265199 is this the guy who seethes extremely hard when any anon get's the slightest amount of praise?

Anonymous Thu Sep 8 22:04:29 2022 No.6265336

>>6265316
"nothing against praise just the idea that you need it to do anything, everyone enjoys praise but if its to the point you only do things for it or if you get it, then it becomes a problem, i dont know how this is so hard to understand its basic human function" - Farmer, 2022

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 22:04:53 2022 No.6265338 >>6264995 I want a loli that can make a loli daughter for me

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 8 22:07:52 2022 No.6265342 >>6265336 two word rebuttal postive reinforsement.

Anonymous Fri Sep 9 02:13:27 2022 No.6265601
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>>6264862
i think a large part of it feeling off is the expression and pose

i am nothing but a lazy beg so please disregard or correct me as necessary, but i made my adult lean forward, as though there was a heavy weight in the bucket, and that he doesn't want to splash himself, and i made the loli flinch/guard/pose as if she really was expecting a bucket of ice cold water to splash down everywhere

mine is also scaled differently- the loli and guy in your pic seem to almost be from two different artists, i cant pinpoint why however

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 02:19:43 2022 No.6265610 >>6265601 This critique is pretty decent, good job.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 05:45:17 2022 No.6265803 >>6265601 thanks, i guess i couldn't come up witha good pose or ref

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 05:48:17 2022 No.6265806 File: 265 KB, 1365x975, Yaeka-chan 01.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6264533 Thank you, I'll draw another one with the entire body. For now, here is this Yaeka-chan study.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 07:06:29 2022 No.6265888 File: 1.27 MB, 782x1869, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] sketch >>6265806 >>6264158 how do you draw so neat and clean?

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 09:41:59 2022 No.6265989 >>6264796 >>6264993 Your shitline didn't make the piece any better and you're salty because people questioned the usefulness of your critique. You're not exempt for criticism just because it made a """"""correction"""""".

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 10:19:32 2022 No.6266032 File: 55 KB, 446x842, hello lsg2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 10:32:02 2022 No.6266042 >>6265806 Cute. CUUUUUUUTE!!!!!

Anonymous Fri Sep 9 13:21:03 2022 No.6266173
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>>6265888
This one has balance issues too imo
If you are gonna push her waist forward from her back / head then you have to push the legs and feet back to sustain the weight
>>6266032
The smile looks weird to me, it kinda looks like it doesn't belong to that face

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 17:26:18 2022 No.6266515 rip

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 17:28:22 2022 No.6266521 >>6265806 Again CUTE

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 21:25:54 2022 No.6266838 File: 142 KB, 523x568, 20909142435.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how many hours do you sleep everyday?

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 21:42:27 2022 No.6266861 A young girl was crying outside my apartment for a while as if someone died. Unsure what it was about. I haven't heard genuine crying in a long time. Felt bad.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 21:47:29 2022 No.6266867 >>6266861 So what the flying fuck are you drawing anyway.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 21:49:05 2022 No.6266870 >>6266867 That's an idea I could draw later...a young girl crying outside my apartment. Thank you for pointing that out.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 23:31:15 2022 No.6266968 if your older art is the most cringe awful stuff that you can't bare to look at, would you keep it on your profile just to show your progress? or would you delete it all? I have this dilemma

Anonymous Fri Sep 9 23:36:11 2022 No.6266972

>>6266968
most artists delete their old drawings from social networks, in my opinion they are something personal that at least I wouldn't show to just anyone, at the end of the day it doesn't matter, if you are already good at drawing, if those old drawings have ideas that can get you in trouble and ruin your followers growth then obviously delete them.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 23:39:43 2022 No.6266974 >>6266972 >most artists delete their old drawings from social networks No they don't. That's a you problem right there.

Anonymous Fri Sep 9 23:41:37 2022 No.6266976

>>6266972
It's not so much that I've changed what I draw
Put it this way:
a bad drawing of a flower isn't really a problem, but a bad drawing of a naked child? well now you have some intense cringe on your hands
I first started 4 years ago and I'm slowly getting better, but I can't stand to look at my old stuff... Well actually, I can't stand to look at any of my stuff

>>6266974
I'm surprised you'd try to argue that. Artist galleries disappearing is very common. Especially shota/loli artists.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 9 23:45:26 2022 No.6266979 >>6266974 yes they do, and I speak from personal experience, I have seen that almost all the artists that I like delete their oldest drawings and I know this because in pixiv and twitter I save them in my bookmarks and from nowhere they disappear.

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>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 09:43:34 2022 No.6267408 File: 215 KB, 1142x1268, 456.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6258466 why does she have so much porn bros?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 09:51:45 2022 No.6267423 >>6267408 she's cute and funny

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 11:24:17 2022 No.6267472 >>6267408 flavor of the month She had barely any porn before the anime started

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 11:27:38 2022 No.6267474 >>6266032 I find it odd your work looks strikingly similar to this one artist yet they sparsely upload in multiple places under different accounts. I don't get the autism.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 11:30:24 2022 No.6267477 >>6267474 That is, of course, if someone is pretending to be you for no reason. >>6267408 She didn't have that much when the show was airing. Odd for it to pick up after the second cour announcement.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 11:34:18 2022 No.6267478 File: 2.02 MB, 2000x2000, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] anybody watching prima doll?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 12:08:07 2022 No.6267493 anyone drawing?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 13:10:32 2022 No.6267527 >>6267493 I drew a bit, but nothing great https://files.catbox.moe/hjwqnm.png

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 13:17:36 2022 No.6267530 >>6267478 rightmost is cute please tell me her show is worth watching

Anonymous Sat Sep 10 13:17:38 2022 No.6267531
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>>6267493
I'm trying to paint this, but I'm going for something I'm not used to, I want to paint it all with a cold palette to make it rather relaxed to look at.
I don't know if I should still use warm colors on her to create contrast, or keep her cold and use only values to create said contrast.
It's gonna take a while

Anonymous Sat Sep 10 13:39:34 2022 No.6267550

>>6267530
Not op.
The rightmost character is kurumi from Lycoris Recoil. It's a decent show with good ratings. She isn't a main character, but still has an important role in the anime.

If anyone is intrested, the other characters (from right to left) are Faputa [made in abyss], Arsnotoria [Warau Arsnotoria Sun!], and chino [prima doll]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 13:40:51 2022 No.6267553 >>6267550 Chiyo* not chino. Sry.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 17:26:36 2022 No.6267775 File: 521 KB, 1600x1600, garden wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267493 well I'm trying but I've been struggling with getting anywhere past a sketch. must have scrapped at least half a dozen poses this week hope this one sticks

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 17:28:08 2022 No.6267778 >>6267775 I think her legs are bent too much

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 17:28:48 2022 No.6267779 >>6267531 Clavicles go around the neck with an S curve not past it. >muh style No, it's just wrong.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 17:34:51 2022 No.6267783 >>6267778 they certainly are. thx

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 18:05:11 2022 No.6267815 File: 72 KB, 789x584, 1655348289052.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267779 Can you redline me?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 18:25:37 2022 No.6267844 >>6267815 he cant simply even

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 18:47:14 2022 No.6267861 File: 115 KB, 1145x835, good morning i hate niggers.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267531

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 18:53:49 2022 No.6267869 >>6267861 Thanks

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 19:10:19 2022 No.6267894 >>6259020 >>6259035 do you guys use grey canvas ? i assume it's for ease strain for your eyes ? are there default options for canvas somewhere or you just pick colour that fits YOU most ?

Anonymous Sat Sep 10 19:11:58 2022 No.6267900

>>6267894
I use grey canvas because some anon here pointed out that the white background was annoying to look at when posted here for critique.
For drawing I don't care for it, tho there's a whole thing about using a proper colored background when painting, to have an easier time deciding the value on lights and shadows and whatnot.
I don't know about default color, I just darken it whenever I make a new file.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 19:31:26 2022 No.6267922 File: 30 KB, 543x434, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267894 Clip studio has default options for any canvas colour you could want.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 19:40:49 2022 No.6267929 >>6266838 About 30 years now

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 21:10:21 2022 No.6268017 >>6267900 >white background was annoying to look at when posted here for critique. that i can agree with >>6267922 thanks anon i'll try slapping a colored canvas layer in krita next time

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 21:44:29 2022 No.6268061 File: 70 KB, 1080x812, yes.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267478 no I'm watching the quintessential cunnykino

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 21:53:38 2022 No.6268073 >>6268061 >the only thing carrying the series is the pandering to loli/shotacons wasted potential

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 10 23:34:20 2022 No.6268181 >>6268073 I haven't read since the big battle that happened a few chapters after when Regu and Faputa met, did it get shitty? Or are you just saying the whole thing is carried by lolis and shotas

Anonymous Sun Sep 11 02:24:21 2022 No.6268358

>>6267775
she looks like a polio victim, i think you need to increase the diameter of the ankles/make her calves slightly larger- biologically speaking, the kind of v-shaped taper that female legs have from thighs to ankle only really appear after puberty, at this point it doesn't make sense to apply it

her face is drawn at an angle perpendicular to the ground but we are somewhat looking down at her from a 45 degree angle. With the placement of her hand in this 3d space, she would be leaning back and her center of gravity is going to make her fall backwards in the next few seconds because her right arm isn't actually supporting her weight at all

she could be hooking the back of her knees onto the edge of the seat to prevent herself from toppling backwards but they're kinda just loosely resting on the ground

and consider this- she's a child and therefore small- what kind of normal park bench is designed so that even kids need to have their lower legs at an angle for their upper legs to lie straight? I get that maybe you wanted her to be in this specific pose but it would've needed either something else for her to sit on OR you should have committed to a larger/taller bench

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 02:28:13 2022 No.6268360 >>6268358 *cont but don't get me wrong, those are lovely hands, hair, face, lovely drapery, but just give some thought to how a picture ought to make sense, doing so I feel gives a drawing more life and a sense of feeling right

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 02:28:55 2022 No.6268361 >>6261824 I never liked those drawings.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 03:26:03 2022 No.6268413 >>6267815 not him but just look at a 3d model on sketchfab or a real collar bone. Or just look up a bow and arrow

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 03:39:45 2022 No.6268430 File: 1.84 MB, 1184x900, practice.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I've copied a ton of these. Feel like they are getting better. >not a loli

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 05:31:18 2022 No.6268511 >>6268430 cute! now fap to the thought of her shyly riding your dick and don't post again until you cum

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 05:35:20 2022 No.6268517 File: 23 KB, 582x757, maymay.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 07:02:46 2022 No.6268574 >>6265989 Lol you are the biggest faggot on this board. You contribute jack shit and you bitch about those who try to help. Die in a fire, tranny

Anonymous Sun Sep 11 07:29:02 2022 No.6268597
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am i doing gesture right?
I'm trying the flow thing from michael hampton and vilppu where the lines are like waves on the sea and don't repeat but alternate
I have some real issues with sitting poses

Anonymous Sun Sep 11 07:38:17 2022 No.6268609

>>6268430
Looks great, I'm /beg/ but I'd really recommend learning how to do this without copying, like let's say I test you in an hour to draw this head without a reference only notes.
How would you go about it?
What would you write down?
If you can do this, i'd say you come close to mastering it, otherwise you just improved your copying skills.

From there you can use your notes to do other angles of that head. It won't be as difficult as you have experience with one you can eventually do it without no notes.

Anonymous Sun Sep 11 08:00:12 2022 No.6268624

>>6268358
>>6268360
it's all good anon, feel free to roast me while giving critique
thread rules say I can't post the reference here but yeah, the girl is tilting forward with her thighs against the bench's edge and knees hanging so I suppose the supporting hand should be closer to the edge as well
also thanks for clarifying that about kids legs. explains why I often struggle to match the leg proportions from my vitruvian loli
i'll post the progress once I get some rendering done

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 08:12:25 2022 No.6268628 quick doodles https://litter.catbox.moe/jsczo1.png

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 08:55:42 2022 No.6268647 File: 1.76 MB, 3704x1737, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] crit? i really tried to get gesture and balance right. I feel like the torso looks kinda big from the top though while the construction torso wasn't that big

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 09:00:54 2022 No.6268651 File: 416 KB, 870x1355, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6268647 i just realised i made her leg too big, hopefull this is better

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 10:33:28 2022 No.6268699 >>6268628 good job anon keep posting

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 10:41:21 2022 No.6268703 >>6268647 do you have a source on the left image? the torse isn't big per se, it's the angle of the shoulders that's off compared to the photo.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 10:42:38 2022 No.6268704 >>6268703 *torso

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 10:45:27 2022 No.6268707 >>6268703 https://www.pinterest.com.au/pin/850898923363459958/

Anonymous Sun Sep 11 11:55:53 2022 No.6268744
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>>6268707
the way i see it, in the reference she is just turned to the camera, with the left should being almost straight
your character - implied by the curved downward shoulder - slouches a bit forward in my opinion, which would probably impact the arm, which might even go in front of the chest irl.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 12:09:15 2022 No.6268756 >>6268744 her other shoulder is up but covered by the hair but i see what you mean, thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 14:17:07 2022 No.6268865 >>6268609 Thanks. Right now I'm just concerned with accuracy mostly and line quality.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 14:55:04 2022 No.6268915 once again I see an artist form lsg hit the popular section

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 17:49:56 2022 No.6269204 >>6268647 You tend to make heads that are way too big. I personally think heads are your weakest skill. Keep going anon. Hope you make it some day.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 18:59:34 2022 No.6269301 File: 626 KB, 1400x1600, garden wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6267778 >>6268360 is this better? turned the bench into a fountain to fit the concept had to erase a couple folds on the dress but I'll add them back later

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 20:52:22 2022 No.6269441 >>6269301 I think it's better, yeah

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 11 23:55:24 2022 No.6269664 >pedofile training thread Um... yikes as heck

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 12 00:24:38 2022 No.6269689 >>6269664 welcome new friend please, have a seat

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 12 01:05:47 2022 No.6269732 New thread; >>6269730 >>6269730 >>6269730

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