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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER OR /INT/ERMEDIATE IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
Use this thread instead of making new threads or post in the drawthread with fundamental exercises.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS using one of the following methods:
1. screenshot the image and post that instead
2. change camera capture settings to something smaller
3. send to computer and resize in MSPaint

READ THE STICKY:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

RECOMMENDED BOOKS FOR BEGINNERS:
- Keys to drawing
- Perspective made easy
- Figure - Design and invention
- Pen and Ink

TRY TO BE ACTIVE AND GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK.
When giving feedback, avoid vague "advice" - point what's wrong and try to give the anon you're quoting a clear direction to improve their art (study heads < watch THIS VIDEO about head structure, read THIS SECTION of THIS ARTIST'S BOOK, etc).
You, feedback seeking anon, should also try to be clear and concise when asking for critique/help. When posting your artwork, say what you want help with, and what's your goal with the study/artwork.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3uxMdokX68 [Embed]

REMINDER TO IGNORE POSTS VIOLATING RULE 1
"All images and discussion should pertain to the critique of visual artwork."
(ex art dumps, posts without text, posters that don't ask questions or seek help)

PREVIOUS THREAD >>6163992

>> No.6167227
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>> No.6167229

im going to mass reply to everyone next time i draw

>> No.6167231

sometimes I practice drawing by smearing my shit on the wall and using my finger

>> No.6167247

>>6167231
Your parents would kick you out of the cave, if they weren't eaten by saber tooth tigers the week before baka my head.

>> No.6167251
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Some practice with the mouse.

>> No.6167262
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Kobeni if she sneed

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>> No.6167287
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Hi beg. I dont give a shit about cloth and it shows in my output.

>>6167251
Your foliage brush mogs my yesterday attempt, i kneel

>> No.6167295

>>6167227
Why are you drawing henry stickmin faces on those bodies

>> No.6167296

>>6167287
fucker, thanks to you. i too am mass replying to everyone and picky about who to reply just like you do to me

>> No.6167310

>>6167227
nice breasts

>> No.6167317

>>6167287
Is not even that good, I did better on flockmod, But digitally you probably want to use a brush to this sort of detailed stuff since is not the same like doing with a pen or pencil.

>> No.6167338

I wanna draw titties but dont know what to do to start drawing

>> No.6167344

>>6167227
Draw them having sex.

>> No.6167354

how do you draw flat chested women? big booba is fucking easy

>> No.6167355
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how fuckt is this

>> No.6167402

>>6167354
>Draw nipples
>Don't define pectorals
?????

>> No.6167406
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Who do I study to be able to draw like this?

>> No.6167409

>>6167406
me

>> No.6167416
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Small warmup before finalizing a few commissions.

>> No.6167421

>>6167406
life

>> No.6167426

>>6167416
i hate this guy

>> No.6167429

>>6167406
loomis

>> No.6167449

>>6167406
unironically loomis because of how much circular shapes you have to paint

>> No.6167451
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>>6167426
Are you one the chicks I was DM creepy stuff last month? Because I already told you, It's my right to make any interaction I want sexual and you could had blocked me at any moment. Did you? No, neither any of your friends did, so is much more your fault for being a victim than mine for just having alternative perspective on sociological paradigms.

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>>6167451

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>>6167459

>> No.6167473

>>6167451
Holy cringe nigger no wonder you can't have sex lmao!

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>>6167463

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>> No.6167513

what's a good video course for beginners?

>> No.6167514
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What stands out as an issue here

>> No.6167516

>>6167514
Proportion seems to be an issue
Hands
Feet

>> No.6167531

>>6167514
Her leg is completely disconnected from the hip.
They are like to pieces that fit in together, but your's is just kinda dangling to the side, the button is not placed on the hips either.
Try to picture the actual pelvis and where the femur would attach.

>> No.6167534

>>6167531
two pieces*
buttock*
Fucking autocorrect, never using you again.

>> No.6167546

>>6167531
I noticed her left leg was broken just after I uploaded

>> No.6167548

>>6167473
ctfu

>> No.6167552

>>6167473
kek

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>>6167514

>> No.6167560

>/int/s take over thread to get free asspats from /beg/s
it will never not be funny

>> No.6167562

>>6167560
he slips into his white nikes

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>>6167451
Finished another comm. Some Hacker to clean the pallet and now I have to work on the big boy stuff.

>> No.6167564

>>6167560
What do you think is /int/?

>> No.6167568

>>6167451
Imagine going full virgin rage about getting rejected a month ago nigger you're NGMI KEK

>> No.6167572
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New photo study, I like where this one is going.

>> No.6167574

>>6167568
I'm not really angry if that's what you are getting, and I really didn't get rejected either. I made a joke about how I wound shove my tongue so deep in to her pussy I would clean her cervix and that her uterus wound't shed the lining for 6 months and she did go full bitch on me, for a simple joke. So I keep egging her on. All that happened.

You know how women are, can't deal with jokes no more.

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how do i paint the metal?

>> No.6167579

>>6167574
nigger you are a weirdo sort yourself out

>> No.6167580

>>6167579
Nah.

>> No.6167586

>>6167451
this has to be a troll, post screencaps please and I will call you based

>> No.6167587
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>>6167580
Then enjoy being rejected and dying alone incel

>> No.6167589

>>6167587
I don't wanna no bitch who can't take jokes anyway. I mean, imagine taking this silly statement seriously to begin with. two months. three months tops, six months? That's just silly.

>> No.6167592

>>6167589
post screencaps gay larper

>> No.6167595

>>6167592
I'm not going to post it because I know I would just get banned for vendetta posting. If you want it so much just ask her.

>> No.6167596

>>6167595
you can post it as a catbox link turbofag, or link it to /b/

>> No.6167597

>>6167596
Too much work, an no guarantee I wound't get banned either. Ask her.

>> No.6167598

>>6167597
i don't even know who's ''her''

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>>6167575
I've also been struggling with metal lately but I found that metal tends to have very bright highlights on the parts directly facing the light source and around some edges. The shadows can also get very colorful if it's near another object.
Just another beginner so take this as a grain of salt and try to look at some references I guess.

>> No.6167600

>schizo larp
every time, and now it's associated with your work too lole

>> No.6167601

>>6167598
She is on the thread I'm pretty sure, probably reading this dumb stupid shit. Honestly, not my problem, I love your company, anon, really, I'm not being sardonic, but I have work to do, sorry.

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>>6167262
take off the foo foo
>>6167284
take off the clout chase
>>6167572
take off the wifi

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best I can get tonight I think :/

>> No.6167604

>>6167601
See >>6167600
this is embarrassing

>> No.6167606

>>6167560
maybe they could teach you something, try asking nicely.

>> No.6167608

>>6167606
they won't

>> No.6167611

>>6167606
>implying theres anything to learn here that i either cant figure out myself or find in loomis
if i need a ps hotkey rec ill come knocking but otherwise im good thanks

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how i draw things

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>>6167599
Here's a knife absorbing/reflecting a lot of color from the nearby object with the orange fruit chunks next to it. You can also see the bright highlight on the top edge of the knife while the bottom part has a dark edge.

>> No.6167615

>>6167604
Yeah, whatever I'm going to do, my respectable and lovable internet brand is ruined, how could I ever recover from this? Will my total 85 followers ever forgive me? I'm shaking, I'm shaking and crying, and my twitter was such wholesome place full of the most quirk and adorable stuff. Miserere mei deus, how could I ever survive.

>> No.6167623

>>6167599
>>6167613
thanks a lot!!! metal truly is interesting

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and then i draw more citadel

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>>6167623
No problem, also chrome tends to have very clear reflections even from a distance and gets way more colorful, almost like a warped painting inside a painting.
Steel doesn't really reflect stuff clearly unless it's right next to the object and even then it's usually just a color blob.
Again just a beginner maybe someone else can also chime in.

>> No.6167631

>>6167574
>>6167589
You don't have any charisma so your joke comes off as extremely cringe and sleezy. Being terminally online has deteriorated your social skills that even femanon cant stomach you.

>> No.6167632

>>6167631
I'm just trying to be sleezy actually.

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got my eyes open

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>>6167632
If the goal was not to get any pussy ever then it's working like a charm

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Been bored so I'm doing more 20's and 30's women
>>6167575
Study lotsa a knives and figure it out lol. Metal is reflective of course, so replicate it by having big contrasts and shapes and shadows that aren't uniform

>> No.6167649

>>6167643
>colored markers
but how do you not mess up

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>> No.6167689

>>6167589

Anon jokes have to be funny to be jokes. With comments like that you just come off as a creep and the fact that you don't seem to understand why means you have negative digits in emotional intelligence. Enjoy being a foreveralone.

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>> No.6167692

>>6167689
Lmao, emotional intelligence, that's some bullshit right there, what the hell I'm going to use emotional intelligence for anyway, what kinda of equation one does solve with that shit. You + me = love.

That's just gay, brah.

>> No.6167711

How do i get out of the loser mentality of ngmi?

>> No.6167715
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damn you references

>> No.6167718

>>6167649
Just sketch so you know what to fill and never use green. No matter how hard you try, green lines will be very very very visible.

>> No.6167722

>>6167711
Try to get turbo coomers to fap to your art.

>> No.6167727

>>6167612
start with gesture then do facial anatomy.

>> No.6167733

>>6167690
use a thinner brush for the love of god

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Skulls continue, I have been slacking though.

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>>6167355
the biggest issues

1. Jaw. You need to learn how to properly draw jaws. It is nearly vertical by the time it is at the ear. Your jaw is angled until it reach the jaw. Do a slight bump for the chin, 75% of the jaw at 30%~ or whatever angle, then a slight turn upwards
2. The rib cage is the most important part of the body visually. Properly drawing your rib cage makes life way easier.
3. Remember to draw the obliques above the top of the pelvis

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>>6167219
am i midbeg or highbeg

>> No.6167745

>>6167406
That house is going to lose it's entire property value in six months.

>> No.6167747

>>6167744
low to mid my friend. not a bad thing, keep grinding

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>>6167733
>thinner

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>>6167747
another anon told me to step up a notch of whatever i get cos of the crab effect
so i'm actually mid- to high-? got it, thanks anon :)

>> No.6167758

>>6167733
explain and which brush

>> No.6167762

>>6167756
Genuinely not crabbing you. It's good that your sketching and you're ready to start studying some more basic anatomy + fleshing out your figure drawing. Hard to tell where you're really at without seeing a more finished piece though. It's sloppy

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More mouse practice.

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>>6167762
>it's sloppy
that's the point, though? i wanna lean into the 00's handmade indie comic vibe. and i've been gaslit before so i've gotta take your critique with a grain of salt. too paranoid of this place and everything people have said.

>> No.6167788

>>6167558
I'd agree my ribcage was too large. I think the pelvis length is appropriate to it's size though, as it'd only need to be closer after you lower the ribcage size. So I could get away with cutting a bit of the rib cage and then making the legs correct length,

>> No.6167793

>>6167615
This plus the lunaticsoda spamming, you've been actively lately. Everything ok man?

>> No.6167796

>>6167284
Very stiff. Learn 2 gestures.

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>>6167793
Yeah? Normal I think. I just have more free time to shitpost and just doodle without care because I finished most of the work I had to do and I have more free time. I slowdown a lot if I have actual paid work to do because I like to take my time and make sure is something I will at least enjoy at the end.

>> No.6167804

>>6167560
>random schizo (nxxxbro) adds /int/ to beg thread OP
>random schizo campaigns tirelessly, like only a neet can, to dissuade the subsequent creation of /int/ and /draw/ threads with sheer disgusting mentally ill shitposting
>a few ints post here
>some random schizo cries about it
honestly wouldn't be surprised if it was all you

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>>6167406
marco bucci
>>6167492
very nice, looking forward to seeing it finished.
>>6167514
terrible anatomy. props for drawing the hands though, it's good practice.
>>6167572
cool. Your workflow looks very messy, but as long as the finished piece looks good then that's alright.
>>6167603
stop chicken scratching. don't add any detail before constructing the major shapes. Also wherever you learned head anatomy from is wrong, those are not the correct proportions of a head in profile view.
>>6167643
cool
>>6167687
bad composition, no focal point.
>>6167738
Be more mindful in construction. Define the skull as a box in perspective.
good practice, keep going.
>>6167744
beg.
>>6167772
terrible line quality. you need to commit to your lines in places where it matters, otherwise you lose all form in your drawing. You can't hide your lack of anatomy knowledge behind your shitty hatching.

>> No.6167813

>>6167772
It's prebeg chicken scratch, you're not the only person who has ever been shit, so I get irritated when shitters brute force their dunning krueger into existence due to thinking they're somehow better than everyone else who has gone through the shit drawing larval stages. Just take the L and admit it's shit and you can begin to improve in ernest

>> No.6167821

>>6167810
Pyw for any of your replies and critiques to matter. Not anyone you replied to btw, just saying.

>> No.6167828

>>6167629
Don't sell yourself short. Your observations are very pertinent.

>> No.6167842
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anatomy is weird

>> No.6167845

>>6167722
Ngmi

>> No.6167847

>>6167842
it isn't, you just forgot a whole shitload of muscle tissue, fat factor etc

>> No.6167849
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I still don't get head contruction with any method. I never get what to do with all of the lines and when does it turn into an actual face etc. And how do I make something different than the basic tutoria head.

>> No.6167850

>>6167849
contraction lines are just helper lines to keep your features lined up, or else they stray too far out like a boat that isn't tied down to the pier

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>>6167810
>wherever you learned head anatomy from is wrong
I'm just tryna learn basic loomis still. thx though

>> No.6167859

>>6167850
So how much helpers do i need to put down? I have trouble getting them to guide me.

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a cassowary

>> No.6167876

>>6167859
Features themselves or cheek protrusions can also be helpful landmarks

>> No.6167878

>>6167876
But isn't it wrong to just wing it, throw some eyes there and an nose here etc. Wouldn't it be just wonky ass clownman

>> No.6167879

>>6167878
That's why the construction lines guide you... and it's all contained within the head construction circle

>> No.6167882

>>6167879
Sorry to go back again, but I still don't understand how I use them on other heads than what the initial tutorial says. It breaks all the guidelines and shapes if I move a nose or the chin, in my mind. I can learn to draw the guides, but then I know how to draw guides, what do i do with them? I' m a retard beg, I'm not trying to be a bother or whine.

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>>6167882
Also what I don't get is that on the start the eyeline is in the middle of the circle, now it's the browline(but not always) and the eyeline is below that but in the end the eyes aren't even on the line, they are above it.

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>>6167882
>>6167882
idk man, i only draw for fun but - in my opinion, at this stage it doesn't have to be perfect or exact. i have always sucked at construction shit, i tend to just draw ahead, especially with imagination shit like the indian guy in webm related i just did. ( i censored one of the angles i suck at drawing, i need to practice it way more lmao)

in my opinion, for now just use construction to kind of hold it all together, and to give you a sense of 3D curvature and shit. it doesn't have to look exactly like the example images right now. it also can be single shitty lines for now.
just keep drawing and some of the ideas expressed in some books start to make sense slowly but surely. just honestly have fun, dont fall for draw a box/proko scams, and it all works out sooner or later. hampton figure drawing book is cool too and works best with fun with a pencil together, it's easier too. just have fun and check the board sticky once in a while b urself

>> No.6167947

>>6167919
Looking good, I'm still so much behind with all of this. All the guides go a little over my head because maybe my bugbrain needs to be told what to do with all of the different techniques. Suddenly just a face appears and i dont know how.

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I love turning cute twink boys into lactating cow women.

>> No.6167990

>>6167971
I love twink boys

>> No.6168004

>>6167919
nice style dude

>> No.6168006

>>6167842
that's fat bro
>t. fatass

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I don't know... I challenged myself to draw something that wasn't just a woman.

>> No.6168012

>>6167804
Nigger wanted to be a big fish in a small pond again hense why a certain socially retarded no sex having mongoloid kept making his own art the OP of this and serveral generals, but got ass hurt that other /int/s showed up here and diverted attention from his barely mid art so he now loudly complaines like faggot as he schizo spams in hopes that the other /int/s leave. It's honestly very pathetic.

>> No.6168021
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Anons recommend new masters academy for a beginner for video resource.

I currently watching Russian Drawing Course 1: The Fundamentals

I got past the first few lessons without issues but I'm getting filtered hard by the Asaro Planes lesson.

Are asaro plans just generally difficult?

I'm trying to use slighting for angle and proportions, but getting it to look right has been a bit difficult.

>> No.6168024

>>6167560
there's no /draw/, so this is now /draw/

>> No.6168025

>>6168021
Sorry for my spelling, just got off my shift and my brain is dead.

>> No.6168031

>>6167763
love this take on the op image

>> No.6168036

>>6168004
>>6167947
ty

>> No.6168062
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6168062

Did a sketch, trying to learn the basics

>> No.6168083

>>6167219
maybe it's a stupid question but how do you guys begin figure drawing? do you start with gesture? do you start with the head or with the torso? i am not really sure what i am doing when i try to draw bodies

>> No.6168086

>>6168009
It's not bad and that's rare among people who've never drawn mechas before. Good job anon, keep going.

>> No.6168098

>>6168062
nice its a start, now do that 10,000 more time and different poses and perspectives
to make grind feel less grindy throw in some of your fav characters as models to draw from or something

>> No.6168100

>>6167574
what the fuck

>> No.6168104

>>6167355
hand should be as big as the face, meaning if you place your own hand on your face, the heel of it should rest on your chin and your middle finger should touch your hairline (unless you're balding)

>> No.6168108

>>6168062
Try doing warm-up exercises to practice your lines. Way too scratchy. Use your elbow or shoulder for longer lines.

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>> No.6168113

>>6168104
>middle finger should touch your hairline (unless you're balding)
It's over

>> No.6168114
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6168114

is the way I construct the torso bad? I feel like I have too much muscle memory doing it then my bodies look weird and I'm not sure if I should go back and do basic construction via boxes or study how the muscles work or what
also wrists/forearms are pretty bad, haven't been able to find a tut that specifically focuses on the wrist though

also how do you draw big boob 3:

>> No.6168115

>>6168104
this is the most ridiculous thing i've heard yet

>> No.6168116

>>6168104
T. Chimpanzee

>> No.6168117

>>6168115
do you have better advice for gauging the size of the hand

>> No.6168119
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6168119

Do I have the talent?

>> No.6168121

>>6168104
it works with my head :L

>> No.6168122

>>6168115
stop giving the mothers of your anime girls thalidomide

>> No.6168126
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6168126

>>6168122
>>6168117
it's called andrew fucking loomis lmao

>> No.6168129

why don't you guys fucking read the board sticky and loomis? it's literally all there. god

>> No.6168130

>>6168126
>posts about the proportions of the fingers to eachother and not the hand to the body

take your meds, anon

>> No.6168135 [DELETED] 

>>6168130
are you absolutely fucking retarded holy shit

>> No.6168149
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>>6168108
Tried to fix the lines

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>>6168149
are you using a reference? im assuming you're using an anime drawing
the lines are better, but she has a severe lack of cranium going on

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>> No.6168157

>>6168154
That is what I am also seeing, thanks anon and yes I'm using an anime girl as ref.
Will work on the head a bit

>> No.6168168

>>6168119
Yes
>>6167744
Prebeg
>>6167763
Nice shapes

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>> No.6168176

>>6168086
thanks m8. Obviously lots of perspective issues that I could have fixed with more time but I didn't want to spend a whole week on a small challenge, ya know

>> No.6168198

>>6168115
Are you retarded? That's basic drawing reference for dummies.

>> No.6168207
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6168207

done.

>> No.6168209

tiny
arms

>> No.6168210
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>>6168083
There are entire books written about this.

>> No.6168212

>>6167492
hmm anon if you base off on my fairy from last thread she was supposed to be in a cage, gesture makes more sense in this way
also whats the thing down there that looks like a spider

>> No.6168213

oh,
and too many fingers :D

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>>6167849
This is pretty exhausting and demotivating.

>> No.6168222

>>6168215
Idk man, you got some nice faces going on there

>> No.6168227

>>6167203
I don't get it, why would you use all of those? Sounds redundant to me.

>> No.6168232

>>6168227
one of these, not all of these

>> No.6168249

>>6168222
Thanks, I'm only a few weeks old but still stuff's pretty rough already. Maybe I should just stop browsing chan.

>> No.6168253

>>6168111
Looks awesome

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>> No.6168270

>>6167637
Kek

>> No.6168291
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6168291

How do you paint water?

>> No.6168298

>>6168291
no clue bro, good luck though

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6168348

>>6168149
base colors and a rough sketch how I want the hair and dress thing, geting there

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6168364

sssh, elf girl is sleeping

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>>6168215
Fucked up hand and got lazy on parts. Also scratching.

>> No.6168407

>>6168207
You did alright with the knife. Nice work.

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6168438

I bought a tablet and made my first drawing there
Making the lineart took a long time, the drawing took about 3 days in total.
I guess the mistake was doing autistically consistent lines when i should do them more loosely in high resolution.
Any tips for lineart on tablets? I am using infinite painter on android

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6168465

>>6168348

>> No.6168476
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6168476

Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 41

So I made it to the portion with lots of character examples; since I'm "on my own" here, how long should I spend on this before moving on to the perspective section?

Also, would you recommend I construct original figures like I just did, copy Loomis' examples, or do a mixture of both?

>> No.6168477

>>6168465
thanks buddy, appreciate it

>> No.6168480
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i drew lain.. this is my first art in like a year... i don't like the shading

>> No.6168488
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6168488

>>6168114
I would revisit basic construction.The way you constructed the upper torso looks good but the proportions are off. Looks like she has no mid section and her pelvis is too short in comparison.
I think you would benefit from learning to construct hands with basic shapes too, her left wrist looks ok in general but by the time you get to the top of the hand her hand, her knuckles are out of place and it throws the whole hand off

Me practicing loomis heads

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>>6168212
>she was supposed to be in a cage
oh this is also interesting

>also whats the thing down there that looks like a spider
an aphid.

sorry for stealing it. I have been doing that lately because I have no creativity.

>> No.6168537

>>6168062
>>6168149
not too bad, but you I will recommend you to go from gesture to construction, from construction to anatomy

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6168571

How do I make layer below to not intersect with layer above? I use selpen, protect the opacity and it still doesn't not help.

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6168586

>>6168465
made some adjustments, currently working on the hair

>> No.6168593
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6168593

me trying to understand the basics of faces

>> No.6168596

>>6168586
Artichoke girl?!

>> No.6168598
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6168598

shut the fuck up

>> No.6168608
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6168608

something simple

>> No.6168609

is it more productive to read beginner books or just draw?

>> No.6168611

>>6168608
Looks amazing, nice work.

>> No.6168617

>>6168609
why not both

>> No.6168639

>>6168609
If your reading books you should be drawing everything in the book.

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>> No.6168651

>>6168647
Nice Takamura in the top right.

>> No.6168675

>>6167563
>that bulge
literal fucking faggot

>> No.6168682

>>6167595
>vendetta posting
Should've known you were one of those fuckwits. Your whole discord or whatever should go ahead and pull a Heaven's Gate.

>> No.6168689

>>6168608
Cute! Chin and left bicep stand out as being pretty wonky. Gonna render?

>> No.6168695

I will never make it, I'm depressed

>> No.6168698

>>6168682
backstory?

>> No.6168702
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6168702

this fucking pisses me off, imma go run around outside

>> No.6168703
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6168703

I haven't made any progress in some time.

>> No.6168705

>>6168438
Looks great, especially for a first digital drawing. As you said, I'd use more line variation, also more length variation in the tooth protrusions on the upper jaw so they don't all look the exact same

>> No.6168709

>>6168291
Make it more see through and add more tiny/crisp details

>> No.6168713
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6168713

any crits

>> No.6168716

>>6168529
dont worry I don't mind gesture copy
>an aphid
you guessed her size well
Is the one in your version supposed to be androgynous ?

>> No.6168778
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6168778

>looking for anatomy references
>reference websites are fucking garbage and don't properly show muscles and stuff
>have idea
>google pictures of body builders
>they all have well-defined muscles and wear little to no clothing
>perfect
>dad walks in to ask me something
>sees me looking at quasi-naked sweaty muscular men
>shakes his head in disappointment and leaves in silence

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6168791

>>6168675
What is wrong with the bulge. Man have penises, didn't you know that? you expect him to have a cameo toe with tight pants like that?
>>6168682
Jokes on you, I have no friends or social circles, so whatever fuckwit you think I'm you are wrong.

>> No.6168796

>>6168778
kek

>> No.6168798

>>6168104

This is the dumbest shit I've heard. Maybe if you having fucking marfan syndrome or something. I agree with a lot of loomis shit, but just because he has big hands doesn't mean its a hard rule.

>> No.6168799

>>6168698
Little wannabe-cabal of retards who have been shitting up /ic/ and a bunch of drawthreads around 4chan. Their MO is to manufacture drama to try to take over drawthreads, which from what I've gathered (because while they're roleplaying as saboteurs or something they're not slick and at least one of them has "monologued") is because they want to set up their own policed platform for artists and are trying to shit up the drawthreads so people from 4chan will be willing to hop onto it. Even on boards other than /ic/ and /cgl/ (the ONLY boards with rules against "community vendettas," but no mention specifically of "vendetta posting"), the monkeys like to bring up "vendetta posting" when they're flinging their shit, usually as an excuse even when they are in fact clearly "vendetta posting" in the first place.

>>6168778
Who has a computer in their room and has the screen facing the door?

>> No.6168801

>>6168799
I brought it up vedentta posting because it's own the rules and I got banned for that before for posting screen-craps of a conversation I had with some whore. Is literally on the rules, dude.

>> No.6168802

>>6167810
>Be more mindful in construction. Define the skull as a box in perspective.
good practice, keep going.

Same thing I thought as I have been drawing these skulls, thanks for the feedback anon

>> No.6168810

>>6168799
Sounds pathetic and retarded. wannabe there's a lot of things to describe the particular "online saboteur" thing depending on more info.

Whatever, I need to draw.

>> No.6168815

>>6167733
this fucking pisses me off
which BRUSH GODDAMMIT this fucking threw me off all day are you trying to say the same brush size i use is akin to REtard nigga GOOSEb???
this really fucking makes me mad
makes me want to go on a walk to rethink of what to draw

>> No.6168817

all y'all fucking piss me off here i hate all you guys in this /beg/ general

>> No.6168821

>>6168817
You are only saying that. I myself quite charming, people love me.

>> No.6168824

>>6168798
it's a good basic pointer for beginners. why are you mad.

>> No.6168826
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any crits

>> No.6168829

>>6168821
post bmi

>> No.6168830

>>6168829
16.5

>> No.6168831

>>6168829
whats bmi

>> No.6168832

thalidomide defect vs marfan sandrome go
we will never know the true size of hand

>> No.6168838

>>6168832
there no true size of anything, hand is no different.

>> No.6168846

>>6168831
body mass index

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>>6168829
43.

>> No.6168850

>>6168847
is this a commission too? how much is the gay guy paying you

>> No.6168854

>>6168850
No, just a warm up as I finish this really big thing with lots of details. I was watching cyberchase the other day while drawing and keep on thinking how charming of a character hacker was, so I wanted to do a few pieces of him but I didn't had the time.

>> No.6168855

>>6168854
at least make him hack a woman you homo

>> No.6168858

>>6168855
No idea what you are talking about, what is weird about a hacker in his middle 40's harassing a bunch of kids on the "cybespace"? I see nothing wrong with it.

>> No.6168860

>>6168854
Pretty based as the kids say. You're a repugnant person from what I've read here but I respect the skill. Cyberchase is a good background show.

>> No.6168861
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im gonna have to figure what brush size that nigga was talking about

>> No.6168863

>>6168801
Thank you anon, People say I'm poignant all the time.

>> No.6168867

>>6168799
>Their MO is to manufacture drama to try to take over drawthreads, which from what I've gathered (because while they're roleplaying as saboteurs or something they're not slick and at least one of them has "monologued") is because they want to set up their own policed platform for artists and are trying to shit up the drawthreads so people from 4chan will be willing to hop onto it.
This reeks of some shit multiyear stagnate nodraws would do so I 100% believe you. If i had to guess it's that cringe server with about 10 people ran by nosebitch isn't it? those niggers barely break into int and they're all massive incel spergs and groomers from the accounts that I've seen about them.

>> No.6168896

I fucking love myself. I'm gonna make it, absolutely. No crab in the world who can stop me. Just me and the pencil. Ye shitta, I will draw till my hand turn to sand. My drawboys I love you so much, we will get all what we want.

>> No.6168936
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thoughts?

>> No.6168940

>>6168936
flat color is better than the shitty shading

>> No.6168945

>>6168940
how could the shading be improved?

>> No.6168947

>>6168945
it can't be improved
I was crabbing you
I'm sorry anon
It's perfect.

>> No.6168952

>>6168945
make it less hairy

>> No.6168956

>>6168952
so tone down highlights on tail??

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>>6168778
I hope you at least explained why that was on your screen like a non-retard would
>>6168799
>Who has a computer in their room and has the screen facing the door?
This. Even my schizoid mom would think this would be dumb

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>>6168956

>> No.6168979
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6168979

>take things slow and try to carefully measure out everything
>comes out completely fucked
>just wing it
>comes out fine

>> No.6168990

At what point does a drawing becomes a copy of another, instead of a reference? I was copying a drawing I liked a few days ago for fun but at some point I realized I didn't really liked the face and clothes she had so I ended up changing it, and it made me curious about this.

>> No.6169023
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thoughts?
before i inevitably ruin this with clean lines and clothes

>> No.6169035
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6169035

maybe like that

>> No.6169044

>>6168647
Teach me how to hatch, anon.

>> No.6169046

>>6169035
bro i ain't got a microscope with me

>> No.6169053

>>6168977
Now it should be $45.

>> No.6169078

>>6168977
thanks! that helps a lot, i felt it was a little off

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>> No.6169138
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Beeg.
>>6168936
Peak soul. But i am not that kind of dude to ever pay for art so yeah.
>>6168940
Thats blatantly wrong. While his shading is very anti-meta it still adds details and shape and soul
>>6168778
Why didnt you look up FEMALE lifters anon? Are you gay?
>>6168713
Spend more time on a piece before you ask for crits
>>6168647
I like it a lot. Now imagine it in color uhhhhhm
>>6168609
Book gives you guidance and forces you to draw even shit you hate or suck at.
>>6168480
You draw like you have depression anon, are you alright?
>>6168438
The beauty of digital is you can sketch without erasing and when you are done you just set opacity of the layer to like 20% and draw over it final product
>>6168291
I like it. For water just look at reference and draw what you see :-)
>>6168155
Very nice nostalgia tone. Nice kirby
>>6167911
You draw like dodson. Its chaos on 1st look but on 2nd one its sometimes deep and detailed.
>>6167763
Very unique and appealing. Next time dont be scared to pick darker tones when selecting colors.
>>6167287
Spend at least hour or two on single piece and turn your doodle into something "better" and i will gladly give you some (You)s. Btw you keep drawing same shit and still dont even finish it. Do you have ADHD?

>> No.6169140

>>6169138
you really piss me off for the last time

>> No.6169145

now it's my time to mass reply

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6169153

>>6168977

>> No.6169156 [DELETED] 
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>>6167603
too much chicken scratching for dinner
>>6167575
idk
>>6167492
your shit pisses me off
>>6167416
i hate this guy too
>>6168936
not worth the money
>>6168593
stop pressing so hard
>>6168488
they're symbol drawn
>>6168111
not beg
>>6167971
need more milk
>>6167803
show off
>>6169138
you really really really fucking piss me off
>>6168791
they don't align right
>>6168703
smug thomas the tank
>>6168647
it pisses me off
>>6168586
too many bowls of that green, no lucky charms
>>6168480
lain is never good

>> No.6169157

>>6169044
Lay on top of the egg for 28 days, be careful not to break the egg and make sure to stay close in a fireplace during cold weather. Wait for the egg to hatch. You're welcome.

>> No.6169158

>>6169023
Butt looks off, cartoonish
>>6169035 has the right idea, but still not quite right

>> No.6169159

for now imma mass reply because of this fucker right here >>6169138 fucking asshole, piece of shit. you get on my nerves more than bitch ass Katsunei

>> No.6169160

>>6169159
>>6169156
Why respond with a mass reply when you can just concentrate your energy on this faggot>>6169138 ?

>> No.6169182

>>6169156
how much do you think those drawings are worth then? trying to find fair prices for commissioning

>> No.6169184

can you retards stop responding to him holy fuck annoying newfags

>> No.6169187

>>6169182
i say, hmmmm. about tree fiddy. or maybe fifteen dollars

>> No.6169189

>>6169184
>t. >>6169138

>> No.6169193
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6169193

tried to get better proportions after doing some practice, line work is prolly still bad though...

>> No.6169198

>>6169187
Disqualified.

>> No.6169199

>>6169182
u got is disqualified 'cause you bid like shit

>> No.6169206

>>6169199
artist did not disqualify u

>> No.6169212

>>6169206
https://youtu.be/YRv6v_ScrJo?t=47

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I'll try to go back to drawing. I hope I can keep up everyday

>> No.6169239

>>6169214
take it to the bridge

>> No.6169248

Anyone got a decent set of stretches for wrists?

>> No.6169251
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Id appreciate any critiques on this, I'm new to digital, but i think im on the right track

>> No.6169257

>>6169251
stop using jojo's for inspiration
it sucks

>> No.6169270

>>6169248
I like this guys videos, streches helps but you need to improve your ergonomics too
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EK4MIUyMjPE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRn47lmQpfk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQjpwfPKqv0

>> No.6169275

>>6169270
also this massage
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TZFTsak118

>> No.6169280

>>6169214
I love that scrimblo cat up there in the top right, made my morning. Thank you anon and keep at it.

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6169281

I have no idea what im doing

>> No.6169287

>>6169270
>>6169275
Thanks, my wrist has gotten really stiff, I guess I need to be way more careful of posture

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>> No.6169342

>>6167575
I cant paint worth a sheit, but I was watching a an instruction vid on youtube where the dude was saying to think of metals as not having any shadows, but just a flat midtone with reflections and highlights while youre painting them

>> No.6169344

>>6168815
take your brush size and turn it down

>> No.6169345
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6169345

So, I've been doing a ~10min page of circles before I draw each day for the past week and holy shit I feel like my circles are getting less shit

>> No.6169355

>>6167251
I like the look of the lighting and the wood. But the natural brush looks out of place in the glass-looking forest, also the lighting of the bush on the top left look weird

>> No.6169356

>>6169345
now explain how doing that circle translates into anything
if you want to warmup the do it with quick sketches of shit you want to improve, like hands or shading 3D forms or wtv else actually applies to your art, at least you will slowly gain some mileage drawing something useful

>> No.6169363

>>6169345
Anon why would you do that?

>> No.6169368

>>6169356
>at least you will slowly gain some mileage drawing something useful
yeah, something useful like circles

>> No.6169371

>>6169356
>>6169363
Have you never tried drawing anything before? Being able to draw a decent circle at the size and place you want to on command is a useful thing.

>> No.6169375

>>6169371
Sure, but I'm not a knuckle dragging moron that needs to practice it for 10min a day.

>> No.6169380

>>6169375
My digital draftsmanship is miles behind my traditional draftsmanship. I want to close the gap with my dexterity - it was extremely frustrating in the beginning. My draftsmanship is terrible on digital, but slowly getting better.
>complaining about 10 mins per day

And how much youtube did you watch today? Did you shitpost at all? Did you browse anything? Fuck off and draw.

>> No.6169381

>>6169344
impossible, how else will i draw

>> No.6169382

>>6169371
>>6169368
pyw and show me the power of grinding fucking circles instead of proper fundies

>> No.6169383

>>6169382
eat shit dumbass - go draw

>> No.6169389

>>6169371
by that logic i should also practise 10min a day of proper grip of my pencil/stylus
fucking retard all this is doing is giving you a sense of accomplishment without you actually gaining anything of value, similar to the dumbasses in school who underline/highlight texts thinking that by itself counts as some form of studying or usefulness

but you do you boo boo, the dont come here after months or years complaining you are still /beg/

>> No.6169390

>>6169380
Yeah you got me, I didn't spend every waking minute with a pen in my hand retard. If I'm setting aside time to draw I'm going to use it better than drawing a thousand assholes

>> No.6169396

>>6169345
>>6169371
>>6169380
>>6169383
proof some people are arent worth the time spent trying to help, if youre too retarded to understand youre doing something useless or too emotional to take critique, dont post here

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>>6169390
>drawing a thousand assholes
hey, some people make a living doing that

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6169409

Continues. Focusing a bit more on understanding the construction each time

>> No.6169416

>>6169138
haaah no i don't have depression. maybe. if i had depression it'd be more artsy n avant guarde n shit...

>> No.6169417

>>6169396
Were they even asking for anyone's help, though?

>> No.6169420

>>6169396
why are you so offended by someone drawing a good circle kek

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>>6169398
Tfw you are ngmi because you didn't grind circles for 10hrs and will never freehand a perfectly round asshole.

>> No.6169424

>>6169422
>what is pen-control

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this one ispretty hard

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/cir/cle general when

>> No.6169435

>>6169382
>>6167861

>> No.6169445
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6169445

Just started gestures today. Spent a few hours, starting with art models... and eventually said screw it and went to imagefap for big booty girls.

This took about 20 minutes. Did I put too much detail? I tried to focus on my subject as much as I could, only looking at my page to check position.

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6169449

>>6169445
Sorry... I done goofed and posted the wrong version.

Here's the version with reference.

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>>6169425
I'm also /beg/-tier, but it looks like you nailed it. My only point of criticism is his lower back and butt. Us guys that are powerlifters / strongman have a defined butt, so make his swoop in from the lower back, not out.
And, that bump connecting his glute to his hamstring seems like it should be a little smoother.

Just seems like he is sitting on a bunch of excess fat.

Other than that, though, very nice work!
reference image: https://www.posemaniacs.com/viewer/0000034%2300001

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>>6168062
You're absolutely going in the right direction but this is what I would've done different. (Biggest takeaway from this is that in women the hips should normally be equal to or greater than the shoulders)

>> No.6169543

>>6169520
>>6168586

this is where I'm at now, eyes placeholder of course, just wanted to get a feel of where they would be ish

>> No.6169561

>>6168936

lol

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painting i've been working on, I've spent ages on it and it feels really unfinished. There are a few more details i have left to do, but i don't think it's nearly enough to take it up to where i want it. I feel like there's a glaring issue i've ignored. Where am i fucking up?

>> No.6169670

>>6169646
I'm a beg, but I think there's something wrong with her hip's angle.

>> No.6169677

>>6169670
Could you try and specify what's weird? I used reference for the body, but there could be something i'm not seeing regardless

>> No.6169688

>>6169677
To me it looks like there's a slight twisting in her body that makes it look like her hips are angling towards the viewer as opposed to resting on the ground. I don't know if your reference is like that though.

>> No.6169731
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First drawing in around six months. Looks like my skills haven't dropped.

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Old man in dumb xboxhueg anime armor. Sketch

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All without ref.

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>>6169737
This is fun.

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>>6169770

>> No.6169794

>>6169782
>>6169770
>>6169754
>>6169737
>>6169731
I admire your dedication.

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6169835

Why does my. Colored stuff looks like shit and how do i fix it??
I'm using paint tool sai btw

>> No.6169837

Am I supposed to tilt the paper if I can't draw a line or curve at a certain angle well, or is that considered cheating?

>> No.6169841

>>6169837

i'm sure you'll get some responses saying otherwise but no need to get pedantic about it imo

at one end of the spectrum, here's a professional comic inker who explains how he inks with just a wrist movement, and rotates the paper to suit him.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MsfOCL3Ae9Y

>> No.6169842

>>6169837
Yes. It's a very good thing to do.

>> No.6169896

>>6169646
If you squint at it you can see the darks aren't dark enough

>> No.6169897

don't squint it damages your eyes

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>>6169496
wow, I'm loving this website. you can see every muscle

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It's hot.
il es moi calientie

>> No.6169908

>>6169900
Yep, it has a lot of options for lighting and the color scheme of the model.

Don't ignore the google doc in the OP, it has a LOT of good reference material!

Keep up the good work, anon. You're gonna make it,

>> No.6169913

>>6169908
I'm not the original guy you were speaking to, and I'm not doing any work at all, but I appreciate the sentiment. Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a new learning resource to ignore.

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>>6169794
Thanks, it's been awhile.

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>>6169928

>> No.6169942

>>6169913
Learn gestures, if you haven't already. It's a lot of fun, and a very easy way to make quick sketches. It boosted my confidence by a lot.

https://youtu.be/74HR59yFZ7Y

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>>6169280
Thanks, you too

>> No.6169960

I CNAT RENDER

>> No.6169990

>>6169960
Are you ok bro?

>> No.6169994

>>6169902
Always use reference for hands. Stop guessing.

>> No.6170011

make a new thread already

>> No.6170042

new thread
>>6170041
>>6170041
>>6170041

>> No.6170047

>>6169990
YES AND YOU?

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>>6169731
>looks like my skills haven't dropped
I love you so much esdeathanon

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>>6169023
Lower abs make no sense unless she’s making a vacuum pose.

Some facial expressions practice

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Beg here who sucks at coloring. Could you guys crit my work?

>> No.6171662

>>6171655
Dude, what the fuck is going on with those boobs

>> No.6171735

>>6171662
Thanks anon I just noticed that I messed them up

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>> No.6172586

>>6172562
>posting in old /beg/ on page 10 so nobody will comment

>> No.6172620

>>6172586
Nobody but you... With a low effort critique.