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Baiken edition
Previous thread: >>6136059
>Welcome to /salt/
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western styles can coexist here.

>Rules & Guidelines
1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge.
4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.

>Community Resources
FellowBro's Book Collection
>mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy
>>>/ic/artbook

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

>Image reference
modelindexdatabase.smugmug.com/browse (pw: croquiscafe21)
hegrehunter.com

>> No.6159284
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Recent wakfu girls. Still need one more for the complete set

>> No.6159314

does it take much more time to do "realistic" paint style vs lineart style? like here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F2hm544loqc

I want to make sexy 2D porn but I'm bored of anime faces. I want big sexy lips and good skin

>> No.6159348
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need some opinions. Right now I think either A or B

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>>6159348
rough idea of what they'd be

>> No.6159355

>>6159348
>>6159353
looking at them all together I definitely think A looks best but I like the "personality" of B, what do you guys think?

>> No.6159537 [DELETED] 

>>6159242
good morning /salt/ finishing up patreon content.

>>6159348
B or C. A/D look too ignorant. she knows what she's doing.

>>6158709
great work anon!

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>>6159242 (OP)
good morning /salt/ finishing up patreon content.

>>6159348
B or C. A/D look too ignorant. she knows what she's doing.

>>6158709
great work anon!

>> No.6159688

what characters and franchises give you a lot of likes on twatter?

>> No.6159692

>>6159284
sexy, blog?

>> No.6159750

>>6159284
cute cute cute

>>6159310
very nice get that last one in

>>6159314
it takes more time to render things out yes
if you mean just drawing it in a more realistic style then it depends on how familiar you are with it

>>6159348
a or c

>>6159538
turonnu bonnu mai waifu <3

>>6159688
the most popular things of course

>> No.6159754

>>6159538
hell yea tron bonne

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butt

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>>6159855

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>>6159867

>> No.6159946

>>6159855
You draw really well anon!

>> No.6159997

>>6159353
Ass makes no sense, please use a reference

>> No.6160074

>>6159997
Check last thread

>> No.6160087

>>6160074
Even if she is disgusting he's still not following it, he should re evaluate where her left ass cheek connects to her waist and actually use that redline someone was kind enough to give him.

>> No.6160095

>>6160087
The left ass cheek on the redline is exactly where I have it, lol

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forearm anatomy or lack of thereof is killing me

>> No.6160683

Does shadowbanning go away eventually? I guess I got it cause Ive been inactive for a while

>> No.6160701

>>6160683
yeah, your gaiaonline account will be reinstated after some time

>> No.6160789
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i made a lewd

>> No.6160798

>>6160789
You made a mess.

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rate my pps

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>inb4 hiding hands
fuck off, the reference had them cropped as well and I like this 1:1 ratio

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Next to me gains goblin is a god.

>> No.6161315

>>6159848
Cute. Pretty dynamic, nice clean lines. It's just that forearm and hand that need a little bit of structure, but well done anon, you made something that's pleasant to look at.

>>6159538
I really like how you got that anime render look. Nice job.

>>6159348
Get your shit together.

>>6159314
>does it take much more time to do "realistic" paint style vs lineart style?
Yes, and it's boring as fuck. That's part of why I stopped doing realistic shit and lately just prefer drawing simple stylized figures. That being said, you do you anon!

>> No.6161320

>>6159353
>>6159997
Seconded, her waist is broken

>>6160132
Forearms are fine, what's fucking you is wrist anatomy, but connections are hard to draw, as you can see by the ass dude I'm mentioning. Are you using reference for the bending of the wrist?

>> No.6161324

>>6161204
If the reference had them cropped.. you add them by yourself

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>>6161320
I'll take a look at it tomorrow, but I like the way the ass turned out, it has a pleasing shape at least to my eye, so it would be that waist I'd be looking at and honestly it doesn't look super fucked to me but I'll try some different stuff and see what's what

>> No.6161367

>>6161324
It messes with the thumbnailing retard

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>>6159538
Good morning /salt/

>> No.6161456
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Trying to learn to draw attractive butts from imagination. I've got the bones and muscles mostly memorized, but my proportions are wacky.

Also, from memory, drawing a pelvis from 3/4 below and slightly rotated is pretty challenging, ngl.

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>>6161456
Sorry, didn't see size, here's a smaller one

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One more just now, proportions are a bit better

>> No.6161521 [DELETED] 

>>6161456
You're right, proportions are a little off, but your approach is admirable. You might wanna try to do some sessions focusing just on "outlines" and big shapes rather than trying to construct the whole figure from the ground up. Trust me, been there, done that. Plus, you get some speed when you practice a lot of gesture without the necessity of pristine constructions. Just don't forget to keep some structure and keep grinding bro.

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>>6161456
You're right, proportions are a little off, but your approach is admirable. You might wanna try to do some sessions just focusing on "outlines" and big shapes rather than trying to construct the whole figure from the ground up. Trust me, been there, done that. Plus, you get some speed when you practice a lot of gesture without the necessity of pristine constructions. Just don't forget to keep some structure and keep grinding bro.

Pic related an example I did a while ago.

>> No.6161527

>>6160789
>>6160798
I think it actually takes more effort to do the scribbly thing than an overly clean lineart

>> No.6161535
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Why are so many tranime artists fucking horrible at drawing feet? Pic rel is one of the few (very, very few) artists I've found who can actually draw aesthetic and attractive feet, can you anons recommend me some other artists who are good at it?

>> No.6161540

>>6161523
Thanks man! I've actually done a lot of that, but usually using reference. I'm trying to really learn the anatomy so it's like I've got the form in my head. I don't plan to always build from the skeleton, I just am tired of either using ref or using 'cookbook' poses I know already. Also don't have a true issue using ref, I just want to lean on it less. Right now it supports all my weight.

>> No.6161541

>>6161535
it looks like they've traced either a model or a tweaked photo. ALso just use your eyes anon, what do you like about the feet compared to other artstyles, neck yourself and all that

>> No.6161543

>>6161340
i want to die by her ass

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What will happen next?

>> No.6161602

>>6159242
vagina is too far down btw

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>>6161541
>traced
Shit, looking through some of the images I have saved, it looks like several of them could have been traced.

>> No.6161622

>>6161604
You expected ecchi artists to do study ecorche?

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>>6161622
Man, I don't know what I expected anon. I don't know anything about anime (I only really save pics I find aesthetically pleasing, anime or not) but for some reason I feel cheated.
To be fair, in some images the feet are stylized/cartoony enough to probably not have been traced, pic rel for example

>> No.6161650

>>6161573
jesus you have to be mentally ill to find this attractive. Everything is so grossly exagerated and vulgar. You just need that asshole lips and you are good to go

>> No.6161678

>>6161650
98% of coom art is hideously grotesque anon, only true patricians can enjoy aesthetic coom art

>> No.6161681

>>6161535
>>6161604
>>6161627
>the only good feet are wrinkly bumpy discolored feet
art is unrealistic for a reason, youre just a fetishist

>> No.6161684 [DELETED] 

>>6161650
She literally just has giant tits anon

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>>6161650
>>6161678
Haha wait till you see the follow up I'm working on :P

>> No.6161709

>>6161681
I know you're trying to provoke me but I'm pretty open-minded anon. Post some feet art that you like personally

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>>6161709

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>>6161729
>>6161709

>> No.6161746

>>6161729
>>6161733
Very cute
Sauce on the second image?

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wondering if this movement looks good

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Sketch of a comic I'm doing for a client. I had to use Daz Studio to create the last scene and I stole the pose of the second panel from another picture. I'll be sure to mention that last thing when I upload the drawing online.

>> No.6162064

>>6162029
I love how her butt jiggles at the end. Unfortunately, I don't know much about animation, but I think the guy should move his knees a little more.
Hope somebody else can give you a better feedback..

>> No.6162103

>>6162064
Thank you, you're right, its a really rough sketch i'll definitely fix that and add a proper bg.

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Posting this here to humble myself. I'm happy with my progress, but still so much work to do

>> No.6162574

>>6160798
>>6160789
look he's saying you made a mess in his pants he came because morrigan ahahahaha

>> No.6162750

>>6162438
Needs moar sweat and musk

>> No.6162761
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sloppy shit

>> No.6162775

>>6162438
thicked

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>> No.6162790

>>6162779
this is gains goblin right? I missed the opportunity to say this last thread, was too latem the line quality you did for your last drawing was amazing (i dont care what anyone else is going to say about this) i think its one step towards making better art. You still need work but i think with the differing line weighs and line colors, your art is so much easier on the eyes and easier to look at and see what's going on. keep it up

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>>6162790
yes this is, you're talking about the Konrad pic? thanks, glad to hear it, i try to take advice and that was pretty actionable, i'll see what i can do playing around with line weighs and such

>> No.6162803

>>6162750
I got you on the next one; one step at a time. Well more like 10 steps, 11 is too much

>> No.6163049

>>6161315
>Cute. Pretty dynamic, nice clean lines. It's just that forearm and hand that need a little bit of structure, but well done anon, you made something that's pleasant to look at.
Oh hey thanks anon!

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meh

>> No.6164190

>>6162797
yeah ill admit your art was very hard to look at until you did the new lineart style. I think my advice for you would to use references of real people if you arent already, and don't be afraid to rip off poses and basically everything about the picture to pull it off.My other advice would be to add more values so that it adds depth to your drawing, not just the b/w values that you've chosen to differentiate the colors of the piece but also to show some depth and you should see some more progress. pic is related to what i mean, here's the artist btw, i don't know how to describe it in any other way : https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/InCase/profile

But keep doing this lineart and it will become second nature to you. :D

if you also practice adding shading/rendering, you might fail at first thats okay. I would just advice to give it a try, maybe make a "shaded" version of your drawing that you keep to the side and post here.

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>>6164190
oops. forgot to post the picture. my dumbass, here you go. For reference.

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>>6164190
>>6164192
might try adding shading at some point, that'll be a while of practice but i'll try to find something to learn from like that

>> No.6164212

>>6162761
How do I achieve sketching skills? Copying a lot of stuff I like really quickly?
>>6164166
I like what you're going for with the proportions. I think a little mannequinization would help you a lot. Try to place her pelvis and ribcage, at least, and see how the legs are placed and connected in relation

>> No.6164273

>>6164198
needs asshole. are you a boy or a girl?

>> No.6164275
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>>6164273
there's a thongless version of it, don't worry, and I'm a guy

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>> No.6164319

>>6164306
Wrists and calves are way too skinny

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>> No.6164322

>>6164320
Arms are too skinny

>> No.6164326

>>6164320
The hips are way too wide.

>> No.6164333

>>6164320
literally not even you fucking art retard>>6161348

>> No.6164341

>>6159867
>that dick
aw hell no bro, its fine to copy everything from doujins but please learn to draw more appealing dicks, thats atleast one thing western artists do right
>>6159855
This one is really nice

>> No.6164365

>>6164326
>pinups with exaggerated proportions
I like it, get some test

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>>6164212
>I like what you're going for with the proportions. I think a little mannequinization would help you a lot. Try to place her pelvis and ribcage, at least, and see how the legs are placed and connected in relation

anon i took your advice to heart but honestly after playing with it, there is really no way I can keep the original proportions (D) and have it make sense anatomically...at least I do not possess the necessary skills yet.

These were my attempts. (A) is some mannequinization, (B) is idk
Now (C) is more interesting and the most realistic
(D) is again, the original
(E) is is (C) but with the ass bigger.

Help pls

>> No.6164867

>>6164320
https://twitter.com/fumio9361 for anyone else that wanted it

>> No.6165005

>>6164320
>>6164867
I come here for the art of my fellow anons

>> No.6165170

>>6165005
yeah me too but I'm always a lil disappointed whenever I jump on here there's only a few images, a couple of crits, it seems a bit quiet. i'd love to see it be one of the more active generals, I thought coom was so popular that we'd be posting sketches and comm wips all the while :(

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>> No.6165247

Don't know if this is the right place to ask but anyway, if we're talking about NSFW stuff is that true that is best to dedicate your work to one single theme/fetish? For example, if you enjoy doing sexy pinups but also degenerate monster fuck, you'd be better separating your work into two different accounts than just mixing everything in one place? Or it really doesn't matter at all?

>> No.6165268

>>6165247
I want sexy monster pin ups so no, don't separate your interests (except if you're drawing shit that nobody wants to see unless they're looking for it like scat/piss)

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Current wip. big tiddy belly bunny lady
couple of other cool ones in the thread, will respond in a lil bit

>> No.6165328

>>6165247
I think every community is different. Some of them are happy to see new takes on their fetishes, while other hate that kind of stuff. Also, there are some fetishes which go well with others.
Have you tried to post both types of content on your personal pages? Maybe your followers will find those new images interesting. You can even say they were commissioned by an anonymous commissioner, just in case.
Funnily enough, I'm having a few trouble related to this whole deal.
>>6165319
Really sexy drawing, anon. I love her outfit and how 3D her belly and boobs look. Also, for some reason, I find her long hair very attractive.

>> No.6165356

>>6165198
She's melting, anon.

>> No.6165388

>>6165319
>>6164320
My faces are decent now, but I need to reach this level of allure...

>> No.6165497
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never tried bondage stuff before

>> No.6165604

>>6165497
Is there a variant where her pussy juices are dripping onto the ground?

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>> No.6165962
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tried re-drawing the waist like four times and didn't get anything I liked better than how it was at first, we'll get em next time, but here it is with some simple rendering attempted. I actually really like how the face and hair turned out.

I wanted the cake to look like it was falling over to imply more motion, but I don't think it really reads. Anyway, would like to hear your guys thoughts.

>> No.6165972

>>6165962
Scoliosis

>> No.6166214
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This one's midstage-rough. Can somebody give me some tips/improvements for this one?
I have only 3hrs of sleep these days and I'm losing my mind and have no idea where I'm going with this anymore but am desperate to whack something serviceable out of this as best as I can while being cognitively drunk.

>> No.6166293
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6166293

>>6159242
trying to get good
any criticism is welcome

>> No.6166314

>>6166293
aside from actually finishing up a background id give her some sort of expression dependent on wtv situation shes in or going to be in or wtv

dont fall into the trap of only doing the same blank faces or generic "look how cute/sexy i am", a characters face expression can make a picture 10x better

>> No.6166319

>>6166214
You're improving if you are who I think you are. The rendering us looking nice.

>> No.6166364

>>6166314
Thanks, i definitely need to work on facial expressions

>> No.6166534

>>6166293
Her boobs are eating the fabric.
There's a difference between skin tight and chest wedgie.

>> No.6166822

>>6166364
>turn head away from viewer
>turn eyes toward viewer
Instant +100 characterization

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>> No.6166862

>>6166822
Good point. I just checked and pinup artists make the character look at the viewer 99% of the time

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>> No.6166963

>>6166862
I can't take credit, that's some Stephen Silver wisdom that I'm parroting from his book

>> No.6166970

>>6166851
pbased ngl, although the dick is a bit too textured for my taste. Also, be careful of that pillow shading

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Any crits thrown my way would be appreciated. Also does anyone have a good reference of the grundle area, it doesn’t look right.

>> No.6167112

>>6166970
>pillow shading
there is no shading on this piece yet

>> No.6167209

>>6167112
Oh, I thought the change in value on the gloves and leggings was the start of some shading

>> No.6167224

>>6161604
>>6161627
How new are you man, that's Kyle

>> No.6167246

>>6167224
plenty of newfags these days, some are cool

others are just toxic waste coming from twitter/reddit and random tranny/fujo discords

>> No.6167252

>>6165972
Just an exaggerated twist

>> No.6167256

>>6161627
>stylized/cartoony enough to probably not have been traced
fucking retarded take, i dont care or know if the picrel img is traced or not, but if you base your opinion on something being traced around how well or realistic the person drew it you must either be a mega /beg/ or retarded

>> No.6167258

>>6167070
Her right but cheek ends too low even in that pose, it's almost sitting in her thigh, raise it just a little bit. Nice work anon. Gj

>> No.6167272
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>>6166293
really lovely rendering.

>> No.6167279

>>6165962
I think this ones a redraw hombre. You've tried alot to get it looking right, i've seen the progress, and it is looking better; but I think cut your loses and attempt it again from scatch.

>> No.6167291

>>6167279
What's so bad about it that it necessitates an entire redraw? It really doesn't look that bad

>> No.6167301

>>6167291
What you should be asking is what's so good about it

>> No.6167303

>>6167291
strive for better then: "it doesnt look that bad"

>> No.6167318

>>6166319
Thank you, Sodapoppin.
A major weakness that's always has been is murkiness that seems to never disappear. I feel like my eye can identify flatness easily now but the hard part is getting the depth on it after seeing the problems

>> No.6167322

>>6167301
>>6167303
Simple question

>> No.6167327

>>6167322
See>>6167301

>> No.6167329

>>6167327
Not an answer and now you're just crabbing

>> No.6167330

>>6167322
Not them, but I responded to you early on. I still think the relationship between the angles on the pelvis, ribcage, and neck are fucked

>> No.6167336
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6167336

>>6159242
my first rough sketch. She's supposed to be on a bed. might fix up her hair

>> No.6167337

>>6167329
>i'm fine with my art being mediocre, stop being such a crab!

>> No.6167340

>>6167336
The arms look like they're melting around her boobs

>> No.6167347

>>6159242
I'm pretty sure that's not where her vagina is supposed to be on your baiken drawing

>> No.6167350

>>6167337
Pyw or answer the question
>>6167330
Are you >>6162438 ?

>> No.6167368

>>6167350
Yup

>> No.6167371

>>6165636
That's a filtered photograph

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Hi, didn't know the cute boy thread didn't like slightly androgynous males so I'm posting my gif here. Though I see countless effeminate men and child boys being posted there but whatever. I'm slightly new here.

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>>6167327
>>6167322
>>6167291
>>6167350

hes not crabbing. the original guy knew there were problems.

whats your solution?

>> No.6167418
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6167418

fixed her hair up a bit, just need to finish her hands and I think I can line it and color it

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>>6167418
the part around her eyes are her eye-lashes, as such, when her eyes narrow the lashes follow.

>> No.6167425

>>6167418
This might just be personal preference, but I think her eyelashes are a bit much, unless you're going for a raccoon/tanooki look or something

>> No.6167427

>>6167423
>>6167425
okay if I have 2 people criticizing her eye lashes at the same time then that probably means I should take the advice lol

>> No.6167443

>>6167395
It looks good but you've changed the tilt of the shoulders, she's no longer leaning her weight on her left side

>> No.6167450

>>6167395
>>6167443
I guess what I'm asking is "is this an impossible pose and that's why the waist is broken" or is it "this pose is possible but you've broken the waist"

And I'm really not trying to like argue with everyone lol I'm just trying to understand

>> No.6167457
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6167457

there, eyes fixed

>> No.6167490

>>6167450
Yeah I really wasn't trying to shit on you or anything, I like what you're going for and I'm digging the huge cheeks. I think what's throwing you off the most is the ref, it's hard to tell what's going on with her bones because of all the fat. It's up to you whether you want to keep going or not, but I don't think it's at the point where it's good enough to finish with lines/render

>> No.6167501

>>6167450
To answer directly, what you imagined in your mind might not be possible to execute without it looking weird

>> No.6167518

>>6167395
I honestly like the ass on the original better. But this is still good.

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>> No.6167567

>>6167490
>I think what's throwing you off the most is the ref, it's hard to tell what's going on with her bones because of all the fat
I agree, which is why I didn't really follow the ref too much. So instead I wanted a super exaggerated, twisting pose because it seemed like a fun challenge. And no worries I'm totally fine with crit, I just ask questions when I'm not sure what people are saying and it sounds like I'm arguing with them, I'm bad at expressing myself over text. Or someone will give a redline but it will change the pose or something and like I don't want to appear ungrateful or salty or something but it means I might have to point out it's not really what I'm going for which just makes me sound defensive when I'm not trying to be LOL.
>>6167501
Honestly that's fine, it's a learning process I can always redraw it later. For now I'm just trying to make appealing and horny stuff, what's a few broken spines along the way?

When I'm at my pc later I'll try to show what I'm talking about with the intended pose and what I was trying to do. And again a big thanks to everyone who redlined and tried to help, sorry if I like wasn't making sense lol

>> No.6167590

>>6167272
Thank you snon, i see what you're doing there

>> No.6167622

>>6167457
are those supposed to be hands around her boobs? they look...like...tentacles

>> No.6167653

>>6167622
I hate drawing hands but they're just the rough sketch, it'll look better once I line it

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>>6167567
>>6167490
okay, here's kind of what I'm trying to express. This might make even less sense than I was saying, idk

if you compare the photo ref to mine, I wanted to really accentuate the pinch and stretch, pretty much touching the torso and hips together, as well as making her lumbar spine shorter. I also wanted to push the angle between the ribcage and the pelvis, so her shoulders are leaning back more over her butt, which is sticking out more to compensate. This puts more weight on her left leg when combined with the pinch and stretch, which I felt was more dynamic than the photo, where her weight is pretty evenly divided between her feet. Yours, because she has better posture and her butt is sitting more on her heels, is also well-balanced but is more dynamic than the photo, with a stronger triangle. In mine I also elected to shift the viewpoint down so we're looking up at her, so we can see more of the bottom plane of her butt.

I made these decisions because I thought they were visually interesting, but they're also harder to draw and require more invention. That's why it was hard for me to articulate what was wrong when people would say "fix the waist" but when demonstrating how to do that would change a bunch of the stuff that I wanted there in the first place. So what I'm saying is it's possible that the changes I made are just not doable without making it look weird (in which case that's actually fine with me) OR it's totally possible but it's just a skill issue (which again is fine with me because I've only really been drawing since January).

But anyway, hope no one thinks I'm just getting defensive or shitting on redliners (who I do really appreciate), it's just hard to express what I'm trying to do with this without sounding like I'm ignoring criticism, lol. Does any of what I'm saying make sense lmao?

>> No.6167699

>>6167209
that's their see-throughness

>> No.6168134
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6168134

Any of you happen to have any of these tutorials from lerapi/aleriiaV and are they any good?
https://aleriiav.gumroad.com/l/hzzdd

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>>6161421
good morning /salt/

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Done

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6168242

Pubeless alt as well, theyre pretty hard to do

>> No.6168257

>>6161543
OMG SAME! KINNIES?

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6168353

sssh, elf girl is sleeping

>> No.6168442
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culo. im gonna start lines enough sketch
>>6164212
feeling the form came first and speed came naturally the more you keep doing the same shit over and over

>> No.6168516

>>6164806
C looks far and away best, at least to my eyes, and I like enormous asses. E is getting close to "diaper ass" tier for my tastes.

>> No.6168533
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6168533

>>6159310
Last one of the set

>> No.6168656

>>6168533
cute and smexy

>> No.6168717
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6168717

I like drawing thick outlines for my art but man does it take forever

>> No.6168752

>>6168717
the blush says one expression but the dead eyes say another, the hands are a bit mishapen and the little bumps for knuckles just look alien. but cute enough I suppose

>> No.6168765

>>6168752
yeah I realized the expression wasn't I wanted but I only realized it after I started lining it and I didn't feel like redrawing her eyes again. They were supposed to be more lustful looking but I wasn't sure how to draw them like that. Maybe tilting her eyes would've been better.

And yeah I'm very terrible at hands

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>> No.6169553

>>6165247
I don’t know about your specific case, but Shadman separated his gay stuff from his straight stuff on two different websites (both as shadman), and when he merged the sites, his fanbase got absolutely assblasted.
M/M, loli/shota, bestiality, futa, furry, fringe shit like smegma/scat etc are probably best isolated to their own pseudonym.
NTR gets people extremely butthurt too, as well as niggers. Not sure about rape, but barely anyone does it anymore because of patreon, anyway.
This is contingent on you being able to produce both the wide appeal and niche art frequently, though, I don’t think it makes sense to seperate it if one gets like one new image a week.

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6169629

thoughts i tried aping kawakami masaki

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done

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done!

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>> No.6169745

>>6169668
cute! not much else to say, the pose and context is a bit safe and so not too "sexy" but definitely cute, I say this because it's what I'm struggling with right now; I make 'cute' stuff but nothing too adventurous or even implicitly sexy. not sure what to recommend there besides studying good ecchi work on /e/, danbooru, foundry etc
>>6169698
is it finished? are you studying how he does expressions specifically? or did you want a finished piece? i think if you're studying someone, sure rendering lets you feel like you've "made something" but if this took you 2 hours I think it would've been better spent making lots of like, 10 min studies of his poses, expressions etc

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>>6167680
this is what I’m seeing in the image
in your redline, you are definitely vastly over tilting the top box in all 3 examples, consider the front top edge the clavicle to the acromion process with the anterior and posterior felt origins being the side top edge

>> No.6169781
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>>6167680
you know what, I give up
I tried to figure it out, but this is beyond me
there’s probably a shitload of distortion and editing on top of the fat making it difficult to box this off, just draw a vaguely pear-like blob and work from there, it’s just easier

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I won't just post in the containment thread. I won't post just post in the- https://files.catbox.moe/bt7cnu.png

>> No.6170305
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>>6161340

>> No.6170459

>>6169745
yeah its more or less done, i more so just wanted to see if i can make something relatvely in his style
that has the a similar sexual appeal. but ill have to try ur suggestion

>> No.6170478

This general is oddly one of the least active considering it's about coom

>> No.6170505

>>6170478
right? I keep crying about it here and not posting work because I always talk myself out of it when there's no point when crits are so rare. so then I stop coming back to give people their (You)s and I suppose so do others. then there's a bad take or two or a "e-celeb" shows up to get the general up to 300+ posts with maybe 15 images posted and I go to sleep thinking wow what a shithole, I'll be back tomorrow

>> No.6170562
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6170562

todays drawing

>> No.6170598

>>6170562
I feel like I read a doujinshi with a similar 'plot'

>> No.6170662

>>6170598
im sure there is one out there

>> No.6170672

>>6161535
feet is hard, very hard to draw and render

>> No.6170764
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gobbos

>> No.6170925
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Benis

>> No.6170996

>>6164275
Do you have a blog?

>> No.6170997

>>6170996
i have a twitter, https://twitter.com/lobsterkiahlart

>> No.6170999

>>6161535
feet are almost as difficult to draw as hands imo, and since you can just have a character wear shoes theres very little motive to put in the effort to draw them well.

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oil

>> No.6171002

>>6171000
pretty good but I think her vag is too low

>> No.6171044

>>6171000
something is off with her lower body and hips. i think its that youve failed to sufficiently take perspective into account, since her hips are further towards the camera they should be a bit larger than they are. Also, i agree with the other guy, her hips are angled sort of up and forwards, and her vag doesnt match that.

>> No.6171047

>>6171000
checked

>>6171002
don't listen to this trans faggot it's fine where it is

>> No.6171050

>>6171044
this is wrong too
it looks fine

>> No.6171273 [DELETED] 

>>6169781
lol @ u and i taking turns on the single braincell trying to divine the sacred geometry of the brap queen supreme

>> No.6171394

>>6169781
The braphog confounds us anon

>> No.6171461

>>6159355
B is cutest, do it

>> No.6171497

>>6170925
Great use of colors, anon
Also really enjoy your shape design

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>>6171497
thanks anon i appreciate the comment

>> No.6171612
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good morning /salt/

>> No.6171687

>>6171612
good morning are you ready for a fun filled day of drawing

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>>6171687
yes

>> No.6171951
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6171951

Got horny doing a face study

>> No.6171964

>>6159284
this is incredibly sexy

>> No.6171965

>>6171000
Looks great! Do you have a twitter?

>> No.6172003
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6172003

goblin sex

>> No.6172117

>>6172003
>gigawix on /ic/
I dont believe you, holy shit

>> No.6172124

>>6171000
one leg is twice as large

>> No.6172218

>>6172117
:D

>> No.6172242

>>6171697
where'd u get those

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>>6172242
pornpics.com
thousands of high quality lewd images organized in sets/the particular shoot the images are from. I will download the whole set if I like it and find excuses to use it. it's good to find some with poses you wouldn't normally do/arent interesting to you, you learn more that way. I've downloaded a ton of images of Paige Turnah, and Shibuya Kaho. they act as crucial references for certain characters.

>>6172003
gobo

>> No.6172257

>>6172250
aw no way I put up in the OP ages ago but someone's deleted it since
also pretty sure that croquis cafe one doesn't work anymore

>> No.6172262

>>6172257
I mean it's still primarily a porn site organized by shitty porn-industry tags so I get it. but It's still a valid resource. it should be added back to the OP

>> No.6172290

>>6172003
What the.... GIGA fucking WIZARD??

>> No.6172441

I'm still not sure if I should go cheesecake or more hardcore. I'm so indecisive.

>> No.6172459

>>6172441
What about softcore?

>> No.6172473

>>6159692
>>6159750
>>6171964
thank you anons

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>>6172250
I tried doing some "gradient map over values" thing and it looked like shit. accidentally threw it over flat color and i got what I wanted so whatever.

>>6172441
start with cheesecake. if you aren't successful.change the subjects.

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WIP

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>> No.6172818

>>6172815
You're not funny.

>> No.6172923

>>6172818
Can't even begin to guess how do you think I am trying to be.

>> No.6172957

>>6172818
Worse, HE is in a sissy cult and is very serious about it.
May the all-merciful God help him.

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>> No.6173087

>>6173081
you drew this???!?
SUGOIIII

>> No.6173102

>>6173081
nice

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>> No.6173749

>>6173081
gonna need a source on that

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>>6172512


>>6173755
nobara best jump girl

>> No.6173831

i dont even drawn "personal" coom, i dont like drawing coom, i like drawing it for money. posted my comm sheet and for the first time in two years got 0 (zero) messages, did it again a week later, nothing. im falling for the ai psyops. there are already things in development that can download all of hentai foundry and danbooru etc and take someone's donut steel and make 3, top pixiv level comms for them in 5 seconds for 25 cents. if you're not at the top .1% there is no hope. i'm gonna get a job at mcdonalds and draw fantasy shit again. what the fuck.
of course I dont believe all of that, yet, but it's settling in

>> No.6173856

>>6173831
>posts for the first time in two years
>expects anyone to see it without shilling it around
theres no ai psyop yet anon its just that no one knows youre offering them who cares to buy one

also were in a near worldwide recession

>> No.6173862

>>6173856
>also were in a near worldwide recession
not him but I really need to keep this in mind when considering the lack of support I'm receiving. I can't just blame it on losing my twitter right??

>> No.6173865

>>6173081
Do you have a twitter?

>> No.6173896

>>6173856
I could've been clearer sorry, it's the first time in two years that after posting 'comms open' or a comm sheet once or twice a month that I got 0 requests. I dont know a thing about the economy but to go from 6-8 requests that kept me afloat to 0 tells me if people are spending any money it's on the top dawgs. Time to shamefully lower my prices below living wage and hope for the best

>> No.6173902

>>6173862
if you look around at every coom artists patreon theyre all slipping slightly and twitter likes arent as crazy as they were for the past two years also
now that more people are back to work and not stuck at home jackin it

>>6173896
you gotta start to stand out a bit more now
since a lot of people are strapped theyd rather stick to what they know which is people who are already established

>> No.6173923

>>6172512
>>6172250
These are extremely good, and look like what I want to be able to do. Do you have any recommended artists to copy?

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>>6173923
I was highly inspired by hayo-cinema, especially their work uwasa no hito. I like drawing bratty mature cougars.

I kinda went through the same kinda thing that >>6173831 did recently and realized I desperately needed to get back to what I wanted to draw in the first place. this feels like where I need to go.

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>>6173955
I guess I should have left a link, and mentioned that I discovered their work early on in my career, 2018 maybe but haven't been drawing what inspired me for a long time.

read now
https://nhentai.net/g/273820/

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>> No.6174159

>>6173865
>>6171965
@Treellaux

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>>6174159
>First tweet has zero hash tags
>8 likes

How are accounts able to grow if they don't use any hashtags? Especially the smaller lesser known ones?

>> No.6174229

>>6174226
hash tags arent really useful on twitter.

>> No.6174232

>>6174229
Then what is? I'm in the process of learning to be good enough to even be considered /Beg/ tier but at hashtags don't really do anything but how do people find your account and content? Do you just get lucky or something?

>> No.6174255

>>6174232
Personally I posted my stuff on places like reddit or gelborru until I had grown enough of a following to retweet my stuff. hashtags are horrible

>> No.6174265

>>6174255
>Gelbooru

That actually sounds like a good idea if you draw anime themed shit or coom. I might skip trying to draw objects like cops or silverware and go straight into figure drawing (the main thing I want to get good at). Is it a bad idea for a beginner like me to learn figure drawing first?

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>>6174265
>That actually sounds like a good idea if you draw anime themed shit or coom.
rule34.xxx if you do western shit

>Is it a bad idea for a beginner like me to learn figure drawing first?
no it's not. it's good you know where to go first. It would help to get a general grasp on perspective but you don't need much to understand how it applies to figures. I recommend "Figure Drawing Design and Invention" thats my go to that I come back for study often. if you find specific things like clothes or anatomy becoming a problem find a book from the morpho series on that subject. if those resources aren't enough find more.

once you've grasped those concepts to the point where you settle into a sketch-a-day type practice you can move onto more advanced perspective

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>>6174347
Thanks for the advice. Also I'm just asking a sort of curiosity: do you have a hard time drawing stuff like clothing or background objects (trees come up furniture, objects, etc). I've noticed that a lot of artists, even the really good ones, focus a lot on the subject but either do very little with the background or don't do a background at all like pic rel. Is it common for seasoned artists to focus deeply on one thing? Would it be bad for me to ONLY focus on figure drawing as opposed to an inanimate objects or vice versa? I initially told myself that I have no business learning how to draw a person, let alone anything worthy of coom status if I cannot draw basic objects like cups or silverware but then I realized you don't necessarily have to be good at everything.

Also I like your work :). Got any social media?

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>>6174355
>do you have a hard time drawing stuff like clothing or background object
I started by creating manga so creating background elements is something i'm used to and enjoy.

>I've noticed that a lot of artists, even the really good ones, focus a lot on the subject but either do very little with the background or don't do a background at all
I've noticed this trend aswell. alot of people just don't have the drive to go outside of their comfort zone. backgrounds have been branded as a secondary skill in our community it seems. I wish that would change. my favorite/best pieces started with a background based on a physical space I know/photographed and had characters put over. of course it's important to focus on what matters and if the artist doesn't have much time for art. then the character is most important for this kind of work.

you don't have to be good at everything. I consider myself a jack of all trades rather than a master of anything. and that's fine.

@hamperaunt/@otakubasket
laundrymomart.com
Devilsmoon.net

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>>6159872

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>>6164341
Yeah, need to draw more dicks. Still debating if Mickey should be cut or uncut.
>>6174391

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>>6174398

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>>6174381
>@hamperaunt/@otakubasket

Just gave you a follow on both :D

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>> No.6175079

>>6172818
>>6172957
Any ideas what deez 2 dinguses are on about?

>> No.6175357

>>6170925
how the fuck do you color like that.

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Good afternoon /salt/

>> No.6175600

>>6175535
Good afternoon! Thanks for helping to keep /salt/ alive

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>>6159242
Critique pls? I feel like there is some stuff wrong with this WIP

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>>6175609
a BUNCH of notes

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>>6175535
good afternoon
have a cup of tea with extra milk :-)

>> No.6176398

>>6175659
Holy jesus thanks anon! This is super helpful c:

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>>6175535
good morning /salt/ work hard today!

>>6176398
glad I could help

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>>6176925
Good morning! Gonna start painting today. And I'm gonna start to doing alts as well for this piece

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>>6176993
Smaller res

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>>6174398
Can I get a general check on this pic I'm doing? Proportions anatomy etc?

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drew a birthday gift for my friend

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fooling around with a new tablet. appealing or na?

>> No.6177643

>>6177604
Could be with better anatomy and thicker proportions

>> No.6177647

>>6177643
when you say "better anatomy" give me a few examples

>> No.6177654

>>6177484
producing dogshit and already signing his work.

>> No.6177674

>>6177654
If you aren't going to explain why it's dogshit then fuck off crab

>> No.6177685

>>6177674
lack of self awareness means you're definitely not going to make it

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>>6177484
the piece isnt developed enough for any crit to be valid. its fine for what it is. if this took you a long time to develop/this was a milestone then that's a problem.

>>6177604
the thick line work does not work with what I think is an attempt at semi-realistic characters. nether the color or the line work are doing enough to create appeal or carry the piece. plus, if you're at render stage without a finished head then your workflow is a mess. start with focusing on figure darwing and creating an appealing figure before rendering because rendering isnt going to make up for these characters.

>>6177685
>>6177654
knock it the fuck off. you're saying nothing of value.

>> No.6177710

>>6177558
Aw did they like it?

>> No.6177717

>>6177705
>knock it the fuck off. you're saying nothing of value.
no value but its still the truth, that anon spittin' facts

>> No.6177719

>>6177484
why is her head just a circle? why are the lines all red and there's no color?

>> No.6177722

>>6177654
Anon that's so rude.

>> No.6177737

>>6177719
It's a wip I wanted to see if the anatomy is ok before continuing. I'm drawing on a phone so it takes a while. I have to a lot of line correcting and reshaping because of low accuracy since I'm drawing with a finger

>> No.6177748

>>6177737
I think you should just keep going. Waiting on someone to give you good anatomy advice seems like it's just going to hold back your learning progress. Make it finished, post and move on. If critique comes from posting then apply it to your next drawing, not the current one.

>> No.6177752

>>6177737
>It's a wip I wanted to see if the anatomy is ok before continuing.
no, learn figure drawing and learn how to develop a COMPLETE figure before moving om

> I'm drawing with a finger
don't bother finishing artwork until you get a stylus or something. go draw with a pencil until then. don't bother drawing with a finger.

>> No.6177778

>>6177710
He loved it a lot, Im very glad. Hes a cool dude

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>>6174618
cont.

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>>6161204
>he didn’t draw the hands

>> No.6177962

>>6177342
Blog?

>> No.6178152

>>6177962
Vlog?

>> No.6178160

>>6177962
@goblinkingart

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>>6177484
If you're using reference (either copying by sight or by tracing), pay very close attention to how you place the body (the figure) across your workspace. The way you have it drawn right now doesn't feel naturally laid down, it looks more like she's riding down an imaginary water slide. You can still correct this.
>>6177647
Here's an example of what I'm talking about, and what I assume, you're trying to portray with your work in progress. I flipped it horizontally to show what you can accomplish with proper reference material.
>>6177737
If drawing on a phone is all you can afford right now, like other anons suggested, try getting a cheap 3 dollar stylus to help you with your work. Drawing with a finger is akin to painting with your fingers in traditional work. The novelty is going to wear off really quick, and you'll be glad you invested in a stylus, much like a pencil.

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>>6174618
good energy

>>6176206
based
not sure what the green hue in the lineart is tho

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>>6178413
another one

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>>6177604
It's cartoony, it reminds me a lot of these characters, and that's not a bad thing. Not everything has to me drawn in anime likeness. Appealing wise, yeah, it's a nice pussy; the asshole could use a little more work and erase the scratch marks across her back, they're distracting. Work on your shadows a bit more too, she looks like she's wearing a shadow thong staple pinned across her pussy like that like The Predator's mandibles. Nice freckled ass cheeks.

>> No.6178438

>>6178413
i had the entire canvas green so when i painted on it itd peek through in some areas

>> No.6178491

>>6178438
MEDS

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>>6177484
Proportions are good, you like drawing girls with meat on their bones, so that's pretty cool. Anatomy will come with a more finished piece and more practice, just keep an eye out how you draw those hands and use the reference material I posted >>6178399 to help you out with placing the body. Remember to take it at your own pace and there's no rush to impress anyone, making you want to post any new developments right away just for the sake to please; the journey of the learning process is yours alone to enjoy, along with your finished drawing. If it's too late to correct any mistakes now, chalk them up to experience and move on to the next drawing. It's the only way you're going to learn. Practice makes perfect, as they say.
You're going to get comments like this >>6177654 >>6177685 >>6177717 giving you critiques in very little words, but pay attention to them.
>no value but it's still the truth, that anon spittin' facts
Sometimes the truth hurts when we're called out on things and we reply back with so much emotion, clouding our rational thought, that we often forget the message the critique is trying to deliver.
>producing dogshit and already signing his work
Are you, producing something that should have your signature on it? Would removing your signature, at least for the time being during your work in progress, benefit you in the long run? I feel it would. Here's a good reason.
>lack of self awareness means you're definitely not going to make it
By removing your signature from your works in progress now, eliminates your ego, completely detaching your self—and your emotions—from your work, allowing it the freedom to stand on its own to be properly critiqued based on things like anatomy, proportions and perspective; all the fundamentals you really need to learn in order for you to grow as an artist and as a person.
Hope this helps shed a little light for you, good luck and remember to have fun drawing.

>> No.6178506

>>6178491
what?

>> No.6178514

>>6178438
dont do that with such a weird color that doesnt complement the whole palette of the final, it almost looks like the artifacts of AI images, if you gonna do an atmospheric color all over the canvas/sketch before color do it with something that complements the final colors in trad its common to just stain everything with umber colors cuz it compliments almost everything but since its digital you can get away with more colors

actually here is an example in trad of jeff miracola staining the bg with colors that end up transitioning easily into the skin tones for example https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggFVqbaLYIQ

or you can use that green along with bluish tones only for the skin areas, doe right it helps give the skin a more natural and realistic look than just using skin tones
like this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MFWf-2p0cf8

>> No.6178530

>>6178514
just quick addition here is a vid of this done in digital for the skin tones

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mi62WC9LqZA

again dot just use it randomly or it looks like random digital artifacts instead of part of the technique and image

>> No.6178537

>>6178496
youre level headed and logical, saddly a lot of anons are going to ignore your advice but i hope you dont stop posting for the sake of the few that will listen

>> No.6178560

>>6178514
>>6178530
Thank you for posting these vids they look super helpful

>dont do that with such a weird color that doesnt complement the whole palette of the final

yeah that makes sense in hindsight ill be more conscientious about it next time

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Good morning /salt/ work hard today

>> No.6179023

>>6178418
hope someone commissions you to draw preggo abbie

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>>6179023
I hope so too, even though I've done it already (for myself).

>> No.6179164

>>6179143
FOOOOOOODAAAAAAAAAAAA-SE

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todays drawing

>> No.6179455

>>6177604
>butt freckles
please continue...

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>>6178537
I'll post from time to time, if I help one anon with some good words of advice, they're better off for it, I hope. Harsh critiques knock you in the fucking jaw, but if you can shake it off, find the value in them, do your own research and some self searching of your own, they pays off. Like the anon who pointed out I draw better dicks, he or she is right. I can't have a good sex scene without a good dick in there.

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Loose sketch

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MOOOOOOO

>> No.6179803

>>6178637
Give her back her iconic beauty mark you coward

>> No.6179895

>>6179756
Cute

>> No.6179981

>>6179756
cute.
But where are the BOOBS?

>> No.6180034

>>>6179373

I thought I got the construction, anatomy and gesture acceptably, but people said it looks ugly

is there an objective way to improve this?

>> No.6180098

>>6179981
human boobs are redundant imo when there’s already the udders

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Velma!

>> No.6180381

>>6179143
Haha, that's great.

>> No.6180515

>>6180372
oh hai beep

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>> No.6180565

>>6180515
Yo. I can't believe this thread is still alive.

>> No.6180643

>>6180522
Traditional coom. Very nicely done on the paint pooling, adding more thickness to the cum.

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todays drawing

>> No.6181327

>>6181288
why is she shoving pregnancy test into her mouth

>> No.6181330

>>6181327
Lots of sperm in there

>> No.6181386

>>6179143
>>6178418
BASED. If you have more abby art id love to see. Im an abby appreciator as well