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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER OR /INT/ERMEDIATE IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
Use this thread instead of making new threads or post in the drawthread with fundamental exercises.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS using one of the following methods:
1. screenshot the image and post that instead
2. change camera capture settings to something smaller
3. send to computer and resize in MSPaint

READ THE STICKY:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

RECOMMENDED BOOKS FOR BEGINNERS:
- Keys to drawing
- Perspective made easy
- Figure - Design and invention
- Pen and Ink

TRY TO BE ACTIVE AND GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK.
When giving feedback, avoid vague "advice" - point what's wrong and try to give the anon you're quoting a clear direction to improve their art (study heads < watch THIS VIDEO about head structure, read THIS SECTION of THIS ARTIST'S BOOK, etc).
You, feedback seeking anon, should also try to be clear and concise when asking for critique/help. When posting your artwork, say what you want help with, and what's your goal with the study/artwork.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3uxMdokX68

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>>6104254

>> No.6107932
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>> No.6107970

>>6107932
Something feels off, maybe the head and ears are too big? Feet too small? Something with the proportions

>> No.6107975
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WIP I found a cute snail ref

>> No.6107995

>>6107970
Maybe, I'm doing in this style because the proportions are weird and I need to think on the perspective so I just simply automatic draw what I already knows it works. I don't see anything too weird, but I'm wait a little and see if I can spot any mistake.

>> No.6108002

>>6107975
what's the thing on top

>> No.6108009
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>>6107975
Verry cute

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>> No.6108018
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6108018

Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 2

>> No.6108030
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6108030

I want to draw metal stuff

>> No.6108031
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6108031

I have no idea how to draw the futa cock inside the pussy in a similar pose instead of the butt.

>> No.6108040

>try to draw a face 5 times
>5th try is passable, rest are shit
>have absolutely no idea why or what I can do to make it come out right the first time, it’s literally fucking random
Drawing is the most cursed thing to exist on this fucking planet
>”Loomis”
Fuck you

>> No.6108042

will I get good at construction if I keep sketching boxmen while paying attention to perspective?

>> No.6108044

>>6108031
References my guy. Just look through random futa doujins, you’ll probably stumble on something useful.
Pretty solid linework. Even though your drawing is /beg/ I already get the feeling from it that you have a good eye. Keep grinding.

>> No.6108049

>>6108009
:)

>> No.6108051

>>6108018
Godspeed

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>>6107883
Finally forever immortalized as a /beg/. I was doing a different study so I didn't work on this one much further, but I'll probably finish it maybe tomorrow. It's so comforting painting zoomed out with big shapes not having to worry about detail.

>> No.6108087

>>6108009
Thanks Fren, love it

>> No.6108119

>>6108064
Looks like a man’s body

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6108122

How close am I? Why does it look so much worse after erasing the pencil sketch?

>> No.6108124

>>6108031
bitch ass GOOSEb

>> No.6108126

>>6108119
he's scared of coom

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>>6108122
The eye looks too big and the nose is in a different position

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Errors?

>> No.6108145

>>6108141
Numerous

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>>6108122
Went ahead and markered him

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Some ref practice turned into a shitpost when a certain video came up on my playlist. I don’t have any progress to report, it just made me giggle to do this, and I guess a question on how to make sure hair flows the way I want it to when I’m having to reverse engineer refs for BG characters. I want to pose them in more stuff.

>> No.6108152

>>6108138
Thanks anon, appreciate the pic especially

>> No.6108165

With the breakthrough of DALL E 2, why are you still trying to learn to draw or paint?

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>>6108151
Refs for comparison. Everyone but the main guy was just a joke so I didn’t try with them, but I would like to get good with the smug green guy’s hair, since one of the more main characters is going to have a big hair style too.

Hair is so fucking cool, it’s such a descriptive part of characters, I want to get better at drawing that.

>> No.6108168

Did a 30 minute "class mode" gesture session this morning. These two aren't total dog shit, and that's interesting to me because I haven't done gesture or any sort of figure drawing in about a month. This is the first time I've done one of these after a long gap and got a halfway decent result the first time. Does that mean I'm improving?.

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>>6108168
Woops forgot the images

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>>6108170

>> No.6108174

>>6108165
AI art is soulless and has a noticeable stink about it. DALL-E 2 can do a reasonable facsimile of various artists' style with a prompt, but it can't express anything deeper than that or capture the same details as a human artist.

All that aside if you're even asking that question you're definitely NGMI because you're drawing for the wrong reasons in the first place.

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back to the mines

>> No.6108176

>>6108171
Nice job on the hip and leg area here anon. You will soon begin to feel the form

>> No.6108179

>>6108175
Can you draw me being dragged by her also? I look like a creepier version of Raoh from hokuto no ken.

>> No.6108180

>>6108174
Just how deluded are you?
Even in its infancy D2 can paint better than anyone on this board already.

You obviously didn't see D2 painting and 2 art.

>> No.6108184
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6108184

got really drunk and tried rendering

>> No.6108194

>>6108145
Which are?? I only see the head being a bit too small

>> No.6108196

>>6108170
Talented artist with great proportions.
>>6108171
Constructioncuck with bad proportions.

>> No.6108197

>>6108151
Stop sketching so dark

>> No.6108198

>>6108196
It's not actually construction, just God awful shitty horrible terrible attempts at wrapping lines

>> No.6108199

>>6108040
>thinks artists always get things right on the first try
artists do studies, rough sketches, thumbnails
you're only just now figuring that out

>> No.6108201

When making copies, it's hard to feel the form since I spend so much time and attention on copying the exact lines. How do I cope with this?

>> No.6108205

>>6108201
big to small. focus on the bigger detail like gesture/pose then work on the small one like faces.

>> No.6108211

>>6108180
You're the delusional one, who thinks art is about skillchecks. DALL-E might "mog" most /ic/ posters if both were told to PYW, but its ability to accomplish fine and specific goals with its art is severely limited.

>> No.6108213

>>6108165
Let me know when you can use the AI to illustrate a full manga chapter without needing to draw anything.
Once the initial shock wears off, you realize that there’s still a shit ton that the AI still can’t do (it mangles faces and hands pretty bad), and may never be able to do, because of the inherent indeterminacy in translating an image into a verbal description.

>> No.6108224

>>6108165
BECAUSE I JUST FUCKING WANT TO YOU TECHIE FAG.
GO BACK TO /AIA/

>> No.6108232
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6108232

>how do i get better
>just draw
>draw
>still shit
what gives?

>> No.6108240

>>6108213
>because of the inherent indeterminacy in translating an image into a verbal description.
BUT I SAID STEVEN UNIVERSE IN THE STYLE OF FRANK FRAZETTA AND IT LOOKED LIKE FRANK FRAZETTA DREW STEVEN UNIVERSE JUST LIKE MAGIC WE'RE ALL OUT OF A JOB REEEEE
Like I said anon doesn't understand that art isn't about skillchecks and that unless the AI can produce EXACTLY the image you want, consistently, from verbal descriptions, it's useless for anything real artists currently do. It's like a fable about why you shouldn't spend all your time on /ic/.

>> No.6108245

I can't draw digitally for the life of me.
Should i stick to pencil and paper while i'm learning the basics? I am at chapter 3 of 'Keys to drawing' currently.

>> No.6108250

>>6108232
you haven't drawn enough

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>>6108179

>> No.6108273

>>6108232
learning the *fundamentals* can help understand how to draw, that way you're not drawing without a goal.

>> No.6108276

>>6108040
asaro head helps when actually creating the face and not just some vague head shape.

>> No.6108280
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6108280

Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 3

>>6108051
Thanks a lot, I'm hoping this will eventually lead to some kind of improvement; not really used to drawing sort of blobby, misshapen old men this book starts out with. At the very least I'll be able to say I actually spent time on Loomis.

>> No.6108283

>>6108245
do both, they're just tools. the skills from one transfer to another. PYW digital and pencil nerd.

>> No.6108296
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6108296

Yo, how do I emulate the googly eye guy's art style? I love his work but I can't capture the feel.

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>>6108283
here's digital.
It's a big cock, get it?
pencil inc

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>>6108283
Pencil
This was a book exercise for switching between controlled and quick drawing.

>> No.6108312

Is it just me or Fun with a pencil is not really a good book? I feel like he's teaching stuff backwards and halfway.
By grinding boxes and cylinders you'll be able to figure out everything taught in fun with pencil except maybe the shadow stuff

>> No.6108318

>>6108302
>>6108304
neither are particularly impressive, the chicken looks like it was traced, and the orchids have a strong symbol drawing vibe. Your drawing what you think is there, and not using your eyes to draw what is there.

>> No.6108323

>>6108318
real talk, the chicken was drawn from reference, not traced.
I was looking at the orchids a lot and avoiding symbol drawing, but perhaps i failed. ty for the input, i will keep on grinding!

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6108329

How long until I can draw nice faces in a matter of minutes?
>>6108184
Is getting drunk the key? Pretty cool
>>6108141
Feels super flat. I wouldn't recommend drawing in profile like that if you can avoid it
>>6108012
Very nice, I feel like there could be some higher values closer to the direction of the sun

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Should I get a drawing tablet?

>> No.6108347

>>6107932
proportions look good to me

the ground plane is tilting though

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>> No.6108367

>>6108197
You mean don’t press so hard with the sketch lines with the pencil next time? I can work on that. Number 2 pencils aren’t bad for sketches I assume, right? I tried to use kneading eraser on the sketches too for them, but it wasn’t coming off.

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Does anyone here just completely ignore observational drawing? Im so focused on construction and drawing from imagination, that I haven't worked on it al all. Just wanted opinions on if it's Worth working on it or not

>> No.6108376

>>6108344
If you want

>> No.6108378

>>6108040
postit, jesus

>> No.6108384

>>6108075
comfy atmosphere :>

>> No.6108388

>>6108374
Same, sometimes I feel like I should do more observational drawing, but then I just wouldn't draw because I hate it

>> No.6108392

>>6108040
Post your work, maybe we'll be able to tell what's wrong

>> No.6108436

>>6108388
That's exactly my issue too. I don't think it's particularly hard to measure the angles correctly, it's just long and boring. But Whenever I go to a live figure drawing I look l Ike a fucking beg amateur even though I can probably construct stuff that looks 10 times better.

>> No.6108444

>>6108374
You'll learn more from it. I guess it's technically possible to get good entirely through construction if you study it enough but even then you'll be studying it from people who studied observational drawing, anatomy, etc and once you get to that level of nuance you're basically doing observational drawing anyway, just from construction guidelines. But you'd be going around your ass to get to your elbow.

>> No.6108450

>>6107883
I really like this. It feels clean and raw.

>> No.6108479

>>6108302
>>6108304
these are about the same quality. chicken is more interesting with its varying shapes and such but as other guy said I'd assume it's been traced given your flower drawing

>> No.6108495
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Kinda curious why all the threads apart from this one and lsg are dead

>> No.6108496

>>6108495
This is fantastic what do you use to learn?

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>>6108075
Sort of a nitpick but thats not exactly how the japanese traditionally drew (pulling back the bow-string) their bows.

There are two main kinds of draw, notably the Mediterranean draw which I think you got the reference from, the thumb draw which everyone else outside of western europe traditionally used (with differing variations).
Pinch draw exists but is significantly less popular.

Asia historically used the thumb draw and the japanese apparently have a special kind of thumb draw according to wikipedia. Shown in pi

This is less of an art nitpick and more of a history nitpick and it is completely plausible the guy you drew just happened to use the Mediterranean draw, but I think you were going for a historical japanese kind of thing.

Overall good work though.

>> No.6108502

>>6108496
A bit of everything
Full proko course, bridgeman, hogarth, hampton
Stuff like perspective made easy, some anime books, tried copying jung gi and other artists
A bunch of random courses on random topics most of which i dropped at the middle
The last thing i did was some fkey study

>> No.6108503

>>6108501
which I think you got from the reference*
Shown in attached pic.*

>> No.6108504

>>6108495
tonyo's curse on all the dad trannies

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>>6108502
Then I guess i'll drop here this one too

>> No.6108514

>>6108501
Yes, the fingers with the half-glove still have to be added so does the woven string back garment that serves as a chin rest. I am by no means done and that detail should have honestly been made clear earlier in the painting process, but thank you for the history lesson I too love details like this.

>> No.6108539

>>6108296
Anyone?

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Did a very simplified Leyendecker study, he’s such a god bros.

>> No.6108545

when practicing life drawing as a /beg/gar, should I focus on sketching them quickly/within the time limit or as accurately as I can?

>> No.6108546

>>6108545
First accurately, then slowly go quicker. You need to learn accurate first so you know the general shape as you go quicker. As you quicker your lines will feel looser and more natural

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>>6108012
Looks good but i think the bridge looks a bit asymmetrical. Might want to apply focus points, unless the bridge is like that irl.
>>6108030
Unless its meant to be your own original thing, the forearms dont seem to be anatomically correct. Also sorta looks like you rushed the wrists as well. Might want to just slow down a bit and use a skeleton reference.
>>6108151
Compared to your reference, big-hair-guy's eyes seem to be in the wrong position.
>>6108171
Biceps are bit too "round", looks a little unnatural. Pic related
>>6108329
Your top eyelids and eyeballs which you put a bit more detail in is quite jarring compared the rest of the face's more simple features.

>> No.6108550

>>6108546
makes sense, thanks

>> No.6108553

>>6108329
Yea i usually dont but the side profile is important for what im trying to achieve. How do i make it not look super flat tho?

>> No.6108582

>>6108553
show the other breast, it looks like a giant monoboob

>> No.6108598

>>6108544
Very nice anon

>> No.6108607

>>6108549
Hmm, thanks for pointing that out. I feel like doing really simple eyes is just too cartoony, but I didn't think about how it meshes
>>6108553
If you're doing a true profile view then I'm not sure, otherwise just turn her a bit and draw it in sight perspective so it's almost in profile

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>>6108549
How's this?

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>>6107883
dynamic sketching week 2 day 5

>> No.6108629

>>6108621
Aren't those suppose to be like 10 minutes warm up before actual drawing?

>> No.6108632

>>6108621
You've been doing this for like a whole week mate, try actually drawing something

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6108649

How do you stop colored pencils from smearing inside a closed book?

>> No.6108659

>>6108649
What the fuck is this nigger childs drawing

>> No.6108666
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6108666

>>6108280
>>6108018
based, doing the same after dropping it a while ago, wgmi

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It's been a while since I've browsed /ic/, but here's my latest one

>> No.6108687

>>6108495
/beg/ has a pretty simple answer. /ic/ shitpost culture drives people into /beg/ because people can't tell you to go to /beg/ here, and it feels better to be told "not /beg/" (though it's /beg/ and /int/ now anyway I guess, and /int/ is literally the only other tier besides /beg/; pretty sure there's someone on /ic/ who would tell any given master artist throughout history they were mid int at best). Conversely, if you're good enough that /ic/ is generally not that helpful to you, but you want to help out others, /beg/ is where you can do the most good. Basically /beg/ is the only place where /ic/ functions the way it should, so naturally it receives more traffic.

/lsg/ I'm pretty sure is a combination of it being an extremely popular fetish (a much larger percentage of men than you'd expect have self-reported as various kinds of hebephile (which includes paedophilia), and that's just self-reporting; don't know the figures on women but based on the percentage of women I know who have confided that kind of thing in me I suspect it's pretty high, maybe even higher than for men; the legal and ethical outlet for those interests (in most countries, RIP canada) is hentai), 4chan historically being a very loli-friendly board (less-so in recent years, of course, but it's still pretty heavily inundated in weeb culture) and the fact that it's banned on most of the site now (and technically /ic/ as well, but /lsg/ gets the tacit approval of the mods as long as people behave there; the rules in its op are actually thread-specific rules enforced by the mods), so it serves as an alternative to /b/.

>> No.6108691

>>6108629
they are exercises on their own to learn, for beginners at least
after that they become "warm ups"
>>6108632
im focusing more on the course
but dont worry fren, i have being drawing

>> No.6108702

>>6108544
I just checked out that artist out of curiosity. I'm not the biggest big fan of the aesthetic personally, but the men looked unusually dapper and erotic for a dude to be drawing them. Of course he was suspected of being gay...

>> No.6108708

how to loomis? i just downloaded fun w/ a pencil and I can't seem to draw an eye or lip or nose or chin or any of that.
As soon as I start getting into any detail it becomes a scribble or just random lines

>> No.6108712

>>6108495
Can't talk about most, but I only use /ic/ to post on /lsg/ because I feel like is one of the few last bastions of old imageboard culture despite all the crying and shitty fake drama from normies and to try to help in what I can the few /beg/s I see some promises or know I can give a solid enough advice i think it will make a difference.

I rarely get any solid critique around here, for me /ic/ is useful because it makes me draw a lot since I see a lot of people drawing and talking about the craft keeps me pupped since always on my mind and to keep my ego down since dealing a lot with normies that swear you are incredible talented will kill your drive to improve if really believe on their bullshit. I do post on most generals, saving /asg/ because I think that general is incredible redundant and is mostly master studies and referential drawing, something I never do, but i don't do it looking for critiques, I do it to keep them with some movement, if I want a quick and solid response about something I keep to /beg/int/ that still is one of the few places on the internet were people will call out any flaws they see on my work.

>> No.6108718

>>6108708
>As soon as I start getting into any detail it becomes a scribble or just random lines
What do you mean? You lose control of your body or something? Are you an unironic helmet wearing retard?

>> No.6108723

>>6108708
Fun with a pencil is advertised as a complete beginner book, and it is but if you're struggling with imagining what things are supposed to look like when trying to draw you should probably try Keys to Drawing first. It will teach you observational drawing more intuitively imo and then you can move on to fun with a pencil which is great as well.

>> No.6108727

ok real question, or to give suggestions whatever.
Sketches are generally better looking than the lineart idk how to explain it but the multiple lines of the sketch make it look way better than the few lines of the next step.
how to avoid this basically

>> No.6108734

>>6108727
Sketch in ink?
Alternately, get better at inking.

>> No.6108737

>>6108727
line weight is what I think is the issue. When we sketch we go over areas more then once making the line look darker and thicker, once the line art go over ever line is about the same.

>> No.6108751

>>6108734
IIRC it's the same reason proper cross hatching looks good, your brain interprets the sketch lines as more dynamic and possibly also as texture that gives form/volume to the drawing. in theory it's a straight forward issue to correct, essentially you just need to improve your inking skills and use proper line weights and maybe add shading/cross-hatching to replace the psuedo-volume your sketch lines are providing. tracing directly over your sketch in a 1-1 manner also gives the drawing a stiff feeling so try not to be too accurate but keep your line quality high (blurring your sketch and lowing opacity can help with this)

>> No.6108752

>>6108751
my bad, meant to reply to >>6108727

>> No.6108755
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6108755

jesus christ this will be way harder than I thought

>> No.6108757
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6108757

Hello BEG, keep at it!

>>6108727
Literally pic related, lady on left you can see the steps. Rough sketch has many extra lines which often show you the shape or motion or even reminds you of shadows. But once you do the clean line and nothing else all that illusion goes away. Its especially bad if your line has no thickness variation just like i set it up for this piece.

>>6108708
Either try easier book (drawing on right side of brain or keys to drawing i am currently doing btw) or accept that it takes many times before you understand the shapes and forms behind complex body parts. Also there is possibility you simply need to ZOOM IN (on the reference) and draw in thinner line.

>>6108495
Other threads are mostly just 2 same schizo posters spamming memes / AI threads / baits.

>>6108344
Screen-less xp-pen tablets costs next to nothing and are good enough for BEGs. Grab the biggest one (big drawing area) your budget will allow you.

>>6108296
Post reference and your attempt side by side. You dont actually expect anons to read your mind, do you?

>>6108232
Draw more + follow some recommended book anon

>>6108175
>>6107932
Soul

>>6108040
Look at my 1st attempt on her face. And thats after many do-overs. And lets not forget the "final" face still looks bad

>> No.6108766

I just understood everything. I'm not supposed to use 100% density. Ever.

>> No.6108768
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6108768

What's wrong with this?

>> No.6108770

>>6108549
>Compared to your reference, big-hair-guy's eyes seem to be in the wrong position.

Do you mean the location of the eye shape on the face or the little colored circle with the two orb inside that I can’t remember the name of (iris?) Former I did goof where they were going but the latter was intentional to see if I could make him look eslewhere and make it believable.

>> No.6108773

Guys how do i decline or avoid BBC requests on twitter or elsewhere without looking racist?

>> No.6108777
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6108777

>>6107883
I need you bros
how do I use perspective to make clearer the fact that my fairy's legs are spreading ? for example the front leg is supposed to lean toward the viewer but I fucked and it just looks short
other advice welcome this unrefed pose is horrible to draw I don't even know if you understand she is facing you but her hips are rotated

>> No.6108783

>>6108777
I don't even know what your are trying to say, try to look up a reference for whatever you are going

>> No.6108786

>>6108783
her legs are supposed to be open with a 45° angle

>> No.6108791

>>6108786
A branch that thick would force her legs to open wider than 45 degrees just by sitting on it like that

>> No.6108797
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6108797

>>6108777
You're trying to convey an action in a static image. If you want to show the legs spreading, spread them. Pose the figure with the knees apart, not touching. If you can't figure out the pose, use a doll or drawing manikin to work it out. If all else fails, use yourself as reference. Get in front of a mirror and work out the pose.

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>>6108755
damn that looks good
did u used a ref for this one? could u shared it pls.....

>> No.6108823
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6108823

>>6108815
it's from morpho muscled anatomy

>> No.6108833

>>6108823
ooh nice, thanks fren

>> No.6108837
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6108837

>>6108777
Try using a virtual mannequin because I'm not sure what you mean

>> No.6108840

>>6108773
>sorry I don’t do raceplay :/

>> No.6108841

>>6108773
Just say you want to avoid political and controversial topics because you are jewish and doesn't deal well with confrontation.

>> No.6108847
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6108847

>> No.6108850
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6108850

>>6108847
Here's the ref

I don't think I got the accuracy down really but I like how the end result looks

>> No.6108860

>>6108847
Looks great, how did you determine what colors to use?

>> No.6108865

>>6108860
I threw stupid colors at it and found fun ones using the eyedropper in the blending spots between them, just kinda correcting as I went.

>> No.6108900
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>>6108847
made a couple fixes here and there

>> No.6108909
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6108909

moving on from focusing solely on shapes.
starting to use different brushes, trying to figure out edges. first time using a mixing brush for some areas and i'm not sure how convincing it is.
need to work on values as well, lots to do

>> No.6108916
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6108916

finally found time to color this in

>> No.6108921
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6108921

is anything going right with this? im like 3 hours in no ref used. im having trouble deciding on the lighting. and yes im aware of symbol drawing, shit rendering, im getting to those

>> No.6108922

>>6108909
Are you doing the faces misshapen and ugly on purpose?

>> No.6108924

>>6108921
Another victim of the hard round meme

>> No.6108929

>>6108924
kek im going smooth that out. i meant in terms of uncannyness and such

>> No.6108963
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6108963

Before I move on with this one are there any glaring problems I think her back or ass is wrong somehow.

>> No.6108968
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6108968

>>6108963
This was the first time
I tried drawing these characters back in April 2020. It’s a shame I’ve only gotten worse since then.

>> No.6108983

imagine if /beg/ put as much effort towards the fundies as they did towards anime porn of their waifu

>> No.6108988

>>6108983
what are you even referring to?

>> No.6108990

>>6108988
Your posts.

>> No.6108991

>>6108924
pyw

>> No.6108992

>>6108990
?
There's like one guy who posted futa shit and that's it. Take your meds

>> No.6108993

>>6108963
>>6108968
>complete regression
should've listened to people who told you to study and finish your pictures, they weren't bullshitting you

>> No.6108997

>>6108993
Oh god it’s so true! The crabs are the wisest, most valuable contributors to this board!

>> No.6108999

>>6108997
youre totally owning the crabs by drawing worst than you did two years ago have fun with that

>> No.6109006

>>6108999
In two years I’ll barely be able manage chicken scratched stick figures! Then you’ll rue the day!

>> No.6109010
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6109010

>>6108012
Take my advice with a grain of salt. I've done very little environment painting, so it could be a case of the blind leading the blind. I tried putting my own advice into practice by doing a paint-over and wasn't pleased with the result.

>> No.6109011

>>6108797
>>6108777
absolutely do NOT use a doll. that is the #1 way to make all of your drawings look lifeless and amateur. dolls were not meant to be used as references for 2d art, they were meant to be used in fashion design. using dolls makes your work look boring, flat, and anatomically incorrect. use real life references of real life people. falling into the habit of using dolls/skeleton sketches for posing is what keeps people in beg tier.

>> No.6109012

>>6108963
>>6108968
your drawings are actually alright but you’re kinda annoying desu
you ALWAYS mention becoming worse, but when someone agrees, you call them crabs

>> No.6109015
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6109015

>>6108012
Here is the paint-over. I feel like the sun is competing too much with the temple for attention. Would probably crop the top and leave the bottom if I did it again. That would preserve the cool reflection in the water too. Hope this was helpful.

>> No.6109022
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6109022

>>6108921
I'd work on structure of the face and head a bit. Looks like you already picked a light source by the highlights of the eyes. Here's how I'd do it. I kind of aged her up a bit with all the rendering, but I hope it gives you an idea of the planes. Keep going!

>> No.6109024

>>6109012
Because I haven’t gotten worse and you’d have to be a retard, like the crabs, to think so. But they can’t resist the bait.

>> No.6109026

>>6109015
Can you explain how you approached this a bit?

>> No.6109032

>>6109024
you’re just as retarded for intentionally baiting

>> No.6109036

I know there's a lot of emphasis on using your shoulder for quick movements for larger lines, and that's easy, but what the fuck do you do with smaller finer lines?

>> No.6109037

>>6109032
Keep telling yourself that, crab.

>> No.6109056

>>6109026
It's difficult to explain a painting process, but I'll try and give an example.
The first thing that stood out to me in this piece was the tree-line. I found it very boring. So then the question I ask myself is -- why?
Well, all of the trees are the same shape and size. So I grab a brush and make big and small shapes. Big at the bottom, small at the top.
Trees tend to have gaps between the leaves toward the top, which is interesting, so I grabbed a scatter brush and cut some of the sky into it. I didn't plan that -- I tried it out and it looked better, so I left it.
I felt like it looked too green. So, I thought, I'll push some of that green toward the oranges because of the sun, as well as a bit toward blue because of the sky interacting with it. I just grab the local color (green) and edge it toward the color interacting with it. If I don't like it I push the slider a bit further or closer until it starts to look okay.
I go over the entire piece thinking about it like this.

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6109060

>>6109024

>> No.6109093

>>6109015
I just noticed that the giant tree on left makes the piece too unbalanced -- feels too left heavy. If I moved that to the right it would balance out the piece, as well as take some focus away from the sun. Win-win. The light shining through the trees would look good too. Can't un-see.

>> No.6109110

i just want drawing to feel fun again.

>> No.6109119

>>6108840
what if they say its not raceplay and its just a dark skinned man with a light skinned woman?

>> No.6109156

>>6108916
fucking awesome
geat job

>> No.6109178

>>6108916
dis is cool

>> No.6109185
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6109185

>stop drawing for weeks
>first drawing
Should i rest for another month or start conquering the known world?

>> No.6109202

>>6108921
>no ref used
don't do that

>> No.6109206

after you do a figure drawing, how do you check it for accuracy/precision?

>> No.6109210

>>6108983
>tfw permabeg that draws mostly my anime waifu and do fundamental sometimes
remeber permabeg bros fundies help you draw your waipu to be more fappable

>> No.6109214

>>6109036
From the shoulder for big lines, from the elbow for medium, from the wrist for short lines, with the fingers for very small lines.
On digital, you can also zoom in and out to suit your preferences. Just try not to get stuck using only small or very small strokes to prevent strains or possibly injure yourself.

>> No.6109215

>>6109202
I want to draw a completely fictional person when I get better. Nta btw.

>> No.6109229

>>6109015
>>6109022

Thanks for making posts like this. I'm not either anon you replied to, but I find these posts very useful regardless. Just letting you know by doing this you're helping more than just the people you're replying to.

>> No.6109242

heckin cursed

>> No.6109248

>>6109119
Aren't you worrying too much about this? Just say you won't draw it and it they don't like it they can draw it themselves. Everyone has preferences and it isn't their right to force their own preferences onto you. You don't want to draw it, that's that.

>> No.6109258

>>6109119
Just ignore the requests.

>> No.6109269

>>6108841
Objectively correct answer. It's worked for at least a few generations of "ashkenazi" "jews."

>> No.6109270

>>6109010
>>6109015
>>6109093
Alright thanks for looking at my piece and giving advice
I tend to forget to look at the piece as a whole

>> No.6109275
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6109275

>>6108598
Thanks, much appreciated.

>>6108702
Doesn’t make a difference to me, I want to draw nice men and women too.

>> No.6109283

>>6108922
was not my intention, no

>> No.6109301

>>6109015
Very nice, but yea, this type of composition really makes the sun hard to ignore since it literally outshines everything else. Maybe a splash of harsher light on the temple could do it, just needs a bit of draw to pull attention to itself.

>> No.6109307

I've been stuck grinding basic shapes for like a year now, and I still don't have them perfectly down. Can I just move on to fucking gesture and shit?

>> No.6109324

>>6109307
You can do whatever you want. It's your time and your brain. You know it better than anyone else here.

>> No.6109335

are the premium proko courses worth it? figure drawing specifically

>> No.6109341

>>6109307
If you can't do "basic shapes" perfectly after a year of grinding I don't know how you expect to succeed in general but go for it bro.

>> No.6109343

>>6109335
Worth pirating, yeah. Go through the free stuff on YouTube to see if you'd pay for more similar stuff that's a bit more in depth.

>> No.6109346
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6109346

>>6108921
>>6108924
>>6109022
bigger brushes
block in light/shadow

>> No.6109399

>>6108770
I think the problem is that your plastering flat symbol-like yes on a round orb. In your reference, the face is a little flatter. Generally faces are more 3d but for owl house it's okay for it being a heavily stylised cartoon.

The rules are straightforward for 3d with it being just orbs as eyeballs and then drawing skin over that.
In a cartoon they may have their own rules (which I am ignorant of) that you would have to follow.

I remember seeing a Japanese tutorial on how to make faces/heads look a bit better, I lost it so I'll send my own ver. drawing in a bit,

>>6108617
still seems a bit off to me.
I think it might be the shadows in the eyeballs themselves.
The eyebrows are in a strange position, seemingly congruent to the brow rather than actually being part of it like it is irl.
The forehead has a distinguished wrinkle but your nose is simplistic which is even more jarring when compared to the eyes as well.
I think the main problem is that a lot of the face seems to be too abstracted, too symbolic compared to the eyes which are implied to be proper spheres

From a distance your face actually looks pretty good, but it doesn't seem to hold up to scrutiny upon closer inspection

Do note I am a beg myself

>> No.6109402
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6109402

well it's no master piece. it I'm proud of myself for being able to out together what I learned feom drawing body parts separately and putting them together, what do you think of it anons

>> No.6109404

>>6109307
It takes a lifetime to master something, anon. Do it in passes. Get a handle on one aspect of your drawings until it's no longer the worst thing about your drawings. Then iterate and improve on your next biggest weakness. Repeat. You'll come back around.

>> No.6109405
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6109405

>>6109399
It's my interpretation of this meme, I wasn't sure how many features I wanted to keep, so it is what it is. Thanks for the input though, I appreciate it

>> No.6109411

>>6109402
Good job anon :).
You might be leaning too heavily into the anime style.
Do note that anime and cartoons are abstractions/stylised representations of real life.

>> No.6109413

>>6109411
Yeah, while drawing this I based design heavily on Art president sunomiya feom Nagatoro manga, even though I like anime I want to draw more stylized stuff. I am still struggling my experimenting with my style stage.

>> No.6109416

>>6109119
Then don't respond

>> No.6109417
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6109417

>>6109405
I think you are simplifying what is already very very simple.
You might want to use an actual face as a reference and then bang it down into the meme rather than having it straight from the meme.
Seeing as you are referencing the basic features of a face, i guess you sort of miss the context of the meme face.
>>6109399
Pic

>> No.6109422

>>6109413
It is definitely far too early to be focusing top heavily on finding a style, you still have to be familiar with the basics first.

>> No.6109432
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6109432

Finished Gesture study What yall think?

>> No.6109435
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6109435

This was an attempt at capturing likeness of a real person but with my own pose. I can already spot a few flaws now since finishing it last night (collarbone is particularly obvious now).

Also, off topic, someone on Deviant Art made a 'request' and they clearly spam every artist asking for the same request. They have hundreds of requested drawings of their lame OC on their profile. Are these people mentally ill?

>> No.6109439

>>6109432
too static

>> No.6109454

>>6109432
i think you should right-click > rotate counter-clockwise before uploading

>> No.6109456
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6109456

actually trying to render for the sake of it, I hate polishing my shitty compositions.

>> No.6109464

>>6109456
Blue background but orange shadow still getting orange bounce lights

>> No.6109486

>>6109456
great render
are you using any source to learn?

>> No.6109487
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6109487

>> No.6109497

>>6109486
thanks anon, trying to use as many as I can. This I would probably attribute more towards Sinix's YT anatomy series: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLflflDShjUKH4EfZyf0vuKEuqeqvlV0Qd

>> No.6109505
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6109505

>>6109497
cool, thanks for sharing the course

I think you are better than me but I would suggest you to try more saturation and some highlights

might be a stylistic choice but I think it makes it pop out more

I would make the skin look more reflective too but this is my coombrain speaking

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>> No.6109526
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6109526

did another master study today

>> No.6109529
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6109529

>learn anatomy
>learn lights and shadows
>try to put my learned stuff to use
>looks like shit
>go back and draw chibi doodles

>> No.6109541

>>6109435
Lmao why would you sign this shit

>> No.6109556

>>6109541
>mocking beginners on a beginner board
pyw

>> No.6109572

>>6109556
I'm not mocking his work, Im asking why would he sign it. It's hilarious no matter your skill level

>> No.6109577

>>6108232
same boat. i been drawing for a year and i feel like i got worse. I started to actually learn from the books this time maybe you should do the same

>> No.6109578

>>6109572
>calls work 'shit'
>"I'm not mocking it"
>refuses to post his own work
>actually retarded

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6109584

opinions, thought?

>> No.6109585

>>6108232
at least you're still shit. I feel like I've gotten worse over time

>> No.6109590

>>6109584
I think it's really great m8. Though it looks like you tried to draw her other nostril? The tip of the nose is kind of wonky.

>> No.6109593

>>6109578
Stop signing your shit incel, it's embarrassing. Look how red mad you are you are for people calling you out

>> No.6109595

>>6109590
yeah i saw that as soon as i posted but trying not to go back to my drawings as soon as its done or i spend an hour trying to polish a turd, its just a random heavy line when i was outlining the nose its not meant to be a nostril, thank you for compliment <3


>>6109593
hes proud of his work retard, just because youre ashamed to sign your stuff dont put other down for doing so

>> No.6109599

>>6109402
better than my drawings

>> No.6109600

>>6109577
what book are you studying? i’m reading perspective made easy and keys to drawing as well as following proko’s free course but i don’t know if that’s a good approach over just drawing whatever i want

>> No.6109601

>>6109595
You can be proud of your work without signing it. It's embarrassing, stop encouraging autistic embarrassing behavior.

>> No.6109614

>>6109600
I was trying my luck with Loomis fun with a pencil and that book he has on heads and hands.
George Bridgman complete guide to drawing from life (i started watching this videos too https://youtu.be/HrPi92DnMis)) and Hampton, figure drawing, desing and invention and i was going to start Keys to drawing too.
I still feel completely lost in this endeavour and like you do i been mostly drawing whatever i wanted (anime girls)

>> No.6109616

>>6109601
care less about what others do and focus on yourself, you sound like a teenager

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6109618

>>6108148
good reference was a fun 5 min sketch, your water colour is amazing it made it pop so much more

>> No.6109636

>>6109614
i’ve heard a lot of good things about bridgman, i should look into him

>> No.6109638

How do you draw stylized anime faces?
There is no documentation on that and that is the only thing I am lacking proper understanding.
>I am bad at drawing bodies
>checks hampton or loomis, can guarantee to improve
>I am bad at coloring
>checks Marco Bucci or Ctrl Paint
>I am bad at drawing stylized anime faces
>????

Seriously

>> No.6109650

>>6109618
Nice work anon and thanks. I think whereas I put a little bit too much chin on him you may have understated it instead.

>> No.6109653

>>6109601
I didn't draw it for 4chan, I posted it on socials, so I signed it. Signing artwork is autistic behaviour? Wtf are you on about lad? Just pyw already so we can all have a laugh.

>> No.6109656
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6109656

>>6109638
Just look at some artists that do the faces you want and try to copy it?
I'm not exactly sure *what* you mean with stylized anime faces, anime in itself is already very stylized.

>> No.6109687
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6109687

>>6109638
Anime faces are just Loomis heads simplified, that's how they teach them. So master the Loomis head and then reduce detail, adjust proportion and you have your anime.

>> No.6109693

>>6109638
You sound retarded
>there's no documentation
Lmao

>> No.6109702

>>6109687
The ear is way too small on this.

>> No.6109721

>>6109687
book?

>> No.6109723

is crosshatching cringe or based?

>> No.6109734

>>6109721
This is not gonna help you draw anime, the book is about making your anime girls sexy. It just had that one page that showed head construction. But if you're curious it's: CHOPPIRI HNA ON'NA NO KONO KAKIKATA - HOW TO DRAW SEXY GIRLS ILLUSTRATION BOOK

>> No.6109787
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6109787

"this is the end."

>> No.6109810
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>>6108280
Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 4

>> No.6109839

>>6109810
Man imagine wasting your time with loomis bullshit with so many better books for free on this very board
I guess some people will just follow memes regardless of results and common sense
>I will do the loomis because... ill just will ok i must
Yep this is the mindset

>> No.6109841

>>6109787
thanks doc

>> No.6109847
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Fucking around with brushes

>> No.6109853

>>6109839
what's wrong with Loomis?

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>>6109687
What happened between 3 and 4 to make the eyelashes look so smooth????

>> No.6109867

>>6109866
step 1 - draw a circle
step 2 - draw the rest of the fucking eye

>> No.6109868

>>6109866
Left is a sketch, right is not

>> No.6109869
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6109869

I'm not starting a new thread for this.
You ever have those days where you haven't drawn for like a week, and then when you try you're just physically incapable of drawing anything?
How do I get out of it?

>> No.6109871
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6109871

>>6109869
by drawing

okay jokes aside if you don't wanna draw or can't draw because of some inner blockade, don't try to force it, don't think about it too much and just enjoy your day a different way
you'll get back into the grove sooner or later - this sorta stuff only sucks if you're on some kind of deadline

>> No.6109875

>>6109869
>How do I get out of it?
Yes I always have that reset piece of shit even If I draw a lot, it's worse when you don't actually draw, it might be a symptom of permabegdom or permaprebegdom

>> No.6109876

>>6109869
get the bad drawings out, i do figure drawing when I'm stuck in a rut. They're going to look bad anyways

>> No.6109883

>>6109853
Nothing

>> No.6109887
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6109887

battle gutarr iiii

>> No.6109904

>>6109839
so which books are better then?

>> No.6109908
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6109908

I keep grinding portraits

>> No.6109918

>>6109875
>permabegdom or permaprebegdom
This isn't a real thing, is it?

>> No.6109922

When I want to draw a piece, what's the best way to start?
Right now, my method is basically to just fuck around with sketches, until I eventually get something that looks presentable, and I just trace over the good parts on a new layer. I eventually end up with some ok shit, but getting started is always the hardest part

>> No.6109923

>>6109869
Just like any skill, once you take some time off you're not going to be at the level you were once before. But that doesn't mean you can't get there again regardless of how long the break is.
For example, if you took a break from running when you come back you're not going to be running as far as you used to but that doesn't mean you can't get back to that point.
All you have to do is to just "do it", you have to draw just like how a runner needs to run to get better at running again and how a weightlifter needs to lift weights again to lift heavy shit again.
SO COME ON ANON, YOU'VE DONE IT ONE YOU CAN DOING IT AGAIN!

>> No.6109925
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6109925

no idea why but proportions kicked my ass today, they both look like they have giant bobble-heads...

>> No.6109935

>>6109925
Just need to take a little more time blocking in the figure before focusing on details. Looks good otherwise

>> No.6109937

>>6109925
i have this problem too sometimes but i don't know what causes it or how to fix it

>> No.6109939

>>6109925
what pencil did you use?

>> No.6109940

>can't draw for one day because of lack of time
>feel awful
bros

>> No.6109941

I will draw today.

>> No.6109942

>>6109925
wish I could get my faces looking like this desu

>> No.6109944

>>6109925
One on the left looks like the "Why not both" meme girl aged up.

>> No.6109951

>>6109847
I like it, a lot

>> No.6109953

>>6108909
I like the texture and general "mood" of these a lot. the jaw area is well modelled in the first image, generally gives people a lot of trouble. a lot of proportions/placements are off though. the ears a little, her right eye in 1 is not aligned etc so be more careful about stuff like that

>> No.6109954

>>6109925
uuooooooohhhhhhhh

>> No.6109958

>>6109307
postit you dumbbutt
>>6109487
nice atmosphere
>>6109514
epic

>> No.6109964
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6109964

Working through drawabox in between grinding gestures. I know it's a beg trap but I'm working through RadioRunner's syllabus and it calls for Drawabox lessons 0-2 before moving on to Loomis heads.

>>6108549
>Biceps are bit too "round", looks a little unnatural. Pic related
PAINFULLY aware, unfortunately I haven't quite figured out how the fuck to do arms during gesture drawings without getting caught up in detail.

>> No.6109966
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6109966

I'm going going, back back to trad trad

>> No.6109968

>>6109951
Thanks man, playing around with brushes seems fun ngl
>>6109958
>nice atmosphere
Idk I got a AI vibe from how muddy it is
Was from a reference that I liked but didn't quite nail it, not even the colors.

>> No.6109977

>>6109925
>>>/h/umblebrag

>> No.6109980

>>6109935
yeah could be I was just too impatient today

>>6109939
Staedtler watercolor pencils it also says "144 10NC24" on the box, I image that indicates the specific type.
I don't really like them for actual fleshed out colored drawings maybe because I'm too dumb to use them properly, but for sketching they're great.
have a sort of creamy feel to them which i really like, hard to erase if you go to dark tho, so you have to be sure of what you put down before you do that.

>>6109942
you can do it, i believe in you.

>>6109944
^^ I also thought she looked a little like those face shrinking memes

>> No.6109986
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6109986

>>6109810
Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 5

>>6109839
I figure Loomis is respected by too many people to be just a meme, but I also don't believe his stuff'll magically make me an expert. It just seems like a shame to not have an informed opinion on his stuff given how often his name gets mentioned, so I'm gonna try to at least fix that much.

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>>6109853
>>6109904
Not him but ball construction is difficult and unnecessary when you can just draw in cube forms. In reality the human head isn't even shaped like a ball. Its actually a big cuboid shape. Drawing a sphere with all the axes just to construct a head is time consuming and even as a learning exercise to learn simple construction techniques is just frustrating especially for beginners.
To construct the actual head in perspective you have to disregard the ball entirely and think about the parts where the ball cuts the axes as planes, so there is zero point in drawing the ball, you can just draw a plane and add the curvature of the cranium in later (how it should actually look and not a big fat half sphere).
Loomis heads are one step up from those step by step kid's books that go 'draw a circle, draw a line here, draw another circle, then magically add a bunch of lines and now you have a dragon well done!'
Steve huston has a free youtube video on how to draw heads. I use this method all the time when life drawing. But to learn proper head construction I suggest you do a little drawabox.com to get the hang of perspective and just stacking shapes in perspective on top of each other. You can try constructing some easter island style heads as a better exercise. Then bridgeman's complete guide to drawing from life has some decent information on the distribution of the main masses and simplified forms you can use.
With any body part you construct first by drawing the distribution of the main masses as simplified shapes with clear planes, but a good sexy looking head you need to know some things about anatomy as well. This site is very bad for telling begs not to touch anatomy until they """master""" dumb shit like poomis. Just read anatomy for sculptors and copy some hogarth from his books dynamic anatomy.
All these names I name dropped are how I've learned. Really you just have to be clever and don't be afraid to invent methods and problem solve yourself.

>> No.6110066
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6110066

Don't care what anybody says, the original left collarbone on lux here is broken, her arm is broken, and her shoulder should be closer to her haid.

>> No.6110069

>>6110066
another one bites the hard round meme

>> No.6110088

>>6108171
The proper way to do biceps is you have the shoulder actually reaches 1/4 down the length of the arm, and the biceps another third, then arm muscle actually starts just before the elbow.

On the flip side your Triceps go from the 1/3 starting point to the elbow. So the forearm muscle groups visually start on the bicep side more than the triceps.

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6110095

>>6108768
nose too low

>>6110088
But basically your arm should have a small gap where it's just bone and tricep, where the bicep has ended and where your extendor and brachior muscles havnt started yet.

>> No.6110097

>>6110066
Hard round meme victim

>> No.6110113

is it worth my time to do the nma beginners course or brent evistons how to draw just to learn the still life parts? ive got everything else down already

>> No.6110115

>>6110012
pyw

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>>6110115

>> No.6110144

I hate drawing anything artificial with lots of straight lines and sharp edges

>> No.6110151

>>6110069
>>6110097
Niggers do you really think that his problem is the fucking brush he is using?

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6110164

Another one. Good night humans

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6110199

:^-

>> No.6110201

>>6110199
You posted this last thread. Her eyes are weird and don't seem right, unironically more loomis

>> No.6110206

>>6109723
If you do it well it's based, if you don't it's cringed, simple as. I don't like it personally so I never got into it but I've seen people who do it very well. Also good if for some reason you want to make woodprints.

>> No.6110213

>>6109869
It's usually the other way for me. If I draw every day I eventually hit a point where it feels like I'm getting worse, not better, but I get my skill back pretty fast after a break. Thanks for reminding me I fell asleep working on a drawing, though. Time to finish it.

>> No.6110217
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some figure sketching practice

>> No.6110266

>>6110199
Mouth, nose. Eyes too low.

Abs are a muscle that will have unironic light lines because it's only shadows that show their presence.

>> No.6110279
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6110279

>got my first real commission that wasn't for deviant art points, or a friend today
>it's for furry porn
not complaining money is money but aha...godspeed furfags

>> No.6110283

>>6110279
whats your skill level, what are you drawing(profile, bust, full), and how much you charging.

>> No.6110293

>>6110283
If this was normal idk maybe 5 for a full lined/coloured/painting piece and thats it. I'm a turbobeg awful artist but he gave me 25 cad to pay for my pen.

full torso though of his oc and a character from an anime. and a cropped version of some meme

>> No.6110301

>>6110293
nice, you drawing trad or digital also how long does it take you to compete a commission.

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>>6110266
ya face was defiantly weird, should have flipped more. As usual. Also Im coloring this, the muscle lines are place holders for shading.

>> No.6110310
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6110310

total beginner here, I have a bad habit where I'll start trying to sketch the rough outline of the body, but get impatient and just rush to the final steps. It's not that I don't want to take a long time drawing - even just this one took me about 90 minutes - but because I'm no good at drawing the outline. Also, as you can tell, I struggled with the hands, and the back of the torso is a bit of a mess.

>> No.6110322

>>6110310
not bad. how big is the drawing it looks small

>> No.6110323
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>>6110301
I'm doing digital, hence pay for my pen. If it's my own drawing idk 1 month to a year. but if it's for other people maybe 5 hours to a week. Really depends on how much I render, if I'm painting or not, what it is, if they want a background, if the character is easy to draw, if I like the character.

All in all, I'm really happy someone bought my art. My pen will come on the 19th and I hope to do it fast for him. Kinda is like damn though, I got 5 drawings to do for people as of right now. 2 pieces for my best friend for his birthday, another friend, his drawing, and possibly another client.

>> No.6110391

>>6110323
pyw faggot

>> No.6110397
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>>6110199
I don't think the style is bad, per se. The only major criticisms I have is that the abrominal muscles are drawn too small. Also, the hips should be angled in that pose, but the legs seem to be at the same level.

>> No.6110461
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6110461

>>6110391
okay im shy, i sent them these and a few others
https://prntDOTsc/L-qT--XQeSOx
https://prntDOTsc/mmXsJXQtB63y
before you ask how i got someone to give me 25, when they were willing to fork over 40, i dont know im definitely not worth that, im literally the lowest tier of begs

>> No.6110465
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>have to create a semi-OC character for the AU
>can't for the life of me get a proper headspace concept for the thing
>some guy on tumblr makes something similar to what I figure I was picturing, and I say 'I figure' because suddenly it's all I can picture for the boy
>gotta do the same for another character and I can't picture him
>and the hairstyle of another character who in show has only been seen with a hat, and I've also drawn a blank
This is a normal /beg/ thing right? Because I can imagine the character, and what he's gonna do in the story, but I'm fucking drawing blanks on what I want to do for how his face looks, and it's unnerving why it's only the faces that have this problem. And then it goes away if someone else draws it, suddenly it's easy to imagine. Is it an autism thing? Pic related's the pic, I didn't draw this.

>> No.6110481

>>6110461
There was a guy around here that did drawings of a similar quality and was also getting commissions. Granted he was drawing some niche fetish.
Don't underestimate what coomers will pay for.

>> No.6110487

>>6110461
Your art isn't skillful but it's cute. Why's the second one got one buttcheek

>> No.6110488
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6110488

>>6110397
Oh, and skirt should be tilting in the opposite direction

>> No.6110492

>>6110310
Studies will actually fix both problems. When you're copying something it teaches you to pace yourself better and removes the room for error that you have when drawing even partially from imagination, so you can see exactly where and how rushing is fucking you over. That's assuming you actually "know how to see" or whatever; a lot of beginners can't actually parse what they're looking at and will symbol draw the fuck out of a person with all their features the wrong size and in the wrong place as well and not be able to tell what's different between the reference and their drawing, which is something I truly don't understand, but just from this sonic I doubt you have that issue because it looks like it could easily be like, a key frame in a sonic animation or something (granted a key frame artist would draw it in like a minute, but studies can also help you train speed).

You might also try drawing in ink since you're doing traditional. It may be painful at first but it'll train you better to just not make mistakes when you have no easy way to fix them like an eraser.

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6110494

>>6110487
looking at it now yea the ass should've been moved down a bit. Leg going up was a cheek of it's own, and the bubble underneath was the other cheek. Good to know, I was looking off a specific piece of art when I drew it and I think that must've fucked me up. I didn't notice that mistake until now, arigathanks for the compliment and critique. I knew something looked off but I was never able to place it
>>6110481
I guess yea, I said I would draw anything for that money. I'm happy anyways and hope to deliver a good result, this guy really saved my ass.

>> No.6110505
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6110505

Draw BEGs, draw or die!

>>6110465
Anon... creating shit out of nowhere is hard. Dont expect instant miracles. Btw lets say you go to random page off google and use the first photo you see as imagination booster for your face. It wouldnt even be cheating. *wink wink*

>>6110310
Dodson had whole two pages about this: when you are getting tired (or impatient) he suggest to shift attention to different piece of picture or go from quick sketching to details. You are already doing it

>>6110279
Good job, from now on you are PRO (furry maker)

>>6109847
Nice

>> No.6110506

>>6110465
Can you picture, say, your mother's face? Some people have a condition, I think it's called prosopagnia or something, where it's like aphantasia (inability to form mental images) but ONLY for faces. But if you're seeing someone else's art and then you can picture it in your head that's probably not your issue. To me it sounds like you're just forgetting about faces when designing a character and then getting inspiration for the face later on. If you don't want to keep relying on other people's art for that inspiration, practice doodling a lot of different faces (unironically Loomis is great for getting you doing that, maybe start with Fun with a Pencil) so when it comes to ideation for a character's appearance you can hash out a few ideas and figure out what you like on your own terms.

>> No.6110514
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6110514

>>6109986
Gonna force myself to read Loomis cover to cover, actually do the exercises, and post them here.

Fun With a Pencil: Part 6

>> No.6110525
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6110525

I drew left from a pic reference and right from morpho

I thought drawing using other drawings as refs was supposed to be easier? I'm not sure I learned a lot from this

>> No.6110532

>>6110525
What were you trying to learn?

>> No.6110539
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6110539

The paper is no long taking to erasing well so I am giving up on this one.

>> No.6110543

>>6110532
leg muscles what else could it be

>> No.6110554
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>>6110492
>>6110505
hey thanks guys, this is really helpful advice.
>>6110322
pic related, it's pretty small

>> No.6110559

>>6110543
Seems like you're focusing too hard on copying what's in front of you, and not enough on what the lines mean. Ify ou're learning leg muscles, get the muscle groups down, focus on construction, worry less about drawing it exactly like the picture.

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>>6110488
>>6110397
Thanks!

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>> No.6110641
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6110641

I don't think I have gotten to a point where I have an art style yet, idk I may have it it's this and I don't even know it.
but at the moment I don't like how my characters are coming up, they look too soft if that makes any sense, I want to make something look sharp but I have no direction on what to do, any help maybe

ignoring the fact that this specific character is supposed to look soft somewhat, this is the best example I have at the moment

>> No.6110651

>>6110514
keep goin

>> No.6110654

>>6110142
excellent

>> No.6110671

>>6110309
Her lats are missing

>> No.6110677

>>6110671
You mean traps?

>> No.6110692

I love drawing and I love collecting (you)s. (you)s make me feel very special and important.

>> No.6110694

>>6110677
yes thank you

>> No.6110698

>>6110692
Same. I don't even eat food anymore, I just photosynthesize (You)s.

>> No.6110720

>>6109723
wut it's just a technique how can it be cringe or anything else

>> No.6110723

>>6108773
Just send them a pic with time stamp of your NSDAP pin.

>> No.6110790

What's best for learning proportions/accuracy: croquis, long studies or both?

>> No.6110802

>>6110790
If you find yourself asking a question like that the answer will pretty much always be both. Consider: "just draw lol"

>> No.6110817

>>6110802
indeed

>> No.6110837

>>6110790
Both, alternate them to complement each other. Also measure measure measure. Most ratios are pretty close to simple ratios like 1:6, 1:1, 1:2, 4:5, etc, so it's easy to remember them.

>> No.6110842
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6110842

some 10 minute drawings
can i draw anime yet

>> No.6110853

>>6110842
Don't ask for permission, just do it. Only if it is ugly should you ask for forgiveness.

>> No.6110855

>>6110853
i don't know how to draw anime

>> No.6110878
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6110878

Felt a little aimless with this one. Everything from the neck up is a mess, but it's finished. IDK I just wanted to paint something.

>> No.6110884

>>6110855
time for studies

>> No.6110886

>>6110884
how do i start drawing anime

>> No.6110894

>>6110886
I just told you, studies. There's even a thread for it, anime studies general. You find anime art you like and you reverse engineer how it was made and make it yourself so you learn, then you apply it to your own pieces.

>> No.6110903
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6110903

did some dynamic figure sketches on a 10 min interval, are there any issues that I can improve upon?

>> No.6110910

>>6110903
learn to measure

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>>6110910
I overlaid my sketches with the ref images I used and, although some of the limb positions are off it looks like my proportions are relatively close to what they should be
maybe because some of them are strange angles/uncommon body positions it looks worse than it actually is?

>> No.6110943

>>6109964
Dw, I have that same problem, my arms end up swollen like balloons. Still not sure what i can do about it besides properly studying anatomy.

>> No.6110954

>>6110941
do some sight size
it not really a way you want to draw forever, but doing it for a while, not even well will help you a lot

>> No.6110958

>>6110878
hey, it's good to finish things

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6111048

Gesture Study What you think>?

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6111089

The sale has begun
I need to upgrade to EX as I'm an animation student but am considering also getting a subscription for my tablet so I can use CSP when away from my PC, but don't know if the subscription is really worth it. I've already got ibis paint on my tablet and it's files are compatible when imported to CSP but it just feels much more inferior to the trial of CSP I've tried, and I can't do Krita as I've got android
>tl;dr
CSP tablet anons, was the subscription worth paying for over using the alternatives?

>> No.6111128

>>6111048
Doesnt look like gesture, looks like construction. Feel the form!

>> No.6111152

Ok I've been confused by this for a while.
anyone else get extremely tierd when drawing.
I struggle to work on complex pieces because of it. Like I can feel fine but if I sit down and draw for 30min I just feel drained. is this Normal or is there something worng with me?

>> No.6111277
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6111277

I dont get this part of the 'right of the brain' book. I did the thing and that was that, no problem, but apparently i was meant to be confused and solve some sort of 'problem', and the next bits assume that happened and try to tell me shit about it. Did i just not do it right?

>> No.6111386
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6111386

redid the head and face, how does it look now?

>> No.6111400

what if studies are a meme and the path out of /beg/dom is just fucking drawing

>> No.6111409

>>6111386
it looks so uncanny. the head is way to big, and the anime face looks so out of place.

>> No.6111475

NEW THREAD
>>6111474
>>6111474
>>6111474

>> No.6111679

I get why people get called tracers when they might be sincerely drawing from next to it.
It's got nothing to do with the act of tracing, but the lack of understanding the form... So while proportions are correct at a glance, they butchered the contour lines and form. Now it's just twisted flesh inside the silhouette of that person they are trying to draw.

>> No.6111707

>>6111400
is studying not drawing
helped me quite a bit

>> No.6111708

>>6111386
Too many colors for the skin, limit yourself to 3

>> No.6111711

>>6111277
I had the same experience, also with recognising the upside down einstein. Either we're not /beg/ enough for the book or the shit betty edwards asserts is just less universal than she thinks.

>> No.6111719

>>6111708
colors are fine but look how much darker the values get on the turn of the forms in ref

also that anime face is.. really rough lol