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/salt/ - Sexual art stylization thread Anonymous Mon May 23 14:49:17 2022 No.6073399 [Reply] [Original]

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>Welcome to /salt/
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>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 15:17:29 2022 No.6073428 >>6073399 To the artist who drew this: are you available to commission?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 16:46:04 2022 No.6073511 File: 2.44 MB, 2667x3269, coom.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finally done Sex is getting boring, I'm gonna take a break from drawing it for a bit

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 16:59:13 2022 No.6073535 >>6073428 what are you looking for?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:00:20 2022 No.6073538 File: 498 KB, 1240x1754, new1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This is somewhat closed to finished (atleast the sketch part) but I wanted some thoughts on it

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:01:07 2022 No.6073539 >6073511 >sex boring >Draws this.

Anonymous Mon May 23 17:05:43 2022 No.6073543
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>6073539
It was a commission
I dont dude, theres only so many ways you can draw a sex pose. It still a sex pose at the end of the day. Most you can do is play with the perspective or PoV or something. Granted its good to try to flex other things like rendering and gesture

Pin ups and costumes are most fun I find, though sex is can be really good too. I really like how Fred Perry draws sex. I gotta work on my gesture for sure. The pose I drew was pretty static but i've never drawn DP or a 3 person sex piece before so it was hard to work it in without the guys clipping or looking stiff (which they did anyways, but coomers gonna coom so he was happy with it regardless)

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:07:04 2022 No.6073545 >>6073538 The only useful critique you can get is to keep drawing a lot nad come back in a few years.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:07:44 2022 No.6073546 >>6073545 are you saying it's shit?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:09:39 2022 No.6073550 >>6073543 >Granted its good to try to flex other things like rendering and gesture Or maybe keep drawing and imporoving your overall skills. Right now your stuff seems half assed.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:09:57 2022 No.6073551 >>6073546 Unfortunately yeah, Its not the worse thing ever but its at the stage were you just gotta keep drawing to get better. Keep going and keep studying and copying other artists and pieces. Learn learn learn

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:10:42 2022 No.6073554 >>6073546 It's beginner tier. You clearly aren't skilled enough to draw appealing figures or porn. You need to grind more.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:11:25 2022 No.6073557 >>6073550 Thats the plan, just gotta keep drawing and keep getting better

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:53:08 2022 No.6073609 File: 329 KB, 1240x1754, vv2lqvr9.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6073538

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:57:28 2022 No.6073620 do we have to keep doing these threads? They're always miserable and each one always seems worse than the last

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 17:58:03 2022 No.6073621 >>6073609 it's just a placeholder for a whip around the neck from a POV shot to make sure I get the pov right

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 18:13:08 2022 No.6073632 >>6073620 you weren't forced to post here and yet you did, what would you like to see in salt? more crits, less crabbing/crying/trolling? yeah same, I just hide posts now. it's never worth getting involved.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 18:14:56 2022 No.6073636 >>6073511 it's funny how often commisioners make the thing they commmissioned worse with the things they request you change about it

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 18:16:05 2022 No.6073638 >>6073636 Hyperfags are the worse

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 18:16:21 2022 No.6073639 >>6073632 I just want more good art and less hyper-futa-deviantart-fetish content, it's always either terrible or disgusting.

Anonymous Mon May 23 18:32:29 2022 No.6073662

>>6073639
Sadly, I sort of agree with your statement. Now there’s only one or two artworks that I save from these threads. Even this one artist I liked for her use of eye catching colors and figure anatomy has sort of gone down hill as she is getting comfortable and is entering the “I need a unique style” phase. Other people I used to like haven’t improved at all in years and if anything have also regressed as they begin to do hyper stuff or weird anatomy that just comes across as plain goofy. Other art is just laughably bad, but I’m too scared to give them any pointers because everyone will call you a crab because there is this brotherhood mentality and everyone knows each other’s social media which just leads to circle jerking, /cbsg/ has the same problem. Like in the previous thread, someone criticized someone popular, although it was pretty harsh I think the critique was pointing out very real flaws, and then the whole thread got derailed, and people are refusing to improve out of spite.

Anonymous Mon May 23 18:36:47 2022 No.6073667

>>6073639
yeah man "good art" is always gonna be rare which is why it is always satisfying to see in the local thread, but it's not gonna be the norm given the average skill level is gonna be amateurish-intermediate at best for any community open to all levels of artist. look around for alternatives in discords/other forums/communities because /salt/ isn't likely to get better, nor get worse, because it is made up of all kinds of artists who come and go.
though to be honest, there are other boards right here on the site for finding "good art" that you can use as inspo/study-fodder. it's kinda expected to find wips and lower-level stuff in a draw thread

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 19:13:30 2022 No.6073715 File: 1.08 MB, 1200x953, 1630201576977.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I need to pick better poses

Anonymous Mon May 23 19:36:27 2022 No.6073737
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What a horrible day to discover that you're not very good at rendering genitalia.

>>6073511
Aha, is this the same client as the last guy? The one with the big titty goblin in a similar position? It's neat seeing this coloured and completed (coward ;^) ).

Anonymous Mon May 23 19:39:59 2022 No.6073742
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>>6073399
Whoever drew op image I know you straight up left the thread. but the image is very wonky. Even though the image itself is drawn correctly. The focus is off. Assuming that the camera is near her lower torso Thats the focus. The arm and hand would be larger because it's closer to us the viewer. The head would be smaller with a slight deviation because we are looking up towards her. The hair is also very western but if that's what you are going for then whatever.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 19:46:03 2022 No.6073749 >>6073737 Ort mommy. FGO does not inspire confidence. The rendering seems "ok". You'll have to get that sharp line-art for those small details for the genetalia. But your style is very soft. You gotta figure that out yourself but whatever.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 19:48:45 2022 No.6073754 >>6073737 orta, how long do your works take on average, and do you have any recommendations for drawing hair?...

Anonymous Mon May 23 19:59:32 2022 No.6073770

>>6073749
Yh. This is a commission, but I admit I'm having a bit of an internal crisis with my art right now. I wanted to dip my toes into harder rendering, but really I feel like the only thing I'm learning is how badly I've got to go back to basics. I want take an extended study hiatus, but idk how now that I've got a substantial follower count. I'm scared I'll come back and everybody will be gone lol

>>6073754
>how long do your works take on average
omg, that really depends. On a good day I can push something out in less than a working day, so like 8 hours or less.

>do you have any recommendations for drawing hair?
Absolutely. It sounds like meme advice but I would personally recommend studying from anime figurines, specifically because on those figures the planes of the hair are sculpted very individualistically. It makes for a really good lesson in hair layering/segmentation,

I think it's natural to look at a head of hair and view it as a collection of individual strands, but hair, like the rest of a subject, has its own anatomy and flow and character, you've just got to learn how to properly interpret it.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 20:01:40 2022 No.6073776 >>6073754 +1 Same, I usually spend a day or two and then I fuck off. How long have you been drawing because I forgot.

Anonymous Mon May 23 20:04:46 2022 No.6073785

>>6073776
Uh, hard to say desu. I was always that "art kid" in school, but I stopped drawing altogether around 17-18 y/o, and didn't start back up again until my late 20's.

I'm also a chronic project hopper though, so, can relate. My desktop is a graveyard of abandoned wips.

Anonymous Mon May 23 20:09:22 2022 No.6073794

>>6073737
>Aha, is this the same client as the last guy? The one with the big titty goblin in a similar position? It's neat seeing this coloured and completed (coward ;^) ).

Its actually a different client! But I guess people love huge boobies. Its fun, but when its literally tits and legs it kinda sucks imo, but oh well. It was a fun experience.
Also nice face!, but did you turn off the layers with the penises or something?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 20:17:51 2022 No.6073807 >>6073770 >I would personally recommend studying from anime figurines thanks, i'll try that. love your work :)

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 20:31:43 2022 No.6073837 >>6073794 Just you wait. Someday I'll get a commission too. And then I'll retire from this bullshit for real.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 20:56:30 2022 No.6073874 >>6073662 Everyone here is just too egotistical to improve or is chasing trends

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 21:04:50 2022 No.6073887 >>6073639 >>6073662 I don't draw futa. Anon-kun

Anonymous Mon May 23 21:13:31 2022 No.6073899
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Almost done with this comm, I think I gotta add some more gesture and squish to their willies. I've found recently that's what really "sells" coom specially, the squishing/squeezing/stretching of forms. also can't render very well yet but trying out airbrushing instead of the hard edge stuff I usually use

>>6073511
good job on the sfx and the expression! your sword-zuri pic is still my fav
>>6073538
cute sketch. not sure if intended but she looks quite muscular and has some "bubble anatomy" going on; Mike Matessi has a recent video on Proko talking about it, also some quick gesture drawings before sketches help me loosen up a bit (doesn't show in pic rel though lol)
>>6073715
fingers on her left hand look disproportionate (the ones raised look way shorter than the bent ones) but other than that this is alright, I love the linework and the rendering, simple but effective. skin tones a little 'dead' but maybe that's intentional
>>6073737
soft and shapely as ever

Anonymous Mon May 23 21:56:36 2022 No.6073952

>>6073874
>>6073662
>>6073639
do you look past the subject matter at what the artist is doing or do you see something you dont personally like and write the artist off?
theres at least a few people in these threads that are trying to improve

improvement isnt always super fast

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 21:58:37 2022 No.6073957 >>6073952 I look at how they respond to critique.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:03:32 2022 No.6073973 >>6073957 thats fair yeah

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:06:37 2022 No.6073976 >>6073662 Good thing none of them are drawing in order to please you, otherwise things would get boring fast

Anonymous Mon May 23 22:07:48 2022 No.6073978

>>6073952
It’s less so their subject matter itself and more so the art style that puts me off initially. I usually can look past it but after a while their attitude and lack of progress begins to wear on me. It’s not even that their progress is slow in any way it’s just that it’s not existent and they are annoying with shit taste all around.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:10:16 2022 No.6073984 >>6073976 Lol, when someone without a porn addiction sees the art in her they recoil in disgust.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:10:26 2022 No.6073985 >>6073978 what is your goal with visiting these threads? do you draw? (srs question)

Anonymous Mon May 23 22:12:43 2022 No.6073988
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been stuck on this one for a while, working from an older rough draft, around later 2020ish. Kind of wish I had done another revision before inking and rendering, because inertia sets in when you become too invested.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:13:15 2022 No.6073989 Just stop responding to these retards, literally just gonna derail the thread again for 50-100 posts

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:17:46 2022 No.6073999 >>6073985 Initially it was to look at how people did figures and went about drawing characters interacting with one another. Now it’s just habit

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:29:10 2022 No.6074019 >>6073984 >>6073999 Where do you think you are? This is the thread specifically for cartoonish sexuality. If you don't like it, then leave

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:35:19 2022 No.6074028 >>6073952 we have a number of artists in this thread that basically post the same content or image 30 times in a row and then don't eve change their style or respond to suggestions, I just want appealing artists to post here and not oversexed weirdos.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:40:15 2022 No.6074039 >>6074028 it sounds like you just want people who draw things you like to post

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:42:08 2022 No.6074044 >>6074028 Most artists in this thread aren't here to improve or even receive critique, they just see it as some free networking/promotion opportunity. Notice how the replies that always get noticed are the ones asking for blogs.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 22:54:35 2022 No.6074069 >>6074039 while i'd like people to draw things i like, what i REALLY want is that when people draw things i don't like they draw them well, even just tastefully

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 23:10:36 2022 No.6074091 >>6074069 thats still putting expectation on artists that draw things you dont like because of your bias at that point >>6074044 that doesnt mean they dont take into account the critique if they dont respond to it

>>	Anonymous Mon May 23 23:41:31 2022 No.6074140 >>6073899 I was thinking about the finger sizes being wrong for a while but I guess the idea of fucking with hands for even longer than I already had dissuaded me, I'll go back and fix them.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 00:09:57 2022 No.6074177 >>6073715 The front of the lower leg is "pointy" from the tibia poking out, you can soften it up but having it be a flat plane like you did looks wrong.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 00:18:32 2022 No.6074187 File: 268 KB, 708x1000, doodle.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] todays doodle was trying to get a look for a character i want to draw in a doujin

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 00:38:56 2022 No.6074216 >>6074044 >networking/promoting on 4chan my broseph, with 99% of local populus being crabs, you'd have to be really dumb to post here for these reasons

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 00:40:35 2022 No.6074219 >>6074216 Idk, I'm pretty sure it's a lot easier to get someone to look at your shit when you're in a thread than screaming into the cavernous fucking void that is art websites.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 00:40:40 2022 No.6074220 >>6074216 networking with other artists here works though

Anonymous Tue May 24 01:45:50 2022 No.6074293
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struggling with this one, I think doing the rendering in random order is fuckin me up. looks half cartoonish half "realistic". do I reline it and redo the rendering in stages? ditch it completely, start over?

Anonymous Tue May 24 01:51:29 2022 No.6074297

>>6074293
provided you kept your linework on a different layer or at least a backup of it you can just repaint it or paint over it

try starting with the background first
you dont need to fully render it but get the values down first itll help with the character

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:03:45 2022 No.6074308 >>6074297 i got brave and painted over it, no backup. just gonna lower the opacity and draw over it like it was a sketch. i was stupid to not do some studies or at least have some art ref open so I know what rendering style I actually want

Anonymous Tue May 24 02:07:50 2022 No.6074313

>>6073988
with a draft that old youd be better off resketching it but thats hindsight at this point
if you wanna finish this though continue with the rendering until you need to do big fixes that re quire liquify and paint on top of it also to fix errors where you think you need it

>>6073899
gesture is important to nsfw people do like more energetic poses but theres also a ton of people who like girl standing in front of white background #3084723902
I think at the end of the day if you have genuine fun with what youre drawing and its something youre interested in itll be reflected in the work and people will notice and gravitate towards it

that being said though yeah the dicks are a bit too straight on but that could also be due to the pose itself where youre limited in how they can really look at any particular angle

with the rendering i dont know how you normally do it you mentioned you use harder edge stuff
since this is pretty much purely soft edges try mixing them
think of your lightsource direction
lets say the light source is coming from the right and above
try to have the edges on the right side, and also above. of the shadow shapes be soft and the left side, and also below to be harder. use your best judgement though when you want to disregard that

Anonymous Tue May 24 02:08:50 2022 No.6074314

>>6073737
take reference pictures of yourself and use those :-)

>>6073715
the pose itself isnt necessarily so bad but the perspective could use some work
on the left side of the grave we see this big slab is on the ground but on the right side we have this tall grass poking up and overlapping her foot which makes it seem like its much further up than it is
also where what seems to be the treeline on the right side starts is too low considering the camera is looking down at the girl

>>6073538
pretty much what others mentioned
there are a lot of little mistakes that add up
the biggest thing i could say that i think would help is to study gesture. read/watch vilppus drawing manual or whatever gesture book of your choice
even just an hour a day reading without necessarily drawing will help you start to see flaws
keep at it though anon and push forward i believe in you

>>6073511
comms really do be like that
what will you draw now?

>>6074308
been there before i know the feeling
thats a fine way of going about it though and having a reference to aim for will help

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:20:38 2022 No.6074324 File: 220 KB, 654x932, wip.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074314 >what will you draw now? Working on 2 pieces now

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:21:42 2022 No.6074328 File: 130 KB, 594x851, 33Gyt5i.png.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074324 And this This is still pretty rough

Anonymous Tue May 24 02:22:58 2022 No.6074331
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>>6074313
well, unless i spot something glaring I probably just going to complete the rendering and move on, because I wanted to complete this set before I die. Might revisit if I had time after I finish.

Anonymous Tue May 24 02:24:42 2022 No.6074334
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>>6073538
Aside from maybe finishing up the lines so they don't look broken, especially around her neck and maybe the right side of her hair, try to fix her right breast nipple, too. You can definitely draw the nipple like you did on the left breast and still make the boobs look pleasing, because we're under the impression that she's riding that dick from a somewhat profile view, but just barely. Another thing I would suggest you'd make a change to, would definitely be her facial expression. Right now, she looks like she's just riding that dick, but is she enjoying it? Is she taking advantage of the guy underneath her, or is he her subservient slave? Don't be afraid to draw in a devilish grin to assert her dominance, whip the hair around a bit to make use of motion lines, draw her eyebrows downward to express lust, desire, and dominance. Though you do have a few flaws in your work as far as basics like hands and the like, learning that comes with more practice. I personally feel that changing those things, could make you feel really good about your drawing when you're done. Good luck!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:26:46 2022 No.6074336 >>6074324 >>6074328 based shygal looking forward to that one >>6074331 id say once you finish commit to leaving it and move on so you dont pull your hair out worrying about it and fixing things every couple of months

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:37:41 2022 No.6074352 >>6074331 blog?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:40:13 2022 No.6074356 File: 299 KB, 1150x913, asdasdasdsadasdas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6073742 yeah, I read this in the last thread. no idea why it was used as the OP image since its so obviously a wacky lil doodle. >>6073428 no.

Anonymous Tue May 24 02:44:12 2022 No.6074360
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>>6073715
I had to dig this example up from my collection, but I feel you when you say, I need to pick better poses. Right now, your character is resting on the grave with a, "Hmm, work's done," kind of feel to it. Not that that's a bad thing, and maybe that's what you intended with the pose, but don't be afraid to go outside of your comfort zone and try something more daring; like maybe she's laying on her stomach with her ass to the camera, and the potion resting on the small of her back, with her holding the knife in one hand, and maybe this expression of like, "They're dead. Now what." look over her shoulder. Yeah, she's a badass, yeah she gets the job done, now show off her sexual energy with a pose that DRAWS the viewer in, following along every curve like a fucking roadmap of her body. Your drawing deserves that. Mine's showing off her sexual femininity as an example for you, guzzling down a mug of cum like she doesn't give a fuck while the hearts lifting up Minako's skirt still add that sexy, come here and fuck me kind of playfulness to the image. Plus, the anal beads and her scepter poking out like that, could also be something you can add to your drawing, with that magic staff in the background just laying on the headstone thinking, "I NEED to be in SOMETHING, PRESSED against something, fucking put me in coach!". Good luck to you too!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 02:55:19 2022 No.6074377 >>6074360 the situation is already a bit contrived since there's no real reason she's be resting her half-naked ass in a grimy graveyard I like your idea about trying to tell more of a story with my art beyond "this is a pinup"

Anonymous Tue May 24 03:33:58 2022 No.6074413
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>>6074293
>>6074308
You got brave and decided to color over your lines, lesson learned for next time. Digital color 101, always have your line art on its own layer. Lock the layer if you have to unless there's something you want to change. Then work one layer at a time. Put down your colors, or your flats, and then your shadows, maybe another layer for deep shadows, and then your highlights. Or maybe you prefer to work backwards and put down your highlights first, then your shadows. Check your light source, where's it coming from? Where do the shadows cast on the body, are they soft shadows or hard shadows, because of that light source? How bright, or how subtle, should the highlights be? Try to spend as much time as you can on the background too, but something like a pattern or a shape will often times suffice, like I did with Princess Daisy. When you start gaining more confidence in your digital color, you'll naturally branch out to make more detailed backgrounds, certainly not taking away from the cheesecake you want to show us. Give yourself more credit. Work at your own pace, and take your time. Enjoy the process. Don't discourage yourself by calling yourself stupid. We all make mistakes. The original artwork that inspired this piece of mine is gorgeous. I just wanted Daisy's cake cut down the middle with some dick.
>>6074377
Glad I could help, anon. Good luck to you.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 06:22:27 2022 No.6074560 File: 310 KB, 1350x2025, elica custodes.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 06:25:24 2022 No.6074563 File: 1.35 MB, 1007x1600, 1644325208739.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074560 You've improved but it's still strange how you prefer to draw characters like they don't have any skin.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 06:32:14 2022 No.6074567 File: 221 KB, 1350x2025, magnus dressing.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074563 i've been trying to get better at that but also space marines and shit are typically really defined

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 06:36:28 2022 No.6074572 >>6074560 >>6074567 do you sketch out a gesture first or do you kind of go right into the pose?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 06:43:21 2022 No.6074582 File: 627 KB, 1800x2700, preparing the eunuch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074572 i'll usually do a gesture, then refine that like 3 times to get to these poses, then line it

Anonymous Tue May 24 06:49:53 2022 No.6074585

>>6074582
i ask cause your poses seem a little stiff

>then refine that like 3 times
maybe this is why but, of course, i cant know since i dont know your process

i have a habit of over correcting during the sketch that i try to break out of
things usually end up stiff this way
especially if i find myself taking too long trying to make a pose work
if i find myself doing that ill try to scrap it and redo it and its always better for it

also with this
>>6074560
>>6074563
its definitely fine to have muscles defined but what usually becomes odd to look at is when you close off shapes
like with the abdomen its pretty much a closed shape
theres different ways you can go about opening up the shape but keeping the form
you could think in terms of shadow and line the shadow instead of the entire muscle group
or use hatching with a smaller size brush to imply it

sorry for rambling i hope that helps

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Anonymous Tue May 24 08:16:10 2022 No.6074636
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>>6074585
it's possible i refine too much and wind up getting too stiff or also that i'm so used to making these connecting lines that my pieces look off to me without them, i'll try to limit my 'refinements' and see what i can do if i mandate less of them, as for opening up musclegroups, i try to remember to do hatching but sometimes i just go on autopilot so i need to work on fighting that

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 08:30:45 2022 No.6074646 >>6074314 >>6074313 look at all those crits, god bless you anon thank you for taking the time

Anonymous Tue May 24 08:37:52 2022 No.6074651
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>>6074560
The pose is really stiff and bland, and the bodytype doesn't scream "Custodes", it just looks like a skinny person. Arms feel extremely short, overall proportions need tweaked, and you should play with bodytypes more.

As an aside you should stop using lines to show off every single muscle and either learn to render or learn to cel-shade, your characters look like they've been vacuum-sealed and it isn't appealing at all.

Anonymous Tue May 24 09:00:11 2022 No.6074665

>>6074636
yeah i feel that its a habit like anything else
at the end of the day youre the artist that knows whats best for your work so if you feel thats something you want by all means

breaking the habit is difficult but rewarding

>>6074630
very nice anon she cute
a couple small things to take note of
the back of the skull could be slightly bigger and the back of the neck could come in more as well
since she has a stylized face having a bit of a thinner neck could fit it better

also if you draw through the ribcage it looks to be a tad too big for how thin you made the waist and hips

how far are you taking this painting-wise?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 09:30:59 2022 No.6074683 File: 1.05 MB, 678x900, 2022-01-22_01_fin_small.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 09:32:02 2022 No.6074685 File: 1.14 MB, 900x675, 2022-05-21_01_fin_SMall.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074683

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 09:33:06 2022 No.6074686 File: 934 KB, 563x900, 2022_05_23_03_FIN.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074685 new one. i've been having so much fun drawing these.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 10:19:12 2022 No.6074706 >>6074683 >>6074685 >>6074686 nice what inspired you? something about it looks very 90s

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 10:50:46 2022 No.6074726 >>6074706 Ive never been able to draw coomer shit and i wanted to try doing something i was really unfamiliar with. Its all so i can make comics eventually and i need to get better to do that

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 12:13:51 2022 No.6074785 >>6074726 you want to make porn comics or youre just stopping by on the porn train?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 15:59:40 2022 No.6074984 >>6074630 >>6074356 >>6073988 >>6073737 post stuff somewhere?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 16:01:49 2022 No.6074988 >>6074984 nah, just 4chan.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 17:10:05 2022 No.6075125 >>6074785 I have some porn comics written that i want to bring to life, but im not there yet.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 17:20:12 2022 No.6075137 >>6074567 >>6074582 >>6074636 Keep going gainsbro, good to see your stuff again.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 21:16:10 2022 No.6075477 >>6074356 >no. Can I still contact you on twitter in the event you change your mind?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 24 22:22:54 2022 No.6075558 File: 573 KB, 1240x1754, new8.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I decided to try and fix this drawing up that I posted in this thread earlier. Is it improved from earlier?

Anonymous Tue May 24 22:59:40 2022 No.6075590

>>6075558
it's not a huge improvement but the few improvements are improvements so overall it's improved, though you could've improved more by starting all over rather than finicking around with little details on an already made idea/sketch
and if you're so set on improving this one just get some reference. angle of insertion looks wrong and I can't tell if that's actually insertion or her vulva puking spunk out.

Anonymous Tue May 24 23:13:02 2022 No.6075605

>>6075590
I actually did use reference, maybe my issue is that I was trying to avoid copying the reference too closely and this is what I got. I fiddled around a bunch with this drawing. I made the upper half smaller to (try) and give it a better perspective and make it look like it's from the dudes pov

>I can't tell if that's actually insertion or her vulva puking spunk out.
I think it just looks that way cause it's a sketch, it'd prolly be a lot clearer with proper lines and color

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 01:26:18 2022 No.6075767 File: 364 KB, 1350x1960, glod saucer cloud.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6075137 thanks, will do >>6074665 call me linkin park cause i'm working on breaking the habit

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 01:37:44 2022 No.6075786 >>6075767 Start. Using. Fucking. References.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 02:00:19 2022 No.6075816 File: 929 KB, 850x550, 86f117d6171e1530d0ea7c56f74caf18.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074413 Is this intentional?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 02:23:29 2022 No.6075831 >>6073742 whats the trick to getting lineweight like this? my shit looks so wacky because i try to color like that but it doesnt match the sort of lines i do.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 02:49:46 2022 No.6075855 >>6075767 what the other anon said, you have to start using references for reflections and anatomy, especially if you're going to try to do higher-quality images.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 06:17:38 2022 No.6076022 File: 1014 KB, 563x900, 2022_05_24_02_fin.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] new one

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 07:12:46 2022 No.6076060 File: 340 KB, 999x1000, Key.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Panel from a comic. Apologies for the lack of context.

Anonymous Wed May 25 12:43:33 2022 No.6076301
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>>6075816
Oh yeah, wow, that takes me back a few years! That was the original artwork that someone requested to draw on /aco/, so I had the time to draw what I did for them, with Daisy giving that delicious ass job, along with adding some color to the finished work. I remember the anon loved how above and beyond I went with their request, and I was really happy to have been able to draw it for them for free. It was really fun, and I spent some time on /e/, /h/ and /aco/ thereafter drawing free requests. I've visited those draw request threads recently, but everything requested is more modern. But every now and then, I find someone requesting some old school cartoon, or some nice retro anime.

Anonymous Wed May 25 13:04:23 2022 No.6076310
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>>6074187
I can appreciate the effort put into the little slimes having the little facial expressions they do, they add a little something extra to the drawing. I like your work.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 18:15:40 2022 No.6076665 >>6076310 Auuugh, the hair, the headband, the 90s anime face, THE THIGHS I love this, great job

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 20:30:42 2022 No.6076807 File: 234 KB, 681x781, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] WiP I know, I'm going to draw the other hand

Anonymous Wed May 25 20:35:12 2022 No.6076814

Anyone here doing commissions; when did you start raising prices and how did you not feel like a dirty, dirty money slut whore bitch?
Last time I posted my comm sheet around discord I got 10 requests over three days, made about $400 including tips and minus paypal's grubby fees, which sounds alright except it took me two (TWO) fucking months and 50 total hours, so I was working at $8/£6.5 which is pretty pathetic.
Part of the reason it took me so long was the feeling of how little I was working for/feeling demotivated about the prospect of trying to do this full time.
I am getting faster but also want to raise prices (ideally doubling them eventually), but what if I raise them and, say that the first month or so goes well, but then it starts to die out again? What do I do then, put on a "sale"? Is there a guide out that's helped anyone out?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 21:02:28 2022 No.6076836 File: 3.15 MB, 3308x2332, 1646058363426.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6073399 Need advice on what else to do with the background. I think I need more contrast between Jynx and the background?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 21:09:53 2022 No.6076849 >>6075767 >That face Please, Americunts. PLEASE stop trying to do anime style. You can't do it and it's painful to look at. Stick to doing your Calarts trash, at least that fits you.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 21:13:26 2022 No.6076852 File: 296 KB, 1000x600, gainsgob.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6076849 don't make this an american thing, this is a gainsgob thing, he's been drawing that one face for several years now

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 21:16:34 2022 No.6076856 >>6073887 Into the trash you go

CheekyDoodler Wed May 25 21:47:44 2022 No.6076897
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Been doing a lot of style exploration lately. Mostly just simplifying/exaggerating shapes and details for a cleaner look. I feel like trying to nail anatomy too much really stunts the energy and gesture of poses, especially when I don't have references available for them.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 21:48:13 2022 No.6076899 >>6076836 you've been forcing this meme for a long time bro, it wont catch on

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 22:51:40 2022 No.6076972 >>6076856 Why? Anon

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 23:43:47 2022 No.6077011 >>6076852 Shut up, cunt. You can't draw anime style for shit. Stop. Now sit down, kid.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 23:44:48 2022 No.6077014 >>6076899 Dilate, pussy.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 23:46:53 2022 No.6077017 >>6077014 >4chan will give me approval one day!! ;____;

>>	Anonymous Wed May 25 23:50:52 2022 No.6077019 >>6076060 Nice shapes for the body, very sexy proportions.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 00:07:23 2022 No.6077038 >>6077011 >You can't draw anime style for shit Thank fucking god, who'd want to draw anime?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 00:18:16 2022 No.6077050 File: 609 KB, 1240x1754, new9.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] don't wanna constantly post this but I wanna to try and see if I can salvage this drawing. Is this decent enough or should i just call it quits?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 00:53:08 2022 No.6077084 >>6077050 WORK ON SOMETHING ELSE ALREADY YOU FUCK SHIT

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 00:54:31 2022 No.6077087 >>6077050 ignore this >>6077084 Go ahead and line/colour it first then post it here for final critique. You can apply the critique to your next drawing.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 01:03:48 2022 No.6077099 >>6077050 ignore this >>6077087 go backwards and redo the sketch/set that to lower opacity and line over properly instead of being lazy

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 01:27:09 2022 No.6077134 File: 1.18 MB, 680x1080, nu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6073399

Anonymous Thu May 26 01:36:02 2022 No.6077144
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>>6076807

>>6077134
I think some more hard shadows, especially where the dress is close to her skin or under the arm where the sun would make it cast a shadow onto her side would have brought this up a notch.
Right now the lighting on her hair is strong, confident. I know it's coming from above but on the leg/bottom it loos like its's coming from the left?? Looks unclear and not very confident. Dont run from the hard round brush

Cute character, who is she?

>>6076897
I like em, keep going anon

Anonymous Thu May 26 02:57:21 2022 No.6077243
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Why do we come here? Just to suffer? The artists we lost. The resources spent. You feel it too. don't you? I was the parasite. Feeding off of the trends. Just to receive no retweets!!!
Djgstd5ickyyk
The porn just keeps growing. Swallowing everything in its path... getting bigger and bigger... who knows how big now?
Hmm.
I'm going to make 'em give back our purity. And give back everything that we've lost. And I won't rest. Until it's done.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 03:04:03 2022 No.6077252 >>6076807 >>6077144 You remind me of my favorite artist, some day I will reach this level, God willing

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 03:23:40 2022 No.6077276 File: 619 KB, 1172x1500, 1653535418479.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I farded.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 03:41:01 2022 No.6077302 >>6077011 hey anon mind posting your work?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 08:58:42 2022 No.6077543 File: 262 KB, 1350x2025, marine and ratling.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6076852 hey now, i can draw AT LEAST 3 faces

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 09:41:31 2022 No.6077570 >>6077543 And now he started drawing pedo shit too.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 09:47:51 2022 No.6077576 >>6077570 it's a ratling, calm down, she's got tits

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 09:52:12 2022 No.6077577 >>6077576 Looks like a kid. Your lore used as an excuse means shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 10:03:02 2022 No.6077579 File: 437 KB, 1450x2025, volo marriage.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6077577 lol sure, i don't have a problem with loli/shota but this isn't that, it's like saying drawing halflings is pedo

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 10:38:17 2022 No.6077603 >>6077577 > has the proportions of an adult > has tits and ass > Looks like a kid Dude, there's something wrong with you. Seeing everything as pedophilia is not okay.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 11:26:28 2022 No.6077692 >>6077603 The problem is the size difference. Either give her more vuluptuous proportions, don't draw this kind of ambiguous size difference, or accept the shit you are going to get for drawing it. It's no rocket science.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 11:27:53 2022 No.6077694 >>6077603 >> has the proportions of an adult hahaha, you need glasses.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 11:34:05 2022 No.6077703 >>6077099 >>6077087 the last few pieces I posted here weren't the sketch, it was the finished piece but someone suggested to just post the sketch and get critique on that, it's the reason I haven't started doing the lines or colors yet

Anonymous Thu May 26 12:12:26 2022 No.6077753

>>6077692
Well, if anyone becomes a child to you if you put them next to a giant dude, then you've definitely got some issues.
I don't like loli shit either, but the obsession with pedo detection on this board is astounding. It looks like a pervert who gets turned on by everything is trying to accuse someone of being a pedophile so that no one will think he is actually a pedophile. You just look ridiculous with these kinds of attacks.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 12:23:38 2022 No.6077763 >>6075767 https://e-hentai.org/s/6162a5029e/2198535-2 You're welcome

Anonymous Thu May 26 12:47:53 2022 No.6077782

>>6077753
>Well, if anyone becomes a child to you if you put them next to a giant dude
No it doesn't. But if the character has a big face with a cute anime stylization, then it's basically impossible to tell it's an adult. You have to push some anatomy in order for it not to be ambiguous. That's all I'm saying.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 12:49:56 2022 No.6077786 >>6077782 big head*

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 13:35:44 2022 No.6077826 >>6077782 different anon but you can tell it’s adult. The rest of the body has the proportions of an adult. My first thought looking at the image was that she’s an average slim adult woman and that the man was a giant.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 13:38:44 2022 No.6077828 >>6077826 This is what consuming anime does to you.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 13:47:06 2022 No.6077841 File: 1.12 MB, 1264x1492, Miria.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] say something nice and then shit on it :)

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 20:17:34 2022 No.6078304 File: 2.32 MB, 2616x3727, 20220526_120326.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Got her done

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 20:35:26 2022 No.6078324 >>6078304 no i said watch out for the fibreglass you bimbo

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 21:44:36 2022 No.6078416 What if, in addition to dickgirls, we had women with nipples on their ass cheeks to satisfy both boob and butt lovers? Imagine titty fucking anal sex!

Anonymous Thu May 26 22:47:58 2022 No.6078525
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>>6074293
ended up just relining the face, looks a little derpy, hair a little 'strawy', but good practice. next time I gotta work on more clearly defined shadows v light, better textures and value shapes (closer to >>6077841 in terms of stylising instead of the super blended "realistic" look)

>>6078304
well done crani you're killing it, I think the hair could do with a different rendering style that you could nab off other artists but you're challenging yourself with that perspective and pulled it off

>>6077276
cute april; if you want crits the eyes are a little uncanny I think because of the hard edges and the super realistic irises, but at least there is context and a story here, well done

>>6077144
love the lines and soft shading. foreshortening on his left legs needs work, looks a little stumpy, but this is kiiiino

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 23:01:42 2022 No.6078556 File: 1.75 MB, 928x923, unknown (1).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 23:03:34 2022 No.6078558 >>6077828 I don't really watch anime though?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 23:23:05 2022 No.6078581 File: 926 KB, 800x1271, Major Makoto Veritech VF-1S.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6076665 Thanks anon, here you go, have some Major Mokoto cosplaying in some Robotech veritech.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 26 23:24:39 2022 No.6078587 File: 919 KB, 800x1269, Valkyrie In Sonoda Style.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078581

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 00:20:06 2022 No.6078658 File: 311 KB, 719x1000, doodle.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] todays sketch

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 00:23:34 2022 No.6078660 File: 574 KB, 4800x6000, lineart_practice_1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Call 1-800 “How's My Lineart?"

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 00:26:43 2022 No.6078663 >>6078660 looks like a refined sketch more than line art. too many disconnections and wobbliness. I'd recommend practicing getting confident lines (Don't use a stabilizer). It's still pretty good and could be considered a finished piece though.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 01:06:45 2022 No.6078689 Paint.net question: What are some basic functionality plugins you rely on? I got absolutely nothing, not even a Flip tool

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 01:09:28 2022 No.6078690 >>6074328 >>6074336 Shame Minus8 is such a faggot

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 01:13:55 2022 No.6078697 >>6078660 boost your stabilization massively and draw longer lines. Your lines are clearly wobbly from low stabilization and you drawing short, slow lines. Most of these lines aren't even full lines, they're chickenscratching.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 02:08:36 2022 No.6078743 File: 627 KB, 1575x1771, unknown.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Should I color and render this

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 02:18:20 2022 No.6078753 >>6078697 they are definitely not chicken scratching. Just wobbly and disconnected

Anonymous Fri May 27 02:38:50 2022 No.6078767

>>6078525
> cute april; if you want crits the eyes are a little uncanny I think because of the hard edges and the super realistic irises, but at least there is context and a story here, well done
Thanks! I agree, the eyes stand out too much from everything else. I just got too caught up in playing with fancy brushes in a large zoom, and when I zoomed out it turned out to be too much detail, but I liked the result too much to redo it.

Anonymous Fri May 27 02:39:57 2022 No.6078770
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I wanted to draw porn/erotica for years now. Been only practicing random drawing here and there until I realized I never really practice drawing genitals and sexy poses my whole life. Looked up some cosplayer on exhentai and decided to trace shapes here and there.

I don't know how long I can keep do this until I can draw without tracing/referencing all the time broskis.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 02:41:31 2022 No.6078771 File: 2.66 MB, 2000x1613, 1-2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078770

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 03:23:15 2022 No.6078792 File: 57 KB, 281x628, bokbok.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078753 This is patently chickenscratch, this should be one line, MAYBE two depending how he does the hip

Anonymous Fri May 27 04:29:31 2022 No.6078838
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>>6077252
Thanks anon, I'm still shit but we'll both make it for real one day

>>6078525
Aw hell, I didnt notice it earlier. Maybe I could thicken up the thigh a bit so it reads more like it's being foreshortened?

Anonymous Fri May 27 04:36:53 2022 No.6078843

>>6078771
>>6078770
using white as your background fucks with your values and I highly recommend starting with some kind of grey if you don't want to use the main color of the background. Because when you have it against white, none of your highlights pop like the original so it's hard to read like wet skin

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 04:41:43 2022 No.6078845 >>6078843 you right, I see it very often in speed drawing on youtube, though I don't understand the logic behind it. I just assume it's easier on the eyes while working for hours on it. ty anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 04:47:26 2022 No.6078852 File: 1.47 MB, 2000x1613, 1-3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078845 forgot picrel

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 08:42:51 2022 No.6079025 how do you nsfw artists feel knowing cum has been dumped to something you created? if you're told your art got someone off does that mean your gmi?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 09:16:02 2022 No.6079061 >>6078697 >Your lines are clearly wobbly from low stabilization >from low stabilization No, his and your lines are wobbly from low skill.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 09:53:23 2022 No.6079076 >>6074331 good shit

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 14:38:45 2022 No.6079316 >>6079061 due to the nature of tablets the lines are often wobblier than they are drawing with traditional mediums, i think he's probably running on zero stabilization so any minute wiggle of his hand is translating to the line.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 14:42:19 2022 No.6079325 >>6078838 Bigger... make it bigger..

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 15:34:08 2022 No.6079376 >>6079316 I concur. I've got good lines normally in traditional mediums, but tablets and CSP make the lines wobbly unless I turn on some stabilization.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 16:22:17 2022 No.6079420 File: 127 KB, 1650x1168, quick sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6073399 quick ones

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 16:29:52 2022 No.6079424 File: 219 KB, 719x1000, doodle.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] morning dewdle

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 17:04:09 2022 No.6079461 >>6079316 >>6079376 Wobbly lines due to hardware happen on cheap tablets, sure. But if you have a decent tablet and are skilled enough you don't need stabilization. That's a crutch for beginners.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 17:22:57 2022 No.6079500 File: 703 KB, 1180x632, 2022-05-27_182004.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078771 Is there a brush for csp to achieve this bumpy wet highlight? I've been looking for it for a while, if not, how do you normally paint it?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 17:38:28 2022 No.6079525 >>6079461 I have a large intuos pro and I still get weird lines if I don't have some kind of stabilization.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 19:55:09 2022 No.6079704 >>6079525 Then it's either the software you are using, or your strokes. I never get wobbly lines with 0 stabilization. At least if I make them fast enough of course.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 19:57:16 2022 No.6079708 >>6079500 Any of the dust/particles default ones or the gouache ones with the blur tools to make blurry where you want to

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 20:26:01 2022 No.6079748 >>6078838 Is there someone/something that teaches that style of contour hatching or whatever lines you're using to show form in your sketches? I want to learn that so bad

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 20:30:57 2022 No.6079754 >>6079748 vilppu

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 20:36:12 2022 No.6079757 >>6079754 Based, drawing manual it is, thank you

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 23:21:32 2022 No.6079959 What are some good rape positions/poses?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 23:29:10 2022 No.6079971 File: 52 KB, 594x405, Disgust.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6079959 reverse suspended congress sex

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 23:34:45 2022 No.6079977 >>6079971 *sex position. I don't know how that got cut out.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 27 23:59:08 2022 No.6079999 >>6078852 I'm actually digging your rendering. Post your work anywhere?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 00:16:00 2022 No.6080025 >>6079999 QUADS Checked

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 07:19:49 2022 No.6080529 >>6079424 is the curvilinear perspective on the drawing where she's climbing the ladder something you can learn or do you just have to try it until it works?

Anonymous Sat May 28 12:52:04 2022 No.6080789
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another one
>>6073737
soft shuten :) great shapes, very soft
>>6079424
beautiful lines, big fan of these doodles
>>6079420
nice studies! I especially like the soft rendering on the top left one.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 13:19:51 2022 No.6080834 >>6080789 very sexy shuten

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 17:33:24 2022 No.6081164 File: 1.87 MB, 928x927, unknown (1).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Sat May 28 19:12:07 2022 No.6081278
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>>6080789
Why da fuck are there so many people drawing FatE/GO shuten? I'm going to fucking kill myself. It's a cellphone game designed to manipulate Japanese people with a gambling addiction. And the story is donky-crap. This is why we can't have nice things. And it does not inspire confidence. This is like the third artist so far.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 19:57:33 2022 No.6081352 >>6081278 she's hot, I'm going to draw her eventually even though I don't give a shit about fate

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 20:57:19 2022 No.6081412 File: 31 KB, 600x704, c5d.jpeg.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6081352 I will never be included into the inner artist circle of drawing alcoholic oni from popular cellphone gatchapon gamu.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 28 21:54:16 2022 No.6081502 >>6081412 just draw what your penis likes

Anonymous Sat May 28 23:03:56 2022 No.6081597
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>>6081502
I don't masturbate as much as I used to; eversince starting art and nsfw art. I don't know why. And I get extremely jealous over people that I used to admire. The artists perspective is activated now.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 00:07:17 2022 No.6081661 post more wips where are the wips where is the engagement my work gets 0 Yous here :( any active discords that include nsfw wips channels? i just want to see and post wips

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 10:46:57 2022 No.6082128 >>6078743 its cute

Anonymous Sun May 29 12:48:09 2022 No.6082226
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>>6081502
Drawing what you like is a NGMI move.
>>6081661
People shouldn’t post wips. I post sketches and all people ever did was kvetch about how I posted sketches because only completed works deserve to be posted.
Now I’m the worst artists on /ic/. A stagnated permaprebeglet. Don’t be like me.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 13:23:38 2022 No.6082257 File: 1.09 MB, 1799x2578, shygal short.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6081661 Finished the shygal

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 13:24:17 2022 No.6082258 File: 167 KB, 743x878, qRU3Qvj.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6081661 And now im working on a goblin with a fat ass Foreshortening is hard

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 14:31:58 2022 No.6082315 >>6074356 >asdasdasdsadasdas Have you posted in the singing fishie general? I'll leave you alone regardless of response, I'm just curious. Nice meganeko.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 14:42:53 2022 No.6082340 >>6082258 Would goblins poop green?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 16:13:28 2022 No.6082433 File: 24 KB, 723x315, 1651213157912.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6082340

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 16:52:48 2022 No.6082496 >>6082433 So is that a yes?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 17:08:10 2022 No.6082513 File: 543 KB, 2500x1428, 1653787508454.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6081661 I'm not really good enough to post in here, but this is for a req from /aco/

Anonymous Sun May 29 19:34:03 2022 No.6082767
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>>6079748
It's chicken scratching so I can understand the form in my head :^) I haven't read through a single art book cover to cover because I have the attention span of a goldfish

>>6078852
Oh yeah this reads much better, although you probably noticed your value range is higher than the ref because you started on white. Looks good, but the shape of the blue lights flatten the shape of the thighs. The surface doesn't read as curved

>>6081661
I work very slow unfortunately
I could prob give more critiques but also, half the time I have no idea how to word things in a way that's useful/I'm not skilled enough to confidently redline something
Post your stuff anyway, sometimes you get lucky an an anon that's more knowledgeable will drop by and help out

Anonymous Sun May 29 20:46:06 2022 No.6082883

blessed sunday, look at these big beautiful wips. thank you for posting wips today
>>6082226 i recognise you your figures are kino as the kids say
>>6082258 half my screen is a beautifully shaped ass and I am so grateful.
>>6082513 yes you are. i dont like the hyper comms i get but you're having fun with this and it shows, very bubbly
>>6082767 that rendering is so sexy and soft that's the kinda "cell-shady" look I wanna go for. and I do get some helpful crits sometimes I'm just whining cause I thought a coom general would be more active than this and I dont have any other server/forum to go to for crits/chatting/complaining about weird comms

Anonymous Sun May 29 21:57:19 2022 No.6082973

>>6082883
Thank you! Yeah, I actually got a little disappointed when I reached the point of working the genitals into the composition. It just completely dominates the whole piece, will probably be avoiding it for a bit
Let me know if your work doesn't get a (you) from me
>>6082767
I really don't like the subject matter, but you make it look so appealing. Can I ask how long you've been working on your art skills? And the "chicken scratching" comment is honestly what I thought my favorite artist did as well, I'll continue with the approach I've been using
>>6082258
You guys are gonna give me a short stack goblin fetish... The perspective is turning out great
>>6082257
Obviously excellent work. You have 38,000x more followers than I do on Twitter, but I followed you lol
>>6082226
I still think your drawing has a ton of soul and I love your sketches. A little improvement on your color theory is gonna go a long way. And I will never understand the hate you get
>>6081164
I like big buff ladies so this was up my alley. Amazing job on the upper torso. Looks like her lower torso is slightly out of perspective, especially her left hip. I would also consider using fewer lines to detail the muscles and let the rendering communicate those forms. Lastly the hard lines in her cheek area make her look old, not sure if that's the intention. Overall, nicely done
>>6079424
A continued inspiration
>>6080789
Nice, great rendering on this. Very subtle and soft
Okay, there's all my /beg/ input. These are always my favorite threads on /ic/

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 23:03:43 2022 No.6083041 File: 904 KB, 800x1318, Cpt. Shinobu Nagumo PATLABOR.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6078587

>>	Anonymous Sun May 29 23:04:43 2022 No.6083042 File: 835 KB, 800x1340, Chi Chi DragonBalls.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6083041

Anonymous Sun May 29 23:17:33 2022 No.6083054

>>6079999
I did like, 3 free commission for the anon in draw request thread somewhere https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/60952646/illustrations

>>6082767
I was actually struggling with the blue light reflection. I did a lot paint and repaint over and over again and just settled with the one I posted. I still have a long way to go. Thank you for the critique though, really appreciate it.

Anonymous Sun May 29 23:47:32 2022 No.6083100

>>6078587
>>6083041
I'm really digging these Love the line work and the hair. Is her left index finger supposed be overlapped by some thigh chub where she's spreading? If so it's kind of hard to tell, maybe extend the line of the thigh a little past the tip of the finger. You should also give a little space between the forearm cross contour and the upper arm contour. Really nice though

Anonymous Sun May 29 23:48:22 2022 No.6083102
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todays sketch

>>6080529
you can learn it yeah its 5 point perspective
i know scott robertson touchs on it especially in the videos that go along with the book
i fucked up this though cause i winged it
you can see on the bottom left rail of the ladder it was out of perspective
i went and fixed that though
of course trying it over and over will help like with anything else

>>6080789
>>6082973
ty we doin our best

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 00:19:15 2022 No.6083151 >>6083143 I'd suggest tilting her head back//exaggerate the gesture of her spine and neck being pulled back. This looks unique, some of anatomy is a little underdeveloped (though it is a WIP) but the style is neat

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 00:21:19 2022 No.6083153 >>6083042 where's the rest of her head

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 02:04:16 2022 No.6083285 File: 335 KB, 709x763, mielex_and_gakku_wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i'll try not to delete this one in a fit of self consciousness

Anonymous Mon May 30 08:17:55 2022 No.6083630

Whenever I draw something with a pencil style brush or not 100% opacity black, it's a fucking pain in the ass to color under the lines so each section doesn't have pencil gray lines and shit. Is there really no easy way to fill under the lines than to manually draw underneath them? Seems like any combination of fill tool and selection expansion always ends up having a bunch of scratchy pixels leftover.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 09:41:09 2022 No.6083673 >>6083285 Looks like you've got a nice grasp on perspective here. Good job. Make sure you fix her broken arm and think about how you want to use your line weight to communicate, unless you're not at that stage yet >>6083630 No idea

Anonymous Mon May 30 10:23:09 2022 No.6083706
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>>6083100
I see what you mean with the thigh and index finger, I should have added a line just above the finger to portray what you're talking about. And the forearm, holy shit, it makes it look like she's a mannequin with how I portrayed it. Thanks for those critiques. I'll be more careful in the future about those things.
>>6083153
Yeah, looking back on this, I really didn't stick to the Toriyama art style as much as I would have wanted to. I know, now, that I added more of my Kenichi Sonoda influence to the piece instead of remaining faithful to the Toriyama style.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 13:35:19 2022 No.6083819 >>6083102 blog

Anonymous Mon May 30 14:58:00 2022 No.6083892

>>6074630
You really nailed the breasts and nipples here. They look so soft and inviting, and my eye is drawn to them rather than her face. I think it's because they're framed by her arms, which creates that light and shadow contrast. Was that intentional, or just a result of the pose?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 15:27:38 2022 No.6083943 File: 147 KB, 918x1023, da pussy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 16:22:38 2022 No.6084017 >>6083054 I would like to commission you, for actual $ (plz bear in mind, I ain't rich). Can I reach you on pixiv?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 16:22:44 2022 No.6084018 >>6083673 dumb dumb question here but how can I learn line weight. pperspectie and anatomy i 'get', but my sketches all look flat becuse i can't figure out how to make the lines pretty. anyone know of any good books or tuts?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 16:23:28 2022 No.6084019 >>6083819 Blog what?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 19:14:15 2022 No.6084238 >>6083819 @reloadhb on twizzler

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 20:56:13 2022 No.6084342 File: 390 KB, 1098x735, sketchtests.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to nail the Venus bodytype. These sketches are supposed to be for the same character, would you say the proportions are consistent in these four sketches?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 21:25:20 2022 No.6084380 >>6084342 yeah, more or less. i think it looks pretty good.

Anonymous Mon May 30 21:39:14 2022 No.6084397
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I feel like my art always looks better as a sketch than inked. but my sketches aren't clean enough for them to look good in color. I've been struggling with the inking stage for months and It's really becoming frustrating.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 21:53:33 2022 No.6084409 >>6084342 Yeah and it looks fucking hot anon

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 21:55:35 2022 No.6084411 >>6084397 keep trying and experimenting and you'll eventually find the balance

Anonymous Mon May 30 22:10:52 2022 No.6084425

>>6084397
please don't tell me you just discard that sketch layer for that synthetic, "polished" lineart. you are losing the depth create by the line thickness, some of the form and even some appealing parts like the nipples and pubes. at the very least just tint those areas that you want "cleaned up" a lighter tone, separate them and play around layer effects, multiply always comes to mind, play with opacity etc.
but what is the obsession with cleaning it up in the first place? not just you but many other artists. it's like we're all striving for the same homogenous workflow for the exact same look and everything ends up looking clinically dead, and sure rendering can help "recover" some form and appeal but why not keep all the character and uniqueness of those sketch brushstrokes
tl;dr it's just a taste/opinion but it just seems pointless to voluntarily remove "soul" and character from a final sketch because it happens to be the spirit of the times. embrace the sketch

>>	Anonymous Mon May 30 22:17:42 2022 No.6084430 File: 498 KB, 1012x812, -vdfgdfgdfg.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6084425 it's cause I draw manga on the side. inking things became a habit cause I like trying to capture that style. I know some mangaka have sketchy artstyles but still.

Anonymous Mon May 30 23:33:35 2022 No.6084511

>>6084018
All I know are some techniques that are used
>Thicker lines for focus
>Closer objects get thicker lines
>Objects with more weight get thicker lines
>Overlapping form gets thicker line than form underneath
You can also look at other line work that you like and figure out what that artist is doing

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 00:16:25 2022 No.6084561 File: 578 KB, 1410x868, hjghjghjghjfghj.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6084425 here's what a colored sketch looks like

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 00:29:56 2022 No.6084578 File: 607 KB, 1250x1300, devilwomanlineart.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] critique and comments welcome

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 00:31:27 2022 No.6084580 >>6084425 Shut the fuck up, retard

Anonymous Tue May 31 00:41:25 2022 No.6084592

>>6084580
it would be way better for me. if you provided reasons why he's wrong. cause honestly he has a point. while I have better examples of line work with good weight verity. i'm already in the mind that my linework is not as good as my sketches so being reassured that the sketches are better was way more helpful than just telling him to fuck off.

Anonymous Tue May 31 00:45:34 2022 No.6084598

>>6084561
You do keep some of those form lines and they look good, I guess keeping it minimal is part of the style. If you wanted crits on it; that delt and arm look huge even considering the foreshortening, mouth looks slightly displaced to her right side, arm/shoulder in the back should naturally fall lower to counterbalance the raised side and the 3 lines on the bottom left are confusing, not describing each form too confidently. Besides that I bet you're drowning in comms/requests cause it looks pretty solid. Great work (and dedication) on the manga panels here too btw >>6084430 hot damn. You got a blog?

Anonymous Tue May 31 00:52:28 2022 No.6084607
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>>6084598
@otakubasket on twitter or devilsmoon.cfw.me for my webcomic
Laundrymomart.com or laundrymom on pixiv/negrounds for nsfw stuff

>Besides that I bet you're drowning in comms/requests cause it looks pretty solid.
Ive been doing art full time for 3 years now. I just don't ask for art help publicly much.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 01:00:21 2022 No.6084624 File: 333 KB, 667x1000, suckyourcock.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 01:18:50 2022 No.6084653 File: 193 KB, 1000x1130, 67.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 01:35:46 2022 No.6084674 >>6082513 Do you guys think I should start devoting a decent amount of time to practicing coloring and rendering? I wanted to have a decent foundation first before I make that jump

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 01:39:52 2022 No.6084679 >>6084674 I started coloring as soon as I got a tablet but I really enjoy coloring so that's probably why it was easier for me to jump right into it. If coloring is what you want improve next you should go for it

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 01:50:43 2022 No.6084691 >>6084624 made me erect, blog?

Anonymous Tue May 31 02:15:14 2022 No.6084728
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morning dewdle

>>6083285
as long as you tried your best thats all that matters (also having fun)

>>6084397
when you sketch youre looser with your lines and willing to make mistakes
when you line youre tightening up too much and not as willing to make mistakes

get looser with the pen and make your strokes the same way you make them as a sketch

>>6083943
the hatching has potential but its too egregious on the breasts
it looks like the texture of a burlap sack here

>>6084018
https://i.imgur.com/z1omtfB.png
this could help

>>6084342
the proportions are consistent between the sketches
with the ass try to have it wider on the bottom as opposed to on top
that will accentuate the hips and make the ass look more appealing

>>6084578
the right horn is too far to the right i think you overcompensated due to the bands being pushed out but it could come in some
also the right arm looks to be a tad short too the upper arm and forearm could be longer
its also hard to tell where the bra cup on the right tit connects to the other. The shadow shape combined makes it look like an awkward shaped bra cup
bridge of the nose is too far indented and to the left of the face given the angle of the head

>>6084624
id love to see more of the bottom right panel
its a nice punctuation of what shes saying and feeling that id love for it to be bigger and more impactful on the page

>>6084653
nicu cock

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 07:04:03 2022 No.6085045 File: 1.10 MB, 746x900, 2022-05-30_03_FIN.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 07:04:39 2022 No.6085046 File: 978 KB, 600x900, 2022-05-30_04_FIN.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6085045 new ones

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 07:14:54 2022 No.6085056 >>6085045 what about 5 sexual

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 08:36:59 2022 No.6085129 File: 1.07 MB, 600x900, 2022-05-31_01.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6085056 3 hot 5 me

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>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 13:50:07 2022 No.6085361 >>6085045 i nut 4 sexual today i edged for 4 hours and blasted so hard it tore a hole in my kleenex

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 16:52:29 2022 No.6085517 >>6085342 Oooh i like this

>>	Anonymous Tue May 31 17:05:07 2022 No.6085531 >>6085517 I like YOU

Anonymous Tue May 31 23:58:56 2022 No.6086065
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>>6084607
>>6084397
bumping with another doodle. starting to think I should try dropping ink from my workflow. even a messy sketch like this looks fine in color dispite my fears of it not working out

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 04:57:54 2022 No.6086383
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Another layout.

>>6084728
Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely see what I can do about that. My focus right now is the panel layout, text, and composition. This is the first real comic I've made so I'm just kind of winging it. Any feedback is welcome.

>>6084691
I have no real social media yet besides @Kali_Amorous on twitter, but I've not yet posted. This is my first foray into NSFW art.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 05:55:46 2022 No.6086441 >>6083943 Hands are like faces - the less detail the better. Right now it looks like an old woman hand.

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 07:45:11 2022 No.6086519
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more sketches. I'm trying to drop bad habits and keep things clean so it's less of a mess. using lines better. I like these a lot.

>>6084342
I never commented on this but I think you really got it. keep going!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 08:19:57 2022 No.6086539 File: 1.32 MB, 1218x1435, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not sure how to shade the underwear

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 08:43:32 2022 No.6086567 File: 558 KB, 1800x2700, preparing the eunuch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] plugging away more on this

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 09:52:19 2022 No.6086612 >>6086567 Your over-use of symmetry and straight on perspective is so fucking unappealing it hurts.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 09:56:25 2022 No.6086616 >>6086612 It's useless telling him that, he is THE ngmi

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 12:55:32 2022 No.6086718 File: 709 KB, 2000x1800, Mants1_WIP.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Will finish when I wake up

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 13:22:09 2022 No.6086726 >>6086612 >>6086616 homosexuals are mentally impaired due to trauma

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 13:55:28 2022 No.6086760 >>6086519 ya ever draw street fighter characters? chun-li/cammy would look ace in your style. maybe that's not what you're into (fan art for the likes) but it could give you a boost, and your style would really suit it imo

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 16:09:22 2022 No.6086908 File: 1.79 MB, 2354x2879, Jazel bum.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Got her done

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 18:12:58 2022 No.6087084
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Been doing pinups for my own personal enjoyment for awhile. I haven’t shared my art with any fellow coombrained artists yet so I figured I’d start here. I’ve been looking for ages for a place to share desu. Twitter seems hard to grow a following on. I really want to find a permanent spot since I feel like I’m finally getting somewhere with my stuff

Any way here’s my latest piece. Im very happy with the most part. I used different refs for the body and the face but exaggerated parts within my own personal taste. I personally enjoy side ass shots a lot. I think I could improve the overall rendering a bit by doing some light studies, and the hands are pretty shit. I need to do hand studies to learn the general construction but that’s so boring lol

Any feedback is welcome. My main question is “is it a sexy pinup?”

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 18:32:16 2022 No.6087116

>>6087084
Pixiv is probably one of the best places to start posting your work.
Not sure how much experience you have, but your piece looks pretty decent. Anatomy and proportions are pretty good from what I can tell. Her hands might be a little big. Your shadows look pretty good as well.
In terms of finding it sexy I can say no, it hasn't reached that level yet, at least for me. But I don't think I would find a real image of a woman like this sexy either.
I think your style might look better with no lines, or at least no black lines. Also, definitely start detailing your eyes more, I think that will help a lot

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 18:49:14 2022 No.6087147 >>6086908 i love the squish. well done anon

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 18:54:54 2022 No.6087160

>>6087084
the harsh lines kinda take away from the sexiness. remember that lines are indicators of value, so she would look prettier if the line emphasized certain curves of her body using line weight. for instance, that thick bold black line that was used to indicate her front thigh kind of clashes with the white highlight that you used to emphasize her thiccness, thus dulling her thiccness down. so yeah just work on line weight and put bolder lines in darker areas and thinner lines in lighter areas. other than that i think ur doing good anon

Anonymous Wed Jun 1 19:10:28 2022 No.6087190

>>6087160
>>6087116
Thanks anons for the critiques! I’ve been struggling a lot with getting good lines in general. I definitely need to tie line thickness more to shadows and in general tone them down. I would like to get to the point where the line art is barely needed but I feel it looks pretty bad without it currently. I think I may using too big a brush for sketches, but I find using small brushes difficult.

Maybe I will do some eye studies in addition to hands. might help with the blow up doll look lol

I will try pixiv.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 19:35:12 2022 No.6087217 File: 2.26 MB, 2850x3600, streetfgihter.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6086760 when I play fighters its darkstalkers, or GGStrive. fighting games make my hands hurt.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 19:37:18 2022 No.6087219 File: 470 KB, 1020x1320, streetfgihter.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6086760 when I play fighters its darkstalkers, or GGStrive. fighting games make my hands hurt. >>6086908 GOOD

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 22:35:10 2022 No.6087385 File: 1.00 MB, 1197x1346, 278.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 1 23:21:59 2022 No.6087427 File: 3.40 MB, 4590x2970, rob.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how do shade good?

>>	red faded hitoshi Thu Jun 2 00:22:39 2022 No.6087482 >>6087427 i don't know.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 00:24:28 2022 No.6087486 >>6087427 choose your light source or copy the light from your reference.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 01:16:23 2022 No.6087524 >>6087427 New layer > clipping mask > blend mode to Multiply > airbrush edges Lasso tool helps too

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 03:22:24 2022 No.6087662 File: 1.09 MB, 1085x1972, 220524.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6074665 Thanks, I took what you said into consideration. >>6074984 @ribosoma_42 >>6083892 It was on purpose, I wanted her to look fragile and shy.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 04:02:16 2022 No.6087696 >>6087662 can't believe i found you here, been browsing your shit since your old mc account. you're the best

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 05:46:27 2022 No.6087803 >>6087662 Asukafag is that you?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 06:31:15 2022 No.6087844 File: 401 KB, 1070x809, icccccc.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 06:35:32 2022 No.6087848 File: 497 KB, 2025x1350, bathing at Susa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 07:47:29 2022 No.6087909 >>6087904 I like how the dick is twisted to the side. >>6087844 Are you the guy who draws really wide hairy women fucking little bois?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:00:00 2022 No.6087919 File: 169 KB, 741x868, asdffd.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6087909 Yes, I am. But what do you mean when you say 'wide'?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:08:44 2022 No.6087927 >>6087844 Your style is instantly recognizable and completely without appeal as always.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:10:55 2022 No.6087929 >>6087919 you draw your women like fucking fridges bro, learn some variety and see a therapist for your internalized psychosexual trauma

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:17:27 2022 No.6087936 >>6087929 >fridges can you give me a counterexample where the body is.. like the opposite of the fridge-type you see in my drawings?

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Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:50:19 2022 No.6087953
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>>6082973
No lie, I've been drawing since I was in diapers, I just never took it seriously and drew all over everything including important schoolwork. Currently I go through intermittent stretches of drawing/art block so that's been fun.

>>6084397
Inking is a patient man's game. it sucks man
although every artists doesnt need it. Some are known for their loose and messy styles

>>6083285
It's all good here man, we're all here to learn and share. Fwiw I really enjoy how angular your work is. It really stands out. I'd read a comic in this style too

>>6084653
Gesture could use a little more OOMPH
Weight, it feels like she's floating there, not like she's kneeling on something and presenting even with the absence of a prop/ground plane

>>6086383
I'm ready for the rest of this comic, go on

>>6086539
Find your light source then go from there. The closer the fabric is to the skin, the darker the shadow will be, generally

>>6087219
Aht aht, dont hide those feet anon. You already hid thae hands in the pose. Get a reference and draw those bad boys out. It'll be annoying yes but you'll benefit from the mileage.

>>6087385
No notes, I kneel
100% appealing and I'm gonna need a site from you or something

>>6087939
How do you come up with your backgrounds? Do you use the same program you draw in?

Anonymous Thu Jun 2 08:53:19 2022 No.6087957
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>>6087936
the problem with your art isn't even necessarily the body types you choose, it's your unpleasant subject matter and even moreso, it's your unappealing and frankly unnerving renditions of humans.

In every single one of your pictures the people in them look like corpses or dolls. They are stiff and un-fluid, they do not sit, stand, or recline in natural ways. Their faces are emotionless and distant, they have no life to them whatsoever. On a technical level there is not much "Wrong" with your work, other than some core aspect of your process or artistic nature that prevents you from depicting characters which look like they aren't dead bodies that have been posed in artificial positions.

TL:DR your art is always dubious in content and your art is always completely devoid of life or appeal, which matter far more than technical accuracy or rendering.

Anonymous Thu Jun 2 09:05:42 2022 No.6087965
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>>6087953
i don't use a program to do my backgrounds, i just use sai so when i do backgrounds i either just rough them in and layer up refinements or i'll have some idea and sketch that, then photo it and put it in and draw over that till it looks 'right' to me

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 09:13:12 2022 No.6087970 >>6087965 christ how tasteless, are you incapable of drawing anything but symmetrical composition and ugly overdetailed figures?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 09:17:18 2022 No.6087973 >>6087970 Hop off his jock

Anonymous Thu Jun 2 09:27:10 2022 No.6087976
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>>6087970
i can very much draw non symmetrical compositions, calm down, i just find them easy as a backdrop for something where the background can be there without being important

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 09:33:24 2022 No.6087979 >>6087970 My guy, relax >>6087965 >Photos Fucking duh Idk why ive been trying to freeball backgrounds this is way smarter >>6087976 breddy good, although I can't at all read the center figure doing the stabbing

Anonymous Thu Jun 2 10:43:42 2022 No.6088019
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>>6087957
you know I completely agree with you actually..
I've been working on an angel/demon sketch for a while and looking with this new perpective on it made me realize that they kinda look robotic and soulless.
I've completely redrawn it into a second version which, I hope, is more lively and has more soul. Would you say the second image in picrel is an improvement over the first?

On the content tho... not only do I personally like it, I've also grown an audience which is into hairy grannies and motherfigures, so I don't see the point in abandoning the subject matter that literally made me 'make it'.

But I will definitely work on my figures looking less doll/corpse-like, you've got a good point there.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 11:34:16 2022 No.6088055 >>6087848 >see through? yes please

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 12:18:11 2022 No.6088080 >>6088019 Did somebody mention your nanny molest you?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 12:23:13 2022 No.6088087 >>6088080 is /ic/ your only way to socialize or why can't you stay on topic?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 13:13:39 2022 No.6088120 >>6088087 I'm not the person from the conversation. I just remember somebody here mentioning his fetish stemming from his nanny molesting him when he was a kid, so I'm curious.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 13:18:28 2022 No.6088128 File: 157 KB, 806x1280, ELDEN RING.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hey lads, anything I should fix before rendering it out? Probably not gonna change much, but I wanna be aware of potential issues, mb hide them with the render.P4SZ

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 14:16:10 2022 No.6088169 >>6088019 Seek professional help.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 17:04:34 2022 No.6088327 File: 101 KB, 514x415, monster_3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6088169 >actually seeking help ngmi, lmao everyone knows only mentally fucked artists can ever make it

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 17:16:37 2022 No.6088338 >>6088327 it really feels like that some days i wonder what my life wouldve been like if i didnt have crippling depression growing up

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 18:27:22 2022 No.6088430 File: 212 KB, 893x633, DUDE MESSIAH.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] aaaand the last one for today

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 18:35:59 2022 No.6088443 >>6088019 Those still look dead anon, it's the same as all your other work. Get some help.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 18:36:51 2022 No.6088447 File: 482 KB, 699x861, hfghfghfghfg.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6087953 >dont hide those feet anon anon I'm gonna be honest. I haven't intentionally hid a hand/foot in years. It's just my page crop lines and my reference.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 18:41:53 2022 No.6088461 >>6088327 >>6088430 Seek professional help, sicko.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 18:51:25 2022 No.6088472 >>6088461 blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 19:34:33 2022 No.6088557 File: 938 KB, 2048x2732, 53A6677D-793F-4767-8965-2FA141C67336.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Teties

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 19:43:40 2022 No.6088586 File: 167 KB, 716x839, unknown (1).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 19:47:32 2022 No.6088594 >>6088586 Nice try, where's her dick, anon

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 20:16:59 2022 No.6088649 >>6073737 social?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 20:20:15 2022 No.6088657 >>6084397 Do you draw on a new layer for the lineart? You could try cleaning up your sketches into lineart, takes more time though.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 20:36:45 2022 No.6088685 >>6088657 that's what I'm currently considering. I've been sketching more cleanly and just coloring those and it's making for art with more energy

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 20:43:46 2022 No.6088693 File: 3.02 MB, 1810x2155, succ37.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6086539 >>6087953 I ended up just keeping it simple, originally I wanted to go for latex/lycra type material but I think it was making it too busy

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 21:04:18 2022 No.6088720 >>6088594 no dick 2day brutha

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 21:45:53 2022 No.6088803 >>6088327 hey what the hell your stuff is technically awesome. are you rich off commissions yet? and blog pls

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 2 23:54:50 2022 No.6088994 File: 1.46 MB, 786x926, unknown (1).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 02:18:49 2022 No.6089177 >>6088447 Big lady make me horny. Very sexy

Anonymous Fri Jun 3 02:29:26 2022 No.6089188
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>>6089177
everyone I've shown her to seems interested in her. I've been wanting to make an original porn comic for a while and never really settled on a character. the reaction to this one has steered me toward finishing something with her

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 02:36:32 2022 No.6089193 >>6089188 Fund it

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 02:40:28 2022 No.6089198 >>6088430 oddly enough this is what alejandro judorowsky did when they told him he couldn't make dune and he instead made metabarons

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 02:51:57 2022 No.6089207 File: 189 KB, 1338x664, nghjghhjgj.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6089193 I already have an active patreon so I think i'll make it an ongoing thing on there. I have to hope they don't start asking where fan art went if I hardswap off of it

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 03:08:00 2022 No.6089221 >>6088994 I think this is the hottest one in the thread imo good job anon

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 03:56:09 2022 No.6089265 >>6089207 Yeah I peeped. I would subbing rn if I couldn't draw myself

Anonymous Fri Jun 3 05:16:05 2022 No.6089314
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>>6088720
picrel

>>6088994
Nice work though, seriously. I really like what you did with her abs here. Solid, but with implied softness by not connecting all the lines

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 05:45:14 2022 No.6089347 File: 254 KB, 719x1000, doodle.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] todays sketch

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 08:51:36 2022 No.6089564 >>6089221 >>6089314 Fenks!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 09:24:31 2022 No.6089589 File: 679 KB, 2025x1350, bathing at Susa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fucking grapes

Anonymous Fri Jun 3 14:23:37 2022 No.6089946
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>>6089589
not sure how it's sexual, but neither is mine that much...
>>6089347
very, very nice, that is some GMI material here. keep going.
>>6088447
hot. saved and will steal

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 16:03:50 2022 No.6090116 >>6089946 reminds me of marmamum

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 3 17:17:15 2022 No.6090234 >>6089946 a bit more sensual than sexual but nudity is nudity

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 4 02:59:00 2022 No.6090996 File: 485 KB, 911x545, ghnfghjghjghj.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6089946 hot and saved

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 4 05:11:39 2022 No.6091168 New bread >>6091167

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