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Previous thread: >>6030917

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly, keep discussion at a civil level
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>> No.6067188
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Was wondering if there'd be another thread

>> No.6067701
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>> No.6067820
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da wizard, cant colour for shit

>> No.6067906

>>6067820
Right is much better. Good colors are more about good values above all else. Left's hood is too dark and blends into the inner hood's shadows. It ruins the appeal of the hood itself and the edges just look dirty. The higher contrast and brightness of the right matches with the outfits other accents and doesn't take away from the hood's own appeal. The lack of detail in the hood's design already gives an extra inch to the "mystery"-ness of what's underneath.
When it comes to your shading, I think it looks fine as it is. Personally I find enjoyment out of seeing more quality renders even if it means other parts of the shading is simple gradients or left at flats... But I would like to mention you should add the shadows for his pouches on his cloak. Particularly the green pouch isn't casting any shadows.
>>6067701
Very cute anon! I love the emphasize on 2D with that drop shadow. Love the simple yet strong shape language.
>>6067188
Is she being dragged on the ground? Or is she upside down? If it's the later, I think she could be rotated to where the rope is closer to the top of the canvas

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WIP robot i've been doodling, i gotta do a background for it soon

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>>6067906
Thank you anon, this is a new style to me so I'm still getting a hold of it :^)

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>>6069329

>> No.6069379
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>>6066726
What does "arming distance" mean?

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>>6069266
This made my dick very hard, good job anon :)

>> No.6069548
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Re-designed the cover for my TTRPG rulebook i've been writing. this one was really fun.

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>> No.6069751

>>6069548

I like the drawings by itself but your composition needs a lot of work.

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>>6069548
The high detail on the buildings in the background makes the picture a bit hard to read because the characters don't stand out as much. Also the colors are all very similar and desaturated. But overall it's a very sweet picture. I love anthropomorphic insects and historical characters. Here's a quick suggestion

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>> No.6070534
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Now watch me wip

>> No.6070565
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>>6069787
I tried adding some depth of field like you mentioned, how's this anon?

>> No.6070660

>>6070565
Not him, but right bug is stepping in an out of focus area. He should also be partially out of focus or you need to remove some of the depth of field near his feet

>> No.6070679
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>>6070534
Finished. This was comfy to render
>>6070565
Much better imo

>> No.6070737
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just goofin'

>> No.6070743

>>6070679
fucking solid, looks like it was fun
>>6069049
good shapes

>> No.6070792
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procrastinating.

>> No.6070829
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What even is happening and how do I fix this. I don't even know what I'm doing I just put random stuff everywhere.

>> No.6071001

>>6070792
Her posing is very awkward, I don't know what pose you're trying to go for. She's sort of blankly smiling at us, yet her whole lower body is going for an action kick, without any twisting or bending of the body. If you give us some kind of idea of what you're going for, I think you'll be able to get a crit that can help you.

>> No.6071047

>>6071001
Crits will be good! Well, I was hoping for her to have a sort of graceful or frolicking or nimble/acrobatic pose. Just a standard quippy dextrous character. Like a charming thief or bounty hunter or something.

>> No.6071120

>>6069049
Is that inspired by Metal Gear Rex? Looks cool

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>>6070792

>> No.6071351
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Would like to get better at rendering.
Crits are appreciated.

>>6070679
Beautiful.

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>> No.6071998
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Working on a pinup style commission. Trying to mimic oils. Still working on it.
>>6070792
Unnatural posing and expression. Looks like you drew over a doll.
>>6071971
Looks great but her arms look a little short.

>> No.6072062

>>6071971
Why is she trapped in the void?

>> No.6072063

>>6071971
nutted

>> No.6072507

>>6071998
yah they are, theyre the weakest part

>> No.6072543

>>6071120
i took some design beats from metal gear bots like the Gekkos, but all in all it's not inspired by any one thing.

>> No.6072547

>>6069409
Thanks sensei.

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>> No.6072658
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>>6070660
I tweaked it so the bee is stepping in an in-focus zone, i think this'll be the final version, thanks for the feedback anon

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>>6066726
look what i found

>> No.6073637

>>6071998
>pin up
My sides

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>> No.6074027

>>6074020
stop rendering, just fucking stop, do gestures and get a better grasp of the forms and energy of a pose, same for the feet and hands, holy fuck theyre terrible.

>> No.6074042

>>6074020
the face is cute, the tits are wonky, the foam on the beer looks like cum, and like the other anon said the pose itself s sorta rough. The foot isn't terrible but the hand is pretty nasty. The folds at the knees make it look like there's something dreadfully wrong with this woman's legs.

>> No.6074264
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Fixed the hand and made some small adjustments.

>>6074042
A little more to go on regarding her chest and legs?

>> No.6074265

>>6074264
flipping the canvas is not a fix

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>>6070737
more goofin'

>> No.6074538
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did this for a drawthread earlier today

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>>6074264
Maybe this will be helpful for you, it's hard to explain exactly what i'm getting at.

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La Goblìna, dios mio
Im still unsure on her desing this is the 5th time i redesign her, trying to go for something spooky.

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probably not going to make any changes to the lineart at this point, but any feedback is appreciated! i think the torso/head of the guy on the right turned out a little stiff bc i was trying to do a lot with the pose, but i think overall its not bad

>> No.6075362

>>6074264
looks very nice!

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>>6075352
I lied, fixed the two left feet issue for the guy on the right and changed the face a bit. the gesture of the two as a whole is kind of disjointed and i could have used more interesting perspective. will keep in mind moving forward

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>>6066726
In hell they force you to draw vtubers 24/7

>> No.6076857
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Deadus Threadus

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>>6075860

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>> No.6077552

>>6074628
based art, got any blog?

>> No.6077810

>>6077541
the sooner you get out of this shitty phase of drawing doodles the better

>> No.6078062

>>6077810
you can usually tell when an artist only does doodles and nothing else, it shows in their artwork
this anon at least looks like he's done some studies

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>>6077810
you know exactly what I'm gonna ask you to post, right?

>> No.6078183
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I tried drawing Frog from Chrono Trigger, but I think I missed the essence of the character and just made his face look like... a frog. Thoughts?

>> No.6078281

>>6077810
How are they shitty? Worried because I do the same

>> No.6078702
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Aiming to fix these sketches before continuing the inks.

The leftmost one needs the most changes, as I'm not quite sure how to make the perspective work with her legs. The face and how she holds her bagpipes will also need to be redrawn.

So far, the other two look fine in my eyes, though the sleeves in the middle one need to be refined. The forearms in the right one could also use some adjustments.

>> No.6078718

>>6078702
The perspective you want won't work with the straight forward torso you've drawn. Skip the perspective and give her regular legs to match the perspective of her body. Her head might also be slightly too big

>> No.6079099
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Can't decide whether to keep the rain or not, I kind of suck at it

>> No.6079101

>>6079099
the thicker lines in the background are not rain drops by the way

>> No.6079321

>>6079099
look at how rain is done by other animators/illustrators and either boost it or drop it entirely, i'd boost it and give the image some visual interest

>> No.6079771
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Having trouble designing a protagonist. I’m hoping to give him a youthfuland angelic appearance but I’m not sure I’m hitting the mark. The eye patch is the only must (although I could change its design - just focused on simplicity).
Any suggestions greatly appreciated

>> No.6079774

>>6079771
personally i think it's a very cool design! I like the eyepatch

>> No.6079790

>>6079774
Thank you anon!

>> No.6079797

>>6079790
may I ask if you have blog?

>> No.6079814

>>6079771
>>6079774
hate the eye patch

>> No.6079825

>>6079797
Not an active one unfortunately
>>6079814
I can’t get rid of it, but I could try a different look to it. Is the colour or shape that’s bothering you?

>> No.6079953

>>6079825
https://youtu.be/CjiKlLE3NuI
This video has some great character design guidelines

Not that anon, but you could personalize his eye patch more. Especially as a protagonist, having a more pronounced personality is important... But then again, his eye patch design also depends on how the rest of him looks. If the rest of his design has more flourishes and tidbits then a plain eyepatch could fit fine... Or you could design for functionality. His face is incredibly important as a protagonist and when you have any sort of head accessories, you want to make sure they stand out and instantly reflect the personality of the character wearing them. Are they brand new? Clean? Tattered? Uniquely shaped? Is it hand made? Does he change it often?
He's a character that doesn't have much... Character. As of now. Which isn't a bad thing per se! Just make sure you've plotted out a reason WHY he's lacking character and how that's going to change as his story progresses.
Can't really give much advice without seeing more of a design besides a head.

>> No.6079984

>>6079953
Thank you anon, this is all very helpful - especially the video. I’m hoping to update with a few wardrobe choices soon. I just need to do more armor studies before I’m comfortable attempting my own.

Although generally speaking he is intended to read as dependable, well-meaning, and modest. I’ll do my best to push those themes with his full design.

>> No.6080188

>>6079771
Jewish skull

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>> No.6080264

>>6080188
thank you anon, very insightful

>> No.6080269

>>6067701
anon your art is adorable!

>> No.6080273

>>6071971
the purple textures in this are beautiful. I would say that you could improve on your feet / hand anatomy because all of the digits are straight. The big toe goes straight and then the other toes increasingly curve inward. I would also add slightly bigger gaps between the toes to make them more defined

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>>6078718
Better?

>> No.6080437
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abandoned drawing

>> No.6080449

Are there any good artists that regularly post studies alongside their normal work?

>> No.6080451

>>6080449
at a certain point artists stop doing real studies and just brush up every once in a while because they arent dumb fucking loomis head retards like you who will never ever draw something appealing for as long as you have arms.

>> No.6080452

>>6080451
calm the fuck down retard, i didn't ask for someone who only posts studies. i just like seeing the process behind things. go outside for fucks sake

>> No.6080459

>>6074614
you drawing hands for capcom?
Those are some man hands.

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Ended up ditching the rain in the end, maybe for another time

>> No.6080504

>>6080452
not my fault you are dumb beg nigger who doesn't have the eye to even know a good study from a bad one you stupid fucking retard. you little piss baby you dumb dunning kruger. you are so shit, kill yourself.

>> No.6080515

>>6080459
hands are a vital part of character expression and miniscule anime pencil fingers look terrible.

>> No.6080674
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It's a fat man's world, baby.

>> No.6081150

>>6080674
I love all the "fat yellow men and skinny pale girls" art that I you post on /ic/, are you planning to do anything with it?

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>>6081150
Yeah. I've been working on an animation for a few months now that's almost done. It's about a conehead.

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>> No.6081710

>>6080321
Definitely better, but something still feels off... Maybe it's that her head isn't looking up, but the camera perspective you want is from a higher angle? Her hips might also be a little too wide/thighs a little too far apart

>> No.6081903

How do I decrease the anime influence in my art?

>> No.6081922

>>6080437
Nice, comfy and cute. it has scratched my spiritual itch

>> No.6082389

>>6081903
Study western art duh

>> No.6082408

>>6081903
avoid pointy noses and chins, peace hand signs, overly detailed eyes, eyes looking into the distance/void, and lastly study disney

>> No.6082540
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>>6081535
Think my understanding of faces is increasing bit by bit

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>> No.6083399

>>6083389
le epic shape master

>> No.6083426

>>6083399
youre in love with me, still. are you at least cute

>> No.6083574

>>6083389
i would fuck it

>> No.6083924

>>6083426
youre a big meme and a delusional beg

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>>6066726

>> No.6084066

>>6083924
Obsessed

>> No.6084082

>>6084066
nice shapes faggot

>> No.6084101

>>6084082
must hurt to be as bad as you, and as infatuated.
I'm sorry, I must decline your confessions.

>> No.6084160

>>6083924
this guy is more creative than 99% of ic's int-pro posters

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>>6084160
creativity doesn't mean shit when his fundies are shit
>pyw
here you go, attention seeking faggot shape master

>> No.6084347

Here from /salt/, I suck at drawing anything but NSFW art. Even when I try to draw SFW art, I struggle to finish it. I'd like to be able to do both, any types on how to become less of a coom artist and more of just an artist?

>> No.6084367

>>6084191
but tsun can make appealing things tho i dont see your point? maybe you dont understand art??? maybe you just can't see proper so i would feel bad about judging u if that were the case

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>>6082540

>> No.6084418

>>6084191
Apparently they do… not to dig on your art but you gotta consider more than just fundies here

>> No.6084439 [DELETED] 

>>6083389
what's your blog anon

>> No.6084441

>>6083389
what's your blog anon, also you might wanna check you tablet drivers and settings, you're having some jittering on your lines

>> No.6084450

>>6084441
https://twitter.com/teasunnh
unsure what the jitter is, tried fixing it but chalked it up to the pencil tool just sucking by itself.

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Need to get better at composition

>> No.6084484
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>>6084022
I like this hair

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>> No.6084551

>>6084484
youve gotten so much better at coloring than when i first critiqued you on boys' colors. well done

>> No.6084557

>>6084545
Absolutely fantastic and lovely

>> No.6084560

>>6084557
Why don't I ever get compliments man I'm sick of it all

>> No.6084567

>>6084560
Instead of giving up, try going out of your comfort zone and do more experimental works. Or organize a list of your favorite artists and dedicate a month to just replicating their works so you have a stronger foundation to work on stylistically. Without seeing your work, I could never tell you for certain what you could or shouldn't do. But having a defeatist attitude won't get you anywhere. An extremely important part of growing as an artist is being able to self reflect and self critique your own work and try to think about why X is the way it is or what could be done to fix Y. You don't have to go and adjust these things, you just have to be aware of them so your future drawings can be made with the improvements in mind.

>> No.6084576

>>6084560
There are a lot of artists I like in /alt/ but I don't have the time or energy to reply to all of them every single time. Keep in mind there are passive lurkers that also appreciate your drawings. Silence isn't necessarily a bad thing, but if all you want are compliments then find some discord server or something

>> No.6084600

>>6084560
may b because u suck! lol.

>> No.6084668

>>6084557
thank you, anon!!

>> No.6084707

>>6084576
>>6084567
I will choose to focus on these instead of this >>6084600 crab. Thanks anons I will get so good that not a single person in this thread will be able to overlook me

>> No.6084716

>>6071047
>a sort of graceful or frolicking or nimble/acrobatic pose
Then you'd probably want to draw her as she is starting or ending this action (the kick). You want the pose to be the opposite as "hard" or tensed up like you drew her.

>> No.6084722

>>6084551
Thank you sm! I appreciate the advice

>>6084545
Holy shit I bow

>> No.6084815

>>6084191
>crab is an anime watching pedo /beg/ coomer who can only draw in 3/4 angle
every time lmao
this supposed “shape master” of yours is actually displaying objects in 3D space while your degenerate shit looks like one of those god-awful flat “YO MAMMA” cartoons on youtube
apply yourself

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>> No.6085109
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>>6066726
Achievement unlocked: Winner in life

I offended the owner of a Twitter account with 600 000 followers that offered to retweet me if I draw a cat.

Well, shit happens. A bit of Gaga and pizza will heal my pain https://youtu.be/niqrrmev4mA

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May

>> No.6085115

How do you stop being horny? I just want to draw...

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>>6085113
amazing...

>> No.6085444

>>6085113
Wow just making your stuff more anime automatically lures normies into giving you (You)s thanks for the tip

>> No.6085449

>>6085444
post your work

>> No.6085453

>>6085449
Only when I'm done animefying it

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how do you all usually go about developing a style? Some of the most stylized stuff I've seen I have a hard time deconstructing how they create their process, especially the very complex ones.

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Long time since i did something kenshi related, i think im going to start shilling myself in the comunity

>>6077552
Yes! Find me as @Leikdaz22 on Twitter or insta

>>6078183
I think the face is ok, however i think you made the clothes more "serious" if that makes sense as the original has a silly touch to it with the pants and being more fat and cartoony looking, either way i like your frog.

>>6080498
Do you have any Blog? I like your cat characters, they have a lot of personality
>rain
I think if you used a witheish color and drew the "splash" effect of them in the floor and in the contourn of the character would have looked nice, with the Black línes it looked like it was raining oil

>> No.6085648

>>6085113
i used to draw multiple drawings on a page, but then i realized how useless/pointless it is. i'm getting nothing out of it, theyre not even good exercises. i rather just put in the effort in one drawing and make it as best i can. and i also tried to do it from imagination, which is fucking stupid too.

>> No.6085941

>>6085648
Bro anon, are you me? But I can't help but think if you can't draw from imagination then you're shit, so that's all I do

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I know this drawing is kinda wonky and nothing special, but im super new to digital art and it's really hard.

>> No.6085995

>>6085584
Trial and error and draw draw draw
Copy your art inspirations and even if you don't know how to recreate their drawing, try anyway. Look around their galleries for sketch work or tutorials or anything that can give you an edge of understanding into their process... Or straight ask them. Who knows, maybe they'll have the free time to reply back.
I think a style naturally comes to an artist as long as they're studying other art they enjoy. I've always told people that their art styles will come naturally with time, you just have to take it off your plate as a worry entirely (unless you've conquered your fundies)
Might even do you some good to pick up something narrative and try to push a specific aesthetic or style. Having a goal besides "develop a style" will make it all much easier on you

>> No.6086000

>>6085648
Imo the more you draw, the better. You can always extract one of the drawings and work on them further. Anything or any reason to not draw more is NGMI attitude

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>>6085617
Good point! I was considering using white but I felt I was taking too long with it, also here you go! thanks a lot https://twitter.com/gtfrk

Also working on something new, it's super rough still, but it's shaping up!

>> No.6086088

>>6086000
no, just literally put all your effort into one drawing, doing multiple takes is beg mentality

>> No.6086112

>>6086088
Are you actually serious right now or trolling? Have you never even looked at the surface level of ANY art job?

>> No.6086142

>>6086088
Polishing a turd for 5 hours is how you get shit like dock girl.

>> No.6086359

>>6085995
I think it's so hard to decide on what style to go with. I like a huge variety of artists with extremely polarizing styles so it's really difficult to go with a certain direction and I myself am very simple with my art with paintings being one layer (idk what you would refer it to as with digital, but maybe alla prima) or just two or three for lineart and flat colors. I just don't understand how people pick up so many techniques with both trad and digital like in oil painting the amount of technique and complex processes is insane. Thanks for the answer btw.

>> No.6086416

>>6072561
retard, loser irl for sure

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Muh peppers!!

>> No.6086507

>>6086419
me personally I wouldn't take that.
tableguy you should hit your wife more.

>> No.6086784

>>6086359
Nobody said you can only have one style. Tackle one at a time.

>> No.6086885

>>6086142
>>6086112
? when you have trouble drawing something you either do 2 things, you drop it and draw something entirely different OR you try to spend awhile trying to get it just right. starting completely new things to draw will throw you in a loop of starting new things to draw and never actually getting good at it. its basic logic. im sorry youre /beg/ ass is too retarded to actually draw anything remotely decent.

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I realized I haven't drawn a single female in over half a year, it's like I completely forgot how they're meant to look.
She's based on the monster the top but I'm still trying to work out her look/design

>>6085113
inspiring work
>>6082540
>>6081535
The first thing I noticed were how good the faces were, lovely forms
>>6085965
If you're drawing centaurs I recommend looking up Jinba (Ryo Sumiyoshi), he uploads loads of detailed sketches and studies and his musculature and anatomy is really on-point

>> No.6087180

>>6086419
Haven’t seen you in awhile tableguy. Hope you and the wife are doing well

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>>6087180
Been busy with other stuff. I finished this giant 22x30 painting though. I cut a custom mat, and mounted it in a 24x36 shadow box frame. It took a nontrivial amount of engineering to make it.

>>6086507
You mean like punch her in the belly? Kinda dark man..

>> No.6087454

>>6086885
Sounds to me like youre projecting and don't have enough skill level as a /beg/ that you can only work on one drawing at a time. I feel bad for you, I really do.

>> No.6087458

>>6087454
if you learn to read, my first post literally says ive been drawing multiple drawings but i got nothing out of it because its a bad habit.

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>>6066726
Left or right? Mostly regarding the line art, though any opinions on the rendering/color is welcome.

>> No.6087500

>>6087494
right, and i'll have to ask you for blog anon

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>>6085441
came out like shit

>> No.6087738

How does one re-find their passion for art? I feel like I'm lacking any creativity and I've felt this way for months. Can't say my life has been easy lately and I know I'm experiencing some form of burn out, but this is the absolute worst time for this. How do I get out of it? How do I find the motivation to create again?

>> No.6087750

>>6087735
you've been very lazy with your drawings lately, you been drawing the same shiet, you're rusty, you'll get out of it as long as you put effort

>> No.6087757

>alternate art styles
nothing but shitty weeb comics

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>>6087750
mmm... its just a bad drawing desu I am enjoying drawing what I like (anime girls)

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>>6087796
my theme lately is to draw two girls

>> No.6087963

>>6080437
Blog?

>> No.6088353

>>6087166
Thanks for the centaur tip anon, appreciate it :)

>> No.6088390

>>6087799
is this your drawing??

>> No.6088923

>>6087799
Based Azumanga Daioh. There's a thread on /i/ if you want to post it there too

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>>6087796
Yeah drawing girls that’s what it’s all about. Think I’m gonna get back to anime girls too

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>> No.6089298

>>6089038
looks like a female chud

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Pigeon milk suntan lotion. I imagine it to be all thick and greasy.

>> No.6089482

>>6087220
>>6089405
Genuinely curious, why do you choose to draw the subject matters you do?
I can't imagine that there's much of an audience besides yourself, so you must just be really passionate about these specific things.
Is it a fetish thing? It's fascinating to me that you have decent artistic skill and could draw whatever you want, and this is what you end up with.

>> No.6089500

>>6089482
Everything is sooooo fucking boring to me. I dont want to draw cute vegetables telling jokes to each other about life in the fridge, and I don’t want to draw sexy pinup girls, or space marine concept art, or celebrity portraits, or Italian landscape watercolors. I dont know why everyone likes drawing all that shit. You don’t need to draw it… it already exists. Somebody else already drew it.

Why did you learn how to draw if you are just going to draw the same thing someone else did? Oh maybe you put cat ears on the girl, or this spacemarine is an rabbit bounty hunter. It’s all the same thing draw in a slightly different style.

If you could draw ANYTHING in your brain, what would it be? What would you draw if you were me?

I’ll tell you about each picture, and maybe it will provide some answers
>>6089405
The prompt was Beach Babes. I hate the beach, I hate people who go to the beach. People who try to tan themselves are fucking idiots. I hate looking at women who wear bikinis on the beach, because you know they also think it’s inappropriate if you saw them in their underwear. Just wear a fucking shirt. I think pigeon milk/poop is funny/gross so all the stupid sunburned beach girls are greasing up in pigeon shit.

>>6087220
The prompt was summertime. I tried to combine all the summer tropes into one image: icecream, beaches, bugs, picnic party. I had to work fast and big and keep it “SFW” because it was going to end up on my wall. So I drew the bugs having a beach party in the melted popsicle / icecream that the kids dropped. The bees that stung the kids lost their stingers and are in the water soothing their butts. Some of the bees are topless because they are European.

>> No.6089514

>>6089500
Your pigeon girl is really hot. Can you make some pinup art of her?

>> No.6089896

>>6086885
You should indeed be patient with your art, but when you say "put all your effort into one drawing" it sounds like you're talking about spending literal days just to produce a single study, not a piece, a fucking study.
A study shouldn't be rushed but it shouldn't be a multi-day task either. You should spend about an hour maximum on a still life study before moving onto the next one.
We need to do studies to get better. Spending 5 days to make another one of your shitty 3/4 angle anime bust drawings that you've done a thousand times isn't going to make your any better.
I implore you to post your work.

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>> No.6090785

>>6089896
where in my fucking posts did i mention studies, stop talking offtopic nigger

>> No.6090859

>>6090785
pyw

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>>6066726
Lmaoing @ begs thinking they are better than gloss. Somebody has to create /cope/ general for them

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I hate that it takes me so long to get drawings done, but i am liking how they turn out at least.

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>>6087799
a redraw

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>>6089038
Well, not anime but the faces are more stylised, I guess
>>6089298
I can live with that

>> No.6092654

>>6092292
I think the 2020 one has better colors and values, the redraw kind of blends in with the background.

I'd add a contrast shadow cast by the figure so that the figure stands out more, and maybe some cracks to the background so it looks more like an actual physical wall.

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Bets

>> No.6092737

>>6092292
iconic soul regression.
you fucking suck stop tracing pantsu

>> No.6092774

>>6092733
NICE. Love that subtle hatching

>> No.6092980

>>6090759
baste and cute

>> No.6093103

>>6092654
well, I used the same base colors but a different layer type for the shading, it was a concious decision honestly I think it looks better

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>>6092654
also, here's an edit, thank you for the feedback

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>> No.6093260

>>6089500
where is the "intresting" part?
what you draw is basically cat girls with added grossness nothing deep or meaningful even if you spell it out only you can tell its special that's why people draw things you find boring they essentially do not find it boring you to shit on what you don't understand then complain when anons shit on you what you need is stop building biased pinions in your head and start to ask others why
Why do you like to draw this?
Why do you go to the beach naked?

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Just finished this, what do I need to improve the most right now? Want to do more studies, but I'm not sure what should be my primary focus.

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So I've been trying to practice a lot of line work with these Micron markers because I'm used to using only pencil. It's supposed to be Decarabia from the Ars Goetia
Thirty legions of demons under his command
Knows the virtues of all herbs and procious stones
Can change into all birds and sing and fly like them before a conjurer
I got a little free all with the clutter but I feel alright with it

>> No.6094243

>>6094080
your primary focus should be teaching me how to do what you do.

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First time doing line art in over a year. Feels very stiff and sterile, but I don't hate it.

>> No.6094463

>>6094279
Is that arthur hastings?

>> No.6094492 [DELETED] 

>>6066726
Aaaaah you're regressing! Madotsukibro :(

>> No.6094494

>>6092292
Aaaaah you're regressing! Madotsukibro :(

>> No.6094496

>>6094463
You just loaded nostalgia in my brain, I miss that game.

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>>6066726
i usually post in draw, but im pretty cartoony. This is recent progress on a friends bday gift (he loves stellaris).

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i plan to finish this one.

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>>6093221

>> No.6095663

>>6094080
>>6094243
Yeah, teach me how you paint

>> No.6095680

>>6094279
Bro if that's stiff and sterile then I don't wanna know what you think of mine

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>>6094243
>>6095663
Not sure how I can explain the process, but here are some of the screenshots of this one that I saved. Most of it is done with flat oil brush in csp. If you have any specific questions it would be probably easier to answer those.

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some stuff while finishing others

>>6092292
i like both. the colors on the left are just more appealing, i know aBe uses that yellow sepia effect on their colored stuff, but i think it doesn't help u here, great stuff tho.

>>6094080
i love your painterly style. i think you have improved the stylization of the faces a lot too.. if anything i'd just say focus on stylizing the brushstrokes a bit more, rakka has some white strings on her head, besides that maybe just simplify shadows on the clothing, ur amazin, keep at it

>> No.6096006

>>6095861
>>6095773
In both cases, I never understand how to start "rough" in coloring and gradually clean it up and refine the rendering. I used to sketch > lineart > base colors> shading > highlights > effects.

>> No.6096076

>>6074020
Lmao don't listen to fucking ngmis above, this is really cool man! Got a blog? Lmao this is so showing of the state of this place when someone posts a good piece and the only two replies are permabegs who don't know what they're talking about.

>> No.6096133

>>6095861
Thanks! With white strings I tried to add some minor highlights, but I don't think I took it far enough for it to work properly.
>>6096006
I personally just jump from one place that doesn't look right another, often checking how the overall picture looks. Sometimes things end up looking worse, so I also compare with the initial sketch from time to time and redo certain parts until I'm satisfied. But I also don't really have any kind of separation other than sketch and rendering.

>> No.6096160

>>6096133
Do you do single layer? If not, how do you group them?

>> No.6096202

>>6096160
I use multiple layers, but they function more as savestates, or when I want my brush to not blend with other colors, so there's no need to group them.

>> No.6096407

>>6096076
Imagine being a tourist and judging an entire general on two anon posts and all you can do is suck cock instead of say anything substantial

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I made my blondie black just for fun and practice on black ethnicity colors. It turned out better than I expected.
I dub thee "BrowniePie"

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>>6094622
Another update :D

>> No.6097024

>>6094080
Values are muddy, simplifiy them into bigger shapes
color is a bit muddy too, the colors change temperature for and in both warm and cool directions. that makes the sky look dirty. Her skin doesn't look like skin.
The composition is a bit cramped.

>> No.6097038

>>6085113
I don't know why nobody has already asked but do you have a blog?

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>>6094641

>> No.6097056

>>6097024
pyw

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>>6095113
more jsr stuff

>>6095861
thank you
>i know aBe uses that yellow sepia effect
well desu I don't really try to copy his stuff and I don't do that sort of shading anymore, it's just linear burn layer mode

>> No.6097089

>>6097024
thats not what muddy values are, he clearly has a theme going with the colors you stupid faggity nigger

>> No.6097183

>>6097086
show us where you traced these from, nigger ripper

>> No.6097191

>>6092330
so angular, the shapes are all nice i love it
>>6097086
dope angle, dynami-ku~

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>>6066726
Saw a dream a couple of hours ago, my first love was writing on this very board about her life and how she's doing in a foreign country. Even in sleep I suffer. No rest for the wicked.

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Just messing around today

>> No.6097812

>>6087796
I wanna be able to draw stuff like this. cute girls with each other. sigh

>> No.6097912

>>6096981
cute

>> No.6098200

>>6097482
yikes do you never get tired of blogposting into the void? How about you use that to learn how to draw.

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>>6097086
done... now to lewd them

>> No.6098439

>>6098412
What direction is right character's left leg going? You add some movement lines around her upper thigh, but it appears like she's moving forwards. These lines are a very nice touch and I think you should keep them, but move them. The trick to placing these is thinking about mass. Areas that have more mass on the body will have slightly more drag/after image/trail because it'll be the portion that lags behind. I understand the area around the back of her thigh is already full of detail so you probably wanted to avoid adding anymore there... Maybe you could try back of the knee? And upper portion of her rollerblades?
Or alternatively, if you really want her leg to be pulling back, I'd angle the rollerblade so we see more of the bottom under heel.
Left girl's right foot could be angled a little more left pivoting from her angle. But that's only if you'd want them to feel more like they're in the setting. But at the same time the background-character disconnect has its own charm so this is just an optional perspective

>> No.6098447

>>6098412
i like it, what a good job

>> No.6098459

>>6098439
the lines aren't intentional, its just me cleaning up the sketch

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draws

>> No.6099406

>>6093260
I can barely understand what you have written, but i will try my best to answer.

> where is the "intresting" part?
It is interesting to me. But i think it is hard to bridge the gap from what is interesting to me can also be interesting to you. I have to communicate in one drawing what is interesting to me to a random person with no prior context. I think this is why simple drawings are more easily consumed. The viewer only spends 1 second or less looking at it.

> nothing deep or meaningful
Which drawings and illustrations do you find deep and meaningful? Pick a few from this thread or around ic. Or post some of your favorite deep cerebral art. I genuinely dont know what makes art deep or meaningful. If i knew, i would try to draw it, and everytime i ask this question, nobody responds with what they think is interesting art. So i still dont know. You gotta help me out a little here.

> cat girls with added grossness
You are 100% correct. Adding something gross is pretty much the only extra value i know how to add to a drawing.

> Why do you like to draw this?
I like drawing it because i dont usually see it or see other people interpret it in this way. I like alternative interpretations to common things. Something like “misunderstandings”.

In general, i am not sure why other people dont struggle with the same thing. They can be perfectly content making a sexy pinup. Or a bowl of fruit. Like is that it for them? Is that all they wanted to do? After all those skills, anatomy, rendering, understanding of color, light, and value? All you wanted to do was draw sex? Or draw a cat girl mage? Was that what it was all for? To draw memes and shit posts?

What do you want to draw anon? If you could draw ANYTHING and make 1000 drawings what would those drawings be of?

>> No.6099409

>>6099406
>What do you want to draw anon? If you could draw ANYTHING and make 1000 drawings what would those drawings be of?

Your sexy pigeon girl.

>> No.6099429

>>6099409
Lol i can’t figure out how to get her bikini on if she has boob wings. If you have an ideas let me know. Also, i wasnt sure if how pigeon-like her head should be. I am sick of looking at animegirl harpies that just have wings for arms and a normal human girl head with no beak.

>> No.6099433

>>6085113
PLS GIVE BLOG ILL do ANYTHING

>> No.6099440

>>6099429
I like the pigeon head, I think it's pretty funny. I don't know about the bikini problem. That sounds like a problem for a clothing engineer.

>> No.6099450

>>6099429
>can’t figure out how to get her bikini
I'm more curious about her cloaca personally.

>> No.6099460

>>6099406
>In general, i am not sure why other people dont struggle with the same thing. They can be perfectly content making a sexy pinup. Or a bowl of fruit. Like is that it for them? Is that all they wanted to do? After all those skills, anatomy, rendering, understanding of color, light, and value? All you wanted to do was draw sex? Or draw a cat girl mage? Was that what it was all for? To draw memes and shit posts?
honestly im just really happy drawing. Even studying is a lot of fun for me. Ultimately, no one ever really does something the same as someone else, there's always your own flair and individuality to it.

also, big fan of your art btw, not attacking you

>> No.6099669

>>6099406
>I like drawing it because i dont usually see it or see other people interpret it in this way. I like alternative interpretations to common things. Something like “misunderstandings”.
>In general, i am not sure why other people dont struggle with the same thing. They can be perfectly content making a sexy pinup. Or a bowl of fruit. Like is that it for them? Is that all they wanted to do?
I understand your sentiment, large groups of people have been actively working on breaking the mold of traditional representation for over a century now, and people often feel the need to stand out.
But the feeling of disgust is only marginally less primal in humans than lust and hunger, it predates culture — your fruit may be hanging higher than some others, but it's still very low-hanging.

>> No.6099700

>>6099440
It would be nice if pigeon girl had clothes. So she wouldnt have to be so lewd and nude all the time. Clothing adds some sophistication.

>>6099450
Uhhh like is it corkscrewed for the pigeon D?

>>6099460
> honestly im just really happy drawing
Yeah i guess sometimes its as simple as

>>6099669
What do you consider to be cerebral high hanging art? Do you have any examples? I feel like 90% of art is lust/cute, another 9% is fanart (religious included), and 1% is everything else.

Whenever i go to museums, i always think, this guy must have been really horny or he must have been paid a lot by some rich guy to make this religious fanart.

>> No.6099725
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I dont really draw much, but I've always wanted to. Not for anyones sake, but just for fun but my shakey hands make me feel shitty about doing line work.

What could I do to improve the steadiness of my hands?

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>>6099700
>What do you consider to be cerebral high hanging art? Do you have any examples?
To name a few, Paul Kirchner, Jean Giraud's sci-fi stuff, Syd Mead.
Also, a lot of tsukumizu's one-off illustrations fit the description.
If I had to describe them all with one word, I'd use "inventive".

>> No.6099849

>>6099767
I appreciate the response! Nobody has ever named dropped for me. I didnt know any of those by name, but i recognized them when i looked it up. I pretty much dont know any artist by name. Except maybe Giger. I like Syd Mead, it’s got a feel like yesterdays future of tomorrow. The Moebius stuff has a nice aesthetic, but the knock offs have totally ruined it for me.

I really hate tkmiz. I just dont get any of it. And all his stuff looks like unfinished napkin doodles. I hate when that stuff pops up in my feed.

I unironically liked some of the beeple paintings. They are kind of the gross pop culture reference humor that everyone can relate to. Then you look at it longer and you’re like ‘that’s really disgusting’

But these all have a similar kind of “you didnt need to think too hard to get it, but you still had to think about it a little bit”. I think i make things that require too much context, and they are too gross to look at. You need like 80% aesthetic and like 20% story. Like i put too much emphasis on the wrong parts. I packed it with too much story and didn’t simplify it enough, and i packed it with too much gross and left out the aesthetic.

Picking pinups or landscapes seems like easier route, but just feels so vapid and devoid of meaning. Don’t know if you feel the same when you make your drawings..

>> No.6100003

>>6099767
you aren't as interesting as you think you are. you have a child-like naive understanding of what makes something unique. you genuinely have no idea what inventive means in art. You mistake disgust and quirky XD as profound.
i hope your kid dies btw.

>> No.6100031

>>6099406
Not him, just a casual fan of you and your art, but I think you'd find great value in pursuing narratives. You already worked on personal life comics for a while, why not craft a narrative? You have great ideas and your passion for finding something unique is admirable... But, in my opinion, a foolish path. Simply because literally everything is derivative from one another at this point. I personally believe that the sooner you can get over that block, the better you'll perceive art as a medium. It sounds to me like you may be spiraling right into burn out, but that's me putting my nose where it shouldn't (and also heavily projecting because I understand your mindset very well)

Tangent aside,
>TLDR
Draw more narratives and craft some stories. You have good ideas and I'm sure if you practiced putting them cohesively into a narrative, you'd achieve some great things. Maybe even find a new passion for creating.

>> No.6100171

>>6100003
> i hope your kid dies btw
Uhhhh I think you were trying to respond to me, but you were too excited and got the wrong anon.

> you genuinely have no idea what inventive means in art
Post some examples of what you find inventive. At least the other guy gave some refs to discuss.

>>6100031
What do you mean by narrative? Like a comic? Or like a dinotopia kind of book? How do i get people to engage into a progression of images?

> you may be spiraling right into burn out
I’m probably going to go on hiatus after kid comes. So I’ll have to regroup and come back soon. My sister-in-law is writing her own kids book with kawaii dots for eyes faced icecream and food cartoons. It makes me want to vomit.

>> No.6100252

>>6097038
>>6099433
@ndrph

>> No.6100268

>>6100252
thanks anon, I'd sincerely like to draw like you one day.

>> No.6100280

>>6100171
Craft a story. Create characters. Make them do things. It could be a comic, it could be some form of visual novel, it could be a pop up book, puppet theater, animation, interactive blog site, a traditional book... Any method. But of course, think about you. Indulge. Who cares if it's a cohesive narrative? Does a narrative have to be cohesive to be good in the first place? No. Not really.
Do you want to reply more on symbolism? Something deep? Or something simple? Classic? Character goes from point A to point D. Protagonist has a goal, clear to the viewer or not, and you must craft an interesting way that they will achieve that goal.
Ideally through something with 10-30 pages. Think of manga oneshots as an example. Many of those get very experimental.

It's up to you to dig further into writing interesting narratives. There are copious very good YouTube channels for this. If I remember later on tonight or tomorrow, I'll link some I know of.

>It makes me want to vomit.
Why let it hold a space in your mind at all? Why loathe another life that isn't your own? Whether she likes it or is just on the grind, she has a goal in mind. She has a project she is actively working on. I'd say that's admirable in it's own way, even if it sounds like her art direction would cause me physical pain.

>> No.6100293

>>6100171
>>6100280(you)
Oh also relatability is important if you're goal is to attract a large general audience... Well, important is debatable and has a very very broad spectrum. Unless you go hard into surrealism and symbolism and all that and make a clear narrative purposefully vague, someone is bound to relate to what you write in some way if you're being earnest about your narrative. I say that last part only because a carefully curated sterile narrative purely to attract viewers and make money isn't exactly an ideal, sometimes it's fake nature can be very obvious, but that's not to say it can't also succeed. But you and I both know that's the last thing you want to make anyway

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>> No.6100599

>>6100171
>My sister-in-law is writing her own kids book with kawaii dots for eyes faced icecream and food cartoons. It makes me want to vomit
You are either projecting or jealous that her drawings has more appeal and widely accepted by the majority of people compared to your drawings. Your bug eye faces makes me want to vomit but that wont make you stop drawing bug eyes
>>6099700
>Whenever i go to museums, i always think, this guy must have been really horny or he must have been paid a lot by some rich guy to make this religious fanart.
Or he must of been simply religious? I understand you are not religious and seething at religious artists who are better than you
>>6099406
>What do you want to draw anon? If you could draw ANYTHING and make 1000 drawings what would those drawings be of?
They would be of things that i love not to appeal to viewers who spends 1 second or less looking at it because thats how internet works. I can spend hours looking at my finished drawing that's what matters to me. If i love drawing bowls of fruit and feel accomplished why do you feel that is impacting you? Would you want others to draw gross art so you can feel belonging?

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>>6100603

>> No.6100617
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>POST WORK
>NO COMMENTS

oh im seething

>> No.6101015
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I'm just testing something

>> No.6101293

>>6101015
Never leave portions unfinished like that in the image. It'll feel so much more clean and professional to crop it at the bottom instead of leaving what's there. The same applies for when people only draw a portion of an arm but for some reason they leave the stumps in the drawing...

>> No.6101294
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Short cartoon I did to prepare for uploading my larger project.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vW7WIH7GyMk

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>>6098412
i did it

>> No.6101584
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6101584

after not drawing for months cuz of school I FINALLY finished this screenshot redraw. What do y'all think?

>> No.6101593

>>6101294
Cut that last 5 or so seconds of nothing out. It might seem like a little thing, but that was extra lag time ruins video replayability for some people and then it gets shared less. Great work, I laughed. It'd be fun if you uploaded more smaller things like this and have them relate to your project? It'd be good build up and im sure if you advertised yourself on other social media platforms you may get some good traffic. Your style is strong and impactful, all you need is some good advertising and you'd soar

>> No.6102002

>>6101349
stop tracing nigger
>>6101584
this is bad

>> No.6102061

>>6102002
jesus you faggots hold vendettas and cancel people over nothing worse than twittertards.

>> No.6102066

>reading a random manga
>has people playing instruments as two of the main character's talents
>pulls out violins
>they don't have chin rests
Never forget your violin chin rests anons

>> No.6102230

>>6095113
really like this one, keep it up

>> No.6102889

>>6102061
Noticing more and more of this shit on this board.

>> No.6102989

>>6102889
I guess summer is here. Big influx of bored speds with nothing better to do.

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6103022

>>6102989
well i think it's the same guy that always calls me out when i post lol, has been a thing for a while

anyway here's some butts, not very good at it but I try

>> No.6103126

>>6102002
>this is bad
thanks anon this really helps!

>> No.6103160

>>6080437
Love your drawings.

>> No.6103176

>>6097054
Needs 10% less saturation and it's good.

>> No.6103368

>>6103022
I love these butts thank you anon. You have a blog?

>> No.6103372

>>6103368
if u have to ask who I am, then u are too shit or stupid to learn it

>> No.6103403

>>6103368

wow okay... >>6103372 wasn't me please ignore this retard...

pantsu_ripper on twitter

>> No.6103404

>>6103403
>>6103372
stop fucking doing this, its embarrassing dude. You even typed the same.

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i went into this wanting to draw a puffy coat, but now im committed.

>> No.6103487

>>6103403
No worries I figured lol thanks!

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>>6103160
thank you !
>>6103176
i ended up fixing that in the final ver.
>>6101294
whens the big project dropping?

>> No.6103502

>>6103493
man I wish I was some good-for-nothing woman so I could get away with not knowing how to draw

>> No.6103514

>>6103493
Haha shape master

>> No.6103515

>>6103502
we've had this discussion before, blah blah blah youre in love with me blah blah post your work blah blah cope seethe etc etc.

>> No.6103520

>>6103515
Learn how to draw first, passing a few "stylized" shapes as a proper drawing just because you're a woman is just poor taste

>> No.6103526

>>6103520
pyw. I know i'm better than you, you're also clearly new here.

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>>6103526
Okay, woman.

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>>6103532
>>6103526
Look at my drawing and see how the shapes are all correct, and how they make sense, my lines are confident, and I am clearly better than you, anime loving woman with poor taste.

>> No.6103544

>>6103532
>>6103493
Jesus Christ.. you two deserve each other

>> No.6103549

>>6103520
Its a woman? Makes sense Tranny art is made either by women or troons.
>>6103526
Acting cold and confident will only get you so far when you suck.
>>6103540
Nit that good, but at the least you show respect for tze craft and have somewhere to be instead of drawing tranny emo stuff.

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>>6103544
I don't know how you could compare me with >>6103493 this shit.

>> No.6103553

>>6103540
You're both shit but you're worse.

>> No.6103554

>>6103493
>This is visually appealing for a simple style it is
>>6103532
>>6103540
>This is not
KEEEEEEEEEK me sides
Imagine drawing coom anime girls and still getting mogged by a simple cartoony artist spamming schizo tier art and a blondie.
G fucking G, schizo anon. Keep up the good work.
>anime loving woman with poor taste.
>says the one drawing moeblobs and coom
The gift that keeps on giving keeeeeek

>> No.6103562

>>6103552
watch out for her face proportions

>> No.6103569

>>6103493
are you really popular on twitter or something? why are you being targeted

>> No.6103570

>>6075902
Hope you get out of your rough financial situation that forces you to draw this crap.

>> No.6103573

>>6103022
>well i think it's the same guy that always calls me out when i post
I know exactly who it is, its the same retard who barely draws, crabs other artists and pretends to be them constantly.
He does it in almost every general.
Your work is very nice btw

>> No.6103574

>>6071971
Feet and hands need work, the rest looks very nice. Where can I see more of your shit?

>> No.6103583

>>6103532
>>6103540
>>6103552
holy shit.
>>6103549
really grasping for straws here, pyw.
>>6103569
I barely have over 1k, I have no idea. I barely even post here.

>> No.6103592

>>6103569
NTA but /ic/ likes to target artists, specially those with cartoon art styles, they have some sort of problem with SD styles and highly stylized proportions (or anything off the capeshit/weebshit grid actually) to the point they defend Esdeathfag-tier draws like >>6103552 only to not admit this people actually have promising works that deserve some credit along criticism
>t.
They also target me for the same reasons and Im literally nobody kek
>Verification not required

>> No.6103597

>>6103583
>pyw
What am I, insane? xd Also post that twitter, I think I saw it and it doesnt even have a hundred.

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>>6103597
Sure.

>> No.6103605

>>6103573
I bet it's the schizo poster desu...

who else would be that committed to shitting the board

>> No.6103625

>>6103552
>>6103526
>>6103532
>>6103540
top kek
either you're brilliant trolls or some of the hardest Dunning Krugers I've ever seen

desu you're both shit and don't deserve the ego you have

>> No.6103643

>>6103601
H
Weird, I remember another one with your art. Anyways, technical stuff aside, I genuinely hate your art and I feel like thats a very good thing.

>> No.6103718

>>6103583
>over 1 k with that skill level and barely posting

damn, I can see why anon is seething. I also wish I could be a women when posting on social media then immediately turn back into a man but thats the breaks I guess. Some genders just get a free pass on things.

>> No.6103773

what's up with nodraws always trying to start drama in generals

>> No.6103802

>>6103773
Too retarded to learn drawing, eternal seething and coping from not being able to create their own fap material or earn any patreonbuxx, so they go on imageboards to take their anger out on anyone who's more successful than themselves.

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>>6103493
>whens the big project dropping?
It's actually finished, doing some smaller animations for a little bit to drum up interest before I drop it though.

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>>6066726

>> No.6104200

>>6103718
This
the social media game would be SO easy if I just was a woman
don't have to post frequently, don't have to follow trends, don't have to even draw, just be a woman and have a ton of suckers slobbering after you
goddamn how easy would it be

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>>6103718
>>6104200
At one second we have
>reeee w*men
And at the other one we have
>whaa w*men
Incels are weird, man

>> No.6104685

New thread
>>6104681
>>6104681
>>6104681

>> No.6105172

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