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5240706 No.5240706 [Reply] [Original]

Hey guys, my name is gay toledo jones and I feel that you all should critique more art on the fucking board. You all just sit there stroking your fag cocks over and over again without giving meaninful critique. Please kill yourselves and give me my critique you daft assholes.
>>5239713

>> No.5240714

>>5240706
Only straight men will reply to this thread.
Because gays have no sense of direction.

>> No.5240716

>>5240706
>>5240714
take your meds

>> No.5240718

>>5240716
take your Truvada

>> No.5240722

I'm saying this with genuine intention, read Loomis.

>> No.5240734

Try doing this pose infront of a mirror and see the difference.

>> No.5240736

>>5240734
to be fair, you can do it if you're possessed

>> No.5240743

>>5240706
Not the worst I've seen, I'd say work on the Hands and foreshortening as well the Leg's, Men's Leg's tend to bow outward same with the feet, try doing the two minute figure drawing exercise that helped me a lot

>> No.5240787

>>5240706

stop chicken scratching and zoom out if it helps you to make more confident lines. Draw from the shoulder/elbow and try experimenting with your grip.
Villpu has the best course for beginners imo. He teaches how to convey forms of the body in space which you clearly cannot do. Proportion is another issue in this drawing; the neck doesn't connect to the head properly and the body looks disfigured in general. Again, Vilppu's course/book is an excellent material for human anatomy. The figure looks like it's floating in space, and don't even get me started on the hands.
Your main issue is probably conveying form and perspective. Try to practice simplifying the body into boxes and ovals and try out gesture studies.