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Old Comic I never finished Anonymous Sun Feb 21 19:59:18 2021 No.5221860 [Reply] [Original]

Greetings, I worked on this around 3 years ago. Feel free to critique it

>>	Anonymous Sun Feb 21 20:00:19 2021 No.5221863 File: 1.17 MB, 3300x2550, PG1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Completely unfinished, and I didn't bother much with the writing. It was very fun though

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>>	Anonymous Sun Feb 21 20:10:43 2021 No.5221902 File: 807 KB, 1630x1972, 2MyCurse.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Kinda jumpy and hard to follow sometimes. Also started skipping panels

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>>	Anonymous Sun Feb 21 20:14:10 2021 No.5221915 File: 1.37 MB, 3300x2550, PG19.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Skipped all the fighting!

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>>	Anonymous Sun Feb 21 20:18:32 2021 No.5221934 File: 1.44 MB, 3300x2550, PG26.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Done

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 22 06:03:34 2021 No.5222683 pretty cool comic, man. I'm pretty amazed at how well you were able to show the MC's emotions and expressions through a helmet. Real cool. i like the animal companion as well, it's smugness can be felt.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 22 11:01:25 2021 No.5223092 despite some messy ballpoint pen art & panel to panel transitions being hard to read, I feel like you did a great job telling your story even without any dialogue. The overall atmosphere is great, Dark Souls kind of feel.

Anonymous Mon Feb 22 17:54:14 2021 No.5224002
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>>5222683
>>5223092

thanks for looking !

Yeah, I decided to focus on atmosphere/simplicity and not stress over fuck-ups. Red cape black helmet, simple enough. Cat is my own, so he's always around for reference.

Most other attempts for comics or animation are too frustrating for me. Something serene about a project with no expectations.

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 22 17:56:39 2021 No.5224008 >>5223092 Also Dark Souls was a huge influence. & Unico

>>	Anonymous Mon Feb 22 18:04:17 2021 No.5224021 >>5224008 I could feel the influence. Nice. You should make more stuff.

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