Sexual Alternative Art / Stylization Thread

[Anonymous No.5213632]

Previous thread: >>5188656

>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

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>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
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>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.5213634]

aaaaahhhhhhh im gonnna coooom

[Anonymous No.5213635]

If you dont coom to this post your mom is going to die tonight

[Anonymous No.5213644]

>>5213632
nice coomer art, anon

[Anonymous No.5213737]

i've redrafted this bottom panel like 100 times and just can't seem to get it right

[Anonymous No.5213745]

[Anonymous No.5213747]

>>5213745
this is visually offensive

[Anonymous No.5213749]

>>5213745
this is visually defensive

[Anonymous No.5213757]

>>5213737
maybe this instead

[Anonymous No.5213775]

>>5213745
impressive that we still can tell which character is it

[Anonymous No.5213776]

>>5213632
op is pretty cute and funny

[Anonymous No.5213871]

>>5213737
>>5213757
asparagus dick

[Anonymous No.5213878]

>>5213632
Why her nose is going sideways?

[Anonymous No.5214069]

>>5213745
Did someone pay you to draw this?
I really hope someone paid you to draw this

[Anonymous No.5214082]

Something im working on

[Anonymous No.5214092]

>>5214069
Yes, it is a commission.

[Anonymous No.5214116]

>>5213745
I thought you weren't allowed to post NSFW stuff on twitter....can someone explain this?

[Anonymous No.5214130]

>>5213737

[Anonymous No.5214132]

>>5214116
you arent but twitter saw what happened to tumblr when it took a hard stance on it so they just let it slide as long as it's not in your pf pic or banner

[Anonymous No.5214142]

>>5214116
no idea why you thot this. twitter has both nsfw markings for tweets and nsfw setting for a profile. why on earth would it have them if they weren't allowed?

[Anonymous No.5214147]

>>5213745
how do people find this sexy

[Anonymous No.5214157]

>>5214147
>how dare other people have a taste different from mine

[Anonymous No.5214158]

>>5213745
Wish you spent as much time studying faces as you did cock.

[Anonymous No.5214178]

>>5214132
>>5214142
cool thanks for clearing things up.

[Anonymous No.5214180]

>>5213745
Pork has entirely rotted the mind of whoever made this.

[Anonymous No.5214182]

>>5213878
>>5213632
You find a problem with her nose and not her two left feet?

[Anonymous No.5214189]

>>5214180
come om baby, don't be hating

[Anonymous No.5214201]

>>5214130
not sure what's going on there but I dig it

[Anonymous No.5214209]

Good morning anons!
I have this oldy sketch i want to polish an make it digital; can you help me out with the observations?
Like how to place right or better the boobs and nipple, improve shading distribution and arms placing or adding details thats gives more charm\lewd

[Anonymous No.5214237]

>>5214209
Yeah, delete it

[Anonymous No.5214241]

>>5213632
how does a joint work down there irl?

[Anonymous No.5214296]

>>5213745
you're sick anon, really, look for profesional help

[Anonymous No.5214304]

>>5214296
If buff futa Misty makes you think me sick, you should take a look at this :D

[Anonymous No.5214558]

>>5214304
Did you buy bots?

[Anonymous No.5214579]

>>5214558
What?

[Anonymous No.5214665]

>>5214237
Not a chance, anon

[Anonymous No.5214669]

>>5213745
You're going places kid.

[Anonymous No.5214783]

>>5214304
Honestly? Buff futa misty is worse. This is just something completely alien that doesn't even register as remotely sexual, while buff futa misty is an absolute uncanny valley abomination of vague childhood memories and random, mismatched porn drawings.

[Anonymous No.5214797]

>>5214783
Its just /d/ porn, not a big deal

[Anonymous No.5214869]

>>5214130
very cute

[Anonymous No.5214903]

[Anonymous No.5214913]

>>5214903
i imagined the popping noises as minecraft blocks popping

[Anonymous No.5215035]

be afraid

[Anonymous No.5215043]

loaded

[Anonymous No.5215049]

assman

[Anonymous No.5215995]

I wish I could sleep.

[Anonymous No.5216013]

>>5215995
same bro. shit sucks ass

[Anonymous No.5216034]

>>5215995
turn off your damn smartphone idiot

[Anonymous No.5216057]

>>5214157
>this is """taste"""" and not an absolute sexual degeneration

[Anonymous No.5216116]

>>5216057
true

[Anonymous No.5216458]

>>5213632
How the fuck he got 20k followers with this level? Twitter is such a joke.

[Anonymous No.5216597]

Been a while since I've posted anything because I was unable to think of anything to draw and was depressed because of it.
I think I'm gonna draw more pregnant baphomets because it's what I'm best at.

[Anonymous No.5216601]

>>5216597
Alternative colors.

[Anonymous No.5216656]

>>5216601
First one better

[Anonymous No.5216732]

look what i shat out right now!1

[Anonymous No.5217639]

>>5213745
>>5214082
High effort, low skill.
>>5214130
Awful subject.

This thread sucks

[Anonymous No.5217647]

>>5214797
am I the single one disappointed in /d/? I love /ic/ and /a/. You would think that combining them and coomer would create a board of appreciation for good hentai art. Instead what I find is stuff more close to /co/ porn but draw in anime style.

[Anonymous No.5217667]

Posting progress (ignore chibi one on the right)

Sketched preview on the nipples, does it looks good enough?

[Anonymous No.5217781]

[Anonymous No.5217864]

[Anonymous No.5217875]

>>5217639
go back to drawing flapjack titties on twitter

[Anonymous No.5217894]

>>5217639
When you aint got no skill, all you can do it sup in a lot of effort.

[Anonymous No.5217903]

>>5214130
AGHHHHHHH IM GONNA COOOOM

[Anonymous No.5218056]

[Anonymous No.5218241]

>>5217639
low skill and terrible subject, are you projecting your own bullshit onto other people, granny-goblin fucker?

[Anonymous No.5218405]

>>5216597
>>5216601
I like how you did the hair

[Anonymous No.5218420]

>>5217667
what is the closest to her left boob, her hand or elbow?

[Anonymous No.5218576]

>>5213632
cute underboob

[Anonymous No.5218590]

>>5217781
>>5217864
nose here, youre improving. youver always been good but at least now it isnt aggressive anymore.

[Anonymous No.5218618]

>>5218590
you quote gains goblin, retard.

[Anonymous No.5218873]

>>5218420
supposedly her elbow
i've had a hard time trying to make her left hand look decent; that hand is suppose to be somewhat suspended on air, not actually touching her left boob

[Anonymous No.5218877]

critique please

[Anonymous No.5219030]

>>5218873
I think this is one of those cursed poses that look weird even in photos.

[Anonymous No.5219307]

>>5218877
with this style i dont know how many of the errors you made are intentional

[Anonymous No.5219309]

[Anonymous No.5219406]

Ive been choking a lot recently (request with crazy proportions)

[Anonymous No.5219410]

>>5219406
hate how this has some appeal

[Anonymous No.5219413]

>>5219410
me too my manz... me too...

[Anonymous No.5219419]

>>5218877
hot

[Anonymous No.5219473]

>>5219309
like this, although the face is a bit uncanny...

[Anonymous No.5219654]

I want to draw a explicit pose but isn't coming out in the way I want, at this point I should seek other people art with that pose

[Anonymous No.5219797]

think disney would sue if someone sold i shit ton of DID art? keke

[Anonymous No.5219892]

glad tsflipp's shit hasn't been posted
tsflipp, please, do a flip.

[Anonymous No.5220317]

my first comic, should i make it my last?

[Anonymous No.5220319]

>>5220317
page 2

[Anonymous No.5220703]

>>5213632
why do people have a fasnicating with ass-to-mouth? i don't care if it's a cute girl, i'm not putting my mouth on anything that's been in her asshole.

god i wish women didn't poop.

[Anonymous No.5220761]

>>5220703
afraid of a little poo and moist air, you poor baby...

[Anonymous No.5220853]

>>5220317
yes

[Anonymous No.5221129]

Any thoughts before I move on to the next stage??

[Anonymous No.5221243]

tranny's everywhere.

[Anonymous No.5221379]

>>5218241
Post your work

[Anonymous No.5221620]

>>5221129

[Anonymous No.5221797]

How okay is this for being a pretty unplanned scribble without reference?

[Anonymous No.5221853]

>>5213632
what brush is this
aaah i love the linework

[Anonymous No.5222030]

>>5218877
legs don't work like that

[Anonymous No.5222071]

>>5218877
that leg anatomy is shit. rest of the pic looks good though. just improve the lower anatomy next time because it looks her pelvis in a different perspective

[Anonymous No.5222406]

Wip

[Anonymous No.5222408]

>>5221620
The face is cute and I like how you render skin, but I don't think that dick is attached to the body right

[Anonymous No.5222482]

[Anonymous No.5222543]

>>5222071
>>5222030
which part of the legs specifically?

[Anonymous No.5222584]

>>5221797
blog?

[Anonymous No.5222586]

>>5220317
>>5220319
No. I belive in you shotachad

[Anonymous No.5222686]

[Anonymous No.5222688]

>>5222584
Dont have one

[Anonymous No.5222978]

>>5218590
dude, their faces are still 80% of their head

[Anonymous No.5223434]

>>5222408
whoops

[Anonymous No.5223440]

>>5223434

[Anonymous No.5223452]

>>5218056
This is what happens when you don’t think about gesture and shape design.

[Anonymous No.5223461]

>>5218056
finish it

[Anonymous No.5223478]

>>5220703
>why do people have a fasnicating with ass-to-mouth?
freud stuff I guess

[Anonymous No.5223482]

>>5223440
Jesus christ.

[Anonymous No.5223689]

>>5213632
>>5213737
>>5214130
>>5217667
hot

[Anonymous No.5224097]

any ideas before I continue?
I’m trying to do the greyscale to color thing
it’s supposed to be some goblin oc
not sure how I feel about the breasts, I tried to make them feel like they’re big and sandwiched on all sides so they’re bulging up, but they just kinda look like balloons

[Anonymous No.5224106]

>>5214130
nice

[Anonymous No.5224113]

>>5224097
The boobs look like theyre not connected to the skin on the ribcage. Also, why is her torso so insanely short? Even if she's supposed to be kind of crunched up, it just looks wrong.

[Anonymous No.5224117]

>>5223440
>>5223434

Pecs are crooked. As a form of reference have them be parallel to the shoulders, so if one shoulder is raised so should the responding pec/tit.

[Anonymous No.5224118]

>>5224113
that’s why I specified it’s a goblin
also, I imagined the breasts folding in at the top, basically spilling over straight down
I’ll se if I can figure out how to indicate it better

[Anonymous No.5224144]

>>5224097
Not how hips and legs work

[Anonymous No.5224152]

>>5224144
pyh

[Anonymous No.5224163]

>>5224144
you wanna redline it or something?
“not how it works” tells me nothing

[Anonymous No.5224164]

>>5224097
you should really look at some references to avoid guessing how things look and polishing a turd.

[Anonymous No.5224165]

>>5224163
lol wtf. look at IRL.

[Anonymous No.5224169]

>>5224164
m8, I have no idea what you’re referring to, just redline it
>polishing
it’s a monochrome sketch

[Anonymous No.5224175]

>>5224165
look at what irl?

[Anonymous No.5224188]

>>5224169
>>5224175
holy shit get off your high horse and kys. Don't come asking for critique if you can't handle it. There are so many drawings here that get ignored and you should be more thankful that people actually care enough to help.

[Anonymous No.5224191]

>>5224188
wat
I’m asking what’s wrong, saying shit sucks is not a critique

[Anonymous No.5224246]

>>5224118
Even goblins don't have their vagina set where their navel should be. Trace out where the ribcage and hips are in that drawing and tell me nothing is wrong.

[Anonymous No.5224281]

>>5224246
this is what I’m seeing

[Anonymous No.5224282]

>>5220317
>>5220319
Stop drawing pedophilia, you are going to get cancelled sooner or later because of it.
Don't be a dumbass.

[Anonymous No.5224284]

>>5224281
Yes, exactly. There is no/not enough spine between them.

[Anonymous No.5224288]

>>5220317
>>5220319
If your goal is to become a nsfw artist and maybe make a living of it, then stop drawing pedophilia. Sooner or later you are going to get cancelled because of it.
Don't be a dumbass.

[Anonymous No.5224289]

>>5220319
How the fuck is that a normal response to that shit
If I was a big sister and I found my snot nosed kid brother stealing my underwear I would beat the shit out of him, not shove panties in his mouth.

She is a pedophile and you are a pedophile. Stop now and never draw this shit again.

[Anonymous No.5224293]

>>5224284
I don’t understand, are you saying the ref is different? looks even tighter to me

[Anonymous No.5224308]

>>5214130
MILK!
MILK!
MILK!
MILK!

[Anonymous No.5224311]

>>5224281
there's literally no torso, dude. her hips are connecting literally to her rib cage. what people are trying to tell you is that you need to use a fucking reference from the angle you're trying to do because this looks fucking wonk as hell. boobs dont squish like that. those look like they're made of solid fucking material. even if shes scrunched up, she's gonna have a torso. your perspective is also fucked. you've got like three different angles going and none of them work together. you clearly have an understanding of light and shadow, but you can't just polish something and expect the underlying problems to work out.

[Anonymous No.5224314]

>>5224289
any normal person would react that way, anon is just a stupid pedo coomer.

[Anonymous No.5224315]

>>5214209
Right leg messed up, shading is a bit all over the place, other than that it is nice, good luck.

[Anonymous No.5224318]

>>5216597
>abs
Patrician

[Anonymous No.5224347]

>>5224311
look, are the proportions wrong for a human or for the reference I already provided?
because I’m not going to fuck with the dude’s oc when I have no clue what it’s modelled after or what he thinks is hot about it
the thing’s a sexualised anime midget, and the proportions seem to be holding up on my end as far as the reference is concerned, and that’s extent of my personal investment into it

as for the rest, I can’t read your mind, please redline it so I can understand what it is you’re seeing, it literally takes less time than typing all that

[Anonymous No.5224441]

>>5224097
I like the subject matter, a lot, but to business: care to post some construction sketches?
From what I can see you got some problems establishing the pose.
Anons are confused(and therefore angry), because they don't know where ribcage is.
If you can't point out where ribcage is or how the spine goes exactly (from base of head to top of hips) as in you can easily draw it, then regular viewer is probably even less capable of doing so.

That's besides the shape(lessness) of her feet. And fingers not following the shape of her calves.

[Anonymous No.5224509]

>>5221853
>what brush is this
literally hard round brush

[Anonymous No.5224552]

>>5223461
i'm working on sketching the entire comic before i start lines

[Anonymous No.5224575]

will someone please tell diathorn to stop drawing horses

[Anonymous No.5224724]

>>5224169
>>5224175
Notus the thighs go outwards from the pelvis/hip.
>>5224097
on yours the thighs/whole leg is parallel to the body.

The joint/axis rotation is off.

[Anonymous No.5224726]

>>5224281
>>5224347
I painted over a bit to try and understand the posing- then i redlined it to show the issues.

The breasts wouldn't lay like that at that size,even if you were trying to 'squish' them, they'd fall back into her face, so I adjusted the rendering on them. I also added some of the apparent pudge, but the legs are covering it to some extent

also her ass was like. wildly uneven, and her leg was dislocated on the left side. Her head placement is also really weird- assume in an effort to keep it between her legs for viewing, but at this angle it'd be partially covered by her dislocated leg.

I didn't want to completely redraw it, so i hope this helps.

[Anonymous No.5224766]

And sometimes I wonder why I do what I do.

[Anonymous No.5224901]

>>5222543
try to make that pose yourself

[Anonymous No.5225316]

Sometimes is better ignore anatomy and just simbol drawing

[Anonymous No.5225442]

>>5214130

[Anonymous No.5225468]

[Anonymous No.5225482]

>>5213745
Putting everything else aside, awful tonal/line tangent on the weiner tip and knee. Ugly simplification of the lower legs

[Anonymous No.5225487]

>>5225468
Saved

[Anonymous No.5225491]

>>5219309
Legitimately good.

[Anonymous No.5225533]

>>5225468
why are you wasting your talent by pandering to pedos?

[Anonymous No.5225538]

>>5217639
Blog?

[Anonymous No.5225815]

>>5225533
the only person thinking about children here is you. get help

[Anonymous No.5226085]

When painting/shading boobs from the front that are pressed together, what color do you make the cleavage line? Seems like no matter what color I make it it just looks weird. Should I fade it out in the middle and fade it back in at the top and bottom?

[Anonymous No.5226246]

>>5225533
pedophilia is based

[Anonymous No.5226263]

>>5225533
Did you just assume her age?

She could be 19 or 20
Line art cannot tell her age alone
PEDOS are BASED

One lives a few blocks from me and is a rather nice dude

[Anonymous No.5226329]

i literally couldn't draw for shit until i realized im mindblind and started using silhouettes and color carving. now im a jerk and everybody loves me

[Anonymous No.5226446]

>>5226246
>pedophilia is based
>>5226263
>PEDOS are BASED
>One lives a few blocks from me and is a rather nice dude

Seek professional help.

[Anonymous No.5226452]

Whew the signature and the hoof are on different planes. Gotta love that skill.

[Anonymous No.5226508]

Thoughts? It's for the Lisa Mania event:
https://files.catbox.moe/2ohw1u.png

[Anonymous No.5226528]

>>5226508
>https://files.catbox.moe/2ohw1u.png
Kys, sick piece of shit.

[Anonymous No.5226541]

>>5226508
Sneed

[Anonymous No.5226547]

>>5226508
Needs more suck and fuck, perhaps even some feed and seed in the future

[Anonymous No.5226664]

This came out kinda poopoo but I'm still happy with it

[Anonymous No.5226685]

>>5225442
>symbol drawing pussy

[Anonymous No.5226689]

>>5226528
Why did this get deleted?
>>5226508
I like it but needs more sneeds

[Anonymous No.5226720]

All critique welcomed. suggestions for the face/head especially because I've redrawn it like 20 times

[Anonymous No.5226758]

>>5226720
No immediate critique. I love it. Blog?

[Anonymous No.5226760]

>>5223440
I beg of you use real Japanese instead of this braindead romaji shit. Ideally get someone who actually speaks the language and not google translate. The second bubble is so mangled it's barely intelligible.

[Anonymous No.5226777]

>>5223440
>>5226760
>gomen'nasai
>anata o

It hurts.

[Anonymous No.5226951]

>>5226720
face is decent, it's stylized well, eyes are really well done, only issue I could find was the lack of definition for the jaw

the major issue I saw was with the shoulders and arms
her right shoulder was too close to the neck which was squishing all the anatomy too close together resulting in the pecs becoming almost none existent, remember that breasts sit on top of the pectoral
moving the right shoulder out a little also reveals her right arm is a bit too large

her left arm is way out of line as a result of the shoulder as well, in order for the hand to reach the groin in that position the shoulder needs to push forward and the arm would press against the breast as the arm becomes relatively straight in this position
I moved the breast to the side, but I suppose you could show the arm going over the breast and squishing it down if you wanted something like that
her left hand was a little too large aswell and there would need to be slight foreshortening on the forearm

overall relatively minor mistakes on an otherwise decent drawing, would like to see more from you in the future, blog?

[Anonymous No.5227132]

>>5226951

Oh wow thank you so much, the upper body was driving me nuts and I couldn't pin-point exactly why. I'm @Escapegoatery on twit but I'm inconsistent quality/post frequency wise no lie

[Anonymous No.5227229]

>>5225533
What did he mean by this

[Anonymous No.5227707]

>>5213745
Is that the main guy?

[Anonymous No.5227724]

I had a mild stroke while doing the painting.
Next piece I'll take it step by step and actually plan out my lights and colors

[Anonymous No.5227726]

>>5226777
This raises the question, why? It's clearly not meant to be legible to actual Japanese people, nor to English speakers. So why not either write it in full English or Japanese? Is this just stage 15 weeaboo brainrot? The desire to write it in Japanese but the absolute laziness and inability to either learn the basics of the language or use DeepL or something?

Mystery.

[Anonymous No.5227768]

>>5225442

[Anonymous No.5227810]

>>5221620
I’m not really one to give advice, but I think the dick needs to be facing down. As it doesn’t seem to be attached to the body.

[Anonymous No.5228046]

>>5221620
i think from this angle the dick would be facing down like >>5227810 said, and further back on the pelvis (try obscuring part of it with the viewer's right leg). i don't think you should be able to see the balls. i also think the left leg looks detached/out of plane with the pelvis. i like the skin rendering so far though, noice

>>5226452
is this yours anon? i like how soft and sensual your forms are. sexy

[Anonymous No.5228095]

>>5227810
>>5228046
>t. never saw a dick
have sex, betties

[Anonymous No.5228124]

>>5227768
the lines are too thick, doesn't mix well with the rendering you're going for (which looks pretty good so far)

[Anonymous No.5228130]

TIME TO COOM

[Anonymous No.5228150]

>>5221797
<3

[Anonymous No.5228262]

>>5227810
Wasting your talent there fixing up trash.
Son't listen to the guy who posted the art, you penis placement is way better.

[Anonymous No.5228269]

>>5228150
d-does that mean it's good?

[Anonymous No.5228297]

This is still unfinished, but I wanted to ask a general opinion on what people think of my colours, like the actual tones and vibrance. An irl friend is always commenting that my colours are both too dark and too muted. I don't know if they have a point, or if they just have shit taste. It's easy to get caught up making the same mistakes over and over without intervention or guidance, so how would you choose to colour this?

>>5228046
>is this yours anon? i like how soft and sensual your forms are. sexy

Yes, thank you! Are you doing Shoto Todoroki?

[Anonymous No.5228338]

>>5228297
The skin feels pretty muted. Why not use the reds and bounced light to add some more lively colors into it? Or look at pictures of people with that skin tone and figure out where the vartiations should be. Either way, it would benefit from some warm tones, you know?

[Anonymous No.5228358]

[Anonymous No.5228364]

>>5226452
Looks like something that would get 2.1k likes on twitter.

[Anonymous No.5228397]

>>5228338
My line of thinking was that the skin should be more muted to provide a hard contrast between the reds of the clothing and hair, but I'm not sure what to think anymore. I'll tweak it to a red hue and see how it looks, ty.

I need to read that fucking dinosaur book already.

>>5228364
36 likes woooooo :')))

[Anonymous No.5228451]

>>5228397
Damn, that's all? Twitter is dumb :/

[Anonymous No.5228473]

>>5213632
damn this is hot. I wanna stick things in hot girl

[Anonymous No.5228488]

>>5228358
That's cute but you need to size up your canvas. Its blurry

[Anonymous No.5228509]

Any tips on drawing fur? Line art and colour. I'm looking at refs but having a hard time breaking down what I'm seeing. Do I treat it like really bitty hair?

[Anonymous No.5228518]

>>5228451
ngl I would like more attention, but I'm terrible at marketing myself, and sometimes I think my art looks more arty than it does coomy.

[Anonymous No.5228537]

>>5228518
Honestly, I feel that too. I wish I knew how to market as well, I know my art is good but I'm really lacking when it comes to getting attention for it. From what I've seen though you're one hell of an nsfw artist, so dont worry about that.

[Anonymous No.5228638]

Would this be better?

[Anonymous No.5229000]

>>5228358
>Pico R34
Honestly I can't believe it's taken me this long to encounter any

[Anonymous No.5229027]

>>5214092
How much, out of curiosity?

[Anonymous No.5229028]

How you draw latex?

[Anonymous No.5229059]

>>5229028
The easiest way to learn it is by just studying it. I know that sounds like a shit explaination but that's how it is.

I remember there was some image of a material study with a bunch of spheres covered in latex and ranging in shininess that could be helpful for you but I don't have it anymore, and am having trouble finding it...

[Anonymous No.5229069]

>>5229059
There are thread on /s/ but not sure if they are good for study

[Anonymous No.5229077]

>>5228638
yea the dick placement looks a lot better, gj anon

[Anonymous No.5229093]

>>5229069
You can search google or pinterest for latex / pvc clothing and get a lot of good reference for studies. I don't go on /s/ but if it's fap material chances are the lighting is going to be shit.

[Anonymous No.5229128]

>>5229000
Trips, falls, there has to be some flashes with sandra getting plowed, right? It is newgrounds.

[Anonymous No.5229158]

>>5229128
I've been searching for it, theres nothing. I've been making a bunch of casandra porn partly because theres literally none

[Anonymous No.5229165]

>>5229000
I cant believe the game is literally older than ME and theres hardly anything of it.

[Anonymous No.5229215]

Please don't hurt me, but where do you actually sell your commissions?

[Anonymous No.5229317]

used reference, had to make up the head

[Anonymous No.5229320]

>>5224097
I zoomed all the way to the butthole lol

[Anonymous No.5229345]

>>5229317
this reminds me of that 420 art utuber i forgot the name

[Anonymous No.5229383]

>>5229345
who?

[Anonymous No.5229385]

>>5218056
yeah do more gesture, shit looks kinda static
still pretty good tho

[Anonymous No.5229569]

>>5226452
I think the leg is bent a little too much and the closer titty should be a bit bigger cuz of the perspective, otherwise i'm 'mirin

[Anonymous No.5229570]

Slime.

[Anonymous No.5229574]

>>5228509
U treat it like big clumps and the gradient of value on the outer edges of a fur object is shorter because the fur strands on the edge in aggregate are more perpendicular to the viewer

[Anonymous No.5229622]

would appreciate some critique and help, please

[Anonymous No.5229668]

>>5227724
The foreshortening on the knife arm is kinda bad

[Anonymous No.5229709]

>>5229570
Fuck this one is pissing me off. Must’ve redrawn the woman three times. Good night.

[Anonymous No.5229738]

>>5229709
Boobs feel stiff

[Anonymous No.5229760]

>>5229317
I know you used Emily Lynne's ass.

[Anonymous No.5229773]

>>5229028
The shinier a surface, the hard the shadows. Also, learn how to color.

[Anonymous No.5229774]

>>5229622
The main issue is her left leg as (given its supposed to be foreshortened) it needs to be shorter. Also her pose suggests that the horizon line is low but the dude she's bouncing on is angled to suggest the horizon line is high.
I also noticed a tangent between her face and bangs.
also also, stop being a pussy and draw the hands.

[Anonymous No.5229779]

>>5229774
here's just the red line if its hard to tell whats going on

[Anonymous No.5229797]

>>5229779
>>5229774
Teach yourself to draw before telling others how to draw. Holy smokes. You get an 'E' for effort though.

[Anonymous No.5229822]

>>5229797
pyw nigger
i will admit that i shouldnt use a texture brush

[Anonymous No.5229856]

>>5229570
Fixed some things I think illl ink this tomorrow

[Anonymous No.5229859]

>>5229570
Think I’ll ink this tomorrow

[Anonymous No.5229862]

>>5229822
>hurrr durrr pyw
he's right, moron

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5229873]

>>5229822
I'm >>5229797
If you're good it doesn't matter what brush you use. It's not about a magic brush, it's about having a solid understanding of at least the basics, which you do not have. You're shit, and if you're going to redline someone, put in more effort than that and make a study out of it.

>>5229622
Here you go. I dropped some tips, but the most important thing for you to focus on is your construction, anatomy, and proportions. Understanding some simple perspective will help you a lot. Loomis' Figure Drawing For All It's Worth is a good start, and Perspective Made Easy by Earnest R. Norling is as well. you can find these in the Artbook Thread.
Best of luck.

[Anonymous No.5229893]

>>5229873
this is garbage

[Anonymous No.5229912]

>>5229873
Hey, Marmalade Mum, two questions:
1. What learning/studying resources (courses, books, etc.) do you recommend?
2. Why "Marmalade" Mum and not "Jam" Mum? I haven't seen you draw any citrus-y characters yet.

[Anonymous No.5229914]

NIGGER!!!

[Anonymous No.5229938]

>>5229862
either he posts his work to prove he's not a retard or he replies with actual constructive feedback instead of being a crab

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5229939]

>>5229912
I've read most of the stuff in the Beginner Essentials Mega link in the artbook thread that has to do with perspective, figure drawing, gesture, construction and coloring. Except for Hogarth, his stuff just didn't click with me.
If I had to say there were a few that stood out to me, those would be, Michael Mattesi's Force, James Gurney's Color and Light, Loomis' Figure Drawing Made Easy, Scott Robertson's How To Render, and Ernest Norling's Perspective Made Easy. Making connections you see in those books with real life things is key to learning how to draw and applying those things you're noticing helps you improve a lot.
I personally have enrolled in a couple of online courses too that have greatly improved my anatomy, but I wouldn't recommend it unless you know you're gonna make your money back with your art and that you're serious about learning.

As for my name, I just went onto XBox gamertag generator and picked the first one with alliteration.

[Anonymous No.5229941]

[Anonymous No.5229962]

>>5229939
Thanks for the answers

[Anonymous No.5229963]

>>5229773
How do you color?

[Anonymous No.5229995]

>>5229893
Don't be salty, little beg.

[Anonymous No.5230006]

>>5229995
This thread is called /salt/ are you new here?

[Anonymous No.5230034]

Dunno what to do with her hands

[Anonymous No.5230041]

>>5230034
Have her finger tips peaking out from under the meat of her boobs so it looks like she's squeezing them together.

[Anonymous No.5230049]

>>5230006
Just because an idiot is pushing a bad meme, that doesn't make it good.

[Anonymous No.5230126]

>>5229873
Thank you mum, i will check those. To be honest i can't comprehend construction (i am that dumb) so hopefully loomis helps.

[Anonymous No.5230274]

>>5230126
Construction is just an extension of form, anatomy and movement. Study those and good construction will come naturally.

[Anonymous No.5230328]

>>5230274
Which resources do you recommend for those? I started with hampton for figure drawing because i can't understand loomis very well.

[Anonymous No.5230342]

>>5230328
I always say Loomis/Hampton for basic construction, Hogarth for anatomy, Bridgman for more stylistic, gestural figure drawing, and Vilppu for form.

This all varies from person to person mind. I've seen a lot of people praise Force by Mattesi, but I've not read it myself yet.

[Anonymous No.5230391]

>>5229873
nice, but what a shitty tits holly shit

[Anonymous No.5230579]

[Anonymous No.5230583]

>>5229873
actually good critique.
You get a lot of shit for no reason.

[Anonymous No.5230589]

>>5226452
I really like the face with the veil thingy

[Anonymous No.5230602]

>>5228297
the text is weird, but the drawing seems planned around it because of the pose

who is that character? she's cute
i think the brown skin does well over the green, but if you want it to be more vibrant id go with the green

do you do requests? i would like to see the bishoujo freddy design in your style

[Anonymous No.5230605]

>>5229738
Bags of sand, right?

[Anonymous No.5230621]

did a portrait in charcoal

[Anonymous No.5230630]

>>5230621
arms are fucked
shoulders look like shit
hair looks like shit
nose is fucked
mouth is fucked
neck is fucked
didnt even show booba

get good

[Anonymous No.5230631]

here's a new one I made :)

[Anonymous No.5230632]

>>5230630
So you like the eyes?

[Anonymous No.5230633]

>>5230631
deviant art tier

[Anonymous No.5230635]

>>5230632
yeah the eyes are alright I guess

[Anonymous No.5230647]

>>5230633
>>5230630
At least you guys get feedback.

[Anonymous No.5230651]

>>5230647
that was even feedback I was just bashing on them for the things I didn't like

[Anonymous No.5230653]

>>5230621
that girl used to beat me up behind the school

[Anonymous No.5230666]

>>5230653
lucky

[Anonymous No.5230688]

>>5229859
don't bother its shit

[Anonymous No.5230691]

>>5229938
he doesn't need to prove you nothing, your red line is worst than the original drawing, you can give feedback if you don't know how to draw yourself.

[Anonymous No.5230710]

>>5230691
>you can give feedback if you don't know how to draw yourself.
So what's the problem?

[Anonymous No.5230792]

i wish i drew more non-furries so i had more to post here

[Anonymous No.5230800]

>>5229709
Anon, try to push the whole pose forward or backward - don't draw the pair in the middle of the swing. And when you are doing cartoony or otherwise simplified drawing you should almost always exaggerate the movements.

[Anonymous No.5231264]

>>5217667
i like it but why is she wearing flesh shoes

[Anonymous No.5231386]

I started drawing digitaly today.
What do you guys think?

[Anonymous No.5231449]

>>5231386
it's not very good

[Anonymous No.5231495]

>>5228297
What the hell were you thinking when you drew that left leg? Perspective is NOT your friend whatsoever, and it's clearly evident on the leg that has no natural bend to it, and how the stomach makes that thing look like it's a size two. And what about that neckline? Tell me, can you answer how is that right hand holding that round tail, is possible without the tail bending at the pinky? Hold out your hand and do the exact same pose. It does work. You were better off folding the pinky inward towards the palm.Can you not SEE depth in your work? Your real life friend is a. being really nice to you in telling you that your colors are your problem or b. your friend knows about the mistakes you drew and kept their mouth shut or c. neither of you know what the hell you're doing. Fix those mistakes, christ.
>>5229873
Okay so, in your "analysis", the guy is laying down. What is she propping herself up on, according to your "study"? Look at where you put her left arm; is there some magical force of air holding her up? Why are you conveying motion at all, when you yourself wrote, that this is a stupid pose? Why wouldn't you start out with that information in the first place, why would you waste time like this? Why try to "red line" ANY of this, when you know it's wrong? You've had SIX years to get better, and you're still cranking out this garbage?

[Anonymous No.5231516]

>>5231386
Please, for the love of everything that's good and for the sake of your art, learn your fundamentals NOW, and please learn how to properly use your digital medium. There are SEVERAL examples in this thread alone, of how NOT to use this medium— when you have ABSOLUTELY no idea what you're doing:
>>5213632
>>5213737
>>5213745
>>5214130
>>5215049
>>5215995
>>5217667
>>5217781
>>5217864
>>5218877
>>5219797
Jesus, there are so many. Go back up and take a good long look at what a lot of these amateurs are doing, and do your very best NOT to fall into these same traps like they have. Some of these individuals have been drawing here for YEARS and they still haven't got it right. I implore you, please take an art class and learn your rooted fundamentals until they become second nature, your the sake of your work. You are getting into a line of art that people will CRUCIFY you, for not drawing correctly.
Heed my warning, or be doomed to end up just like them. Five years from now, people are going to be able to search your work online, and come back to this very moment in time, and show you, how you've wasted YEARS for absolutely nothing
Don't be a laughing stock.

[Anonymous No.5231532]

>>5231449
>>5231516
:(

[Anonymous No.5231534]

>>5230579
why are its tits testicles

[Anonymous No.5231546]

>>5231534
Thats where its babies come from you inconsiderate clown

[Anonymous No.5231561]

>>5231534
damn bro your testicles look like that??

now you gotta post them

[Anonymous No.5231646]

>>5231386
>IMMEDIATELY starts drawing coom
Seek help

[Anonymous No.5231651]

>>5231516
Seems like you're the only one who has a problem with those, crab.

[Anonymous No.5231692]

>>5231516
pyw right now

[Anonymous No.5231696]

>>5231386
i like it, its very good for a first digital work. There are some issues with construction form an proportions but its quite decent compared to some of the other work on this board. thanks for posting your work, i enjoyed seeing it

[Anonymous No.5231716]

>>5231651
They're all riddled with mistakes, so, you pointing out the fact that I have a problem with the works because of their glaring mistakes, is correct. I'm not the one crabbing over my work being pointed out because of its mistakes.
>>5231692
Ah yes, the ego's response when confronted with the honest truth. If I post nothing, then you ego wins—but the mistakes will remain in your work, for years to come. If I post someone else's work to show good porn quality, I still lose, you ego soars because I can't draw—but sadly, your work will still remain the same.
Here's something that will really get underneath your skin:
>Learn to draw better to shut me up
The ball's in your court now. Point out which one is yours, draw it better so you can prove me wrong.

Protip: You can't, and you won't. :)

[Anonymous No.5231723]

>>5231696
>but its quite decent compared to some of the other work on this board. thanks for posting your work, i enjoyed seeing it
You are so full of shit.

[Anonymous No.5231724]

i drew an ass

[Anonymous No.5231730]

>>5231716
oh god the autist is back. Don't you have anything better to do than stalk this board and be an ass?

[Anonymous No.5231746]

>>5231730
I see you didn't respond to my challenging your ego by posting better work. And of course, you answer in typical victim-like fashion.

>D-don't you...have anything b-better to do...than t-to stalk...t-this board and be an...a-a-ss?
It's not that hard, just post better work. What's the problem in that? :)

[Anonymous No.5231747]

>>5231746
post any work at all

[Anonymous No.5231761]

>>5231532
just keep drawing anon

[Anonymous No.5231781]

>>5231747
Gil Elvgren. Great pin up artist of his time AND he used real life references for his work. Why is this so hard for you all to comprehend?

[Anonymous No.5231794]

>>5214130
Looks cute
Blog?

[Anonymous No.5231805]

>>5231495
It's not just that you're salty, it's that you're so transparently salty about an artist who is way better than you with this weird sort of short answer essay you've created here.

[Anonymous No.5231813]

>>5231781
Show us your comprehension of his principles then,
or are you only capable of the theory aspect and none of the actual practice required to get to that point.

[Anonymous No.5231823]

>>5231781
>NOOOOOO A MANGA ARTIST SAID THE ONLY WAY TO MAKE IT IS GRIND BOXES FOR TEN YEARS AND LIVE IN A BOX AND NEVER LOOK AT ANYTHING AROUND ME AND DRAW EVERYTHING FROM IMAGINATION!!!

/ic, probably

[Anonymous No.5231828]

>>5231813
i only pop in once every month or so but to see you people posting shit like this because you want to fight online makes me glad that i hang out in internet spaces with more adults than teens

[Anonymous No.5231829]

>>5231805
That's called a response, one that elaborates on a point I made about how amateurs here need to work on their fundamentals to improve on their mistakes. See, back in say, oh, a year ago, people used to convey their arguments and point counter-arguments at length just like this, and they rarely went back and forth in one sentence replies. Now, this may be a thing for your generation, but for mine, we were taught better. Did they not show you how to do this in school? What were you learning?
Now, as for you mentioning my transparent saltiness about an artist who's better than me at DRAWING MISTAKES, I'm not going to argue that. You are correct. They have mistakes. But will they fix them? Probably not. Maybe, stop drawing mistakes? That's a start.

[Anonymous No.5231847]

>>5231813
Is that...a real wordy way to say, post my work? And why are you posting thug life glasses, are you trying to look cool? So to answer you sophisticated question, you mean, learning the fundamentals and putting them to use? Learning how to paint oil on canvas the way he used to, learning how to use his tools properly, learning basic anatomy and practicing for years before attempting any advertising work, or studying from great artists that inspired him like Charles Gibson? What's so hard to understand about that? Do you just want it to, magically happen?
>>5231823
I think that's what all of these amateurs are trying to do, draw porn from imagination. That's like asking a virgin for sex advice. haha :)

[Anonymous No.5231853]

>>5231724
that's a pretty nice ass, anon

[Anonymous No.5231888]

>>5231847
You didn't answer my question at all,
this doesn't show an understanding of how to do the work on your end in the slightest.
It's so perfectly autistic that I believed it was genuinely just someone who made their way onto the board, I can't believe I didn't see it before.

[Anonymous No.5231899]

>>5231847
>I think that's what all of these amateurs are trying to do, draw porn from imagination. That's like asking a virgin for sex advice. haha :)
It's pretty obvious with their clumsy attempts to draw vagina and the crotch region - if you've spent time around one, you get a better feel for the forms. Pun intended.
But to me it's a bunch of made up rules and standards made up by very autistic and OCD anons, who refuse to even consider anything outside of their pre-conceived ideas and fantasies of what art and learning to be an artist is.

And, it's not going to change, it's 4chan. The worst in /ic tend to be the hentai/waifu autists, which is why I generally don't interact with them, because it doesn't take that much to upset them, and nobody (who isn't autistic) has time for that.

[Anonymous No.5231911]

>>5231847
lol shut the fuck up fag

[Anonymous No.5231912]

>>5231888
I'm pretty sure I did, with working on fundamentals, so and so forth. Your ego just didn't want you to see the truth, you just want to be right. And like I mentioned before, your ego wins, I lose, but the fact still remains—your work still has mistakes, and you'll never change them nor will you prove me wrong by getting better.
Quite frankly. you don't even have the courage to show me what work is yours. Clearly I called it out, but your reluctance to stand by your work proves my point. You're embarrassed to say, hey look, this is my work. Your ego won't let you improve, I get it, your bubble is precious and who am I, to burst it for you. But I stand by my thoughts, because they are the truth when it comes to getting better at artwork; anyone with a 5th grade comprehension level can understand that.
And it's funny, someone who can't draw worth a damn can see your mistakes better than you do. I can't draw worth shit, but I have a better eye at drawing, than YOU do. That's gotta piss you off something FIERCE. :)

[Anonymous No.5231926]

>>5231899
>But to me it's a bunch of made up rules and standards made up by very autistic and OCD anons, who refuse to even consider anything outside of their pre-conceived ideas and fantasies of what art and learning to be an artist is.
Well said.
>>5231911
No. :)

[Anonymous No.5231932]

>>5231495
pyw

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5231941]

>>5231495
lol

[Anonymous No.5231998]

>>5231932
I know it's you replying Otamaw, Ormakaw, Owattawatta...whatever. You're just sugar tits to me. So, care to elaborate on the mistakes you made in your work? Have you anything to say about them? Or do you just like replying back to me because I'm the only other person on here with the balls to tell you that your work has mistakes? I see that you and Marmalade like to travel together...
>>5231941
Six years. I'm not even going to say anything to you because at this point, time has done ALL the work for me. You've had SIX years to improve, and you've done ABSOLUTELY nothing to do so. You are the LAST chick on here who should be giving advice, what with you losing 30K subscribers overnight and resorting to drawing that Resident Evil big tit broad for clicks. You, Gains Goblin and Lambrey are PERFECT /ic/ examples of NGMI, stagnant in your own cesspool, completely riddled with mistakes. I hope other amateurs here steer CLEAR of your advice, lest they end up like you, six god damn YEARS later, still drawing the same garbage, professing your self taught knowledge. haha
Believe me, it shows.
>>5229873
:)

[Anonymous No.5232052]

>>5231998
pyw tho

[Anonymous No.5232078]

>>5231495
>>5231516
>>5231781
>>5231998
>>5231912
Autism at its best lol.

[Anonymous No.5232101]

>>5231853
i bet your ass is better, sexy

[Anonymous No.5232243]

>>5231723
pyw or stfu retard crab

[Anonymous No.5232269]

>>5231516
oh can you do a redline please for my work, it's this one
>>5218877
you seem to be an expert so maybe you can help me see what I'm doing wrong

[Anonymous No.5232353]

wanted to do some practice reworking an old piece

>>5231998
the way you type make me think stalin was right

[Anonymous No.5232362]

>>5228509
Current WIP

[Anonymous No.5232364]

>>5232353
Why do all your figures have sausage bodies dude? you clearly understand muscle groups and perspective and yet you refuse to change the silhouettes of your male bodies.

You need to incorporate more shape language/negative space studies along with your regular regiment. It would immediately take your work to the next level

[Anonymous No.5232370]

>>5232364
do you have any recommendations for me to look at to get started? i'd be interested

[Anonymous No.5232414]

>>5232362
>those circle-tool areolas
kek

[Anonymous No.5232433]

>>5231998
>I know it's you replying Otamaw
Wat. I just came into this thread. >>5231932 was made at 08:27 PM GMT, when I was definitely unconscious. You think I'm sacrificing precious NEET snooze time to wake up at half eight in the morning so I can shitpost on /ic/?

>sugar tits
You're trying way too hard dude. If you want to fuck me, just come out and say it already.

[Anonymous No.5232447]

>>5231998
take your meds

[Anonymous No.5232505]

>>5232414
Yeah I need to fix those and the nipples and I'm still intending to add a dick and do a pantsless version. Gonna fiddle with colour for a bit though first.

[Anonymous No.5232600]

>>5232362
lopsided tittie

[Anonymous No.5232762]

>>5232364
oh dude his fucking understanding of male anatomy is fucking awful. like he understands the VERY basic fundies but holy fuck. all the femmy characters in his roster look like they're wearing diapers because he exaggerates the ass muscles so much.

[Anonymous No.5232832]

>>5232433
>tfw no big tiddy ortamommy gf

[Anonymous No.5232939]

new one :)

[Anonymous No.5232993]

>>5232939
the pelvis zone is broken

[Anonymous No.5233009]

>>5232052
Try learning how to draw better instead of worrying about me. The sooner you do that, the better you'll get.
>>5232078
I'm living in your head rent free now, but you still have mistakes in your work. Point your work out, stand by it and don't hide like a coward.
>>5232353
But, you're reworking an old piece for "practice" purposes, and how convenient that is AFTER I mentioned that if you improve on your work, maybe there's a chance that you can prove me wrong. Sadly, and still—four years later, your commitment to continue and follow your same mistakes, still shows. You spent FOUR years working on muscle structure that it's basically ALL you can draw now. Maybe the way YOU draw, makes me think I'm right.
>>5232433
You could, in all honesty, just stop replying to me altogether, but you're getting something from me that you desperately need; something that you're clearly not getting anywhere else: blunt, honest critique about your work.
Here's a tip, because despite the betas in here screeching at the top of their lungs about how autistic I am, I genuinely mean well with my honest critiques. That NEET lifestyle of yours isn't going to help you get any better at your art— despite the overwhelming opposition from artists whom have followed that path, and have accrued nothing for their efforts, except for large debt and probably living on ramen and water. The sooner you realize that NEET is not the way to be, the better you'll be off.
>If you want to fuck me, just come out and say it already.
I'll take that as a compliment. :)

[Anonymous No.5233018]

>>5232505
honestly you should just remove the tits all together. They look too fake/stiff and the placement is weird. and also twink>tranny :)

[Anonymous No.5233020]

>>5232269
Prove that it's you asking for some help and not some other kid LARPing as you, and I'll help you out with whatever I can.

[Anonymous No.5233105]

>>5233009
pyw

[Anonymous No.5233112]

>>5233105
pyw tho :)

[Anonymous No.5233152]

new >>5233146

[Anonymous No.5233381]

>>5233009
yes for practice purposes, cause i was looking through my older art and saw a bunch that i was sure i could improve on and thought it might be good practice, your comment was coincidental since no one had responded to my stuff in a few days