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Previous Thread: >>5171618

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.5201086

>>5201034

>> No.5201107

>>5201086
>>5175515

>> No.5201110

>>5201082
Who drew this?

>> No.5201112

>>5201107
petty

>> No.5201115

>>5201082
pissbaby

>> No.5201256

HAHAHAHA the other thread is fucking dead, long live the humans

>> No.5201299

>>5201110
My nigga nika

>> No.5201370
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5201370

are catgirls acceptable?

>> No.5201371
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5201371

What is he trying to tell us?

>> No.5201450

>>5201371
Ching Chong nip nong danny devito

>> No.5201491
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>>5201371
Even if I were fluent his stuff is a nightmare to read, but he likes breaking the rhythms of the body into criss-crossing lines so they make kind of diamond shapes.

>> No.5201501
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5201501

MS Paint drawing

>> No.5201567

>>5201501
listen here fuckface
this is great work, nice colours and cute character
i'm proud of you
do you want crits on anything?

>> No.5201573

>>5201567
thanks, motherfucker
tear it to shreds

>> No.5201626
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5201626

Check out my furry art

>> No.5201633

>>5201626
i cant see shit

>> No.5201638

>>5201626
are those nipple claws

>> No.5201644

>>5201626
>>5175515

>> No.5201652
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>>5201626
You should believe in your own thread, table :(

>> No.5201663

>>5201652
Cute slime.

>> No.5201708
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>>5201633
Maybe it will be one of those “it’ll look better when i color it” kind of things. Waiting for the ink to dry

>>5201638
Yes, i like nipples a lot

>>5201644
Too much hug box and productivity

>>5201652
It’s cool man - /alt/ is slowly dying, every thread feels like it could be our last. We should band together to post drawings and keep it alive. OP seems to care a lot more about it than I do, and I post like 15% of the drawings in /alt/...

>> No.5201711

>>5201626
Do you actually enjoy drawing this are you just doing to be different

>> No.5201734

>>5201652
Nah, let it die. The whole thread will just be nothing but arguments and shitposting because of how unapologetically furry the OP image is. I’m the guy who drew it and while I feel honoured that somebody liked it enough to think it deserves to be in the OP, it’s better if the subject matter is more neutral like the one for this thread.
Nika’s piece would have been my pick as well. Great artist.

>> No.5201739

>>5201501
Unironically, do you have a blog? I've seen your work on here before and I'd like to follow you.

>> No.5201749

>>5201711
tableguy seems to be one of the only people I follow that seems to be having fun

>> No.5201754

>>5201749
He's one of the people here that shit on anime

>> No.5201768

>>5201754
Half of his fanart is anime whatchu talkin bout

>> No.5201769

>>5201754
rightfully so

>> No.5201772

>>5201708
If you ever leave 4chan will you have a discord or something? I don't want you to disappear like teal or thdark!!!

>> No.5201777

>>5201772
>thdark
Holy fuck I remember that name from when I was a wee /beg/

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>>5201082
This'd be a cool fighting game character.

Anon if you're here, I've cleansed myself of weeb. Fuck you

Been updating any old drawings I find worth a polish as an exercise.

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>>5201711
Yea, i really liked inking it too. It felt nice and loose, it just kind of spilled out of me. I think the sketch was like 20 min and the ink was 20 min. It just seemed so obvious that it needed to be drawn.

>>5201749
I like drawing a lot, it makes me really grumpy when i have to do chores and can’t draw my brain worms.

>>5201754
It’s like you don’t even know me...

>>5201772
I was going to try discord this week, but had to do shit. Next week i think I’ll look into it. I also have to figure out how to use reddit. I’ve just been googling questions with + ‘reddit’ i don’t think thats how it works

>>5201777
I like thdark’s drawings, but following him is so frustrating. His posts are always so sad and depressed.

>> No.5201877

>>5201873
> I’ve just been googling questions with + ‘reddit’ i don’t think thats how it works
thats the only good way to use reddit lol

>> No.5201887

>>5201873
Why would you even go to reddit? They're even more normie than 4chan and twitter. They're not gonna like your rat cow hybrids any better.

>> No.5201888
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5201888

Imaginative anatomy and perspective practice

>> No.5201895 [DELETED] 

>>5201888
Oh shit trips

>> No.5201908

>>5201873
>His posts are always so sad and depressed.
Yeah I agree on that. He seems very unhappy with life and it makes me feel really bad for him. Said he stopped drawing for a while and now feels like he can't draw well anymore. I doubt that's actually the case though.

>> No.5201911

>>5201873
>I’ve just been googling questions with + ‘reddit’
that's how you use reddit, their search engine is shit, that on joining a sub and reading or creating threads

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>> No.5201977

>>5201082
It's kinda cool to see a child artist grow in real time. Keep going Nika.

>> No.5202044

>>5201739
Thank you, I appreciate it! Right now I'm posting one image a day because I have a ton of stuff I never uploaded anywhere.
https://twitter.com/giascle

>> No.5202059
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5202059

this was supposed to be a quick messy sketch, but it took longer than i wanted it to. I hate drawing guns, i guess it means that i should work on perspective

>>5201887
Part of me hopes that the discouragement will promote more wholesome content to spring from my brain

>>5201911
>>5201877
I hear lots of friends saying “did you see X on reddit? Did u read about Y on reddit?” I assume that means that they browse reddit and consume content in some other means than “todays news + reddit”

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5202149

i lurk here a bunch, figured i'd post somethin

>> No.5202151
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>>5202149
and a doodle i did of her today

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5202175

lil wip

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>>5201082
I wanted to test out a new sketch brush after class and turned it into a full illustration.
I feel like I've been too chunky with my inks lately and want to pull back a bit.

>> No.5202224

>>5202149
>>5202151
Are you the guy that draws that blue succubus and red imp?

>> No.5202235

>>5202184
Her head's frickin tiny, yo. It looks good otherwise, nice hair.

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5202276

Coloring is like pulling teeth for me, please give advice

>> No.5202305

>>5201082
damn nika is getting good

>> No.5202308

>>5202276
booba

>> No.5202337

Is asukafaggot alive

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>> No.5202493

>>5202337
Maybe he has turned to contemplation to make his own style decisions now.

>> No.5202498

>>5202044
Not trying to suck your cock or anything, but you're probably one of my favorite artists on the board. So much energy and warmth in your drawings. Are some of the animations traced, or is that all original stuff?

>> No.5202576

>>5202059
they use popular or all tab. also, change their design to old by typing old.reddit.com instead

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>>5202498
Oh goodness, I'm really flattered. The animations aren't traced, though some are heavily referenced, like the dance and this one especially.

>>5202480
Love the colors and brushwork, feels magical.

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5202793

>>5202480
big fan. is this done or are you still working on it?
>>5201501
MS PAINT CHAD

doodle, waiting on girlfriend.

>> No.5202841

>>5201299
Who is nika?

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5202853

wip
>>5201626
Still would
>>5201888
I know it's perspective/forshortening, but the effect is that he's just got short legs. IMO there should be more overlapping on his whole body
>>5201942
Reminds me of MonHun icon art
>>5202149
Not a fan of that grainy texture desu

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5202883

>>5202224
not sure who you're talking about, but that's not me, i mostly do sprite-like stuff
>>5202175
love the colours on this!
>>5202853
>grainy texture
was testing out a noisy filter thing, thought it was kinda neat for a glitchy effect

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5202894

i'm so fucking tired art bros

i don't like this feeling

>> No.5202965

>>5202841
My nigga

>> No.5202980

>>5202853
Yeah I musta redrew the legs like 10 times and that’s probably the best I could get them. Probably shoulda used a reference or construction but the exercise itself taught me a lot

>> No.5203181

>>5202853
>reminds me of MonHun icon art
Thanks! It was inspired by MH for sure, I'm a big sucker for the series and its aesthetic.

>> No.5203223

>>5202853
>>5202980
>>5203181
how is this even remotely monhun style

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5203238

Random side-character sketching, making shit up as I go.

>> No.5203373

>>5203238
looks like anime John Lennon

>> No.5203430

>>5202894
Really interesting style, I love the huge shadow under his hat. I think you should include some of that to the horse as well though because it doesn't feel like it's part of the same environment.

>> No.5203450

>>5202894
This is amazing!

>> No.5203501

>>5203223
Literally go play mhw and you'll see. If you never played then shut the fuck up and keep scrolling. Not the same person btw

>> No.5203503

>>5202276
The tits might be crooked
they should match the angle of the shoulders parallel

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>>5203373
*with facial hair included

>> No.5203517

>>5203501
lol wut, the only thing even near that style are their spin off games that has completely different gameplay, oh but no, you played mhw and now you know everything, fucking zoomers go kys retard

>> No.5203554
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5203554

>>5203223
ICON style anon
If he fit the character into a square and avoided overlapping the limbs it'd be much closer

>> No.5203555

>>5203554
>if

>> No.5203557

>>5203517
>i have no idea what im talking about
>let me double down harder because I played all of them except the one people were specifically talking about.

Take the L bro. Its an anonymous site, nobody will know it was you.

>> No.5203559

>>5203557
oh no, spinoff = mhw now, my fucking sides

>> No.5203586

Twitter has become too overbearingly homosexual for my tastes so I must return here to talk about and post art.
I've gotta say, I feel confident enough to post in these threads.

>> No.5203621

>>5203586
pyw

>> No.5203671

>>5203586
Nobody cares though. Go fucking draw instead of coming here to complain about the plight of being heterosexual.

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>>5203621

>> No.5203674

>>5203671
Cared enough to reply :)

>> No.5203693

>>5203673
soul

>> No.5203742

>>5203430
>>5203450

hey thanks. yeah I'll have to play with the light more, i think there's lots of opportunity to make this and pieces in this style more interesting, big shadows are neat

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>> No.5203761

Don’t know where to post this, poster work for some band

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>>5203761
Sorry forgot about the pic

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5204022

Can I get some crits on the face

>>5202480
God I love the style of your work. The texture and colors are so rich.
How do you get so much texture? That's something I wanna try exploring in my process too, but I don't have a good idea of how to go about it.
When I look at the stuff you post I notice a lot of variance in your brush sizes, and the strokes look layered on top of each other rather than the typical flat look I get from brushes.
Are you doing some kind of layer method too?

>> No.5204062

>>5203745
Love this
>>5203673
gonna make it
>>5203238
Work on your facial spacing, everything is there its just gotta be rearranged.(Eyes are less than half down the head, nose too high, ears are the right size but because of the eye placement appear too large, Glasses are too small and shifted to the right too much.) Also pull back on the hatching near the chin she's got a bit of a stubble.
>>5202175
Amazing
>>5201501
Wow that's good

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>> No.5204097

>>5202894
try exercising and eating better
stay hydrated
>>5203745
blog?

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5204100

Here's a question how do you guys go about making your work look refined not line work presenting your work

>> No.5204148

>>5204100
Not like that lol

>> No.5204157

>>5204148
Thats why I'm asking

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dumping, trying out something new and I really like it

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>>5204174

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>>5204178

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>>5204179

>> No.5204384

>>5202793
It's just a sketch, busy working on comic stuff to bust out finished illustrations sadly


>>5204022
everything's done on one layer, i had a background in ballpen hatching so I used a rectangle brush and chipped away at this like that.

Would make things really muddy however, but I like it.

After the initial painting, if things look dull still i just slap an overlay on top

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5204457

I need some help with the perspective.

Can someone help me figure out the correct placement for the feet?

>> No.5204467

>>5204457
Tfw you slip 6 discs in your lower back

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5204615

Carter Goodrich inspired

>> No.5204618
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>>5204615
some other stuff

>> No.5204628

>>5203745
blog me fampai loving those shapes

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>> No.5204655

>>5204631
Fucking soul. This is legit my goal in drawing, to get good enough to be able to doodle like this.

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>> No.5204832

>>5204655
>get good enough to doodle
Just fucking doodle then lol.

Doodling is meant to be a fun activity, you're making it some big thing in your head.
Causally doodling is a great way to practice drawing.

>> No.5204851

>>5204062
>>5204097
>>5204628
Thank you! It's https://twitter.com/xztzl But I just started using it and I haven't posted anything yet.

>> No.5204865

>>5204631
blog?

>> No.5205001

>>5204174
>>5204178
>>5204179
>>5204180
soul

>> No.5205119

>>5203763
I have nothing to add. Very good!

>> No.5205196

>>5204832
Oh, what I meant was I want to doodle at *that level*, not just in general. :p To do it and have it still look that good obviously requires a huge amount of skill and internalized knowledge. Apart from that yeah, you are absolutely right - thanks for the advice, I actually do have been neglecting that casual side of drawing lately!

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>> No.5205263

>>5205256
Far eye is being flattened too much

>> No.5205300

>>5205256
lips too kissable, beard too full and heathy. this is the work of the gay agenda
post you blog/twitter so I know what degenerate to avoid

>> No.5205337

>>5205256
if only men looked like this irl

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5205361

I don't post there much but I want to improve my style as well as improving my fundies. Based on my current style as of now, what are some artists you would recommend for character designs?

I am a big fan of 90s Capcom works, Everything designed by Akihiko Yoshida, N64 era Zelda games, classic Shonen manga like Rurouni Kenshin and Fullmetal Alchemist and Old School D&D. I am also a big fan of Moebius, Druillet, Otomo, etc. but i'd rather use the influences of these for mechanical, clothery/armor and enviroment design rather than how the characters themselves looks like. I am also a degenerate furfag and for diving into my other artstyle for coom I want to start studying the art of Dr.Comet and Sindoll/Cervina.

>> No.5205392

>>5205361
Seriously, just work on your fundies before worrying yourself with stylistic concerns.

>> No.5205436

>>5205392
I am already studying my fundies and besides just focusing on that without moments of fun is boring.

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>>5205001

thanks matey

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>> No.5205838

>>5205619
what are your influences familia

>> No.5205865

>>5205791
Nice! What program do u use?

>> No.5205880

>>5205865
thanks, I use PS

>> No.5206143

>>5205838

honestly as far as this work is concerned i don't even know. I've messed with pixel art a little bit in the past and had fun but I've never done anything like this before and I haven't really consumed much work that looks like this.

>> No.5206153

>>5206143
Reminds me of old cyberpunk/industrial art. Kind of cool to see pieces like this made without the artist consuming anything like it. Anyways, reminds me of this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVMiFfdcKJM

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Variation of lordoreos oc

>> No.5206718

>>5204066
HITOSHI-SAAAAAAAAAAAAN

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>> No.5206782

>>5204174
>>5204178
>>5204179
>>5204180
do you have a social? I want to follow you

>> No.5206881

>>5206782

@living.void on insta

>> No.5206886

>>5206781
I thought you were homeless?

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>> No.5207316

>>5204618

Based RENO911 Poster!

>> No.5207416
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do re miau fa so la ti do:)

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Stylization cuz I don't know how to draw

>> No.5208620
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YOU’RE PERFECT SNOW BOIIIII

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I feel like it is missing something, but I don't know if that something is just color or if I should add anything to the lines before coloring.

>> No.5208802

>>5208620
I love you tablelad

>> No.5208946
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5208946

Give some advice and critique please

>> No.5208955

>>5208705
The space behind and left of the girl feels empty. Have you tried adding one of those barnacles there?

>> No.5209005

>>5208955
Agreed, you could also try some other stuff like garbage containers, pipes or random trash if it fits the environment you had in mind too.

>> No.5209281

>>5208705
also what is she looking at? the interesting environmental detail is behind her

>> No.5209306

>>5209281
She’s supposed to be looking up, but maybe that isn’t clear enough. Thanks for noting that.

>>5209005
>>5208955
Oh I like these. It’s supposed to be like a super abandoned tunnel type area, but surely there would have been something dropped or left in the area from before.

>> No.5209324

>>5209306
nah i think it's clear she's looking up, it's just that the ceiling directly above her is blank, and i was expecting some details like the wires in the background

>> No.5209336

>>5209324
Got it! I think I see what you mean now. I’ll add some more of those wires to the front then. Thanks for the input, anons. Extra eyes help so much.

>> No.5209528

>>5208946
Lain! this is perfect, blog?

>> No.5209568

>>5208946
Don't be aftaid to make the dark values a lot darker

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>>5203238
After drawing trans anime John Lennon the other night, I attempted to hopefully redeem myself a bit with a better sketch...

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>> No.5209945

>>5208612
This is really cool, though yeah it's kinda clear you're hiding your lack of fundamentals. Keep working on your construction and anatomy, and they will only enhance your interesting use of texture and color.

>>5208640
Nice colors and rendering, but something's strange about her proportions. Her hips/butt are too high up so her torso and thighs are very short, and with her crotch sticking out that much it looks like she has a bulge. I'd just move her butt down and that would solve the biggest issue.

>>5208946
You have the tiniest hint of blues in there, I would emphasize those more so the browns have something to pop off of. Right now there's a bit too much variation to be monochrome but not enough to have the contrast it should.

>>5209647
Your rendering is quite nice, the problem is your choices of stylization I think. She has an enormous forehead and big, detailed eyes which are fitting of anime, but a realistic nose and lips and face shape. They clash quite a lot, I'd suggest bringing her forehead down and de-poofing the hair and that might solve a lot of it.

>> No.5210063

>>5208946
ur twitter ?

>> No.5210079
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>>5208620
This game is amazing. The animals were blowing loads of confetti in my face all day yesterday. How does Nintendo get away with such debauchery? The imagery is so perverse.

I tried something new with the ink and markers. Hatching is not my cup of tea...

>>5208802
Did u make it into the circle yesterday?

>> No.5210229

>>5210079
Make a tablechad discord

>> No.5210236

>>5210079
Not that guy but I made it to the circle, so I am /ic/ elite.

>> No.5210433

>>5210079
>>5210236
What is this circle we speak of?
How do you get in?

>> No.5210470

>>5210433
tableguy’s circlejerk. We wear pink on wednesdays

>> No.5210502

>>5210433
Don't, they're people chosen to become cow human hybrids.

>> No.5210627

>>5210502
Like I said, how do you get in?

>> No.5210979

>>5209528
>>5210063
Thanks! I haven't been on twitter for a while, so my pixiv is more up-to-date right now.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/33530133
https://twitter.com/kornod1

>> No.5211245

>>5205619
Nagel vibes

>> No.5211353

>>5208946
I'm pretty sure TV screens should emit light.

>> No.5211354

>>5209927
Holyy shit this is cool!

>> No.5211446
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Critiques?

>> No.5211488
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>>5211446
Looks nice, but it's still like a messy sketch. The thumbnail is pretty good and the pose is fun to look at, the face could have more expression tho.

>>5209927
pretty solid and good shapes, nice

>>5208946
the odd/abandoned place vibes on this are just like the official lain arts

>>5205619
never saw use of pixel art like that before, really interesting aesthetic
Made a Fio. I'm done with this one, but critique can make the next pieces better. I think I should have made these tentacles thinier.

>> No.5212146
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5212146

Daily comic warmup

>>5210229
I’m too scared to run a server, I’ve had discord for <12hrs

>>5210433
>>5210236
>>5210627
You don’t want to be in the circle, it’s full of /ic/ losers

>>5210470
A man of taste

>> No.5212169

>>5212146
don't just let her walk all over you, man.
Can't build a relationship on constantly shitting on each other.

>> No.5212176

>>5207122
now we're talkin

>> No.5212178

>>5212146
Why do you let your wife talk to you like that? Pretty pathetic.

>> No.5212203

>>5212169
>>5212178
Being unable to separate comics from real life is a symptom of high to mid functioning autism

>> No.5212249

>>5212169
>>5212178
>Not being able to bant with your loved ones
Sad.

>> No.5212306

>>5212146
Someone leak tableguy’s discord channel

>> No.5212336
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>>5202853
slow progress, trying to focus hard on the expressions
>>5202980
Don't worry about it anon, as long as you learned something from it
>>5211488
real cute, love that gun

>> No.5212339

>>5212336
UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CUNNY

>> No.5212349
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5212349

Do you guys know any video courses/books that teach how to draw appealing 90's-00's style cartoons? Just like in pic related.

>> No.5212363

>>5212349
Unironically just get real retarded with it. Forget about symmetry, aim for irregularity and grind gesture hard. Forget about proper proportions. I’m serious, 100% gesture and just getting retarded

>> No.5212474

>>5212146
Going by your comics, you portray yourself to be on the receiving end of her crap. Is she the breadwinner? Why do you put up with this?

>> No.5212523
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A WIP.

>> No.5212531

>>5212349
wasn't the artist who worked on that cartoon drawing cp?

>> No.5212556

>>5212531
That was Rebecca Sugar, the kike that created Stephen Universe. Drew a ton of racist crap as well. She was never involved with Ed Eddie N Eddy.

>> No.5212561

>>5212556

Hes thinking of the black gay dude that worked under of Rebecca that spoke up about that girl who got bullied on tumblr over how she drew a character from the show but when he started making a rucus people immediately exposed him for drawing ed edd & eddy porn years ago. Hes a prime example of why you shouldnt be a gay black pedophile.

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>>5212349
Though I agree with >>5212363
I drew pic related in 7-10 mniutes thinking about random cartoons I grew up watching/aesthetics I liked in my head. yeah it's sloppy, but I didn't overthink it
You need to understand going with the flow. Do not just go crazy, observe reality and exaggerate, develop a strong imagination for yourself. Many kids shows from the 90s-2000s like Hey Arnold, Ed Edd n Eddy, Kids next Door, Dexter's Lab, Buzz on Maggie, El Tigre, Spongebob, My Life as a Teenage Robot, were made by artists who are more on the cartoonist side rather than the auteurs of anime with joints and pelvises you see in idealized dolls. Learn how to freehand draw, don't over perfect the art, learn how to draw without erasing a lot, I recommend having a sketchbook with pen drawings only. if the drawing doesn't work then do it again. And again and again

These guys aren't overthinking, they learn and they flow.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GEklyiK0qWU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFXZlOIVNN8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnVy8rWr5hI

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Does this read so far?

>> No.5212686
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Does this read so far? Reuploading a smaller image

>> No.5212693

>>5212686
Relying a lot on lines. Pick a light source and push your values.

>> No.5212739

>>5212146
are those characters based on you and your wife? if so, is your wife really ok with being portrayed like this?

>> No.5212833
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5212833

Just finished this, help

>> No.5212835

>>5212523

Cool!! you can improve the mechanism and shape design if you visit the mechanical design thread, look it upp

>> No.5212847

>>5212833
>filename
I remember you posting in the draw threads when I first started grinding here! Cool you still lurk. Pic looks great only comment is light source from under the hat seems like it would overpower ambient and reflected light more, I feel pic is more keyed for ambient direct light from hat thing would be more blown out

>> No.5212853

>>5212847
*more keyed for ambient light, direct light from hat etc

>> No.5213079

>>5212833
Bitchen

>> No.5213220
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>>5202059
Ink done

>>5212203
She called me autistic today, we also think the neighbors don’t like us because we are both potentially autistic.

>>5212169
>>5212178
>>5212474
> Is she the breadwinner?
Yes, I was the breadwinner for 10yrs and treated her like shit, so now we are even. We’ve known each other for over 15yrs, so i think the relationship development phase is over...

>>5212739
She said it was endearing, but that i should draw more of me antagonizing her first. It’s just not as funny to bully her.

>>5212833
This is really cool man

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>>5213220
I’m like super into nuns with guns now, Should the crosses be ornate or future mechanical?

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>>5213418
Give us that D&G bling bling.

>> No.5213666

>>5212686

Lookin good! Careful with making the eye too symbol drawingy

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Thoughts?

>> No.5214385

>>5213893
The tree is nice. The girl is bland and boring. Remove her and picture will get much better.

>> No.5214455

>>5212203
don't call me autistic

>> No.5214502

>>5214455
Stop acting like you are then

>> No.5214563

>>5214502
maybe I will

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>>5213220
Man finally finished this one, I colored gwen second, it took me the entire widow to remember what I was doing for the coloring

>> No.5215292
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Got a free hatching tutorial from some discord anon. Will try again, arm is kind of tired now...

>> No.5215319

>>5215292
What Discord server did you end up joining? I feel like I'm in a server for everything except art.

>> No.5215482
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Wife says these don’t accurately reflect what actually transpires

>>5215319
The cool guys and gals server. It’s like an /ic/ lite with IDs. It’s nice to see people drawing and posting. But seems like most of the time there is just chatting going on.

>> No.5215780

>>5215482
>But seems like most of the time there is just chatting going on.
Shit, that's why I haven't joined any art focused servers. They seem like hangouts for people who like art, which I can just find in any of the servers I'm currently in. I want something where sure, you can chat, but you gotta be drawing.

>> No.5215833

>>5215482
>But seems like most of the time there is just chatting going on.
What kind of chatting? Is it stupid meme shitposting like most servers?

>> No.5216201

>>5209647
cool, reminds me of some 80's anime

>> No.5216415
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I can’t play the beta T_T

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>> No.5216871

>>5209647
Looks like my mom 30 years ago

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>> No.5216951

>>5216950
B(OO)BA

>> No.5216955
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>>5215482
Did you know that cumboogers are real? I mean it makes sense, when mucus dries out it would make a booger. The more you know...

>>5215780
> you gotta be drawing
I don’t know enough about discord to know how you would maintain it. The channels are nice because they are dedicated to just drawings and discussion about drawings. But there is too much shit, and I’m too lazy to scroll back and read it. Then when i want to see people drawing it’s like dead silent. /ic/ is nice because you can resurrect an old post and reply to it from like a week ago, discord moves too fast, and I am too old to keep up.

>>5215833
The drawing discussion is really nice, but i forgot that people like chatting casually. I was reading some other channel and it dawned on me that people spend all day chatting about games, school stuff, and tv which means they probably aren’t drawing that much

>> No.5216965

>>5216955
I cannot interact with this post because my boyfriend follows me on Twitter and we haven’t dated long enough for me to be my true self yet, but BOOGA.

>> No.5216980

>>5216955
Thanks I’m gay now

>> No.5217088

>>5216781
HNNNNNNNGGHHH
blog?????
i love this

>> No.5217156

>>5217088
@talkingmeadow on twitter, ty!

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>>5205669
>>5206385
>>5208640
>>5211488
>>5216781
very nice

>>5208946
>>5212833
you're way above the level where i can help, sorry

>> No.5217210

>>5217156
>>5216781
Huh, I assumed you were another guy from /ic/.
He usually does lain and haibane renmei art in a similar style

>> No.5217213
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>>5213418
She has a mug shot now.

>>5213480
I’m going to try, it is going to be a pain in the ass. I’ve been procrastinating inking all day

>>5216980
That’s not news

>>5216965
best wishes that one day you can pick a cumbooger from your crotch and put it in his face and he will love you and make a comic about it for an anonymous Korean basket weaving forum

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>>5216955
>cumbooger
See a doctor.

>> No.5217257

>>5216965
BE MY GF

>> No.5217297

>>5217257
cringe

>> No.5217378
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5217378

Even though this is a sketch, I would love to hear thoughts. This is a deep thought redesign of the Dragon Ball cast, where what if Akira Toriyama was 13 years younger ,grew up in America, and made DB around the late 90s early 2000s with the same sensibilities as a saturday morning cartoon/sci fi comic strip

>> No.5217415

>>5216955
discharge booger?
wtf

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>> No.5217434

>>5217378
unoriginal and overdone to hell and back

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>>5217213
This is straight up some Trinity Blood shit

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i don't know if i should make the hair shinier

>> No.5217571

>>5217566
sans undertale

>> No.5217574

>>5201626
Nice work, tableguy

>> No.5217602

>>5216415
I’m sorry you’re missing out on the Beta! Your Ky Dragon Install is great though. It looks a little muddy, but I think it adds to the feel.

>> No.5217603

>>5216955
As a vagina haver, you’re either desperately trying to be funny or she needs a fucking doctor NOW

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>>5216955

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>>5203763
This is amazing.
>>5204022
Practice drawing faces geometrically.
>>5205669
I love dragonball.
>>5206385
I see you.
>>5208595
Looks like you spent alot of time working on this.
>>5216781
Amazing setting.
>>5217566
Black Rock Shooter?

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They float

>> No.5217907

>>5217378
I'd like to see them finished

>> No.5218017
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>>5217213
600dpi scan.. Finally finished this fucking marathon of an ink. I took it slow as suggested and it took me all night. It’s a little wonky and chicken scratchy, I’ve yet to master the hatching technique and making detailed greebles. Will need more practice with more nuns

>>5217217
>>5217415
>>5217603
>>5217633
It’s fine, the picture was exaggerated for comic effect

>>5217540
What is trinity blood? Is it good?

>>5217574
Fuck i forgot that i need to color that crab still

>> No.5218062

>>5218017
>What is trinity blood? Is it good?
Fathers and nuns using big ass weapons to kill vampires. It's anime cheese.

>> No.5218112

>>5218017
awesome

>> No.5218255

>>5212561
You have it completely backwards, Sugar drew the gay EEnE porn, the black guy was her BF.

>> No.5218273

>>5217602
Thanks, been playing Xrd in the meantime. Yeah I like playing with color lately it’s easy to mud things up

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Drew some kid's Pokémon OC. Thoughts?

>> No.5218665
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5218665

ignore the empty bits

>> No.5218667

>>5218665
blog?

>> No.5218680

>>5211446
arm in back, wrong direction!

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>> No.5218876

>>5218865
this is incredible, gib blog pls

>> No.5218880
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Does this drawing look weird/boring so far?
Any advice if so?

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5218881

critique if you please

>> No.5218897

>>5218876
thank you, I usually use twitter at pentaerythrit0l

>> No.5218909

>>5218865
Looks cute
Blog?

>> No.5218920

>>5218880
Is that some king of gynoid brothel?

>> No.5218944

>>5218920

Like a female android brothel led by a guy?
Naww, it's just some collage of characters so far.

>> No.5219037

>>5218881
I apologize, this is /alt/ and that is beginner material. Please post over at /beg/ or else you'll be heavily ridiculed

>> No.5219076

>>5219037
ive been drawing for a long while

>> No.5219091
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5219091

what can I do better?

>> No.5219116

>>5219091
From the looks of it, everything. Stop tracing 3d models, there are no short cuts to learning how to draw, and if you don't believe me just remember you drew proof right there. Learn perspective then pick up a book or two on figure drawing.

>> No.5219134

>>5219116
anything helpful to say?

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>>5219076
ok, but you'll be heavily ridiculed, so as nice as possible
>Arms lack volume, the arm to shoulder ratio on the right is nonexistant
>Nose and eyes are off center
>Mouth isn't centered, I know the character's mouth is drawn correctly, but the mouth still looks off
>Those legs aren't even interacting with the hoodie, implying that the right leg isn't even the same size as the left
>Shoes look like socks, even though this is top down perspective, based on the design, the shoes are bigger and have space
If I go on longer, I'll become more mean

>> No.5219149

>>5219141
i asked for a critique, not for you to be my friend. continue.

>> No.5219151

>>5219091

The face looks worse than the body, I think because it lacks dimension compared. Tweaking the style of and sense of depth in the eyes could make a big difference, like I think the lighting you have for the eyes might be making them look matte instead of glossy right now.

Also the perspective in the background is way off. I think because it's implying the vanishing point is at the very top right of the image, way past the canvas.

I like the character design though. Also I think the rendering of the kimono is the strongest point, has this nice silky look to it, especially at the right sleeve there.

>> No.5219161

>>5219151
Thanks. I struggle adding detail to a stylized face more then the rest of the anatomy, I will practice that as well as perspective.
Originally planned to have no background but wanted to try more then that.

>> No.5219177

>>5219161

Well, it's a good thing you had the background there either way. It's something you need to practice with and get feedback on, you'll be a lot further ahead in a year practicing your layout skills vs. doing floating characters. Study perspective more and keep it up anon.

>> No.5219225

>>5218665
what's your twitter? let's be frens

>> No.5219245
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>>5219149
Ok so I had to look at the character as well as search up a bunch of image references to get what you're trying to get down. I know its wonky some places, but the key placement is there
The character is stocky in the legs, and has exaggerated feet
>In a shorter and close perspective like yours, we would barely see her ankles because she isn't very tall nor as thin in the hips like you drew her, as her legs look more lanky in your drawing

The only way you'd see her ankles is if the top down perspective was more spread out, however, the hoodie around the waist covers alot more than you may like. The character is designed to have bangs that cover the eyebrows, meaning you can't see them at that angle unless the wind was blowing a bunch. I know you were doing the whole "cute feet going inward thing" but if that was the case then the ankles would be more pronounced, so I didn't bother

>> No.5220122
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5220122

i don't really know what i was thinking while drawing this.

>> No.5220123

>>5220122
this really puts the american healthcare system into perspective, powerful

>> No.5220126

>>5220122
Looks like Tableguy has some competition for who's making the most grotesque art here

>> No.5220131

>>5202480
your twitter posts so cringey

>> No.5220340
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>> No.5220517

>>5212833
Blog?

>> No.5220718
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5220718

Trying something new

>> No.5220815

>>5220517
File name

>> No.5221197
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5221197

Hey sorry not sure if I should post here or /beg/ but I was wondering if I could get advice on which style looks the best?

>> No.5221309
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>> No.5221313

>>5221197
I really like two and four. Maybe you could give the nose you gave to 5 to number 4?

>> No.5221360

>>5221313
Thank you so much, any other advice you can give, trying to learn and get as much critiques as possible

>> No.5221365

>>5221313
shit taste

>> No.5221438

>>5221309
blog??

>> No.5221480

>>5221438
>>5217156

>> No.5221549
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5221549

>>5220340
I think as a whole the figure works really well, I've just got a small nitpicky thing for the legs. I think generally the legs don't pinch in at the knees quite like how you've drawn it here. Because the sartorius and gracilis wrap around and insert just below the knee, there's usually a bulging form that sort of blends together with the vastus medialis muscle on the inside of the knee. You sort of have the bulges already present in your drawing, they're just too far up the leg (or don't go down far enough). In my redline I've maybe made the bulge a little too large, but I hope what I mean makes sense. Let me know what you think

>> No.5221685

>>5221549
Aww, thanks man! Everything makes sense and I think it looks much better with your redline. I'll try to redraw it using your picture when I'll have some free time. Thanks again for help!

>> No.5221898
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5221898

value study of my character Nova

>> No.5221967
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5221967

>>5216415
Can’t draw Ky without drawing Sol

>> No.5221979

>>5221898
Where is your light source? This feels slightly pillowshaded.

>> No.5221985

>>5221967
SOUL

>> No.5222025
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5222025

experiments

>> No.5222113

>>5222025
Nice variation, I think you should play with ears though because they're all basically the same.

>> No.5222168

>>5222113
Thanks.

>> No.5222179
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5222179

I like just drawing all my stuff in lines like this but feel like Ill never become anyone as an artist if I don't colour everything

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>>5222222
faggot ass art wasted your digits

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>>5222222
tranny ass soi boi art. no hard edges, everything is soft like vaseline, soft pastels to make people feel calm, ugly twitter tier humanoid subject matter boring xi ass composition, always some dumb gynoid smiling bust. nintendo switch having ass mother fucker drew this. dumb ass faggot shit. this art isnt just bad its terrible. wasted those digits with this ugly shit. what the fuck were you think you dumb bitch?

>> No.5222249

>>5222179
Is that pencil? So clean, what brand?

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5222251

>>5222227
>>5222238

>> No.5222258

>>5222249
just one of the default graphite pencils in photoshop

>> No.5222287

>>5222258
The Photoshop default brushes are actually so good in the 2021 CC. It ALMOST made me consider paying for Photoshop. Almost. I had to redraw something that was originally drawn in real pencil with the pencil brush, and you wouldn't have noticed unless you were zoomed in at 1000%.

>> No.5222405

>>5222179
You'll probably want some background for proper contrast. The drawing itself is very good.

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5222834

drew this in in th early morning.

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>>5221979

The lightsource looks like it's coming from the right. I don't think you know what pillowshading is dude.

>> No.5223018

>>5222834
this is the good shit

>> No.5223357

>>5221979
>pillowshaded.
is this a faggot twitter term

>> No.5223381

>>5223357
One google search would've easily told you it's a term that's been around for at least the 00s.

>> No.5223410
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5223410

>>5223381
>pillowshaded
probably some deviant art tranny shit in that case

>> No.5223573

>>5201082
Please stay alive
>>5223572
>>5223572
>>5223572

>> No.5223992

>>5222834
wow, what is this?