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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.

Use this thread instead of making new threads or post in the Drawthread with fundamental exercises.

POST DRAWINGS YOU NEED HELP WITH.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS using one of the following methods:
1. screenshot the image and post that instead
2. change camera capture settings to something smaller
3. send to computer and resize in picresize.com

Sticky document:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

Take your time, you can do it!
Previous thread: >>5189268

>> No.5191854
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What pen Steve uses to make this dark and white tones on the gray paper for sketching?

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>>5191849

>> No.5191885
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I am pretty new to drawing still, I read betty edwards all the way through and did a few exercises and that's it. I have experience doodling really stupid shit but I never really tried to actually get good at real art.

This is a failure I did of trying to try a figure from reference, I think the got to proportion right but I don't understand how to draw all the muscles, shading, shadows, etc in-between. Everything gets all muddy and I can't figure out the proportion between abstract objects like shadows and other dark spots.

I ended up giving up.

Not sure what I should be studying right now, I got pretty frustrated. I wonder if I am trying to do stuff that is way beyond my level.

>> No.5191887
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5191887

How do I digitally paint?
Is there a basic tip I'm missing?

>> No.5191927

Reposting because I do actually need the help
>>5189808
>>5190851
Specially with f*et. Anyone have resources with nice block-outs? How do I make them look feminine?

>> No.5191946

>>5191885
post the photo ref so we can compare with you

>> No.5191960

>>5191946

Fuck I downloaded it off one of those random pose generators and I deleted it. Now I can't find it.

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>>5191946
>>5191960

Oh wait no sweet I found it on deviant art

>> No.5191969

>>5191962

God fucking dammit nevermind that almost looks the same but it's not it. Whatever I dont have the ref

>> No.5191972

>>5191960
>>5191962
>>5191969
Such a nice saga

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>>5191242
2.5 MONTHS?
HAHAHAHAHA
>>5191305
No its not
>>5191541
Are you looking down on me? calling me pathetic?
>>5191590
All drawings have been destroyed, being scanned is the only evidence they existence KINDA LIKE PEOPLE HAAHAHAHAH
>>5191598
I know for sure I dont have one yet I got called a retard
SO THIS IS WHAT PEOPLE THINK OF ME HUH? how AM I SUPPOSED TO BECOME AN ARTIST WHEN PEOPLE CALL ME A RETARD OUT IN THE OPEN

>> No.5191979

How do you handle perspective when it changes a shitload? For example a bunch of people with their arms in different directions and stuff? Theoretically I could autistically find every single perspective for every joint and such, but is there a more practical way?

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How is this coming out? also which color

>> No.5192003

>>5191979
Feel it out or use a reference.

>> No.5192004

>>5191998
Double axes are retarded but otherwise it's cool. I'd go with red and change the eye color a bit

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>>5191998
Take what I say with a grain of salt but the abs look orthographic and his left bicep looks like it's dislocated or something. It makes sense why it'd face that direction but something is off. Maybe the deltoid?

>> No.5192029

>>5191960
all the more reason to draw a new one again

>> No.5192030
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>>5191998
>>5192021
Actually I think I know what it is. As far as I know the bicep should usually line up with the forearm but his bicep is perpendicular to it.

>> No.5192071

>>5191885
>I wonder if I am trying to do stuff that is way beyond my level.
That's how you raise your level. Draw more figures, and you should gradually become better at it.

>> No.5192076
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5192076

I know anons have mentioned to visualize the eyeball in view but I'm having trouble doing even that

>> No.5192079

>>5192076
how long

>> No.5192080
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5192080

Eyo, Im trying to learn how to paint values after years of only doing lineart. Could really use some guidance.

I feel like it every time I try to blend between two colors the transition always ends up muddy. Im just using a hard brush at 40% flow because ppl say thats all ye need.

Im not sure if I should blend more, less, get a mixer brush or ditch the hard round meme. How do art good?

>> No.5192090

>>5192079
?

>> No.5192091

>>5192090
how long have you been drawing?

>> No.5192092

>>5192030
Yeah that's true, but I did that on purpose to exaggerate the pose
If it looks really bad I'll fix it I guess

>> No.5192095

>>5192090
Don't answer.

>> No.5192096

>>5191979
I think that with organic shapes like limbs you can get away with bad perspective. it has to be very off for people to really notice it. so just guess it.

>> No.5192097

>>5192091
1 month

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>>5192097
HAHAHAHAHAH 1 MONTH
ITS OVER THEN HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

>> No.5192099

>>5191998
the double axes would work better with a longer handle

>> No.5192100

>>5192098
leave the people alone crab

>> No.5192106
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5192106

for six months WE HAVE TRIED WITH EFFORT BELIEVING IN PRACTICE AND A PROCESS
THAT WOULD RESULT IN USE UNDERSTANDING AND BEING ABLE TO DRAW
FOR SIX MONTHS WE HAVE FAILED
AND THIS ONE PRIMATE

HAS BEEN AT IT FOR ONE MONTH
TALENT IS REAL
SUCCESS WAS NEVER AN OPTION

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>>5192076
get good refs anon

>> No.5192111

>>5192106
can you not psyops everyone on this board?

>> No.5192115

>>5192004
>>5192099
Double axes are indeed uber retarded but its a request so whatever
Its short just because it wouldn't fit on an A4 sheet

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Early wip. Advice on the arms? For the arm on the viewer's right, the elbow isn't even touching the table, but it should be. But I'm not sure how to make it touch besides just making the whole arm longer, in which case I think it would end up looking too long. I'm pretty ok with the placement / proportion of the hands so I'd like to fit the rest of the body to the hands.

>> No.5192123

>>5192091
trying to start back up again after several years of not doing it

>>5192109
yeah looking up 3d models right now

>> No.5192125 [DELETED] 
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SIX MONTHS OF MY LIFE
wasssted on nothing
and this one anon >>5192076
THIS ONE ANON one month in is waaaaaaaaaaaay ahead of me
>>5192123
>trying to start back up again after several years of not doing it
Dont give me that bullshit we both know its not
THIS IS YOUR FIRST MONTH EVER

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>>5191974
>>5192098
>>5192106
Seethe cope dilate sneed

>> No.5192129
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>>5192125

>> No.5192131

>>5192125
it wasn't me that said one month
are you the same anon that has been throwing pity parties all across the board for months?

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5192132

I'm almost out of /beg/, I can feel it

>> No.5192134
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We have tried so hard we have tried so hard yet I cant draw, whys that beg?
>>5192076
This is what I should have been doing in my first month
No wonder people think Im mentally fucked, I AM!

>> No.5192135

>>5192131
Shooo!
Don't ever talk to schizo.

>> No.5192137

You keep answering and giving attention to the schizo I don't get it.

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>>5192134
Sneed

>> No.5192139

>>5192137
wHY CANt I improve? Should I quit? why?

>> No.5192140

>>5192115
>Its short just because it wouldn't fit on an A4 sheet
you should plan better then

>> No.5192141

>>5192135
>>5192137
oh my bad wasn't sure it was him

>> No.5192143

>>5192121
her index finger is bigger than the middle finger

>> No.5192144

>>5192132
Portraits drawn from photo reference will by definition never get you out of /beg/.
Unless you don't care about doing original work and you only want to draw portraits of people from reference. In which case that's perfectly fine, keep doing what you're doing. Nothing wrong with that.

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>>5192139
Sneed my friend

>> No.5192146

>>5192131
What makes you better than me? what is it?

>> No.5192147

>>5192127
kek

>> No.5192148

>>5192143
Yes, you're right, I'll need to fix that.

>> No.5192166

>>5192134
I basically only drew scribbles my first month. Nothing as good as the post you replied to.
I want to give you advice, but you’re clearly a schizo, so I’ll try not to get baited into replying to you anymore.

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>>5192106
Guess you got brain problems.

>> No.5192170
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>>5192166
nO Advice will work on the talentless, those not chosen at birth cant draw
Drawing is all talent

>> No.5192171

>>5192132
Nice chicken scratch, faggot.
Nah I'm just messing with you. Keep doing good work anon.

>> No.5192179

>>5192144
Welp I guess I'm gonna be eternal /beg/ then, since I mostly just want to be able to draw portraits from reference.

>>5192171
thanks anon. and yes, I know it's sad I still chicken scratch. I just like the feeling of doing it, long lines feel bad :V

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>>5191887
The way you drew the tree and foliage look really nice, I like the way they look a lot so good job on that anon

I will say though that the colors you chose for the girl don't really seem the match the background, it looks like she's in an entirely different
environment. Consider how light reflects in the next picture.

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>>5192170

>> No.5192206
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How can I make this cuter/sexier?

>> No.5192207
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5192207

What up fuckers. Any advice you can give? First time digital

>> No.5192214
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5192214

I'm learning the Loomis method, are these faces ok?

>> No.5192217

>>5192207
Why don't you draw the rest of the face

>> No.5192221

>>5192217
Trying to get the hang of brushes etc

>> No.5192230

>>5192206
is that suppose to be human feet or deer feet?

>> No.5192239

>>5192230
Human but I'm retarded

>> No.5192245

>>5192198
Everyone says I did a good job but I was just winging it...

Hohhh.... I'll try harder to make sure the colors work better for the girl this time...

>> No.5192255

>>5192245
>Everyone says I did a good job but I was just winging it...
Thats talent you primate

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5192256

cont.
learned why I had so much trouble with it. thanks boys

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>>5192256
fuck wrong one

>> No.5192262

>>5192256
>>5192259
I WOULD NEVER BE ABLE TO DO THIS
nICE talent

>> No.5192269

>>5192214
These are so simple that there’s not much to say. Try drawing bigger heads from different angles, add more detail, etc.

>> No.5192273

First week beg here. What are some good tutorials on how to hold the pen and what the correct motions are? I find there's a lot of contradicting advice out there.

>> No.5192277

>>5192256
Good. But the face is not leaning together with the box. They are in different directions.

>> No.5192280 [DELETED] 

>>5192256
Cont. Look to the ear, it is below to where it's suppose to be.

>> No.5192284

>>5192273
Hold it like you do when you’re writing or however else you feel like holding it. Anyway who says there’s a “best” way to hold it is memeing.
I find myself naturally switching between a couple different grips as I draw.

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>>5192206

>> No.5192305

>>5192298
kek

>> No.5192315

>>5192284
Alright thanks. What about motions? Should I always draw from the shoulder, even when doing really detailed work?

>> No.5192318

>>5192298
Fucking noted, thanks anon

>> No.5192324

>>5192298
Lacks soul

>> No.5192339

>>5192298
The antlers are too much imo, but other than that, looks better.

>> No.5192345

>>5192339
oh yeah they dont have antlers

>> No.5192361

>>5192080
This looks amazing.

>> No.5192369

>>5192315
>Should I always draw from the shoulder, even when doing really detailed work?
No. Draw in the position that's appropriate. Drawing from the wrist, elbow, and shoulder are all acceptable, drawing only from the shoulder is a meme from here, and irrelevant to actual art.

>> No.5192371

>>5191854
He's using pencils, probably conte.

>> No.5192375

>>5191974
Could you just stop with this boring trolling?

>> No.5192389
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5192389

Drew my New Vegas character to test flat colors. Looking for critique on how I could color my works based on my lineart.

>> No.5192408

>>5192389
wow. that's really cool and I love the pose

>> No.5192413

>>5192140
Its not planning, if I draw too small, with details, with scraggly pencil lines its bound to be a clusterfuck when I scan it

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>>5192389
not an expert, but looks like you already kind of decided where you want your shadows to be through the lineart with the hatching, i'd suggest just following those

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I'm finding my method a lot better to grasp than loomis

>>5192277
yeah I noticed but the box was only to get a grip on the head anyway

>> No.5192441

>>5192375
Its not trolling
I need to know why I cant improve
WHY I WASTED 6 MONTHS

>> No.5192454

>>5192413
I mean that if you put the axes in the diagonal of the paper you could make it longer. or you could try foreshortening it.

>> No.5192455

>>5192441
why not draw for fun and stop worrying about improving? the reason you're not getting better is because you're so stressed out about it

>> No.5192459

>>5192455
>>5192437
This person has been drawing for a month
Since /BEG/ tells me that Ive been regressing and YESTERDAY they told me I literally had no progress
it means im wasting my time
LIMITED TIME
one month out of 12 has been wasted this is my last year to choose something
WE CANT AFFORD to waste more time if its not going to work out

>> No.5192461

>>5192455
Stop feeding him attention, its the same ass conversation every thread lmao

>> No.5192462

>>5192461
I dont care for your attention I CARE FOR THE ANSWER
I WANT TO KNOW THE WHY

>> No.5192464

>>5192441
because you're not drawing you're doodling. you're not trying to get rid of bad habits, or grasp information, or even follow advice

>> No.5192466

>>5192441
>WHY I WASTED 6 MONTHS
it doesn't make sense, it is not like you went to art school lol you just drew a few hours per day. I bet you spend more time shit posting.

>> No.5192468 [DELETED] 

>>5192464
lies lies
4 HOURS A DAY AVERAGE
MANY RESOURCES
CONSTANTLY GRINDING FUNDIES
YOU KNOW NOTHING

>> No.5192483

>>5192468
ok, if you're so serious let's start right now
set up a still life. take a picture of it. then draw it for an hour. post both here so we can compare with you

>> No.5192486
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5192486

I am pretty happy with how the face turned out. I didn't want it completely flat and it isn't. Though I don't like anything else about it. The hair looks stupid in general and as only two tones.

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Is this coloring passable? I have literally no idea what I'm doing, been drawing for like 2 months, but I don't understand colors and layer modes and shit and speedpaints confuse me

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>> No.5192501

>>5192489
the face and the hair looks nice, but please fix that hand.

>> No.5192505

>>5192483
Why would I do that YOU WISH TO MOCK ME
you wish to brag about your talent
Im going to fail I no longer experience JOY

>> No.5192509

>>5192489
right eye is crooked. hand is too small. colors are fine so far but it's too early to say

>> No.5192517

>>5192505
oh, you just want to shitpost all day afterall. here's your last (You) from me

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5192520

Hi, I'm the guy who wants to improve on the funds, any advice is welcome, maintaining the value is complicated, and if anyone knows any advice to paint trees and grass.

>> No.5192521 [DELETED] 

>>5192517
no no CHECK THIS POST I MADE AND SOON ILL ASK REDDIT FOR THEIR DIAGNOSIS
IM NOT SHITPOSTING
I ONLY WANT THE ANSWER AS TO WHY I CANT
WHY NOTHING WORKED OR WILL WORK
>>5192510

>> No.5192523

>>5192491
is she missing a finger or it is a tangent?

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>>5192523

>> No.5192555

>>5192530
it is a tangent then, the 7 kinda looks like a empty space.

>> No.5192572

>>5192491
that's a mighty long torso

>> No.5192576

>>5192491
this is great anon, only thing that i can see is that the arms are a little chunky

>> No.5192579

>>5192491
>>5192572
how long?

>> No.5192580

>>5192555
My noggin is empty space

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5192589

Been drawing for fun, I think I'm getting worse. Still chicken scratching and avoding faces. Tried to draw some skulls but they are hard.

>> No.5192591

>>5192589
Nice work! I like it! How long have you been drawing?

>> No.5192595

>>5192589
have patience and study your fundies, hermano, you'll do alright

>> No.5192596

>>5192579
draw under the tits and you'll see it. it's more like it's on a different perspective imo

>> No.5192603

>>5192591
Thanks, around 5 months

>> No.5192606

>>5192603
5 MONTHS YOU SAY AHHHH YESS
5 MONTHS OF PROGRESS HAVE SERVED YOU WELL

>> No.5192661

The mental illness is kinda bumming out this thread. Where the jannies at?

>> No.5192665

>>5192661
It makes a big difference if you filter it, if the jannies wont do anything.

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5192671

I hope to some day become good enough that I feel comfy critiquing others art

>> No.5192673

>>5192661
I dunno- it's kinda funny

>> No.5192711

>>5192661

how sad is that I already got used to it

>> No.5192718

>>5192711
Not really sad, it's pretty normal for someone to come to 4chan and force themselves by spamming avatars and pattern like speech to form some kind of identity here. You see it lots on /vg/ usually by depressed people

>> No.5192736

>>5192718
>>5192711
>>5192661
Tell me how to improve or even better why I cant
the truth is all i ask]the day i learn the truth i fuck off

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>> No.5192769

>>5192736
because you spend more time complaining than drawing, it's not rocket science lol

>> No.5192781

>>5192769
Lies
i did my time, i should BE BETTER and you know it
talent is real and i dont have it
to be an artist you must BE CHOSEN

>> No.5192799

>>5192781
pizza picnic

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5192800

Time to start doing coomissions?

>> No.5192802

>>5192781
if you're complaining, you're not drawing. "did my time" lmao you obviously did not since you're still here complaining

>> No.5192807

>>5191887
Light source is not affecting little girl, nice foliage though

>> No.5192810

>>5192800
no

>> No.5192814

>>5192736
>Tell me how to improve
here drawabox.com and don't come back until you finish it.

>> No.5192815 [DELETED] 

>>5192814
already tried it
the fact that you tried to give me that resource means that im so talentless my art is below someone who has never done drawabox before
ITS OVER ISNT IT?

>> No.5192819

>>5192810
Rude, my dude. When then?

>> No.5192821

>>5192802
Why would I waste my time drawing right now
its clear im not talented so ill never make my comics
ITS OVER ISNT IT?

>> No.5192823

>>5192815
>already tried it
prove

>> No.5192825

>>5192823
how?
Ive posted all the resources i tried
ghosting lines planes all that shit
freehand boxes
even uploaded some here

>> No.5192826
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Sloppi

>> No.5192831

>>5192825
I only saw you posting the first lessons. did you finish the whole thing?

>> No.5192836

>>5192831
Of course not, itd be a waste of time

>> No.5192840

>>5192836
You're a waste of sperm

>> No.5192841

>>5192840
why would i waste my time doing drawabox if i dont have talent?

>> No.5192846

>>5192836
here drawabox.com and don't come back until you finish it.

>> No.5192847

>>5192821
sure, it's over. go away now. if you're not going to bother trying anymore, don't come here anymore. you're making it harder for people who want to improve to succeed by being so annoying.

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>>5192846
already tried
it failed
cant try again
heres dynamic sketching
i dont get contours
i dont have the talent for it

>> No.5192852 [DELETED] 

>>5192847
Until I get my answer as to why I cant improve? what makes me inferior? i wont leave
would you agree that those 6 months were wasted and why?
im the worst artist on /ic/ and YOU KNOW IT

>> No.5192853

>>5192757
based hand practice anon
go practice those hands

>> No.5192858

is there a chrome extension or something I can use to block the annoying schizo's shitposts? I tried reasoning with it but it won't go away

>> No.5192860

>>5192849
>already tried
>it failed
no, you didn't, you gave up.

>> No.5192863

>>5192858
Just make fun of him to feel better about yourself. Literally free dopamine

>> No.5192865

>>5192863
that's fair

>>5192852
what makes you bad at art is your mental illness and lack of medication. take pills and you won't be the worst.

>> No.5192867

>>5192863
And I'll remain you that statistics are not in your favor, you already failed by not being born into it.
Free dopamine sweetheart.
>>5192865
>>5192860
How bad am I?

>> No.5192870

>>5192867
remind you
stupid autocorrect

>> No.5192872

>>5192867
>And I'll remain you that statistics
Are you having a stroke

>> No.5192873

Is there a book that helps teach how to properly convey a flow of action in a comic? I want to start drawing comics but I don't want my scenes to be a confusing mess.

>> No.5192874

>>5192867
here drawabox.com and don't come back until you finish it.

>> No.5192876

>>5192873
No doubt.

>> No.5192877

>>5192874
How does it feel knowing that you'll always be a hobbyist? A twitter artist at best and one often overlooked if not totally?

>> No.5192884

did you unlearn something new today anon

>> No.5192885

>>5192877
>How does it feel knowing that you'll always be a hobbyist?
since that is my goal, pretty good.

>> No.5192887

>>5192877
feels fine, I've got a day job that pays bills. art is an outlet, not a means for getting big. if you treat it as such, it'll never happen.

>> No.5192893

>>5192885
>>5192887
Do me a favor sweetheart and please post your art all you want, only place that will ever remember it

>> No.5192895

>>5192893
take your medication

>> No.5192900

>>5192895
If that's going to be your coping mechanism be my guest, internet corpse.

>> No.5192902

>>5192893
why would anyone here remember it?

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>>5192884
Never

>> No.5192906

>>5192902
I meant the place, it's going to be your only evidence, you're pathetic actually.

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>>5192906

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>>5192389
Do you have a place where you post your drawings?

>>5192132
I liked your portrait so I used it as reference.

>> No.5192912

>>5192906
that makes no sense

>> No.5192914

>>5192910
How long have you been drawing?

>> No.5192915

>>5192910
whoa there, save some based for the rest of us

>> No.5192926

>>5192079
>>5192091
>>5192579
>>5192591
>>5192914
5 minutes

>> No.5192938

>>5192915
If you keep trying your best, you are based too, anon.
Thanks

>> No.5192999

>>5192938
>>5192914

>> No.5193001

>>5192999
4 minutes

>> No.5193004 [DELETED] 

>>5193001
WAARRRRGGGARBLEGARBLEGARBLE
How DARE you put 4 minutes of effort into your hobby! I AM SHIT

>> No.5193009 [DELETED] 

>>5193004
>>5193001
I've been on my own for long enough
Maybe you can show mehowto love, maybe
TELL ME HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN drawing? save me the trouble of finding out on my own

>> No.5193010

hello, extreme /beg/ here,
what's a good free software for digital drawing? i'm borrowing my dad's $20 huion tablet so i can try drawing on a computer but all i have is ms paint and i dont know where to go to pirate adobe illustrator without getting a virus

>> No.5193017

>>5193009
3 minutes
>>5193010
Pirate paint tool sai

>> No.5193028

>>5192491
Katsunei have you drawn Samus yet?

>> No.5193045

>>5193010
FireAlpaca

>> No.5193055

>>5193010
GIMP

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>>5193028
No

>> No.5193072

>>5192852
Heh

>> No.5193080

Someone tell me that a tracing a good lineart with a tracing paper or semitransparent layer can improve my line skills. Was that a troll?

>> No.5193085

>>5193080
Yes
Don't ever trace, use references instead and try to reproduce what you see

>> No.5193095

>>5193080
Whoever told you that seems like a brainlet. You get good line art by practicing drawing and becoming more confident with what you're drawing because you guess less. Tracing you're just putting yourself on rails expecting your exp to go up

>> No.5193099

>>5192491
That's it, this guy fucking pisses me off, who the fuck you think you are? Some hot shot giving some one setenced answers? Just seeing you post boils my fucking blood. I'm tired of this asshole, real tired of him.

>> No.5193112

>>5193099
i don't think that's the right guy

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>>5193010
check out krita

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>> No.5193129

>>5193124
Super cute anon : )

>> No.5193130

How to get good specifically at concept art? I just want to bust out concept art and nothing else, basically. What are the most important things for me to study and to practice?

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5193169

can i make bank tracing things on fiverr or no? do any of you make bank on fiverr with this or any other service?

>> No.5193178

can i make bank on fiverr doing vector tracing? seems like a lot of people are doing that.

or is there another service that you have experience providing on fiverr?

>> No.5193183
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5193183

Made this some time ago. Prolly the most fun I've had in a while drawing.

>> No.5193198

>>5193183
sovl

>> No.5193201

>>5193183
Ok that's my favorite in the thread
Excellent anon!

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>>5193129
Thanks

>> No.5193215

>>5193198
>>5193201
Thanks anons! I'm happy you like em

>> No.5193225

>>5193124
Really cute and soul

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5193265

Roast me

>> No.5193273

>>5193265
>boob plate

>> No.5193279

>>5193130
fundies and perspective

>> No.5193281

>>5193130
Drawing and painting for 10000 hours

>> No.5193288

>>5193273
Care to elaborate whats off with it?

>> No.5193296

Also this

>> No.5193327

>>5191849
I haven't been here in 2 years I all of a sudden want to get into pencil drawing again. I forgot all the good books besides Loomis. Any good recs that are for facial stuff.

>> No.5193332

>>5193327
Can I see your drawings fellow 2 year anon

>> No.5193338

>>5193332
Oh they were barely beginners stuff. I switched to writing as soon as I gave up. I'm merely a beginner in both. I only have one drawing I'd have to find it. Or I have a whole few wasted pages of bad Loomis drawings. That's what I was known for here the dude who complained about loomis drawings being bad

>> No.5193342

>>5193338
Everyone complains about loomis drawings being bad

>> No.5193345

>>5193342
Do you b wanna see my bad Loomis drawings from years ago?

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>> No.5193359

>>5193288
ever hit a womans chest before? like really hard?

>> No.5193363

>>5193345
Sure

>> No.5193364

>>5193359
No. Please explain

>> No.5193374

>>5192462
It's because you suck. That's why. You don't have what it takes to be an artist. All the time you've spent drawing could have been spent jerking off and that would have been more productive for you. You'll never amount to anything. You are a failure. Give up.

>> No.5193378

>>5193374
i have your art, matter of time until i get my revenge
im not kidding
youve got one chance to redeem yourself

>> No.5193383

>>5193378
My trash art? Have it, punk.

>> No.5193384

>>5193374
If I wanted to improve for real this time and I mean for real, how would I do it according to you?

>> No.5193388
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5193388

>draw construction heads just fine
>spill my spaghetti when its time to place actual features
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

>> No.5193392

>>5193384
Have a love for drawing. If you don't love drawing then you are helpless. Search within yourself.

>> No.5193395
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5193395

What do ya think /ic/?
Does this look anything like JoJo siwa?

First try at a portrait. I hate to say I started it seriously and thought the face turned out really good, the body was just me being lazy.

>> No.5193403

>>5193392
I had fun when I tried to draw like yuasa or did my shitty watercolor tree
i used to like it but worrying so much about progress made me bitter

>> No.5193404

>>5192671
Looks good, I'd like to see something more defined though.
>>5192800
If you are trying to reach commission skill level, you should be actively comparing your own work to other people who do commissions. It is an extremely competitive market.
>>5192910
Good soul, work on foreshortening. Do some crazy poses in weird perspectives and really make your brain hurt while doing it.
>>5193265
Nice, make her do a combat pose or something.

>> No.5193410

>>5193403
Don't worry about it so much. Just do what you like doing and try and improve on your own terms.

>> No.5193416

>>5193388
lookin good anon

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>>5193265
Increase contrast, right now it looks like it came through washing machine. Pose is stiff too, focus on weight distribution and action lines. Her head and neck also seem to be too narrow for her shoulders.

>> No.5193474

>>5193395
how old are you anon

>> No.5193480

>>5193474
26

>> No.5193482

>>5193460
Thanks for the critique fellow. Forgive my ignorance, what is an action line?

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Posting progress for this part of an art trade im doing
Followed advice of not shading with black and tried different colors, but still kind of a darker tone in some cases
Any thoughts/advice?

>> No.5193489

>>5193484
Looks good so far
One thing i'll nitpick though is that the details on the legs like the tibial line and all the works of the kneecaps clash with the generally simplistic artstyle imo

>> No.5193490

>>5193489
also push the left leg further up, as it currently stands she looks like shes taking a big step rather than dashing

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Ended up going for a Shuten
Head too big, even with anime lolibaba proportions, maybe I should shrink it to 90%
No f*et yet, I want to fix the lower leg first before I begin studying, I also need to find a way to support the sculpt permanently or else they will deform
The hands are meh, the right one is better, but I got impatient with the left. Need to study more with more realistic hands at a bigger scale. I also need to find a better way of making hair
Note that this is my first time making the head, hair and hands, hips, torso and legs are what I have the most practice with
Should also get better wire, because the one I am using in this one is too stiff to correct after putting medium over and now the legs are mostly stuck in that position

>>5193395
Like a window into the future, but her forehead is too small

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thoughts?

>> No.5193532

i did 20 minutes of drawabox today. am i good enough to leave /beg/ yet?

>> No.5193533

>>5193515
>4 toes
>clearly hiding hands
>lines indicate 0 depth
No thoughts

>> No.5193539

>>5193532
Post box

>> No.5193541

>>5193515
Oi, cunt, don't ya run

>> No.5193549
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>>5193395

>> No.5193553
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>>5193482
It is basically a curved dominant line that flows through the pose. Constructing around it helps avoid stiff poses

>> No.5193567
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5193567

my eyes always look like stupid fucking symbol drawing eyes this sucks

>> No.5193587

>>5193395
For fucks sake this is art! This is what art is

>> No.5193606
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I'm convinced most of these figure drawing websites are a bad idea since a lot of the time you'll be drawing people in perfectly ordinary positions. These sites are doing random shit or only hero poses. Seems like a poor idea. Copy the poses you want to draw, not some contorted sit pose you don't need.

>> No.5193620

>>5193395
Based

>> No.5193621

>>5193606
absolute brainlet that doesnt understand the point of gesture

>> No.5193626
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5193626

>>5193621
t. prokofag

>> No.5193631

>>5193626
great argument
why dont you post a finished piece so we can see how that stellar process of yours works out?

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5193636

>>5193631
Your turn, faggot

>> No.5193649

>>5193636
not yours gayboy
stop roleplaying

>> No.5193650

>>5193567
Learn the face muscles. It helps a lot.

>> No.5193651
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5193651

>>5193649
My bad, meant to post this

>> No.5193654

>>5193493
>I also need to find a way to support the sculpt permanently
...Do you not use a wire frame under the limbs and going into a block of wood as your base? Also helps to use foil to bulk out the forms.

>> No.5193659

>>5193010
Medibang Paint

>> No.5193673

>>5193631
>asking someone on /beg/ to finish something
Uh oh
>>5193626
>>5193606
Why'd you even resort to shitposting about proko when he teaches both anatomy and gesture

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>>5192520
try gouache and working quickly, blocking in very simple shapes and colors.

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5193731

>>5193673
Nothing good can come from posting finished work. Best case I convince some guys on 4chan, worst case I get discovered and associated with this place.

>> No.5193746

>>5193731
Shh just sperg about proko more

>> No.5193853
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5193853

It's kinda long, but this was the first time drawing something in a kind of a manga style.

>> No.5193858

>>5193853
good job!

>> No.5193860

Can anyone review Eviston's Art and science of drawing course for me?

>> No.5193869

>>5193010
i like krita

>> No.5193877

>>5193273
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6KHz0qWQA9I

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I need help with her skirt please, wind is coming from the right. How can I make it look better, bros?

>> No.5193936

fight the resistance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ktvPwE0pdA

>> No.5193938
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5193938

I made a meem of my art journey. Still /beg/ since I haven't been drawing enough, but happy I'm making progress, and happy I stuck with it.

>> No.5193942

>>5193860
so basically it’s a drawing course. In it you will learn different elements of drawing. I’d recommend it if you want to learn drawing but not if you want to learn, say, carpentry. There’s literally nothing in this course about carpentry. As in no tools, joinery etc. If you are looking for a carpentry course there’s a lot of great free content on YouTube because of the large diy community. Drawing has basically very little to do with carpentry, the skills aren’t particularly translatable so for this purpose I would not recommend Brent evistons the art and science of drawing. This concludes my book report, thank you

>> No.5193954

>>5193938
Extremely based
You are a role model. Keep fighting

>> No.5193962

>>5192339
didnt even notice the antlers LMFAO

COOOOOOOOOOOOOM

>> No.5193968

>>5193954
Thanks anon, I'll vie to live up to the high praise you've given me and strive to improve more.

>> No.5193971
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5193971

god damn i cant get this head right to save my dick FUCK

>> No.5193972

>>5193971
Relax anon, the important thing is that you're trying. It won't be easy at first, and it won't be easy for a long time either. Maybe try flipping the image horizontally and draw from that instead.

>> No.5193988
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5193988

>>5193971
Compare these angles

>> No.5193991

>>5193988
probably would have been easier if i had the actual picture in the document the whole time (only pasted it in for the screen shot, was viewing the reference from a second monitor during all those attempts)

>> No.5193992

>>5192207
The iris and the pupil are supposed to be concentric.

>> No.5193995

>>5193991
have you tried a technique of angle sighting?
It's something I'm struggling with myself

>> No.5193997

>>5192389
>404MetaKnight
A thirty-year-old boomer still using his old handle from fifteen years ago, I take?
I like your lines.

>> No.5194002

>>5192459
You could try sucking his dick. Ingest his genetic material like a sci-fi vampire, and absorb his talent.

>> No.5194005

>>5193995
never heard of it but ill check it out

>> No.5194032

>>5193080
Nah, I can see how it might help. You'd basically be drawing precise lines with a guide, while closely examining someone else's line drawing and hopefully paying attention to what makes it work. Very basic kind of practice, but that doesn't mean it's worthless.

>> No.5194033

>>5192298
>antlers
so, it is a trap?

>> No.5194036

>>5193124
You drew the eye the wrong shape, and one of the ears too short.

>> No.5194041

>>5193388
Just find some excuse to only draw robots and mannequins.

>> No.5194130
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5194130

self portrait sketch. took me about 10 minutes or so. I didn't count but that's what it felt like.

>> No.5194133

>>5194130

John Lennon. you’re alive?

>> No.5194148

>>5194133
kek

>> No.5194191

>>5193654
I changed the pose last minute so the bars coming from the legs are now in a weird position, you can see a curve in the right leg which is caused by this. What I was using as a base no longer works because both wires are not coming out straight down. The pastille block might be my only option for this, or maybe I could sculpt a base with polymer clay and stick that to a more solid object.
Today I will buy more—better—wire, and hopefully something I can drill a matrix of holes into for all future sculpts.
Worst is that the armature is not a single piece, since I want, in the future, to be able to section my sculpts for resin casting. In this figure everything is wiggling, but I believe it is all due to my poor planing and that I can make it work

As soon as I finish the f*et I will move into another sculpture and take better care with the armature

>> No.5194205

>>5193938
Christ. What the fuck were you doing from 2016-2020? Assuming these are all from reference..

>> No.5194280

>>5194133
I look better in that sketch than irl desu.

>> No.5194281

>>5193395
Kek
10/10

>> No.5194287

>>5191974
I love you, schizo. gmi

>> No.5194302

>>5193971
Trying to loomis head this is unironically holding you back here. Make your reference the same size as your drawing and hold it side by side so you can see where your proportions are off.

>> No.5194304

>>5193877
Thanks anon you are truly a scholar and a gentleman. It makes sense. Really appreciate it. But note that my boobplate is not double, which at leasr deflect blows away from center of chest y guess

>> No.5194305

Does every general have a schizo?

>> No.5194310

>>5194305
At least one

>> No.5194344

>>5194305
every general i've lurked long enough to understand, across every board, always has one fucking schizo whose entire existence revolves around shitposting on 4chan
i don't get it

>> No.5194369
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5194369

>>5191849
Some trash i made some time ago. I’m gonna try to really do focused draw studies for the summer.

>Week 1 - draw a skull 200 times (different angles)
>Week 2 - draw 200 hands
>Week 3 - draw 200 feet
>week 3 - draw 200 rib cages
>week 5 - assemble 300 times
>week 6-7, - drapery
>week 8-13 repeat first 5 weeks

Is this retarded? Obviously il do fun stuff between

>> No.5194370
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5194370

>>5194369
Wow pic related, that previous image was my reaction to my own post, impulsively selected

>> No.5194375

>>5194369
as long as you are 'just draw'ing nothing is retarded.

>> No.5194431

>>5192486
I don't know what you are going for with those earlobes, but it doesn't look good.

>> No.5194463

New bread is up

>> No.5194465

>>5194369
>assemble 300 times
what do you mean?

beg here, you might be spreading yourself too thin, by not focusing on one subject until you improve. like if after skull you did facial features then the whole face each one would build and reinforce each other.

>> No.5194480

>>5194304
>But note that my boobplate is not double
yeah, he does address that at the start of the video.

>> No.5194498

>>5194465
I meant try construction based on the skill hands feet and ribs concept. Do you think learning facial details would be better?

>> No.5194515

>>5194498
>Do you think learning facial details would be better?
depends on your goal, my point was that if you study similar things you should see more improvement. the face was just a example.

>> No.5194550

>>5194369
>waiting til summer
You won’t be doing half of this lol

>> No.5194565

>>5193388
Hint: that’s because your construction heads weren’t actually good.

>> No.5194676

>>5194550
I’m in the middle of selling my business. Shit sucks

>> No.5194765

>>5194130
He cute

>> No.5194812

>>5194565
Whats wrong with them?

>> No.5195045
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>>5191887
>>5192198
>>5192255
>>5192807
Okay, how's THIS?

>> No.5195062

>>5195045
I like the colors, but the figure don't mesh well with the background, their style I mean.

>> No.5195198

>>5195045
Cute!

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>>5195045
Great job! Girl definitely looks like she's in the picture now

>> No.5196641
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Good or trash? how should i fix her'

>> No.5196653

>>5196641
yes, but try posting in the new thread tho >>5194462