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What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary

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>> No.5117575

Nobody cares

>> No.5117578

fuck off, they are a great artist

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>> No.5117695

Wrong again.

>> No.5117698

Just tell us the name or fuck off retards

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My PoGo trainer wip.
Glaceon has a funny shaped head.

>> No.5117836

Are you that guy from earlier with Shantae and Risky Boots futa?

>> No.5117840

I'm that girl, but aye, that's me.

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>but there are no girlz on vietnamese basket weaving forum

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Shit man, you caught me.

>> No.5117847

omg send bobs and vegane

>> No.5117858

do you use your won booba and armpit as reference?

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Did you manage to finish it? I'd like to see it.

>> No.5117867

Not yet sorry. I'll definitely post the finished version when it's done. I've just got a bad habit of bouncing from piece to piece before anything's done.

Nice futa tho. Would submit.

>> No.5117921

Looking forward. And thanks.

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Switched up the initial sketch. Wanted to go for more ahegao instead of generic naughty face but idk if I was successful.

>> No.5117998

ahegao is generic naughty imo

>> No.5118030

>I'm that girl
Stop pointing that out just so you can make more money out of simps. Grow a fucking spine.

>> No.5118031

I knew you had it in you. You can make some really great and appealing stuff, if you don't decide to draw midna goblins. GG.

>> No.5118099

I don't disclose my sex at all on my other platforms. There's no simps to be gained on /ic/ and I'm not interested in having them either. I make a point of mentioning it now because I've been on /ic/ for a long time, and although the board has always historically had a good split of male and female, since last year specifically I've seen an increase in threads along the lines of "why can't females draw x", "why are women so bad at x".

I'm not near good enough to be used as an example of anything notable, but fuck, I don't think I'm completely terrible either, and I also don't think my cunt has got much to do with my ability either. Maybe you're in a weird place though if somebody mentioning their genitalia on a ecclesiastical cucumber bureau forces you to stop whatever you're doing and make a reply.

>> No.5118101

You tell em, girl!

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>> No.5118122

oh fuck you, i wanted to be the thread OP

>> No.5118124

Maybe next time.

B L O G.

>> No.5118133

>Maybe next time
Fuck you, there will never be a next time.

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>> No.5118431

based and now show tits

>> No.5118521

Any advice on drawing two people fucking? How do I make it look sexy instead of awkward?

>> No.5118557

force and gesture and use ref

>> No.5118649

Doing a request for an /h fag

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>Doing a request for an /h fag

>> No.5118754 [DELETED] 

I don't believe that you are doing this to help women (also because it's as you said, your art isn't nearly as good, but on the contrary it just reinforces the general belief), but if you are seriously this delusional, then let me tell you this is even more bad than doing it for the simps. It's not despicable, but it's really fucking dumb.

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Sketch from today

>> No.5118825

do you have a blog?

>> No.5118828

Nah, don't have the confidence to start one yet.

>> No.5118866

are you unironically retarded?

>> No.5118867

Feeling the form. You got a blog? I like this kind of thing where it's dimensional feeling but with weird proportions.

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Made this for another thread. May as well post here.

>> No.5118892

In a lot of ways, you're right but I think theyre more interesting than the default lip-bite and come hither eyes yanno? Also ahegao tips in general are always appreciated.

Uhh i never finish anything and go months without posting but I'm @escapegoatery on twitter

>> No.5118956

You will never be a woman :)

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Jessica rabbit

>> No.5119054

Who did the OP image? One of the very few good and sexy pieces I've seen in this trash general.

>> No.5119111

nah im hot as fuck but you're still a lonely virgin lmao

>> No.5119156

you seem pretty insecure to be responding to every hate comment you get

>> No.5119216


the dick always ruins these things

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It's cool I never finish anything either :')

That's not me.

Anyway, it's still wip, but Gengar is trending on Twitter at the moment. Better jump on that bandwagon quick, bois.

>> No.5119434

Based gobbo poster

>> No.5119559

It took a while but we teased it out >>5117741

>> No.5119684

cool drawing anon, but her tongue looks pretty weird, more like a cloth than a tongue i should say.

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It’s really jarring trying to get exposure on Twitter.

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Dat dick gonna ruin you :3

>> No.5119763

It looks like it is a bit early for you to actively try to get exposure on twitter. Don't try to run befure you learn how to walk, in this case - draw.

>> No.5119770

Ehh, I got 12 followers in 2 days and D-art noticed/talked to me yesterday. So eat a dick?:)

>> No.5119775

Lmao, what a way to take advice. It's also cute you consider 12 followers to be somthing relevant.

>> No.5119779

Starting from scratch 12 and a few likes from a legend is actually not bad. And I’m just giving advice too man, no need to be salty

>> No.5119796

You're the one who got hostile when suggested to improve your skill before you try to put effort into getting an audience, broseph.

In case it wasn't clear, 12 followers might as well be 0 followers, it's like nothing. As for the likes from a legend, I don't know who that is, but unless he is going to share your stuff, his like are irrelevant. What is worse, he might be an enabler (a guy who will react positively to your work no matter what). I had an enabler that I admired art-wise, and it hurt my progress and self-perception alot.

>> No.5119799

holy fuck you are so mad lol

>> No.5119801

This is a really bad drawing.

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>> No.5119814

What do people that draw this think, man? No one should think even posting this deformed piece of shit is okay.

>> No.5119815

Super mad lol.

Post yours

>> No.5119824

Cry more, shit artwork 10x worse gets posted here every day. The jealousy is real in this thread lol. You’re probably deformed yourself

>> No.5119826

Even your comebacks are complete shit, retard.

>> No.5119827

Who hurt you? You seem miserable

>> No.5119846

I guess I am mad for trying to give genuine advice on 4chan. Good luck with your 12 followers, mate.

>> No.5119852

You responded to the wrong guy asshat.
>I-in case it wASnt clear, 12 foLlowers mey as well B 0!
Genuine advice?? No one has much more than that on day 2 of having a Twitter unless they are helped along or already have a following somewhere. You’re just a piece of shit. Cope.

>> No.5119859

I don't think I did.

Yes, the 12 followers being nothing is not a roast, it's a fact, and I'm speaking from experience, not trying to put you down. Twitter has that thing I call "dead followers", i.e. people who hit the follow button and forget you exist. Just go to any popular twitter account of an artist and compare the number of their followers to the amount of likes/retweets on their posts. It is usually around 5-10% of the follower base. And the number of these people who are going to actually pay for your work gonna be less than 1%. The fact that you feel the need to insult me for telling you how things actually are tells alot about you.

>> No.5119863

The guy you responded to where you said good luck with your 12 followers was supposed to be me. You did. You just typed a whole paragraph and a half explaining some shit even children already know, pro artist. Breath and try to get laid, jeez. There’s literally worse art in this thread. Are you retarded?

>> No.5119864

Why are you deflecting on worse art existing, while you're the one bitching and moaning about how jarring it is to get followers? Your art is simply not there right now. Improve it, and the followers will follow.

>> No.5119866

They’re following anyway is what I’m trying to tell your retarded ass. Did you start off with like 300 followers on day 1 or something? Read your posts over to see how dumb you sound.

>> No.5119867

For somebody who's calling me mad every other post, you do sound mighty angry.

And, as I explained earlier, following this small means nothing.

>> No.5119868

And mine mostly aren’t dead followers. I have retards similar to you in my inbox asking me personal shit and trying to be my friend. I’d rather have dead followers at this point. You’re just an insufferable cunt that can’t take being wrong

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>> No.5119872

>says I’m deflecting, posts this lame response
Bitch boy I’m just giving you back the type of energy you’re putting out. You must be a shit artist to be this triggered. One does not have to be a perfect artist to want/gain followers. Are you too dumb to understand that??

>> No.5119873

Ah yes, a nobody with 12 followers is getting his inbox torn apart by people wanting to be their friend, do tell.

>> No.5119876

Are you too dumb to understand that at a skill level this low, followers shouldn't be your concern as much (meaning: at all) as improving your art?

>> No.5119878

I said you were mad once.
Twice now. The other anon said it first and he’s right. You sound like a dude that has never been in pussy, friend. Direct your anger at yourself. This
Is shit art

>> No.5119879

There are people way way worse on Twitter right now with like 789 likes. You can’t be this stupid, it has to be jealousy or something.

>> No.5119881

Yeah, because I am calling you slurs in every post instead of saying something contructive. Oh, wait.

>> No.5119883

Missing the point again. You’re the idiot that assumes they were dead followers because that’s what you got. Did you graduate high school or is this convo completely pointless??

>> No.5119886

>Ultimate deflecting
Why am I even bothering. Maybe you should be more concerned about improving your personality/brain before engaging in convo on a thread. You’re clearly not all the way there yet.

>> No.5119892

No, that's what the twitter statistics are. As I mentioned earlier, feel free to visit any famous artist and compare their follower count to the number of likes and retweets they get on their posts. Are you capable of responding without being butthurt btw?

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>> No.5119897

It’s the same way on YouTube or any platform genius. You’re always going to have 10% or so that sticks and 90% that are just passing by or are only in it for the goods and don’t care to sub. You’re not posting anything constructive. Now I’m starting to think you’re some old neckbeard. What you’re saying isn’t breaking news or constructive??

>> No.5119899

Don’t get defensive now lol. You’re a joke, way to fuck up the thread

>> No.5119902

Relevant facts are not constructive?

I wouldn't dare to steal your thunder.

>> No.5119906

You’re pointing out a given that anyone with access to the internet knew of 5 years ago. Hardly relevant. I could tell you that there are 24 hrs in the day. Doesn’t mean I should, you already know that. Get it??

>> No.5119910

I don't think that a person moping about hardship of getting followers while flexing with 12 followers at the same time really knows it.

>> No.5119922

You’re literally stuck on stupid I see. You still on about that? Figures that you’re slow enough to think that anyone on 4ch doesnt know about everything in those last few paragraphs from your other posts. I just pointed out what you were trying to explain much better than you did. You really thought you were getting something said huh? You must be lost

>> No.5119926

You sound like a badly written anime character at this point.

>> No.5119928

>Says I’m moping about not being able to get followers in the same sentence as he says I’m flexing my followers
The absolute state. So it’s jealousy then? That’s all you had to say faggot

>> No.5119930

>the cringe
Yep, confirmed for still being a virgin. Respectfully anon, please kys

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>> No.5119942

>taking posts out of context
You said I shouldn’t expect any followers with my work. I was just stating I actually do already have some.. care to make yourself look like even more of a dipshit? You’re doing mental gymnastics at this point.

>> No.5119947

Just a note, eunuch is spelled with a u and not an i.

>> No.5119949

If you'll read my post, you'll find that I didn't say that. What I said is you shouldn't put an effort into getting followers at this stage of your skill development and focus entirely on improving your art. Twisting my post into the vision you're trying to present to get offended is what actual mental gymnastics look like.

>> No.5119950

Yeah, I've not really experimented with drawing elongated tongues yet, but keeping it thick like a regular tongue looked a little grotesque. I'm not sure hour to tackle it because Gengar has a really thin tongue, but then it's also shaped like an orb lol. I should probably study some giraffe tongues.

>> No.5119951

oh damn, thanks, i'll change that before posting

>> No.5119953

My OC has a long tongue (and is also a futa). Wanna do an art trade?

>> No.5119954

There’s no point in reading your posts. Any normal functioning anon can read a few lines of your bs and see how mentally challenged you clearly are. You just can’t accept that you’re wrong. The only time you came close to making a point was when you started yapping about Twitter algorithms, and even then you made yourself look like a dummy. You actually believe anything you’ve said was constructive or factual other than the shit everyone already knows. Are you like 40 or something? Keep up

>> No.5119957

np. Ignore the faggots trying to neg you on here btw. It's nice having a recognisable roster of users posting regularly to the board.

>> No.5119960

Ah, so you're guessing what I wrote instead of actually reading it. Your posts start to make sense now.

>> No.5119962

I actually do, but I also can't take on any more obligations at the moment. I have 4 commissions waiting in the wings that I'm putting off to squeeze this out and I think the commissionees are getting a little frustrated at waiting for their slot to come up whilst I'm pissing about with personal projects. What's your twitter though? I'll write a note and we can do something when I'm done with other shit.

>> No.5119964

Again, kys

>> No.5119969

Kys yourself, my man.

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>> No.5119975

>responds with this but thought his other posts were worth reading
Yeah your definitely new to technology. Go back to studying internet algorithms old man

>> No.5119986

Thank you, I laughed out loud from this.

>> No.5119990

You should work on your fundamentals, especially proportions. You'll get much more recognition that way.

>> No.5119993

How dare thee suggest he'll get more followers by improving his art!

>> No.5120006

It’s video game character drawing that was meant to be hyper sexualized. The proportions are the way I intended unless you mean the head or boobs. No way you guys are this dense lol. This was in no way meant to be a realistic drawing for any anon that thought otherwise

>> No.5120009

The proportions are shit with the stylization taken into consideration.

>> No.5120012

Lol okay pro

>> No.5120021

Oh you're the futa guy! Noted. I can't really say when I'll get back to you, probably be a while since I have a lot on my plat atm, but I'll hit you up at some point.

>> No.5120040

Trash shading on legs
Bad proportions
Boring colors
Just bad over all
Terrible proportions
Abdomen is decent, rest ehh (probably the only futa one I’ll even comment on
Plenty of space to improve. Why is 99% of this thread futas?

>> No.5120047

Then the proportions you picked are simply unappealing. You went too far with stylization.
But desu I think you are just being over defensive and you didn't actually mean to make her this unappealing.

>> No.5120048

It’s easily the best art itt imo

>> No.5120051

You just commented on 3 different futas.

>> No.5120055

This is one of the first images you made that I came to.

>> No.5120056

Not really.
OP wipes the floor with you.
And these are much much better

>> No.5120058

Nice argument

>> No.5120059

Hence the word “probably”. Didn’t realize this thread is a whole sausage fest lol. Lots of bland/flat colors too

>> No.5120060

The third one might be a little better, maybe on a good day if you’re a homo

>> No.5120064

Nah, they are all objectively better. Every fundamental in your artwork is worse. Perspective, gesture, proportions. They are all sub par.

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>> No.5120073

Gesture? Almost none of the art in this thread has that but okay dude. Only like 3 pieces of art including OP have half decent proportions also.

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>> No.5120076

Hysterical right? Lol

>> No.5120078

It’s true no matter how much you guys wanna circle jerk bro lol

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>> No.5120081

I guess you are just baiting. No one that can hold a pencil could say something this stupid.

>> No.5120088

I’m being serious, I’m glad my work isn’t like you guys. And I’m saying that respectfully. I think a lot of anons here are just biased towards dicks or something probably

>> No.5120089

Pyw fag

>> No.5120091

pay what you want

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Nah, you aren't being serious. You can't be so stupid as to think gesture isn't a fundamental element of EVERY drawing. GTFO

>> No.5120096

I already did. Cite the best and really only fully fleshed out work itt. It didn’t have a dick on it and ig the legs were too big but everyone hated it so while we’re being honest lol

>> No.5120102

>Oh no! He forgot to gesture! It’s worse than my terrible art
Literally how you sound. Pointing out gestures are needed actually threw me off

>> No.5120106

Are you seriously implying artists aren’t allowed to draw an idly standing character with somewhat off proportions ?? Lol y’all are actual weirdos ngl

>> No.5120109

>best itt
>no dick
And you wonder why everyone hated it

>> No.5120110

idle poses also have gesture
its not all jojo poses and interpretative dancing

>> No.5120111

Clearly lol. I never stood a chance ha

>> No.5120112

What is everyone fighting about? Get back to drawing.

>> No.5120114

Lol what? What is gesture to you then?

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>> No.5120118

I posted an abomination with off proportions like everyone else in the thread. And it didn’t have a dick so they were bound to throw a fit. I didn’t know lol. I’m burnt out for a bit on drawing tho

>> No.5120122

the flow of a pose, the rhythm of forms. the contours of a leg has as much gesture as the rest of the body. by understanding and exaggerating the gesture inherent in the human body you can create much more interesting artworks than if you'd just copy a picture. just because its anatomically feasible doesnt make it a good design

>> No.5120128

The works in this thread that actually did what you’re explaining did it poorly though. A gesture isn’t even half of a piece either, so having one also doesn’t make your work a good design or appealing automatically. I emulated Doxy’s work almost completely in my posted work and he’s shitting on everything in this thread by a long shot. If anything I thought my coloring would be what got hated but you guys just have shit taste it seems

>> No.5120143

From what I am reading it seems like a single Dunning-Kruger /beg/ derailed the entire thread because he is incapable of seeing his own mistakes.

>> No.5120152

Or everyone else acting entitled like there’s no mistakes in their work. There’s like 2 other decent pics in this thread but mine garnered the most comments out of you losers and all I had to do was say followers. Could you seethe any harder?

>> No.5120155

That means I'm getting better, right? :')
Hope you enjoyed your orgasm lol

>> No.5120158

He didn't forget to gesture. Nobody can forget to gesture, as gesture is an element of an artist's stroke-work. His gesture is bad, which results in a stiff pose.
Still baiting, or are you seriously this much of a beg/dumbass?

>> No.5120159

So you admit your only way of getting attention here was starting shit rather than the quality of your work?

>> No.5120165

As I already said, OP wipes the floor with you and there's no dick in it either.

People are mocking you, cause you have thin skin and can't take criticism.

>> No.5120167

>I emulated Doxy’s work almost completely in my posted work
>almost completely





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>> No.5120175

No? It’s just that most of the comments I got were hateful when none of the work in this thread is above 5/10. It got to the point where another anon had to point out that some of you faggots were mad as hell, and anons thought it was me saying it lol. You guys are jokes, your art isn’t good enough to be in attack mode like that. An artist can want exposure without being perfect, look at half of the content makers on Twitter or ig. They’re trash but they have thousands of follows. You are allowed to progress while gaining followers and you homos act like you’re the holy grail of art or something. How much of a fag do you have to be to really say “You can’t be serious?! No gesture??” The state of /ic/ is laughable

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It still bothers you though, the whole gender thing, why even mind the why cant femmales do shit threads?
Why even place your worth in any way or amount to this place? Are you crazy?
Nothing will change. Most women are still incapable of doing anything productive other than popping out kids, if you're not like that then good for you, you shouldnt take offense then...its a message not meant for you.

Now go draw and hone your skills you stupid fucking cunt.

>> No.5120180

No can’t agree with you there. Op and the one with the Pokémon are like 5/10 at best. The rest is garbage
Criticism isn’t the problem. It’s that you fucks honestly believe you’top tier or something. Typical 4chan
Maybe not completely lol but better than all of this thread. I admit there were a few other artists I use for reference. But I wouldn’t use you guys

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>> No.5120209

While I agree on the point the he/she shouldn’t care to reveal their gender (just comes off as a neckbeard larping in most cases) the thinking that women aren’t good for anything is retarded. A man that thinks like that is either hurt or threatened by women. I hope you don’t express this type of shit in public man. Hell, the majority of men don’t amount to shit either. The game is just skewered in our favor. But yes, drawing

>> No.5120466

No . Women really can't do shit. They have all the rights in the world, what do they do? They half ass everything they put their hands in, they submerge themselves in mass whoredom, they are shallow in every sense of the word, they say and do a lot of bullshit. And they often can't even be teached properly. You take a man who is a loser , you can form him into at least a physically capable man who can at least do manual\construction work. Most women are simply borderline retarded, if this girl is different ,if she can bring some kind of value, then I hope she'll do well in life. But men fucked up terribly at breeding women. The bar was so low always when it came to natural selection for women, that now we got dumb semen vessels for the most part, and that's kinda depressing.

But surely I won't be spreading this in public, in this retarded society. Real recognizes real, so there's no need anyways.

>> No.5120528

>in this retarded society
Your shit would only make society even more retarded
How's your loli drawing coming along?

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Why is this so cringe tier?
My take is the lines are inconsistent, specially the eyes compared to everything else. The airbrush rendering doesn't pair well either.
The hands are terribad and I'm studying them now
2 hours ago I thought it was meh but now it's really hit me how horribly uncanny it looks
I see others nail the 'cartoony' look on aco requests and they make it look so easy so i tried to emulate it but looord I'm off by a mile
Didn't save it but the sketch stage looked so much better, as soon as I tried to 'ink' it lost all soul and all the nuance

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before i go digital sketch

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>> No.5120972

>not drawing entire feet

ugh so close to perfection

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fix penis

>> No.5121250

I think the uncanny part comes from how inconsistent you are with the stylization. The face of the character is fully symbol drawing, with a Picasso looking nose and disregarding perspective and anatomy. While in the torso and hips you try to achieve a more realistic look with the hands being just as stylized as the face.
My advice is for you to look up three different artists with styles that you admire, and compare them to your art, see HOW adn WHEN they stylize the same elements.

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>gesture? Almost none of the art in this thread has that

Wow, rude.

Got you senpai. I wanted to try out stylising it as a blank outline, but I guess it doesn't work too well when the rest of the piece is heavy on the lines.

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This was the first time i painted something, i barely touched a color pencils or crayons my whole life, id love some critique, beat me to the ground. I dont know how light works

>> No.5121399

this made it click for me thank you anon, im mixing influences from poor anatomy studies and all sorts of cartoon artists
coincidentally studying some bbc and sakimi chan right now

>> No.5121426

The tongue slouching along the stomach with a +100% gravity debuff looks concerning

>> No.5121438

Hey, uh... don't. A good artist for this kind of thing is Pigeon. They go by Pigeon666 or 82Pigeon sometimes. A lot of the costuming is completely rendered but the faces are pretty simple and the whole thing works. They exaggerate proportions in a way I really enjoy and they very clearly grasp their fundamentals

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>> No.5121441

Shhh, it's coom magic.

>> No.5121450

Only critique I have is the stubby hands.

>> No.5121452

I cannot get enough of your work, Ortamaw. Keep it up!

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did you draw this? its fucking gnarly!
I like the pristine art n(ouv-U were born in between OVaries EA games U again)

art nouveau

art nouveau

in the hair, sorry, i have been FUCKING pedantic about memorizing this word stupid french influence N O U V E A U phew

okay back to the criticism

Anatomy looks good, everything is is tastefully hidden yes.....color palette gorgeous,

subtle cast shadow by flowers....

the log shadows make sense as well,

the pussy is defined...

despite looking like a little webby the hand anatomy is top notch...near perfect..

details in the band look round...

sultry gaze.....

thought she had a mole but turns out that was a piece of whatever on my screen.....

the closeness of the river and the distant land in the horizon...

the only technical remainder is on the foot & bracelet you forgot to erase part of the sketch to make the leg bracelet overlap properly.

otherwise perfect. Well done.

>> No.5121496

You're retarded.

>> No.5121504

It's obviously not his...and it's most likely just one Shexyo's traces off of cutesexyrobutts' art

>> No.5121505

>just one
just one of*

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>> No.5121572

Glad I could help. Looking up actual artists that you admire will help you build a visual library of what kind of things you find visually appealing when stylized. Try to REALLY study those artists and you will see some improvement in your art :)

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/co/ is basically advanced symbol drawing. Anatomy does matter but it may be more important to intuitively "feel" what looks good. Several parts of your drawing are just a bit lumpy and without a decisive direction. Compare your shoulders to Bill Presing's or hernyed's. Mirror one half over the other if you can't see the difference. Yours are asymmetrical but not in a controlled or designed way. What you want is controlled asymmetry, ie opposing or spiraling curves elegantly flowing into each other.

A good way to get a feel for this is to draw simple dynamic shapes and then "draw into" them. Start abstract with shapes that don't look like anything, and then humanize the abstract shapes with a few well placed details.

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Im sick of doing paintings or some unholy combination of sketch and rendering, how do I switch my brain to line art?

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Yeah i suck at hands, i try to draw square hands like gerph's but im too retarded to do it right, and dont practice enough

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>> No.5121740

Better a lonely virgin than a faggot tranny with a busted asshole.

>> No.5121991

Hey thanks, always appreciate the motivation.

Don't be gullible anon.

>> No.5121998

What is the story behind ortamaw nickname?

>> No.5122003

Nothing interesting. I like unique, nonsense word usernames and I got really fixated on the word "orta", but it's too short. Maw sounds dark/sexual, and also adds a bit of alliteration to the mix.

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trying this now and not only does it look better it intuitively helps me feel out where to place features
will do I'm finally making an inspo folder like I was supposed to ages ago
thank you based anons

>> No.5122059

draw some precum leaking down and you've got yourself some 10/10 fap material.

>> No.5122062

Normally I find your stuff really weird and nonerotic but this one is pretty hot

>> No.5122100

Ever heard of ogor mawtribes?

>> No.5122178

I hadn't, but my partner plays Warhammer so I'm surprised he hasn't pointed out this comparison before, especially since he has an Ossiarch Bonereaper army.

>> No.5122235

bonereapers are not involved with the mawtribes as far as I know.

also mandatory guys pull out she has a bf

>> No.5122285

They're both Age of Sigmar though right?

>> No.5122334

Yes, I just thot that part was covered by the "plays Warhammer".

>> No.5122350

I thought 40k and Age of Sigmar were different actually. I don't know that much about it. I did try building a Necron army years ago but I couldn't get into it though. Neat lore though. Was reading about the penitence engine the other day. >>5122235

>> No.5122373

Yes, 40k is indeed different from AoS, but they are both Warhammer, hence the confusion since you referred to it as "Warhammer" initially.

Penitence Engine is that thing sisters of battle stick their guilty in to atone? Cool concept, but visually I can't suspend my disbelief because of how exposed the operator are (and they are fully nekkid cept for underwear).

Warhammer has a lot of really cool lore doe.

>> No.5122378

Why is just the hand perfect, is your name Bizaro?

>> No.5122396

Not sure how it is perfect, but fenks.

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>> No.5122591

Supposedly the naked penitence engine is actually the kinder on? According to the lore the exposed one is preferable because it means the penitent is more likely to die in battle. The less-kind one is fully enclosed, and the wearer just continues to exist entombed, fighting against their will with all of their senses cut off, until death of old age.

Pretty fucking metal.

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Well, existance of a concealed controller inside the metal shell explains it then.

I love the genestealer cults, but hate tyranids. Genestealer cults are so cool and unique, while tyranids are super boring. Drew a genestealer cult magus awhile back.

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not only that, the deserter in the coffin has weird techno babble shit done to her brain so that every enemy she kills for the rest of her life she sees as having her face

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When drawing a female character in a front on, down looking up view, how much of the ass should be visible from below the vagina? How would I "draw through" an ass to get a better understand of how much of the ass I should show, and how low and high I should make it.

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Draw the hip box in perspective and then start from the sacrum. With how stylized you're drawing you can't really go wrong, but if you want to keep the size consistent you can do some measuring between perspectives.

>> No.5122821

Thanks mate. Will practice this a bit

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>finish a drawing and be somewhat satisfied with it
>look at it a couple of days later
>only see all the shit your horribly mangled

How do you defeat this, just draw a lot?

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I tried.

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Face in detail

>> No.5122926

remember that sometimes the flaws are what define your style and your character anon. it looks fine to me. just post it and make the new one better. move on.

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You fools make me vomit.
Apart from the knowledge to draw, you coomers are the antithesis of a true artist. You have no ideals, apart from hot girls. You haven't got a complicated deep emotional aspect to yourself, all you care about is cooming and crabbing, or getting money. You do the same easely labeled styles, mostly anime girls, yet some of you still bother about getting your own "style". You kill hours into what? Creating something to cum to? You don't have any real thoughts, you don't challenge the status quo, hell you don't even paint out or KNOW your own feelings, all you ever do is just draw women who never fucked you, and make females your Telos.
This is not art, this is just pornography, get real and try to not think about women for at least one day.

>> No.5122967

nothing wrong with leaving a drawing and coming back to it with fresh eyes
you don't have to post anything until you're ready

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Shut the fuck up retard

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I'm a coomer, baby

so why don't you kill me

>> No.5122984

And so what? Isnt the purpose of art to find fulfillment and enjoyment? And what if one finds enjoyment in drawing big titties and asses? Who are we to judge? He sits at home and does something he loves while you sit and seethe, hiding behind chad.jpg to protect your inferiority complex.
Art isnt entirely about sending a message, or showing your emotions. Theres also the aesthetic side, and pornography in itself is aesthetic. You seem to just be retarded or ignorant.
Move on

>> No.5123091

lol, I thought you'd be attracted to this conversation. I need to do some sisters stuff sometime, the white hair is hnnnnng.

You should do more coloured stuff btw.

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Did a quick one for /v/ draw thread yesterday, but thinking about actually finishing it

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>Isnt the purpose of art to find fulfillment and enjoyment
>He sits at home and does something he loves
>Art isnt entirely about sending a message, or showing your emotions. Theres also the aesthetic side, and pornography in itself is aesthetic

Nice excuses, cum some more kek
nobody ever watched porn because it's "aesthetic"
You're as full of shit as a broken toilet and you know it.

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Been lazy about working on this thing. She'd been sitting there bald for probably a week.

>> No.5123688

yeah i love me some 40k, it's really fun and stupid in just the right way, and i'd do color if i knew a quicker way to color stuff in

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>> No.5124873

very solid drawing. Only problem to me is the Achilles tendons/top of feet region being too small, but again, that can just be your style since she's already very angular.

For your question, I don't draw enough to know, like most people on here lol. But seriously though I think tackling the things you don't know or feel you lack earnestly is the only way to go about it I'd say. I'd like to say I improved a little when I grinded an artwork rather than only going through motions like I usually do.

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Relatively new with digital drawing,been doing it for a year or ever since rona stared, Think its o.k for a year worth of progress starting from zero. This one was done with no references so latex or anatomy might look off.

Any critiques more than welcome.

>> No.5124957

I'd rather be a sellout (making money is the sole purpose of me being an artist), than a pretentious bitter piece of shit like you kek.

nice bait btw
made me reply/10

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>> No.5125124

ugly rendering

>> No.5125144

Cute, blog?

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>> No.5125202
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I didn't reply to all the people who gave me pointers on the last thread but I really appreciate the help. Still trying to figure out what I'm doing next.

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Anon, there's just way too much to say, but I made a edit in five minutes so you can take note of some obvious points.

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I chose to go without a snout for a reason because I don't usually draw anthro stuff, I think the snout makes it look more ugly than it already is. Thank you for the nipple crit though I struggle with them a lot.

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>> No.5125722

lmao post one

>> No.5126240

Is this pasta?

>> No.5126247

This board is beyond pathetic.

>> No.5126328

thanks, anon, i dont have a blog yet

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>> No.5126499

I feel the same fren.

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>> No.5126857

You're definitely trolling. There's no way in hell any retard would think this looks good even for Twitter.

>> No.5126896

idk if it makes you feel any better but I have the reverse problem. I can't switch off from lineart and want to learn how to create art like that. How do you do it?

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Guess I'll post this here. Wish I woulda improved more, but hopefully I can start learning digital this year. Thoughts bros?

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>"Nooooooo, Velma! Stop! That isn't a magnifying glass, it's the disc of penification! Nooooo!"

>> No.5127445

whole year and still no loomis

>> No.5127524

Will loomis help me coomis?

>> No.5127780

Your work reminds me a lot of Brekkist, I like it

>> No.5127827


i am confused by the quality drop here. the sketch is not perfect, but it looks like it has promise for something with form ..and then the lineart completely flattens it.

look, your stuff has a lot of potential i think, but you seem to have no direction or inspiration and your art echoes the same as your last with no real improvement

>> No.5127839

i like it :)
my advice would be to just keep drawing. keep it up!
then comparing yourself with yourself.

my issues with this in particular is the skin. the shading on the boobs makes it look like the latex is cutting deep into her skin like its made of clay instead of skin. the shading is very sharp, when it should be rounded

it works on the stomach area although i think it should be softened as well.

did you color pick from an image , or did you use black/white for shading?

ditch using black/white for shading, look up hue shifting.

the labia bulging out looks comical. it looks like slime lol

anatomy is not perfect, but it's fine. i would focus on getting used to drawing

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why is so hard find good slow motion cumshot to study on porn hub?

>> No.5127935

Thanks man, actually useful advice.

>did you color pick from an image , or did you use black/white for shading?
Nah, I did the whole thing from my head. Man is it hard to draw latex from memory for the first time.
I used multiply and Overlay, for shading and hue shifting and subsurface refraction, was sorta experimenting.

Thanks for the advices man, appreciate it.

>> No.5127945

cumming on the letter d is my fetish, do you do other letters? Blog?

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This is a quickie so not my best, but you should keep in mind that an ejaculation, by its nature, is an explosive force. When something is explosive, it's also chaotic, and the strokes of your pen should reflect that. It's also important to note that due to the volume of cum, it doesn't really splatter when meeting a vertical surface. It would splatter a bit if the cum had a higher water content and thus weighed less. Yours looks quite thick so you wouldn't see much splatter.

>> No.5127977

well from memory its impressive especially since you started drawing not too long ago. ive been drawing for years and im still beg level. keep going, youre doing well!

>> No.5127979


use gifs! study them frame by frame, then try to draw the same cum animation from a different angle

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Thanks. I cant knock the habit of not using references. Though I use life observation pretty intensively. This is my three months of progress,and Im not gonna post the ones from beginning because Im ashamed of them,hell Im ashamed the ones from three months ago. The top one is very much a WIP, hammering away at it atm.
Any tips of improving further?

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i will

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Request for a guy, I kind of half assed it though

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wow nice!! i dont know what to say, you are only 3 months in and already better than i can do

however youve probably been drawing every day with purpose whereas i havent drawn with the intent of getting better since last year, and i havent been keeping up with it very well.
(maybe 2 finished drawings per month)

the bottom looks most recent to me, maybe because it is more simplifed. i recommend going back to simplifying things more. the most recent one is uncanny and gross, even for a someone who i'm guessing is supposed to be old. needs bold lines and sharp edges instead of super pillowy ambiguous shapes, which is opposite of what i said earlier but its really just something you need to find a balance for.

here's some faces ive drawn recently, up to you to judge how well you do better than i.
you should be proud, either way :)

>> No.5128719

the cum here is still really weird. even if she sat on something and it spread around everywhere it still wouldn't look like that.

>> No.5128722

i will add one more thing..if you ever get discouraged, everyone has to start somewhere.


i think this guy is now #1 NSFW artist on patreon?

>> No.5128727

nice ;) only thing i have to say is that the negative space between her balls and thigh is awkward

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Your sketches are far better than mines, mine tend to be a lot more messy and lack 'weight'. Though I tend to transition from sketches so i dont bother putting much work into them,I have to change that and try to emulate you cuz i really like the top drawings.

>however youve probably been drawing every day with purpose whereas i havent drawn with the intent of getting better since last year, and i havent been keeping up with it very well.
Yeah, Ive benn managing to put some 2 hour practice session almost every day since collage is out due to kung flu.

>the bottom looks most recent to me, maybe because it is more simplifed. i recommend going back to simplifying things more. the most recent one is uncanny and gross, even for a someone who i'm guessing is supposed to be old
Yeah,I wanted to try something else and draw old faces,since imo they are more interesting with all the lines and i wanted to do something more realistic looking,not cartoonish. Heres the finished piece ,though I rushed it at the end.

>here's some faces ive drawn recently, up to you to judge how well you do better than i.
I'm really digging the style man,really nice work, keep it up

>> No.5129352

Really good. Got a blog?

>> No.5129430

Thank you, and yeah, I wanted to draw her balls slapping against the base of the penis, but it's difficult to communicate with the limited space. Maybe draw some action lines radiating into the lines.

Cheers! I'm at https://twitter.com/ortamaw, and ortamaw on all my other socials.

>> No.5129432

I need to work harder on learning more about cum

>> No.5129437

Do you use disney cartoons as an inspiration for your style? I tried copying a face from your profile pic on twitter when I was bored and ended up with a disney-ish boy face (due to screwed up proportions).

>> No.5129486
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Never been a fan of Disney per say, but I was a big fan of artists like Allesandro Barbucci growing up, who I think worked at Disney in his youth. I don't think it comes across obviously in anything I draw either, but I'm a big simp for artists like Nobuteri Yuki and other 90's anime collaborators. Over the last year I've been consciously working on simplifying my lines and taking a "less is more" approach and trying to communicate ideas with effectives forms instead.

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From the other thread

>> No.5130117

your style is so fucking disgusting and cringeworthy

>> No.5130121

what ideas, you make coom
theres no idea in that , bitch

>> No.5130127

whats this name
and why is it so cringy?

>> No.5130131

It's a reference to mawtribes from age of sigmar apparently.

>> No.5130214

Oh it's just a made up name that another anon asked if was connected to Warhammer. I've never really played it.

>> No.5130218

You should totes create a big dick ogress OC!

>> No.5130231

2 much work ongoing m8.

>> No.5130253

Nice, can't wait to see more of you.

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I did some bait chan

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ver 2

>> No.5130311

Thanks, I'll do my best senpai.

Ahhhhhh perfect.

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one for you futa-fags out there

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>> No.5130387

It is unnerving because the only thing that can happen here is severe case of gore.

>> No.5130575

>and make females your Telos

Based. Brainlets, coomers and drones can't even comprehend this level of conversation.

>> No.5130662

Jesus Christ bitch shut the fuck up and draw. Smackin ya damn lips so much isn’t gonna improve your troglodyte level drawings. Definitely NGMI.

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Thanks you, Anon.
Very cool

>> No.5131096

Any tips on drawing bikinis?

>> No.5131140


the finished face is kind of ugly and scary...
but it is definitely not the worst ive seen for 3 months in

there is a lack of lines around the eyes and its a bit disturbing, makes the characters look like thye have no eyelashes whatsoever

but i think you just need to draw a lot more and with time and practice you will get better

thanks btw :)

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