quite good. make that chin more pointy though (but that's my style-opinion, matter of taste)
eh anon, that's not how...
will people fall for that trap?
I commend you a lot for trying but please note that this is beginner tier, you do not have a remotely profound understanding in the techniques of drawing (*not* saying that I *do* have that).
here are some points
>lack of understanding of form (this is quite tricky especially with anime as it is more boolean, there's not really much "grey area" with anime, it's line, or no line, shade or no shade, in the "essential" anime style that is the case mostly)
>lack of understanding of perspective well, mostly ties in with the lack of understanding of form too
>cloth, the cloth doesn't even deform the graphic all the way down on her dress
>lack of understanding on how the body "works" or how the body moves and how that affects the form, basically, anatomy
>proportions are way off, look at that smollie smol head (this is really tricky with anime the "golden zone" for a given characters head seems to be quite small from my experience, and on digital I can just resize it all I want) and note that the size of the characters head kind of dictates the perceived size or length of that character, note how a baby is 4 heads tall and a superherosuperhumanman is 8-9 heads tall
>I think you did quite well for the face taking into context the whole drawing and your assumed "skill level" the facial features seem kinda "correct" as well
>the hair isn't too bad either
>notice that wide neccc that ain't sexy it's not feminine
>I really advice you to practice and try out different /ic/ memes I'm still looking for the "right" or an "optimal" way of practicing myself
I feel like you tried really hard, and I kinda kinda think you have potential, but you have to know that you start from the basics (level 1) and I feel like you should keep trying! keep it up anon! ganbare!