/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

hey what the fuck
please delete this that drawing was bad
I dont wanna be put on the spot like this :(

>>5105075
We know its you on another PC or phone faggot. You love every minute of attention just admit it slut.

>>5105075
I saved it -_-

don't beat yourself up so much

>>5105077
Lower the opacity on the textures for the stockings, they don't make sense.

>>5105119
I know right. Fuck. Too late. Uploaded everywhere hahahaha

>>5105075
I just think the subject matter is fucking retarded.
Why is she naked?
Why is she eating a burger???

>>5105077
Light source. Otherwise good.

>>5105164
Sometimes it's fun to eat naked. Kinda primal and vulnerable and cute.

>>5105164
Asukafag secretly wants to be ntr’d by superior burger people and wants his country to be invaded (again)

>>5105071
We really need to have a talk about those legs and shoulders.

>>5105075
don't post in salt if you don't wanna be a candidate for the next OP image. or, write in your post that you don't want it to be the OP image and I won't choose it

>>5105077
looks very unnatural and forced, are you sure this fit your style??

>>5105077
Nice butt, I like the texture and the shadows on it

Guys do you ever just draw Victoria's Secret models beating the shit out of each other?

>>5105418
MOAR

>>5105254
or how about you acquire some taste instead?

>>5105077
im a /beg/ but the face bothers me and i think i ended up making it worse but whatever

>>5105077
Post the ref so we can compare?

>>5105418
This is fucking great

>>5105418
Victoria's Secret models are a lot thinner and taller with smaller boobs (unless you're just trying to draw beautiful women, in which case sorry for my autism)

>>5105071
damn i really hate when pics looks way better on the miniature

>>5105077
You are a worthless tracer

>>5105418
By any chance you studied Jdseal or David Balsamique's stuff?

>>5105077
All your art is so obviously traced, you don't deserve any positive attention for this.
The quality of the ass does not match how you drew her torso at all, looks like two completely different artists worked on this
And the light source also makes no fukcing sense, more of her face should be covered in shadows with a hat with a brim that huge
I await your fall from grace and I will enjoy it

>>5105077
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86773971

>>5104632
Alright, let's leave it at that. A nice day to you as well.

>>5104463
>Oh no, he lost his cool,
I didn't lose my cool. I called him out on switching topics mid-debate and trying to push a point that I never stated.
>cause he doesn't have an answer to that. Ouch.
Work on your reading comprehension. I clearly wrote: "nor is my stance as you make it out to be."

>>5104480
>>5104482
Read a book or two. Maybe it will increase your reading comprehension and you'd stop presuming shit.

>>5105119
>>5105182
>>5105259
>>5105395
>>5105482
>>5105487
>>5105528
>>5105651
>>5105686
What was the pic in question?

>>5105651
>Just trace it like the pros do and you'll make it bro!
>Stop tracing from others that traced before you, you're stealing their rightful attention they deserve from the hard work they put tracing from someone else.
The absolute state

>>5106364
the one in >>5105686 I believe. the pixiv link is the one that was posted here, not the source of the tracing if I remember

>>5106367
not him but you're strawmanning a fuck ton. All he did was critique actual flaws in the drawing

>>5106373
What part of "All your art is obviously traced, you don't deserve any positive attention" did you miss?

>>5106375
I think its not just that he traces, but the fact that he has a weird sense of superiority about it? Like at least try to hide it lol. It's like he expects to be applauded for ripping off more talented artists and producing a shittier version of their work

>>5106382
Isn't tracing and claiming it as your own what everyone does these days? /ic/'s boy K*vshinov practically pioneered it by calling his plagiarized works a "tribute" despite being caught a multiple number of times. It's dog eat dog as far as I'm concerned, I just love it when you faggots go through a maze of mental gymnastics to justify for others who have been successful from tracing yet crucify others for trying to do the same crap. Get fucked.

>>5106396
You ignored what I said. It's not the tracing alone, its that he acts weirdly superior about it. He's cringe inducing and fundamentally unlikeable to begin with, the fact that he wants people to kiss his ass for tracing makes that even more unbearable

>>5106400
and that's a good thing.

>>5106400
he spent months here advertising his shitty youtube channel and constantlly ban evades while crabbing on different IPs. his new schtick is to trace famous nips and milk likes (and it works on Pixiv) while advertising himself on reddit all day as a professional artist.

report the faggot when you see him

>>5106409
It's Happyboi doing this?

>>5106417
yes, been tracking him for awhile because im tired of his annoying ass. the comments on his pixiv posts often have people sharing exactly which art he traces too.

if he did nothing but trace and post here id care less because its interesting to see, but he openly talks about intentionally misleading people and shit too.

>>5106418
Why are you not taking his example? He's demonstrating to you on how to be a successful artist. We even have an entire general dedicated to what he does in /asg/ so why are you not complaining about them as well?

>>5106425
im already far more successful than him.

>>5106426
So it's a dick measuring contest you're having.

>>5106428
>dickmeasuring with an anonymous user
assuming you arent just him being a retard, ive shared the information i need to, im done here

>>5105071
I'm late because the whole fucking board is full of that shit.

Very beg but trying to redeem my work through humour. Or something. I should probably just learn to draw though.

I slacked off today /salt/, but I drew.
I had to draw something from imagination after fucking loomis and skeleton studies

>>5105418
nice feet breh

>>5106400
Yo, i dont think i am superior to you. I think you just feel inferior and probably have low self esteem. I dont really think of myself as better than anyone and i only work to be good at art. Haha i fail many times tho. So dont worry about it, nobody cares, everyone dies. And in less than 100 years we will be nothing. Take it easy friend.

Xoxo hbn1

>>5105418
That's not how high kicks work. Especially with the force you've implied. You can't push so much into the kick and have a vertical support leg - you'll fall. It either needs to be slanted forward or it should be a more "bottom to top" energy transfer than "left to right". It would be okay is she was hitting her into the chin from the bottom. Arm positioning is also pretty shit but most people who didn't do martial arts always get it wrong (and can't tell that it's wrong) and it's not that critical.

>>5106872
If you consider this humour you should probably be put into a re-education camp.

>>5107186
Sneef

I will appreciate any opinion

>>5107384
Her further boob. Work on it.

>>5105071
>that right shoulder
>that left leg
yikes

Sneed

changes

>>5107130
is she made out of plastic?

tryna paint something sekushi

>>5107827
kys freaking weeb

>>5107727
i think you did the neck to thicc and the mouth is misplaced, other than that, cute drawing.

>>5105071
that broken anatomy is giving me cancer..

>>5107996
>>5107834
chill bro

>>5107827
is there any particluar place you look for references for your poses i like them but the pose repository websites seem to just have nothing but odd ones on hand.

looking at all these emotionally loaded posts and oh boy, there is too much estrogen on this board.

I would be happy to give constructive critiques and advice since I'm better than 99% of this board but
would that be a good idea knowing full well that I'd run the risk of helping a tranny/socialist?

WIP

>>5107827
top pose is better

im going through nsfw accounts on twitter and I can see that hardly any of them use any tags for their tweets, why is that? I imagine your posts would reach a lot more people if you tagged your stuff properly. For example, if you draw futa, why not add futa tag to your posts so that people that are interested in futa shit can find your art easier??

>>5108298
most of them just share their work in various discords that winds up getting passed around among hundreds of people anyway.

>>5108298
Some men just want to watch the world burn.

>>5108295
you get neither friend
>is there any particluar place you look for references
no i just bullshit something up until i think it looks good. usually it doesn't.
i tend to take screenshots when watching movies and the like but i never use them

this is defintely already my best drawing
thank you bro>>5107982

>>5108464
>>5108453
very nice, blog?

>>5108406
That's not how foreskin works

is it cheating to just redraw images you find online?

>>5108801
the original

Getting faster is nice.

>>5108801
not cheating but its not creative or fulfilling

>>5108801
no rules only tools

>>5108641
I would very much like to find out how it works.

>>5108811
Tf are those shit stains?
Also muzzle looks retarded. This is furry or what?

>>5108986
Look at your own dick faggot.

>>5108997
Why have I thought I would get constructive feedback on 4chan lmao.

>>5109001
It was constructive, unless you are disgusting tranny or dickless man, aka lesbian.
Look at your member and observe it. And start drawing actual dicks instead of pale cucumbers.

>>5108986
It only covers the head when it's soft. When you get an erection. it pulls back and reveals the head.

>>5108406

>>5108255
Post your work and then we'll know how good you are.

>>5109014
Lmao, kys yourself my man.

>>5109019
It being fully foreskinned was actually a client request, but my own dick for example is still almost fully covered in foreskin when erect, unless I pull it back (smol dick jokes).

>>5109023
Thanks for doing this!

>>5109030
>t. chinkoid

>>5109030
welcome, i been trying to get better at using foreskin in my works

>>5109023
>>5108406
thats a fully erect cock, the foreskin would be pulled all the way back and be stretched to expose the glans. the foreskin is only ever visible if the cock is flaccid or semi flaccid

>>5109062
i'm aware, but they obviously want the foreskin to be partly covering it so i worked with their intent, cause also there aren't futas with 2 foot cocks in real life either

>>5109070
No one asked you

>>5109097
he was literally looking for feedback you colossal sperg

>>5109097
>>5109033
>>5109014

Who are these dumboes who just sit here to insult people? And why?

>>5109019
Wrong. I have phimosis and the tip of my penis is always covered in skin.

>>5109135
just because you have a condition doesnt make it wrong dipshit

>>5109152
to be fair, phimosis is its own fetish which is probably what their commissioner was going for.

>>5109154
Yeah, if you check my gallery you'll see that I draw mostly circumcised dicks. I add stuff like foreskin only if specifically asked for.

>>5109135
Anon for years I had it too thinking it was normal, I cant tell you how good it felt to pull it all the way back and see the exposed gland while I was hard. It took me about two weeks of stretching it daily in a warm/hot shower and putting plain unscented moisturiser on it after drying it. Please take care of your pp

>>5108993
Bro this you? What exactly looks like shit stains? The cow print, the spots on the dick, or the rendering? Also it's a cow nose not a muzzle. Meant to be more monster girl than furry if anything, but I still can't into appealing faces. If you have recommendations for how to do it better for next time I'm all ears.

>>5108811
wow, you're talented

>>5109391
>Can't even tell is this sarcasm or not

>>5109405
Same

>>5109391
I'm gonna choose to assume not sarcasm and say thank you! But if it is sarcasm, then crit is appreciated thanks.

>>5109415
Very cute

>>5109415
Your work looks good in preview, but it falls apart when enlarged to the full view.

>>5108453
>cropped feet

2/10

>>5109415

>>5106872
h-humor? am I retarded? what's the joke here??

>>5109379
Dick spots exactly. They look like they're not a part of a structure, thus sparking uncanny valley effect. Facial features are also tightly packed together, especially the cow nose. This can be dealt via making the head more cow-like (just like furries do) or get rid of this nose in favor of animu dot. Plus the booba squish is not evident enough.
Also rendering is inconsistent and has no hard edges.
I wish you to git gud, fren.

>>5109415
I've seen you post here and salt and twitter and everywhere and I just had a nap and the first thing that came to my mind waking up was chun li x burger art
This one's a lot better, look into tinting your lines for a softer feel, I think it will go really well with your painterly style
Also the gripping hand needs adjusting either to tilt backwards from the camera to imply its all hidden by the burger from this pov or a couple of fingers on top of the bun
Aaaand the lines at the navel don't seem to flow from the angle coming in from the lats, it looks a little disjointed imo
Still, really good work with appealing colours and cute expression

>>5109575
Cool, that's stuff I can work with better thanks man

>>5106872
>>5109565

Supposed to be poking fun at the ongoing twitter dogpile against Gina Carano but apparently I'm as funny as I am good at art.

>>5109587
ah yes I know the lines are messy but for this one I sacrificed them to focus more on good forms
and stomachs are so difficult casue it;s all so subtle, subtle forms and bumps, very difficult to draw even with reference for me

this going to be a panel in a comic, but thought it would be easier to just do seperate full images

Recently finished this

Is it good enough to arouse you?

>>5108298
twitter isn't an art sharing platform

>>5109827
Bikini ver.

>>5109827
no, wtf is that? begs thinks it's just a matter of adding tits to anityng.

>>5109827
>>5109909
Making signatures nigh unreadable doesn't make them good

>>5109922
pyw

>>5109909
>>5109827
Here's some bullet points anon
-The facial expression might be the worst part... it's difficult to get faces on dragon-y people right having tried it myself but it just has no appeal. It looks like she's in pain, not sexy.
-Her hands are phasing into her head
-The whole pose is off balance, it looks like she's about to teeter over to the right. My guess is you got tunnel vision and didn't zoom out to look at the pose as a whole when you were doing the sketch
-Neck is pencil thin even for an animeish style
-Her legs aren't attached to her hips properly (picrel)
-The horizon in the BG looks too high to me

>>5110024
Also, nipples do not have a hole in them.

>>5109997
Pay what you want.

>>5109811

>>5109827
cursed

new sketch

>>5110024
>>5110026
Thank you anon, i'll consider all of those point next time; it is most likely i got the tunnel vision at some parts and some others just leave 'em like that for i was almost done when i noticed. anyways, thanks agaibnn and appreciate the ref example

>>5109997
you first

>>5109936
with every new drawing i tryout a new signature variant for "Ryx" until i come up with a definitive one.
i though that one looked half decent-good :(

>>5110434
Np anon, keep it up! You got this

>>5110439
I'm not the one crabbing nearly every post in this thread.

>>5110468
>post shitty beg drawing
>YOU'RE JUST CRABBING!!!! PYW!!!!

>>5110026
Well, they do kind of have holes, but they're nothing like that.

>>5110510
There is good crit and bad crit.

>>5110024
Good crit

>>5109922
Useless dumbass crab posting

>>5105071
I know this is wrong; can someone draw a red X where the butthole goes? I've done it so much everything looks wrong to me, like when you misspell the same word 300 times it still looks wrong even when it's right. Need another set of eyes.

>>5109827
im still arguably /beg/ myself so take this with a grain of salt

I kept changing the legs around so it's still pretty wip.

>why is cis girls dominating futas so hot

>>5110599
Im 12 and what is this

>>5110610
Risky Boots accidentally got a large stick stuck down her pants. Shantae's just being a good friend and helping her get it out.

>>5110599
I-I'll be in my bunk

>>5110610
MODS!!!!!!!!!
DONT LET HIM GET AWAY

dunno what the fug I'm doing with the shading
>>5107827
looks really good so far

Trying to paint better

>>5110587

>>5110657
Whelp, your certainly better than I am.

>>5110269

>>5108801
Gains goblin?

>>5110865
lmao holy shit you think that's me? it's almost nothing like my stuff

>>5110895
The face reminds me of it.
Seems like you didn’t improve at all, the last time was your autistic anatomy crap

>>5110865
that looks nothing like his style

>>5110897
what part of the face? the eyes are the only thing remotely similar, my noses are much more defined and face shapes are pretty different

>>5110587
This is a bad example
>hipbones

Also explain why you like to draw hentai fellow anons

>>5110994
I kept seeing porn where I liked the concept but hated the art style/execution so I want to take things into my own hands

>>5110905
how have you been drawing the same way without improvement for like 4 years

>>5111007
such is the life of a hyperdickfag

>>5111007
one of you thought that other guys art was my art so you're not batting 100 on reasons for me to take your critiques seriously, you wanna do something to change my style, redline it and i'll give it a study

>>5111032
people have redlined your Microcephaly heads for literally years bro. fuck outta here with this "i'll give it a study"

>>5111037
yes and i studied them and changed my head construction, you obviously just can't see it cause, again, you thought that other dude was me

>>5111043
what was the change? made the head 1inch longer? cuz that shits still missing a brain, my man. bet you won't post an old drawing next to a recent one

>>5110411
The hand looks a bit unnatural. Also, she looks a little too cramped. Maybe make the bottom of her feet facing the viewer and push her left hand holding herself up behind her for balance, and her right hand where she's drinking? I think it'd look a little more natural that way.
Bonus points for making her feet hold the drink.

>>5111054

>>5111075
that's LITERALLY the same. it's like you just scanned it and drew over it with a black brush, you lil nig nog

>>5111078
NAYRT but holy shit you can't even tell that the second head is tilted away from the viewer? Pyw you salty faggot

>>5111123
>holy shit you can't even tell that the second head is tilted away from the viewer?
explain this then samefag >>5111043

>>5110411
>>5111072
i'm still beg so I tried to take my own advice and it was a little bit more challenging than I thought. but I hope this helps foodie anon. keep it up!

>>5111007
the magic of gains goblin, funny things is he probably draw quite a lot, at least d/ic/ks can argue that they don't draw at all.

>>5109498
sorry footfags, composition is a bitch
>>5108617
https://baraag.net/@robomb
>>5110639
thank you my dude. yours is real cute too

>>5110569
WIP
Color placeholders but I might turn this into some kind of sexy alien lol

>>5111387
>cute
nah

>>5111419
i like how it kinda looks pixel-y

>>5111482
i kneel gains goblin

>>5111387
ruined

>>5110634
What the hell? Why are you freaking out and why that post got deleted?

>>5111516
Some anon posted that prehistoric meme of "I'm twelve and what is this" and I'm guessing that user and a janny didn't realise it wasn't a factual statement.

This makes me feel old.

>>5111511
Can't ruin what's already shit to begin with.

>>5111521
lmao, is this real life?

>>5111482
unironically love this. supplication style poses are so hot

>>5111516
>being this new
lol

>>5111826
>calling for deletion and deleting posts because you're a newfag not aware of classic memes
lel

>>5111829
nigga, shut ur bitchass up.

A lot of people who frequent this site are likely very young and only heard about it through YouTube or Reddit. Remember that 2007 was over 13 years ago.

does this count as sexual? I made it somewhat suggestive

>>5111941
tranny

>>5111830
umad broe

>>5111254
thanjks bro
I changed thigs up a big

The beg grind is getting a bit tiresome bros

>>5111941
nice bush. not a public hair guy, but this one looks quite pleasant.

>>5111999
and it smells good too!

>>5109827
It was bothering me so much but I couldn't pinpoint what it was...

Then it dawned on me - she needed a BUSH!

>>5109415
looks good but the head is really big.
Alternatively, you could make the body below the rib cage bigger

>>5111960
Oh yeah looks very nice! Nice placement of the cup as well. Looking forward to seeing the colors version. Try making the cup condensate, it might be a challenge.

>>5111482
ruined by the diarrhea coming out of her ass

current wip

Butthole study.

>>5112524
Face ruins it IMO

>>5112550
"Can I see your art, step son?"

>>5112938
if you're gonna draw porn you should really make your nipples more appealing. you really crank these out quickly.

>>5113048
mhm I understand
altghou I like ghost innie nipples

>>5112550
imagine being this virgin

>>5113060
most anything can be sexy if drawn well. ghost innie nips are no exception. i look forward to seeing your progress and possibly raising awareness for this type of breast. i think it would look better on bigger boobs but i'm no boob expert. There's a lot of stigma around it, especially in regards to breastfeeding. but i only saw that when looking for pic rel.

>>5110657
lol wtf am i watching. its not even bad im just generally confused. is it trying to be sexy or trying to be hideous.

This isn't supposed to be loli/shota that stuff is gross I'm just bad at drawing adults

>>5113127
whatever pedo

>>5113092
Uglycute, uglysexy? I'm not trying to sell it or anything, just doing what amuses me. But I can't paint hair

Finished.

>>5110657
Blog?

>>5112521
>her

>>5113168
hitomi tanaka but with line backer shoulders?

>>5113168
i like het face, best drawing here so far.

>>5111511
what's wrong with it

>>5111419
I have no idea what I'm doing ;_; any pointers for lighting?

>>5113454
Replace the blue with purple and you're all good

>>5113462
thanks, doc
But for real though, I'm totally at a loss

>>5113397
Don't have one right now for nsfw. Might make one eventually though
>>5113397
Fuko but I do draw Hitomi somewhat often
>>5113427
Thank you

>>5111387
>>5113443
someone sprinkled coke on her ass

>>5113473
please god, add at least 2 transitional colors between the asshole and skin.

>>5113484
you nailed her.

>>5113535
Hopefully it's not so jarring with the actual colors

>>5113473
THANKS DOC!

>>5113535
Hopefully it's not so jarring with the actual colors. Am I totally lost here or is something coming together?

>>5110865
You need glasses. Or a new brain. That's miles ahead of gains shit.

>>5111032
you fucking suck dude. 10421452151 different people told you so already, yet you still think that's not valid for some reason kek.
you simply have too little talent, that's all there is.

>>5113633
post your work

>>5113900
I'm a recognizable artist. After calling you out for being shit at art, obviouisly I'm not going to post my work.
I'm leagues above your level, that's all you need to know.

>>5113920
ah yes, you, i remember, the worlds most convenient excuse for larpers, don't worry, i'm not some cancel culture sicko, i won't tell people you frequent the chans like the guy who draws slylock fox

>>5113900
fucking pinnochio face
your faces are shit
>not a samefag

>>5113920
NAYRT but why are you giving criticism if youre not going to back things up
If you don't want your name attached to toxic critique just dont be toxic
Unless this is just a larp and you just want to crab

>>5113920
If you're a recognisable artist then you be busying yourself creating content, not wasting your time dunking on anons on a Mongolian fish exchange bureau.

Who fucking cares if GG is drawing weird microcephaly goblins. I personally don't find his art appealing, but it's nice to see a recognisable artist posting regularly, and honestly he produces content at a speed I could never achieve. It's also important to note - he's not asking for criticism in the first place. If he doesn't want to improvae, or wants to improve in his own way, let him. I'd happily join in on the dunking if he was asking for criticisms, but he's not, so who tf cares.

This is why this board has barely any sense of community any more, everybody gets run off by fucking crabs and anonymous picksme's.

Proportions looking wonky so far?

>>5114075
whats a picksme

>>5114124
post ref

>>5114157
No ref, from imagination

>>5114124
hah, benis

>>5113484
Oh god I’m gonna coom

>>5113924
I gave you sound critique several times in the past years and you never listened. You are going to get only shit from me. Learn to draw, talentlet.

>>5113948
>>5114075
Read above. Gains Goblin deserves only crap and nothing else. Literal autist that shouldn't be allowed on the internet.

>>5105418
Made me kek

why are you all drawing this gay futa shit or some weird dragons

>>5114250
Some people aren't straight/don't like pussy/want to fuck dragons. Draw your own shit if you don't like it or close the tab. What a weird place to have your sensibilities flustered while contributing nothing besides unhelpful whining.

>>5114233
Hope we're not hiding hands out of laziness anon
I like how hefty everything feels

>>5113585
No lie, it looks like a pogchamp mouth
Maybe desaturate the pink more?

>>5108464
might be a bit late on this but I rounded out the bottom of the breast and tried to add some dept to the face.

>>5114368
this is not how the mouth is supposed to look based on the style he is trying to emulate, don't try to fix something stylized with realism
she is not even smiling anymore

>>5114368
>>5114396

I sorta copied this, when I saw this I thought it was perfect for my drawing

>>5113900
you made him girly legs and a troll face, wtf is suppose to be that?

where do you reference penises?

>>5114756
Buy a dildo

>>5114756
Ask you mom to show you her dong

>>5114162
thats amazing then

>>5114756
google them, like you would for literally any other reference if you couldn't find one irl? are you stupid?

>>5114756
/hm/ literally has a thread about dicks going on right now

>>5114270
>>5113585
Desaturated the pink, looking better? How's the placement of the anus and balls?

>>5115288
tentative alternate placement of the anus and balls - better or worse?

>>5115288
>>5115341
For someone that tan, the asshole should lean more toward red/brown than bubblegum pink. Also, for asscheeks that fat, it would be more recessed and hidden in between them unless she was spreading her cheeks/bending over. getting rid of the cleavage at the top would sell it as more realistic placement since I'm assuming the detailed butthole is a key part of this for you. I'm also going to assume its meant to be gaping like that?

>>5115368
Alright, thanks, I'll take a look at it. I'm keeping the cleavage because I like the way it looks, and yeah detailed and gaping is intentional.

>>5108298
some set their accounts with sensitive material so retards dont see that content

>>5113920
Oh hi MarmaladeMum.

>>5114233
nice style anon
>>5115436
disgusting

>>5108920
I would love to see the finished version. this looks hella promising. keep it up pal!

alright im just gonna fix the hair then im gonna consider this one finished

>>5115464
hey pal, good news, i posted it here >>5111482

>>5115469
god im so lonely and getting a bit horny

>>5114233
god thats fucking sexy

muddy

>>5115473
color this please, I love this kind of pose but I can't stop thinking that its diarrhea after the other guy said it

>>5115483
it's in white, it's obviously cum, i have no idea where they even got that thought

>>5110587
Original artist here
I can see the improvements on the lineart proportions, especially on the lifted arms, neck and mouth, thank you anon, it helps :)

>>5110994
Theres artist out there that really make good arousing or fapable pieces and yet the character or drawing itself is so charming. I wanna get to the point where i feel proud for the quality of my drawings and emotions they give me. Not only applies for the nsfw. About the the “hentai” thing, i like the detail on simplicity, looks good without it being forced to detail. Depending on the references and artis, a lot can be learned.

>>5112046
Well, this is something

I like what you did with the lights, i have a hard time figuring out where lights should go depending in direction, you gave it a smoother look, looks cool

>>5114233
So far, so good i guess

This one is a wip i left undone for a month and want to retake it, i know it have some weak points, i take a guess on the near hand and crossed legs, it was my first trying the pose
Any advice?

>>5115591
/beg/ here but it looks like her right boob is much bigger than her left? Or is like creeping towards the viewer too much? It's a nice pic though

>>5115642
Hmm you got a nice point there, i can see it, i’ll make some edits to give it more proper persepctive.

Thanks anon! Appreciated

I'm lewding someone's special OC without their permission, color not done yet, she is like a lesbian WWE wrestling presona or something. Any advice? She's supposed to be a 6'4 giga lesbo not sure if the guy fucking her is small enough to make her look the part?
> Prompt was to "make a simp looking faggot rape this cringe lesbo"
Any criticism welcome, thanks

>>5115885
She looks like she's limply gripping the rope instead of squeezing it as hard as she can

>>5115885
Why add the edgy descriptor? Literally it contributes nothing to the image and nobody would have known had you not announced it. Here's your attention I guess.

Anyways the guy fucking her looks weird because it looks like you used a completely different brush or something. Also his hand on the ass just seems to be lightly resting there and not gripping anything. Deeper skin indentations/ the flesh dipping where it's grabbed would help sell the illusion of more force.

>>5115902

>Make her grip
Shit, good point.

>>5115905
>Fuzzy lines, probably due to scaling, will do another pass thanks. Also description was there to be edgy, come on dawg, you answered your own question.

>>5115885
>simp looking faggot
that one looks like a psychotic crackhead
maybe go for a more soiboy-ish look
>glasses
>beard
>chubbyfat
>open mouth
only critique is the hands though
they feel very flat in terms of form and gesture
basically seconding what this anon said>>5115905

>>5115885
is this the power of anime?

>>5115937
nice moustache bro, detail it a little more

>>5115949
lol yeah, i will

>>5113900
Where are his back muscles Gains Goblin, what have you done to them? You know, if you insist on using hard lines to define every muscle and fold on the body you could at least study them.

>>5115950
nice hands

>>5115945
KORE GA ORE NO SUKEBE POWAA DA

>>5114368
atleast you guys tried, now step aside

>>5115962
lmao why are you so fuckin' mean to meeeee!!!!

>>5115469
why is she naked? does her butt stink?
sometimes i think about girls poop in their butt, how they seem to poop a lot less than us so the poop probably gets a lot harder and sits at the end of their colon for a really long time, fermenting. i wouldnt be able to comfortably walk around naked like that, constantly concerned that my butt is release smells. thatd be gross, wouldnt it?

>>5115988
haha yeah

>>5115469
Really like your style, see a little pokemon and splatoon in there. What are some of your influences?

>>5115469
I like her. She is cute, has meaningful expression, and is well-endowed in all them right places. However, I think cutting out them feet this close to their end was a mistake that messes with the perception and adds the feeling of an image that was cropped. You should've either include the feet entirely or cut much more of them to prevent such feeling. Just my opinion, of course.

>>5116038
Gonna second this
looks like you just wanted to avoid drawing feet
Which is weird because it looks like you can draw feet.

More obnoxious dicks

>>5115469
twitter pls

>>5113065
aaand now I wanna have this shirt.

Anyone got some good tutorials on drawing cocks?

>>5116080
Looking really good. Are you going to clean up the lines?

You ever make porn you're just too embarrassed to post or sign with your signature?

the cringe dialogue that you thought was hot af, would just sound stupid to your followers.

the subject matter that made you hard as diamonds would have anyone that sees it smash that unfollow button.

fml, sometimes I wish i wasn't so degenerate. Or atleast, so autistic I couldn't fathom humility.

Still trying to figure out a pleasing style with b&w. Feel like I'm being almost being too tight with my lines...idk, who the fuck knows anything when it comes to art....

>>5115945

>KEK, in deed it is.

But for real tho, the concept art/ref has a weird anime nose, I'll add more form, idk when detail it too much it starts to look like a jew nose tho.

>>5115950
suki desu

>>5115937

there are plenty of skinny simps what is this all simps are fat shit?

>hands need work, got chu yeah imma make her and the crackhead feel more grabby

>>5115885
>>5116815
>>5115945

>>5116870

>holy shit, this fucking guy

yeah yeah yeah, it looks like shit im tryna work over here.

What's terrible about this? Inb4 'everything'. If so, please at least try to explain why. It's a WIP, the coloring and shading are still incomplete obviously. Was going to finish them, maybe clean up the lines some more. But if at least one of the versions is unsalvageable, I'd rather not bother. Don't like being a quitter, but perspective warping those letters properly is a pain, I'm not that passionate about the character, the requester bailed and I've got a couple of new ideas I'd rather focus on right now.

>>5116361
This one seems ok.

My Pogo trainer, but I need to fix the Glaceon. I wanted it stepping on booba, but didn't really consider the distance required between them in my sketch.

>>5116368
Oh for sure, buddy in the back isnt done either. This twink will be obliterated in crisp HD

>>5116686
Be the cringe, learn from the cringe.
Also erotic dialogue is really, really difficult to do.
That's why in most porn you just have a few lines or really uneloquent and almost childish dialogue or none at all.
If the image speaks for itself, you don't need words.
>>5116868
Seems like the most fitting and believable stereotype.
>>5116766
Honestly looks pretty good at first glance.
The only fault i can see upon further inspection is that you need more consistent lineweight.
Keep going, anon.
>who the fuck knows anything when it comes to art
bad mindset, other people have eyes too, you don't have to take everything others say as gospel but sometimes even the words of a jester are worth considering.
>>5117012
First thing that stands out is the nose on both and the eyes, the arm, the hand and the awkward pose on the second one.
The lines need some more refinement and consistency.
>but if one is unsalvageable
If you don't want to draw then don't and come back to it once you have more exp.
You'll break yourself by "not being a quitter".

>>5117016
God speed, anon

>>5117149
>is the nose on both and the eyes
Perhaps it's just the style she was originally drawn in? I was trying to make things relatively on-model. Here's the character I was drawing:
https://files.catbox.moe/2b4hbl.jpg
I'm just sick of the phase when I abandoned drawings as soon as I hit a roadblock and ended up never finishing anything. I started taking up requests so another person waiting for the pic would motivate me to finish and grind.
>>5117162
Do you mean I should keep at it or dissing? Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings, I've been desensetized to trolls

>>5116870

upscaled my whole pic, doing a more realistic face? idk will try to keep as ,uch anime in there as i can.

>>5117213
I meant it as a thank you lmao, if you got any more feel free to share. I aint here to be a dick

Not really coom but any appeal and anatomy crits for my bike girl?

>>5117330
Bike looks good.
Finish it before you want crits on anatomy.

>>5117334
Okay! How’s the proportions and perspective on the girl first?

>>5117337
head too big.

new
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