Sexual Alternative Art/Stylization Thread

[Anonymous No.5074966]

Previous thread: >>5055055

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.5074971]

OOGA BOOBA

[Anonymous No.5074981]

Fishsticks.

[Anonymous No.5074983]

>>5074966
This board has many faggots and trannies. More than most boards. Why are artists disproportionately faggots and trannies?

[Anonymous No.5074984]

HUBBA HUBBA

[Anonymous No.5074986]

>>5074981
Christ, did you even bother constructing? Sidon's torso is a frackin' sphere.

[Anonymous No.5074990]

reposting here since the other thread is dead. thoughts?

[Anonymous No.5074991]

>>5074986
I did, my construction is just bad. I'm super into the large torso/tiny waist aesthetic so I might have extrapolated a tad...

[Anonymous No.5074993]

>>5074990
It's all totally pillow shaded. Choose a light direction and stick with it.

[Anonymous No.5074995]

>>5074981
your lineart and colors are great, but that torso scares me

[Anonymous No.5074996]

>>5074991
That's not the problem. His back is angled pointing to the left of the canvas, and we can see the other side of his trapezius, but his shoulder is completely visible on the right side. That means his arm would have to stretch an entire forearm's length to get there. It's beyond style, it's totally broken/detached.

[Anonymous No.5074999]

>>5074991
>>5074996
Also to add on, you're beginning to polish the piece before you've even completed the sketch. that's just asking for trouble.

[Anonymous No.5075000]

>>5074996
Aha, you're right, and looking at it as a thumbnail on my phone only makes it more obvious. Guess I'll have to wheel the boyfriend out and get him to pose for me and make some corrections.

[Anonymous No.5075008]

>>5074983
Artist are mentally ill.
More at 5

[Anonymous No.5075166]

What brushes do you guys use to sketch?

[Anonymous No.5075167]

>>5075166
Hard round brush, but unironically

[Anonymous No.5075170]

>>5075166
hard round, with pressure/opacity control on. been using this one lately, nothing special

[Anonymous No.5075199]

Any tips for shading? I can't feel the form

[Anonymous No.5075200]

Tried drawing coom art for the first time. I got really into it first then i realized 4 hours had passed by and now i have the worst case of blue balls ive ever had. I almost cant sit down anymore. How do you fucks deal with it? This was the first and the last time i do this.

[Anonymous No.5075243]

>>5074981
Please make a video on your colouring process

[Anonymous No.5075351]

are the cumshots FEELING THE FORM?

[Anonymous No.5075365]

>>5074966
hello! does anyone have an image macro or tutorial about drawing v-va-vaginas?

[Anonymous No.5075430]

>>5075199
Don't think of it as shading, think of it as lighting and rendering.
Try starting with the darkest color then building up to the lightest.

[Anonymous No.5075445]

How does boob squish work with cups D and up?

>>5074990
I'm disturbed yet strangely intrigued, cool except for the weird lighting.

>>5075351
I like drawing cum more fluffy like you have right now but if you're going for a more realistic approach I'd say it's just a lil too thick.

[Anonymous No.5075601]

>>5074995
Yeah, it scares me too after a night of sleep.

[Anonymous No.5075625]

>>5075445
>How does boob squish work with cups D and up?
Look up the artist Venusflowerrr. She draws stuff self titled as "liquid girls". Very squishy.

[Anonymous No.5075731]

>>5075445
I remember watching a reiq tutorial on how to draw boobs with water balloons, that might help

[Anonymous No.5075743]

>>5075351
sauce for pose?

[Anonymous No.5075747]

>>5075743
nvermind, stephie_martine twitter

[Anonymous No.5075809]

working on sharping this image, any tummy bros got suggestions for the shading of torso and pubic area?

>>5075351
hot

>>5074990
like the subject matter but I would suggest you focus on the lighting, I like the rendering of the bottom ass, use that as a base and direction to light the rest of the girls.

[Anonymous No.5075821]

>>5075809
Booba

[Anonymous No.5075891]

>>5074966
Lewd femboy but needs more hooters.

[Anonymous No.5075930]

is it doo dark? the draw thread was kinda useless, but one guy insisted it’s too dark and he can’t see shit, and insisted I had to introduce more light, but he said the same about random paintings I pulled up that look good to me

[Anonymous No.5075935]

>>5075930
can't see shit

[Anonymous No.5075937]

>>5075930
pic related has a similar key, but I think the shapes and values are played against each other better than what I managed
in general I find artists I like use low keys fairly often, is it unappealing to most people or something?

[Anonymous No.5075942]

>>5075935
that’s not useful, would you say the same of >>5075937 or pic related and if not, what is the key difference?

[Anonymous No.5075961]

>>5075930
Could be your computer screen.

[Anonymous No.5075969]

>>5075961
i’m on an ipad in a lit room, and nowhere near max brightness
is it significantly worse than >>5075937 or >>5075942 ?

[Anonymous No.5076005]

>>5075969
It's ridiculously dark to other images on this board, put it that way.
Not enough contrast?

[Anonymous No.5076010]

>>5075937
this one works because
a) face taking big part of the picture, obviously will pull your attention
b) saturated color on eyes and lips against otherwise brown-black background, creating contrast and further pulling your attention
c) thick lines and unnaturally bright highlights help defining forms even despite darkness
>>5075942
these two are completely different subjects
creature with glowing eyes and barely visible silhouette is 101 of making scary monster images
melancholy of being an eternal anglo can't be shown using bright colors
you can't do this when drawing coom, your need to make sure that expression of character is clearly conveyed, forms of body are visible and skin looks healthy

[Anonymous No.5076024]

>>5076010
I don't know about you, but I couldn't tell what that pic was from the thumbnail. That's probably a sign that it is lacking contrast.

[Anonymous No.5076091]

When I draw a face, I immediately come up with a background story for that character, anyone else does this?

For this one, Sister Jeanne, she is a nun in a small reclusive village, she has high moral standarts,high sense of duty and a big devotion towards the old deities. To the point that others perceive her as annoying.
Ironically, she has a bastard son at home whom she keeps secret from everyone else. They are poor and share a bed.
When her son thinks she is asleep, he slithers in his dick into her. He has done it so many times, he wonders whether she lets it happen because she secretly likes it or if she is too tired to wake up from it. He makes her moan, though. He is also worried that he'll get to that age where his semen could impregnate her.

[Anonymous No.5076148]

>>5074981
sooo, are you gonna draw lara croft with a huge cock or what? I've been waiting forever... :)

[Anonymous No.5076385]

wip

[Anonymous No.5076461]

>>5075930
Notice that essentially no part of the characters in >>5075937 are pure black, only really deep occlusions like inside her mouth or under her chest. In your pic all the shadows go completely to black. One is clearly separate from the background, the other is not.

[Anonymous No.5076466]

[Anonymous No.5076467]

[Anonymous No.5076588]

Why is it so hard to do imagination sex drawings? I think I've gotten to the point where I can decently copy figures and do figure drawing, but the second I try to add in a male actually doing the sex, the image turns flat and static because (I assume) I cant convey dynamic interaction between two characters and maybe proper form interaction as well, and maybe flat perspective
Pic related. Right is my attempt at imagination. Left is after I drew the pic on the right, went online and looked through a bunch of pictures till I found something similar to what I had in mind, edited it, and copied it quickly.
What exercises and practice should I do to remedy this? Or should I just always use a ref for this kind of stuff? (Was trying to draw shortstacks if anyones wondering) Also yes I am pretty beg

[Anonymous No.5076687]

>>5076461
no, I think >>5076010 nailed it, mine lacks well structured color fields and actual blacks to contrast the saturated darks, and the range is shorter towards the top
on my screen, there are clearly only a couple of small areas that are black, and those are areas of heavy occlusion, I think adding blacks between the two bodies either as lines or ambient occlusion (which I forgot to do because I’m retarded) would have helped seperate them and clarify the saturated darks, all of which are too far from actual blacks to contrast them right now
I failed to reinforce the blacks, making my darks effectively replace them
pic related the incase pic (top) and mine, left is just the 3 bodies for incase and the orc for mine, right is same but without the hair on both and the glove for incase, since they are all dark
I also cut out most of the outer lineart for incase

also, is there a rule of thumb for where the black cutoff is for digital?
obviously it depends on the hue, but just in general?

[Anonymous No.5076696]

>>5076010
>>5076461
tl;dr: I fucked up on both ends
maybe this can be salvaged by narrowing the output on both ends and reinstating the lights and the darks manually, not sure if I’m going to try
although I should also check this on a computer screen, since I only looked at it on an ipad and iphone, and it could look completely different on the average monitor for all I know

[Anonymous No.5076699]

>>5076467
Cool construction, more

[Anonymous No.5076700]

>>5076466
neat

[Anonymous No.5076704]

>>5075743

[Anonymous No.5076711]

>>5075445
I'm going for a very cartoonish colored goo for my cum

[Anonymous No.5076804]

[Anonymous No.5076824]

i fucking hate when the auto tool doesnt work and i have to go back and fix shit

how do you set the auto tool?

[Anonymous No.5076868]

>>5076824
I fucking hate that this is off centre. Please fix. It's triggering me.

[Anonymous No.5076916]

>>5076824
I really like the rendering on the bottom of the dress and the hair for the blue girl, what program are you using?

[Anonymous No.5076980]

>>5074993
>>5075445
>>5075809
Gotcha bros. I'm working on it

[Anonymous No.5077264]

>>5076916
Clip studio paint base edition

[Anonymous No.5077272]

>>5077264
thanks senpai, looks like you can get some cute results, will try out.

[Anonymous No.5077287]

>>5076704
what in god's name is up with that shoulder

[Anonymous No.5077461]

Should i use thinner lines or its fine like that?

[Anonymous No.5077566]

>>5076804
Needs more line weight variation.

[Anonymous No.5077579]

>>5077287
The arm is rotated outside to the maximum. Kinda uncomfortable.

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5077651]

>>5077461
On top of this stuff mentioned in the picture, a general study of anatomy and how things like breasts squish should be on the top of your list right now. Also, you should spend more time on your lines.

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5077665]

>>5075930
Nothing a little overlay and rim light can't fix. Though I'm sure you can make it look much better than I did in my quickie here. Also, those tentacles look way too dry to be lewd. Your pic needs more wetness.
>this might double post because it said connection error

[Anonymous No.5077679]

>>5075445
I love the feel of this drawing and the toony/stylized face with thicc muscular anatomy.

But your construction is broken. Her neck should be more engaged and her shoulder in that pose and in that perspective would have a slight upward tilt. Try using the pose more too with her neck, its very static compared to the rest of her. Try redrawing this flipped and redo the gesture line from the waist up to see where her spine should be and build your torso out from there.

Also the divot in her ribcage and cleavage looks weird and less like muscle and more like shrinkwrap anorexic. Your style is very cute but a little stiff. Loosen it up with more curved gesture and study body language.

[Anonymous No.5077695]

>>5076467
blog

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5077701]

>>5077272
You're art would look much better if you drew in the pelvis and learned a bit more anatomy. I know Loomis is memed a lot, but he's good for beginners who are still learning the proportions of the body. Even I read him starting out and I still go back sometimes to see if I forgot anything.

[Anonymous No.5077732]

>>5076385
Cute. Blog?

[Anonymous No.5077737]

>>5077701
pls do me
>>5070866

[Anonymous No.5077761]

sketches from today

[Anonymous No.5077766]

sketches from today

[Anonymous No.5077838]

>>5076916
>>5077272
this is good shit anon
>>5077665
so is this

[Anonymous No.5077855]

>>5077701
Not any of the people who posted art, just wanted to say you're very cool. There's so much useful stuff to unpack from your posts.

[Anonymous No.5077960]

>>5077701
if you dont mind humoring me, im curious about your construction, why is the stomach a sliver of the area? i've always kind of just seen that area as "flank" or muscle connecting the ribcage blocks to the pelvis blocks. do you follow any rules for connecting those two? mine are often too short or too long.

id also like to see how you'd construct the arms from this point, because I have a lot of trouble with connecting mine to ribcages properly

[Anonymous No.5077978]

>>5077651
Agree that mirroring is lazy, tried to save some time.
Will avoid it for sure.
Most of stuff you mention i add in rendering but tip like butthole following surface is extreme helpful, thank you.

>>5077732
https://twitter.com/Raxav_art

[Anonymous No.5078457]

>>5077566

[Anonymous No.5078473]

>>5077766
any socials?

[Anonymous No.5078709]

how do you get in the mood to draw in those day where you suck at it?

[Anonymous No.5078726]

>>5078457
This turns me on more than it should. It looks nice!

[Anonymous No.5078799]

>>5078709
just sketch random shit so it doesn’t matter if it sucks
worst case scenario, you drew something for no reason

[Marmalade Mum !!/jEy5tHwk1+ No.5078834]

>>5077960
>why is the stomach a sliver of the area
The stomach is a very flexible area. I happened to outline the part of the stomach that was in the "squish" stage. If you look to the opposite side, it's much larger and in the "stretch" stage from the character being leaned back.

>>5077737
I don't have time to do any more red lines for a while. I just happened to have some free time at 12am last night to do some quickies. A word of advice though, you should look at some 3D scans of people on Sketchfab or something and observe how they look from extreme angles. Your perspective and knowledge of how things look at different angles is lacking. It's all very flat.

[Anonymous No.5078958]

>>5078726
thx

[Anonymous No.5078967]

>>5078958
Do you have a blog? I love your style.

[Anonymous No.5078982]

>>5078967
not yet, going to set one up . anything better than twitter?

[Anonymous No.5078994]

>>5078982
Twitter tends to be the standard place, but there are also sites like DeviantArt and Pixiv. However, those tend to be used in conjunction with Twitter.

[Anonymous No.5079010]

>>5077701
thank you marmalade mummy, you are absolutely right. I didn't realize how big the pelvis was. I will keep practicing.

>>5077838
thanks my man, good progress on your lewd orc

>>5077766
yummy

[Anonymous No.5079021]

>>5079010
The pelvis tends to be 1 head tall I think.

[Anonymous No.5079096]

>>5079021
>>5077701
is the thing the make thicc hips a conjunction of the pelvic and thigh bones or a simply a wider pelvic bone structure?

>>5077665
nice, love the wet gloss of the feet and tentacle.

[Anonymous No.5079171]

So I've been working on this for a lot of hours, it was supposed to be a sketch with no references, but I decided to finish her. Diss me guys

[Anonymous No.5079173]

>>5079171
needs to be put in some context to be hot, I hab\ve no idea what I’m looking at, an alien, some personification of space?
also
>onion rings
no thanks

[Anonymous No.5079207]

>>5076467
blog?

[Anonymous No.5079211]

>>5076091
Well you certainly did a good job getting that pic to carry a sense of character. You got a social?

[Anonymous No.5079219]

>>5079171
nice colors, keep grinding the anatomy

[Anonymous No.5079221]

I would not cum to anything in this thread

[Anonymous No.5079305]

I thought I did okay on making the muscles 'soft' and squishy.

I have concerns about the stiff posing most prevalent on the right arm.

what do you all think

[Anonymous No.5079315]

>>5079305
nigga, look at the left arm

[Anonymous No.5079381]

>>5079305
?

[Anonymous No.5079446]

>>5078473
not at the moment, transitioning to new accounts

[Anonymous No.5079543]

>>5076466
Boobs: Big
Penis: Big

Nice

[Anonymous No.5079664]

Finished, open for critique.

[Anonymous No.5079717]

>>5079315
>>5079381
>mfw forgetting arm's perspective & fucking up anatomy
thanks guys
I'll keep grindin some more.

[Anonymous No.5079747]

>>5079664
The metacarpus is not proportional with the fingers, and the hand over all would be out of proportion from the figure entirely but at least you didn't hide them. Instead of hiding forms you do not understand with hair, study how the pectoralis major connects to the humerus and how the deltoid overlaps essentially creating the shoulder girdle. The nipples on the breasts are not dead center rather they're more at a 60 degree angle, a good method to find the area of correct placement is to start from the center of the top of the sternum and imagine a 60 degree curve running across the torso regardless of breast size. Stop abusing the airbrush tool otherwise you will end up with a pillow shading effect, study the planes of the figure and learn to block in forms all the while observing the halftones between light and shadow. The Line quality is sloppy and because all the lines are too thick the entire figure appears to be flat, study good line art and learn how to convey form with line for example contrast between thicker and thinner lines to imply a stretch or an overlap of a form.

If you can't be assed to read the above text to put it simple terms - it's shit.

[Anonymous No.5079753]

>>5079664
Love the colors in the hair, and the details, like those nipples. I would highly recommend you to work more on the lineart aaaaaand a little bit on anatomy. Nice job

[Anonymous No.5079756]

>>5079747
Ride never ends right? Thanks for substantive explanation, I appreciate it
Will focus on anatomy today directly on parts you mentioned.

[Anonymous No.5079805]

>>5079664
holy fuck please learn to draw boobs

[Anonymous No.5079882]

>>5076588
You need more experience with multiple figures AND background before you go onto drawing sex from imagination. Basically you have trouble with properly placing figures relative to each other, plus all the deformations on the body due to movement, pressure and so on. I'd recommend you try drawing dancing pairs from reference paying a lot of attention to gesture.

[Anonymous No.5080210]

>>5078834
thanks for replying even though you're busy! You're definitely right, I'll try working on that some more.

[Anonymous No.5080211]

>>5078834
thanks for replying even though you're busy! You're definitely right, I'll try working on that some more.

[Anonymous No.5080406]

>>5075930
On my PC it looks perfect.

[Anonymous No.5082084]

I tried to censor it so i wouldnt get banned for furry porn, but can i get some assistance with the lights coloring and anatomy please? trying to learn digital paint in csp is something that i have struggled with for a long time.

Thanks lads

[Anonymous No.5082797]

>>5082084
Improve your boobs physics, colors are not bad but you can try lightning with a clearer color. Nice

[Anonymous No.5082819]

how do you draw background with perspective without losing soul?

[Anonymous No.5083800]

I tried drawing the new Dota hero, not aiming to be very on-model. I feel like it's a bit better than my last few pics but still not very appealing. I know it's not feasible to ask for redlines or anything since it's furry, but any general tips? Think cleaner lines or maybe ditching the pencil brush would somehow make it produce more boners?

Pic is reference, link is my (NSFW furry) pic: https://twitter.com/Akaece8/status/1339785201518587904

[Anonymous No.5084097]

[Anonymous No.5084105]

>>5084097
good shit but not how socks work
they stretch and fold, they generally don't conform to the toes like that, and they certainly don't go between each individual toe
i really like feet and socks so i have a bit of extra autism about this but they are the thing most in the foreground of the image

[Anonymous No.5084115]

>>5084105
I agree with you, but this was commissioned by someone who specifically asked for toe details through the socks due to their foot fetish. What would you prefer instead if you don't mind helping me out?

[Anonymous No.5084122]

>>5084115
damn
i spit on that fucker then, shit taste
i think that on male (or at least muscular) characters having the socks be loose is generally better
the kind of toe detail i like to see would be like, if they spread their toes, the outline of/stretch between the outermost ones
if they're loose enough, maybe pinched between a couple toes, maybe like they're playing with the fabric a bit but i can see that being hard to convey
but you probably gave them exactly what they wanted so it's fine

[Anonymous No.5084124]

>>5084122
gotcha, thanks for the crit anon!

[Anonymous No.5084687]

>>5079207
>>5077695
@lambrey5 on Twitter

[Anonymous No.5084694]

>>5084115
i’m not a sock autist, but if you want to make it better, you could look at nylon socks, they sorta work like your pic, you could make it a sporty sock with padded bottom but breathable mesh on top and apply a nylon look to it

[Anonymous No.5084982]

why i cant feel anything even if i got 250 likes in less than 24 hours on twitter

[Anonymous No.5084992]

>>5084982
Because living for validation is ultimately a fruitless endeavor.
Only YOU can truly make yourself happy. Only YOU can ever know how you truly feel.

[Anonymous No.5085001]

>>5084992
Or drugs

[Anonymous No.5085031]

>>5084982
brah i post a video i took of my dog on my SFW and get more likes than even better artists get on their pics
porn especially is a hollow endeavor if you aren't satisfied with making a few hundred people a little hornier

[Anonymous No.5085053]

>>5084982
>tfw I don’t even get replies in drawthreads
life is pain, and I’m living to the fullest

[Anonymous No.5085096]

>>5077651
>>5077665
>>5077701
Heya, when are you open for commissions again?

[Anonymous No.5085106]

>>5084687
Lambrey I just wanted to let you know you are the best artist in this site (at least that's my opinion).
How did you go about studying Kim Jung Gi? did you just copy his drawings or did you use some construction for each one?

[Anonymous No.5085172]

[Anonymous No.5085179]

>>5076091
Still didn't go to the therapist?

[Anonymous No.5085183]

I can't imagine why anyone would draw porn if not to please themself. If I had no sex drive, I would not draw it. Probably wouldn't even draw women. Maybe animals or plants. Some dumb shit like that.

[Anonymous No.5085185]

>>5084982
Cause that's shitty numbers?

[Anonymous No.5085420]

>>5084982
I was like you when I started but now hitting 1k likes feels like nothing

[Anonymous No.5085505]

>>5076467
>>5084687
Your going to be big one day

[Anonymous No.5085685]

>>5085505
he could already be big if he'd stop deleting his fuckin accounts or whatever

[Anonymous No.5085731]

[Anonymous No.5085797]

Merry Christmas salt

[Anonymous No.5085823]

>>5085797
when you draw that?

[Anonymous No.5085836]

>>5085823
Over yesterday and today.

[Anonymous No.5085846]

>>5085836
Man seen your piece on twitter made me wanna do something but i don't think I'm gonna make it

[Anonymous No.5085852]

>>5085846
Ayy nice looking good. You can do it!

[Anonymous No.5085856]

>>5085685
I dont want to get big off porn, or really in general. I think its possible to make tasteful porn that you can be proud of but thats not really what im producing at the moment

[Anonymous No.5085953]

Posted this in /aco/ but figured you guys might like this as well. It's one of several animations I'm working on that deal with monster girls, but they are supposed to resemble animals that aren't steretypically made into monster girls. The woman in this animation is based off of the sockeye salmon found in Alaska.
I hope it becomes more obvious once I clean it up and color it. Let me know what you guys think

[Anonymous No.5086000]

something I have worked on with that reference, what do you think?

[Anonymous No.5086002]

>>5085797
This is some serious good shit

[Anonymous No.5086008]

>>5086002
Damn dude thank you!

[Anonymous No.5086010]

>>5086000
Neck is too long. Also, you're missing her left shoulder that's showing up a bit behind her back. Nice hair, though.

[Anonymous No.5086015]

>>5086010
thanks for the reply!

[Anonymous No.5086287]

>>5086015

Yw, ngmi.

[Anonymous No.5086321]

>>5085856
tasteful porn is an oxymoron and you can’t find a single example of it in any form whatsoever

[Anonymous No.5086326]

>>5086321
maybe not tasteful porn, but tasteful coom is def a thing

[Anonymous No.5086329]

>>5086326

[Anonymous No.5086340]

>>5086326
>>5086329
>coom
go back

[Anonymous No.5086343]

>>5086326
neither titillating nor tasteful
>>5086329
nothing tasteful about it

[Anonymous No.5086344]

>>5086326
I really like Pigeon's "style", I just really dislike the colors he uses / how he uses colors, I feel like it's one of those things that will age horribly in a few years.

[Anonymous No.5086374]

any redline/suggestions appreciated. ty and merry xmas /salt/

[Anonymous No.5086412]

any redline/suggestions appreciated. happy xmas /salt/

[Anonymous No.5086510]

>>5086412
Not bad anon, but check her proportions, mostly in her waist and her feet

[Anonymous No.5086859]

is this sexy

[Anonymous No.5086872]

>>5086859
yes

[Anonymous No.5086875]

>>5086326
why does that man have tits?

[Anonymous No.5086876]

>>5086859
if i was into amputees then sure

[Anonymous No.5087044]

>>5086340
>>5086343
I guess in the end its subjective. I can unironically get off on imagining the first pic
>>5086344
really? I actually love it. Although I think its carried by the amount of tiny, delicate details in his drawings. I don't think it would work if that wasn't the case. I can see how how people would dislike it though

[Anonymous No.5087192]

>>5084982
youre almost awake

[Anonymous No.5087265]

[Anonymous No.5087299]

[Anonymous No.5087347]

should've planned for the text better

[Anonymous No.5087616]

>>5078967
https://twitter.com/sodomanic
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/62908336

faces are... hard, need a redline or tips
overrendering aint cute, but underrending is flat and no matter how i tweak the proportions it's off. trying to do frontal of >>5078457 which i got really lucky with. and any glaring issues with the colors?

>>5087265
very clean. nice expression with just eyes. shoes maybe a tad too small. ass also seems to stick out a tad bit too far for the size of her thighs/center of hips

[Anonymous No.5087666]

>>5087616
thank you

[Anonymous No.5087687]

hello /salt/, how would you go about drawing big boobs seen from below?
my anatomy is bad so i'm struggling to make them look attached to the body

[Anonymous No.5087757]

>>5087616
Nice! Thanks for the links. I look forward to seeing your future works!

[Anonymous No.5087900]

>>5074966
Made animated NSFW version of Aphrodite.

[Anonymous No.5087904]

>>5086412

not sure how to fix the feet so i moved on lol

[Anonymous No.5087906]

>>5087900

the pelvis is so long n narrow it looks like you used a man as a ref for the lower half

[Anonymous No.5087914]

>>5087900
Left hip should "jut" out more, for lack of a better word. Her torso being straight up-and-down like that looks odd and doesn't work with the leg placement.
Also, where is her left arm?
I can't really find the right words today, but I hope you understand what I'm getting at.

[Anonymous No.5087916]

>>5087914
Her arm is not there because I spend too much time on my works and want to cut corners.

[Anonymous No.5087917]

>>5086875
>not liking men with tits

[Anonymous No.5087934]

>>5087904
this looks really stiff. did you trace a 3d model and then exaggerate the boobs/ass?

[Anonymous No.5087948]

>>5087934

nope there is no 3d model, here is my shitty sketch underlayer. probably should have used a model though.

[Anonymous No.5087949]

>>5087948
forgot img

[Anonymous No.5088311]

>>5087900
I like! For the size of the image, the blur doesn't have much impact, it's too subtle. Maybe it'd be clearer in a webm. Could you animate the whole mass of hair to slightly undulate? Seems stiff otherwise. The strands censoring her bits are a nice touch though, could be fun to animate them cycling through each censored point instead of revealing all at once, if that makes sense--may lead the eye around more.

[Anonymous No.5088435]

Why twitter filter my shit even when they are sfw?

[Anonymous No.5088479]

>>5088311
>Could you animate the whole mass of hair to slightly undulate?
I don't understand, you want me to animate all the hair or you want me to use different timecodes to stop the simultaneous movement of the hair? Currently I use the 1 step -> 2 step -> 1 step loop where each mesh/detail changes its shape at the same time at the 2nd step and then goes back to the 1st, almost simultaneosly, with others. It would be nice to use different timecodes but it will require production of loops longer than 3-4 seconds and it makes gif INCREDIBLY heavy. I can't use mp4 because not all web sites support this extension. I would be happy if people taught me how to make low weight gifs. The in-build Live2D gif export produces gifs around 5-7mb per 3 second long loop, I have to compress the gifs on ezgif.com just to post them on 4chan

[Anonymous No.5088926]

i did christmas collage

[Anonymous No.5089053]

>>5088926
good progression so far. gmi... Just keep going

[Anonymous No.5089142]

>>5086000
You are symbol drawing. Study the fundamentals first, form overall.

[Anonymous No.5089161]

>>5088926
Is that an existing character or an OC?

[Anonymous No.5089164]

>>5087949
Your sketches have more appealing shape design than your finished stuff. Also your anatomy is pretty fucked up.

Do you use references? or at least do figure drawing? If not please do so, your stuff will look really good if you start doing some proper studies.

[Anonymous No.5089173]

>>5088926
2018 and 2020 stuff looks really good. Good job anon.

[Anonymous No.5089337]

how’s it looking so far?

[Anonymous No.5089745]

>>5089164
>>5086412

you and i both know that those sketches do not have more appealing shape design lol. ty for the feedback tho

for xmas, santa gave to me, one polished turd, bc we should do our best to finish pieces even if they aren't good n bractice makes berfect

[Anonymous No.5089938]

>>5089745
>we should do our best to finish pieces even if they aren't good n bractice makes berfect
I think it just cements bad habits into your head and fucks up your visual library. which explains why your art looks like...that. also chill with the chromatic aberration

[Anonymous No.5090076]

next one

[Anonymous No.5090095]

>>5090076
Rib cage is wayyyy too big, it’s out of proportion for any figure but especially for a feminine one
Hips are tilted too far to the left and the left thigh is too far up on the pelvis, puts the whole pose off balance
Breasts are unappealing, mainly because they aren’t interacting with the rib cage at all. They should hang and deform on top of the rib cage, even in a pose like this where they’re being lifted up by the arms

[Anonymous No.5090131]

>>5090076

changed legs

[Anonymous No.5090221]

>>5090131
are you kidding

[Anonymous No.5090297]

[Anonymous No.5090351]

>>5090131

color time

[Anonymous No.5090448]

wip

[Anonymous No.5091173]

>>5088479
ah, if gif is your constraint it makes sense. but what sites still rely on gifs? no option to upload in a modern file format? the mass of hair i meant was the nearly singular piece behind the figure, just seemed stiff with how much the strands are moving.

>>5089337
desu thumbnail looks like shit, but it's actually a decent start. your samurai jack, line-less attempt aint bad, reinforced by selective gradations (braids), and selective lines for texture (hat). that being said, shapes themselves are just ok. pose is floaty, like she's about to fall backward. right hand hidden which could be pushed backward and planted on the ground. shadow a tad too harsh, but it's the only thing placing her in space. minimal background shapes could achieve the same purpose. on the flipside, nothing close to a bright white, which if you're selective about, could enhanced something in the image. could be a specular highlight (eye, skin), or a background element to aid the silhouette like the shadow does. cross-eyed, use an expression ref. cute pussy peak tho!

[Anonymous No.5091177]

>>5089745
way too much i could write about because of the exchange with >>5089938, very apt for this board.
don't dismiss the shape claim, anon's right. redsketch (highlighted) is strongest, almost looks like it's done by another artist. it's the last iteration in that image (and the pose you chose to render), so you're already subconsciously avoiding the fallbacks of the prior sketches (grey/green).
what stands out to me are the horns and the pose. again, the difference comes down to iteration and deliberation. prior sketch deliberated too much on the horns with no payoff. almost looks like one was copypasted with a slight rotation. alignment with the head is off. redsketch blasts through them as a segment of a longer line that bleeds out of the hat/head, with more payoff that aids in reaffirming the head's 3/4 rotation and figure in space. i tried to show how I'm seeing the shapes do this. sure, if redsketch had finished horns they would probably overlap the eyes, but the gesture is so strong my brain doesn't care, it's resolving it automatically because there's enough noise from nearby markmaking.

with the pose, redsketch is stronger because it's more straight forward, and I'm glad you chose it to render. the prior head rotation, lifting of the arm, slight rotation of the hips throws off the weight with no lowerbody to compensate. because of horizontals (marked in green), the plane she rests on is clearer.

in your final render however, you've hidden the horizontal created by the firmly planted right arm, which also no longer feels like it's carrying the weight of the head, the hand is too different from redsketch. additionally, either the head/neck retracts or the arm comes out too far. the left arm doesn't compensate. it uses overlap over booba to delineate space but it's not enough, the plane created by the point of contact with the left elbow/hand is fighting against the plane the lowerbody appears to rest on

[Anonymous No.5091181]

>>5091177
speaking of the squished boob... poor thing is so flat with how little space there is between the torso and arm. the arms rest as if her tits were normally sized. you pushed some of that mass bottom right , under her arm, but not enough pushes top left into her cleavage.

generally, each body part looks like it was rendered in isolation. as a whole, they're competing against each other.

shit that works: render is simple, many weird spots but nothing that looks like you wasted time on. garland markmaking is consistent and elegant, a texture i would've liked to see in more areas (hair kinda has it, could've been used for bushier eyelashes that redsketch implied). face is cute and is the best part of the image, thank god. star is cuter tho

i write all this just because >>5089938 could've done more than point out chromatic aberation if he's going to tell you to not waste your time polishing a turd. polish as many turds as you need as long as you move on quickly to the next image with what you learned from the last. this game is about iterations, which includes iterating on your ability to FINISH an image. you iterated on the sketches and it payed off. in this context the only thing that "cements bad habits into your head and fucks up your visual library" is iterating without processing feedback (the types seen in the "redraw an old drawing" meme with minimal improvement). and "less chromaberation" just isn't enough feedback

merry christmas and happy new year anons, we're all gmi

[Anonymous No.5091376]

Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.5091389]

I had to do it, sorry.

[Anonymous No.5091420]

>>5089161
my wife https://kancolle.fandom.com/wiki/Suzuya

[Anonymous No.5091528]

[Anonymous No.5091768]

>>5090448
finished version

[Anonymous No.5092235]

>>5091181

ty for the very long and insightful crit! yeah after drawing the whole thing in a bounding box i could have fixed it. but i had already moved on mentally.

onto next one! let's make 2021 gr8 (:

[Anonymous No.5092241]

>>5092235
have some liquify anyway

[Anonymous No.5092246]

I sketched this with all my heart and soul

[Anonymous No.5092262]

[Anonymous No.5092287]

[Anonymous No.5092389]

i know these look hideous, not only because its skinny and bony man ass and not voluptuous waifu ass, but because the anatomy is all sorts of fucked up .

seriously, i am so lost trying to draw a skinny butt like this when all the refs i have are squishy.. also i'd like to know what im doing wrong with the anus placement and the perineum

redline is ok

[Anonymous No.5092410]

>>5092389
biggest thing would be to bring the top two bony points on the ass closer together. and the anus will place different depends on how much your character is arching their back. more arch is higher anus.

[Anonymous No.5092717]

>>5091173
Newgrounds for example requires you to post gifs in the art section and mp4 are allowed only in animation section. My animated Beatrice mp4 painting brought me plenty of praise and compliments but when I posted the mp4 on Newgrounds the people downvoted it and a guy in the comments said it should be in the art section instead (where you can't post mp4). You also can't post mp4 on DeviantArt.

[Anonymous No.5092734]

>>5092287
if she had nips I'd be in love

[Anonymous No.5092867]

>>5092287
this is great dude!

[Anonymous No.5093218]

>>5091376
What? Is this a joke?

[Anonymous No.5093315]

>>5091420
Nice, keep Doing It For Her

[Anonymous No.5093790]

Today's booba practice salt! hope you bros had a nice holiday.

>>5085731
we need more shortstacks!

[Anonymous No.5093966]

Lemme ask you big bois, how do I add appeal to this? Im thinking the gesture needs exaggerating and the anatomy of the whole bottom looks off, values also look wrong but cant quite tell why. How do I improve from here besides continuing to study anatomy? Do studies of other artists? I need some yous and some heartless crits pls

[Anonymous No.5094125]

any critique?

[Anonymous No.5094134]

>>5094125
MODS

[Anonymous No.5094206]

i usually take a selfie in the mirror to use as a ref but i have some really weird shoulder blades that tend to kinda just pop out so idk if this looks right to normal people

[Anonymous No.5094239]

>>5093966
honestly the style looks fine, you just need better anatomy and more interesting perspective
if you can make the attractive parts of the body take up more of the frame and render more detail i think it'll look pretty good

[Anonymous No.5094879]

>>5094239
Thank you dude, I've been looking at how the pros do it and I see what you mean about framing, doing some anatomy studies now too

[Anonymous No.5094918]

>>5094206
>"I-I'm a girl please give me attention!!!"

[Anonymous No.5095223]

>>5094918
you surely gave it to her

[Anonymous No.5095390]

>>5094206
the shoulderblade specifically isn't the part that looks off, it's the whole thing up there. look at how much empty space there is from the nearer breast to the shoulder. i think that it's raised too much for her body type, and the breasts aren't hanging far enough forward (their lowest points should probably be just a bit above the bottom of the sternum in that pose, i think.) maybe try to sketch in the pectoral/deltoid/trapezius muscles and see if you can figure out what's going wrong

>>5094918
if that artist is who i think they are i'm pretty sure they're a dude and just drew tits on anyways lol

[Anonymous No.5095396]

>>5085856
I understand completely, but it also gives me some major second-hand frustration that such a talented artist should feel so stifled about their own work.

Just out of curiosity, do you ever plan to start earning money with your art/porn, or are you keeping it strictly as a hobby?

[Anonymous No.5095415]

>>5075937
i dont know much about art, but cock rings are supposed to go behind the balls

[Anonymous No.5095536]

>>5095390
more like this? I'm not exactly sure what you mean by the breasts aren't hanging far enough forward

[Anonymous No.5095750]

>>5095536
it's a bit hard to tell at that level of detail so maybe it's fine. the breasts just "connect" at about the level of the xiphoid process and the armpit, and when the sternum is angled forward like it is there, they'll fall somewhere above the bottom of the sternum. the red lines look much more accurate IMO. if you want to redraw and give her more of the "presence" she had in the initial sketch, pushing the perspective more and beefing up her trap muscles could help.

[Anonymous No.5096078]

>>5094206
blog?

[Anonymous No.5096080]

>>5096078
heh

[Anonymous No.5096090]

first time posting on this board pls no bully
https://postimg.cc/MnjZXnRW

[Anonymous No.5096248]

>>5095750
i guess this is more accurate but I kinda want her boobs to be bigger. I like big anime titties but they're kinda difficult for me to draw without it looking off
>>5096078
I'm gonna be honest here I'm a gay furry so you probably don't want my tumblr or fur affinity
I'll share my insta even though I don't have much on there as of now
https://www.instagram.com/rev.zombie/

[Anonymous No.5096260]

>>5074990
is good but vagina is closer to anus irl i think????

[Anonymous No.5096528]

>>5096260
looks like anus needs to be spaced a little bit away from it, too.

[Anonymous No.5096530]

>>5096528
sorry i didnt phrase that correctly. you're right in that it needs to raise up, but the anus needs to raise as well.

[Anonymous No.5096554]

>>5096248
oh wow i totally thought you were ungulatr lol
bigger breasts are probably fine and would weigh them down more, yeah
maybe just squish them together and give the upper part of the boobs some more definition/separation, i think that would help

[Anonymous No.5096612]

>>5074966
How often should you update your porn twitter?

[Anonymous No.5096690]

>>5096612
i try to post at least three times a week maybe. used to post every day or every other day but life got in the way. actually thinking of taking a break right now

[Anonymous No.5096725]

>>5096690
wha!? 3x a week sounds exhausting

[Anonymous No.5096833]

>>5096612
I was not present for almost two weeks and as soon as I post I get all the attention. Don't bother if you can't draw. Quality > quantity.

[Anonymous No.5096845]

>>5096833
blog?

[Anonymous No.5098113]

I have no idea what I'm doin

[Anonymous No.5100092]

Hoping to finish this before New Year's is over, but calling it quits for tonight.

[Anonymous No.5100233]

[Anonymous No.5100237]

>>5100233
>you feel pleasure
well, no shit!

[Anonymous No.5100344]

bros?

[Anonymous No.5100409]

>>5100344
finished

[Anonymous No.5100570]

>>5100409
I like it, but there's something wrong with her left leg and the eyebrows makes her expression a little bit weird

[Anonymous No.5100587]

>>5100409
why do you never put eye highlights

[Anonymous No.5100591]

>>5094125
dilate

[Anonymous No.5100743]

[Anonymous No.5100814]

>>5100570
Her left leg is amputated a little above the knee so of course there is something wrong.

[Anonymous No.5100845]

>>5100409
Study how foreshortening affects lighting. She looks like an amputee.

[Anonymous No.5100865]

>>5100845
this. not to mention feet and hands. those are really bad.

[Anonymous No.5100876]

>>5100570
>>5100814
>>5100845
>>5100865
I see
i dont know why I left it like that ehh
thanks for critique

I think I must next time make literal photos of my own hands and feet and use them as ref

[Anonymous No.5100960]

>>5096725
I'm fueled by pure, distilled autism. in the summer I would try to post a sketch every day

[Anonymous No.5100970]

So, I submitted my work on HF and recently it disappeared from the approval queue but doesn't show up neither in my gallery nor rejection notices. Is that a bug or the mods simply delay the submission?

[Anonymous No.5101280]

[Anonymous No.5101339]

>>5100409
i feel like youre getting lazy, a lot of the shading and coloring in your works dont really try to change per piece but they arent fundamentally proficient enough to get away with as appealing decisions, youre going to get stuck in a plateau or develop really bad habits as a result.

I think the easiest thing to say is do actual studies and learn to observe, but its kind of a copout for advice. you should put more effort and thought into how youre rendering accurately and not rush it, and distance yourself from this habit of making everything in massive hard round strokes with only 1-2 colors and values (flat and a highlight/shadow).

also, her rear shoulder is very wrong; you dont need to make it visible as long as the context makes sense for it to be hidden; our brains can do that job just fine. trying to always make the limbs visible is also a habit im trying hard to break

[Anonymous No.5101641]

I want to draw monsterboys for 2021

[Anonymous No.5101703]

Posted this in /aco/ but wanted to get critique here as well. I'm planning on making animations of monster girls in the future and this is one of the first animations I've almost finished since starting to learn how to do art and animate earlier in 2020. The girl is supposed to be a beaver monster girl, which I hope her tail indicates. There are some glaring issues like the twitchy movement in her ears and the guy's knee but I plan on fixing them this weekend. Let me know what you guys think

[Anonymous No.5101726]

>>5086321
Term you're looking for is erotica. More tasteful by virtue of it having more substance beyond being just spank material alone.

[Anonymous No.5101736]

aagggghhhhh im cooooonmminngggg

[Anonymous No.5101763]

>>5101736
but are you drawing anon?