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5068107 No.5068107 [Reply] [Original]

post your last drawing.
i tell you how to make it.

>> No.5068113
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>>5068107

>> No.5068118

>>5068107
>>>/b/842461726

>> No.5068120

>>5068118
Don’t you get bored drawing the same shit, year after year?

>> No.5068178

>>5068113
good luck OP

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>>5068113
get in contact with marvel

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>>5068107

>> No.5068272

>>5068182
>>5068182
based

>> No.5068288
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>>5068107
My wacom broke so I'm just sketching on paper rn.

Also pyw

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>>5068113
the pose looks akward and uncomfortable, i fixed this to a more easy to read pose. proportions are all over the place. there are some areas that are anatomically correct, but that dosnt mean that is appealing. to fix these mistakes you should focus directly in references, using deconstruction and focusing in easy shapes to start.

about hatching, is really inconsistent and out of place, it make the piece look more "dirty" than shaded. check some mangas, and dont let some areas undone.

>> No.5068455

>>5068415
blind leading the blind

>> No.5068463

>>5068107
why don't you go first, OP?
making threads on /ic/ with other peoples art should really be a bannable offense desu.

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>>5068107
I'll bite. This is the last finished work I did..no ref.

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>>5068107

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>>5068107
Coomer sketch before bed. I know I’m NGMI because this fucking thing took me an hour!

>> No.5069330

>>5068113
She looks like one of those crackheads from Deus Ex.

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>>5068107
this is totally old, but I'm posting anyways lol

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>> No.5069407
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Sketch I was working on today. How should I make it?

>> No.5069410

>>5068415
You can't draw shoes or hands. The pose itself is stiff and lacks any real emotion, no tilt tot he hips or shoulders, the head is hyuge. How about you get your ass back in the copying manga threads.

>> No.5069420

>>5068107
you first

>> No.5069473
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>>5068107
Loomis has gone awfully quiet since I made this.

>> No.5069479

>>5069174
Learn real anatomy

>> No.5069487

>>5069315
for now, focus on proportions, observation, and getting things in the right place.

>>5069348
Learn how to construct solid subforms. Your big shapes are great, but you're getting sloppy with the details.

>>5069392
Think of each forms as solid, independent forms, with their own identities. Take a look at your thighs and hips, you've got them merging into each other like a flat shape. The hips should be overlapping the thighs. Study real construction and anatomy. I specifically recommend learning Hampton's Geometric figures for your case

>>5069407
Same as above, think of each form as an independent form that happened to be joined together. You're symbol drawing rhythms and flat shapes. There should be overlaps even in a quick sketch.

>>5069473
I like it :)

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>>5068107
Please, give incentive to finish

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>>5069479
Tryin

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>>5068107

>> No.5069625

>>5069473
Iha ok mut suomalaiset on puukkojunkkareita

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>>5069407
I don't think its up to your level yet if your think that is even a passable sketch. Look for reference

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>>5068107

Last time I went full out on something. Still thinks it's guly but dunno how to make it better.
OP please help.

>> No.5069706

>>5068107
I already know how I made my drawing.

>> No.5069744

HES GONNA LOSE NAGATOROOOO NOOOO

>> No.5069756

>>5068223
GMI

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>>5068223
Same vibe

>> No.5070259

>>5068415
I tought you would say something about the belly being off

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That's the last thing I did that wasn't some shitpost made in 3 minutes or an entire page of grinding.

>> No.5070284

>>5070276
Empress Theresa vibes

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>>5068107

>> No.5070323
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I wanna paint like CSR. I started doing art from no experience about 4 months ago

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>> No.5070353

>>5068415
the original had a better sense of gesture desu. your head is nicer though

>> No.5070363

>>5069494
I like this a lot. blog?

>> No.5070369
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This is after 4 months of tracing

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>>5070369
dude its literali in the first row of pictures if you search nagatoro

>> No.5070380

>>5070376
read my post and see OP

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>>5068107
> i tell you how to make it.
how to make what?

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>> No.5070479

>>5069642
GMI

>> No.5071826
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>>5070363
I'm not sure if you're genuinely curious or if you're trying to motivate me but it worked. After Dinner I'll try and finish linework and add flats.

Don't have an art blog but I'm thinking about making an insta just to log my progress and for motivation.

Would people be interested in watching someone trying to get from mid/beg/ to /int/ ? Watching the process from sketch to line and learning to colour?

>> No.5071852

>>5070263
Can you make that picture bigger? It's hard to see the details with it being so small and all.

>> No.5071854

>>5068415
your head looks okay for anime style, rest looks like shit
>>5068455
this essentially

>> No.5071875

>>5069681
1. pull up a painting from an artist you like, try to replicate their painting as best you can, note the differences and why
2. ask yourself what your drawings up until now lack compared to your copy
3. brush up on the skill(s) you feel would help you improve the most in relation to what you learned from the study and self review
4. draw something, and repeat

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I spent a whole drawpile on this turd

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im sorry if i completely butchered some parts of this sketch, my main focus was to practice making folds

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Copied a Bouguereau paint.
I always make it slightly different whatever method i use.

>> No.5071967

>>5071884
good taste at least

>> No.5071972

>>5069681
shading with black, especially her face, doesn’t look good. change the hue of at least the shadows on her face and you’ll notice a difference

>> No.5074186

>>5068113
>>5068182
>>5068199
>>5068288
>>5068415
>>5068536
>>5069315
>>5069392
>>5069407
>>5069494
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>>5069634
>>5069642
>>5069681
>>5069831
>>5070263
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>>5070324
>>5070369
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>>5070413
>>5071826
>>5071963
>>5071965

quit art.

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I finished this today. I had to change the resolution so I could post. Please be gentle.

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>>5074186
Hahaha post your work crab

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>>5074186
>imagine being this afraid of the competition
this one is on the house

>> No.5074241

>>5074199
>>5069642
>>5069174

Good stuff anons.

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today

>> No.5074436
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lol

>> No.5074465

>>5069473
Hey it’s god.
Sorry I haven’t chatted with you in awhile.

You have a gift

use it

>> No.5074487
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Sketched on paper, then inked/colored it on an iPad

>> No.5074509
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Sorry for the high resolution but I'm on my phone.

>> No.5075184

>>5074186
quit posting

>> No.5075187

>>5074509
Is that a futuristic toilet?

>> No.5076478

>>5068107
post yours so people can guess your level

>> No.5076481
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>>5068107

>> No.5076647

>>5069332
big kek

>> No.5076653

>>5074203
Off topic, but coconut crabs would scare me irl.
Those things are merciless predators.

>> No.5076903

>>5070276
just give up

>> No.5076911

>>5074186
Chad lmfao

>> No.5076951

>>5074487
he has swagger

>> No.5078636

>>5074509
how can you draw so many construction lines and still mess up the form? it looks all wonky

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>>5068107
OK, tell me fag

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>>5068107
teach me senpai

>> No.5078845
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no ref

>> No.5079056

>>5078767
Is that string thingie a trend now?
I think i've seen a quite few images with that in the last week.

>> No.5079087

>>5079056
It's always been a thing, it's called a sling swimsuit. t. someone with this fetish since 20 years ago

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>> No.5079175

>>5078767
you've already made it, BCC. go away

>> No.5079199

>>5079175
;__;

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This was a bit rushed

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>>5068415
I genuinely thought it looked good.. I don't know why you got this much negative reception. I mean sure the pose could have been more dynamic, but its not stiff. Its shit like this that makes me realize that not much is good enough for /ic/. If your correction drawing is considered dog shit, I have alot of work to do..

>> No.5079706

>>5079586
I thought it looked nice, Anon. d(◜◡◝ )

>> No.5079710
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was just fucking around really

>> No.5079712

>>5079710
>A literal floating amawu head

>> No.5079721

>>5079712
the crab spots it's prey

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>> No.5079727

>>5068288
I really like it, maybe more movement on the arms or something like that

>>5069473
Really cute

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>>5068107
Hotline miami animation that i made for a friend.

>> No.5080190

>>5079586
Don't take criticism from random anons, there's no real way of discerning what is genuine critique.
Compare yourself to amazing artist and look at the big differences, they will probably be pretty obvious to you. then you know what you must work on!

Your drawing is honestly pretty good, not for from a profesional look.
Keep going dude!!!

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>> No.5080271
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Why not

>> No.5080760

>>5080271
hey a suicide boy fan

>> No.5082537

>>5080271
A girl drew this, I can tell.

>> No.5082546

>>5082537
what makes you say that?

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>>5068107