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hey /ic/ can you improve this?

>> No.5037651
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5037651

>>5037648

>> No.5037653

>>5037648
wtf

>> No.5037654

>>5037651
well, effortless but you did it

>> No.5037655

>>5037651
Massive improvement

>> No.5037657

>The story will follow seventeen-year-old Mandy Koriand'r, daughter of the famous hero Starfire. A "high school outcast, Mandy is constantly trying to get out from under the shadow of her bright, bubbly, scantily clad and famous mother." She dyes her orange hair black and spends her days hanging out with her best friend Lincoln, avoiding the Teen Titan superfans and struggling to hide her feelings for the popular and pretty Claire. To add to her anxieties, Mandy skips her S.A.T. exam. Instead, she plans to move to France to escape the family spotlight. However, things take a turn for the better when she is paired with Claire for a school project. Their friendship develops into something more and Mandy begins to develop more self-confidence.

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>> No.5037664

>>5037662
For someone that claimed to never use refs or practice, he drew some pretty good bungholes.
If only he knew how to draw literally anything else.

>> No.5037668

>>5037648
b-but muh asian jeans

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I'm gonna go lift first bro

I'll do it as my warmup today

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>>5037648
no need, famous youtuber thatstarwarsgrl has already fixed it and im sure DC will hire her any moment now

>> No.5037682

>>5037657
That seems like a really bland story, I hope that’s just because it’s a short synopsis blurb. There’s no need for YA fiction to be so toothless

>> No.5037684

>>5037668
they are real, see >>5037674

>> No.5037729

>>5037674
Is this... an improve?

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>>5037674
any moment now

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>>5037651
truly amazing anon

>> No.5037861

>>5037674
somehow worse

>> No.5037896

>>5037651
Fpbp

>> No.5037902

>>5037674
Wow, it went from shit to utter shit.

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Wtf I love Karla now

>> No.5037916

>>5037904
but making that big tiddy anime womanlet into a black fat transman is a-ok

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>>5037648
No, I can't. It tells you exactly what you'll find inside the book and why you shouldn't read it. It simply cannot be improved.

>> No.5037967

>>5037674
wow it went from an unappealing design to an unappealing design with no form or adherence to perspective

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>>5037648
Warm up for today.

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>>5037648
>>5037668
>Yoshi Yoshitani
Call me a complete faggot, but. I actually find it quite comforting to know that even asians can produce crappy tumblr tier artwork. It kind of goes against the /ic/ stigma that all asians are godlike and should be held to a completely different standard than everyone else.

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>>5037648
have fun anons

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>>5037648
an attempt was made.