Abstract art critique thread

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Abstract art critique thread Anonymous Tue Dec 1 05:05:06 2020 No.5034304 [Reply] [Original]

I'm into abstract expressionism. Here are some of my pieces. I'd appreciate any feedback.
My biggest influences are Jawlenski, Rothko, Pollock, and Krasner.
I'd like to pay for formal art classes one day.

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JPB Wed Dec 2 00:31:06 2020 No.5036265

>>5034304
This isn't the most popular place for abstracts, bud.

However, your work is pretty good. The design elements and visual statement have an impact. The blocking into segments leads the viewer to a narrative they might enjoy.

I'd like to see more compositional play in the 4th quadrants to flow the viewer's attention throughout, and color implementation to better understand your ideas.

Thanks for sharing.

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