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Previous: >>4998878

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)

>> No.5013370
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Long time no see. I made a few edits to this guy. Thoughts?

>> No.5013374

Just realized the wings on his head are fucked in the right pic. Ignore that

>> No.5013494

Someone keep away the thanksgiving turkey from tableguy

>> No.5013517

Dude, don't give him ideas.

>> No.5013529

Much better

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I think I'll sit on this over the weekend before posting

>> No.5013662

I like it but at a glance something seems off about the guys head.

Does he have a long face?

>> No.5013674

Everything on point but your faces/heads never have volume.

>> No.5013693

Yeah I got comments about the heads before and noodled around trying to fix them, though I am still not satisfied. Someone told me the guy initially lacked cranium and I might have overcompensated. Corrections would be appreciated

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>> No.5013706

Draw guys fucking that anime girl awooooogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

>> No.5013719

Draw more of that Griffin, fag

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>> No.5013722
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>> No.5013778

I wish I could help but I'm /beg/. I don't know his face looks long. Like there's too much space between his lips, nose and chin.

But if you made that shorter than the girls face/head would be massive. It's funny because her face/head doesn't look too long, even though they're around the same length.

Maybe her larger eyes are helping with this? Not that you should give him large, girly eyes.

Maybe extend the back of his skull? Draw a tiger in the background?

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Here’s an attempt

>> No.5014010

I'll keep these in mind, thanks for the feedback. To be honest I can't see my own mistakes in this area so I'll probably just sleep on it and hope my eyes catch up sooner or later so I can make some edits.

>> No.5014023

Behold: a man!

>> No.5014057

no no no Socratesbros we got too cocky

>> No.5014060

what's the difference between this and the /draw/ thread

>> No.5014062

/draw/ is overall less autistic

>> No.5014066

These threads were originally a containment thread but the cancer has mutated into a Tumblr beacon for westernized anime snowflakes

>> No.5014093

Be the change you want to see in the world

>> No.5014094

Just the style. Keeps everyone happy if we're split. Nothing is stopping you from posting in both threads or even switching it up. It's a general, not a blood contract.

>> No.5014116

these ones are more interesting

>> No.5014146

It's not worth saving these threads, let it continue to devolve itself until eventually the altthreads would be so unrecognizable between the regular drawthreads that it'll become redundant and cease to exist.

>> No.5014150

I don't know about you guys, but I for one welcome our futa overlords.

>> No.5014239

>t. permabeg

>> No.5014264
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Trying to understand actual digital programs better based on brush strokes. I've spent most of my life drawing either in MS paint or traditional, so I feel like I'm 10 again drawing a sketch in CSP.
Here's Scooby Doo with subtle early 2000s motifs

>> No.5014268

you cant appreciate what's in front of you. there are so many talented artists here, they may not post every thread but /alt/ is always worth checking.
these are fun

>> No.5014271

what have you done to my wife velma

>> No.5014286
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She's just a tech nerd who could probably look better than Daphne if she actually tried

>> No.5014502

Nice bulge.

>> No.5014518

from my experience, there is a bigger emphasis on creativity and character design here. You'll find more studies on /draw/

>> No.5014521

I wanna see whats above them

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>> No.5014613
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I tried messing with it anon, his head was too long/narrow, and her head and hand were a little big in comparison to him. I also think you could define his back a little more by adding the shadows of where his scapula would be. I tried to just fix some proportional issues instead of just turning it into "my style", not sure if I succeeded though. Hope this helps.

>> No.5014620

Why is there a nigger in your historical drawing?

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>> No.5014828

Great drawing of animu Wakko, the oekaki pixel line strokes really do it
people sure do love the reboot/return series. I wonder if it would be better if it took a weekly episode release schedule like Disney+ or cable tv?

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Its going to go on forever.

>> No.5014841

Fisher what artists did you study to achieve your current style? and how long have you been drawing for? (I love your art)

>> No.5014950

Don't have a twitter so followed your dead Insta instead.

Should really at least throw up your sfw WiP/doodles on there.

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>> No.5014979

We actually don't draw in this thread

>> No.5015043

i was about to say cute satania
but then the fags have to ruin everything
i hope it jumps from 40% to 100% really fast

>> No.5015055

Retard and beg.

>> No.5015090

It's okay whitebox one day you will finally git gud, until then, keep dreaming. Xoxo

>> No.5015092

Beautiful work as always Fisher.

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wat u mean?

>> No.5015381

He's calling you a tranny, retard.

>> No.5015389

anon which of the anatomy books did you use to git gud. just curious cus we draw similarly

>> No.5015392

Calm down truffle puff ballerina.

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>> No.5015479

why don't you properly learn perspective+form and hide behind your style, Sugar

>> No.5015514
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Because I'm lazy. I can and do realism shit for uni but it doesn't make me happy compared to this dummy stuff. Maybe one day I'll improve my fundamental skills like when I start one of my many comic ideas. Sorry if this was a joke and I replied with too much. My art is all soul based because I am a wimp, such is life.

>> No.5015520

ilu sugar

>> No.5015544

Nike, where/how did you learn to draw bodies like that?

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>> No.5015613
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Did you create a new wallet yet? Bitcoin is way too expensive to send you with I'd rather have the $40 transaction fees go to you instead of some random chink miner.

>> No.5015631

If I could recommend the masters of anatomy book has an artist included, tincan21, that draws exaggerated muscles that I enjoy.
I just sorta learned from a lot of different artists from comics and manga.

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>> No.5015763

*Notices buldge*

>> No.5015911

Oh first time hearing about that, which type?

>> No.5015978

You may research Exodus wallet and see how it gives you a multitude of wallets. I prefer Ethereum since it is fairly easy to convert to fiat and is starting to become widely accepted.

>> No.5015988

Oh neat didn't know.

>> No.5016217

check the /SALT/ thread
thanks. kim jung gi, jjfrenchie and bill watterson are probably my biggest influences, but I couldnt list all the artists that Ive learned from or look to for inspiration. Ive been drawing most of my life, but i started actively trying to improve around 6ish years ago now

>> No.5016904

I'll keep these in mind, thank you for the paintovers. To be completely honest the edits you made look very wierd to me and don't really fit they type of face I'm going for but I'll try to keep studying and working things out on my own.

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I fucking hate these FOUL rats

>> No.5016984

Yeah, that's what I was concerned about hence the disclaimer
>I tried to just fix some proportional issues instead of just turning it into "my style", not sure if I succeeded though.
The other anon who painted over my paintover did succeed in making a more generically appealing anime-esque face, but made him stick out like a sore thumb next to her instead.

But still, anon, I think you should do some head and skull studies, the proportions of his head looks really off in your original pic.

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Yeah, I gotta get back to studies once I have the time for it again. I tried to look back at some skulls and photos and figure out how to fix it myself, though I am not sure if it's much better. I'll probably just move onto the next and try to keep it in mind piece instead of dwelling on this

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Sorry for the change of style in the paintover, but I wanted to try and point out a few things I noticed and tried to fix.
The painting is lovely, but I think the heads are indeed oddly shaped like other anons have pointed out. On the boy, the cranium is extremely narrow and high up. The jaw is too long, along with the distance of the mouth from the nose. The mouth also seems too wide and extents too fat to the back of the head.
Another thing, that might be due to style but I would advice to be avoided in the future, is that type of nose. It looks a bit unfortunate, as it is too short and pointed upwards, like a piggy's. If you like your characters to have small and delicate noses, I suggest going about it in a different way, like making them sharper and more pointy instead. Especially on males, longer noses that do not point very high look more masculine and attractive.
Lastly, I suggest some practice on eye shape, and how, even when stylized, follows the curves of the eye socket
Sorry if the example isn't very helpful, but I still wanted to give it a shot
Good job on the drawing so far, I am sure the future ones will turn out even better

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>> No.5017207

Thank you for the paintover, it's very pretty though honestly it's kind of hard to make use of it from how different it is stylistically.
Ahh button noses really are my personal preference, but I'll try to take into mind the rest of what you said. Thank you.

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Drawing pp is way more fun.

>> No.5017390

whatever happened to the underage with the cute gothic anime style, beltorchika or something like that?

>> No.5017392


she failed to improve

>> No.5017397

she's one of us then

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>> No.5017568

This one's alright, but the 4 pack doesn't feel natural.

>> No.5017573

Your colors are seriously improving dude. As in, legitimately good looking. Keep it up.

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>> No.5017593

>it's kind of hard to make use of it from how different it is stylistically.
Understandable, even mentioned it myself, but this is why the image was also accompanied by a wall of text with what needs to be done in order to improve. Plus, I am afraid that to some extent, the paintover looks so different because many -fundamentals- needed to be tweaked, like for example...
>Ahh button noses really are my personal preference
I am very sorry about what I am going to say here, but understanding and use of anatomy and rendering cannot be always excused as "my style". What you drew cannot be called a button nose, instead it looks very much like it is cut clean at its base, making this very unappealing. Preferences are great to have and they are what you base a style on, but like many others anons have tried to politely imply in the thread, your current stylization is clearly not working. Sticking so strongly to it might do you more harm than good in the future, as it greatly takes away from an otherwise pretty painting
At this point I would suggest looking up and studying various artists to your taste and trying to conjure a new approach of drawing the face based on that, along with doing some more realistic studies on the side

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>> No.5017601

wow nice

>> No.5017602

bad understanding and use*

>> No.5017604

Why are you wasting your precious knowledge on this fagwad? He hasn't improved in years and has no intention to. Hes also a confirmed shit poster on dad based on the shit I've read from the discord.

>> No.5017607

that's a fe-male I believe actually

>> No.5017608

I am not up to date with gossip, but whether he takes this advice or not is not the only benefit that comes from posting this
Even if he decides not to take anything in consideration, there could be another anon or two that find better use for it, even if it not directly meant for them
Plus, I am not a professional, so no one has to take my advice as proper teaching

>> No.5017615

there are no more shitters on dad, unless you're one of those taken care of by the jannies recently ;)

>> No.5017669
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First time using procreate.

>> No.5017673
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Tried coloring but I didn't know what the fuck I was doing.

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>> No.5017940

go away

>> No.5017952

Just click the arrow on the post you want to report, and send it.

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Thinking of drawing corona but don't know yet.

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*deleted since I made changes.

>> No.5018091

Nice job, I think this might actually be the best thing you've made so far. Your lines themselves still need to be a lot more defined but overall it's much better. I think especially changing the shadows of the skin/adding the blue reflected light helped, definitely keep that up.

>> No.5018097

Draw futas and then you have both

>> No.5018115
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i have found new better inspirations better artist to study
(pic rel)
i admit i got lazy and impatient and after uploading it and a couple of hours passing, I can see how messy it is and I hate how little effort I put in the hands

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WIP Reference

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How's this face?

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I love you queen, you've improved a lot in the last 4 months.

>> No.5018619

Based Nat.

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>> No.5018655

Ahahaha so terrible, I hope you fuck up your wrist and be forced to wear a brace for the rest of your life.

>> No.5018656

based hex poster

>> No.5019206

Dang, Queen you gotten so good

>> No.5019212

I don't get it. People early on told you that the toes were fucked up and you didn't even bother fixing it. What's your problem? Why even post here? To gain attention from the 5 people on 4Chan?

>> No.5019215

Don't waste your time on him. Ignore him, he never listens to any crit.

>> No.5019284

Yep. Just like back in the porn thread.

>> No.5019289

Well done asukafag

>> No.5019290

This is awesome. Don’t let the guy’s lack of caring for the effort you put in get you down. There are always going to be people like that who don’t appreciate a critique and only post here to get told how pretty their art is. Not to mention the “muh style” crap.
You did a really good job. It’s a million times better than the garbage it was before.

>> No.5019562

Is that why these threads have been better lately?

>> No.5019582

Too soon to tell.

>> No.5019584

You've been making great gains with your art recently. Keep it up!

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>> No.5019858

>mistah pottahhh

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I never really liked that combination too much, but then again I haven't been exposed to much to care, I might try something then.

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I never really liked that combination too much, but then again I haven't been exposed to much to care, I might try something then.

>> No.5020073

They're still there. Just more mindful of their shitposts, albeit obvious

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>> No.5020998

Based? Based.

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which type of lineart is the best for my level
many things I have tried here
cause I have maybe been deceived by good artists that some things are easy and they are not and you need years of experience

>> No.5021227

>Having other people decide for you
Do what feels right.

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It’s mushroom season in animal crossing. Is it just me or are mushrooms incredibly erotic?

>not been chosen for OP in years
>finally honored by OP
>OP ironically picks my naked chicken...
Thanks bros


7, 6, 5, 4=3=2, 1, 8. I feel like 7 is the best fusion of all of them

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>> No.5021493 [DELETED] 

shut the fuck up

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>> No.5021528 [DELETED] 

welcome to nsfw boards nigger

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>> No.5021621 [DELETED] 

Pedoshit is banned off all boards but /b and /trash. Even red boards.

Bark bark.


Just scored a graphic novel deal for $3,000 a month, starting January, part of a research project instruciting folks on how to relax. There is so the animated characters, which will be separate commissions.

I just texted him my work and asked him what he thought. Told me all about the project he was working on, and wanted to hire me.

The traditional pet portrait business has also taken off, thanks to an influential client.

Oh, and I've also made my foray into designing characters for indie games via commission.

Starting January, I'll be earning anywhere between $5,000 to $6,000 monthly, with all these sources combined.

Having fun.

My reaction to the three thread meltdown /dad/ had over my placement on tier lists. Seeing the toxic members of the community getting owned by a furry artist was gold, though.

>> No.5021623

>Is it just me or are mushrooms incredibly erotic?
Nah dude. It’s like a thick girthy fungi penis. It’s got a head and everything, and I’ve seen enough hentai to know we’re not alone too.

>> No.5021643

No one gives a fuck about your pity commissions, Whitebox.

>> No.5021644

Your stuff tends to be borderline, but this particular piece looks like it belongs on /SALT. It's very overt, beyond a pinup towards being borderline porn.

It's inspiring to see you grind out pieces as fast as you do, though, and I wish you nothing but success.

>> No.5021665

>My reaction to the three thread meltdown /dad/ had over my placement on tier lists. Seeing the toxic members of the community getting owned by a furry artist was gold, though.

Are you sure this reply was for me? I have literally no idea who you are or what this is about.

>> No.5021720

I like 4 alot. I'm biased towards lineworks tho

>> No.5021725

I can immediately tell this was posted by whitebox lmao

>> No.5021727

dick miku please keep posting iluuu

>> No.5021731 [DELETED] 


To keep this short but sweet.

Coomers, pedophiles, and furries oversaturated the board with porn after the red-blue split. The mods refused to enforce GB3, which made the situation worse. I was vocal in calling it out; the coomers threw a fit at me and anyone who wanted the board to return to the status quo. Eventually, everyone got sick of the constant porn and pedoshit; these coomers ended up getting purged.

I still get hate over it, something I welcome. The tier list shitstorm being the most memorable.

>> No.5021734

this shit again *yaaaawn*

>> No.5021739
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Pitch into his Crypto wallet so he may continue drawing for us.

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You sound like a fag.

>> No.5021751 [DELETED] 

he is

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Jesus Christ

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>> No.5021802

Doesn't matter. The owner of the site draws like a crippled proko.

>> No.5021807

Your linework is very solid, but the character comes across as bored and disinterested, lacking any trigger discipline, with no care in the world as he's about to shoot his foot off.

Pick up gesture drawing for the next couple of weeks, gather a bunch of refs of gunslingers, and study creating more engaging, dynamic poses.

>> No.5021823

The wings look rather low, like their rooted into the character's ass cheeks

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Always good to see some art of Karin. If you ever decide to revisit this, try redrawing her holding her sub like this, or something similar.

It would better suit her expression.

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>I hate coomer artists!
>Draws coom art with clothes wrapped tightly around ass and crotch
Okay kid. You're just mad that you were rejected by the porn community after you realized they were only giving you critique and not praising your poorly drawn feet. Must suck for someone who won't take critique no matter what.
How's your Patreon coming along btw? $5 enough for the bills? lol

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A "coomer" spent a paragraph and overpaint trying to contribute with work in >>5017145
You spent a paragraph on unrelated stuff like this is your blog in >>5021621
Tell me, how is this superiority of yours justified again?

>> No.5021962

something is uncanny with nose/mouth placement. Don't be Kyle.

>> No.5022006 [DELETED] 

cmon he needs more compliments and asspats! didn't you read?? he's earning $$$$$ in his reddit blogpost!

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hmm hmmm
I won't disagree about the sad gesture, but it was supposed to be modular, there's a few version of the outfit, so i didn't wanted to make it too complicated.

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Hmm hmm

I won't disagree about the sad gesture, but it was supposed to be modular, there's a few version of the outfit, so i didn't wanted to make it too complicated on myself

>> No.5022155

Will you never stop seething? Mentally ill nigger.

>> No.5022188
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Holy shit that is so bad. How do you fuck up all areas of interest? Feet, hands, head, pelvis and torso.... Jesus..

>> No.5022200

There are a couple of people who regularly post in this thread who are better honestly. You dont hear their names mentioned though because they come here to work and not start drama.

>> No.5022239

Ok, name them
>not like i disagree

>> No.5022242

It's the only good one. I like that one

>> No.5022266 [DELETED] 

Nessie is the original artist.

As said, I scored a $3,000 per month graphic novel deal. Add that to what I usually make a month in commissions, I'm on track for $5,000-$6,000 starting January. If business continues to improve, I'm on track to earn even more.

I don't advertise my Patreon, nor do I really care about it. It's just another tip jar, out of the ones I have.

Every where I have went, people have treated me well. Only here do I recieve such a response, and it's always a vocal minority stirring shit up.

>> No.5022317 [DELETED] 

Stop trying to impress us, we are not your alcoholic father

>> No.5022320 [DELETED] 

Shut the fuck up already, goddamn. No one cares.

>> No.5022321 [DELETED] 

>Nessie is the original artist
I don't care what the artist's name is, the point was that he came here for critique and he got plenty of anons trying to help him, with lots of advice and paintovers

What have you done for this board? Nothing, you have helped no one, you are not part of a community, you are just a wip spamming parasite that actively tries to separate anons into groups based to your own liking
Even outside of 4chan, asking about someone's salary is considered bad manners. It's even worse when someone acts like a peacock for the numbers he gets. Congratulations for doing the bare minimum as an adult, like landing a job, I suppose this is what you want to hear.
You are too miserable to understand that this board dislikes you because you show your true colors here, unlike asskissing some client or threatening to kill yourself in order for them to hire you out of pure pity

>> No.5022328

not sure if it's the lineart but I think 7 looks the best

>> No.5022330 [DELETED] 

Nice mass delete, good thing archives exist

>> No.5022373 [DELETED] 

we don't need an archive to know that /ic/ is incapable of scrolling past trolls instead of relentlessly feeding them.

>> No.5022405
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>The Veil of Veronica is a Christian relic consisting of a piece of cloth that is said to bear an image of the Holy Face of Jesus.

>The mythos associated with the veil recounts that Saint Veronica from Jerusalem encountered Jesus along the Via Dolorosa on the way to Calvary. When she paused to wipe the blood and sweat (Latin sudor) off his face with her veil, his image was imprinted on the cloth.

>> No.5022413


yeah I should have asked not just about lineart
but lineart is my biggest adversary right now
and you are probably correct, twitter likes speak for themselves, this one has the most
an artist is for the masses after all...

>> No.5022415


>> No.5022423

Anime Jeeeesuuuussssss

still better than coom, approved

>> No.5022625

try to do that with your own hand

>> No.5022633

Ignore the retards. I like it, do more anome religious things, it is charming

>> No.5022648

Jung Freud from Gunbuster. You have good taste, anon.

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I actually have a lot of anime themed religious stuff

just they're old, so they're not as good imo

this ones the baptism of christ by john the baptist

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four horseman of the apocalypse

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but then i had more serious attempts like pic related

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Sophia (wisdom) and her three daughters - Faith, Hope, and Love. Coфия (мyдpocть) и тpи ee дoчepи - Bepa, Haдeждa и Любoвь.ソフィア(知恵)と彼女の3人の娘-信仰、希望、愛。

this ones probably my favorite

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lilith, adam and eve

>> No.5022669

Your figures are generally unappealing especially the faces they're incredibly irate as if she is about to ask for the Manager to complain about how you didn't perform service with a smile or some horseshit.

>> No.5022876 [DELETED] 

>hardstones pretending he’s a troll
>still gets insecure and mass deletes his posts to try and hide his retardation
Lol okay.

>> No.5022879 [DELETED] 

why are these deleted though?

jannies cleaned up the drama. it doesn't change the fact that nobody in this board likes the dense retard

>> No.5023047

They are turned to the left more than the face. Also that's not how tugging the skin on the face works - it anchors in other points.

>> No.5023063

nooo you can't criticize wb he needs more asspats ahah

>> No.5023294
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I'm trying to move out of my comfort zone and do backgrounds/settings in general. Any tips on things I really need to improve here?

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Finished I guess. What vibes does he give off?

>> No.5023424

Abraham Lincoln
>extra arms
Too distracted by the conflicting ideas that he may as well just have two of them

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Revamped the shading.

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Study in the works.

>> No.5023788
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my last drawing was a spectacular failure but I will not give up

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not used to digital

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Can I get some critique on this one?
Please point out anything that is wrong and can be improved. I've worked mostly on the face/neck rendering so far.

>> No.5023958

Push the shadows on her right. Draw rhe other arm

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all right gamers, any tips for making this milkshake on bob draw 10/10?

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Whoops forgot to include file

>> No.5023995

When you said to push the shadows you meant to make them darker and bolder?

>> No.5024001

It would fall off her chest in this position since it seems to be held only by the straw. :(
Make it so the base of the cup is resting on her chest instead of directed at us.

>> No.5024016

Hm that's a good point, makes sense.
I'll get to work anon-chan

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>> No.5024133

Good seeing your stuff again man.

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>> No.5024303


I hate how attracted I am to this design. Good job.

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>> No.5024447

Thanks dude! Strated wage cucking recently so my slow work ethic became even slower

>> No.5024460

Well you're off to a good start, puting emphasis on things in the foreground is deffinitely a must for this kind of work where there's a certain character narrative, the colors dynamic between the foreground and background is pretty good. But overall this background does the job, if you want to take to the next level i would work on getting the perspective to be more easily understandable for the viewer

>> No.5024467

so charming

>> No.5024542

Thanks, anon. Are there any spots in particular where the perspective is wonky, or is it kind of a general issue? The river in the background is problematic in that respect, I think, but I'm not seeing anything else...

>> No.5024614

hnng *opens legsies*

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>hnng *opens legsies*

>> No.5024853

White box how did you learn anatomy? which courses did you do? if any.

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>> No.5024871
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I decided to try and step out of my comfort zone a bit and make an attempt at drawing fabric but I've been stuck on what kind of clothes to give her for a while now

I've been thinking about something revealing but cool at the same time, like Baiken from guilty gear but less clean

What kind of clothes would you give her? if there are any details that catch your eye please point them out as well!

>> No.5024890

This is kind of bafflingly wrong all over. Are you looking at any reference? The back area is fucked with all kinds of muscles that don't exist, teres major is huge, deltoid forms are unclear, triceps fibers don't go down that far, and the abdominal area looks weird and flat, though it's better than the other parts. You should really study from anatomical drawings if you're not, because you're actually making it more complicated than it is.

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A bit of progress.

I studied anatomy try reading George Bridgman's "Complete Guide to Drawing From Life" and Stephen Rogers Peck's "Atlas of the Human Anatomy".

>> No.5025120


so you're saying that even when tracing, you cannot know anatomy?

we got too cocky imagionation bros..

>> No.5025195

You're joking, but start with a good picture to study. Too much is hidden in shadow in that one. And there may be some undue focus on drawing the muscle fibers rather than the larger forms. It's just hard to read, but if it makes sense to him, alright. But then why post it to /alt/?
Some things are wrong even if we're being charitable though, like teres minor being more out and forward than than teres major. Just totally off base. I don't know if he'll listen to any of this but whatever

>> No.5025207

I'm gonna post my art here and not give a damn about what you say

>> No.5025209

Based futa poster?

>> No.5025228

you obviously do care and are desperate for attention

>> No.5025250

The penis is attached to the thigh. Freak indeed.

>> No.5025258

Nope. Don't give a damn.
If its not a compliment, its not worth reading.

>> No.5025264

The kind Octoberfest girls in Germany wear with very short skirt and knee high boots.

>> No.5025272
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To be clear, on first glance this backgrounds works, which is probably the most important thing professionally, but with this particular background the problems can be more clearly seen once the viewer looks a bit more keenly.

1: the fence or the wall is a bit confusing when it comes to the feeling of depth, you could try adjusting the sizes of the fence based on it's position. also on this note, once i start looking beyond the characters the ground seems to be falling down due to the direction the outer fence is going but confusion arises due to the ground texture being the same at all distances, maybe make it smaller the greater the distance.

2: this is mostly related to the first issue, the tree isn't a problem on it's own, but the fence again gives a feeling of much greater distance than the tree, i believe this issue can be fixed by either making the tree smaller or the fence larger.

3: this is an issue of texturing, same things could be applied here as with the ground textures, making the texture smaller and less detailed as the distance increases.

4: as it stands these small bright lines appear as consequences of using a quick selection tool, either emphasizing them a bit more or removing them completely would make this section more pleasing

5: the texture on the tree just needs a but more work, seeing brush strokes like those feels rushed, in contrast to this the lone bush that overlaps the river is pretty cool

I believe a lot of these points could be completely negated simply by making the ground texture give the illusion of distance more clearly, which can be done by adjusting size of the texture as the distance increases and the level of detail on the ground (for example adding some simple grass blades or small stones and making them less frequent and smaller the further the view goes)

when drawing background objects, make them compliment one another in order to show distance and perspective more clearly

>> No.5025299

Compliments. Getting many of those here then?

>> No.5025527

Thank you for the detailed response, anon!

1 & 2. This was supposed to be like a low cliff wall thing, kind of a drop off from a slightly higher elevation where the tree and bushes are down to where the characters are sitting.

4. Yes, this was the fault of the quick select tool but I thought it made a nice subtle highlight so I left it. But you're right, a little more emphasis might have made that clearer.

But yeah, thanks. I'll keep these kinds of things in mind for my next piece.

>> No.5025613

short lower legs

>> No.5025875
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I got an extremely hard angle here, I'm trying to make the legs and figure look proper from the upper view while she's looking up, but something feels really off. Anyone able to give some pointers? I couldn't find a good ref for the pose.

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Finished this, not a fan of the inking I ended up with. Still feels a bit anemic, so I'll change something for next time.

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>> No.5026061

I like it

Reminds me of some of Nathan Andersons stuff. You should check it out if you haven't already.

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>> No.5026097

>holding the whole bar without a wrapper
nooo it's going to melt!!:( Icky!

>> No.5026153

This is so wrong.

>> No.5026156

Good idea!

Make the chocolate melting and dripping down to her elbow.

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Lovely colours. Maybe the perspective could be better, can't really tell where it starts and ends.
BOOBA! Nice texture on the tights.

>> No.5026672

Based Autist

>> No.5026683

Why is he cutting his balls?

>> No.5026708
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sorry i could not make it look good, so I scrapped it altogether
I guess it would have to be a much larger amount of chocolate

>> No.5026710

The tights look so good but the leotard looks so flat

>> No.5026821
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Bros, what do I have to do to learn to draw like Fisher? it's not fair...

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>> No.5027181

sculpt the form using shapy forms, and try to keep the whole picture in mind, than do some wompy hatching and play with 2 basic colors, one for shade and one for light
Simple as
Blame who? Also not enough Booba.

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ok hows this

>> No.5027251

Boobas look unnatural, like that boob pad for your mouse
Arm is wonky, plus left shoulder
Face and hand passes

>> No.5027252
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I wanna push this further but I wonder if the anatomy looks okay because I was stupid and didn't use reference.

>> No.5027304

Keep it up, the colors you used for the skin are the best you've done so far. If you haven't already, I would just save the colors in a palette so you can easily pick them again.

>> No.5027320

thanks I am glad that this was successful
although it does imply a certain type of light/environment, can't always be used

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>> No.5027682

best girl

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>> No.5028340

The torso/arms seem to be alright but there is some fuckery going on with the pelvis and legs. Seems like it is turned too much to us or maybe left leg is misplaced and is put too close to the centre of the body.

>> No.5028392

Ya fuck you're right I see it, how do I go about fixing it? Redlines would be appreciated if possible.

>> No.5028448

how did you learn rendering?

>> No.5028487
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really loving your food series,man. Keep it up

>> No.5028543

Find an artist you like and copy the way they render. Use a lot of references, 20+ images is pretty normal for me.

Everytime you finish a piece look at it and self critique yourself and then focus on things that you're the weakest at.

And most importantly always finish your works. Don't make useless sketches and 'practice' drawings. Grind finished pieces and compare them to the artist you like (it's the best if it's only one but it's ok if you have few who you reference).

>> No.5028918

delta, is that you?

>> No.5028952

this loss is missing the third panel.

>> No.5028986

How do you guys deal with not having friends to show your WIPs for meaningful and constructive comments?
My only art friend is a casual putting me on a pedestal and it actually feels pretty lonely considering I have a long way to go.

>> No.5028991




lol, I'll get right on it

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