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I get no responses in the beg thread. How am I doing in terms of conveying form (the main issue im having at the moment)?

>> No.4967828
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4967828

>>4967823

>> No.4967830

loomis

>> No.4967833

>>4967828
I deliberately posed coomshit so it would get noticed. Another badly-drawn loomis head would get scrolled passed by most ppl

>> No.4967840

>>4967823
>2.7mb

This is probably why you aren't getting replies.

>> No.4967844

>>4967840
Is that how this shit site works?

>> No.4968738

>>4967823
Dont know what to say anon. You just need to grind more. It's almost there but not quite. Hips are beautiful. Perspective is off so they look like they have a fat thigh and tiny boobs. If it is from imagination, remember a T shaped belly button is the sexiest looking kind of belly button. A study actually explored this and found T shaped ones was connected to good genes. That drawing looks like mine post surgery after I had my appendix removed and they went through the belly button.

>>4967844
Yes it shows more detail. Loomis heads and bodies are boring. Make figures with emotion and body language and you'll get responses.

>> No.4968786

>>4968738
Would you say I'm at least on the right track? My main issue recently has been not knowing WHAT to grind.

>> No.4968804

>>4968786

Bruv, if you can’t figure out what to grind on your own by lurking you’re ngmi. No one can hand hold you through this, the closest you’re gonna get is a video course or a paid teacher. Just watch some.

>> No.4968810

>>4968804
I watched the vilppu one and he kinda opened my eyes to a few important things, namely how to comprehend things in a 3d space and why shadows are important.

Idk I mean it feels like I'm on the right track but idk

>> No.4968815

>>4968810
>he kinda opened my eyes to a few important things,
Near enough every course will do this, watch new course, apply knowledge, repeat

>> No.4969199

>>4967823
Poorly.
Just keep banging out studies of references until they start to look more accurate. If you’re at the stage where you can’t even copy a model accurately yet then there’s very little to say except “keep practicing”.
I would also recommend using pencil over digital for now but that’s just me. Digital has tons of techniques and tricks to learn that will distract you from focusing on the core drawing problems, but in fairness, pencil has its own techniques as well.

>> No.4969259

>>4969199
This is good to hear. I can see I'm not doing it well but desu at least I know that THIS is what I have to be grinding. Before I was just lost but now I have a definitive path, so thanks for confirming this.