Sexual Alternative Art / Stylization Thread

[Anonymous No.4959432]

Previous thread >>4946749

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4959433]

>>4959432
Not gonna lie OP pic is a pretty creative idea

[Anonymous No.4959491]

[Anonymous No.4959502]

>>4959433
It makes zero sense

[Anonymous No.4959507]

This was only supposed to be lineart, but I'm learning so much through rendering in greyscale. Text is a bit cringe, and there's a typo, but hey, ho, I like a bit of narrative in my porn.

>>4959432
Think this might be the best thing I've ever seen posted to /ic/. Fisher is goat.

[Anonymous No.4959512]

>>4959507
Hot. You got a blog?

[Anonymous No.4959514]

>>4959491
why are you posting artwork that's not yours

[Anonymous No.4959518]

>>4959502
Art doesn't have to make sense

[Anonymous No.4959522]

>>4959512
Aye, I'm @ortamaw on Twitter (ty).

[Anonymous No.4959529]

>>4959507
The text is not cringe, but it completely ruins the drawing. It's an eye sore, there's a description for a reason.

[Anonymous No.4959537]

>>4959514
I never claimed authorship of it, dipshit.

[Anonymous No.4959539]

>>4959522
I should have realized that it was you. The artstyle was extremely familiar. You have been posting a lot of high quality art on here recently. Keep it up! I always look forward to your work.

[Anonymous No.4959540]

>>4959537
why are you posting artwork that's not yours?

[Anonymous No.4959542]

>>4959514
>>4959540
Are you gonna explode?

[Anonymous No.4959543]

>>4959542

[Anonymous No.4959546]

>>4959543
Whoah bro why are you posting work that's not yours

[Anonymous No.4959553]

>>4959502
You're an idiot.

[Anonymous No.4959554]

>>4959546
I never claimed authorship of it, dipshit.

[Anonymous No.4959555]

>>4959537
>>4959491
You know this is an art board, right? Like, for artists? And this is a thread for posting your nsfw art/art progress and receiving advice and critique in exchange? If you want to post porn there's porn boards for that.

[Anonymous No.4959558]

>>4959555
Lets ban OP then since that's not his work either, it's clearly saved from 4chan look at the filename

[Anonymous No.4959564]

>>4959558
You're trying to be clever, but its just making you look and sound autistic af.

Either pyw, gtfo or kys.

[Anonymous No.4959565]

>>4959564
Shut the fuck up you policeman-wannbe loser.

[Anonymous No.4959567]

>>4959555
Highly doubt you're an artist, most of you fags don't even draw and the ones that do are either ridiculed or get censored because the content hurts other people's fee-fee's.

[Anonymous No.4959568]

>>4959565
You're like frank hassle except somehow even more pathetic.

[Anonymous No.4959569]

>>4959555
Are you gonna implode

[Anonymous No.4959571]

>>4959568
pyw

[Anonymous No.4959579]

Classic /ic/. One person does something questionable and instead of either ignoring it or politely saying why what they did is not in the spirit of the threads, they overreact and cause an equal reaction back, completely derailing the thread. Finally ending in a bunch of pyw posts.

[Anonymous No.4959582]

>>4959579
Because none of you draw.

[Anonymous No.4959584]

>>4959579
If u don like it then u can git out

[Anonymous No.4959587]

>>4959579
Lets see your WIP then

[Anonymous No.4959588]

>>4959582
>>4959584
>>4959587
ALL me

[Anonymous No.4959593]

>>4959587
Don't you just love it when you call them out and they go silent and fuck right off?

[Anonymous No.4959594]

Less chimpouts more benis please

[Anonymous No.4959595]

>>4959567
>highly doubt you're an artist
I'm >>4959507

[Anonymous No.4959602]

>>4959595
You must be new, I'll give you a week before you leave.

[Anonymous No.4959605]

>>4959507
If it means anything, I like the text.

[Anonymous No.4959607]

>>4959432
Guys please, tell me how can I learn to draw eyes like that!!!

[Anonymous No.4959608]

>>4959607
Loomis.

[Anonymous No.4959628]

>>4959607
Be cognizant of the fact that the head is round and the eyes are spheres, then work from there, how successful you are with it based on your own personal skill level.

[Anonymous No.4959703]

lady luck

[Anonymous No.4959706]

>>4959703
What the fuck lol why are you demolishing whatever you had going in he image with your handle written out like that

[Anonymous No.4959709]

>>4959706

eh ok relax! i was just kinda done with it lol

[Anonymous No.4959718]

>>4959709
>relax
? What lol

[Anonymous No.4959720]

>>4959529
Ah, I felt the same way actually. I've never combined text with an image like this before, but typesetting is actually a lot harder than I thought. I want to keep it because there's a lot of artists doing something similar and they pull it off great, I think you just really have to develop a feel for it. A different font maybe. Italics, stroke border, drop shadow, idk.

>>4959539
Shit, thank you. I've been actively trying to improve these last few months so it's a really nice feeling seeing the hard work actually pay off.

[Anonymous No.4959725]

>>4959605
It does mean something :>

[Anonymous No.4959730]

>>4959706
isn't it obvious? complete utter lack of taste.

[Anonymous No.4959784]

thoughts?

[Anonymous No.4959867]

>>4959555
Porn isn't art though.

[Anonymous No.4959905]

>>4959784
Your line quality is actually clean in terms of literal cleanliness. However, your perspective/form seems wonky. Those hands are at quite weird angles compared to the dick. Look up references of blowjobs/'hand grabbing pole' and you'll kind see it. I can tell you're actually going for the "dick too big for hands" thing, but the actual angles of the fingers with relation to the hands/arms are quite off.
The pose was an interesting idea, but you were probably better off choosing between sitting down, or bending right over the cock.
Final note, the hair over the shoulder looks awkward.I realize that this is sort of how the hair looks in the cartoon, but there were definitely better options with regard to placement. Think about the silhouette of 1)Your entire drawing and 2)different 'sections' of it. The head/hair section would have quite a weird silhouette.
Anyways, I'm not sure... but this drawing might not be allowed here, kek.

[Anonymous No.4959907]

>>4959867
Says who
You? You are no one

[Anonymous No.4959913]

>>4959784
>thoughts?
Seek help.

[Anonymous No.4959916]

>>4959432
So is liking penis not gay anymore? Whats up with straight men wanting women with penises all of a sudden?

[Anonymous No.4959920]

>>4959784
LUL wasn't expecting that cock when I blew the picture up.

[Anonymous No.4959923]

>>4959720
You're not making a manga or some comic. Even then text/lettering always ruins a manga/comic. It's so eye glaring, the text was literally the first thing to pop to my eyes because of the contrast. The text is even in third person so it has less of a reason to be there. You don't realize it yet because you're a /beg/ but text like that is a complete cuck move to an illustration.

[Anonymous No.4959925]

>>4959923
>text always ruins a manga/comic
So you want wordless manga and comic books? How would that work?

[Anonymous No.4959927]

>>4959916
Eh it's honestly more complex than a lot of people think it is, though I'm someone that feels like it's dumb to think so hard about whether something's gay or not. I was confused by Futa at first, like years back, but now I get the appeal. You get the form of a woman with the sex organ that you yourself are deeply familiar with. You know everything she feels and can relate 100%. Is it gay or am I bi? No idea, I just know that hairy buff guys are gross to me, I might be open to messing around with a VERY convincing trap though, so I guess I'm slightly gay?

fiance asked if I'd be up for a femboi in a threesome if we ever wanted to experiment with a 3rd party and I was like "yeah maybe". You find attractive what you find attractive, people spend too much energy worrying about what it means.

[Anonymous No.4959934]

>>4959923
U wot? How does text always ruin a comic or manga? That doesn't make any sense. Manga and comics are not a solely picture-based medium. Text is necessary to help tell the stories through narration and dialogue. How does text ruin those?

[Anonymous No.4959939]

>>4959923
>Even then text/lettering always ruins a manga/comic
this is the dumbest thing I've read all day

[Anonymous No.4959941]

>>4959925
I just find them to be terrible. I want to enjoy the pictures but the majority of the panels are ruined with text bubbles and text clippings. Sometimes it's just only text to read and that's fine, other times its just illustrations to see so that balances out. Other times there's just terrible flow to reading a comic or manga. Do I read the text first then try to understand the drawing? I have to do one or the other unless its just boring fucking dialogue. The only good books out that that don't totally suck dick is when they separate those two art forms. And yes I don't have a favorite manga/comic because they all..suck..dick...

[Anonymous No.4959944]

>>4959939
>>4959934
As much as you 'humans' claim to be multitasking idiots. You can't read text and enjoy the picture at the same time. That's the problem with comics/manga.

[Anonymous No.4959946]

>>4959944
Just say you're retarded. I won't accept any other response

[Anonymous No.4959949]

>>4959946
It's the worst art form of this fucking century.

[Anonymous No.4959950]

>>4959941
Manga and comics are not meant to solely show pretty drawings. They are meant to tell a story, or make jokes if it's a comedy, or something like that. Not enjoying artwork simply because there are words in the pages is a dumb argument when the medium is supposed to be like that.
>>4959944
>>4959949
Now this is peak autism.

[Anonymous No.4959959]

>>4959949
Just say you're retarded

[Anonymous No.4959963]

>>4959950
>>4959959
I'm saying there is a problem with the flow because you can't combine retarded lengths of text with an illustration, IT JUST DOESN'T WORK. I know what the fucking medium is, stop acting like I don't know what the fuck is. Stupid fucking /beg/.

[Anonymous No.4959966]

>>4959963
Just say you can't read and look at pictures at the same time

[Anonymous No.4959967]

>>4959963
While I do agree that some manga and comics can have way too much text, and should try to tell their stories by showing more than telling, but getting rid of text in them entirely is plain stupid. And there are plenty of great artists who have made/illustrated comics or manga. The combination of text and images work just fine. You're just a retarded nobody who thinks he is hot shit because he watched some Loomis videos.

[Anonymous No.4959975]

>>4959966
You literally can't dipshit.

[Anonymous No.4959977]

>>4959963
While I do agree that some manga and comics can have way too much text, and should try to tell their stories by showing more than telling, but getting rid of text in them entirely is plain stupid. And there are plenty of great artists who have made/illustrated comics or manga. The combination of text and images work just fine. You're just a retarded nobody who thinks he is hot shit because he read some Loomis and watched some tutorial videos.

[Anonymous No.4959979]

>>4959975
Just say comics are too complicated for your brain matter

[Anonymous No.4959984]

>>4959979
Retarded art form.

[Anonymous No.4959988]

>>4959984
Yes you're a retarded art form lol btw don't get dizzy reading my post and looking at my picture too fast

[Anonymous No.4959992]

>>4959963
mindbroken by CHADgashi

[Anonymous No.4959995]

>>4959907
Don't hate the messenger.

[Anonymous No.4959998]

>>4959995
So you're admitting you're nothing but a tool? Kek

[Anonymous No.4960007]

>thread

[Anonymous No.4960294]

Ashley warioware thing for storyboard practice. Wonder if NSFW storyboard artists are in demand?

[Anonymous No.4960299]

>>4960294
Maybe but you should actually learn real storyboarding techniques

[Anonymous No.4960301]

>>4960299
Thanks, that's a good search term I can use.

[Warrior goblin riding futa dra(...) No.4960429]

>>4959432
Though?

[Anonymous No.4960532]

>>4959923
>you don't realize it yet because you're a /beg/
pyw.

[Anonymous No.4960549]

>>4959963
Are you unironically autistic ROFL?

[Anonymous No.4960559]

>>4960429
what the fuck is going on in this picture???

[Anonymous No.4960563]

>>4960559
It looks like a big dick goblin inflating a futa dranaei with goblin cum.

I think.

[Anonymous No.4960676]

>>4960563
you probalby meant to say it looks like shit

[D8 No.4960687]

hit a huge milestone in improvement

[Anonymous No.4960715]

>>4960687
It looks great! Good job! Did you use gradient mapping for this, or paint in greyscale?

[Anonymous No.4960736]

>>4960687
>still hasn't figured out 80-90% compression for web posting
cmon now, the size difference is huge and the lossin quality is minimal, keep the uncompressed version to yourself

[Anonymous No.4960738]

>>4960736
just like this

[Anonymous No.4960821]

>>4960687
Bad placement of the anus and genitals, which should be much lower. Other than that it looks great.

[Anonymous No.4960914]

>>4959502
>Porn making sense

[Anonymous No.4960930]

>>4960738
Why do people always misunderstand where the anus goes

[Anonymous No.4960961]

>>4960930
I think it's just a consequence of staring at a piece too long and allowing some bigger anatomical inaccuracies go unaddressed because you're not focusing on the bigger picture. I do it a lot.

[Anonymous No.4960973]

>>4960930
>>4960961
It also has to do with "bending anatomy" in order to show as much as possible. Sometimes it just doesn't work good enough.

[Anonymous No.4960975]

>>4960738
Cool, how do you paint like that?

[Anonymous No.4960987]

>>4959502
it makes perfect sense to me
he's clearly a witch and is using magic to connect his penis to his asshole
the penis isn't actually erect, that's just the broom making it bulge

[Anonymous No.4961025]

>>4959905
Based, thanks a lot

[Anonymous No.4961071]

>>4959905
Will apply all your feedback in my next drawing, that one was the very first one I made after reading page 25 of Loomis' fun with a pencil. Thanks again dude

[Anonymous No.4961270]

commission wip

[Anonymous No.4961363]

[Anonymous No.4961401]

>>4960738
You've compressed it too much for the dimensions it has, I can see artifacts all around, particularly in the reds.
On mobile would probably be almost unnoticeable though.

[Anonymous No.4961509]

I'm a newbie artist that has never drawn lewds. Any tips I should be aware of before I start sketching?

[Anonymous No.4961514]

>>4959433
It's not, actually it's quite retarded

[Anonymous No.4961517]

>>4961514
Dude it's a fucking eye trick, it makes you think it's a girl riding a broom for the million time but instead the broom is in her ass and her dick is erect along the same trajectory of the broom in her ass. Its genius.

[Anonymous No.4961523]

>>4961517
>her

[Anonymous No.4961629]

>>4961509
Yeah, there's a fine line between realisim and stylism that you should straddle the line of. Never go full tilt in one direction. Study porn from real life and learn the anatomy, whilst striving to incorporate aspects from stylised works too. This is how you achieve aesthetic porn.

I see too many artists just vomiting blush onto irrational segments of the body. They thing painting on arbitrary, pure white specular lighting equates to a king of sweaty, eroticism, but it just makes their characters look like big, rubber balloons.

Oh and please don't over-circularise your female character's anatomy. It's not sexy when women look like the Michelin Mam, and the thicc meme is exhausted.

[Anonymous No.4961633]

>>4961270

[Anonymous No.4961649]

>>4960676
It's a WIP my guy, you honestly think that it's a finished picture? I am curious. Can you please, redline it for me.

[Anonymous No.4961659]

>>4961629
How long have you been drawing for nat

[Anonymous No.4961673]

>>4961659
I'm not Nat, just had that piece of hers saved on my phone cause its got good lines.

[Anonymous No.4961679]

>>4961673
Oh
Kind of odd for you to post another anons art and give that much advice since she also comes here

[Anonymous No.4961685]

>>4961679
Not really. Like I've said, I'm posting from my phone, so I just grabbed whatever was saved to my downloads. To my knowledge I've only ever seen Nat post here once, when they posted a Dark Souls progress comparison piece. At least I think it was Dark Souls.

[Anonymous No.4961716]

>>4961517
I know, so? it's still fucking stupid and makes no sense.

[Anonymous No.4961728]

>>4961716
>selects magical butt plug broom
>aroused due to butt plug
>holds massive, aroused schlong for balance as the magic broom butt plug propells/lifts you
makes sense to me

[Anonymous No.4961732]

>>4961716
Because the anal vore, cum expansion coom rags you tickle your nutsack to are the pinnacle of epistemological understanding.

[Anonymous No.4961733]

>>4961685
Imagine saving imgs in 2k20. Imaging saving them on your phone of all things.

[Anonymous No.4961738]

>>4961733
I save them to my phone because I like to browse at night, and I can dropbox them to my PC. I saved >>4961685 because I like the way the mystery liquid was rendered.

[Anonymous No.4961741]

>>4961738
Who inquired?

[Anonymous No.4961744]

>>4961741
Nobody, I'm just making idle chat since I can't sleep.

[Anonymous No.4961749]

>>4961744
I don't remember asking :?

[Anonymous No.4961765]

>>4961749
>>4961738
shut the fuck up both of you are cringe.

[Anonymous No.4961777]

>>4961765
Who asked for your opinion? Certainly wasn't me.

[Anonymous No.4961782]

Nice thread.

[D8 No.4961875]

>>4960715
i dont use gradient maps
here's what i did:
> lineart, direct light, colorflats
> cast shadows, refine value transitions
> highlights and brushstrokes

[Anonymous No.4962147]

>>4961728
besides I don't think anyone would have that neutral expression with half a broomstick shoved in the ass.

[Anonymous No.4962314]

>>4961649
No shit that it's a wip. Where did I exactly say otherwise? And it still looks like shit.
Redlines are wasted time on scrubs like you, sorry.

[Anonymous No.4962337]

>>4962314
Shame. I've aready finished that commision. Maybe next time.

[Anonymous No.4962469]

anything I can do to improve the anatomy on this? I would assume the top of the body would be shorter if viewing from a lower angle but any critiques would be appreciated.

[Anonymous No.4962500]

>>4962469
It's hard to see friend. I get the impression she's leaning away from the camera due to the position of the legs and pelvis.

[Anonymous No.4962577]

>>4962337
>Shame. I've aready finished that commision
>commission
Thank god for you there's people with such shitty taste, right?
>Maybe next time.
Not until you show any kind of promise.

[Anonymous No.4962580]

>>4962469
Looks fine to me. If anything, the head wings aren't obeying perspective properly. Torso wings are a little dicey too, but don't desperately need to be fixed.

[Anonymous No.4962593]

>>4962577
Damn. In only 3 posts and you manage to out yourself as a total faggot. Do you think I really need your "insight"? I found that picture on furaffinity and decided to post here to see people reaction. I got exactly what I wanted. You actually believed all my lies.

[Anonymous No.4962618]

[Anonymous No.4962623]

>>4962593
The only thing I'm sure was a lie is the commission part kek.
Please keep seething beg.

[Anonymous No.4962630]

>>4962618
dat schnorkel, oy vey

[Anonymous No.4962638]

Something I started a while back but never finished, painted from a figurine by Obstetrician.M, with a few of my own alterations.

[Anonymous No.4962641]

>>4962623
> commission KEK
Your type always take the bait. I was reading the last thread and seeing some people shitting on the OP artist made me want to conduct this little experiment. The OP artist obviously has talent, but others can still find stuff to nitpick. Posting the WIP gathers the same old responds from or threads. It's a little sad isn't it. To be so predictable.

[Anonymous No.4962660]

[Anonymous No.4962722]

>>4962580
Thanks I appreciate the feedback. I know I hastily slapped on the wings without much thought but I will definitely consider their position when I go back to fix it. Trying to get better at using references and then adjusting things like the viewing angle etc.

[Anonymous No.4962773]

im not allowed to post 99% of my art in here, feels bad

[Anonymous No.4962901]

>>4959784

[Anonymous No.4962914]

first time painting like this. It take me ~40 days of studies and other practices.

[Anonymous No.4962940]

>>4959784
She's standing on the ground, but where is there sausage coming from.

[Anonymous No.4962981]

>>4961363
hot af
blog?

[Anonymous No.4963033]

>>4962641
>I was only pretending to be retarded
good for you

[Anonymous No.4963035]

>>4962914
Based slowpoke

[Anonymous No.4963086]

>>4961673
>cause its got good lines
Thanks anon

[Anonymous No.4963104]

>>4963086
Oh, you do browse here often aha, I thought you just posted that one time. But yeah, I was going through your Twitter the other day, all the way to the back of your timeline. You've made excellent progress, you should be chuffed.

[Anonymous No.4963113]

>>4962914
>>4963035
Ooh... First time painting like what exactly? And what did you study for 40 days? I love the theme!

[Anonymous No.4963179]

I grinded anatomy all month but didn't touch rendering/value studies so the gap between the two is large. inb4 hiding hands, I just erased them out of embarrassment. would love any crit

[Anonymous No.4963189]

>>4963179
Stop hiding hands you jackass.

[Anonymous No.4963190]

>>4963179
Do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.4963194]

>>4963179
honestly I find your style of rendering very appealing, anatomy looks fine too, but try to do some more hands and feet

[Anonymous No.4963464]

>>4963189
I know
>>4963190
_98fumi on twitter
>>4963194
thank you, though I don't know what I'm doing 90% of the time with rendering and picking colors. I do lots of feet and hand studies that come out alright but I get nervous when working on a real piece kek

[Anonymous No.4963545]

Ok /ic/ what do you think ?

[Anonymous No.4963602]

>Install Honeyselect
>Make any character I want, or just get a card that someone made
>take picture of character in nearly infinite poses and multitudes of sex positions
>Trace over that picture
>Make a patreon and make shit ton of money off coomers with minimal effort
Try and stop me

[Anonymous No.4963620]

>>4963464
>clown themed porn twitter

[Anonymous No.4963631]

>>4963602
Post results and then we'll see. Tracing doesn't guarantee good art.

[Anonymous No.4963703]

>>4963602
>Make a patreon and make shit ton of money off coomers with minimal effort
Hahaha, and then you wake up.

[Anonymous No.4963774]

What I'm working on

[Anonymous No.4963812]

Down for crit on this before I put more detailed lines down

[Anonymous No.4963925]

>>4963602
You have better chances just posting screenshots on your patreon than tracing them

[Anonymous No.4964115]

[Anonymous No.4964221]

>>4964115
I like the way you draw taints. I want to poke it.

[Anonymous No.4964236]

proud of this one

[COOMER No.4964271]

>>4962914

[Anonymous No.4964524]

A master study, Tyto Alba only drew the upper half, so I drew the bottom.
Is it... appealing?

[Anonymous No.4964709]

>>4964271
take a shot every time someone posts a coomer meme in this thread

[Anonymous No.4964720]

>>4964524
nice midget

[Anonymous No.4964804]

>>4964524
you made her look like a midget

[Anonymous No.4964897]

>>4964804
>>4964720
thanks

[Anonymous No.4964925]

>>4959718

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3_2entulkw

[Anonymous No.4964935]

>>4964115
>mfw still stuck on this guys dick

[Anonymous No.4964966]

>>4963774
The left leg (her left) seemed a bit bland so I re-positioned it. Also moved the panties down so the viewer can still see the design on them.

[Anonymous No.4965025]

>>4964524
blog?

[Anonymous No.4965028]

>>4964897
if it was intentional then you should've made the arms and torso more chunky as well.

[Anonymous No.4965133]

Haven’t posted here in a long time. It seems not a lot has changed

(Yes I know the big is fucked I plan to trace over a 3D one later)

[Anonymous No.4965150]

>>4965028
I wanted her bottom half to be "stacked", similarly to Wakfu, so not really, it's a valid criticism.
I was expecting to get called a beg faggot, so thanks was my instinctive response

[Anonymous No.4965152]

>>4964524
Wonderful line work, and the big ass and thighs are hot.

[Anonymous No.4965223]

Hello anons
Obviously I’m a beginner but I feel l really need help with those pose. I’m trying to break away from front shots again so I’m using this image as reference to try and draw it. I’ve been trying to examine what I’m doing wrong but I don’t think I have any idea. I used the block in method to start the sketch this time. I tried getting her silhouette right at least but I’m not sure
This angle makes me upsetti but I don’t want to give up on it

[Anonymous No.4965240]

>>4965133
You that anon with iPad, good job

[Anonymous No.4965496]

i tend to like drawing girls on the beefer side, but thoughts on the img? especially about the face and colors

[Anonymous No.4965529]

>>4959784
BASED

[Anonymous No.4965590]

>>4963113
I studied more than anything how to paint in digital, I did several tests with other drawings in those 40 days aprox.
I learned how to combine the colors to simulate shadows and almost all was try and error.
To paint that drawing I used as a reference how coomer Japanese artists like Houtengeki and Oda Kon paints. I never have painted nipples like that kek.
Was my first time painting a background. Really i used a photo and blur it, then i painted over it.
I know i have to learn about rendering, i don't know so much about it and i think that makes more appeal a drawing. I would like improve my lineart because is still too dirty, I'm learning from that too.

[Anonymous No.4965611]

>>4959703
Nice improvement, boxman

[Anonymous No.4965765]

>>4959867
>”porn isn’t art”
>needs an art board for pornographic *art* to be critiqued

Not claiming that porn is art, but isn’t this a contradiction?

[Anonymous No.4965864]

>>4965765
I have no idea what you just typed.

[Anonymous No.4966246]

[Anonymous No.4966249]

Sexy art! Most angels I saw in life isn't really that big of wings so I guess its not proportion wise goodie!

[Anonymous No.4966253]

>>4966246
>>4966249
Can you don't.

[Anonymous No.4966256]

>>4966253
My art fits into the things that is asked so stop bullying! Dumbass! It's not poroportion-wise realismic and also is eroticism!

[Anonymous No.4966366]

>>4965496
Beefy is fine, but she's TOO beefy for her head size

[Anonymous No.4966368]

>>4966249

Imagine having pretty good rendering skills, but making literally the ugliest fucking head/face imaginable

[Anonymous No.4966397]

>>4966249

>>4966253
>>4966256
>>4966368

Imagine seeing a bad picture that’s in literally over half the threads on the front page and thinking it’s actually their work. Report and move on

[Anonymous No.4966402]

>>4966246
Nice. I did coom to your Warhammer pics.

[Anonymous No.4966405]

im gonna draw loli!!!!

[Anonymous No.4966408]

>>4965496
BOOBA COOMA

[Anonymous No.4966436]

>>4966246
omg you're back

[Anonymous No.4966474]

>>4966253
OMG. I can't like even.

Why do you act like a flaming faggot?

[Anonymous No.4966605]

>>4963464
Good lord!

[Anonymous No.4966744]

>>4964236
it's lovely!

[Anonymous No.4966849]

>>4966246
ily

[Anonymous No.4966960]

>>4965496
based
>>4966366
NO, she needs moar

[Anonymous No.4966961]

I finally finished this one.

[Anonymous No.4967009]

>>4966961
Nice job

[Anonymous No.4967012]

>>4966246
you can't be the real gains goblin

[Anonymous No.4967023]

>>4962638
most of your work looks really nice, but for some reason this one looks a little off, the lower stomach extends a bit too far down and the torso is too long. the ab section of the stomach is taking up too much space on the torso in general

[Anonymous No.4967059]

>>4967023
Oh it's the figure that's fucked actually. ObstetricianM's style is grotesquely gorgeous.

[Anonymous No.4967076]

>>4967009

[Anonymous No.4967138]

wtf do i do with this pose

[Anonymous No.4967158]

>>4967138
Foot on the side/ribcage of a hog-tied man, with his exposed asshole being invited to via the hand.

[Anonymous No.4967347]

>>4967138
How many heads did you fit into that body and what absolute madman of an artist taught you to do that?

[Anonymous No.4967392]

>>4967138
did you get molested when you were little?

[Anonymous No.4967451]

>>4966246

[Anonymous No.4967457]

>>4967012
Why not?

[Anonymous No.4967544]

>>4967138
replace the head with the queen of england

[Anonymous No.4967721]

>>4964966
Progress. Her left breast is giving me trouble. Feels off

[Anonymous No.4967854]

>>4967721
Cause breasts are comprised largely of fat that has a significant weight to them. Unless they're fake, they're not static, immovable objects. They move with the position of the body and with gravity. In this position the fat would be sliding away from the centre of the ribcage on either side of the body.

[Anonymous No.4967859]

I didnt use a reference this time

[Anonymous No.4967888]

>>4967859
>dick penetrating the cervix and entering the uterus

There is nothing on this earth that makes me cringe and bring my legs together tighter. Why do men do this. You know having your cervix touched is the female equivalent it being kicked in the balls, right? Cervical bruising is a thing and it's fucking agonising. STUPID MEN STOP DOING THIS.

[Anonymous No.4967899]

>>4967888
om nom nom nom

[Anonymous No.4967902]

>>4967888
Depends on the girl. One of my ex's use to fucking love it when I stroked in deep enough to tap her cervix.

But yea, penetration of the cervix is unrealistic. Sexy, but unrealistic.

[Anonymous No.4967904]

>>4967888
Judging by the looks of that bunny I'm pretty sure whoever is fucking it doesn't give a damn if it hurts or not.

[Anonymous No.4967911]

>>4967012
you couldn't be more wrong

[Anonymous No.4967913]

>>4967854
Fantastic, thanks. I'll take another shot at it tomorrow and post it.

>>4967888
>dick penetrating the cervix and entering the uterus
pic related

[Anonymous No.4968062]

>>4967911
I love that you actually consider yourself a gains goblin kek

[Anonymous No.4968067]

Loomis

[Anonymous No.4968074]

>>4968062
i mean it's a title, not a rank, and i *am* the one the title was given to

[Anonymous No.4968078]

>>4968062
I’m still not clear why he’s so hated. He’s nicer than most of you assholes and he does produce. His style and subject matter can be a little off putting, but that’s just a matter of taste.

[Anonymous No.4968080]

>>4967138
I'd read a comic in your style, tiny heads included

[Anonymous No.4968151]

>>4968078
this. his arts grotesque but he seems to be a considerate person, I love gawking at his stuff

[Anonymous No.4968245]

>>4967911
You draw the most gay hideous faces
Fuck you cunt

[Anonymous No.4968281]

>>4968245
come fuck me yourself if you're man enough

[Anonymous No.4968573]

Fast Booba cooma

[Anonymous No.4968583]

>>4968078
Because he never listens to any critique, no matter how good it is.
It took him years to stop drawing microcephaly heads.
Everyone hates him ONLY because of this.

[Anonymous No.4968602]

A couple recent pics, having a bit more luck with colors just using airbrush...

[Anonymous No.4968603]

>>4968573
I really like this, anymore?...

[Anonymous No.4968636]

>>4968281
I just opened this and spit my coffee everywhere. Clean this shit up you whore.

[Anonymous No.4968664]

>>4968602
Can someone trace a pelvis on the lower-right figure? I'm going crazy to understand what are those lateral bumps anatomically speaking

[Anonymous No.4968676]

>>4968664
I just got lazy, sorry bro...

[Anonymous No.4968706]

>>4959432
In my honest, objectively based, supreme, infallible opinion, coomer artists are worthless and should search an actual subject for their art that is other than superficial, exploitative carnal desires

[Anonymous No.4968749]

>>4968573
God bless Artwork&Coom

[Anonymous No.4968831]

>>4967888
Silence hole

[Anonymous No.4968941]

>>4968706
>fishermen shouldn't catch fish.
okay genius.

[Anonymous No.4968950]

>>4968706
what subject

[Anonymous No.4969285]

>>4967721
>>4967854
More progress. Pushed the nipple and most of the mass further from the center. I think it'll look better once it's filled in and shaded.

[Anonymous No.4970729]

>>4959432
Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.4970781]

Gimme some crits pls bois n girls

[Anonymous No.4970847]

>>4968078
because he spams the thread with his unfinished sketches and has never taken a piece of advice

[Anonymous No.4970953]

>>4970729
another drawing of mine

[Anonymous No.4970960]

>>4970847
but that's wrong tho

[Anonymous No.4971031]

Is this good enough to try rendering?

[Anonymous No.4971037]

Is this good enough to try rendering?

[Anonymous No.4971342]

Anyone know any guides, or have any tips on drawing puffy nips like in pic related?

[Anonymous No.4971372]

>>4970781
>>4969285
>/beg/

not trying to be mean, just saying they lack fundamentals. Study lineart, form, color, all that. You just need to study more before you will get any real critique

[Anonymous No.4971374]

>>4967888
A stuffed yet alive bunny being roughly fucked...and yet that is your only concern? How dried out does your imagination have to be? I've seen dick urethra vore that feels like a punch in the crown jewels while looking at it and yet, guess what? I just move on, BECAUSE IT'S A DRAWING and I don't waste time on stuff that I don't like. I swear, you are no better than those thots on twitter that rage about vacuum tits lately.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NaSd2d5rwPE

[Anonymous No.4971395]

>>4970781
>>4971372
Worked on it a bit more, gonna put it away for now but I still wanna hear opinions for improving pls

[Anonymous No.4971412]

>>4967899
Is that how cervixes work?

[Anonymous No.4971429]

>>4971342
pic related

>>4971037
/beg/

>>4968602
>>4968603
I know style is subjective at all.. but i really can't find the appeal in how you draw faces.. that's my 2 cent

>>4968573
>>4966961
>>4963812
>>4963464
>>4961629
>>4961363
>>4960738
>>4959507
very nice

[Anonymous No.4971439]

>>4971429
>/beg/
Yeah I know, I've only been drawing for like 2 weeks. What gave it away? I fixed the collarbones and bra since that last picture also

[Anonymous No.4971445]

>>4971395
cute, i like it

[Anonymous No.4971593]

>>4964524
He drew the whole thing. Try his patreon

[Anonymous No.4971607]

>>4968573
>>4970729
>>4970781
>>4971037
>>4971342
>>4971395
Nice coom you got here

[Anonymous No.4971650]

>>4971429
Is there a similar guide for a hand grabbing into a boob? Or thighs or other soft fleshy bits

[Anonymous No.4971758]

how do i fix arm.

[Anonymous No.4971962]

>>4971758
She's got the shoulders of a linebacker, so there would be a good start

[Anonymous No.4971996]

>>4971758
You need to do a few days of perspective practice and then pick up a reference. Fixing these arms won't help you if you don't understand what's going on.

[Anonymous No.4972004]

Why my colors so muddy

[Anonymous No.4972021]

latex is hard

[Anonymous No.4972028]

>>4972021
fucking kys

[Anonymous No.4972049]

>>4972028
post your work nigger

[Anonymous No.4972058]

>>4972028
>these are the people who tell you to "fucking kys" in the salt threads
why are /beg/s so angry all the time?

[Anonymous No.4972081]

>>4972004
Your shadows are all soft and fluffy. Irl shadows often have hard, angular edges.

[Anonymous No.4972083]

>>4972081
I tried using a soft brush for everything because I always use a hard brush and try to blend it after. Neither way really gets the results I want.

>>4972058
uh

I said no such thing

[Anonymous No.4972106]

Can I get a crit on the anatomy? I didn't use a ref and want to know what my weak spots are.

[Anonymous No.4972135]

>>4972021
Oh fuck Im gonna COOOOOOOOM

[Anonymous No.4972136]

>>4971593
O shit he did? How many dollarinos do I need to spend to see it, I couldn't find it on yiff party

[Anonymous No.4972139]

>>4972021

[Anonymous No.4972151]

>>4972021
plz add tits

[Anonymous No.4972165]

>>4971758
Is she sitting down or is she crouching?

[Anonymous No.4972189]

>>4972106
>Asian genes
You don't need critique you already pre destined to GMI just by existing

[Anonymous No.4972201]

>>4972136
here, king

[Anonymous No.4972207]

>>4972083
Do you shade in color or greyscale?

[Anonymous No.4972231]

Why are people posting commission wips? It's rather unprofessional to do so unless you have explicit permission.

[Anonymous No.4972234]

>>4972231
the art belongs to the artist. a commissioner pays to give a specific order, not gain the rights to the image
also, artists 90% of the time claim in their terms of service that they hold the right to post the image in their socials and that private commissions are charged extra

[Anonymous No.4972273]

>>4972234
That's why I would never commission art from a social media zoomer.

[Anonymous No.4972276]

>>4972273
>social media zoomer
you say that as you browse a nsfw thread on 4chan full of artists trying to make it in social media
you come across like a self-entitled and nitpicky nightmarish commissioner, might wanna lower your nose a bit

[Anonymous No.4972314]

>>4972201
Thanks mate, much appreciated!
It's cool to be able to compare his solution with mine

[Anonymous No.4972331]

rape me

[Anonymous No.4972378]

>>4971372
Thanks. I'll spend the next month doing some serious practice, I've got the spare time. Gonna make it my goal to pass the /beg/ threshold.

>>4972058
Yeah, no. Don't put words in my mouth.

>>4972234
You should check with a lawyer on that. I'm 90% sure that the commissioner holds the rights to the image by default (unless, like you said, it's in the contract. but it's not automatic)

[Anonymous No.4972385]

>>4972314
np. here's some practices I did of his stuff. he has great linework!

[Anonymous No.4972387]

>>4972378
>I'm 90% sure that the commissioner holds the rights to the image by default
Wrong. The copyright always belongs to the artist, unless there is a written and signed contract that hires the artist as an employee
In digital media, the commissioner simply buys the service of having the artwork made and gets the file. In traditional, the same applies with a physical copy. But still, in both cases, rights belong to the artist. If the commissioner doesn't want the artwork showcased in a portfolio, arrangements need to be made before-hand.
And yeh, of course it depends on the terms of service like said earlier

[Anonymous No.4972404]

>>4972378
the point of a commission at least most of the time is to have something you want drawn, nobody cares if they commission scat porn and it ends up on rule34. and they certainly wont be suing the artist in that case.

[Anonymous No.4972416]

>>4972189
he literally just copied japanese from google translate. That shit is pure gibberish.

[Anonymous No.4972450]

>>4972416
>he literally just copied japanese from google translate. That shit is pure gibberish.
Asian genes

[Anonymous No.4972463]

>>4959432
This pic is one of the top dumbest things ive seen on this board and that accounts for a lot.

[Anonymous No.4972464]

>>4959784
>>4959784

[Anonymous No.4972465]

[Anonymous No.4972467]

>>4972464
At first glance I thought she was throwing up.

[Anonymous No.4972469]

>>4972467
maybe that's how diglets are born

[Anonymous No.4972520]

>>4972207
Color, checking my values occasionally.

[Anonymous No.4972571]

"From today on I am your teacher, we start now - with taijutsu."

[Anonymous No.4972641]

>>4964115
Looks like from Joel Jurion school.

[Anonymous No.4972671]

Not done yet but any critiques?

[Anonymous No.4972687]

new thread
>>4972686
>>4972686
>>4972686

[Anonymous No.4972999]

>>4972671
>any critiques?
Yeah. Finish.

[Anonymous No.4973026]

>>4972106
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
wew lad I hope for your sake you're underage

[Anonymous No.4974721]

thoughts? especially on the anatomy and colors

[Anonymous No.4975555]

>>4974721
she looks swole, and the lighting doesnt make sense

colors dont matter as much as those