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/draw/ Anonymous Sun Oct 11 21:56:41 2020 No.4929094 [Reply] [Original]

Draw thread

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Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others! Don't take anything personal!
Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 1000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.
If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.

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>fellowBro's books :
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>>	Anonymous Sun Oct 11 21:59:17 2020 No.4929099 File: 194 KB, 1095x1028, sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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Anonymous Sun Oct 11 22:32:35 2020 No.4929158

>>4929094
These are just so good, the shapes, the color and the lighting are just insanely good, and that brushwork is so satisfying
Is the artist here? can you share the brushes? I absolutely love this chalky, traditional brush feel but i can't reach anything with this level of texture with the ones i have here

>>	Anonymous Sun Oct 11 22:37:30 2020 No.4929166 >>4929158 Also, do you have a blog too?

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Anonymous Sun Oct 11 22:44:48 2020 No.4929176
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>>4929094
This was a recent commission I did for a yugioh card mat. Sorry for shit quality, the image was too big cause there was a specific size the dude wanted

Anonymous Sun Oct 11 23:03:17 2020 No.4929199
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>>4929176
The poses are kinda stuff but I think this is super cool, I like it a lot.

Here is some concept art for a comic I’m writing. This girl is a pop star & secret agent.

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>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 01:46:00 2020 No.4929462 File: 1.00 MB, 1540x2310, com 10_11.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929094 repostin cause new thread

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 01:53:23 2020 No.4929470 File: 2.41 MB, 1500x1714, studies.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 02:23:43 2020 No.4929486 >>4929158 these are studies from the last /fag/ thread, mainly from lofi, both the brushes and some recommendations from the artists u can find there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 02:24:36 2020 No.4929488 >>4929308 Is he sucking a cock?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 02:27:32 2020 No.4929493 >>4929488 shit, I thought you were the one shitposting

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 03:06:41 2020 No.4929533 File: 535 KB, 1000x1000, 4squ.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not getting much feedback in beg

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 03:10:44 2020 No.4929542 File: 2.47 MB, 1447x815, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think this is it for now, but I could use some comments

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 03:18:37 2020 No.4929556 >>4929542 the kid in the far right hasan absent look, unlike the others it looks as if she was using some sort of anime mask, other than that cool drawing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 04:02:18 2020 No.4929592 >>4929542 Wow you've been working on this for a long time

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 04:09:04 2020 No.4929600
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Reposting here from beg. Wanted to know if there was something to fix before I try to color it, someone on beg told me that my lines are too thick, but I was thinking of changing the lineart color, like on the trees it's going to be a dark green instead of black

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 05:42:17 2020 No.4929698 File: 502 KB, 1200x1886, harp.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Came around to finally 'finish' this picture. I'm not satisfied with my attempt at shading.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 05:53:31 2020 No.4929712 File: 1.63 MB, 1908x2969, 20201012_025315.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 06:20:25 2020 No.4929735 >>4929533 is that adam kovic top right? and will smith top left?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 06:27:50 2020 No.4929743 >>4929712 I love pan's labyrinth but this belongs to /beg/.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 06:29:00 2020 No.4929745 >>4929462 this is cool man, hope you post again when it's done or nearly done.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 06:32:58 2020 No.4929749 >>4929462 >>4929745 also do you have a blog? would follow instantly

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 07:08:53 2020 No.4929773
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>>4929094
fucking shit i feel like i'm completely ruining this trying to finish it. which pose is better bros does the head turn feel to awkward?
>>4929470
these are really nice anon

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 07:09:58 2020 No.4929775 >>4929712 amazin'

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 07:34:37 2020 No.4929802 >>4929773 the right one is great

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:02:31 2020 No.4929821 File: 775 KB, 1671x940, preheresy worldeater painting done jpg 40%.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929542 It's great anon. Love it

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:14:07 2020 No.4929831 >>4929470 Tell me your secrets, your style is what I what to achieve. Also do you post anywhere?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:17:09 2020 No.4929836 >>4929821 That's awesome do you work at GW?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:28:00 2020 No.4929848 >>4929821 Probably the best in this board.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:29:32 2020 No.4929850 File: 98 KB, 594x867, oct 12.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] jollof rice

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:30:46 2020 No.4929852 >>4929470 very nice work, mad jelly, but dude on right's arms are too short

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:48:24 2020 No.4929872 File: 322 KB, 742x806, 20201011_221316.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929821 noice I posted this from the previous thread, added background this time. Any critiques please?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 08:51:39 2020 No.4929876 >>4929872 work on your anatomy buildings and bike look way better than the people

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 09:02:09 2020 No.4929890 >>4929876 Noted. Is it because the people are too stiff or the body is disproportionate, or both?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 09:07:13 2020 No.4929900 >>4929872 You need more practice on drawing characters but you already have a nive sense of composition and stylisation. It looks pretty good as an illustration.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 09:15:47 2020 No.4929910 >>4929749 twitter.com/Hitoshura3 It should have a Instagram and artstation link in there aswell

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 09:17:02 2020 No.4929914

>>4929890
well, they don't look stiff, it's more that the eyes are floating, yes, the limbs are disproportionate and don't match with each other, and they're just not correct

you have some leeway with stylization but it's clear that you're just guessing and don't really have a feel for what goes where

background does genuinely look pretty good, though

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 10:24:58 2020 No.4930043 >>4929743 Retard

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 10:29:19 2020 No.4930050 File: 825 KB, 1080x1621, Screenshot_20201012_092545.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished 100 hands

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 10:30:17 2020 No.4930052 File: 480 KB, 1009x1418, Screenshot_20201012_092633.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4930050 Non dominant

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 10:31:24 2020 No.4930055 File: 574 KB, 1020x1448, Screenshot_20201012_092724.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4930050 >>4930052

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 10:42:55 2020 No.4930073 File: 313 KB, 3363x1696, collage (2).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 13:29:56 2020 No.4930378
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>>4929836
I wish mate.

>>4929848
furry anon posting in last thread is twice as good man.

>>4929872
ty.
Make sure your characters have the same perspective as the environment. Fix some of the anatomy. Use the soft brush less. You're well on the way. People and faces probably is the hardest thing to draw well.

Also. New sketch, i'm not sure about dynamic poses from my head. It looks ok now but it might look retarded when i start rendering it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 13:35:25 2020 No.4930386 >>4929773 Is that Edward? The face looks good. You probably wouldn't get that angle unless the body is in profile view (try it for yourself) so you could either change the body or draw a 3/4 view face

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 13:47:26 2020 No.4930415 File: 73 KB, 750x1000, A3233AFB-84B6-449D-9D2D-023CAAE09CE0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] 1 hour drawing of some stuff in the corner of my room

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>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 14:19:45 2020 No.4930534 File: 2.05 MB, 2736x3648, IMG_20201013_040022.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Working on this.

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 14:50:40 2020 No.4930643

>>4930050
I like the drawing aspect. How bold it is. The colors are too wild though imo. There is so much contrast everywhere it becomes hard to appreciate the drawing. Even if you're going for a calarts kind of style, the colors and lineweight could use more hierarchy. Check out James Jean's sketchbook pages if you haven't already. It has a lot of superposing drawings and all but it still reads well.

>>4930415
I really like the colors and composition. I think the darks on the left are too dark and distracting. You could lower the contrast and edges of the red-ish thing to make it recede like it should. Also the hard edge of the shadow on the right is distracting too. Nice study overall though.

>>4930525
It looks great anon. The lineweight, carefully drawn ellipses and all. The only thing I don't like is the girl's hair. The underdrawing is too messy. It doesn't look as well thought out as the rest

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 14:50:58 2020 No.4930646 File: 91 KB, 500x570, sightsizedrawing.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929831 yes, but i prefer to stay anon the secret is sight size drawing isn't a meme

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:08:47 2020 No.4930712 >>4930646 how about coloring any books or videos you recommend?

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:32:40 2020 No.4930803
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shat the bed on this one, i'm a little burnt out on painting now I think. this is from photo reference as well. it came out really stale and lifeless, but I couldn't figure out why exactly. very muddy all over. if anyone has any advice I'd appreciate it
>>4929158
thanks man, no blog. like the other anon said, I use Lofi's brush set as well as Iben Krutt's:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/13ovYfi0Cqc5KL727OmvLceMxqluDqttx/view
https://www.dropbox.com/s/w9wjmcn4ukzmah4/Iben%20Krutt%20Traditional%20Media%20Brushes.abr?dl=0
there are a lot of brushes in Lofi's set, I usually stick to dusty 12, sampled brush 10 2, and one that I think is called Madurska 12 but I accidentally renamed it so I'm not sure

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:33:33 2020 No.4930805 File: 81 KB, 563x718, 1588207079301.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4930803 reference

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:42:14 2020 No.4930820

>>4930643
>I really like the colors and composition. I think the darks on the left are too dark and distracting. You could lower the contrast and edges of the red-ish thing to make it recede like it should. Also the hard edge of the shadow on the right is distracting too. Nice study overall though.
Now that I look at it, the darks really are just too dark lol. Some good advice, thanks!

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:45:56 2020 No.4930832 >>4930805 >>4930803 cute anon, you will go big in no time I'm sure, in the meantime I would also like to know if you have some sort of blog to track your progress.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 15:54:09 2020 No.4930849 File: 40 KB, 640x817, Sshita.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] An attempt to draw Terada style

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 16:20:28 2020 No.4930904 >>4930534 Shoulders + upper back are too narrow. I think you have the case of trying to squeeze in a drawing on small paper. Your lines are very nice though.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 16:37:37 2020 No.4930931 >>4930643 Thank you for the advice anon, I'll look into his sketchbook.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 16:50:49 2020 No.4930956 File: 423 KB, 1583x2048, 9874B2D8-1EE7-4E18-8270-0A4A6F815B4B.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How can I fix this?

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 17:19:58 2020 No.4931019 File: 1.58 MB, 2849x3224, 20201013_081901.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Little sketch

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 17:24:11 2020 No.4931028
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Also posting this one again for some feedback. Something about it feels unappealing. I think its the colours, I definitely struggle to colour in digital because of the range of choice. I normally draw in ballpoint so I pretty much limit myself to blue, black, and red. Also I have poor colour vision

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 17:28:49 2020 No.4931042
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do I post basic exercises like this here or /beg/?
/beg/ keeps telling me to fuck off and there probably aren’t many people who can offer good pointers there since it seems to be floating loomis heads 24/7, but on the other hand, it’s hardly a drawing

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 17:41:41 2020 No.4931068 File: 102 KB, 800x878, ыыыы.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Scribbles

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 18:20:42 2020 No.4931136 >>4931042 What's going on here? Is this all painted in photoshop? The lighting and volumes hardly make any sense

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 18:31:18 2020 No.4931155 >>4931136 wat

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 19:04:32 2020 No.4931206
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>>4931028
It's difficult to say. There are plenty of things that are great. It's well drawn, very expressive, well stylised.
I think the background being the same hue and value as the character makes the silhouette less strong. Also there is so much saturated red in the clothes and lines that the blood doesn't pop as much as it could. Value wise there isn't a clear area of focus. Some darker accents in focal areas might help.

I assume your layers are well organised so you might try to make a few variations with hues and values and see if there are interesting results.

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Anonymous Mon Oct 12 19:22:39 2020 No.4931238

>>4931206
Thanks for the detailed reply mate. You make very good points about the silhouette not popping off the bg, and the blood losing its impact because of all the red. I will toy around with it. Its a smart idea for me to pop into greyscale to value check, I will put that into practice

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 19:25:33 2020 No.4931247 File: 207 KB, 938x1180, IMG_20201007_141634.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Digital is nice for that refined look but ballpoint is where my heart is

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 20:06:09 2020 No.4931315 File: 2.01 MB, 2976x3968, Webp.net-compress-image (17).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Need to just mame her shirt and highlight her hair and some minor stuff Maybe tomorrow will have this finished

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 21:39:36 2020 No.4931449 File: 1.20 MB, 640x993, 9x9czctthps51.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pretty new to this type of thing so please critique. It's a character concept but I guess it could be a lot less stiff

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 21:47:22 2020 No.4931458 File: 78 KB, 875x1000, wwmn.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Been really interested in Adam Hughes' style lately. Thoughts?

Anonymous Mon Oct 12 22:05:27 2020 No.4931478
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>>4930803
Really good anon, if you make a blog do share. I'd love to see more of your drawings.

You just inspired me to try and color this one. Still trying to lay values, might try your brushes later.

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 22:30:02 2020 No.4931518 >>4931478 that's adorable

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 22:35:40 2020 No.4931525 File: 2.73 MB, 4032x3024, 68EFE20F-7A36-43E9-A550-742AAE5B8BCB.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew some girls from the waifu generator

>>	Anonymous Mon Oct 12 22:36:44 2020 No.4931527 Fuck the image sperged out on me

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 01:23:30 2020 No.4931679 File: 318 KB, 1200x805, ShinobuResize.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929533 Definitely not beg >>4930956 Looking aight, but kinda stiff. Maybe make the pose a little more asymmetrical. >>4931478 love it

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 01:53:56 2020 No.4931717 >>4929533 Feedback on what, exactly? Looks like you know what you're doing. Just keep doing it. Try working with values

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 02:35:48 2020 No.4931766 >>4931315 The shape of the eye is pretty weird, almost makes it look misplaced. Can you post the ref if there is one?

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>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 03:01:04 2020 No.4931782 >>4931766 Yeah the eye is a bit rough also the nose needs to be a bit more perky I wont post a reference for obvious reasons

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 04:27:02 2020 No.4931848 >>4931777 Very good, finish it.

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 05:26:40 2020 No.4931895
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>>4929462
this anon here
>>4930803
Ty for the links! Your stuff is quite bold and expressive to me :D, keep up the dank work. I took some time this evening to mess around with the ones you listed however the further I went along the worse I was trying to force it into my normal set. I think I need to learn some more texture and values as usual.
>>4931777
I can feel the salty rage waiting for my turn to play footises in DBZ Fighterz while I watch myself get air juggled for 30 seconds.
>>4931478
nice shapes! Very clean too
>>4931028
Hmm if her foot wasnt kinda wonky I would love it
>>4930378
I like it! I think you should give yourself a little more credit and keep going the same direction your going.
>>4931068
I like the monster and the scarecrow the most, nice and loose tho. Better faces than me too in sketch form lol.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 05:46:28 2020 No.4931908 File: 1.29 MB, 1854x2730, 20201013_024441.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 06:04:10 2020 No.4931925 Are there draw requests threads, drawfriends? ~t. untalented hackjob

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 06:35:44 2020 No.4931964 >>4931925 read the rules

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 06:39:35 2020 No.4931973 >>4931964 I see absolutely nothing on a no request ruling so thanks for that ig

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 06:41:22 2020 No.4931980 >>4931973 read the rules, retard $400 or fuck off

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 06:59:32 2020 No.4931998 >>4931973 oh so you were talking about paid work? My bad. Then by all means ask away

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 07:19:42 2020 No.4932019 >>4931236 >>4931068 >>4930525 wow i didn't know there are people who can actually draw here

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 08:31:48 2020 No.4932115 >>4930525 How'd you shade the kettle like that?

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:15:23 2020 No.4932175 >>4931980 Fuck you bitch >>4931998 I'm not willing to pay 400 dollarydoos for sub-optimal work, thanks anyway

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:33:59 2020 No.4932215 >>4931908 Love your shit anon. Your style extends beyond your line work.

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>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:42:56 2020 No.4932234 File: 454 KB, 700x691, pumpkin1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:45:33 2020 No.4932239 >>4932234 There is no better way to make your work look like uninspired trash than plopping something down on a flat grey background.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:46:53 2020 No.4932242 >>4932234 man I wish I could use color and values and stuff like that, good shit man

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:50:56 2020 No.4932253 >>4932239 I'm not interested in backgrounds dude

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:52:22 2020 No.4932259 >>4932218 Kekked. Your shitty linework can be recognized from the thumbnail. Please don't ever take formal training.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:53:44 2020 No.4932262 >>4930534 >>4931895 >>4932234 >>4930525 GMI vibes from these

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 09:59:22 2020 No.4932272 >>4932259 yea, thanks

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 11:06:00 2020 No.4932393 >>4929470 do you browse /s/ for references lol

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 11:19:09 2020 No.4932427 >>4932253 protip: use transparent background and export as png, then retards have nothing to latch on to bonus points for using exporting as jpg with the checkered background

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 11:24:09 2020 No.4932436 >>4932234 It's very neat. You could push the rendering a little further to make it more graphic imo. Like add a bit of specularity, some hand painted texture, maybe a drop shadow.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 11:41:28 2020 No.4932458 >>4932234 Looking good anon

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 12:20:55 2020 No.4932543 File: 1.55 MB, 1437x709, diptych.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm working on a diptych about being flashbanged in counter strike

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 13:47:09 2020 No.4932691 >>4932239 You are an actual idiot

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 14:07:57 2020 No.4932713
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>>4932234
Beautiful man. I like your style.
>>4931895
>I like it! I think you should give yourself a little more credit and keep going the same direction your going.
Ty. For some reason i never get very satisfied with the results i get. Maybe it's a mindset thing.

I've been listening to the Dune audio book while drawing. Gave making my own stillsuit concept a shot. Anyone else listening to audio books while painting to get into the mood?

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 14:12:48 2020 No.4932722 >>4932543 Looks great so far. Maybe make his eyes a bit more dilated?

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 14:50:15 2020 No.4932785 >>4929112 nicely done but resize it next time, anons are lazy and dont want to open and wait for a file

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:33:45 2020 No.4932856 File: 2.01 MB, 4128x3096, 20201013_202637.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can I please get some opinions on this self portrait? Thank you

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:34:55 2020 No.4932858 >>4932393 even a blood soaked tissue could resemble a rose from far enough away

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:43:58 2020 No.4932875 File: 2.32 MB, 2706x3948, sure ok.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] im trying to work on line weight and stuff, wanna know if it looks shitty or not

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:48:14 2020 No.4932885 File: 374 KB, 900x1350, Day Eight Teeth.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:49:45 2020 No.4932888

>>4932856
resize your images before you upload them next time.
As for the work itself, I think your primary issue is decisiveness. Your edges lack precision, your value choices seem haphazard and unconsidered, and the work overall reads as messy.

If you're going to work with ink, I would invest in some better brushes of varying shapes, and I would advise you to be more patient with your work. It's impossible to get a hard edge with ink if you're putting down wet ink on to wet ink.

Get some larger brushes so that you can easily create a value plane in one or two brush strokes.

Look at Benjamin Bjorklund, Kathe Kollwitz, and Nick Runge's ink wash drawings.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:50:24 2020 No.4932889 File: 79 KB, 312x184, steank.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Ive been doing a lot of short food paintings (this was 20 minutes) in an attempt to learn how to paint. Any good resoruces for specifically painting?

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 15:57:42 2020 No.4932907 >>4932888 Thank you for such thoughtful advice. This really rings true with me and I will be using it to improve.

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 16:00:30 2020 No.4932915
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>>4932889
I love the colors, great warm up. If you mean good reference material, then I'd recommend Pinterest, has great hq images most of the time.
>also
working on this beastie, any feedback much appreciated

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 16:08:41 2020 No.4932926

>>4932907
for sure. I think ink wash is a really valuable medium to practice with, it's very punishing and reveals flaws pretty easily. But at the same time, you can pump them out relatively quickly and they're great for studying value and brush stroke economy.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 16:09:26 2020 No.4932927 >>4932856 1. resize your shit 2. values are terrible, learn about midtones 3. face is deformed, learn structure of the face.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 16:19:08 2020 No.4932945 >>4932927 Thank you for taking the time to give me advice. Very valuable!

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 16:23:50 2020 No.4932953 >>4932926 Brush stroke economy is going to be my mantra I think, at least for the next little while. They're actually watercolours by the way,

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 17:07:01 2020 No.4933020 >>4931458 Hubba hubba

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 17:30:46 2020 No.4933057 >>4929094 every time i open the fucking catalog these adorable little shits are taunting me for my lack of talent and it hurts

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 17:48:33 2020 No.4933075 File: 203 KB, 1536x1185, butwhy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] its nice to just draw a butt sometimes

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 17:50:51 2020 No.4933079 >>4933075 This looks so dirty, its hot

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 17:53:20 2020 No.4933081
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>>4932856
>>4932888
>>4932927
Tried to take on your criticisms and do another selfie. If it's not too much hassle would love more feedback.
Also, sorry, I dont know about resizing my shit

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:01:16 2020 No.4933093 File: 167 KB, 386x829, asdaw33333122.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:01:49 2020 No.4933095 File: 421 KB, 1350x600, sk2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:03:40 2020 No.4933099 >>4933093 >>4933095 Wow awesome

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:06:00 2020 No.4933107
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>>4930803
>>4931478

Testing out the brushes now, I still find incredbly hard to work with textured ones... I tend to lean too much into softening/blending everything up and feel no control on smaller areas, but i'm enjoying it

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:14:58 2020 No.4933121 File: 362 KB, 1083x556, skuxbn.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] skulls from last night. feel like my head drawing is still shaky. trying to commit the skull to memory.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:17:23 2020 No.4933127 >>4933093 >>4933095 those are looking amazing asukafag, but don't go too deep on the rabbit hole if you endgame is not realistic drawing

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:19:28 2020 No.4933129 >>4933127 im not asuka poster.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:22:13 2020 No.4933136 >>4933129 lmao, i'm sorry, still sick drawings anon

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 18:55:21 2020 No.4933189 >>4932887 >>4932885 pretty cute stuff anon >>4932889 I think your picking up decently on it :0, I imagine high tier food paintings would prolly even sell a bit. >>4933093 >>4933095 Excellent form :0

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 19:15:17 2020 No.4933220 File: 174 KB, 773x1024, port4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] portraits digital

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 19:21:43 2020 No.4933226 >>4933127 asukafaggot stagnated into lazy coomshit long time ago. Meanwhile this anon kept grinding the fuck out and made huge gains. I remember both these fags posting in /beg/ like a year ago,

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 19:22:07 2020 No.4933227 Anyone taking requests?

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 21:12:24 2020 No.4933465 File: 716 KB, 944x905, unknown.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4933107 nearly finished, only the tail left. I have to say, I loved the sampled brush 10 2

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 21:24:07 2020 No.4933480 >>4933465 The wings are pretty flat and the horns could use more polishing. Came out really nice either way.

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 21:40:31 2020 No.4933524 >>4933480 Thank you. I plan to continue tomorrow with a fresh head so I'll see what I can polish more. Will keep the wings and horns in mind

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 21:41:50 2020 No.4933527 >asukafag what, who exactly is that, now I don't want to draw evangelion shit

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 23:02:40 2020 No.4933665 File: 232 KB, 500x889, sketch.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Tue Oct 13 23:20:18 2020 No.4933702

>>4933107
>>4933465
hey, yeah the textured brushes I was using are good for fur and hair, but I'm not sure how useful they would be for hard or smooth surfaces like scales and horns. I think the painting came out really well though, it's very polished and on-model

>>	Anonymous Tue Oct 13 23:49:55 2020 No.4933752 >>4931525 very cute!

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 00:54:57 2020 No.4933822 File: 204 KB, 893x1000, xxcvvccxcv.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:08:40 2020 No.4933837 >>4933081 Please stop posting sideways

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:28:52 2020 No.4933861 Anyone on this whole fucking board take REQUESTS?!

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:29:58 2020 No.4933862 File: 221 KB, 500x889, sketch2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4933665

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:30:22 2020 No.4933863 >>4933861 It’s against the boards rules to request free art FYI

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:35:09 2020 No.4933866 >>4933861 Just reply to the artists you like and ask for their social networking names and request through there

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:37:49 2020 No.4933869 File: 268 KB, 874x1200, val_3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] study

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 01:55:00 2020 No.4933892 >>4933863 Ty, I couldn't find the rule on that. I'm offering $$ though!I >>4933866 Ty for the suffice fren!!!

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 02:00:44 2020 No.4933902 File: 660 KB, 1301x722, Unt131313itled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anon Wed Oct 14 02:03:54 2020 No.4933905 File: 569 KB, 1280x958, D66EE3FE-C057-4364-BB4C-A487BAE5EA19.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Comment critiques

>>	Anon Wed Oct 14 02:05:18 2020 No.4933907 File: 746 KB, 1280x958, 52129A5B-929C-460C-87D2-BD80C9557596.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 02:25:22 2020 No.4933925 >>4929821 >>4930378 Do you have a blog where we can follow? if you wish to remain anon that's fine.

Anonymous Wed Oct 14 02:34:04 2020 No.4933943
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>>4931068
cute but i think for the girls you use too many sharp corners

>>4932713
don't the suits have masks and hoods? I pictured them like Lawrence of Arabia kind of Arabs soldiers. Long cloaks over their stillsuits hiding their knives and stuff

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 02:34:58 2020 No.4933947 >>4933907 >>4933905 if you are going for optical illusions the second one works for my eyes in distorting around but the first does not.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 03:02:24 2020 No.4933968 File: 62 KB, 983x1023, rsz_img_20201012_064201_2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 04:00:20 2020 No.4934022 >>4933968 Tfw

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 04:18:41 2020 No.4934041 >>4933837 Sorry mate, I'm on a mobile but I'll figure that shit out

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 05:54:07 2020 No.4934148 File: 1.35 MB, 3202x1908, 20201014_025149.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 06:09:28 2020 No.4934164 File: 315 KB, 760x593, Screenshot_20201014-130745.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Quit or continue?

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 07:08:37 2020 No.4934209 >>4934041 When mine does that I rotate in the photo viewer app. Sometimes even if it's straight I save changes to make it take

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 09:17:58 2020 No.4934386 >>4934041 Also have the same problem, orientation in my phone is fine, but when posted here it gets rotated idk why.

Anonymous Wed Oct 14 09:30:06 2020 No.4934397
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>>4933465
>>4933480
Polished the wings and horn more, but desu I have no idea what I'm doing rendering from imagination, I need to stop running away from doing proper render studies

I think I can call this one done

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 09:36:38 2020 No.4934409 File: 1006 KB, 2160x2160, 20201014_213324.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This better not rotate.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 10:44:41 2020 No.4934558 File: 316 KB, 456x687, CORNET.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] more foodstuffs.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 10:45:55 2020 No.4934563 >>4934558 this, this is the name of the thing I was trying to remember as I drew spyro's tail thank you

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 11:01:03 2020 No.4934582 >>4934397 >no dragon cock ngmi

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 11:02:22 2020 No.4934585 >>4934563 theyre called 'asshole pastries'

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 11:14:33 2020 No.4934615 File: 39 KB, 459x569, Little critter.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This is the best I can do... please say something nice his name is little critter

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 12:05:24 2020 No.4934708 >>4934164 What's this pose meant to convey? Either way you try to hide his anatomy with armor and clothing, but the flaws are still apparent. His proportions are also not good, especially in the arms.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 12:11:33 2020 No.4934719 >>4934615 im gonna coom

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 13:35:00 2020 No.4934886 File: 1.83 MB, 1500x1844, asd.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] first digital drawing. I did it with a intuos small and it was quite frustrating to do the lines in a precise way, but I'm sure I'll get used to it by practicing for some time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 14:46:32 2020 No.4935071 Hello. Anyone wasn't to make forty bucks :/

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 14:48:01 2020 No.4935073 >>4935071 LETS GO

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 15:02:16 2020 No.4935100 File: 100 KB, 1330x756, 66g1kmqx7ak21.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4935071 Speak.

Anonymous Wed Oct 14 15:16:29 2020 No.4935126
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WIP. Trying to leave behind anime for more experimental shit and been drawing gods from a Tabletop setting I've been working on. This one needs inking cause the pencil has begun to rub and fade.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 15:20:20 2020 No.4935131 File: 2.33 MB, 4032x3024, 20201014_151834.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4935126 Idk why that one came out sideways.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 19:56:48 2020 No.4935623 File: 336 KB, 1500x561, CapturaFinal.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think I'm overdoing this

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 20:26:21 2020 No.4935669 >>4935623 this is gold. Blog?

Anonymous Wed Oct 14 20:33:34 2020 No.4935682

>>4934886
First of all that's fantastic, what program are you using? Second, you're going to want to move to a bigger tablet if it's at all possible, unless you really like RSI from working on a tiny surface. You can make the small ones work, but a medium/large one should be your goal ideally.

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 20:34:54 2020 No.4935689 File: 1.83 MB, 2048x2048, 6FF11D69-AD40-41A8-B238-1C866C7EC152.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] study turned into baphomet

>>	Anonymous Wed Oct 14 23:20:44 2020 No.4935947 File: 592 KB, 1079x1152, Screenshot_20201015-142000_Gallery.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Quick doodle of some chicks and a crab

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 01:13:56 2020 No.4936065 >>4935126 >>4935131 anon make a separate thread for this and post your other works

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 01:19:15 2020 No.4936071

>>4935682
Thanks anon, I did it in Photoshop. For now I'll keep this one, I've had it for a while but I never used it. The prices of everything in general where I live have increased a lot, for the moment it is a little difficult to renew it, although if I have the opportunity at some point I will do it

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 01:26:32 2020 No.4936086 File: 470 KB, 1257x703, stuufyyy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hey i'm trying to get into digital painting so iam doing ctrl+paint stuff how is this so far?

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 01:37:57 2020 No.4936110
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Trying to finish this illustration. I learned a painful lesson in having to re-do all the lineart (bottom frame, will use that to replace the upper frames) because I drew this very small at the start.
Wanna gib some comments on some of your pieces guys but I gotta go rn. Will do later. Everyone seems to be doing nice work.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 01:53:39 2020 No.4936131 >>4929094 I've been following Iben's work for ages but I could never ever study his painting style properly, it's so difficult.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 02:10:16 2020 No.4936148 File: 751 KB, 2080x1560, DSC_0101.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Linocut print

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 02:25:10 2020 No.4936160 >>4930849 Really cool, anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 03:38:36 2020 No.4936267 >>4935669 https://www.instagram.com/jordi_milian/

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 04:09:30 2020 No.4936307 File: 1.21 MB, 2480x3508, 66A5DF10-90AB-4724-8F35-EF70EB5000C1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drawing fanart. I’ve been practicing male drawings.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 04:11:53 2020 No.4936308 >>4936086 Can anyone tell me if the free videos are worth watching? or should I just watch the paid ones? Do the paid ones also cover the really basic concepts?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 04:14:50 2020 No.4936311 File: 1.20 MB, 480x403, A547FE91-E277-41C1-93E6-EE40B7333A16.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Attempt to make a decent gif. In progress.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 04:37:18 2020 No.4936336 >>4936086 Pretty good. The ellipses are visibly asymmetrical. Try flipping your canvas from time to time.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 04:51:11 2020 No.4936352 File: 1.79 MB, 2000x1334, nick 10_14_ic.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4931895 progress on skelly bar

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 05:22:14 2020 No.4936388 >>4936336 aight thanks anon >>4936308 i actually have no idea some anon suggested this and i'm working through it

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 05:40:57 2020 No.4936414 >>4932218 >>4933822 who ever told you to leave /beg/ absolutely fucking lied to you, your anatomy is fucking embarrassing and you should feel gay for believing them.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 06:04:03 2020 No.4936448 File: 2.11 MB, 1908x4032, 20201014_200453.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 06:04:40 2020 No.4936449 >>4936352 love your work man, you should finish that bird guy.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 06:39:16 2020 No.4936487 >>4936311 her head tilt needs to be a tiny bit slower. Add 1 in-between frame.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 06:41:03 2020 No.4936492 >>4936448 really nice, blog pls

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 07:10:32 2020 No.4936552 >>4936448 Oldman's hand is too long. Maybe that's done on purpose though.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 07:14:03 2020 No.4936559 >>4936448 Oldman's arm is too long. Maybe that's done on purpose though.

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 07:59:45 2020 No.4936608
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>>4933925
It's not even that i wanna be anon. I just never upload my shit anywhere. I don't think my digital stuff comes out very well so i might as well not upload it.>>4933943

>>4933943
Actually yes, just figuring out how it looks underneath it. It ended up poorly tho. I'm in the process of remaking it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 08:12:18 2020 No.4936623 >>4936608 Is >>4933943 one yours? It's really good anon, but she looks very asian. Was it on purpose?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 08:26:07 2020 No.4936644 File: 806 KB, 1668x2388, D7FE5E6C-D33F-41B8-8C91-A306E04651FE.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How the FUCK do you draw feet like actually

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 08:38:07 2020 No.4936659 File: 267 KB, 891x1207, Screenshot 2020-10-15 093747.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4936644 by studying some anatomy, boi

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 08:41:27 2020 No.4936664 >>4936659 I like the mix up between normal toes and Morton's toes.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 09:11:39 2020 No.4936697 >>4936352 Hate your work man, your colors and values are annoying to look at.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 09:15:57 2020 No.4936703 File: 2.58 MB, 3024x4032, sketchbook 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4936623 Two different anons man. I'm the space marine guy

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 09:17:37 2020 No.4936704 >>4936414 cringe

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 09:49:53 2020 No.4936753 >>4936414 cringed at this

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 10:19:59 2020 No.4936802 >>4936704 >>4936753 >>4932218 >>4933822 Samefag

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 10:21:12 2020 No.4936805 >>4936704 >>4936703 Not him, but his art is still quite /beg/, and has only been posting art if people from the neck up in that thread for a while now. It's pretty clear that he'd dumped his time into grinding loomis heads and nothing more.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 10:40:29 2020 No.4936844 >>4936559 yeah maybe, i lean towards exaggeration over anatomy >>4936492 thx anon pineapplemikel on ig

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:21:35 2020 No.4936930 File: 119 KB, 1079x384, Screenshot_20201015-082117_Chrome.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4936802 cringe

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:27:35 2020 No.4936940

>>4936805
Not either of you three, but please take your vendetta drama out of here, you seem to be singling out one poster despite there being posts of poorly drawn and disembodied legs and hands everywhere, which hints at butthurt. Perhaps reddit is more your speed?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:38:44 2020 No.4936965 File: 328 KB, 700x691, тыкв.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4932234 Tryna improve materials and lighting

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:42:04 2020 No.4936969 File: 66 KB, 485x722, xxcvvcx.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:52:31 2020 No.4936991 >>4936086 Could need some harder edges, otherwise really good

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 11:56:00 2020 No.4937000 >>4936065 I just did. Didn't fix the sideways problem, but they're there.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 12:15:43 2020 No.4937047 File: 101 KB, 356x700, xccccxzvv.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 13:31:43 2020 No.4937207 File: 150 KB, 200x377, 1595697315854.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4936697 Rent free

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 13:32:58 2020 No.4937211 >>4936449 Bird man is on the rotation, the client paid upfront so that one is getting done no matter what.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 13:48:51 2020 No.4937239 >>4936965 good stuff anon kun

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 13:52:58 2020 No.4937246 File: 532 KB, 1200x1600, 009.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 14:29:08 2020 No.4937301

>>4936940
>vendetta
That was an honest assement of his art you fag. Drawing face well enough for /beg/s that are too /beg/ notice that you can't draw characters from the neck down still makes you a beginner period. Or is your real problem that you are in fact the /beg/ in question being since you didn't mention a damn thing about the art its self?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 15:14:07 2020 No.4937391 >>4937301 You sound like a collosally bootyblasted faggot.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 15:26:36 2020 No.4937425 >>4937391 Beautiful projecting from a shitty samefagging /beg/ dying for the last word.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 15:29:50 2020 No.4937437 >>4934397 this is so so well done

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 15:51:56 2020 No.4937474 >>4937246 The eyes not being the same size is an issue. Flip your canvas in case it's not clear.

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:47:28 2020 No.4937582
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Working (and failing) with graphite.
Decided to give up on this one, I spent too much time correcting mistakes when I could've just worked smarter.
My values are inconsistent and my shading technique is shit.
Still don't know how to pick the right graphite grades for my values, which is why my shadows came out way too dark here.
Hopefully it will be better next time.

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:53:23 2020 No.4937591
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Ok retake on the Dune stillsuit. But can someone please for the love of god help me with my fuckign technique. Rendering faces is such a pain in digital, i have no idea how to go about it without endless pixel pushing. I see people paint amazing faces with 20 brush strokes that reads super well. Doing that seems completely fucking impossible in photoshop.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:55:33 2020 No.4937594 CANT DRAW NO IDEAS BRAIN FRIED DRAW 30 SECONDS OPEN IC SHITPOST 3 HOURS DOODLE 15 SECONDS NO PROJECTS CONCENTRATION GONE GIMME COOMIES GIMME DOPAMINIES GUH

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:58:17 2020 No.4937602 >>4937594 I say this sincerely anon: You are NGMI.

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:58:49 2020 No.4937604
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>>4937425
Just letting you know that there are multiple people replying to you on this matter. But that other guy is right.
Not even going to ask you to post your work since we all know you have none. Good luck all the same.

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 16:59:08 2020 No.4937606

>>4937591
>everything but face is a simple shape and value
>face has been uncanny vallyed with overdose of inefficient brush strokes with no underdrawing of head planes to guide them
Learn to simplify the face and you'll be alright, don't focus so much on one area at one time so much unless you have a clear idea (outline, construction lines) of what you want the face to look like

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 17:00:15 2020 No.4937611 >>4937602 No not in this mindset, though other days I can draw productively for 3 hours, I'm just hyperbole-posting for attention. Though I have to accept I have a serious addiction to 4chan right now

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 17:00:50 2020 No.4937613 File: 3.04 MB, 1975x3800, BF5907F1-4D84-45DC-A7CD-1C592D278CF8.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] been wrestling with the composition of this one a lot but still not satisfied

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 17:02:19 2020 No.4937617 >>4937611 >though other days I can draw productively for 3 hours >3 hours I repeat: You are NGMI.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 17:05:15 2020 No.4937622 >>4937617 Stop crab posting for attention or I'll stop calling you my friend, I am not kidding(!)

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:22:48 2020 No.4937861 File: 292 KB, 1188x1510, zxcvvcxccc.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:26:30 2020 No.4937870 File: 470 KB, 1000x1000, 1602796646812.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] is this beg?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:27:19 2020 No.4937871 >>4937870 No, low int.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:39:47 2020 No.4937914 >>4937870 post more work

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:41:48 2020 No.4937922 >>4933121 >>4933095 >>4933093 >>4930525 what brush do you use anon?

Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:46:58 2020 No.4937930

>>4937604
>phone post
LMAO do you think anyone is fucking stupid enough to think that phone screencap would prove that your werent going back an forth between PC and moblie? The same fagging is so fucking obvious is sad. Sorry that /beg/ delued you but you're still /beg/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:55:10 2020 No.4937949 >>4937870 floating head posters are /beg/ until proven otherwise.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:55:52 2020 No.4937950 >>4937930 Most threads on /ic/ is pure garbage with people fighting over trivial things. Why not contribute with some art instead of fighting with anons?

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 18:57:53 2020 No.4937954 >>4937870 /beg/s will say it's beg because muh chicken scratch. But considering line control, perspective, anatomy, this is /int/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 19:31:50 2020 No.4937999 I wonder if there are any /pro arists

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 19:40:28 2020 No.4938020 >>4937870 far from it

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 21:10:28 2020 No.4938150 >>4937999 Yes there are! only few post their work, some only post studies.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 21:16:11 2020 No.4938164 >>4937999 TheMichaelMacRae sometimes blesses us with some of his wip paintings.

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 21:43:25 2020 No.4938210 File: 823 KB, 690x960, Illustration29.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 21:44:02 2020 No.4938211 File: 344 KB, 1086x1131, 20201004_175033.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] lots of good art in these threads anons, draw something losers

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 22:33:59 2020 No.4938274 File: 208 KB, 950x672, 77718810581.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 23:05:06 2020 No.4938329 >>4938274 .......big toe on wrong side

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 15 23:06:57 2020 No.4938334 File: 315 KB, 1000x1000, Untitled_Artwork.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any advice on drawing smoke like affects for this style?

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 00:07:38 2020 No.4938429 File: 1.13 MB, 1540x2310, com 10_15_3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929462 >>4936449 Worked on bird man a while today

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 00:29:34 2020 No.4938482 >>4938211 Nice line work, rlly like the effortless quality to it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 00:44:55 2020 No.4938520 >>4937613 >>4937861 >>4937870 Looking dank lads

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 00:52:54 2020 No.4938533 File: 962 KB, 1000x590, kkk.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 01:21:58 2020 No.4938581 File: 125 KB, 1000x746, vietnam.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929094

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 01:51:23 2020 No.4938634 File: 279 KB, 850x601, rnd528958293583.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4938533 te last design look cool :3

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 02:19:43 2020 No.4938671
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I did a small animal portrait painting thing again. I wanted to use some muted colours, but it came out really bland and muddy. I was hoping the white and orange and green on the cat would pop more. does anyone have any advice for using subtler colour palettes?
>>4937870
those expressions are great, the stylization works really well. very dynamic lines as well
>>4937861
these are very on model, pretty cool. I remember the hands in that film being really elegant and expressive, spending some time to nail down Jigen's hands would help a lot I think.
>>4938533
cool, nice silhouettes. playing around with proportions might be fun, they all sort of have the same build. the light and expressive lines show a lot of confidence, it's hard to explain but they give off the impression that you really know what you're doing

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 02:24:09 2020 No.4938679 File: 215 KB, 603x798, Screen Shot 2020-10-15 at 11.23.32 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] whats wrong with her neck?

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 02:30:33 2020 No.4938686 >>4931247 right is great, you deserve a (you).

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:09:50 2020 No.4938743 >>4938686 Thanks guy. I was starting to think it must be no good

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:15:17 2020 No.4938751 >>4938671 these are really cute and very motivating anon

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:26:50 2020 No.4938768

>>4938743
No, I absolutely love this. My critique would be the legs. They lack the sharp angular appeal present in the rest of the picture and feel out of place. The face and head are very soft and rounded but unlike the legs it works well and actually contrasts the rest of the photo.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:28:02 2020 No.4938774 >>4938679 Not thick enough.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:30:07 2020 No.4938775 >>4938679 just seems like too harsh of a border between sternocleidomastoid and ear/jaw

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:47:06 2020 No.4938793
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>>4938768
Thanks mate. Yeah I was really more interested in the chest and shoulder area, that's what I was doodling to begin with.
All my posts here on the lined paper i do at work while it's on the phone or im saving stuff.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:50:08 2020 No.4938795 >>4938793 Her fists should 'dig' into her sides a little more right now they look like they're hovering

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 03:54:49 2020 No.4938804
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>>4938795
Yeah I agree. As soon as I drew the hands I was disappointed with them, but that's why I like ballpoint. It forces you to make mistakes and feel the pain and improve. Pencil is too forgiving for me.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 04:39:36 2020 No.4938862

>>4938793
Yeah I thought you may have just gotten lazy with the legs. The hatching is very rushed and scratchy compared to the hatching on the body.

I havn't done trad in like 10 years. I got bored of it and wound up quitting drawing all together for about 6-7 years before getting back intto it with digital. But I do remember using some cheap ballpoints to doodle and was quite enjoyable.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 04:49:03 2020 No.4938873
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>>4938862
I feel you. Digital is definitely very satisfying when finished. Its super clean and the ability to edit on the fly is a huge plus. Trad to me is the most important thing though. You have to be afraid of making mistakes I think, which digital just doesn't have.

I'm definitely not shit talking digital though. I love it for refined work (pic not necessarily related) this one was actually a trad work done in fine liner that I scanned and coloured so it's a bit messy.

What programs do you use?

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 05:53:58 2020 No.4938929
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>>4938873
>I feel you. Digital is definitely very satisfying when finished. Its super clean and the ability to edit on the fly is a huge plus. Trad to me is the most important thing though. You have to be afraid of making mistakes I think, which digital just doesn't have.
Yeah thats one of the things I found enjoyable about ballpoints when I was doing trad. Theres no erasing, whatever you put down is what you're stuck with, good or bad. Which is somewhat liberating, while also forcing you to put a bit more thought into each line. Also there was just something satisfying about the smooth inky lines that a ballpoint makes.

Unfortunately for me 90% of my digital work goes on unfinished. The ability to infinity erase, undo, and edit is my undoing.

I've bounced around between Clip Studio and Photoshop over the past two years or so. Been leaning a bit towards CSP recently.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 06:31:57 2020 No.4938954 File: 825 KB, 1000x1200, 163.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hi /draw/ any tips/thoughts? Been a while since i post anything. Hope to see you guys doing great. >>4938210 nice

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 06:39:06 2020 No.4938961 File: 1.52 MB, 1920x1920, inCollage_20201010_205703560.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4929094 So this is a comparison of the same character from September 2019 to October 2020

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 06:53:09 2020 No.4938972 >>4937425 Nah, you're just bootyblasted beyond belief, FAGGOT

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 06:57:41 2020 No.4938983 >>4938961 did you only draw once a month?

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 07:05:29 2020 No.4938998 >>4938961 >>>/beg/

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 07:09:58 2020 No.4939010
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>>4938983
No, I draw everyday as a stress reliever

I was just comparing the same character from a year of effort and as sort of timelapse, and figured I'd get input from other artists

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 07:32:31 2020 No.4939040 File: 131 KB, 684x578, 282.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 07:47:45 2020 No.4939054

>>4938671
It doesnt feel muddy for me but it is indeed monochromatic.
The eyes dont look very green at all, i guess you could make it a more saturated green and maybe also add some green in the background to bring more color in, currently the bg is the same color as the hat fur and they seem to be blending together a little

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 07:49:41 2020 No.4939055 >>4939010 If you only doodle mindlessly as stress relief it's clear why there's so little improvement. Nothing wrong in doing that but if you want to improve then you should add some actual studying in those draw sessions.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 08:35:45 2020 No.4939120
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Just a WIP of a logo for a mockup casual/mobile game. I think I want the background to be rounder but I don't have a solution for what I want yet. Any feedback is appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:09:05 2020 No.4939185 >>4939120 You're contributing to the deterioration of society if you're doing work for the mobile games industry.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:10:45 2020 No.4939192 File: 62 KB, 500x778, Dune stillsuit concept.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Got some progress today i guess. I'm going to start doing eye/skull studies for sure after this.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:17:51 2020 No.4939208

>>4939192
polishing a turd tier.
This can be avoided by blocking in the values at the construction phase and make a decision right then and there which values the shadows, midtones, and highlights will have.
I can see just by looking at the guy's face the hours you've spent erasing, redoing, lightening, darkening the tones of the skin.
Having an organized, clearly defined work order will save you all this trouble and will force you to work more efficiently.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:21:06 2020 No.4939214 >>4939120 I’d say remove the highlights and increase the saturation of the letters. Might help it pop out better.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:23:03 2020 No.4939220
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this is my first time doing value study, honestly i watched David Merritt digital painting, and I'm still confused obviously i can't get proportions 1:1, also i just can't make the details of the face, clothes, I started out with 3 value and then tried add more and soften edges obviously failed miserably.
i only used hard round brush and adjusted the flow to soften edges
help.

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:26:07 2020 No.4939229

>>4939208
I appreciate the honesty. Everything is a learning experience. At the stage where you block in the values, should i use a 100% opacity brush to avoid the clusterfuck with brush stroke banding? I try to avoid the soft brush as much as possible since it seems to ruin the form. I really have no workflow with digital.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:41:28 2020 No.4939263 File: 1.13 MB, 750x1100, 4ch.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:42:10 2020 No.4939265

>>4939220
I think you're on the right track. One thing I notice is with some of your lights you seem to be making them too bright - when they should be subtle (the lights facing the walls for instance, the light hitting the face from below). Try grouping your darks and lights into shapes. The background should almost be entirely dark with only a few hints of light grey - with the only source of light coming from the window. It can be tempting to want to paint what you think you see, but the goal is to paint what is in front of you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xcCJ2CU-bFw

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:46:05 2020 No.4939272

>>4939220
the light on the face comes from underneath, not the side
you also killed the contrast between head and light in the background, try to squint and you'll see how nicely the head contrasts against the backdrop. There's a reason why it was placed there
don't just interpret things literally, think about what the elements mean. That head needs to be a point of high contrast, so make it black

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 09:54:20 2020 No.4939284 >>4939263 so kawai anon

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 11:40:15 2020 No.4939514 >>4938671 Too kind, thank you very much for your input

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 11:47:56 2020 No.4939532 How much time should i spend on a character study? Is 2 hours reasonable?

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 11:59:01 2020 No.4939559 >>4939532 Once you feel as if you could go onto polish and tighten it up, move on

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 12:06:44 2020 No.4939575 New: >>4939571 >>4939571 >>4939571

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 14:41:58 2020 No.4939919 >>4929533 What sources are you going to for this faces? Do you seek out scenes in movies or something? I'm mostly interested in where you got the more expressive faces from your posts over in /beg/.

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 15:08:04 2020 No.4939974 >>4939919 >>4939968

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 15:39:41 2020 No.4940031 >>4931019 I like it but you should push it further... add shadows and values etc. Also, dont work on lined paper it ruins the final product

Anonymous Fri Oct 16 15:45:01 2020 No.4940040

>>4932875
the face is the best part of this image, you need to learn about necks and how they connect to head and torso. Also, her clothing looks off because it does not describe the forms underneath well enough. Chin is too pointy, the hair lacks texture. You need to draw through and construct full shapes instead of trying to nail down the contours

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 17:19:41 2020 No.4940233 >>4936110 cute. I like the detailed shot the most desu, the car / road seem a bit rigid / not in style with the actual passengers

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 17:20:46 2020 No.4940236 >>4936148 I like it anon

>>	Anonymous Fri Oct 16 17:22:53 2020 No.4940240 >>4940031 Thanks. I don't know if you read my above reply but I do these at work, that's just my notepad. They aren't meant to be finished ""art"" or anything

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