AlternativeArt/stylization General

[Anonymous No.4804907]

Previous >>4795346

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4804912]

>>4804907
stiff gesture

[Anonymous No.4804943]

>>4804907

[Anonymous No.4804964]

Awful OPs
Awful threads
Awful arts

[Anonymous No.4804981]

>>4804886
I actually was in the early stages of inking, but it just ain't working out.
>>4804875
@moogdoodles

[Anonymous No.4804996]

>>4804964
Op is a massive cope fag, but >>4804943 looks good.

[Anonymous No.4805035]

>>4804907
Lurker here, but damn I gotta cleanse my eyes with bleach everytime I happen to stumble upon OP's drawings. It's like he molds his drawings out of fucking play-doh or some shit.

[Anonymous No.4805046]

>>4804907
seriously get that /beg ass shit out of my face.

[Anonymous No.4805097]

>>4804907
who the fuck is picking these OPs

[Anonymous No.4805107]

>>4804907
"post good art this time"
>OP pic is unfinished /beg/ anime shit.
at least last OP pic had some soul

[Anonymous No.4805134]

>>4804964
>>4805107
>>4805097
Post art or shut the fuck up.

[Anonymous No.4805196]

No offence op's anon but I prefer the jew rostie. I'm gonna take a break from /alt/, this is going to shiet

[Anonymous No.4805239]

the amount of dunning kruger needed to state "post good art this time" with this as the OP pic is fucking laughable.

[Anonymous No.4805262]

people call you crabs not because you shit on each other, but because you only know how to take each other down.

[Anonymous No.4805364]

>>4805239
T. Beg

[Anonymous No.4805383]

>>4805364
>t. projecting beg

[Anonymous No.4805577]

[Anonymous No.4805605]

[Anonymous No.4805610]

>>4805605
I like it. Post blog

[Anonymous No.4805613]

>>4804907
Can somebody who's less /beg/ than me explain what's "alternative" about Op's style?

[Anonymous No.4805614]

>>4805605
https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com
https://www.instagram.com/klinck_foster/
https://twitter.com/ArtKlinck

[Anonymous No.4805617]

>>4805610
>>4805614
oops

[Anonymous No.4805618]

>>4805605
It took you this long to finish one drawing?

[Anonymous No.4805626]

>>4805618
no, I've decided to paint it only couple days ago

[Anonymous No.4805629]

>>4804907
>>4804951
>please post better drawings than last thread.
>this OP
oh lol

[Anonymous No.4805637]

>>4803957
Tried to do liquid again, purple blood. I need a few more tries

[Anonymous No.4805718]

>>4805613
>This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title.

Lrn2read my niggy

[Anonymous No.4805743]

/salt/ thread is dead so I'll post here instead, hope that's okay. Should I fix anything before I start rendering?

[Anonymous No.4805752]

>>4805637
Dude I love your style, it's beautiful.
But to be honest I have no idea what's happening in this scene.

[Anonymous No.4805781]

[Anonymous No.4805786]

>>4805781
cute. I like this one

[Anonymous No.4805795]

>>4805781
is this the power of HARD ROUND BRUSH shown by asukafag!?
feet and lower legs too small though

[Anonymous No.4805800]

>>4805035
thanks for putting it into words for me. god they look like they were made by one of those anime picture neural networks

[Anonymous No.4805845]

>>4805781
the eyes look retarded now. keep both irises relatively similar in size

[Anonymous No.4805859]

>>4804964
>>4805035
>>4805046
>>4805097
>>4805107
>>4805239
>Seething because your art wasn’t used as op
Next time, faggots.

[Anonymous No.4805878]

>>4805743
Better than whatever garbage is being posted here at the moment

[Anonymous No.4805882]

>>4804907
what a zoomer art

[Anonymous No.4805884]

>>4805859
But it was for the previous thread though;)

[Anonymous No.4805892]

>>4805859
t. subu

[Anonymous No.4805943]

lol

[Anonymous No.4805957]

For the past three days I've been wageslaving overtime and deadline for my personal project that I am gonna probably miss is very close.

[Anonymous No.4805958]

>>4805800
one of his best pieces.

[Anonymous No.4806035]

bros i dont actually want to draw anime

[Anonymous No.4806036]

>>4806035
you should honestly take a break from /ic/ and just draw what you like. This place rots the brain.

[Anonymous No.4806043]

>>4806035
YAAAAS

[Anonymous No.4806048]

>>4806036
Honestly this

[Anonymous No.4806049]

>>4806035
I love your art story arc, full of twists.

[Anonymous No.4806055]

>>4805637
So excited to draw a mecha bulma bunnygirl

>>4805752
I always cram too much content into one drawing
>dragon eats dragonball
>to retrieve dragonball, bulma gets eaten alive
>must escape from inside dragon belly
>releases all her vehicle capsules to explode dragon from the inside out
>legs get crushed under capsule bike
>must pry off bike with power pole
>>bulma replaces legs with mech bunny legs

[Anonymous No.4806058]

>>4806036
NO, DONT LISTEN TO THIS SHITHEAD I NEED YOU TO POST YOUR ART HERE, IM IN LOVE WITH YOUR ART PLEASE DON'T EVER STOP POSTING HERE, YOUR ART IS THE ONLY REASON I HAVENT KILLED MYSELF YET, PLEASE DON'T LISTEN TO THAT GUY

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[Anonymous No.4806082]

[Anonymous No.4806148]

>>4805605
jfc fix the face

[Anonymous No.4806149]

[Anonymous No.4806169]

>>4806058
Don't listen to that guy, he wants to dab you on you each time you post drawings on /ic/ so that you would despair, kill yourself and he will face less competition.

[Anonymous No.4806248]

>>4805781
the feet are small considering the foreshortening

>>4805957
>For the past three days I've been wageslaving overtime and deadline for my personal project that I am gonna probably miss is very close.
jesus anon, work on workflow and goodluck

>>4806082
I like how the legs are simplified but the arms/wrists really need work

[Anonymous No.4806272]

>>4804907
Orangutang arms

[Anonymous No.4806302]

is this kind of face style attractive bros?

[Anonymous No.4806317]

>>4806302
Not really, sorry. Chin is also too pointy

[Anonymous No.4806319]

>>4806302
Can you draw something else, your posts are so boring
>face cute?

[Anonymous No.4806324]

>>4806319
i was told the face is the most important when drawing females in cute lewd situations so i am exploring further, having ditched anime

[Anonymous No.4806328]

>>4806302
the face is fine, but you need to sell a story with your drawings

[Anonymous No.4806330]

>>4806324
Honestly, why are you so concerned with whether or not anons on /ic/ find your faces appealing? When you changed your faces to be in line with what anons would like (ie. anime) you came to the realization you didn't even like it yourself. Just step away, stop basing your art off what other people want, find a critique discord or something, and draw what looks good to yourself.

[Anonymous No.4806340]

was drawing ideas for some original character but this thing popped out instead

[Anonymous No.4806343]

>>4806340
WILLY, STOP

[Anonymous No.4806379]

>>4806302
Just draw what you find appealing. If you want mass appeal then look at popular artists that you like the style of and study from them, asking a bunch of /ic/ retards results in whole threads of /asg/ rejects saying "HURR COPY MOEBLOB ANIME ITS THE ONMLY WAY". If you like that stuff, fine, but you obviously don't. This face looks far more expressive than any of the anime faces you tried to draw, it's clear the anime is sucking out your soul. You're the only GMI regular here(that hasn't already made it), stop listening to what random /beg/s want, look inside your SOUL. How can your drawings have soul when you yourself do not?

[Anonymous No.4806431]

>>4806035
M Night Shyamalan-tier twist

[Anonymous No.4806433]

>>4806431
You mean like when last air bender came out and it was so horrible that kids went home crying?

[Anonymous No.4806439]

>>4805637
love this tablegod

[Anonymous No.4806441]

>>4806055
hot... excited to see this inked

[Anonymous No.4806483]

Ghost in the shell fanart.

[Anonymous No.4806492]

thought on what i have to imrpove on?

[Anonymous No.4806493]

pfft honest to god thought this was /asg/
good bait OP this would've made me mad if wasn't so funny

[Anonymous No.4806501]

>>4806492
his buttcheeks feel a little lower than they should be from that prespective

[Anonymous No.4806506]

>>4806483
I like it

[Anonymous No.4806515]

>>4806501
thanks :) liquified it, and it seems now a lil' better, sendin drawing energy to you

[Anonymous No.4806532]

>>4806328
no, ignore him

[Anonymous No.4806558]

Want to get better at pushing expressions.

[Anonymous No.4806561]

I've done good.

[Anonymous No.4806565]

>>4805577
looks really good so far, anon.

[Anonymous No.4806569]

>>4806035
have you tried NOT drawing the same fucking shit over and over and over again?

All you do is draw the same fucking Chinese cartoon bitch. Your art isn't very interesting, even by fan art standards.

[Anonymous No.4806571]

>>4806558
lol what expression, slightly raised eyebrows? Come the fuck on, anon.

[Anonymous No.4806573]

>>4806055
Inked >>4806441

>>4806439
It was kinda messy, but the purple blood was fun

[Anonymous No.4806577]

>>4806573
unff.. fishnets too... awesome.

[Anonymous No.4806596]

>>4806573
is the end goal making her a quadruple amputee

[Anonymous No.4806624]

>>4806571
My point exactly. The one I posted always ends up being the default expression. I'm trying to improve that.

[Anonymous No.4806672]

Anything look kinda weird before I start adding stuff to this design?

[Anonymous No.4806681]

>>4806302
It's alright, I don't have any strong feelings about it one way or another.

[▲+ No.4806718]

>>4806561

love you

[Anonymous No.4806763]

>>4805637
I'd say blood needs more saturation and highlights. Liquids without highlights always look weird.

[Anonymous No.4806766]

>>4806718
have we met?

[Anonymous No.4806840]

>>4804907
Glad to see we have another /beg/ subthread opened

[Anonymous No.4806852]

[Anonymous No.4806882]

>>4806573
I’m pretty happy with how the clouds turned out. I almost used all my greens.

>>4806577
The stars aligned and i got to draw them with mech legs.

>>4806596
> quadruple amputee
That’s some toddler level automail shit, it’s going full mech soul bound to mech armor

>>4806763
I did the liquid traces first then tried to marker around the runny parts so that there would be a natural white space but it needs a bit more contrast. It’s just so fucking small I lack the dexterity.

[Anonymous No.4806989]

>>4805605
Reminds me of Range Murata.
Hair goes behind the colar in a way that doesn't make any sense, but otherwise this is solid.

[Anonymous No.4806996]

>>4806882
I like your style, but I've noticed that you get caught up in your own energy a lot.

For instance, the newest one here is great. Dynamic, pretty solidly constructed, interesting design and camera angle, but this one you posted earlier >>4805637, on the other hand... Honestly, it's sloppy. It almost looks like a completely different artist made it. Just from the posts you make it's clear that you are drawing a lot, and quickly, but I think it would do you a lot of good to slow down and think things through more. Take some time to work on your consistency, really think about how everything fits together, and how the body in particular needs to be constructed with your style. Go back to muscular and skeletal anatomy and spend some time working out exactly how you want to simplify or exaggerate every individual part of the body, and how you want to warp them in perspective.

[Anonymous No.4806998]

>>4806672
*farts on ur face*

[Anonymous No.4806999]

[Anonymous No.4807014]

>>4806999
It's a little muddy bro, I can't quite tell what's going on. The face is not very attractive, but I'm unsure if that was intentional. Changing the nose would fix it tho.

[Anonymous No.4807444]

[Anonymous No.4807680]

[Anonymous No.4807891]

>>4806624
then actually commit. you're still in your comfort zone by the looks of it.

[Anonymous No.4808003]

Some generic OCs of a comic I never made.

[Anonymous No.4808085]

rough sketch

[Anonymous No.4808262]

trying smarter and more careful rendering

[Anonymous No.4808273]

>>4808262
I'm seeing solid progress.
also your faces are finally striking that nice sweet spot.

[Anonymous No.4808274]

>>4808262
Those vulva look like balls, but good job otherwise.

[Anonymous No.4808275]

Im looking to learn the "east" europe style of ilustration like Sergey Kolesov, Kacper Swat or Luca Boni (and many others). They seems to rely a lot in basic forms, geometrization, design and moody colours. Is not purely stylization but abstraction too.

I guess I just had to apply all the terms above, but sometimes I feel I miss something or Im just comparing my works with theirs. Anyway, if somebody knows any resource or practice related with the art mentioned, would be great to know.

[Anonymous No.4808278]

>>4808274
oh it's gonna be just panties there actaully and thanks

[Anonymous No.4808324]

>>4808278
I know, but it shouldn't be shaped like that.

[Anonymous No.4808334]

>>4804907

[Anonymous No.4808458]

>>4806882
Short haired granny bulma

>>4806996
Yea i fucked the other drawing, i tried to ink it super fast over a rough sketch

[Anonymous No.4808463]

[Anonymous No.4808507]

>>4806558
>>4806571
here's a little update

[Anonymous No.4808513]

>>4808507
exaggerate your expressions some more, you’re going too soft.

[Anonymous No.4808516]

[Anonymous No.4808685]

>>4808507
Anon, do it like this

[Anonymous No.4808761]

>>4808507
The face is okay in terms of expression, but the drawing still doesn't convey her emotion because the body language doesn't match at all.
Even if she's doing that showing-off-dress-pose because she's been made to you can still have her bunch up her hands, square her shoulders etc to show that she's angry/uncomfortable.

[Anonymous No.4808793]

>>4804907
A change of pace after work.

[Anonymous No.4808857]

>>4808685
cute

>>4808761
I did notice that. Will take this into consideration. Thanks anon.

[Anonymous No.4808951]

>>4804907
Does she look cute? It's not supposed to be detailed, just a sketch to make painting easier

[Anonymous No.4808974]

>>4804907
Does she look cute? No need for details because the sketch goes before painting

[Anonymous No.4808990]

>>4808974
Or I can change the hand

[Anonymous No.4808991]

does this perspective look right? should the horizon line be higher? i know theres not much to work off of..

>>4808990
definitely do this one. silhouette reads better

[Anonymous No.4809029]

[Anonymous No.4809046]

>>4808991
Is that line at the collar where you are estimating the horizon line to be?

[Anonymous No.4809063]

>>4808991
I mapped out the perspective in procreate and roughly decided the size/placement of the feet based on that. Hope this helps a little

[Anonymous No.4809102]

>>4809046
yep. i just slapped it in there to start gettin an idea for a background, but after i put it in i started seeing how weird the perspective looked

>>4809063
thanks! this helped a lot. i shouldve used a tool like that to start with honestly

[Anonymous No.4809116]

did this yesterday

[Anonymous No.4809121]

>>4808990
Blog? JK, it looks like shit. Study Loomis.

[Anonymous No.4809122]

>>4809121
What insight. I’m sure anon will treasure this advice for years to come.

[Anonymous No.4809127]

>>4809122
Stop being a passive aggressive roastie.

[Anonymous No.4809215]

Late night fun

[Anonymous No.4809257]

>>4809116
I wish you hadn't.

[Anonymous No.4809299]

>>4809063
>>4809102
Now I don't profess to be an expert in perspective, so take this with a grain of salt, but it doesn't look like the feet are planted on the perspective grid you laid out, to me. Eyeballing the foot placement I got a horizon line closer to here, which is about where I felt like it was when I first looked at the image.

[Anonymous No.4809338]

[Anonymous No.4809339]

[Anonymous No.4809340]

>>4809339
>>4809338

[Anonymous No.4809353]

>>4809299
>>4809102
I just traced the outline of anon’s original feet and resized and moved it, I was too busy fondling my nuts to redraw them to fit the new perspective. I’m not an expert either though so take my opinion with a grain of salt too

[Anonymous No.4809356]

>>4808458
granny bulma? lol. inked yet?

[Anonymous No.4809363]

>>4806882
wish you did more lewd stuff.. nothing explicit.. just lewder :X

[Anonymous No.4809397]

>>4804907
In the last thread twin tails cruise and I think it was Godo posted amazing shit that would not make our general look like shit to the other generals. Think about it, put aside your petty beg feels and think. Do you want beg in here? Did you want tumblr in here? Post the best and attract the best. Mediocre op gets mediocre posters and posts. This place has become a toilet bowl and on Twitter Japan laughs at the west and tumblr art because we are so bad. I work very hard to be good, and I put my time in. Jace and Kyle are gone now so you post the best of people who make us look good. Ylix doesnt even post here anymore. Look how fucking far this shithole has slid. I'm not coming here to help and crit, I have a discord full of working professionals I can go to. You pic the best op image next time or you drive off even more talent that could have helped you. Before you say pyw here

[Anonymous No.4809405]

>>4806573
I'm always Impressed with your perspective and just over all creativity and original ideas. The fact that you do this on paper says quite a bit about your control and planning I'm not trying to suck up to you but if I had to guess I'd say that you're actually a pretty intelligent person because of how well-thought-out everything feels. I would say that personally I don't really like sort of that really a long gated style or rather it's not for me but you have your own original style that's long and slender and beautiful.

[Anonymous No.4809434]

[Anonymous No.4809468]

>>4809363
I feel like OP is doing it on purpose to be a cunt.. last time was awful too

[Anonymous No.4809470]

>>4809434
I like this.

[Anonymous No.4809473]

>>4809397
>fat retard nude
gross.

[Anonymous No.4809518]

oops, dropped my bucket of... milk!

[Anonymous No.4809531]

>>4809518
reminds me of Lilo and Stitch

[Anonymous No.4809538]

>>4809518
Looks more like a bucket of spider webs.

[Anonymous No.4809560]

>>4809473
looks like a classical nude to me. learn aesthetics, retard.

[Anonymous No.4809560,1]

>>4807444,1
Can you share the Patrick Ballesteros that you have?

[Anonymous No.4809562]

>>4809518
More like bucket of cum

[Anonymous No.4809569]

>>4809562
no... It can't be :o

[Anonymous No.4809570]

>>4809560
No, he's right, it does look kind of retarded. The feet, ear and left arm are too small, she has a downy looking face, the creases in the body make no sense, and the right arm is posed extremely awkwardly.

>learn aesthetics
Really curious to know what you think this means.

[Anonymous No.4809585]

>>4809518
where can i read your shit?

[Anonymous No.4809666]

[Anonymous No.4809746]

Cute?

[Anonymous No.4809759]

>>4809746
Queen has blessed us with another glorious drawing. Please post armpits Queen.

[Anonymous No.4809777]

>>4802998
Trying to venture out of my comfort zone

>>4803563
Didn't get to reply last thread but thanks

[Anonymous No.4809813]

>>4809777
blog?

[Anonymous No.4809821]

>>4809746
Why do you post when you don't listen to anything anyone says

[Anonymous No.4809829]

>>4809746
>Post face so people will be too busy orbiting you to comment on your shit art
devilish

[Anonymous No.4809930]

>>4809029
cute makoto
try and get some more form into the contour, its a bit smooth
and watch the perspective near the hips
otherwise great job so far

[Anonymous No.4810063]

>>4809397
i dont know literally any of these names

[Anonymous No.4810190]

[Anonymous No.4810299]

>>4808458
>dont fuck it up
>dont fuck it up
>dont fuck it up
One of my favorite inks, too nervous to color now. Fuck it, can’t get too attached.

>>4809356
Ya short hair bulma from super when she is like 60. She’s seen some shit.

>>4809405
Thanks for the kind words anon. I’ve been trying to draw backgrounds with more context recently which requires more thought than floating robogirl wearing sneakers.

>>4809363
I think you are the only one who likes my lewd drawings. They are usually just gross and unaesthetic. I draw lewds in frustration so they end up looking uncomfortable

[Anonymous No.4810501]

>>4810299
This is SO much clearer. The big, solid shapes and sense of scale do wonders for clarifying the stringy forms of the anatomy and the small mechanical details. Keep up the good work.

[Anonymous No.4810506]

>>4809746
No, it's still hideous. The faces are still skull-less, unappealing blobs.

[Anonymous No.4810733]

ok what do you think bros?

[Anonymous No.4810741]

>>4809215
i like the rendering and the face expression, did you just use the round brush?

[Anonymous No.4810753]

>>4809666
looks sharp anon, nice

[Anonymous No.4810785]

>>4809759
>>4809821
>>4810506
>>4809829
Damn, it's just a silly drawing why do you have to hurt my feelings? No need to be so mean. Might fuck around and quit /ic/ soon. This place is rotting my brain

[Anonymous No.4810799]

>>4810785
>>4809746
Stop being an attention whore.

[Anonymous No.4810809]

>>4810799
seethe

[Anonymous No.4810813]

>>4810785
Cry about it then.

[Anonymous No.4810817]

Why am I so terrified of rendering or coloring things /ic/

[Anonymous No.4810823]

>>4810785
>This place is rotting my brain
there's nothing to rot.

[Anonymous No.4810827]

>>4810817
you're on digital. you have literally nothing to fear.
Imagine being a tradfag that's new to colouring with no access to ctrl+z

[Anonymous No.4810836]

>>4810799
>>4810813
>>4810823
What is your problem? What did this person do wrong?

[Anonymous No.4810840]

>>4810836
Faggot.

[Anonymous No.4810851]

>>4809666
nice forms

[Anonymous No.4810855]

>>4810785
you asked for opinions

[Anonymous No.4810864]

>>4810855
I asked if the drawing was cute. Not if I was a whore or not.

[Anonymous No.4810871]

>>4810864
/ic/ has a zero tolerance policy for posting your face. Gtfo, you have been warned.

[Anonymous No.4810877]

>>4810864
ATTENTION whore, retard.
But if you're going to bitch about it, you'll be called a real whore too.

[Anonymous No.4810881]

>>4810871
This honestly, because you did that. You’ll attract basement dwellers only.

[Anonymous No.4810901]

>>4810871
>>4810881
Yeah, In hindsight I shouldn't have done that. Didn't consider the consequences, I kinda just thought it would be a harmless funny thing to do. Now I'll just have to suffer the consequences I guess:)

[Anonymous No.4810909]

Which hairstyle do you guys like the most for this character?

[Anonymous No.4810925]

>>4810733
neck isn't right, and i don't know what she is doing in that pose

[Anonymous No.4810970]

>>4810877
>>4810871
edgy incels go back to /r9k/

[Anonymous No.4811111]

>>4810785
Don't cry...actually, start crying...crying women make me hard af.

[Anonymous No.4811124]

>>4810901
don't worry I'm sure it'll pass It honestly doesn't matter too much as long as you don't post where you live or something.

[Anonymous No.4811139]

[Anonymous No.4811220]

>>4810299
maybe... but i love your lewds <3
this is looking dope too

[Anonymous No.4811221]

>>4810909
the not gay one

[Anonymous No.4811224]

>>4811111
nice quints
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IOZ6ptqcbUc

[Anonymous No.4811230]

>>4809518
cute but the way the rope is knotted inside the bucket kinda looks like a dog turd

[Anonymous No.4811231]

>>4809560
I'm a retard because the down face looked off to me? yeah okay.

[Anonymous No.4811240]

Testing out the phone version of CSP with a few roughs.

[Anonymous No.4811326]

>>4810970
How about 'triggered roastie, go back to Tumblr'?
Why are you on 4chan if you get your feelings hurt this easily?

[Anonymous No.4811329]

wip. decided to do the popular thing.

[Anonymous No.4811332]

wip. decided to do the popular thing.

[Anonymous No.4811337]

>>4811332
Left foot, and heel in particular are too big, and the perspective is wonky.
Left arm is way too long.

[Anonymous No.4811406]

>>4809813
Thanks, it's https://www.deviantart.com/awan0918

[Anonymous No.4811416]

>>4811326
As if an entire website's culture is not just decided by the users and can be changed at any point simply by posting in a different fashion. Who cares pick up a pencil and draw faggot

Jannies, axe this whole exchange please

[Anonymous No.4811419]

>>4810909
Wow! He looks impressively generic!

I guess the second one on second row though. Or second-last on first row.
The first one is kinda interesting but extremely homosexual, so unless he's for a gay dating sim or something..

[Anonymous No.4811420]

>>4810909
Top right looks the least faggy

[Anonymous No.4811456]

>>4811416
So you want to "change 4chan"? Do you have any idea how gay that is?
I will ask again: why are you here?

[Anonymous No.4811568]

Had a lot of fun with these warm ups.

[Anonymous No.4811588]

>>4810299
I know i could just use a flare brush in procreate, but if anyone has a tutorial on how to draw a lens flare with markers let me know.

>>4810501
Thanks, trying to group similarly detailed regions together so they contrast appropriately

>>4811220
I didn’t know what color to make the eggs, so I made them giant veiny scrotums. Maybe that is something that you would enjoy...

[Anonymous No.4811642]

[Anonymous No.4811689]

>>4811456

>>4811416
>>4810970
Thats not me. Try again.

[Anonymous No.4811693]

>>4811689
And?

[Anonymous No.4811707]

>>4811693
People posting in my name trying to put words in my mouth. I don't care about what people do here. Keep calling me what you want if thats fun to you. But I'll have you know, calling me a triggered roastie/jew/attention whore whenever I post a drawing isn't very artwork and critique of you.

[Anonymous No.4811714]

>>4811707
You need to go back

[Anonymous No.4811719]

>>4811714
Litteraly where? Tumblr? Twitter? Sorry ro burst your bubble but I've been here and only here since I started going on the internet. I'm not going back anywhere.

[Anonymous No.4811721]

>>4811707
What name? Who the fuck are you? Why do you think anyone cares who you are?

>>4811719
And yet you're still a whiny little sycophant.

[Anonymous No.4811722]

>>4811721
Just read the previous conversation. You're blowing it out pf proportion.

[Anonymous No.4811726]

>>4807444
Post on your socials more often, love your stuff

[Anonymous No.4811729]

>>4811721
Do NOT I repeat, do NOT INSULT QUEEN. There will be consequences.

[Anonymous No.4811730]

>>4810909
They all look too gay

[Anonymous No.4811733]

>>4811722
What previous conversation, retard?

>>4811729
lol

[Anonymous No.4811734]

>>4811733
Sorry. From >>4809746

[Anonymous No.4811739]

>>4811734
6 people responded to this post, this tells me nothing.
Describe what you are referring to, I'm not inside of your head- thank God.

[Anonymous No.4811742]

>>4811739
Well, 5 not counting that post.

[Anonymous No.4811745]

>thread derails into a couple of neckbeards and a tumblr roastie bickering

[Anonymous No.4811748]

>>4811745
Such is the way of attention whores.

[Anonymous No.4811794]

Birb

[Anonymous No.4811830]

wip of a poster

[Anonymous No.4811855]

>>4811794
Love this

[Anonymous No.4812071]

>>4811830
Loving the composition and the overall shapes of the castle here.

[Anonymous No.4812103]

[Anonymous No.4812260]

[Anonymous No.4812312]

>>4811830
Is he smelling his sword

[Anonymous No.4812402]

>>4812312
Look at this retard

[Anonymous No.4812408]

>>4810909
Bald.

[Anonymous No.4812483]

>>4811830
Right hand is really sloppy, and he looks like he has cauliflower ear.

[Anonymous No.4812504]

>>4811588
This looks real nice, gotta agree with all the anons who say your pictures look better when they’re not so crammed you can’t tell what’s going on. As far as the lens flare thing, I don’t really know much about markers but I imagine you could do it the way highlights are done in watercolor? Just map out the parts of the picture that you want a lens flare on and leave it uncolored. Just throwing an idea out there not sure if it’ll work for this.

[Anonymous No.4812517]

>>4811726
thank you... i have trouble with output but i will keep trying

[Anonymous No.4812536]

[Anonymous No.4812651]

>>4812504
Of course it will work, white is white. If you're using any transparent, traditional medium, you have to plan out the spots that are going to stay white.

[Anonymous No.4812677]

[Anonymous No.4812849]

>>4812677
Your linework is great, but you need to work on your anatomy. The base of your hands don't have any structure to them, especially for how chunky your style is.
The neck and trapezius area is a mush in this one too.

[Anonymous No.4812853]

>>4811830
Cursed to only draw zelda fanart

[Anonymous No.4812862]

>>4812402
I am looking but he is a chad.

[Anonymous No.4812883]

an owl girl i was concepting out

[Anonymous No.4812892]

>>4812883
Part of the paint is in her elbow. You may want to remove it. Otherwise looks good.

[Anonymous No.4812900]

Guess I'll call this one done, time to move onto something else, maybe something in colour, I've been meaning to buy some coloured pencils and draw on darker paper, what's some good coloured pencils to use that aren't absurdly expensive?

[Anonymous No.4812915]

smaller eyes better? face cuter?

[Anonymous No.4812930]

>>4812915
me like

[Anonymous No.4812978]

>>4812900
That's amazing. Blog?

[Anonymous No.4813002]

>>4812915
Yes you're finally getting it. I'm proud of you bro

[Anonymous No.4813062]

>>4812900
The girl's face is sqaushed and skewed up at an angle, and I think you got a little carried away with wrinkles and creases in a few places (the girl's waist in particular).

Also, this is a matter of personal taste and not pertinent to the drawing, but that dialog is making me cringe.

But otherwise you did a good job.

[Anonymous No.4813134]

>>4812517
<3

[Anonymous No.4813269]

>>4812883
I think you could push the darker values a bit more, and maybe do a more painterly style with the eyes and other facial features, they look a little out of place as-is.
Also, unless it is important to the character for some reason, i could say remove the owl face on the back of the cape.

[Anonymous No.4813292]

>>4812915
Top half of face is at different angle than bottom. Regularly flip canvas to help see stuff like that, if you dont already.
This definitely isn't perfect either, but i hope it helps show what i mean

[Anonymous No.4813302]

[Anonymous No.4813308]

>>4813302
Doesn't really look like a ghost. more like a guy with a paperbag on his head.

[Anonymous No.4813543]

>>4808793
Yes

Male of female though? Could see it going either way.

[Anonymous No.4813568]

>>4809397
You picked a beautiful piece of art to study my man.

Would love to have the original on my wall. Shits angelic yo.

[Anonymous No.4813571]

>>4809746
Yes!

[Anonymous No.4813637]

>>4812883
Why isn’t she preggo?

[Anonymous No.4813640]

>>4812849
>The base of your hands don't have any structure to them
can you elaborate on this? Im not the artist but i think it looks fine. I kinda draw like that too so what would the criticisms be

[Anonymous No.4813805]

>>4811830
I've always like your color palette anon

[Anonymous No.4813840]

>>4811830
Do you have any timelapse vids?

[Anonymous No.4813849]

>>4813543
Female. The big chin and muscle-y figure can make the design a bit more androgynous though.

[Anonymous No.4813876]

>>4811588
I have regrets. This drawing didn’t go the way i wanted it to for #7, maybe I’ll pensketch it. I don’t really want to finish it. Gotta draw it again

>>4812504
Thanks! I mapped out the lens flare with pencils then erased it. But it was too small and i don’t know how to make it super cool looking and airbrushed

[Anonymous No.4813896]

>>4813849
>Female. . . muscle-y figure

I'm down. Got more?

[Anonymous No.4813900]

>>4812900
Next time use better paper if you're gonna go so autistic
>>4813269
he knows, he has no intention on fixing anything. don't waste it

[Anonymous No.4813985]

>>4813640
The fingers appear to be free floating. A big part of the problem is that the exaggerated knuckles are making it look like the metacarpals are sloping down at a weird angle.

[Anonymous No.4813986]

>>4813876
I don’t mean for this to sound condescending or sarcastic, but maybe you could try just making the lens flare bigger at the pencil stage? Another idea that popped into my head when you mentioned airbrushing is you could go back over your picture with white spraypaint like those streetside spraypaint artists do. On a side note you got me wanting to try markers now so thanks I guess.

[Anonymous No.4814051]

>>4813900
>>4813269

I kinda like the Owl face on the back because it reinforces the owl theme.
I do agree with the darker values, I do want to keep the skin light though, as I want it pop against the darker and textured cape.
Also no I listen to critique all the time as long as the critiques are good. I just don't have too much time to do illustrations right now, I have other work on my plate rn.

[Anonymous No.4814077]

[Anonymous No.4814093]

>>4814051
>Also no I listen to critique all the time as long as the critiques are good

[Anonymous No.4814129]

>>4814077
could really feel what you were going for with that hand, and the butt. could possibly use more zigzagies on the punching bag

[Anonymous No.4814399]

>>4814077
>BRRRAAAAAAAAAAP

[Anonymous No.4814704]

>>4814051
>reinforces the owl theme
Why do you need to reinforce that when its already very clear? If you think your design is so bad that you need to slap the actual animals face somewhere on it not once but twice, then you should be rethinking the design anyway.
But its not that bad, so it doesnt need the face. Not twice, at least. The one on the hood it more than enough and still looks good and kinda makes since.

But if you insist on it at least maybe make it like a stylized logo sort of thing instead of a literal realistic owl face. a la the batman logo. Pic is random shit from google

[Anonymous No.4814765]

>>4814704
That makes sense. Thanks, I'll try that actually.

[Anonymous No.4814789]

>>4812883
Literally custom equipped, specially manufactured, artisan crafted, formed by nature, hand smithed, created and consecrated for black cock. Genuinely and literally the perfect little black cock taking nymphlet I’ve ever seen. Imagine her underdeveloped, freckled little chicken legs forced wide for the pulsating mass of coal that will ingratiate itself into her, morph and twist her innocence into bestial lust, her Snow White supple pussy swallowing that black steaming rod whole and clinging to it like a bitch in heat as some hulking ebony mastiff mates and deflowers her. Imagine her little face, so innocent, cursing and screaming for a harder pummelling and rutting from her tribal dominator, as his thick black mass erupts it’s primal seed into her crimson pure white genetic womb, staining that perfect little lineage, forever marking generations of delicate white lily flowers with steaming ape spunk, imagine her sweating and screaming as those childish hips birth a half nig child, forever staking the black man’s claim to her lineage.

[Anonymous No.4814793]

>>4814789
Bro if youre that horny go deal with it don't subject us to your nigger fantasies

[Anonymous No.4814898]

I think it's done, not sure if I'm gonna keep the logo or not..

[Anonymous No.4814926]

>>4814898
You have solid drawing skills, but you need to start becoming more mindful of composition

[Anonymous No.4814933]

>>4814926
What's wrong with my composition?

[Anonymous No.4815191]

What kind of Anatomy/body construction should i use? Im making a project with some concept art but i cant get the heads rigth

[Anonymous No.4815196]

>>4814898
why is zelda smelling his sword?

[Anonymous No.4815200]

>>4814898
Why didn't you fix the hand and ear?

[Anonymous No.4815225]

>>4814933
The only real issue with it is the imbalance. You have a centered composition with Zelda/Ganon, but Link in the bottom left corner with not much to balance him out since the guardians are so small. Making the Guardians bigger could help balance the picture.
Also why are you on /ic/? You're too good for this place, you're only gonna attract crabs

[Anonymous No.4815316]

I made a cute angel lady! I usually do pixel art but i tried out my first painterly style piece!. I think it looks nice ^-^

[Anonymous No.4815348]

>>4815316
It does look pretty nice, charming artstyle

[Anonymous No.4815376]

[Anonymous No.4815379]

[Anonymous No.4815383]

[Anonymous No.4815394]

>>4815225
That looks cool too, I should have maybe tested out more sizes of the elements, but I wouldn't have made the guardian that large. Maybe something in-between.
>Too good for /ic/
I've been here on and off for like 12 years, It's a habit. I think it's good because you guys just say what you mean, almost noe one else would critique my art like that. Some feedback is bs but a lot of it tells me what people find appealing and interesting, even those who try to only find mistakes.

[Anonymous No.4815429]

Tried new sketching technique, it's much more rough than i used to usually do, but it feels somehow natural. Also i didn't use any reference.

[Anonymous No.4815434]

I don't think bna falls under the furry rule

[Anonymous No.4815575]

>>4808991
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4815582]

>>4815434
reported furfag

[Anonymous No.4815603]

>>4815582
>announcing report
You absolute buffoon

[▲+ No.4815715]

>>4806079

[▲+ No.4815717]

>>4815715

i'm so tired of cups

[Anonymous No.4815731]

>>4815434
it does, yiff in hell faggit

[Anonymous No.4815741]

new thread >>4815737
made it a bit earlier before whoever's been doing these garbage op pic threads

[Anonymous No.4816583]

>>4812883
That's a nice skill cape.

[Anonymous No.4816666]

>>4815741
You sir are a cock gobbling faggot.
>makes new thread before bump limit
>picks the same artist for umpteenth time that draws the same Zelda fuck shit for the billionth time
>frothing at the mouth because his bad art wasn’t chosen for the last OP

[Anonymous No.4816675]

>>4815741
lmao it's not even the bump limit yet
well it is now but still lol

[Anonymous No.4816679]

>>4816666
Sorry you didn't get picked as OP

[Anonymous No.4816683]

>>4816666
cry more roastie shitter

[Anonymous No.4816727]

>>4816666
Zelda has been picked literally once before

[Anonymous No.4817101]

>>4814898
Why is Zelda contemplating whether to poop or looking like she is coughing?

[Anonymous No.4818314]