AlternativeArt/Stylization general

[Anonymous No.4774559]

Previous >>4765807

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
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>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4774614]

[Anonymous No.4774652]

i did this one without refs.

[Anonymous No.4774843]

[Anonymous No.4774852]

>>4774652
looks nice and better than your referenced ones

[Anonymous No.4774876]

Decided to pick this up again and work on it some more.

[Anonymous No.4774879]

>>4774559
blog?

[Anonymous No.4774885]

>>4774876
Nice. Her eyes/expression is still fucked though. But overall really nice.

[Anonymous No.4774888]

>>4774885
Yeah I know...as punishment I'm going to finish it regardless.

[Anonymous No.4774910]

>>4774888
Anything new?

[Anonymous No.4774921]

>>4774910
Nah, I haven't drawn in awhile, this is the last thing I drew, which I think I posted here, not sure.

[Anonymous No.4774995]

posting from last thread...

hope this reads better

if not then for reals would have to start over

[Anonymous No.4775010]

>>4774995
Looks less symmetrical and more organic, i feel like it could work

[Anonymous No.4775145]

>>4774852
Thank you anon!

[Anonymous No.4775163]

>>4774559
Is the OP image Fly's work?

[Anonymous No.4775274]

>>4774559
We bulma now

[Anonymous No.4775277]

>>4775274
I forgot how ugly she is

[Anonymous No.4775283]

>>4775274
>>4775277
not only bulma, young bulma, the best one.

[Anonymous No.4775368]

>>4775277
Tips on toriyama vehicles? They have some magic kid aesthetic to them

>>4775283
Old bulma is such a bitch, young ponytail dragonball bulma is best bulma

[Anonymous No.4775384]

>>4775368
Very nice...

[Anonymous No.4775391]

>>4775368
Young bulma tried to kill goku with a gun in the first pages of db. She was always a bitch

[Anonymous No.4775405]

>>4775391
Can you blame her? Young goku is a fucking brat

[Anonymous No.4775409]

>>4775405
>>4775391
She gunned down some 12 year old, kek.

[Anonymous No.4775416]

>>4775409
Then that 12 year old slapped her pussy while she was sleeping. DBZ feels so sanitized in comparison lmao

[Anonymous No.4775610]

>>4775368
Inked

>>4775391
>>4775416
I liked the adolescent humor in db, dbz is humor is just making vegeta dance and sing. I dont want to watch super because I’m afraid of how much worse the humor is going to be.

[Anonymous No.4775679]

[Anonymous No.4775693]

[Anonymous No.4775731]

crossposting this one.

[Anonymous No.4775737]

>>4775610
Table-senpai, have you drawn Broly yet?

[Anonymous No.4775742]

>>4775610
How do i make a quick background that doesn’t look cheap?

>>4775737
Nope, i never draw dudes

[Anonymous No.4775787]

>>4775679
kill la kill?

[Anonymous No.4775805]

>>4775693
link?

[Anonymous No.4775808]

>>4775742
fuck. you color really fast tablechad

[Anonymous No.4775828]

>>4775787
yeah

[Anonymous No.4775861]

>>4775828
i remember seeing this somewhere else, but can't recall where...

[Anonymous No.4775914]

>>4775731
crossposting again

[Anonymous No.4775942]

>>4775861 here
>>4775828
I remember now.

[Anonymous No.4775991]

>>4775742
I mean, why have cheap quick bgs when you can take your time? Top right looks very sloppy, and I know you can do better.

[Anonymous No.4776006]

tfw when ur too anime for alt but not anime enough for asg

[Anonymous No.4776011]

>>4776006
Back to /beg/

[Anonymous No.4776023]

>>4776011
oh now its my turn

pyw

[Anonymous No.4776028]

>>4776006
no this fits right at home with /asg/.

[Anonymous No.4776035]

>>4776006
alt is for pure anime too.

[Anonymous No.4776054]

>>4775010
Thanks frend, i still went and redid, I feel pretty happy with it now... the feet will also be different when i add the shoes...

Only 6 more of this to go... it is great practice desu

[Anonymous No.4776068]

>>4775693
it's like she's biting on a leaf
still cute

[Anonymous No.4776074]

>>4774559
I really like this art, but didn't see it in previous thread, does this fella have a blog?

[Anonymous No.4776180]

>>4775742
>How do i make a quick background that doesn’t look cheap?
Multiple planes with different level detailing maybe?
Make the road under the bike sharp and crispy
Then add single colour treeline that is just an outline filled with single colour
And then add blurred city/mountains/whatever in the distance

[Anonymous No.4776272]

say something bad please

[Anonymous No.4776276]

>>4776272
Good work. Polite sage.

[Anonymous No.4776282]

>>4776272
broad chest and shoulders and lack of apparent cleavage makes it look like a man/trap.
unless you that's what you were going for.

[Anonymous No.4776283]

>>4776272
it is actually pretty good... I like the folds

[Anonymous No.4776285]

>>4776054
i wanna read it again great taste as always

[Anonymous No.4776288]

>>4775731
>>4775914
you can make that kind of line wokr, but ill be honest mate, it sucks first learn how to use less lines

[Anonymous No.4776311]

>>4776288
Yeah i know it's a bad habit. i usually have no idea what i want to draw initially so i scribble around until it resembles something, and when i realized i could use more lines to hide mistakes; i got too complacent with them.

[Anonymous No.4776314]

>>4776311
Nice 14-pack bro

[Anonymous No.4776317]

>>4776314
he had it in the manga lol. keeping it canon

[Anonymous No.4776337]

>>4774559
I wasn't going to work more on it, but I thought it would be a waste of time if I didn't make a NSFW version for HF. Turns out the girl looks even better without her nipples, I guess I can post it now on Twitter without fear of getting shadowbanned.
I also figured out what kind of hatching I will use in the future.
>>4774921
Very good looking and juicy muscles
>>4776317
Is that Attack on Titan? Tbh the manga had incredibly shitty art style, I can't believe they didn't hire another artist

[Anonymous No.4776350]

>>4776282
I can understand the shoulders, even though I think they look OK, I measured with the head. But please use liquify to fix it for me, because I genuinely don't know how much should I shrink them. I'm not defending myself or being ironic
you can't see cleavage with a sweater tho. Also, she's supposed to be laying in a bed btw

[Anonymous No.4776354]

>>4776350
AH! btw! I don't have Photoshop installed, my computer crashes for some reason with it

[Anonymous No.4776547]

>>4774614
I like this man. There heads seem a little flat though

>>4775368
>>4775277
>>4775610
>>4775742
Looks like you're going through with trying to add some meat to your girls. Good for you man.

>>4775731
Like others have said, this messiness can work but you need to fix those legs. Have them going behind the body and it will add some much needed depth.
>>4775914
I like this though.

>>4776272
>>4776282
>>4776282
>man/trap

I never knew how much I wanted trap Velma until right now.

[Anonymous No.4776666]

>>4775914
lines much better on this one. learn how to channel that looseness

[Anonymous No.4776799]

>>4775731
>>4775693
/beg/tards

[Anonymous No.4777133]

I am still sketching
>>4774923
pick the checkerboard colour beside primary and secondary, then with the brush's setting 'ink' 'colour mixing' set to 'running colour' use it to blend edges like an eraser

[Anonymous No.4777264]

[Anonymous No.4777275]

I can't keep a single character on-model to save my life.

[Anonymous No.4777374]

>>4777275
Non ironic loomis

[Anonymous No.4777464]

>>4775742
I’m considering doing a set of 8 bulmas, but i don’t know if I can commit

>>4775808
There’s no such thing as too fast

>>4775991
It took me just as long to plan and color the BG as it did to color bulma...

>>4776180
> add blurred city/mountains
How teh fuck do i blur on paper? I’m going to try blocking the BG planes on this one, thanks for teh tip

>>4776547
I feel like I am drawing fatty fetish art now

[Anonymous No.4777475]

How is the lay in so far?

[Anonymous No.4777539]

>>4777475
I really don't like the proportions of the loli head, looks like you took a "normal" anime head and made it bigger without consideration of the placement of the features

[Anonymous No.4777695]

>>4776799
pyw

[Anonymous No.4777703]

>>4774559
WIP

uhh ive been thinking about maybe becoming a bit more active on /ic/. i just lurk all the time usually

[Anonymous No.4777711]

>>4777464
your stuff is so badass, the best ive seen on ic in a while, you have so much going on in every piece you make, the one you made a while ago where you didnt know if you could do it and like the perspective was crazy, it was so awesome, dont stop doing what youre doing! that sailor moon one was also amazing, you have a talent anon

[Anonymous No.4777714]

>>4777695
Why so mad? lmao. It's true.

[Anonymous No.4777719]

>>4777714
why no work posted?. lmao. ngmi.

[Anonymous No.4777720]

doing a little final fantasy inspired thing. But I dunno if I'm doing the form right. Trying to pull off Contrapposto correctly. Andy advice?

[Anonymous No.4777761]

>>4777464
>How teh fuck do i blur on paper?
With markers? You already did some blurry things for the BG. You can also desaturate the most faraway objects a little. Or just do them in blue tinted colours.

[Anonymous No.4777772]

>>4777711
Literally nothing wrong with being a /beg/tard, it just mean that you need to improve and that this isn't the thread you should be in.

[Anonymous No.4777773]

[Anonymous No.4777788]

>>4777703
Blog pretty please?

[Anonymous No.4777791]

>>4777788
https://twitter.com/Dirona24

[Anonymous No.4777860]

>>4777275
your work is too cute and wholesome for this garbage board ..

[Anonymous No.4777873]

>>4777860
You don't sound like a wholesome person yourself.

[Anonymous No.4777874]

>>4777772
what are you talking about? im complimenting the guys work i never said anything about /beg/

[Anonymous No.4777888]

>>4777720
Gonna come back to it another time. Wanna get advice before finishing

[Anonymous No.4777912]

>>4777711
You must not browse here much. Last 2-4 threads had artwork that good or better.

[Anonymous No.4777974]

>>4777464
Ink done, but looks claustrophobic now

>>4777711
Thanks for motivational speech anon!

>>4777761
Ah ah gotcha

[Anonymous No.4778016]

>>4777912
oh ive been lurking for a while now, he has style and perspective, hes god compared to that little weeb pantsu ripper

[Anonymous No.4778024]

WIP.
Fucked up proportions again.

[Anonymous No.4778026]

>>4778024
/beg/

[Anonymous No.4778049]

>>4774559
doing these felt like I haven't improved in 2 years, but at the same time these were done faster and look better than my old stuff that would take 5 hours to draw 1 pose

[Anonymous No.4778055]

>>4778024
Im sorry. Is this supposed to be sexy or funny? It leans more on being funny without actually being funny—in a good way, at least.

[Anonymous No.4778074]

[Anonymous No.4778082]

>>4778074
what's with you and anime girls with ugly toes doing retarded poses.

[Anonymous No.4778090]

How do I better convey that the character is being blasted away?

[Anonymous No.4778096]

>>4778074
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KuANVbmyOKA

[Anonymous No.4778105]

>>4778074
Nice try at being dynamic. This turd is all kinds of weird. I see shit like this all the time at school. Learn how to draw first, then add the anime.

[Anonymous No.4778117]

>>4778090
If the character is being blown toward us, maybe try to place the arms either flung forward or arms out and slightly raised at the shoulders and hanging with the elbows bent At the sides. But in reality, you should plan out your drawings with some thumbnails. Yeah it’s boring as shit than just getting down and dirty with one drawing, but you might find it looks better or correct in another version or two. There are quite a few other ways you could approach it.

[Anonymous No.4778118]

Anyone know whether there's some sort of trick to exporting in CSP? I wanted to export in high resolution but the color would always come out a bit washed so I'm resorting to screenshotting to keep the color (in exchange for resolution.)

[Anonymous No.4778123]

>>4778118
Check color conversion preferences, go to rendering intent and select absolute colormetric

[Anonymous No.4778131]

>>4778055
Supposed to be on the funny side. Since everyone talking about eylashes=>bush, but nobody actually draws it.

[Anonymous No.4778148]

>>4778049
>my old stuff that would take 5 hours to draw 1 pose
This is a very overlooked aspect of improvement on this board.

Good stuff anon!

[Anonymous No.4778190]

What is this style called?

[Anonymous No.4778201]

Recently designed this character for my webcomic! The story takes place in 1996 and I'm a bit concerned she looks more early 2000s....

[Anonymous No.4778204]

>>4778201
people forget that mid-late 90s fashion overlaps with early 2000s fashion if you exclude the celebrities of those eras. She looks fine, but maybe observe some teenage fashion catalogues from that era

[Anonymous No.4778209]

>>4778204
I appreciate your response, thank you! That catalogue image is great, too. Would you happen to know where I may find more images like that? I find Pinterest pretty helpful but if there are other good resources, I'd definitely love to look into them.

[Anonymous No.4778214]

>>4778209
be sure to look at the years
https://deliascatalogs.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.4778219]

>>4778214
This is awesome! Thank you so much!!

[Anonymous No.4778257]

>>4778201
Jnco jeans, kswiss, frosted tip hair, mini backpacks with beanie babies.

[Anonymous No.4778265]

>>4778214
based anon

[Anonymous No.4778276]

Hello Puff Yummi

[Anonymous No.4778283]

>>4778276
This feels like someone who knows how to draw trying to emulate someone who can't

[Anonymous No.4778284]

>>4778283
I do that a lot, you’ve caught me red handed.

[Anonymous No.4778288]

>>4775368
Focus on more rounded details rather than harsh edges. Vehicles in toriyama’s early artwork are constructed with round shapes which is what gives them a more charming and harmless look to them.

[Anonymous No.4778299]

>>4778257
Those are all perfect suggestions! Thank you!!

[Anonymous No.4778312]

>>4778276
I drew a anime butterfly girl a while back too.

[Anonymous No.4778321]

>>4778312
lol I unironically love this.

[Anonymous No.4778327]

>>4778321
Thanks Anon! I’m glad to hear.

[Anonymous No.4778344]

>>4778276
I;m gonna say this before some anon just bashes you without giving critique
Your hearts in the right place, but you need to study more. Anatomy studies are good to know, but if you really wanna do the toony style, study rubberhose toons and then look at their variation. I can't go into detail, but the HHPuffyAmiUmi cartoon's art style is a variant of the upa style which is a variant of the 40s style which is a variant of the 30s style. So again, study anatomy, rubberhouse, and then study the cartoon's style

[Anonymous No.4778350]

>>4778344
Thanks for writing all this up for me Anon, I appreciate it a lot.

[Anonymous No.4778362]

>>4778276
>>4778312
Last thing I’m gonna post, it’s a Rougey Bat.

[Anonymous No.4778368]

>>4777974
Colored. I only liked how the sky turned out. There’s like no atmosphere or continuity. It looks like one of those kids menus that you color with crayons.

This is going to take forever to decode a solution

>>4778288
Good tip, thanks

[Anonymous No.4778370]

been trying out some funky stuff. have some tyler.

[Anonymous No.4778371]

>>4778368
the color definately makes it feel less cluttered. if you add some value changes to her and make her a lil darker than everything else it may pop even more!

[Anonymous No.4778377]

>>4778370
Very unique style, I like it a lot!

[Anonymous No.4778388]

>>4778370

how do you get your shit to look so soft? using adjustment layers or blur filters?

[Anonymous No.4778393]

>>4778362
this looks so cute and it looks like youre having fun and thats whats important, your stuff is precious please dont stop having fun

[Anonymous No.4778394]

>>4778388
a super sick trick is to duplicate yur lineart layer then add a small gaussien blur.

[Anonymous No.4778413]

>>4778393
I do have fun drawing. I just really draw what I want whether it’s my own comics or just fan art pictures. My main goal is for myself to enjoy the process and the result of drawing.
I’d love for other people to enjoy my drawings too which is why I post it online but that’s not really under my control whether people like it or not.

[Anonymous No.4778421]

god i need to learn how to paint. idk wtf i'm even doing.

[Anonymous No.4778426]

>>4778421
I like it!

[Anonymous No.4778456]

[Anonymous No.4778470]

[Anonymous No.4778487]

>>4778368

[Anonymous No.4778502]

Not coomer shit just doing erotic pinups, if there’s a difference...

I want to start tightening thing up, but idk where to begin... wondering if anyone would suggest where to start from here.

Most of my stuff ends up rough like this, and when I try to tighten up my lines, i always makes it worse.

Should i sketch out how i want the line art to look? Ive seen some do that faux line-weight varying stuff sketched out. Not sure if it works here.

Just looking to grow some more, figure out where things are so i can improve

[Anonymous No.4778505]

>>4778368
There aren't many places for the eye to rest on in the main subjects (bulma & the machine.)

[Anonymous No.4778520]

>>4778368
I'd say you need more contrast between girl-canyon-sky. Maybe even only canyon walls being much darker should be enough. Basically leave only edges of the rock in the light and everything else in shadow. Especially under vegetation. You can probably do it on PC.

[Anonymous No.4778531]

>>4778520
In the end, it's not my piece so I'm not going to change things to that degree. But I will say, even without trying, I already know doing what you're saying to do won't look good (at all.) There's already enough contrast with the girl and the canyon, it's just hard to keep your eye on her as there aren't many areas where the eye can rest on her.

[Anonymous No.4778565]

>>4778413
well i love it anon, im so happy to hear youre having fun and thats what matters most, your stuff makes me jealous i wish i was having that much fun... im just such a perfectionist i cant enjoy anything until i spend about 3 weeks on it, anyway your creativity shows and i love it a lot,ni dont often see people like you just drawing for the hell of it, living life, keep doing you friend!

[Anonymous No.4778570]

>>4778505
thats exactly what i love about your stuff though, i dont know where to lay my eyes on but thats what makes it so exciting, because no matter where I lay them i just wanna keep looking because it really appeals to my eye...no homo

[Anonymous No.4778583]

I'm trying to figure out facial expressions for this character, had a little trouble at first b/c of the nonstandard facial anatomy but I think I'm getting the hang of it. I'm really glad that I can use Kouya ni Kemono Doukokusu for reference, Itoh Sei really knows how to push facial expressions to the limit.
>>4777703
C U T E
>>4777275
Really expressive and also C U T E. I love it.

[Anonymous No.4778589]

>>4778368
>>4778505
Higher resolution pic, made a few tweaks. Color gets a bit washed from exporting though.
>>4778570
Unfortunately, I'm not the artist you wanted to say that to... (I'm just someone who decided to redo their background.) And I'm not sure whether you understand what exactly having areas for the eye to rest on means.

[Anonymous No.4778597]

>>4778589
dont doubt yourself friend, ive watched you for a little bit now and i love it, maybe im not a professional critic and maybe i dont have a professional eye for art, but as a random person on the world wide web, your stuff is so beautiful to me, seriously special stuff i mean it and im saying it to YOU!

[Anonymous No.4778599]

>>4778597
oh wait im fucking retarded lol im so sorry i just realized you just redrew their background holy shit im dumb

[Anonymous No.4778602]

>>4778368
Did this in procreate, but I’m going to try marker over this tomorrow to see if i can push the values

>>4778371
Tried the inverse like this anon said >>4778520, it could work...

>>4778505
DUDE your BG looks so fucking effortless, fuckkkk i have a long way to go. Thanks for the paint over. I think this is like the 2nd time I’ve ever got a paint over / redline on /ic/. The green shit on the upper right was supposed to be some dragon part, but it definitely looks better as trees.

>>4778570
I also like busy, but still needs some balance and purpose, like controlled explosion

[Anonymous No.4778606]

i do all of my artwork on my phone using medibang, here's something from before my phone broke (about a week ago)

[Anonymous No.4778610]

>>4778589
Man so good thanks for the full res

I can’t figure out how to drop the black levels on the ink in the BG. It’s making my BG features too harsh. I’m not sure how to compensate otherwise since the FG and BG inks are always at the same darkness level.

[Anonymous No.4778614]

>>4778606
you only do your artwork on your phone so that everytime it comes out shit you can just tell yourself "it's ok i did this on my phone"

[Anonymous No.4778637]

>>4778583
More faces, different character
>>4778470
Forgot to mention how neat this one was in my last post, I like it
>>4778370
This reminds me of Speedosausage/Speedoru's art for some reason

[Anonymous No.4778639]

>>4776054
finished

>>4776285
I haven't read tsukihime and haven't finished higurashi... need to get to that soon...

[Anonymous No.4778644]

>>4778583
I absolutely love it.
blog?

[Anonymous No.4778654]

I NEED HEEELP

ok ok so i designed this character right? its based off of a flatworm and his frills are supposed to be semi transparent

[Anonymous No.4778655]

>>4778654
and i uh just made this but uhh i dunno how to do the transparency properly, ESPECIALLY on his head things

[Anonymous No.4778658]

>>4778421
It needs more blue or orange the sky is never withe p

[Anonymous No.4778659]

>>4778502
TLDR. wrong thread

[Anonymous No.4778660]

>>4778606
How old are you?

[Anonymous No.4778681]

>>4778456
I like it. What's the story?

[Anonymous No.4778757]

>>4778610
To differentiate between the foreground and background, place a layer with a grayish light blue at 15%+ opacity (depending on distance) onto the background. You'll probably need to do that part digitally. Things become lighter and bluer when they fade into the distance (for same reason the sky is light blue.) Other than that, thinner and shorter strokes I guess? Though it's hard to imagine you're not already doing so.

[Anonymous No.4778989]

new face style test

cute?

[Anonymous No.4779009]

>>4778502

>erotic pinups

you have at completely missed the point of pinups.

[Anonymous No.4779014]

>>4778394

ah thanks mate, I had a sneaking suspicion, I'll have to try this out sometime!

[Anonymous No.4779019]

>>4777539
So more like this?

[Anonymous No.4779108]

>>4778658
i was attempting to heighten contrast between the foreground figure and bg

[Anonymous No.4779114]

>>4779009
id drink the bath water

[Anonymous No.4779188]

>>4779114
probably has poopie in it thats yucky

[Anonymous No.4779288]

halfway through realized im making garbage

[Anonymous No.4779292]

>>4779288
Idk its ok. Prolly better than that but it’s creative and energetic

[Anonymous No.4779483]

thoughts so far?

[Anonymous No.4779514]

>>4778024
Looks good did you use a ref for this pose? Does look a little off but I'm /beg/ so I cant really pinpoint it. Aside from that,
> big bush
> hnnnng

[Anonymous No.4779524]

>>4778681
ghost of a tale fan art

[Anonymous No.4779541]

>>4779288
i like it

[Anonymous No.4779560]

[Anonymous No.4779648]

>>4778602
Extra marker layer, E19 was too saturated for the darkest layer, probably should have used E59.

>>4778757
No rules just tools. Ultimately, i was wondering if I could do it without digital touch up. I’m assuming some manga panels and BW drawings do it without a mask or maybe they make super fine lines?? I can drop the saturation and add a blue tint if I just layer over with B41. Thanks for the tips, I’ll keep trying stuff.

[Anonymous No.4779676]

>>4779288
I like it, the worst thing I think is the hatching on the arms. I would get rid of the scraggly lines on the arms and just let them be simple shapes. I would make them in a single gesture and the fabrics folds would be implied from a few curves.

[Anonymous No.4779688]

>>4779560
Use the random pick tool or noise tool to make the lines seem less digital. Otherwise good work

[Anonymous No.4779821]

>>4775163
>>4774559
i have the same question

OP POST SAUCE

[Anonymous No.4779829]

>>4779821
I'm the person who asked, but i'm pretty sure I remember the skull one from a few years ago. The eyes in Fly's pieces are one of his giveaways though. I think it's his work but could be wrong.

[Anonymous No.4779838]

>>4779560
I like this style. Is there a specific name for it? I've seen similar looking stuff in some medieval drawings like pic related.

[Anonymous No.4779839]

>>4779838
is this loss?

[Anonymous No.4779842]

>>4779838
its just renaissance line art i believe

[Anonymous No.4779862]

[Anonymous No.4779917]

summer bikini pinup

[Anonymous No.4779942]

>>4779917
It is beautiful, but next time please make sure each breast is the same size.

[Anonymous No.4779948]

>>4779917
Good stuff

[Anonymous No.4779971]

>>4779829
Do you have a link to Fly's work? Couldn't find a blog with a general handle like that

[Anonymous No.4779979]

>>4779917
iiiii nee

[Anonymous No.4779990]

>>4779524
>>4779862
You really need to study anatomy, poses, and also appeal. The poses are the worst though, please try using some references or doing these pose yourselves because they are not great to look at.

>>4779917
Awesome work, I love how you did the underwater part. Really pretty skin shading too!

[Anonymous No.4780011]

>>4779483
Almost halfway there :V

[Anonymous No.4780043]

>>4779971
Sorry anon, unless you were browsing draw threads a few years ago and saving them yourself, as far as I know he doesn't have any presence these days.

[Anonymous No.4780093]

im trying some rendering bros..

[Anonymous No.4780095]

Weird stupid thing.

[Anonymous No.4780104]

>>4778989
it's cute now please let my family go

[Anonymous No.4780115]

>>4779560

this image is fucking with me its like is it daytime or nightime can you make the bg less totally black maybe dither to white from the sun

i get it what youre doing is the style but from just a human perspective its like black = night

[Anonymous No.4780125]

>>4780115
I thought it was the moon kek

[Anonymous No.4780126]

>>4780125

its the sun. this is the image they're going off

[Anonymous No.4780133]

>>4778074

>Кoшкoдeвкa2.jpg

eщe oдин pyccкий нa / ic /? O Бoжe

[Anonymous No.4780155]

>>4779483
>>4780011
clearly you're very skilled technically,,, but this is just a matter of my personal taste. i don't find it very aesthetically pleasing.

[Anonymous No.4780156]

Here’s Burgerman, one of my comic characters.

[Anonymous No.4780166]

[Anonymous No.4780170]

>>4780166
>>4776640

[Anonymous No.4780181]

>>4780043
Damn that's a shame, op pic is really nice

[Anonymous No.4780191]

front tonight's discord draw session.

[Anonymous No.4780258]

>>4779648
This one too long to sketch, gotta finish quickly

[Anonymous No.4780266]

>>4780191
that's not how thumbs bend.
love the doodle on the bottom right though, do you have a finished drawing of that design?

[Anonymous No.4780271]

>>4780095
i love your art bro ilove it i ove it so much

[Anonymous No.4780272]

[Anonymous No.4780284]

>>4780093
Nice, this is definitely a step up from your past stuff I think. I'd say what you really need to work on are your eyes honestly, the face otherwise looks appealing but the eyes are too big/there's not enough space between them, and also I feel like if you play more with pupil size and shape it will look better.

[Anonymous No.4780310]

>>4780266
you should literally see my gf's thumb bend backwards at the last digit aha.
but i getcha. hands are still tough

[Anonymous No.4780311]

>>4780266
>>4780310
oh and no he was just an on the spot doodle guy. i really do like it though

[Anonymous No.4780337]

[Anonymous No.4780390]

>>4780258
I broke all the limbs, and now teh ink makes it totally unreadable

[Anonymous No.4780433]

would appreciate any help/tips, especially on these leggies and feet

[Anonymous No.4780471]

[Anonymous No.4780576]

[Anonymous No.4780606]

>>4780390
You can just give her a thick outline if even colours won't be enough to separate her properly. Or you can do as many manga artists instead who use a fuzzy white border to put the focus on characters.

[Anonymous No.4780934]

>>4778644
@moogdoodles
I actually started posting again, yayyyy

[Anonymous No.4780943]

>>4774559
Who’s this artist?

[Anonymous No.4781034]

[Anonymous No.4781046]

[Anonymous No.4781096]

>>4780011
at a tecnical level this is good, but god your artstyle is butt ugly

[Anonymous No.4781101]

>>4780390
looks awesome...

>>4780934
>>4781046
awesome stuff... ur lines are pretty confident... luv it


working on a comic...

[Anonymous No.4781104]

>>4781101

[Anonymous No.4781301]

>>4780011 Ok so I decided to paint over the faces and try to fix them. Hope these are less ugly

[Anonymous No.4781303]

>>4781301
>>4780011
cute trannoids.

[Anonymous No.4781312]

>>4781303
gee thanks

[Anonymous No.4781354]

[Anonymous No.4781358]

>>4781354
the lineart is too cluttered and looks sloppy. Try drawing bigger and/or using thinner lines. Also the pose is stiff.

[Anonymous No.4781378]

>>4781358
ok

[Anonymous No.4781497]

>>4781354
>>4781378
Different Anon here and I like your lineart

[Anonymous No.4781521]

>>4781497

>>4781358 here again
maybe I just hate thick black g-pen line art. Imo it always looks amateurish even when done well. It's mostly the sharp unfinished edges of the lines that doesn't seem to go anywhere that makes it look unfinished or rushed if that makes any sense.

[Anonymous No.4781579]

>>4781301
The facial features are just plain ugly. There's nothing inherently wrong with that per se, but if it's intentional then maybe you should study different cute faces (from life).

[Anonymous No.4781639]

>>4781354
The biggest offender here is the gesture. You referenced a relaxed and casual pose and made it look like she's tense as fuck and also needs to take a shit.

[Anonymous No.4781699]

[Anonymous No.4781707]

>>4774876
Made alittle more progress...not 100% on the text bubble.

[Anonymous No.4781711]

[Anonymous No.4781774]

[Anonymous No.4781866]

>>4781707
I like the 80ies energy your work has. Textbubble is oddly shaped, go either for oval or square, not half-half. Might also want to take a look at some comic old school comic lettering, currently the text doesn't mesh well with the art aestethically.

[Anonymous No.4781923]

Playing with the Sumi brush in Medibang, it's sooo gooood

[Anonymous No.4781971]

>>4781104

[Anonymous No.4781973]

>>4781971

[Anonymous No.4781978]

>>4781973

[Anonymous No.4782005]

going to the playground

[Anonymous No.4782006]

>>4776272
i love it had to stare at it for a while too find a flaw
chin is off center

[Anonymous No.4782019]

>>4782005
cute!

[Anonymous No.4782040]

>>4781923
Cute, anon. Blog?

[Anonymous No.4782076]

Halftones are so friggin' baaaaaased my dudes

>>4781971
>>4781973
>>4781978
I really like these, can't really tell what's going on in the viddyjame though. I should have asked this before, but do you have a blog?
>>4782040
See >>4780934
My art style is jumping all over the place atm

[Anonymous No.4782170]

>>4782076
Thanks frend
>can't really tell what's going on in the viddyjame though
I wasn't sure if I wanted to have more panels of just the game, maybe one more panel at the start would work... its basically this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDDvgS0d-q4

[Anonymous No.4782244]

NASA WHY DON'T I HAVE A CUTE AYYLMAO GF YET AAAAAAH
I'M GOING TO ASK ELON MUSK INSTEAD, GOODBYE

sorry about the 2hueg images in the previous posts, forgot to resize them

[Anonymous No.4782260]

boris at last: feedbacker (2005)

[Anonymous No.4782262]

[Anonymous No.4782265]

>>4781301
Keep going dude. This is refreshing after most shit here being uguu anime girls.

[Anonymous No.4782272]

>>4781707
Am I going crazy or you're working on this thing for months?

[Anonymous No.4782334]

>>4777888
finished it up. Didn't get advice, but I would love to hear critiques

[Anonymous No.4782391]

Redesigning Isabel; doing a bunch of quick sketches to get the right combination of major shapes.

[Anonymous No.4782394]

>>4781301 Finished for now. Maybe I'll notice and correct some final flaws tomorrow.

[Anonymous No.4782396]

>>4782391
Experiment with far right. I like how simple it is

[Anonymous No.4782473]

>>4782396
Will do. I think merging the silhouette of the first and the boots/short pleated skirt combo would be a good way forward for this character.

Thoughts on better communicating her class options, personality, and quirks through her design?

[Anonymous No.4782475]

>>4780390
I’m about to ruin this

>>4780606
> fuzzy white border to put the focus on characters
What do you mean? Is this something that I should have planned for earlier?

>>4781101
Thanks

[Anonymous No.4782497]

>>4782475
Don't listen to them, it's something you do mainly in monochrome pieces (e.g. manga) in order to bring focus to something. You're doing it in color so you shouldn't be needing it. Looks awesome so far!

[Anonymous No.4782502]

>>4782473
>anglo, celtic, nord, arabic, israeli influences

truly american character

[Anonymous No.4782533]

>>4782473
>quirks
Quirks imply uniqueness, but this is so generic.

[Anonymous No.4782540]

>>4782502
Iria is a major trade hub between countless nations that the ruling caste governs as it were their own country. The characters/players actions (depending on whether it becomes a comic or a game will, and depending on what game play style I settle on) will influence reforms they will enact deal with the corruption, and what direction they can influence it towards during wartime, etc.

[Anonymous No.4782598]

>>4782475
Done, i like how the clouds came out. I want another shot. The earth is just a load of tom fuckery, need to figure that part out..

>>4782497
Ah ok

[Anonymous No.4782600]

>>4782598

[Anonymous No.4782628]

>>4782600
What? Is the contrast too high.i feel like I’m looking at shenron more than that corner

Should I make it darker? Like this?

[Anonymous No.4782657]

>>4782628
that's better, before there was some optical illusion making me dizzy when focusing where there is 3 values on the rock on the corner at the top side

[Anonymous No.4782712]

[Anonymous No.4782714]

>>4778276
AMI-CHAN
I KNEEL

[Anonymous No.4782718]

>>4778655
>>4778654
what's your blog?

[Anonymous No.4782723]

Done with the first row.

[Anonymous No.4782725]

>>4779917
i really wanna shade and sketch like you, Magi.
also bless you for maining my nigga Incineroar.

[▲+ No.4782742]

>>4780115

I'm doing all the cards (an entire tarot deck) with black backgrounds; but I think this is a really good point and one that really needs addressing before I move forward. Thanks!

[▲+ No.4782750]

>>4779838

Thanks, I'm attempting to mimic the original art of the Rider-Waite tarot as illustrated by Pam Smith and combining it stylistic elements of Durer's woodblock prints. If you like the style I'd highly recommend looking at old woodblock and engravings from the 1400-1500's

[Anonymous No.4782863]

>>4782723
I like 2, 5 and 8. 6 is nice too, but that one has a very different vibe from the rest.
If this is for a comic, keep in mind that you'll have to draw the outfit a ton so you don't want to go with anything too complicated.

[Anonymous No.4782871]

>>4782723
I can't tell if that's supposed to be cleavage or jewelry on that dancer costume

[Anonymous No.4782919]

>>4780043
he's an industry professional so you might be able to find him on artstation or something.

[Anonymous No.4782936]

[Anonymous No.4783010]

>>4782718
>>4777791
right here friend

[Anonymous No.4783012]

>>4781866
Thanks for the suggestions, I'll rework the text and the bubble after looking into it some more.

>>4782272
No, you aren't crazy, I started this picture ages ago, and then decided to pick it back up recently, I have a tendency of doing that with some of my pieces.

This picture for instance, took 4 years before it was complete, it sat maybe 30% complete for 4 years, and then one day I found it again, liked it, and decided to finish the rest of it in one sitting.

[Anonymous No.4783057]

>>4782936
I really, really don't like your noses. Are you doing them bad on purpose?

[Anonymous No.4783065]

>>4782394
I'm genuinely disgusted by it. I mean good work, but I dont like it. Is it a my style thing or what?

[Anonymous No.4783069]

>>4780576
That's not how drop shadows work, but ok

[Anonymous No.4783071]

>>4780272
Great taste.

[Anonymous No.4783077]

>>4783065
The proportions are definitively male despite using the bumblegum colour palette commonly associated with women and femininety.
They are manly men in feminine colours and outfits doing feminine things. That's inherently disgusting and repulsive to anyone who isn't mentally ill.

[Anonymous No.4783182]

>>4783057
I have no idea what I'm doing.

[Anonymous No.4783187]

>>4783012
This one's very dope.

[Anonymous No.4783191]

>>4783077
Yes, they're male teens. Good to know the drawing itself isn't wrong and you're just disgusted by anything that isn't an anime girl.

[Anonymous No.4783206]

>>4783191
>Not approving of mental illness means you only like anime girls
trannoid cope, you will never be normal

[Anonymous No.4783213]

>>4783206
I use baki characters as refs to draw space space marines.

[Anonymous No.4783214]

>>4783206
I don't care about trans people or the mentally ill. The drawing has nothing to do with it, It's just a fucking drawing. Why is it so hard to just get some feedback on a drawing without making everything about your personal biases and political beliefs??? I hate it here

[Anonymous No.4783217]

>>4783214
stop getting baited, retard

[Anonymous No.4783221]

>>4783217
Just annoyed. Sorry for sperging out

[Anonymous No.4783234]

[Anonymous No.4783247]

>>4782394
They're weird but they've grown on me.

[Anonymous No.4783260]

>>4782936
>>4783182
Nose is fine in the painted version, but kinda weird in the lineart/sketch

>fellow wakfag

[Anonymous No.4783353]

>>4782394
Your characters have very long noses but relatively short chins and not a lot of forehead/brain space. That sort of thing can work for certain characters, but I wouldn't recommend it as go-to proportions, it's a very distinctive and mature looking face.
In terms of color palette and values, I would either lighten up the background a bit so it's not darker than the darkest parts of the figures, or keep the bg as it is but put some darker details on the characters. Right now the highest contrast is in the back and so it catches my attention more than the figures.

[Anonymous No.4783393]

>>4783353
Thank you!

[Anonymous No.4783394]

>>4783206
BBC (Based Baki Chad)

[Anonymous No.4783421]

>>4781978

[Anonymous No.4783424]

>>4783421
this one is long, but I would love feedback on it... the idea is that you would scroll down... and it is a sort of transition into a new scene

[Anonymous No.4783427]

>>4783234
why are you copying someone elses drawings..

[Anonymous No.4783432]

>>4783427
who's

[Anonymous No.4783435]

>>4783424
soul 10/10
+3 for spooky

13/10

[Anonymous No.4783451]

>>4783432

[Anonymous No.4783466]

>>4783451
wtf is this animu shit?

[Anonymous No.4783473]

>>4783466
what the fuck am i reading?
do you know where you are?

[Anonymous No.4783479]

>>4783435
thanks anon...

never thought it would be so fun to do this kind of stuff...

[Anonymous No.4783484]

>>4779917
don't like how the water is tangent to the bottom of her thigh. makes it look like she has half of her ass with the droplet in front in front

[Anonymous No.4783491]

>>4783479
Just out of curiosity, do you use very much planning or do you just jump straight to single pixel brush?
Great stuff by the way.

[Anonymous No.4783510]

>>4783491
yeah, I just jump straight into it... usually correct anything that comes out weird or is too sketchy once I start coloring

[Anonymous No.4783545]

>>4783504
>>4783504
>>4783504
New thread

[Anonymous No.4783552]

>>4783479
Great work!

[Anonymous No.4784372]

>>4783451
That's not a direct copy, dingus.

[Anonymous No.4784419]

>>4783424
Twitter crop algorithms will fuck it up

[Anonymous No.4784663]

>>4783182
If you don't know
>>>/beg

[Anonymous No.4784678]

>>4783214
Leave then. Good riddance

[Anonymous No.4784763]

>>4784419
well it is part of the comic... but it could work for twitter thanks for the idea... and yeah it will likely be cropped weird...