Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.4765807]

Previous >>4753582

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4765822]

Of course I post the fucking finished one in the old thread ten seconds before the new thread gets made.

Anyways, I suffered a lot on this one (and I see a lot of future mistakes to avoid), but I'm learning.

[Anonymous No.4765829]

I did a few more style studies from FLCL. I feel like I've hit a bit of a dead end with these so I might take a break from them for a bit

[Anonymous No.4765831]

>>4765829
and the other drawing. crossposting from /asg/

[Anonymous No.4765861]

>>4765829
>>4765831
it’s good and all but... ngl it’s kinda soulless anon. not even your art style.
like it might as well be vector art.

[Anonymous No.4765874]

>>4765861
>soulless
Jesus fucking christ anon
>>4765831
Looks great. Can you elaborate on what you were studying?

[Anonymous No.4765884]

>>4765861
thanks, I agree, it feels like I'm just forcing them out so that the studies stick. there's no clear purpose or direction to the drawings aside from application which makes them look fairly 'soulless' or sterile I think. also I drew them in adobe animate so technically it IS vector art haha
>>4765874
I was studying the style of the show mostly. my normal 'art style' isn't very appealing so I thought picking up some design language from anime would help a little bit. there are some nice exaggerated and cartoony poses in FLCL as well which I think has helped my drawings seem more lively

[Anonymous No.4766074]

[Anonymous No.4766081]

>>4765884
Yeh, not that Anon, but I don't like the whole vector thing either. You can make it work. Try giving it more line variation for instance

[Anonymous No.4766116]

>>4766074
Lick

[Anonymous No.4766119]

>>4765829
>>4765831
>>4765884
>>4765829
>>4765831
Just wondering how much stabilizer do you use? This is just something I notice from time to time but sometimes too much stabilizer can make your art look a little lifeless. Also do you have any examples of the exaggerated and cartoony poses? The ones you’ve posted are fairly static/generic, and that could be taking away from the look of your pictures.

[Anonymous No.4766165]

>>4766074
>no sweat

[Anonymous No.4766169]

experimenting with flats

[Anonymous No.4766370]

>>4765874
>Jesus fucking christ anon
what? it simply is, unironically soulless. lacking human spirit and vigor.

[Anonymous No.4766392]

I don’t really render but this is something I did based on the spyro remake art

[Anonymous No.4766423]

How is this? I love grimdark themed stuff and try to combine it with somewhat cute.

[Anonymous No.4766444]

Here's my magic mushroom girl

[Anonymous No.4766457]

>>4766444
Nice texture. She looks like she doesn't have enough space for the brain, give her some additional hair on top.

[Anonymous No.4766460]

>>4766457
Thanks anon, yeah actually i struggle with that a bit because i dont want to go "overboard" you feel? I can't find a good balance

[Anonymous No.4766461]

>>4766074
Saved, i really like this

[Anonymous No.4766475]

>>4766444
Cute, needs some loomis, feels like you're drawing the eyes and slapping the head in. I like the comfy medium tho

[Anonymous No.4766490]

>>4766475
M yeah now that i notice it the neck is a bit thick, it was more of a sketch anyway lots to improve on! Here is something else

[Anonymous No.4766492]

>>4766460
Not the other guy, but a good yardstick is the eyes are in between the chin and the top of the hair. Subtract bit by bit as you like till you find the proportions you like.

[Anonymous No.4766493]

>>4766492
I'll have to look back at loomis/Hampton again, im due for another refresh

[Anonymous No.4766503]

>>4766423
I'll be hones with you anon, I like it it's a fuckin mess, in a bad way, but I like it. Maybe going back to /beg/ will help, but don't get me wrong it has soul,but you're lacking.ill be your fan, so I'll wait here

[Anonymous No.4766504]

>>4766490
I actually really like this, it gives off a rather strange and uncanny vibe. Just a heads up though, last time I checked this board isn't too fond of gore.

[Anonymous No.4766512]

>>4766503
Thanks for the honestly Anon, I appreciate it. Do you think you can be more specific as to what's wrong with it?

[Anonymous No.4766516]

>>4766504
Ah my bad, i appreciate that you like it though i haven't been on here in awhile

[Anonymous No.4766523]

>>4766423
I really like this but i agree with >>4766503
That it feels very messy and lacks a bit of polish, but it does have soul and a nice style.

[Anonymous No.4766539]

>>4766074
Hey anon, this is a cute girl but there's some stuff here and there that I noticed so I did a quick paint over + some notes
1) her ear is too far out
2) her bangs make her look like her forehead is jutting out, her bangs should fall in front of her forehead and follow the form
3) with this pose you should still be able to see the hair at her nape area since she's holding it loosely, and stray strands wouldn't hurt
4) her nose and mouth don't align, center of mouth is not following midline of face

The hands are okay but it feels unnatural overall (doesn't feel like anybody would really hold their hair like that, you'd expect them to be tying their hair or something instead), I didn't attempt to redraw it because this pose is a bitch to draw and it's best to just find photo references and work from that. You could also have some of her hair fall from behind her hands, same logic as adding stray strands.

[Anonymous No.4766545]

>>4766119
>>4766081
thanks, I tried doing another with some line weight and tried a livelier pose
>>4766169
looks awesome, reminds me of that car seat headrest album cover. the off-kilter flat colours work really well. you should post your illustrations at a higher resolution!
>>4766392
from the thumbnail it looks great, the colours and lineless style are very appealing. when I opened it though, I noticed that the design of the face didn't look all too good. maybe it's how thick and wrinkly it is. if you look at the spyro designs, even though the characters look mature, the face shapes are fairly clean and simplified

[Anonymous No.4766558]

[Anonymous No.4766578]

[▲+ No.4766618]

>>4766539

Saint-Tier post

[Anonymous No.4766670]

>>4766539
Will fix, I'll update later

[Anonymous No.4766699]

>>4766539
I'll fix, I'll update later.
>>4766618
Think of the silhouette! The flame looks like it's part of the fur open the arm more or something

[▲+ No.4766758]

>>4766699

love ya

[Anonymous No.4766802]

[Anonymous No.4766829]

>>4766545
fucking great man, GMI

[Anonymous No.4766854]

>>4766802
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4766868]

>>4766854
@grave.dweller99 on instagram

[Anonymous No.4766877]

I haven't browsed this board in a couple of months. What the fuck happened to the post quality in /ALT/? Looks more like deviantart ITT

[Anonymous No.4766882]

>>4766877
Did you already post this comment on /SALT/?

[Anonymous No.4766887]

Has Stellar posted his fuckable rat yet?

[Anonymous No.4766891]

>>4766877
Lolifags and coomers killed the quality.

[Anonymous No.4766896]

>>4766891
>>4766877
Go away, pretend oldfags. You bunch of crabbing retards ruined this board and made the good artists leave. Don't blame actual artists for it.

[Anonymous No.4766904]

>>4766896
Best thing to do is to ignore them

[Anonymous No.4766924]

>>4766545
the line weight REALLY helps. If you look at Hiroyuki Imaishi's art (who I assume you take some inspiration from) he really uses line weight to enforce which parts of the image are close to the viewer

[Anonymous No.4766957]

>>4766558
super cool
>>4766802
super cunny

[Anonymous No.4766959]

>>4766802
Very cute! I know this is part of the style but it always freaks me out a little when legs are thinner than arms. Maybe you could have them just a little thicker than the wrists while still keeping them stylized as stick legs?

[Anonymous No.4766960]

>>4766891
normalfags really killed the quality

[Anonymous No.4766971]

>>4766578
Based and Sewerslvut-pilled
Very cool color corruption effects, how do you do them?

[Anonymous No.4767099]

>>4766802
CUTE

[▲+ No.4767271]

>>4766758

trying to keep those silhouettes nice and neat. not sure how to deal with the smoke/tower, might hatch the tower with the midtone, i think it'll help round it out more too.

[Anonymous No.4767303]

sticker time

>>4766957
the shadows feel like cotton candy. thumbs up.

[Anonymous No.4767372]

[Anonymous No.4767376]

Haven't been on the board in a while. Missed you guys. Here's a bimbo tranny.

[Anonymous No.4767401]

still so stiff...

[Anonymous No.4767408]

>>>4765773
so cute

[Anonymous No.4767413]

>>4767401
the S O U L distracts me from it being stiff, however, do you think if the head was tilted back in a more dynamic angle it would lend to loose up the rest? I feel like when i draw something stiff it's because the face is straight on. Too me, the position of a head sets the tone.

[Anonymous No.4767416]

>>4767413
SOUL translated: i am a drooling retard

[Anonymous No.4767418]

>>4767376
yes

[Anonymous No.4767421]

>>>4763844
Thank you so much anon! it is ballpoint :>
>>>4763828
Thank you!
>>>4763853
I thought giving her a big head would make it look creepier, thank you for the feedback
>>>4763884
On an average illustration like that one, I'd say 4/5 hours
>>>4763930
I was imagining Angel's Egg too! ah, I tried to give her little chode hands to make her resemble a creepy kid but I got careless. Will be careful next time, thank you!
>>>4764127
Thank you!
>>>4762153
I HAVE NEVER DONE THAT

[Anonymous No.4767427]

>>4767421
Those clothes folds still make no sense. There was a whole thread on clothing here not so long ago, study every single pic there.

[Anonymous No.4767448]

have to force myself to relax and just have fun drawing these days

[Anonymous No.4767480]

>>4767303
giving him a little brother.

[▲+ No.4767487]

>>4767271

[Anonymous No.4767508]

some doodles that went too far

[Anonymous No.4767646]

>>4767427
couldn't find... could you check your history and link pls ?

[Anonymous No.4767698]

>>4766558

[Anonymous No.4767705]

>>4767508
Love this, and the red guy

[Anonymous No.4767769]

>>4767646
this one >>4708630

[Anonymous No.4767779]

[Anonymous No.4767787]

>>4766539
ok, ill say im done. I didn't really liked the mouth on the center line, on 3/4 I usually put the commissures over it instead. I dind´t even try with the hands I filddle with them a lot on the sketches and I just gave up... Sorry

[Anonymous No.4767799]

>>4767787
Oh anon, you don't have anything to apologize for, my suggestions/crit are just for your reference and you're free to take whatever you think will improve the drawing. Glad you're done with it!

[Anonymous No.4767818]

[Anonymous No.4767886]

>>4767421
Anon, I've seen your work around for a year or two and I feel like you're stuck in your comfort zone and not making big, noticable improvements because you're too concerned with the quality of your lines and having your art look "detailed" over the actual forms of what you're drawing.

Like >>4767427 says, your clothing folds makes no sense they look like senseless clutter/lines.

I made a quick paint over and some notes on clothing. You can add details to your work by adding shit like more buttons, rounded collars, collars with frills, etc, not useless lines that muddy the form.

Also you tend to draw huge hair and the head ends up looking big and deformed, and not in a stylistically appealing way.

I don't mean for this to be harsh, I think you draw better than me when I was at your age and I think your work could be a lot better if you actually took the time to do proper fundies, not "fundies but in my style". Also something is off about those legs/hidden hips as well, but I've spent enough time on this. Hope this helps!

[Anonymous No.4767937]

>>4767508
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4768152]

>>4767886
>>4767421
Yeh, we been telling you to study more for more than a year now ffs

[Anonymous No.4768169]

could use some help how to push this further bc it looks kind of empty/silly as it is

[Anonymous No.4768288]

>>4767448
very nice anon

[Anonymous No.4768319]

>>4768169
Fish, bubbles, water reflection, chainsaw dude is too stiff

[Anonymous No.4768738]

>>4767413
thanks for the greagt comment friend. i'll see what i can tilt, polish and move on.

[Anonymous No.4768766]

>>4767886
Sav'd for neat clothing fold and costume tips. On the subjct of the hair though, I don't think it's an issue of having too much hair but rather having it all in the wrong place. It poofs out really big but then half of that hair is just gone when it reaches the ring of curls at the bottom. The right side is missing this big mass of hair entirely. Would it not also be possible to simply add more volume to the hair to keep it consistent with that part, and have the big voluminous hair while still being appealing and not making the head look weird? See terrible redline in picrelated. I'm pretty garbage at drawing hair desu.

[Anonymous No.4768770]

>>4767886
Not her, but based anon.

[Anonymous No.4768773]

wip, would love if someone could redline or at least note what might be off...

I think the neck is weird, but it is just hard to draw the way the body contorts when against the ground like that...

>>4768169
really good lightning but it really does look kind of empty, maybe blood if the guy is supposed to be ded? also as the other anon said, bubbles from him going under and a lot of fish would help. Also maybe some benches next to the glass? maybe

>>4767787
hote

>>4768766
cute

[▲+ No.4768776]

>>4767487

[Anonymous No.4768780]

[Anonymous No.4768782]

>>4768773
>wip, would love if someone could redline or at least note what might be off...
Put more effort into your art first, dude.

[Anonymous No.4768791]

i won't be able to work on this for a while so i might as well post it now.

[▲+ No.4768794]

>>4768773

neck is off center, angle the head more, also
>Put more effort into your art first, dude.

[Anonymous No.4768800]

>>4768782
Shuush crab! Shuush

[Anonymous No.4768801]

>>4768773

Legs should taper downwards, in other words be larger at the hips. Specifically, your missing the vastus medialis and vastus lateralis on both sides.

Clavicle should not be straight across. It’s like bike handle bars. Deltoid should be rounded. Arms should get narrower even though I understand you were trying to foreshorten that front arm.

You must realize the hands are just completely wrong. Look into drawing basics courses and comprehensive figure drawing courses.

[Anonymous No.4768805]

>>4768791
I like it, I don't see anything wrong with it, see you later anon, maybe the way the shirt follows the form is kinda flat

[Anonymous No.4768819]

>>4768800
Don't be like this.

[Anonymous No.4768820]

>>4768766
That'll still be too much hair, it'll just look less awful because it's at least balanced, and you can say it's "your style" because it looks less like a mistake. Moe artists do this a lot, some worse than others. It personally bugs me if the hair is very obviously much bigger than the skull. See pic attached as example, bothered the shit out of me when I saw it yesterday. She either has huge hair or a huge skull.

[Anonymous No.4768821]

>>4768773
if people ask you to put more effort is because they see you can do cool things with what art knowledge you have, don't take it as an insult.

[Anonymous No.4768826]

Hey guys how do you decide what you want to draw and what pose to settle on, sometimes i get up to coloring usually laying down flats and realize i want to start over because the pose just isnt right or the drawing itself just isnt grabbing me/

[Anonymous No.4768828]

>>4768820
I think awful is a bit of an exaggeration but yeah anyone who looks at it for a while will catch that something is a bit off.

[Anonymous No.4768841]

>>4768773
Look, you have appeal, no one can deny that. You found your niche, you found your audience, psychological anime etc. But to me it seems like now you're just coasting, and that's okay if you wanna stay in this level, but you also boasted of finishing your drawings in 2 minutes. Either you put more effort or you coast. These shit sketches are not gonna cut it, cause I know you know perspective well.

[Anonymous No.4768867]

>>4768782
>>4768794
Thank you, that is helpful!
>>4768801
Thank u anon... i'll fix the shoulder too...
>you must realize the hands are just completely wrong
yeah, i only scribbled one and the other is not there at all...
>>4768821
i don't...
>>4768841
im trying to put more time into things!

Thanks frends... wasnt trying to be lazy just struggling to nail the pose, but it is really rough. i will try to work more on things before asking for help...

[Anonymous No.4768881]

[Anonymous No.4768884]

>>4768881
hot

[Anonymous No.4768890]

[Anonymous No.4768897]

>>4768890
really good!

[Anonymous No.4768908]

I'd really appreciate some direction or a reason to neck myself, either is fine.

[Anonymous No.4768913]

>>4768908
the middle one is really great, I think the other 2 look sort of weird, specially the girl. her shoulders are too wide and her torso seems to go too low... But I think you okay anyway...

[Anonymous No.4768914]

>>4768897
thank you :,)
i've been grinding pinterest refs nonstop for 2 weeks and had the most devastating burndown yet 2 days ago (just nervousness and bottled up feelings), but now im back on track, i just need to take it easier.

[Anonymous No.4768916]

>>4768914
burnout*

[Anonymous No.4768918]

>>4768914
you nailed their poses very well! they look cool and natural

[Anonymous No.4769004]

>>4768914
Post some progress sketches

[Anonymous No.4769010]

Should I color this or not? Thinking it looks kinda neat this way

[Anonymous No.4769012]

>>4769010
it does, may e you could do really pale colors, it would look cute either way, great job!

[Anonymous No.4769015]

[Anonymous No.4769022]

>>4769004
I mostly drew faces because that’s where my drawings fall apart. This was done on july 19th. I also occasionally go to some real life study of models, even though this tear i basically didnt go once

[Anonymous No.4769035]

>>4768913
>specially the girl. her shoulders are too wide
>girl

I'm pretty sure that's a boy, man.

[Anonymous No.4769036]

>>4769022
This was done last thursday

[Anonymous No.4769040]

>>4769035
Nope, brown haired one is a girl. Anyone care to post how narrow you think her shoulders should be, to me they look normal.

[Anonymous No.4769046]

[Anonymous No.4769057]

>>4769036
This is the sketch for >>4768890
I found out sketching traditionally and refining digitally helps me with the flow and helps me block out the shapes a bit better

[Anonymous No.4769063]

>>4769057
And heres the ref

[Anonymous No.4769074]

[Anonymous No.4769135]

>>4768890

[Anonymous No.4769157]

>>4768884
cute and funny

[▲+ No.4769163]

>>4768776

[Anonymous No.4769181]

>>4769157
still hot

[▲+ No.4769183]

>>4768776

[Anonymous No.4769193]

>>4768776
>>4769183
really like all your stuff anon! good work...

[▲+ No.4769206]

>>4769193

Thank you! I haven't been getting many responses but on this board I understand that's generally a good thing.

Planning on making a dump thread for all the major arcana after I finish them up (only 4 more to go) so I can get some crit on all of them as a body of work before I proceed with the rest of the deck.

>also tweaked some of the anatomy on Star

[Anonymous No.4769238]

>>4767658
> pls tell me copic colours used
Tough request... but from memory...
Buildings: B60, B01, B41 B24, B02, B99, BG05
Big Bunny: V91, V95
Teeth / Mouth: E50, YR21, R85, V99, R20
Carrot: YR04, YR21, R22 R000, Y04, Y24
Shirt: YG67, YG23, BG75
Bunny Tech: BG72, B24, G21
Bunny Prince / gun: RV21, V04, V05, V15, B24
Zombunnies: YG91, YG93

+other miscellaneous colors

[Anonymous No.4769242]

>>4763230
Gotta finish this today, no matter what it takes. Any tips on inking the right side? I always create a mess of entropy... how make it more layered without looking cluttered?

>>4763497
>>4763844
>is she stabbing herself
She’s committing seppuku before getting eaten by zombie bunnies

[Anonymous No.4769248]

>>4769242
You lost me nigga, Keep doing your weird thing I guess.

[Anonymous No.4769257]

>>4769242
Noo! Carrot-chan

[Anonymous No.4769266]

dogshit but i just wanna post my work hngg

[Anonymous No.4769274]

I'm having fun drawing dragons and monsters, but I want to know if I'm muh styling or something? What are your thoughts, what should I practice?

[Anonymous No.4769296]

I am Slaughter !

[Anonymous No.4769302]

>>4769242
Maybe good to establish some kind of focal point in that area

[Anonymous No.4769332]

>>4769015
What kind of sick and twisted form of NTR is this? Where will the degeneracy end?

[Anonymous No.4769349]

Satyr bard for a dnd campaign I started recently. This is much more loosely referenced than I've been doing lately, let me know how horrible my anatomy is plz

[Anonymous No.4769398]

[Anonymous No.4769411]

[Anonymous No.4769413]

>>4769411
Shit

[Anonymous No.4769427]

>>4769242
Which color set should I try? I like D, or maybe something else?

>>4769302
I’ll try to focus on the top bunny’s head and mute the colors on the others eyes

>>4769248
>>4769257
She dies with honor

[Anonymous No.4769450]

>>4769427
are the bunny zombies really going to lack that much detail.. i wanted to see the grotesque zombieness.. maybe d.. but i kind of like the purply blue in B

[Anonymous No.4769453]

>>4769427
A or C

[Anonymous No.4769454]

>>4769411
hell yeah!!

[Anonymous No.4769519]

>>4766959
Hey i totally umderstan man, ill have that in mind next time, thanks man.
>>4767099 thanks so much!

[Anonymous No.4769682]

>>4769427
I like C

[Anonymous No.4769694]

>>4767886
Nice redline.

[Anonymous No.4769735]

>>4769411
From 1 to 10 how autistic are you? I missed you btw

[Anonymous No.4769739]

>>4769349
I would more about your faces than anatomy. Cute lines tho

[Anonymous No.4769745]

>>4769735
man i don't even keep track of it anymore

[Anonymous No.4769747]

>>4769274
You traced it, didn't you?

[Anonymous No.4769752]

>>4769266
Why? You're supposed to be here to improve, not for the (you)s

[Anonymous No.4769775]

>>4769747
No, actually. I referenced thIs pose but didn't trace over it.

[Anonymous No.4769790]

>>4769242
Hey, that's pretty cool.

The angle of the thumb on her right hand forms a tangent with the hand, and also reads as a 6th finger.
Torso anatomy gets a little weird in the lats and abs, and what's the deal with that hard angle on her inner right thigh?
The sword curves and the perspective on it is a little inconsistent.

As far as the clutter, you may be able to resolve it with color, otherwise I think your best bet is to simplify some parts of the rabbits to make it more readable.

>>4769427
Out of these, my preference is C, but what is the deal with the color zone behind the rabbits? Does it represent some kind of structure, or just a gradation or what?

[Anonymous No.4769793]

>>4769790
Sorry, on her left hand*

[Anonymous No.4770274]

>>4767886
I can imagine I'm an extremely frustrating person to critique but I'm endlessly grateful for the effort you put into this, thank you! I'm doing some studies right now, hopefully they should help
>>4767427
Will do, thank you
>>4768152
And I have been, just very smoothbrain so the information takes a while to sink in D:

[Anonymous No.4770330]

fox girl with knife

[Anonymous No.4770381]

>>4769427
A

[Anonymous No.4770390]

[Anonymous No.4770453]

>>4770330
Lilo shit looking nose

[Anonymous No.4770454]

>>4770390
Would stamp on my mail

[Anonymous No.4770500]

random crap

[Anonymous No.4770865]

>>4770330
Loosen up that pose

[Anonymous No.4770896]

I'll try harder next time sorry frends

>>4769015
stay chad russian anon

>>4769519
cute!

>>4770390
looks really good...

[Anonymous No.4770979]

>>4765807
An unused character from my graphic novel. It's coming up on the first year anniversary of its publication.

>>4767372
You have a very 80s manga aesthetic. It's a neat look.
>>4767508
Very charming. I like your blending.
>>4769411
I'd be wary of your values. This is very saturated. The reds in particular are too intense. I recommend finding the mood of your piece and basing your choice of color around that. Worst case scenario, add an adjustment layer in whatever software you use to bring all the colors down to a similar range.

[Anonymous No.4770992]

>>4770896
Not as exciting as your usual work but nice nonetheless

[Anonymous No.4771012]

>>4770992
hot... blog... please...

[Anonymous No.4771051]

must....think...of....interesting background

[Anonymous No.4771086]

>>4771051
cute and based! blog please...
perhaps... u could have it be a fence wall and her drop shadow there... maybe in the shape of the batter? idk...

[Anonymous No.4771185]

>>4770992
Make a blog, you idiot. I'll boost you

[▲+ No.4771237]

Are there any certified horse technicians ITT? Something doesn't feel right.

[Anonymous No.4771246]

>>4771237

Back is a bit too straight. Body should have a bulbous cylindrical thing happening. Horses head/nose area should be more angular. I’ve attached some ref

[▲+ No.4771264]

>>4771246

bless you

[▲+ No.4771307]

>>4771246
>>4771237

yee ha

[Anonymous No.4771326]

[Anonymous No.4771357]

>>4768908

[Anonymous No.4771395]

>>4769040
>Anyone care to post how narrow you think her shoulders should be

I think the general consensus is about as narrow/wide as hips. Because her hips are non existent it makes the shoulders look really broad.

[Anonymous No.4771500]

>>4769427
I hated coloring this. Went with what I thought was C, but the colors totally don’t match - just happy to be moving on

>>4769790
Thanks for the input, tried to clear up the hand. There are supposed to be bite chunks taken out of the legs. I had the sword bending because she was prying herself apart, but I couldn’t get it to read properly.

[Anonymous No.4771544]

>>4771500
Angry robutt draw, had to vent for a minute

[Anonymous No.4771553]

>>4767818
>socks
based.

[Anonymous No.4771610]

>>4771544
Now she has an angry skinny friend

[Anonymous No.4771631]

>>4771500
Something to consider for the future: for making bite marks, try out cartoonish teeth grooves. They aren't correct for this type of tooth, but they would read a lot better. It doesn't have to go all the way to a big Looney Toons chomp, but something approaching that should help.

Another thought is that putting it so far in on the inner thigh makes it look like part of her thigh is bulging out, rather than part of her thigh missing. To put it another way, if you put a hole somewhere where the form would taper anyway, it's hard to understand what shape it was supposed to have before it got a hole in it.

[Anonymous No.4771632]

>>4771631
>>4771500
Oh, but yes, definitely move on now.

[Anonymous No.4771766]

[Anonymous No.4771814]

Someone fuckin help me! I think I know how the anatomy works, but Idk how to translate it into animu, or maybe I'm getting tunnel vision and it's ok. But I really need a second opinion.
>>4771357
>kek

[Anonymous No.4771819]

>>4771814
The eyelid rests on the eyeball. In both examples you seem to draw the eyelid somewhat straight. Curve it in the shape of the eyeball.

Otherwise it’s looking good.

[Anonymous No.4771825]

>>4770992
blog?

[Anonymous No.4771844]

Someone fuckin help me! I think I know how the anatomy works, but Idk how to translate it into animu, without making it look like shit. or maybe I'm just getting tunnel vision and it's ok. But I really need a second opinion.
>>4771357 #
>kek

[Anonymous No.4771868]

>>4771553
Thanks. Sometimes I get in the mood and make these ridiculous fetishy comics.

[Anonymous No.4771871]

>>4771610
>put your mask on
Sorry, had to get this out of my system.

>>4771632

>>4771631
Thanks for the crit man. Recently, I realized everything is about placement. It’s basically just dodging tangents everywhere. Since it’s a drawing and not a photo I can place features in their most optimal locations where they can complement each other. So placing for textures, color, lighting, and form juxtaposition is ideal. If i don’t place something where it can contrast, it doesn’t read well. Or if I clutter the picture, it won’t read well either. Just gotta draw more - thanks again

[Anonymous No.4771874]

[Anonymous No.4771876]

>>4771844
>>4771819
This was written for you fren.

[Anonymous No.4771935]

>>4771844
It can definitely pass off as anime, but I'd experiment with trying to make the eyes a little more anime-like.

[Anonymous No.4771974]

>>4771819
>>4771935
Thanks will try
>>4771876
Thanks to you too, I wouldn't have seen it otherwise, luv u

[Anonymous No.4771980]

>>4771868
Thanks will try
>>4771935
I didn't wanted to make them round like that because you're supposed to be seeing from bellow, right? But I'll make them more anime just for you
>>4771876
Thanks to you too, I wouldn't have seen it, luv u

[Anonymous No.4771983]

>>4771819
Thanks will try
>>4771935
I didn't wanted to make them round like that because you're supposed to be seeing from bellow, right? But I'll make them more anime just for you
>>4771876
Thanks to you too, I wouldn't have seen it, luv u

[Anonymous No.4772100]

[Anonymous No.4772110]

I feel sad, I don't feel like I'm using thick lines and black properly

[Anonymous No.4772217]

>>4772110
I would say you are not... you should try to only use thick lines for things that are part of the foreground or that you want to make stand out...

but I think that doesnt really apply to ur drawing anyway, u should maybe keep the thick lines on her outline and have done thinner lines inside or something... hope it helps.

as for using black I think its okay...

[Anonymous No.4772240]

>>4768319
don't really know how to draw bubbles (or fish) or fix the figure

[Anonymous No.4772252]

>>4772240
you already did a great job at filling in the image!

Maybe you could add more? but I think it already looks miles better than before

[Anonymous No.4772266]

>>4772252
thanks ripper-kun (if that is you) part of me just wants to move on but I agree it's still lacking

[Anonymous No.4772274]

>>4772240
Is the figure in the water supposed to be a giant?
If you don't know how to fix or draw something, then you should study it.

[Anonymous No.4772305]

>>4772240
some of the stuff shown here could help you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_-s7BQqIjM

[Anonymous No.4772319]

rate my dude
sorry about the chicken scratch i had no idea what i wanted to draw when i started

[Anonymous No.4772418]

>>4768169
>>4772240
Alternatively, you could've pushed the emptiness to the extreme - though you can't see the characters well, which defeats the purpose I suppose.

[Anonymous No.4772420]

>>4772319
I like it. Imma steal it.

[Anonymous No.4772453]

>>4772420
if anything I'd be flattered if someone else draws him
here's a cleaner version so you can steal him better

[Anonymous No.4772457]

>>4772453
It's a simple but interesting monster. Give blog so i can tag you when i'm done

[Anonymous No.4772460]

>>4770500
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4772473]

>>4772457
don't have one lol. i just post here and sometimes on /vg/.
post yours and i'll follow you though

[Anonymous No.4772538]

horny horses laughing

[Anonymous No.4772541]

>>4772538
Normal girl
But a horse guy!

[Anonymous No.4772550]

[Anonymous No.4772565]

>>4772473
for now, just laying out the framework for my own amusement and to understand the subject
going to do it different though
im this guy btw
twitter.com/sashimisan_art

[Anonymous No.4772599]

>>4772565
love the colours and what you did with the arms, would love to see your next take

[Anonymous No.4772601]

>>4766392
I tried a little harder with this one but I think I messed up the values

[Anonymous No.4772611]

>>4772473
>don't have one lol.
Then make one you idiot
You make good designs and you're only sharing them with fucking /vg/ of all people

[Anonymous No.4772619]

Any help with posing and getting the perspective on this?

[Anonymous No.4772626]

>>4772619
Feet should be flatter on the ground, it looks like she's standing on her toes

[Anonymous No.4772660]

>>4772599
posting here again to show other anons

[Anonymous No.4772665]

[Anonymous No.4772708]

>>4772665
Кapлcoн, чeм ты тaк oбъeбaлcя?

[Anonymous No.4772876]

Anything wrong with the anatomy or pose?

[Anonymous No.4772881]

>>4772876
Seems alright to me.

[Anonymous No.4772906]

[Anonymous No.4772908]

>>4772906
cringe

[Anonymous No.4772995]

>>4772876
left girl's arm look a bit stiff, the way they're tucked in. If you do that pose yourself, I think your elbows would be flared out a bit more. Besides that I think it looks very good my friend

[Anonymous No.4773011]

>>4766957
How did you do the shadows fellow touhou bro?

[Anonymous No.4773025]

>>4767779
Really charming dude.
>>4769349
The face looks too flat, most anime artists give their character a bit of cheek to make it feel more round. I hope pic related helps you.
>>4769519
Incredibly cute, do you have a blog where i can follow your work?
>>4769015
Kek
>>4771874
I love this, do you have a blog? We need more artists that draw angsty cute boys.

[Anonymous No.4773078]

>>4772217
Is that you?

[Anonymous No.4773096]

feedcback

[Anonymous No.4773156]

>>4773096
i want to sit on it so bad, oh my god am i horny, fuck corona

[Anonymous No.4773159]

>>4773156
lol faggot

[Anonymous No.4773167]

[Anonymous No.4773260]

>can't draw anything worth a shit today
>try some cartooning to loosen up
>immediately stop having fun because even that looks like shit

what is a nigga meant to do

[Anonymous No.4773267]

>>4773260
>unfunny
>shit art
boomer tier political comic

[Anonymous No.4773285]

>>4773267

>ok boomer

at least b8 the hook, son. /b/ is over that-a-way

[Anonymous No.4773287]

>>4773260
stop drawing

[Anonymous No.4773295]

>>4773285
>still thinks /b/ is the newfag containment board
>that-a-way
lol we got an actual boomer fossil over here.

[Anonymous No.4773305]

Finished this last night not sure what more I can do with it.

[Anonymous No.4773314]

>>4773305
right dudes right eye is not in prepective, it's drifting upwards and is too close to the other eye

[Anonymous No.4773319]

>>4773314
Ok thanks for saying that. I’ll make that change

[Anonymous No.4773370]

[Anonymous No.4773376]

>>4773370
junji ito?

[Anonymous No.4773389]

>>4773376
no

[Anonymous No.4773411]

[Anonymous No.4773428]

>>4773411
Nice

[Anonymous No.4773434]

>>4773305
desu pretty bad and looks flat/traced considering all you really had to do was the face... I think you should keep references for studies and try to draw your own poses

[Anonymous No.4773436]

>>4773411
Cute. Blog, anon?

[Anonymous No.4773437]

halp

[Anonymous No.4773441]

>>4773436
@alessavo on instagram :)

[Anonymous No.4773442]

>>4773078
no, it was a commission... of some guy playing games... tried my best...

I am just going to stop and do studies for a while

[Anonymous No.4773449]

finally a thread thats not only anime stuff!

[Anonymous No.4773462]

>>4773449
And it's not for you either, coomerfaggot. /SALT/ is for porn.

[Anonymous No.4773464]

>>4773449
wow anon this is very sexy hope you don't mind If I ask for your blog I would love to see more

[Anonymous No.4773466]

>>4773449
This is /alt/ not /beg/, faggot.

[Anonymous No.4773467]

>>4773449
but /alt/ is for cute anime girls

[Anonymous No.4773469]

>>4773260
Learn how to draw maybe

[Anonymous No.4773474]

>>4773449
Nice! Blog?

[Anonymous No.4773478]

>>4773474
>>4773464
@conner_cottontail on instagram
but hopefully your not too disapointed with the lack of nudity on it.

[Anonymous No.4773484]

>>4772660
i made some changes

[Anonymous No.4773487]

>>4773478
never give up anon! read the sticky

[Anonymous No.4773492]

I am sketching
>>4773011
use the transparent ink option to turn a running colour flat brush into an eraser in csp, then blend
then mask the layer and go into it with a soft eraser to make things look soft if you FEEL like it
it's cheap bullshit

[Anonymous No.4773502]

r8 my oc

[Anonymous No.4773601]

Recruiting believers now.

[Anonymous No.4773605]

>>4773601
w-wow

[Anonymous No.4773615]

>>4766578
My eyes hurt.
>>4767508
These are amazing.
>>4767448
Love your lines.
>>4767698
Lots of stuff going on. But looks good.
>>4766169
I’m upset you didn’t post this in a higher resolution. I wanted to save it.

[Anonymous No.4773617]

doodles

[Anonymous No.4773622]

>>4773502
10/10 chad like pic related
>>4773601
Noice.

[Anonymous No.4773624]

>>4773492
Goblin lolis are back

[Anonymous No.4773630]

>>4773601
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5450863&tags=kono_subarashii_sekai_ni_shukufuku_wo%21
At least say it's referenced.

[Anonymous No.4773651]

>>4773601
>>4773630
OH NO NO NO NO NO NO

[Anonymous No.4773658]

>>4773630
>I know that ass

[Anonymous No.4773662]

>>4773658
what an ass hat
ba dum tss imma kms

[Anonymous No.4773685]

>>4773630
he did it better

[Anonymous No.4773699]

>>4765807
What do

[Anonymous No.4773709]

>>4773630
based based based

[Anonymous No.4773727]

[Anonymous No.4773731]

>>4773727
Bruh wtf is that pose

[Anonymous No.4773733]

>>4773731
mad?

[Anonymous No.4773739]

>>4773727
I recognize that pose.

[Anonymous No.4773740]

>>4773739
YAMETE

[Anonymous No.4773759]

>>4773733
What

[Anonymous No.4773869]

>>4773699
Finished. What do you think?

[Anonymous No.4773875]

>>4773025
yes, its @grave.dweller99 on instagram

[Anonymous No.4773877]

>>4773869
Is alright, but i think you shouldn't have hatched the hair exposed to light and you should have put hatching on the horns at least

[▲+ No.4773897]

>>4771307

[▲+ No.4773898]

>>4773897

crit very welcome as always

[Anonymous No.4773905]

>>4773484
Are both of the arm thingies supposed to be the same size? Because if so the one on his left arm is way too small, even accounting for the foreshortening.

[Anonymous No.4773921]

>>4773905
No, it's on purpose. If i wanted to put the hand in that pose, i had to adjust the size. because it would just cover most of the picture due to the sheer original size of it.
The right foreshortening would be if i bent the edgy part. So, take it like an over extended glove than a shield arm.

[Anonymous No.4773982]

>>4773492
your shading always look really well done, so I wouldn't call it bs... I have been stuck with just cel shading since I started drawin thank u for sharing your process I want to try it...

[Anonymous No.4773994]

>>4773167
Fix

[Anonymous No.4774003]

>>4769411
Sum where's waldo shit right there

[Anonymous No.4774128]

>>4772876
too gay.

[Anonymous No.4774210]

>>4767508
nice work, these look like they are characters from a videogame, you could easily be a professional illustrator.

[Anonymous No.4774220]

>>4768908
looks alright, only the girls shoulders are too wide and hips too slim

[Anonymous No.4774232]

>>4773898
you mastered your style.
you can still improve obviously but i think its perfect how it is. you dont make anatomical mistakes and convey ideas well.

[Anonymous No.4774237]

>>4773897
i think you could learn to draw better horses and generally put more details in the anatomy.

[Anonymous No.4774244]

>>4773658

[Anonymous No.4774247]

>>4773733
at least explain this werid pose you incoherrent gnome

[Anonymous No.4774256]

>>4773727
Looks like the Lennonstride to me.

[Anonymous No.4774260]

this threads quality went to shit fast

[Anonymous No.4774466]

>>4773877
Changed the hair but hatching the horns would take too much time. It is a request anyway and I already spent more time than I should.

[Anonymous No.4774538]

The idea is that she is sitting at a table, does the body/pose look right?

[Anonymous No.4774546]

>>4774466
Looks much cleaner at a first glance but what i missed before is the left eyebrow. Try to fix it.

[Anonymous No.4774588]

>>4774546
I did that but it's too late because I posted it on social media. Don't want to delete the posts and lose the miserable pile of likes I have
>>4774538
Anatomically looks normal but the angle and the pose you chose are awful, if the character is facing the camera its sides shouldn't be mirrored because it turns the whole image boring and stiff. For example, when character is standing and facing camera, artists use counter pose https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Contrapposto
Make her lean on the table, left/right side should be slightly higher than the other, so that it would appear that she is in the middle of engaging conversation and isn't lifeless doll. You should remember the last supper of Jesus Christ, find me at least one character sitting like this https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Last_Supper

[Anonymous No.4774602]

>>4774588
I totally agree about counterpose, didn't do it here because the idea is they are about to start on an eating contest, there is a big plate in front of them... I just could not figure out another pose that made sense for that

[▲+ No.4774683]

>>4774232

Damn, thank you! I'm excited to see where I'm at by the time the entire deck is done; I'm one quarter of the way through.

>>4774237

Always room for improvement! I'm holding off on studies for now and just grinding this deck out.

[▲+ No.4774695]

>>4774232

To be fair and to give credit where it's due, the content and compositions are HEAVILY influenced by the Rider-Waite Tarot illustrated by my main lady Pamela Coleman Smith.

[Anonymous No.4774701]

>>4769739
>>4773025
I'm kinda bummed it looks so bad, I was definitely rushing with this and not paying too much attention to the face but usually that's the only area I'm not weak in. Like this is okay right? Or am I just bad at faces and I've just been lying to myself this whole time?

[Anonymous No.4774785]

>>4774588
tried to change it to be more natural, and also drew the chair.... I think it looks a bit better but still.. kinda wonky...

[Anonymous No.4774795]

>>4774785
Because it is not natural at all. Still too symmetrical. Humans never sit like that.

[Anonymous No.4774804]

>>4774795
thank you... might be better to scrap it t bh

[Anonymous No.4774923]

>>4773492
>use the transparent ink option to turn a running colour flat brush into an eraser in csp
That part is the only thing I'm confused with, I don't know what you mean by that, sorry :(

[Anonymous No.4775168]

[▲+ No.4775476]

>>4773898

[Anonymous No.4775809]

[Anonymous No.4776005]

>>4774804
just move the legs

[Anonymous No.4776014]

New Thread
>>4774559
>>4774559
>>4774559

[Anonymous No.4777034]

>>4772240
you should make the drowning chick a bit smaller