/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.4765240]

Previous thread >>4743255

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime lewds. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4765256]

>>4765240
best general in the history of /ic/
at least in theory

[Anonymous No.4765258]

>>4765240
>forgetting the subject again
why are you like this

[Anonymous No.4765417]

is it readable that she is grinding her pusy?
I tried with those "movement lines"

[Anonymous No.4765536]

>>4765417

[Anonymous No.4765542]

>>4765417
she looks like she is shaking the weapon nervously, not grinding against it

[Anonymous No.4765578]

>>4765240
Nobody still gave me sauce for this

[Anonymous No.4765582]

>>4765536
use shading on the pants to really emphasize a squished skin effect, and have the vulva bulge just slightly over the sides of the weapon

[Anonymous No.4765585]

New piece, something here feels wonky, and I think it might be the perspective of where I placed the mirror/backdrop. Any advice?

[Anonymous No.4765730]

>>4765585
her breast are artificially uneven (not that uneven breasts sont exist - its that her shoulders are level and her breasts uneven as if they arent)
and her face is still wonky

may as well slide the whole thin over - why crop her ass?

[Anonymous No.4765768]

>>4765240
Where do I go from here? What should I prioritize to improve?

[Anonymous No.4765774]

Rough loop I made for a /co/ thread

[Anonymous No.4765786]

>>4765768
I hope there aren't any crusty stains on that paper

[Anonymous No.4765815]

Wip

[Anonymous No.4765852]

>>4765768
Prioritize to improve? Well, proportions, anon. They all look like overstuffed sausages with tiny arms, and not even in a good way.

[Anonymous No.4765865]

>>4765417
make the pussy bigger. huge mounds with thick labia are sexy af

[Anonymous No.4765910]

>>4765815
Rework the hand by her crotch.

[Anonymous No.4765948]

[Anonymous No.4766016]

no reference so i hope the poses dont look like total shit

[Anonymous No.4766103]

>>4765768
Are you that guy from the manga SCATTER

[Anonymous No.4766114]

>>4765948
What kind of alternate anatomy is that? Is this the permanent brain damage that porn causes I heard of?

[Anonymous No.4766127]

>>4765768
i dont find this interesting, but id suggest experimenting with pretty faces next to terrible shit

[Anonymous No.4766210]

colors pleasant?

[Anonymous No.4766221]

>>4766210
Easy on the eyes. There’s a bit of a disconnect between what the viewer is looking at vs what you want them to see. I think it’s because people know staffs are straight, but the way her hips are positioned makes it impossible for her to be masturbating with the shaft. Everything else looks good, though, and look at pic attached. I think it will help.

[Anonymous No.4766372]

>>4765768
Ah I see, a patrichian

[Anonymous No.4766375]

>>4766372
Forgot pic

[Anonymous No.4766521]

>>4766375
do you fap to this

[Anonymous No.4766535]

>>4766221
Different anon with a similar problem. Does the pussy look wrong to you? I’ve been staring at this for too long and I can’t really tell anymore. Left is my original idea and right is me trying to draw it nude to see if I could figure out why it looked a little off.

[Anonymous No.4766549]

>>4766535
It doesn't just look wrong. It is wrong. Use reference for fucks sake

[Anonymous No.4766553]

>>4765768
i wonder if one day you will wake up and regret this

[Anonymous No.4766585]

>>4766521
No, not really

[Anonymous No.4766586]

>>4766549
Yeah I’ve been trying to use ref but I still can’t seem to get it quite right. Guess I need to look for some more

[Anonymous No.4766594]

>>4766221
Do you have any more reference tutorials like this? It's super helpful.

[Anonymous No.4766837]

>>4766586
Study perspective. You drew a human shaped pancake.

[Anonymous No.4766848]

>>4766837
I noticed my art tends to look flat because I always use the same straight-on POV, so I was trying to challenge myself by doing a more extreme angle. I guess I still have a lot to learn. I'd appreciate if you could tell me a little more about how you think I could improve.

[Anonymous No.4766856]

>>4766375
please stop showing people your art

[Anonymous No.4766873]

I haven't browsed this board in a couple of months. What the fuck happened to the post quality in /ALT/?

[Anonymous No.4766962]

>>4766535
remove the details around the vag, it shouldnt have that much depth, otherwise its technically not wrong.

[Anonymous No.4767069]

>>4766962
thanks for the feedback anon :)

[Anonymous No.4767086]

>>4766375
>yeah you can show this
>but not that loli stuff no sir no no no
West is disgusting

[Anonymous No.4767095]

>>4766962
>otherwise its technically not wrong
HAHAHAHA

[Anonymous No.4767110]

What do you guys think of this version? I think this design of panties works a little better with the perspective I’m going for.

[Anonymous No.4767137]

>>4767110
u should do One Piece porn

[Anonymous No.4767161]

>>4765852
>>4766127
ok, better faces and proportions. admittedly I sort skipped proportion study early on because I just assumed I could eyeball everything, but this isn't the first time my proportions have been criticized. so I'll take studying it more seriously from now on. Thank you both.

>>4766375
Respect. I wondered if scat would be unpopular on ic, so it's good to see a fellow man of culture.
>>4767086
I'm >>4765768 and I like to draw loli as well. I pity he who cannot see the beauty of loli.

[Anonymous No.4767288]

>>4766594
I’ll post some more later when I get home but I’ll comment here to remember.

[Anonymous No.4767410]

i asdf i the hips are probably hopef i got somethings i nee d to change but i tried lining things hopef it work out good

>>4759405
is marking my twtr as nsfw really that important? i'm pretty small time, i don't really have anything to worry about i thought, plus doesn't it jus automatically mark it as nsfw eventually?

>>4761329
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ don't worry ur prtty li l head about me, i may ebe dumb an slightly drunk but for some reason there's enough people that care about me that i'll be fine no matter what

[Anonymous No.4767496]

who made the op pic? I asked for your blog but the thread died and i guess you didn't see it

[Anonymous No.4767682]

>>4766535
I’m the guy who posted the diagram but it looks like you need to foreshorten her hips more and make her thighs more plump to emphasize that the viewer is looking at it from heather direction of her feet.

[Anonymous No.4767684]

>>4767496
>who made the op pic?
an algorithm

[Anonymous No.4767711]

>>4766594

[Anonymous No.4767888]

New to photoshop, tips? Critiques? Thanks

[Anonymous No.4767897]

>>4766594
Here too

[Anonymous No.4767898]

>>4766594
Tell if you want more

[Anonymous No.4767900]

>>4767888
Bottom half looks like it was traced.

[Anonymous No.4767935]

>>4765240
Destroy this.

[powered by autism inside No.4767948]

>>4767935
I fear how much her spine hurts.

[Anonymous No.4767957]

>>4767948
>>>/t/witter

[Anonymous No.4767962]

>>4767948
You mean, i should've gone bigger?

[powered by autism inside No.4767964]

>>4767962
yeah, snap her in half with the power of flesh globes

[Anonymous No.4767967]

>>4767964
But anon, muscle grows when it's lifting heavy things. Her back must be ripped.
Even then, i bet some people would like what you described.
Seriously though, give critique

[Anonymous No.4767975]

[Anonymous No.4767977]

>>4767975
legs too small

[powered by autism inside No.4767979]

>>4767967
like Papa Willpoo said, you need to feel the form.
Bigger the boobs the more they tend to <--> go away from the imaginative rib cage center.
Also you need to fell the weight of them, because now they look like some sort of baloons. Plus the squishing effect of the bikini??? must me ensured.
In addition, the deltoids are off, and you can shrink her shoulder width a bit for sex appeal. Collar bones push up too much.
For face you probably should go for anime faces and study some, cuz they are simple. Now for actual face critique. Awkwardly bended mouth.... Ah stop, you need to check eye nose mouth levels first (that paralel lining u know). The eye on the left looks out of proportion, and the thick nose line is totally off, and fix the eyebrows, make them thinner and a wee bit longer.
For hair you should've add more patches of it.

The best thing is to draw some water filled balls etc.

[powered by autism inside No.4767982]

>>4767979
The last will go for bewbs

[Anonymous No.4767983]

>>4767900
It wasn't, is there something wrong with it?

[Anonymous No.4767984]

>>4767979
I see my mistakes. Thanks for critique. It is helpful.

[Anonymous No.4768090]

How to fix this

[Anonymous No.4768110]

>>4765240
what image is this? is it original or copy of a photo? Post it pls

[Anonymous No.4768126]

>>4768090
Wrist too thick, for one, and your rendering is all over the place. I can’t make heads or tails how her rib cage is aligned plus it looks like she has a short, stumpy neck that looks like it’s emerging from her right shoulder.

[Anonymous No.4768343]

How much money does an average nsfw artist make?

[Anonymous No.4768376]

>>4768343
None.
Would be the simple answer.

[Anonymous No.4768388]

>>4768090
She had a delicious flat chest, why did you ruin it?

[Anonymous No.4768472]

>>4765768
Based 10 piece scat feast

[Anonymous No.4768477]

>>4768388
What do you mean?

[Anonymous No.4768478]

Why are you western coomers so fucking degen

[Anonymous No.4768532]

>>4768478
Can you point out the degenerates, Anon?

[Anonymous No.4768615]

[Anonymous No.4768619]

>>4765240
Legit the only appealing piece I've seen from this shit general.

[Anonymous No.4768624]

>>4767496
LE THIGZA XD

[лeгиo двaчиyc No.4768636]

>>4768615
>жoпoкpyтилкa aнaльнoй блaжи

[Anonymous No.4768637]

>>4768624
yeah because all posts here are so soulful and meaningful
seethe

[Anonymous No.4768642]

>>4768637
He mad

[Anonymous No.4768648]

>>4768615
лoл

[Anonymous No.4768669]

>>4768478
>>4768619
why aren't you drawing your own coom

[Anonymous No.4768677]

>>4768669
Life is more than just acting like a horndog.

[Anonymous No.4768690]

>>4768677
yeah, gotta spare some time for acting like a retard who goes to thread full of stuff he doesn't like and complaining about it

[Anonymous No.4768695]

[Anonymous No.4768707]

>>4768532
sure
>>4768615
>>4767975
>>4767935
>>4767410
>>4767110
>>4766375
>>4766016
>>4765948
>>4765768

[Anonymous No.4768712]

>>4768707
>>4767935
Big boobs are not degenerate

[Anonymous No.4768718]

>>4768712
>ignores everything else

[Anonymous No.4768727]

>>4768718
I never said that other shit wasn't degenerate

[Anonymous No.4768747]

>>4768727
Ok coomer

[Anonymous No.4768748]

>>4768747
Ok faggot

[Anonymous No.4768751]

>>4768712
Thanks for defending me, anon

[Anonymous No.4768752]

>>4768748
>Instant reply
So damn sweaty holy shit

[Anonymous No.4768870]

The way this thread derailed really makes you think.
I give up on you guys

[Anonymous No.4769016]

>>4768870
as usual, its puritans crabbing about sexual art on a thread for sexual art that ruin everything

[Anonymous No.4769054]

>>4768870
>>4769016
Please do leave this board, nobody wants you degen coomers here anyways

[Anonymous No.4769102]

>>4769054
soon enough you'll turn, anon. You'll understand.

[Anonymous No.4769106]

>>4769054
>If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you.
this thread says otherwise

[Anonymous No.4769384]

>>4767898
Not him but more pls these are awesome

[Anonymous No.4769399]

>>4768752
Look who's talking.

[Anonymous No.4769484]

>>4769384
Okie dokie

[Anonymous No.4769486]

>>4769384

[Anonymous No.4769487]

>>4769384
One more

[Anonymous No.4769488]

i'm horny

[Anonymous No.4769503]

>>4769487
Thanks buddy

[Anonymous No.4769514]

>>4765768
>>4767161
work on figure drawing. don't avoid feet and hands

[Anonymous No.4769515]

>>4769503
Happy to help, champ.

[Anonymous No.4769715]

[Anonymous No.4769728]

>>4769715
where da nipples

[Anonymous No.4770087]

>>4765585
>>4765730
Fixed a bunch of small details, worked the perspective. Tried to give her a bit more natural pumpness. Any other issues people notice before I start to render?

[Anonymous No.4770272]

>>4770087
It looks like her left arm is twisted back. Made a red line for you and put a bit more space between her eyes. Also I think her eyebrows shouldn’t be that close to her eyes, she ends up looking like a thug.

[Anonymous No.4770312]

rendering fappable??

[Anonymous No.4770377]

>>4770312
For that basic-ass ass rendering, you're probably looking at 3000+ dollars a month on patreon

[Anonymous No.4770387]

>>4770377
>>4769486
I just tried to follow this tutorial :(

[Anonymous No.4770396]

>>4770312
Looking good, anon. Try and add more hard shadows and I think the asshole is a bit too close to the vagina. Try and raise it a little bit more.

[Anonymous No.4770478]

critique me

[Anonymous No.4770488]

>>4770478
I have an idea on how to polish it.
Use less lines, simplify shapes, play with thickness of the line, plus check your values.
Maybe using some bits of the trigger studio style will help too.

[Anonymous No.4770492]

>>4770478
Try and have at least one eye-width between the eyes.

[Anonymous No.4770512]

>>4770488
I completely understand the other things but
>simplify shapes
>studio trigger style
Mind elaborating on those?
>>4770492
She's look like a fucking chameleon if i want to keep in this type of stylization, anon.

[Anonymous No.4770535]

>>4770512
less blocky construction, aka usage of triangles, circles, squares, on trigger google Kill la Kill or other stuff of this studio.

[Anonymous No.4770541]

>>4770535
Alright, thanks.

[Anonymous No.4770867]

[Anonymous No.4770871]

>>4770867
>Curly
We got another nickleflick in the making

[Anonymous No.4770874]

>>4765536
Arch her back more -- push hips up slightly -- Add some weight to the weapon.

[Anonymous No.4770882]

>>4770867
Getting there, anon. Keep it up.

[Anonymous No.4770912]

>>4770867
perspective and proportions seem off
try making the butt and legs slightly bigger and longer

[Anonymous No.4771776]

i had someone tell me getting paid for drawing hentai/lewd art is considered sex work, idk but that sounds stupid as fuck to me does anyone agree or disagree and why or why not?

[Anonymous No.4771807]

>>4771776
Makes about as much sense as drawings of buildings would represent architecture work.

It's horseshit lol

[Anonymous No.4771830]

Finally decided on an arm ...now just to actually finish it

[Anonymous No.4771866]

>>4771807
omg u put it perfectly
yeah some dude was like ugh dont make money off of hentai or else youre a prostitute. wackest shit i ever heard

[Anonymous No.4771915]

>>4771830
Mommy

[Anonymous No.4771938]

i need tips on hue shifting

[Anonymous No.4771966]

>>4770087
It is like >>4770272 said. Also, her left breast
would be higher than her right breast since her arm is raised. The lower half of the body is kind of long and you should also work on the pelvis.

IMO show those hand. They'll convey a better story in your drawings. Look a Bakugo's mom beside redline, she shows her discontent about her weight through her hands which are also touching erogenous zones(neck, and stomach).

[Anonymous No.4771991]

>>4771938
shift shading more towards blue

[Anonymous No.4772007]

>>4765774

[Anonymous No.4772023]

Rough sketch

[Anonymous No.4772102]

[Anonymous No.4772120]

>>4771966
I'm sorry, but those are the weirdest looking nipples I've ever seen

[Anonymous No.4772270]

>>4771830
>veins

[Anonymous No.4772798]

>>4770867
TL; DR torso, hips and legs are in a different angle.

i used the pussy box as reference for the piece, and the main problem are the legs pointing in a total different angle if you look where the pussy box is aiming. if you look at photos, legs are longer than the torso if you dont take in consideration the head, so in this kind of angle, they need to look a big in relation to the body.

her neck is broken, you can push your head to that point, but is really uncomfortable, what means is wrong, same with the waist,, it feels like she have a really compact one, this make the hips and ass look more wrong because the connection dosnt make sense at all.

talking of ass, is weird, pussy is too puffy, the labia feels out of the hips, at that angle pussy pussy is always at the bottom of the hips, not in front.

[Anonymous No.4772827]

>>4772798
thanks man
I'll get better references next time

[Anonymous No.4772922]

hope you like my tastes glowies

[Anonymous No.4773029]

>>4771830
The bowl is weird. It should be pushing into fat on her body a lot. Right now it just kinda floats in space defying gravity be sheer force of will.

[Anonymous No.4773069]

>>4772922
your proportions are all over the place.
those lower legs and feet are huge.

[Anonymous No.4773235]

>>4771991
.........................thanks...

[Anonymous No.4773329]

>>4773029
Yeah, I've changed it into more of a basket and moved it over a little. Hopefully the shading will help it fit in a bit more too. Thanks
>>4772270
>>4771915
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

[Anonymous No.4773332]

>>4772922
The boobs lack dimension. The feet are too big.

[Anonymous No.4773582]

I dont draw nudity very often but what do you think?

[Anonymous No.4773729]

>>4773582
were you trying to go for a stained-glass window look?

[Anonymous No.4773873]

>>4773235
That's genuine advice there, retard anon. You're shadows need to be cooler, and highlights warmer. cooler=/=shifting towards black. You need to hue shift towards blue as well otherwise your stuff will look muddy.

[Anonymous No.4774050]

>>4770478
mouth looks kinda werid to me

[Anonymous No.4774114]

>>4773873
>>4771938

yeah, also making the shadows more saturated as well helps. i see the most struggle on the chair, because it looks almost like its there but its desaturated so still looks muddy

you dont need to add blue on top of the color either, don't actually mix the color with blue. SHIFT the hue over to blue with the color wheel or color bar. color wheel works best for hue shifting because theres no "end"

[Anonymous No.4774116]

>>4771938
another tip, try practice with hue shifting on spheres.

paint spheres, and keep doing that until you find something that feels right. even take reference from other art work.

youtube.com/watch?v=PNtMAxYaGyg

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hmWUfH_wOo

[Anonymous No.4774162]

>>4767410
Soul. How do you formulate the poses and perspective? Do you start off with thumbnails or just get right to sketching?

[Anonymous No.4774316]

[Anonymous No.4774409]

Study

[Anonymous No.4774413]

>>4772922
Drawing a dick straight on must be the absolute dumbest and most idiotic thing I've seen on this board in months

[Anonymous No.4774607]

>>4774409
.

[Anonymous No.4774787]

>>4774162
it depends, sometimes it just kinda works out, sometimes i get stuck an have to thumb it out on paper. my bad habit with digital is just wittling away at it until it works which is an incredibly slow and frustrating method (what i did on this piece). the arm break one i tried out friend's method where i work out shape/composition/perspective with a super thick lined brush, carving away at the lines only to make things easier to understand, then once i understand every part i make a new layer an basically resketch it above, following the composition an perspective, making tweaks where they need to be, often redesigning the shapes on the fly. it's honestly way faster but it feels so weird, tho it's most likely just growing pains of a new process. faster n cleaner than previous work, hopef i get even faster.

[Anonymous No.4774794]

>>4771830
mommy <3

>>4771938
love the way you blocked in that nose, such satisfying shapes

>>4774162
it depends, sometimes it just kinda works out, sometimes i get stuck an have to thumb it out on paper. my bad habit with digital is just wittling away at it until it works which is an incredibly slow and frustrating method (what i did on this piece).
the arm break one i tried out friend's method where i work out shape/composition/perspective with a super thick lined brush, carving away at the lines only to make things easier to understand, then once i understand every part i make a new layer an basically resketch it above, following the composition an perspective, making tweaks where they need to be, often redesigning the shapes on the fly. it's honestly way faster but it feels so weird, tho it's most likely just growing pains of a new process. faster n cleaner than previous work, hopef i get even faster.

[Anonymous No.4774868]

>>4774794
What is hopef? I've seen you mention it a few times. Maybe I'm just retarded. Do you have in mind the pose you will make before you draw it? Or do you find it as you sketch along?

[Anonymous No.4774886]

>>4774413
why?

[Anonymous No.4774915]

>>4774868
a;lsjdf apologies, "hopef" is jus me shorterning the word "hopefully" cause i'm dumb an say words weird

i tend to have plans in mind but i just as often will be idly doodling/warming up an something starts to go a direction i like so i make it into a bigger piece. my dumb drawings of tangle being abused started out as random doodles an grew into more planned pieces based on ideas that pop into my head while drawing the first sketches or even while doing other things during the day. i'm no where near kjg an i doubt i ever will be but i do have the similar brain problem where even when i'm not drawing i'm still almost always thinking about drawing. drawing drawing drawing, it's basically all i think about, that an being anxious.

love ur beetleboy by the by, ver cute, reminds me a bit of jmgn big bug dudes. man i miss jumanji newell posting here :c

n e ways, niniii, i'm sleep

[Anonymous No.4774964]

>>4774915
Rest easy friend

[Anonymous No.4774968]

>>4774886

[Anonymous No.4775071]

>>4767161
Ahhh....The forever 13 teen, whom once found out he can jerk off never stopped.

[Anonymous No.4775542]

>>4774794
for that last one, do you mind demonstrating?

[Anonymous No.4775721]

Not trying to double post but I did embellish this some more and clean it up further. It is complete.

[Anonymous No.4776037]

[Anonymous No.4776281]

>>4765240
Did something.

[Anonymous No.4776320]

>>4765240
Drew something fresh. Am I going to be safe if I post this on DA and Tumblr?

[Anonymous No.4776374]

>>4765240
Working on this right now. Feedback is appreciated

[Anonymous No.4777246]

>>4776320
Just don't forget to mark it as mature on DA and you should be okay. It doesn't have any problems with anything bar clearly depicted sex.

[Anonymous No.4777263]

>>4775721
Those limb are FUCKED up

[Anonymous No.4777605]

>>4775721
her head looks really small compared to the rest of her body

[Anonymous No.4777628]

>>4771830
>>4776374
May i have your blog please.

[Anonymous No.4777671]

>>4777263
What would you change?
>>4777605
Thanks for the feedback

[Anonymous No.4778522]

You’ll never get rid of me!

[Anonymous No.4778587]

>>4775721
>that teeny tiny head and spider-like hand
The hand is not longer than the head is tall, anon.

[Anonymous No.4778588]

>>4778522
Chicken scratches everywhere! Go back to drawing!

[Anonymous No.4778707]

>>4778587
Good call

[Anonymous No.4778766]

I updated this

>>4777628
I don't have a nsfw blog yet

[Anonymous No.4778767]

Fuck forgot pic

>>4778766

[Anonymous No.4778984]

>>4765240
is this basically a porn art thread that used to get post here.

[Anonymous No.4778988]

>>4774968
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4779058]

>>4774964
danke ;w;

>>4775542
do bigger lined sketch to find pose, carve in important details until you know what you're gonna do at each part (i don't know how to explain this other than mileage means you often know where you're gonna get stuck/find yourself at a loss unless you problem solve before hand), lower opacity insane amount (sub 10% he suggested) proceed to do same carvy sketch lines above but thinner an try not to carve too much. tends to come out way cleaner, an oddly fast compared to what i'm used to. still can't do really thin lines like all the cool kids without hating myself every step of the way yet but this style of lines makes comics feel a lot more feasible for me hopef, tho now that i say that i still get hyper stuck on demonstrating motion without going on shot by shot on it yet ;-;

[Anonymous No.4779198]

>>4776037
I made this just now.

[Anonymous No.4779199]

>>4776374
>>4778767
Why the "I am sorry Sheldon!", though? They were never a pair if I remember correctly
Other than that, the drawing looks really neat

[Anonymous No.4779203]

>>4774316
Her head is way too small in your drawing

[Anonymous No.4779208]

face cute?

[Anonymous No.4779250]

>>4770478
What's up with the mouth?

[Anonymous No.4779257]

>>4779198
This is a 45 year old trannie with aids you can't say otherwise

[Anonymous No.4779358]

>>4779257
Lol I’m 27 and not a tranny.

[Anonymous No.4779382]

>>4779198
I find this insulting

[Anonymous No.4779397]

>>4779250
Admittedly, it does look unusual or weird but i've just been trying stuff.

[Anonymous No.4779569]

>>4779382
Are you a blue hedgehog?

[Anonymous No.4779755]

so new to digital... I need pointers bad

[Anonymous No.4779763]

>>4779208
the expression is kinda bland

[Anonymous No.4780149]

>>4778588
I don't think you quite understand what chicken scratch is.

[Anonymous No.4780200]

>>4779208
No way this is asukafag, those lines are incredible

[Anonymous No.4780547]

I often see artists use somne really interesting angles in their drawings. In perspective of from some angle above or below.
My trouble is that I can't seem to find references like that. All I can find are generic full body shots where models pose.
How do I search for unusual angles?

[Anonymous No.4780562]

Still working on this. I can get a lot of painting done in short bursts but i have this compulsive urge to just stand up and walk around or change music or do anything else every 10 minutes so i'll force myself to sit down and work for like 4 hours and only really get like 2 hours of drawing done. is this ADD?

[Anonymous No.4780873]

>>4780562
for example, this is about as far as i get before i get bored and want to draw something new

[Anonymous No.4781202]

venturing into tame lewds

[Anonymous No.4781747]

[Anonymous No.4781912]

closeup or far shot?
friend told me to do both but i'm die
https://youtu.be/4LspLOtpgkE

>>4780562
>>4780873
sounds like textbook adhd. wish i had any advice but art makes me hyperfocus really bad usually unless it's too hard/not working out. usually when i'm not able to focus it means i'm struggling, if things are working out i will sit there for hours on end in dead silence

oh also keep in mind that ass tends to flow into the thigh in that pose on the second one, there isn't usually a pinch like that, especially when bent over

[Anonymous No.4781982]

>>4781912
nice, i like bottom better, more dynamic

[Anonymous No.4783251]

[GrimoireofLove No.4783268]

Opinions please? I drew this tonight.

[Anonymous No.4783449]

Finished as much as I feel like I wanna go. Anything else feels like me nitpicking at this point.

I still hate drawing backgrounds.

[Anonymous No.4783474]

>>4783449
That’s good. I like your rendering and you took the advice and applied it to your drawing.
Now put that in your finished folder, champ, and start a new drawing with the lessons you learned when you made this one.

[Anonymous No.4783592]

>>4781982
Good shit. The linework and shading is primo.

[Anonymous No.4784456]

[Anonymous No.4784510]

>>4781747
Hobbit feet, also everything looks like plastic. Try using harder edges to shade and tone down the highlights.
>>4783251 She looks sunburnt bc she's so pink, also the head is too small.
>>4783268
I like what you're going for with the face but it looks crooked. Try mirroring your drawing and compare to references.
>>4784456
Colors are nice but something about your faces always seem kinda off. It's like you couldn't decide wether to draw anime or realism and went for some weird in-between. Also mirror your drawings and look at references.

[Anonymous No.4784578]

>>4765536
Have you ever seen a pussy? When girls are grinding they geind on it horizontically not vertically

[Anonymous No.4784580]

>>4784578
i havent

[Anonymous No.4784584]

>>4768619

[Anonymous No.4784883]

hands won't stop shaking so it's time 4 a breaaak

>>4781982
ur rite
cute art btw~

[Anonymous No.4784893]

>>4784883
I'm curious what makes a person draw this. Are you just drawing it for a laugh? Do you find the exaggerated dick hot? Is it some sort of fetish similar to breast expansion but with cocks? I wish to learn more.

[Anonymous No.4784914]

>>4784510
His faces are under heavy norasuke goblinos influence

[Anonymous No.4784921]

>>4784914
>>4784510
actually now I gravitate more towards BBC Chan
how do I make my faces more appealing like his

[Anonymous No.4784948]

>>4765240
any feedback?

[Anonymous No.4785063]

quick sketch, how is it going so far?

[Anonymous No.4785493]

[Anonymous No.4785654]

>>4785493
Cute. This thread needs more bara

[Anonymous No.4785656]

need to find some time to sit down and work on my fundies

[Anonymous No.4785688]

>>4785656
this looks grotesque

[Anonymous No.4785689]

Overall pretty pleased with this, though obviously the pants are lacking shading wise. Any useful tutorials or suggestions you guys have for this kind of clothing?

[Anonymous No.4785703]

>>4785688
should have asked permission before drawing you i guess loooooooooooooooooooooool lmaooooo

[Anonymous No.4785722]

>>4785656
Juicy

[Anonymous No.4785773]

>>4785656
Your proportions are not suited for ero. Everything looks kind of goofy when it should look sexy.

[Anonymous No.4785778]

>>4785689
Do you hide your screen when mum calls you to dinner?

[Anonymous No.4785795]

>>4785773
i think goofy is sexy. I understand what you mean though

[Anonymous No.4785835]

>>4785654
the less gains goblin the better the thread.

[Anonymous No.4785838]

>>4785689
The shading on those pants is the least of your problems.
Study perspective, proportions/anatomy and gesture.

[Anonymous No.4786236]

still a bit unhappy with how the shaft connects to the crotch but i'll fix that later, try to add hand touching thigh on the left unless it gets too frustrating to work out

>>4784893
this drawing in particular? money
but as far as drawing big dicks goes i just like big dicks, not much more to it than that. i do draw some things to have a giggle but the joke is more so in putting high effort into a dumb bit, sorta like norm macdonald's moth joke https://youtu.be/1-MJy7w69EU
except i spend a dozen hours drawing something stupid like femboy little nicky getting rawed by a musclechub paul blart instead

>>4785493
i wanna draw em owo ||without the bubblewrap textured cock||

[Anonymous No.4786340]

>>4785656
are you jewish?

[Anonymous No.4786499]

>>4785838
Could you highlight or go into specifics on this piece where I'm fucking up?

[Anonymous No.4786512]

>>4774968
Dunno why but I fucking lost it
jfc thank you for that laugh anon

[Anonymous No.4786655]

[Anonymous No.4786943]

Sketch WIP. Any crit for the pose and how to fix her ogre face? I don't draw milfs often

[Anonymous No.4786946]

>>4786943
Alt non-milf version

[Anonymous No.4786947]

>>4786943
So you draw lolis or something? What does that mean?

[Anonymous No.4786950]

>>4786947
I don't draw aged features like cheek lines and crows feet often. Usually for jaw shape I do the more rounded anime style.

[Anonymous No.4786960]

>>4786950
Ah ok. Well, I’m not really good at ero, I’ve tried, but I can’t get into it. But your stuff is good

[Anonymous No.4786978]

>>4786960
No worries thanks anyways!

[Anonymous No.4787099]

>>4786947
He's a pedo, plain and simple.

"B-but it's just a drawing," I hear you cry.
Yes, it's a drawing. A drawing of what?
O.O

[Anonymous No.4787141]

>>4787099
Twitter is the other way

[Anonymous No.4787648]

pockepussy

[Anonymous No.4787666]

>>4787648
time for them to get fucked by >>4785493

[Anonymous No.4787805]

>>4787099
I’m fairly certain this is the same anon who is so vehemently against what he/she perceives as pedos. Just curious but why the hate? I’m pretty ambivalent when it comes to pedos and their interests but like clockwork you always seem to come around at the slightest whiff of pedophilia and ask the same question “drawing of what?”

[Anonymous No.4787884]

Yeah yeah I know chicken scratch learn fundies my work is disgusting fuck all y’all.

[Anonymous No.4787886]

I’m NGMI grow a thicker skin blah blah blah back to tumblr

[Anonymous No.4788022]

>>4787884
>>4787886
cringe. get some self esteem

[Anonymous No.4788061]

once im done with this i think im making the full switch from PS to CSP

[Anonymous No.4788127]

>>4787884
>>4787886
idk if you being sel-deprecating is some kind of bait

but i like what youve posted its cool, reminds me of Jab

[Anonymous No.4788191]

>>4765948
well, you've been working on the torso/arm anatomy. That's nice.

[Anonymous No.4788208]

Bloodborne nsfw WIP, Adella the Nun and a Beast

[Anonymous No.4788210]

>>4788208
the beast looks like he just realized he left the stove on or something

[Anonymous No.4788212]

>>4788208
>NOOO MY FUCKING PIES

[Anonymous No.4788213]

>>4788208
Fucking awesome

[Anonymous No.4788297]

>>4785795
Keep doing what you do sigourney, your goofy style brings spice to this place.

[Anonymous No.4788375]

>>4788022
I have self esteem. I just know the stupid shit you retards are going to say so I got it out of the way. I’ll add “get self esteem next time so maybe you’ll so say something useful, but it’s doubtful.
>>4788127
Not bait. You idiots are just useless. Fuck off.

[Anonymous No.4788406]

>>4788375
i said bait for same reasons you typed those things

and i said i did like what you drew

wtf more you want? autistic hypocrite

[Anonymous No.4788432]

>>4788406
Aww. Little bitch can dish it but it can’t take it. Too bad. So sad.

[Anonymous No.4788444]

>>4788375
Are you unironically autistic or bipolar, or have any other mentail illness?
If you really mean what you say, then stop posting here, dumbass.

[Anonymous No.4788471]

Didn’t realize you people were such pussy ass faggots. You’re so eager to dole out the same asinine bullshit but once someone throws it back in your faces you get all offended. You’re worse than niggers.

[Anonymous No.4788498]

>>4788375
>guys i know im the worst and im just awful and im sooo bad and im like just terrible and nobody likes me and my life i hard and everyone is mean to me and im a total loser and i cry every night but hows my art?

attention seeking autist

[Anonymous No.4788510]

>>4788471
We brought back the porn threads precisely for this reason: to be diaper of the board. After some faggots tried to doxx and cancel BBC, Marmalade, and several others before the blue-red split, the good artists left or quit.

[Anonymous No.4788835]

is this face better?
appealing?

[Anonymous No.4788850]

>>4788061
This is the good shit

[Anonymous No.4788890]

>>4788835
Eyes are too big and detailed. They look like slapped on stickers

[Anonymous No.4788895]

>>4788835
if you want to make it more appealing, make her face slightly facing downwards and her eyes looking up to the viewer

[Anonymous No.4788915]

>>4788835
>>4788890
Maybe something like this? sorry I got a little carried away

[Anonymous No.4788929]

>>4788890
>>4788895
>>4788915

thanks for your help to me bros
I changed it

[Anonymous No.4788933]

>>4788929
>>4788835
>>4788890
>>4788895
>>4788915

fucking forgot pic

[Anonymous No.4788937]

>>4788933
looks a lot better

[Anonymous No.4788938]

>>4788933
nice

[Anonymous No.4788954]

>>4788835
>>4788915
imo the worst mistake you keep repeating is putting highest point of the upper lid too close to the inner side
>>4788933
here you fixed it for left eye, but not for the right

[Anonymous No.4789001]

>>4765240
Can i get some pointers how to fix her left arm? I know the image has bunch of other problems too, but i can't seem to move on until i fix this.

Any help appreciated.

[Anonymous No.4789017]

>>4789001
I mean technically there's nothing won't with it. Maybe it looks a bit stiff and in that case you could exaggerate the foreshortening.

[Anonymous No.4789024]

>>4789001
The arm is just small/short, make it bigger or increase the foreshortening.

[Anonymous No.4789217]

trying

[Anonymous No.4789232]

>>4789217
I'd like to pay you :)
to go away. I'm tired of looking at your ugly shit

[Anonymous No.4789236]

>>4789232
fuck off crag, i love asukafag

[Anonymous No.4789247]

>>4789232
Noo you scared him away! :(

[Anonymous No.4789259]

>>4789232
fuck you if asukafag stops posting on /ic/

[Anonymous No.4789280]

>>4789232
kek

[Anonymous No.4789435]

well anyway i finished this

[Anonymous No.4789464]

>>4789001
The upper arm is at an angle, and it clashes with the form of the tattoo, which makes it seem like it's vertical. You can try either removing the tattoo, or modifying it so you can show the shape of the upper arm properly

[Anonymous No.4790270]

>>4770478
First, what are you going for? Wonder Woman the animated series a few years ago?

[Anonymous No.4790410]

>>4790270
>what are you going for?
This >>4779397
For now i want to try everything and see what sticks to me and get better.

[Anonymous No.4790920]

>>4780562
>>4781202
These are really cool. What brush do you use for line art in this >>4780873 one?

[Anonymous No.4791086]

sorry but this is what i find hot

[Anonymous No.4791090]

this too

[Anonymous No.4791659]

>>4789232
Cope

[Anonymous No.4792017]

Some coom studies, are these good enough to start learning how to render? I’ve been avoiding learning how to render as it seems intimidating.

[Anonymous No.4792114]

>>4789001
Really cool man. How do I paint like you?...

[Anonymous No.4792517]

thots?

>>4789001
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4792571]

[Anonymous No.4792768]

[Anonymous No.4792770]

>>4792768
Justice

[Anonymous No.4792802]

>>4792571
Why do you break her right leg, monster?

[Anonymous No.4793193]

[Anonymous No.4793210]

>>4793193
That leg grows from the middle of the pelvis

[Anonymous No.4793215]

>>4793210
well this was my ref

[Anonymous No.4793230]

>>4793215
you overemphasized the bone insertion/the undulation in the thigh while decreasing her body weight. if you notice how the form of the model's flank/ass you'll understand how even seeing the small amount from her resting implies the form of her body.

[Anonymous No.4793245]

>>4793230
thanks

[Anonymous No.4793270]

[Anonymous No.4793398]

pose is kinda wonky and I'm really not happy with some parts of her body. was nice expirience in regards of ass rendering, thou

[Anonymous No.4793485]

>>4793398
Body is very nicely done, however, the face is extremely unsettling. If that is what you were going for, then you definitely achieved the creepiness feel for the face. Overall, your rendering is very nice.

[Anonymous No.4793490]

>>4793398
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4793499]

>>4793485
yea I wanted achieve that feeling when you see nice ass but it's a catgirl so she's like almost fighting you back and don't want anyone be near her. that was intention, but I didn't want to make her face creepy, just angry. several people already pointed that out, so I'll probably redo it.

[Anonymous No.4793520]

>>4792517
i like it but the tits are kinda wonky, would look perfect if they were rounded more like natural breasts.

[Anonymous No.4793606]

>>4793499
Just some points to consider as a possibility:
1) as a cat girl, it seems as if she is more smooth skinned than furry. I would recommend adding some tufts of fur here and there.
2) her head shape seems too large for her face if that makes sense.
3) Eyes are too milky and unclear as well, pupils should be a bit more visible.
4) lips seem too thin and in an unusual angle. Thin lips add to the creepy factor.
5) facial shape is very angular, should be more roundish at the cheeks to seem less unsettling.
I did a small paint over to better explain what I mean.

You are a much better artist than me I would like to preface, therefore I hope what I am trying to convey in my shitty paint over explains what I mean overall.

[Anonymous No.4793606,1]

>>4792768
Die janiturd

[Anonymous No.4794668]

>>4793398
This could b so great but that face is fucking terrifying

[Anonymous No.4794812]

New thread
>>4794808
>>4794808
>>4794808