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Started doing lewd artwork, this is my second piece (still in progress). The shading is inspired by a piece that I saw. Is this appealing to you guys? What would you improve? Also tips in general into making a few lewd bucks

>> No.4744505

>Another delusional faggot making his own thread for asking retarded self-centered faggotry
looks unappealing
i wouldn't donate to your patreon
now fuck off to beg >>4744023 and delete this thread

>> No.4744514
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4744514

>>4744475
Unappealing face, ugly hands, /beg/ anatomy, boring as fuck pose.
Even as budget as fuck NIKICHEN it wouldn't pass.

>> No.4744516

coom

>> No.4744519

>>4744475
I think you’re following a good track, op. I like the rendering but keep working on the anatomy. Her shoulders look a bit wonky and I’d narrow her waist a bit but that’s just me.
Also, take the insults here in stride and more as encouragement to keep going.

>> No.4744528

>>4744475
try to make some parts more exaggerated and exciting if that makes sense. like smaller tits but thinner waist line. coomers dont care how unrealistic the physique is as long as it gets them off. also the pose is boring and anatomy looks a bit off, like the tits look bolted on and unnatural and the hands look weird too.

>> No.4744548

>>4744514
>NIKICHEN
He used to put out his vids on youtube. His loomis and construction is top tier. Shame about the weird anime/real thing he's got going on.

>> No.4744561

>>4744505
Pyw crab nigger

>> No.4744571

For how long do you drawing, Op?>>4744475

>> No.4744815

>>4744519
Could care less about the insults, though I do appreciate the feedback. The anatomy part indeed could be a bit more exciting, but in that regard I am limited. I can do a regular looking straight up pose decently, but I do struggle a bit with more dynamic posing without a reference

>> No.4744819

>>4744528
Thanks for the feedback! The hands I am still going to work int he shading, but yeah the pose could be mor eliciting. I was actually happy with how the rendering in the breasts came.

>> No.4744820

>>4744475
Boobs don't work like that, but i wouldn't expect anything else from a coomer "artist"

>> No.4744821

>>4744505
Don’t need to donate mate, I dont have a patreon because I don’t have a following for lewd stuff. This is my second piece, and when sharing it, I’m saying I’m practicing. Also, don’t worry, I have a stable job that pays the bills, this is just an hobby. Now show your work or shut the fuck up

>> No.4744822

>>4744514
Yeah that’s my inspiration. I did reference his work when posting the work in progress picture. His skill is really amazing , I can only hope to get there

>> No.4744824

>>4744820
I know mate, it’s porn drawings. My regular stuff is more realistic in the sense that female waists, face and breasts are more regular looking. I was just testing the waters

>> No.4744826

>>4744571
Traditionally, a lot of years, as a hobby, but I never did coom stuff. Digitally, a couple of weeks. Bought an iPad recently and have been using procreate. To be honest, I barely know what I am doing digitally

>> No.4744993

>>4744475
get lost you ugly /beg/

>> No.4745004

>>4744475
theres nothing that stands out as coom worthy, she has a nice figure and make up but other than that everything is pretty plain, whats the story here, her pose is plain, her bikini is boring, hairstyle is plain too, expression just gazing into nothing, draw with your dick more you can make it sexier

>> No.4745332

>>4744475
It's a start. But it lacks any real sexuality and is more akin to an anatomical study. Also, if you're going to define the inner forms to that extent, you better make sure your contour is as tight.

>> No.4745356

>>4744505
Fuck off crab .

>> No.4745358

>>4744993
pyw

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>>4744821
>he's still going

>> No.4745696

>>4745641
but he's right anon. show your work or just fuck off lol

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>>4745696
better than you will ever do

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4745706

>>4745704
Based, OP should kill himself after being BTFO so hard

>> No.4745707

>>4744475
T. rex arms

>> No.4745714

>>4744548
did he take them down or something? I want to see

>> No.4747375

>>4745704
You realize that you're miles behind the OP so you won't post your work in which we could see your anatomy knowledge
get fucked, faggot begnigger

>> No.4747966

>>4744519
Yeah I can see the wonk, (not op) but I think hip ok

>> No.4747999

>>4745714
just search youtube for his name, he still has his youtube channel up altho the most recent video is 1 year old so nothing recent

>> No.4748114
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4748114

>>4747375
(you) me again once you've stopped sucking yourself off

>> No.4748129

>>4744475
Learn some fucking anatomy, goddamn, it's seems like you never saw a real girl in your life.

>> No.4748236

>>4744514
the artist reference looks like the girl who masturbates to my pictures

>> No.4748241

>>4748236
why does she masturbate to you instead of fucking together?

>> No.4748244

>>4748241
i have a girlfriend
plus shes from a different state

>> No.4748245

>>4748244
oh /ic
so do you masturbate to her pictures in return?

>> No.4748248

>>4748245
nah not really, i feel like cheating my girl if i do that
im tempted to do so tho, she sends me nudes vids and pics with these cute filters on 'em

>> No.4748250

>>4748248
>>be in a relationship
>>masturbates to another girl, thinks its cheating
HAHAHAAH you sound like a simp bich

>> No.4748257

>>4748248
sounds like cognitive dissonance to me
also i have a funny feeling like shes into you more than your girlfriend

>>4748250
stfu coomer and get back to your paper and draw

>> No.4748260

>>4748257
yeah youre right
somewhat true, im not sure
well desu, she said im only the guy she sends nudes to

>> No.4748269

>>4748260
thats it right there chief, thats your sign!
you should leave your current girlfriend and get with her instead

>> No.4748274

>>4748269
like forreals, i feel connected to her rather than my girlfriend. after she sends me nudes, we talk and our conversations are meaningful and deep. but i actually prefer her cute selfies instead of her nudes

>> No.4748276

>>4748274
now thats cognitive resonance
goodluck to your endeavours bro, cheers

>> No.4748285

>>4748276
will do bro
thanks for the free therapy
lets keep making art, pleasure to have cross-paths with you in this journey

>> No.4748286

>>4748285
kudos
wgmi

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4748523

>>4748274
Ye, leave your gf for some "girl" on the internet
See you in the /vent/ thread

>> No.4748858

>>4748274
>our conversations are meaningful and deep
Top kek. You’re only as deep as your art, you faggot.