Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.4742288]

Previous >>4733642

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
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>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4742296]

(repost) I made the fio drawing with the shitty tits last thread this is the thumbnail phase. I tried incorporating more cool shadows. I'm terrible at drawing big tits how'd I do this time. going for a "newgrounds look"

[Anonymous No.4742321]

>>4742296
cute!

[Anonymous No.4742327]

>>4742321

[Anonymous No.4742510]

[Anonymous No.4742511]

>>4742510

[Anonymous No.4742513]

>>4742511

[Anonymous No.4742523]

>>4742296
looks pretty good now keep rendering it

[Anonymous No.4742526]

>>4742321
Funny little scene. Soulful execution!
Got a blog?

[Anonymous No.4742569]

>>4742296
It looks like she’s wearing a diaper.

[Anonymous No.4742598]

>>4742569
which of the two lines you drew is the correction

[Anonymous No.4742599]

>>4742569
don't listen to this shitter

[Anonymous No.4742601]

Is this worth rendering to finish? I don’t know how to feel about it..

[Anonymous No.4742602]

>>4742598
The second one, it’s hard to redline when using a phone.

[Anonymous No.4742604]

>>4742296
Ignore this idiot >>4742569

[Anonymous No.4742626]

>>4742510
>>4742511
>>4742513
you seem to repeat yourself occasionally, but nice variety. Maybe try varying up the art style a little more, that way even if you're drawing similar characters they give us more to digest.

[Anonymous No.4742649]

>>4742296
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4742673]

>>4742626
Thanks for the insight. I was suffering from same face syndrome and tried to vary up in the last months. Style exercises may help.

[Anonymous No.4742692]

>>4742327

love this, maybe work in a slightly higher res? the grit is nice but I'd like to see just a little more detail in the linework.

[Anonymous No.4742700]

>>4742526
that's https://pantsu-ripper.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.4742711]

>>4742327
Glad we got more Hylics bros

[Anonymous No.4742867]

>>4742692
i like it, but try to accentuate the shapes more with the line flow. The beard for example could pop a lot more if you make the lines follow the form with more variation.

[Anonymous No.4742881]

[Anonymous No.4742886]

>>4741269
Warm up for today, still having trouble making and placing the shapes properly

>>4741669
> how are you going to implement it to your OWN style?
Trying to improve my rendering and forms and attempting some different shape languages based on some anon feedback. This is more typical of what i study >>4738225 and what I usually draw >>4738077

>>4741345
>Sailor Moon robots
Yes. I always found sailormoon to be all about crazy long legs. Too scared to make her thicc

[Anonymous No.4742903]

>>4742886
Ah! So it's (you)! I thought I recognised that graphic desing marker. Yeah, it will be interesting to see you getting out of the angular stuff, good luck

[Anonymous No.4742908]

>>4742886
I still dont get how ambient occlusion works in painting. You channeled krenz pretty well anyway, good study!

[Anonymous No.4742910]

>>4742692
Try redrawing the ball hand, the fingers aren't wraping the ball, going from the position of the fingers looks like a disc instead of a ball

[Anonymous No.4742911]

>>4742908
sry meant nbekkaliev

[Anonymous No.4742913]

>>4742602
>The second one...
Like he'll know which one is the second one. Nice redline

[Anonymous No.4742917]

>>4742692
it's "emperor"

[Anonymous No.4742918]

>>4742601
It all depends on your colouring skills, if you can go straight into painting, go for it

[Anonymous No.4742927]

>>4742917
HA!

[Anonymous No.4743199]

I'M FINALLY DONE WITH COMMISSIONS I CAN DO SOMETHING FOR MYSELF
Yeah I had a lot of fun with this one, you see the aura of mystery?
>>4737182
It was supposed to be two panels but I changed my mind

[Anonymous No.4743322]

I hate myself for adding so many details when i'm inking. I know it's going to look good but fuck it's gonna take a long time to finish.

[Anonymous No.4743440]

[Anonymous No.4743507]

>>4743322
hell yeah, keep pushin' - put on some good jams and get into it

[Anonymous No.4743523]

>>4742917

oh shit you're right

>>4742910
>>4742867

thanks for the feedback!

[Anonymous No.4743544]

>>4742886
Felt exhausted from landscape study, so i drew a robot exhausting, i should do a smoke study

>>4742903
Patience appreciated, it may take a few weeks

>>4742908
I don’t get it either, I was just copying the shapes.

[Anonymous No.4743558]

>>4742526
thank u frend...

wip

[Anonymous No.4743586]

>>4743544
very... hot...

[Anonymous No.4743608]

>>4743558
how do u think of such interesting ideas
where do you get ur inspiration

[Anonymous No.4743613]

>>4743608
i don't, this is a request and they gave me the description...

my inspiration is lewd anime girls... thats all I ever think about

[Anonymous No.4743620]

>>4743613
Your work isn't particularly lewd tho

[Anonymous No.4743630]

>>4743620
i know, it is very sad

[Anonymous No.4743682]

>>4742881
Nice to see you doing something different.

[Anonymous No.4743967]

hi /ic

[Anonymous No.4743985]

>>4743967
liking this pedophile drawing

[Anonymous No.4743995]

>>4743967
so good

[Anonymous No.4744134]

>>4743440
Great job on the cell shading dude looks cute. the arms are too short
and upon inverting the image her eyes seem a little too slanted
and her lower body might be a little too elongated. blog?

[Anonymous No.4744151]

>>4744134
thanks ill be more mindful of those next time, and im @sorarinnnnn on twitter

[Anonymous No.4744155]

>>4742711
The day's progress

[Anonymous No.4744181]

is that game any good for someone whos never played a paper mario game before? im getting sick of animal crossing but ive heard bad shit about the gameplay which is what im sort into for mario games

[Anonymous No.4744217]

>>4744181
What game?

[Anonymous No.4744219]

>>4743985
Too old

[Anonymous No.4744229]

>>4743967
BASED

[Anonymous No.4744232]

>>4744217
paper mario the origami king

[Anonymous No.4744250]

>>4743967
Nice bro

[Anonymous No.4744259]

Unrelated thought, are there any notable female loli artists?

[Anonymous No.4744291]

>>4743967
Only good pedo

[Anonymous No.4744362]

>>4744259

Ootsuka Reika

[Anonymous No.4744377]

>>4743967
Man what artist does this style remind me of
Obviously that's a Salvador Dali reference in the background but there's a SFW twitter artist that does large rendered pieces with lineart like this

[Anonymous No.4744391]

>>4744291
is a dead pedo

[Anonymous No.4744484]

>>4743558

[Anonymous No.4744529]

[Anonymous No.4744680]

>>4744232
It is pretty fun and interesting outside battles. Battle system is utter shit, it is annoying and not fun at all. So all in all sadly boring battles cancel all other fun almost completely so I can't really recommend it.
Well, Paper Mario never had a good game after first two titles. The problem is that first two games was so astonishingly good that people still hope developers would make something similar, even after all those flops.

[Anonymous No.4744756]

[Anonymous No.4744761]

>>4744756
Female legs are intended?

[Anonymous No.4744769]

>>4744761
not OP, but not every male leg has to be exagerated quadriceps and calves. If your character is on the slender side (like a rogue archetype would be) then those legs are perfectly fine.

[Anonymous No.4744806]

>>4742692
>>4742917

Made those minor changes to the Emperor, not worth reposting. Thanks again for the spellcheck anon, holy cow.

Here's the Hierophant, which I managed to spell correctly. Crit please.

[Anonymous No.4744901]

>>4744769
I was talking mainly about softness and roundness.

[Anonymous No.4744920]

>>4744769
they are too round and fat for a guy

[Anonymous No.4744990]

[Anonymous No.4744991]

>>4743967
Hot

[Anonymous No.4745000]

>>4744990
cute.

[Anonymous No.4745005]

>>4744990
I like this, love art like that do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.4745017]

>>4742288
Would this be considered sfw or nfsw? Ghost in the shell was considered pg 13 right? I still need to improve upon the hands in future drawings, but it's gotten better compared to the last hands I made.

[Anonymous No.4745021]

>>4745017
if you don't see the issue with people seeing that on your work computer you should sit down and evaluate your social skills.

[Anonymous No.4745022]

>>4745017
>Would this be considered sfw or nfsw?
Try asking yourself: Do you consider this image safe for the work environment?

[Anonymous No.4745025]

>>4745022
>>4745021
Jokes on you I work from home, so it’s all safe for work

[Anonymous No.4745037]

>>4745021
>>4745022
Hmm it'll probably be considered sfw if I remove the blush then.

[Anonymous No.4745045]

>>4745037
Alright this should be fine now.

[Anonymous No.4745059]

>>4745045
>work from home

ah, i understand this now to mean "live with parents dont have a job because im 17"

[Anonymous No.4745105]

>>4745017
this is considered garbage

[Anonymous No.4745113]

[Anonymous No.4745114]

bad quality ‘cause screenshot, thoughts?

[Anonymous No.4745118]

>>4745114
WIL, forgot to mention that.

[Anonymous No.4745176]

>>4745105
Ah anything to point out?

[Anonymous No.4745179]

>>4745176
please leave

[Anonymous No.4745191]

>>4745179
no critique?

[Anonymous No.4745205]

>>4745191
bro u need to literally go on a anatomy loomis journey to fix your fucking drawing. I really don't wanna be a crab but there's so much wrong the sooner you start the better look up "fun with a pencil"

[Anonymous No.4745216]

>>4745176

different anon here. If I saw you looking at this at work I would laugh at you and then probably never talk to you unless absolutely necessary again. it's not safe for work.

please go to /beg.

>learn how to vary lineweight
>anatomy references
>anatomy references
>anatomy references
>draw hands
>draw feet
>draw more

[Anonymous No.4745230]

>>4745205
>>4745216
Thanks for the critque, I definitely need to get a poseable reference model or something. Anyways thanks for telling me about fun with a pencil.

[Anonymous No.4745260]

>>4745114

>poor quality
>still 60% larger than standard courtesy post size

looking pretty good anon. I'd like to see the werewolf's feet, looks like they're totally occluded right now. it might get a bit crowded in the crotch area with that rope though. unclear as to what he has in his right hand. you need to change the trees in the top right so that they fit the rest of the perspective, they're vertical presently, everything to the right of center needs to lean progressively to the right

[Anonymous No.4745293]

>>4745113
Nice add darker shadows the forms start to blend in

[Anonymous No.4745294]

>>4745114
I don't like the skirt, it looks like it part of the sword, hard to read

[Anonymous No.4745297]

>>4743544
i drew too much yesterday and my shoulder hurts

[Anonymous No.4745640]

>>4744377
Aha, found who I was thinking of but I guess they're not actually that similar
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3691431

[Anonymous No.4745651]

>>4745297
nice, anon, at first glance i thought it was digital but at closer inspection it gives away

[Anonymous No.4745656]

Im kinda looking for thoughts

[Anonymous No.4745660]

[Anonymous No.4745712]

>>4745297
How do you achieve that smoothness? Doing several strokes with a light gray marker and a blender?

[Anonymous No.4745717]

>>4745297
Fuck, it’s bad when the head was the only part worth posting. Burned out, taking the rest of the week off

>>4745651
Ha thanks?

[Anonymous No.4745729]

>>4745712
Keep it wet. Keep the markers full and juicy. Use a lighter shade to keep it wet. Once it dries, it starts to bleed and get muddy really fast. The chisel tip can actually block in a huge section smoothly if you go slow and have recently refilled the marker. The blending tip is better for small sections or boundaries.

[Anonymous No.4745746]

>>4745660
eye is really alarming here, try it a bit smaller and with cast shadow from the eyelid to separate it from the skin


>>4742886
>>4745297
>>4745717
loving these, tableguy. keep it up

>>4744990
comfy

[Anonymous No.4745916]

just drawing jojo shit.

[Anonymous No.4745931]

>>4745045
you gotta contrast round lines with straight lines or else it looks like the michelin man

>>4745113
looks really cool! the statues start to blend together and its hard to distinguish them from eachother. maybe you can make the ones near the top darker than the ones on the bottom. or vice versa

>>4745656
really cute! i think the line weight varies a little inconsistently. try making the lines thicker where there would be shadows

[Anonymous No.4746062]

>>4745114
The witch looks nice and sturdy. I point it out because I'm not sure if that was your intent.

[Anonymous No.4746082]

>>4744155
Fucking love this
They look ready to kick Gibby's ass.

[Anonymous No.4746131]

Can I least get a (you)!? Thanks love you

[Anonymous No.4746133]

Can I least get a (you)!!! Thanks love you
I'll put clothes on, but I'll really appreciate some help to improve anatomy

[Anonymous No.4746194]

>>4746133
I would draw it as a whole figure for the gesture/form buildup, then crop it after I know most of it checks out. I would advise trying to show more hands, alot of people speak and show intentions combined with their hand movements while they act or speak.

[Anonymous No.4746285]

Trying to make this interlocking finger and tribing makeout session.

As much as I like how I'm getting a hang of the style more and experimenting with alternative kissing angle, but I'm getting lost in the limb placements and it's kind of almost looking like a mess.

Can anyone help me figure this mess out?

[Anonymous No.4746511]

>>4746133
I dunno how helpful this will be for yo, but I tried

[Anonymous No.4746543]

new face style

cute?

[Anonymous No.4746549]

>>4746543
Hard to say, it's too blurry

[Anonymous No.4746551]

>>4746543
cute but need more eyelashes, it will make her have this dreamy effect

[Anonymous No.4746577]

>>4744761

I mentioned the exact same thing in a previous thread but it's just no use critting this guy it seems.

[Anonymous No.4746604]

>>4746543
It's not very different from your previous faces. Btw please finish something I think you never posted a completed piece.

[Anonymous No.4746610]

>>4745230
Don't use those models as reference. Instead reference photos of real people.

[Anonymous No.4746611]

There is already an Anime thread.

Post anime on there dumb asses.

[Anonymous No.4746632]

>>4746611

3/10 shitpost apply yourself!

[Anonymous No.4746649]

[Anonymous No.4746650]

>>4742288
Any criticism? Does the rendering of the head looks nice? I wanted to study Beelzebub's face from Helltaker, then I applied some rendering and thought it looks good enough to deserve thigh high portrait + proper background. I will try to change her expression later

[Anonymous No.4746692]

>>4746649
the way you stylize faces and bodies is so, so , so ugly. i'm astounded at the amount of praise you receive when artists with much better figures get called out constantly

[Anonymous No.4746718]

:0 wats wrong

[Anonymous No.4746719]

>>4746692
shut up stupid im the teacher u kno

[Anonymous No.4746723]

>>4746718
nothin, i like it!

[Anonymous No.4746728]

>>4746649
>>4746719
Blog? I'd love to see more Pani Poni Dash.

[Anonymous No.4746734]

>>4746649
i dont like the forehead and this lame perspective. u should close up on it in like a fisheye view of this bitches horrendous noggin

[Anonymous No.4746741]

>>4746734
lole... yes i am going to close up and draw the reflection in more detail... thanks fren

>>4746728
https://twitter.com/pantsu_ripper
I want more Pani Poni Dash too...

[Anonymous No.4746743]

fucked around for awhile, got here. when i add more ill take a better picture

[Anonymous No.4746747]

>>4746743
I really love it! great job anon...
do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.4746752]

>>4746743
https://twitter.com/labotomyvomit?s=09

[Anonymous No.4746765]

>>4746285
Sorry m8 it’s just not readable at all. Maybe once you add color and values you can differentiate

[Anonymous No.4746768]

>>4746650
The rendering looks very messy. I think I know what kind of style you’re trying to go for but I would advise you keep your lineart as a separate layer since I think it works best for this style

[Anonymous No.4746788]

>>4746285
hote

[Anonymous No.4747008]

>>4746649

[Anonymous No.4747013]

>>4746604
>>4746968
i finished

[Anonymous No.4747038]

>>4747013
I think you actually spent too much time drawing compared to rendering. It really falls flat while you are clearly progressing when it comes to anatomy.

[Anonymous No.4747117]

Just finished this piece, thoughts?

[Anonymous No.4747123]

>>4747117
i really really hate your style

[Anonymous No.4747133]

>>4747123
What do you mean?

[Anonymous No.4747137]

>>4747123
He didn't draw that
https://twitter.com/realhartman/status/1004459941074231297

[Anonymous No.4747138]

>>4747137
Butch Hartman is living proof that you don’t need talent to succeed

[Anonymous No.4747142]

>>4747117
200 dollars for that. That’s how much he charges his commissions for.

[Anonymous No.4747155]

>>4747138
And Trump is a living proof you don't have to be sane to become the most powerful elected official in the world. That artist is an outlier, if one out of millions succeeds it doesn't mean the others can pull off the same as well. Market is not unlimited, the artists compete with each other for FINITE amount of customers.

[Anonymous No.4747157]

>>4747142
That shit isn’t worth ten dollars let alone 200. Is it possible to learn this power?

[Anonymous No.4747165]

>>4747138
I am not a fan of that style but there is nothing wrong with the artwork or his style.

[Anonymous No.4747168]

>>4747165
This, all of it looks very intentional

[Anonymous No.4747172]

>>4747165
lol OK, go back to /beg/ please

[Anonymous No.4747174]

>>4747168
Intentionally bad, perhaps.

[Anonymous No.4747177]

>>4747174
now thats just inexcusable. what are these 2004 flash colour schemes?

[Anonymous No.4747182]

>>4747174
this is bad but the one posted isnt.

[Anonymous No.4747191]

>>4747117
how did he manage to absolutely obliterate the public opinion on him so hard not helping matters is his atrocious art what the fuck.

[Anonymous No.4747193]

>>4747182
There’s an infinite supply of terrible art that he’s made for shittons of money

[Anonymous No.4747468]

>>4747193
This character led to the death of an innocent grocery store clerk.

[Anonymous No.4747565]

[Anonymous No.4747724]

>>4747165
>found the /beg/

[Anonymous No.4747913]

I don't know if what i'm working on fits this thread but anyways I kinda like how this is turning out. The way I color is a little wonky because it becomes a muddy mess around the black lines but bending the colors around in csp is fun as fuck!

>>4743322
>>4743507
Once you find your groove, keepin steady is easy

[Anonymous No.4747918]

>>4746649
pantsu don't listen to >>4746692 or >>4746734 they are tards, i really like that one
nicesu work

[Anonymous No.4747922]

>>4747913
One piece is the worst fucking trash to ever exist

[Anonymous No.4747925]

>>4746543
i see a lot of improvement on your cute-faces, i think you are close to get it, ganbare asukafag

[Anonymous No.4747930]

>>4747913
I don't quite understand what happening on picture and why is Laffy's dick is dressed in blue case and going spirals?

[Anonymous No.4747933]

>>4747918
Don’t listen to retards like these. They are the type of dumbasses that cause artist to stagnate/regress.

[Anonymous No.4747935]

>>4746543
Was it so hard? Why did you always wanted to stick to those (ugly) faces

[Anonymous No.4747955]

>>4747933
anon....

[Anonymous No.4747962]

>>4747930
uhh...sir?

[Anonymous No.4747971]

>>4747008
One little thing that bothers me is that the 100 isn't mirrored, but it'd probably be a little less readable if it were

[Anonymous No.4747984]

>>4747971
I didn't realize that at all... I can't even picture how its supposed to look... thank you for pointing it out!

[Anonymous No.4747993]

>>4747918
thank you,
but I think the anon was right, the sketch was pretty lazy and i want to do more close ups... i struggle to draw things in detail

[Anonymous No.4748195]

[Anonymous No.4748207]

>>4748195
Do you draw the punk chick with the + pupils?

[Anonymous No.4748256]

[Anonymous No.4748258]

>>4747984
should have just said she's holding the paper upside down

[Anonymous No.4748261]

>>4748207
Nah I haven't

[Anonymous No.4748316]

The posing on Kyo in particular looks fucking terrible.
but I have no idea how to fix it. would greatly appreciate a red line.

[Anonymous No.4748361]

>>4748316
sorry can't red line for shit, I think the side facing iori did not match the other. this way kyo looks like he stretching

[Anonymous No.4748367]

>>4746511
>>4746194
Yeh, thank you, It did help

[Anonymous No.4748391]

>>4745717
I copied those 30 faces and I felt like I literally pasted the face onto this drawing in one shot. Drew something uninspired to see if I’ve learned anything

[Anonymous No.4748407]

>>4745931
>>4745746
I am grateful, thanks anon or anons

[Anonymous No.4748500]

[Anonymous No.4748515]

>>4748500
thumbnail looks like its a contortionist and the ears were its legs

[Anonymous No.4748561]

>>4748391
I like this more than your normal stuff to be honest, the girls you normally draw are so anorexic looking that isn't not very appealing. (too boney) I guess that's just my personal preference, but I do feel like your art will improve a lot more if you try out more body types and shapes like you're doing with your recent studies.

[Anonymous No.4748677]

>>4748391

Your faces and modified proportions have become much more appealing

[Anonymous No.4748702]

>>4748391
i really like it, i prefer this than those robots that you normaly draw, but is just my personal taste, good work

[Anonymous No.4748732]

>>4748702
>>4748677
>>4748561
But whyyyyy? I like skinny robogirls. I’m going to miss them - I guess I am lacking in taste since these new drawings seem more appealing.

Honestly, I don’t think I was drawing hips for the past 7 yrs

[Anonymous No.4748755]

>>4747008
You can do much better than this.

[Anonymous No.4748765]

tried hard pixel inking for this one

[Anonymous No.4748768]

>>4748755
Shut up bitch

[Anonymous No.4748774]

after read too much hogarthbook...

[Anonymous No.4748775]

>>4748256
good shit

[Anonymous No.4748777]

>>4748391
I'm all for the bigger thighs, but feet being smaller than hands weirds me out.

[Anonymous No.4748786]

>>4742041
this is the cleanest i can get this lineart-flats-shading workflow before losing patience

>>4748195
naisu

[Anonymous No.4748794]

>>4748768
Faggot

[Anonymous No.4748835]

>>4748794
Bark, dog.

[Anonymous No.4748844]

>>4748835
Eat shit.

[Anonymous No.4748929]

text

[Anonymous No.4748981]

>>4748765
very nice

[Anonymous No.4748987]

>>4748755
reaaally doubt it but thanks frend will try harder

[Anonymous No.4748988]

>>4748929
BASED AND CUTEPILLED

[Anonymous No.4749007]

>>4748774
love the girl on the left, good job
>>4748391
the stuff you've been doing really really shows, and I think it looks amazing... wish i could be that uninspired
>>4747913
don't listen to crabs, the drawing reads pretty good has good movement and I love the rendering, has a nice 3D feel to it. please gib blog

[Anonymous No.4749014]

>>4748732
You can continue to draw your skinny robot girls like that, but when it comes to human, try to go for >>4748391 a bit more. Hell you can combine both styles when you draw monster girls.

[Anonymous No.4749116]

having a hard time placing the fucking right eye here as I always do. Should I just grind loomis heads to eventually get this shit down?

[Anonymous No.4749132]

>>4749116
>should i grind loomis
yes
also just draw the eye how you think it should look then cut it, isolate it and move it until it looks better
if not doing digital draw the eye on a separate paper then trace it onto your face after positioning it where you need it to be

[Anonymous No.4749140]

>>4749132
i literally never thought of this, I think it's good practice to draw everything and don't like using to many tools, but if you are struggling it is totally fair

[Anonymous No.4749146]

>>4748786
character is alright, but in what way would swords like those ever be effective? imagine swinging one whether its reverse gripped or not and getting an effective cut.... its a scythe without the leverage

[Anonymous No.4749155]

>>4744155
Cool as hell. Love the red helmet dude especially with his thunder motion (I always forget his name).

[Anonymous No.4749165]

>>4749116
No. Loomis won't help you there. Don't waste your time with that.

[Anonymous No.4749254]

>>4747117
Please stick with Danny Phantom and Fairly Odd Parents

[Anonymous No.4749283]

>>4746768
>>4742288
Damn, it sure took me a while but I did it. Now after I discovered how to emulate Helltaker's dialogue window, I can draw whatever I want on Helltaker, it should be especially good with porn

[Anonymous No.4749347]

>>4749116
flip the canvas retard

[Anonymous No.4749349]

>>4744155
how do you stay motivated to keep working on something for multiple days??? if i draw something its gotta get done in like, 5 hours max.
if i hate it at the end i just throw it out and start something else.

is something wrong with me

[Anonymous No.4749446]

working on this one

[Anonymous No.4749447]

>>4749349
nope, thats how it should be. He's lazy

[Anonymous No.4749452]

>>4749349
Yes, artists spend like 30 hours on stuff all the time

[Anonymous No.4749480]

>>4749446
She's cute. ガ should be が.

[Anonymous No.4749481]

>>4749349
Keep making finished drawings and slowly increase the difficulty. The important thing is to finish em.

>>4749116
Technically bad advice but with anime it can be easier to think of eyes as 2d stickers on top of a 3d head.

[Anonymous No.4749521]

>>4743967
jealous of this linework

[Anonymous No.4749656]

>>4748261
Damn.

Still trying to track down that guys blog.

[Anonymous No.4749700]

>>4749656
What does it look like?

[Anonymous No.4749716]

>>4749700
Cartoony, simple shapes, he does lewd stuff.

One of his characters looks like a typical 'insert yourself here type' and the other is aformentioned punk chick. Shaved head with mowhawk puff, the pupils of her eyes are shaped like the plus sign (+).

I know he posted a comic page with main guy getting beaten up, then getting hit by lighting, then being transported to punk chick.

Let me know if this rings any bells with anyone.

[Anonymous No.4749718]

any input or advice would be helpful, i'm looking to see where i could improve.
my monitor is also slightly off so the blending on the shirt doesn't look right

[Anonymous No.4749752]

>>4749480
thanks for the correction anon, are you japanese?
any recomendation for better translatation with 0 budget?

[Anonymous No.4749772]

testing colors on a drawing prompt. gonna finish the sketch in a bit then use the colors.

[Anonymous No.4749782]

>>4749752
Not who you responded to, but "DeepL" (just google it) is an amazing translator that's constantly improving too. I'm fluent in Japanese and most of the translations that this site spits out are perfect. (if you meant it as like "nina, wake up!" then ニーナ目を覚まして! would be better than what you have)

[Anonymous No.4749984]

>>4749782
great to know, I'm going to check it, thanks for the correct translation anon!

[Anonymous No.4749999]

>>4743967
face is off some, otherwise stellar linework

[Anonymous No.4750030]

>>4749718
The wrinkles of the shirt don’t make sense. A lot of it seems symbol drawn

[Anonymous No.4750071]

>>4750030
>symbol drawn
what do you mean?

[Anonymous No.4750147]

>>4750071
he means you don't know how to draw a fucking shirt
go look up sailor uniforms or whatever and copy those

[Anonymous No.4750203]

>>4750147
why the hostility?

[Anonymous No.4750242]

>>4749772
Cute

[Anonymous No.4750286]

[Anonymous No.4750426]

I'm just starting with digital art

I love these particularly cartoony japanese artstyles like Ko Teakuchi's, Level-5 games and human Digimon characters, also Kazuki Takahashi's which I wouldn't exactly call cartoony. But whenever I try to make bigger heads/eyes/hands, smaller bodies, thinner limbs and pointy clothes it always ends up looking weird and not appealing so I compromise like pic related and it feels kind of bland. Also I can draw wacky proportions for stupid looking characters but as soon as I try to make it cute or pretty it falls apart. Any tips?

Also tear me a new one for pic related

[Anonymous No.4750429]

>>4750286
cute roach

[Anonymous No.4750459]

>>4747913
>>4747913
i actually really like it, my only issue is that the motion lines from the boxing glove aren't parallel to the arm throwing it, throwing off the motion

[Anonymous No.4750511]

>>4750426
>Also I can draw wacky proportions for stupid looking characters
As the saying goes "Learn the rules before trying to bend them."
When you jump right into "wacky proportions" with zero to little grasp of anatomy and proportions they will always end up looking like shit.
Japanese artists you admire most of the time know the rules which is why they're able to break them and still make their designs look pleasing to the eyes.

As for your line work, the chicken scratch approach is messy and is done because you lack line confidence.
Sometimes it'd good for sketching or getting a tricky line right but for a full image it's just going to lead to mess.
Trying practicing single lines, including tangents (ie lines that cross with little lines hanging out, you can erase them later), and get a feel for doing that.
Clothing has weight and is effected by gravity. Just drawing clothes on top of a nude character without understanding of that will lead to flat shapes on top of a character.
It''s boring but fundamentals and basics are key.
Good luck.

[Anonymous No.4750517]

>>4749146
i don't disagree but Volvo really wants to maintain that warcraft 3 night elf aesthetic

[Anonymous No.4750525]

>>4750203
Tough love and misery.
Don't take it too personally.
If someone ask another person to draw a shirt. Chances are they will draw a square like sleeves, bottom, and maybe a concave half circle for the neck hole. If they're fancy they might add some lines for wrinkles or a shirt pocket.
That's symbol drawing. That's a person's brains representation of a shirt. It's obviously a shirt and depending on the person's skill level or style it may include more details to emphasis a shirt.
Drawing without symbols means use of reference/life and drawing what the eyes sees and the real detail of a shirt. You draw the complexity of the shirt. Weight, depth, etc.
This isn't a big deal unless you're going for detailed art styles. Which you aren't you're going for a cartoony/anime style so symbol drawing isn't bad per se but it doesn't hurt to use references and learn what does a real hand look like, how to simplify it into a symbol so that it looks better in that stylized form. How does a real animal tail look, how do real thigh highs sit on a person's legs, etc.

[Anonymous No.4750557]

>>4750511
I'm fucking retarded, I tried to not "chicken scratch" my way through and, while not perfect, I realized it's not that hard. Thanks anon. Would you recommend practicing normal and wacky anatomy at the same time? I want my wacky but appealing OCs asap

The left one is older than the first pic I posted, It's simple but I like how it turned out. I just did the one in the right, it's an old Pathfinder character of mine with a wacky face

[Anonymous No.4750666]

Dead link

[Anonymous No.4750815]

>>4750666
F
Very princess mononoke. I think some ripples in the water make it look even better, like from the leaf that's tilted by the shoulder.

[Anonymous No.4750865]

>>4750666
>dead femboy
i wish that were me haha

[Anonymous No.4750908]

>>4750666
whats with the weird hard-profile? makes his head look very flat, i would consider reworking

[Anonymous No.4750914]

>>4750865
41%

[Anonymous No.4750928]

>>4750908
Considering the shading on eyelids and neck, there should at least be a hint of shading on the cheeks adjacent to the nose.

[Anonymous No.4750979]

>>4749718
The legs look like they came off an old school deviantart base and don’t look like they belong with the feet or torso.
Overall design is cute.

[Anonymous No.4751061]

bleh

[Anonymous No.4751063]

[Anonymous No.4751093]

>>4748316
dis gud, just came here to say this.

[Anonymous No.4751095]

>>4751061
Very spunky, I like her

[Anonymous No.4751166]

[Anonymous No.4751263]

>>4750557
I like the right one. Much cleaner and better anatomy than the others.
>Would you recommend practicing normal and wacky anatomy at the same time?
Do studies of real proportions and anatomy, then do practice drawings/sketches trying to apply those studies to you "wacky" proportions.
Don't forget to practice real clothing and accessories.

[Anonymous No.4751283]

Fucknig hell I hate this face so much, and I have zero idea on how to make them look better

[Anonymous No.4751415]

>>4751283
The face is actually fine, the hair looks ugly, the hand is messed up and maybe something's wrong with the way her arm is bent, I think you just tried to do something too hard for u... which is good, don't worry if it comes out ugly... learnin is what matters the body is great too

wip

[Anonymous No.4751624]

>>4751415

[Anonymous No.4751867]

>>4751263
Thanks, anon

>Don't forget to practice real clothing and accessories.
I will, I've already identified this point it's just an issue I plan to tackle later but I know of it's importance specially on exaggerated styles

[Anonymous No.4751876]

>>4751283
Back to /beg/, matt, you perma/beg/

[Anonymous No.4751885]

>>4751876
post your work.

[Anonymous No.4752106]

I was just told that cartoons in Cuba are called muñequitos, and i lost my shit.

[Anonymous No.4752185]

>>4751876
>being a dick in an /alt/ thread.
Fuck off loser

[Anonymous No.4752188]

>>4744484
I really like this style of art, who are you and can you recommend more art with this sort of line work?

[Anonymous No.4752234]

>>4752188
electric retard

[Anonymous No.4752319]

>>4752188
thanks frend... I can't really think of anyone tho..

I wouldn't even call it style, I just don't know how to approach drawings in other ways.

reminder to rotate ur canvas before u are done with the drawing...

[Anonymous No.4752328]

>>4744155
i wanted to finish this today but death stranding on veryhard for PC is calling out to me. I'm 42 hours in and love it.

[Anonymous No.4752354]

>>4749718
>14 years old girl instagram art

[Anonymous No.4752446]

>>4742288
My instagram https://www.instagram.com/maxadoonie/ any thoughts or feelings on the matter, lmao?

[Anonymous No.4752517]

>>4750459
Yeah I noticed that, I was changing around the position of the arm and wrists just hadn't altered the motion lines yet

pic related is outdated but i'm going for a kinda "squishing" effect below Luffy's mouth where the glove impacts his face

[Anonymous No.4752526]

cool magic girl

[Anonymous No.4752540]

>>4752526
the character in the back looks lilo from lilo and stich, kek, i like your drawing btw

[Anonymous No.4752541]

>>4752540
looks like*

[Anonymous No.4752546]

>>4752540
it's all in the noses

[Anonymous No.4752591]

>>4752526
Is this a webcomic or a print comic?

[Anonymous No.4752617]

>>4752591
unfortunately only a print comic available in a few countries

[Anonymous No.4752756]

mindlessly drawing to music, it's not supposed to be anything in particular
>>4750429
Thanks

[Anonymous No.4752767]

>>4752756
its really cool! cute face and nice body!

[Anonymous No.4752850]

>>4742288
every thread i post in i get told i'm in the wrong thread, this is the latest one i've been pushed to.

Was wondering if you had advice on hair and especially beards.

[Anonymous No.4752852]

>>4752850
You're not int the wrong thread, but you should be hanging out more on /beg/ anyways.
so... Go back to /beg/

[Anonymous No.4752863]

>>4752850
I would look up a reference of the type of beard you’re looking for.

[Anonymous No.4752920]

>>4751624
I want to draw like you so bad..

What does your process look like? Programs used etc?

[Anonymous No.4752975]

>>4752863
I was drawing a friend of mine who has a thick beard. I just want sure how to translate that to animu.

[Anonymous No.4752980]

>>4752852
They told me I wasn't beg and to go to asg. Asg told me to go to alt. You tell me to go to beg. :(

[Anonymous No.4752983]

>>4742296
Boobs are fine, dude.

[Anonymous No.4752988]

>>4746718
Nothing. It’s great!

[Anonymous No.4752990]

>>4752850
Ignore that fucking idiot who said you’re /beg/. I would agree that the beard is a bit off but you did very well otherwise.

[Anonymous No.4752998]

>>4746968
Legs could be longer by a bit

[Anonymous No.4753002]

>>4752980
Not that anon, but aren’t you the guy who said they can’t draw full body? Anyway, asking /asg/ for help is a bad idea. Asking /alt/ or /beg/ should be fine.

[Anonymous No.4753005]

>>4752852
are you fucking retarded?

[Anonymous No.4753013]

>>4752920
thank u frend... It's basically like
>1 layer for lines (between 1-3px brush)
>1 layer for colors
>1 layer on top with a solid color for shadows (set to color burn or something)

[Anonymous No.4753170]

[Anonymous No.4753202]

>>4753013
The boobers are too low.

[Anonymous No.4753204]

>>4752980
I'm that Anon, you should be hanging out on /beg/, but you can post here I'm not gatekeeping, but do some /beg/ studies and don't post much here unless it isn't an study

[Anonymous No.4753210]

>>4753013
How big is the canvas?

[Anonymous No.4753219]

>>4753210
as big as you want... I like it be huge just so I can zoom in and draw as much as I need.

>>4753202
thanks I will try to correct that

[Anonymous No.4753226]

>>4751876
Okay, what kind of exercises would you recommend to get out of that comfort zone?

[Anonymous No.4753234]

>>4753170
nice

[Anonymous No.4753238]

>>4753204

This guy is fundamentally not /beg/. Fuck off, crab, along with all the other idiots who routinely post here telling everyone they belong on /beg/.

[Anonymous No.4753254]

>>4753170
cute...

[Anonymous No.4753303]

[Anonymous No.4753316]

>>4753303
Lady legs lol

[Anonymous No.4753350]

>>4748391
Ink done, should have used the 005 or 01, plastic nib too fat.

Should I beef up the outline more? It looks top heavy

[Anonymous No.4753367]

>>4753350

Sup tableguy, it looks top heavy due to all the busy stuff going on at the top and the shading. My concern is that if you ink the bottom legs more, she ends up looking kind of.... I don't know, chunky? Unless that's what you're going for.

[Anonymous No.4753395]

>>4753303
Why do you keep posting this trash

[Anonymous No.4753430]

[Anonymous No.4753442]

>>4753395
you could be nicer

[Anonymous No.4753443]

>>4753395
Give criticism, dumbass

[Anonymous No.4753470]

>>4753443
What's the point when he ignores them? He should be banned for shilling, because that's all he does here.

[Anonymous No.4753485]

>>4753470
If you think he's shilling and take issue with it, then that's something you should have included in your original reply.

[Anonymous No.4753585]

New thread for the kids
>>4753582
>>4753582
>>4753582

[Anonymous No.4754643]

>>4744155
>>4749155
>>4749349
ty for the responses :O, your words give me extra minutes of energy to burn!
>>4749481
I try to work on something till I think its finished; sometimes it's to my absolute detriment, others I can look back on and at least say I knew how to solve a new problem in the long run even if I made the current one a little too much or too little of what I wanted aesthetically. I would say I'm slow in that regard. If I don't mind something or I can't understand a problem I try to reference loomis and teallineguy or proko. I am a huge fan of the draftsman podcast too :O