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What's wrong with this anatomy? Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:14:37 2020 No.4734152 [Reply] [Original]

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:22:42 2020 No.4734165 Sauce?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:39:47 2020 No.4734194 >>4734152 not everyone is a contortionist?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:44:13 2020 No.4734198 see that one bit of shadow? it shouldnt be there.

Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:49:33 2020 No.4734201

>>4734152
Sometimes is not the anatomy, proportions or foreshortening that's strictly wrong, it's just that the pose and angle are unappealing or uncanny. That's why I prefer more stylistic approaches, where you can break the fundamentals to achieve a more "pleasant to the eye" artwork

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 18 23:50:38 2020 No.4734203 >>4734201 i leik animamime too

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 00:12:03 2020 No.4734219 >>4734152 It is not the anatomy, it is the lens the camera uses.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 00:20:08 2020 No.4734224 >>4734219 What? Lens distortion doesnt work like that

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 00:22:07 2020 No.4734227 >>4734194 That is not a difficult pose, you fatso.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 00:39:55 2020 No.4734242 >>4734152 literally nothing you've had your perception cooked by offmodels

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 00:42:02 2020 No.4734245 Post it on r/mendrawingwomen and watch em' freak.

Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:08:39 2020 No.4734283
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>>4734152
The anatomy is okay... I SUPPOSE. But it's just so UNAPPEALING. I simply cannot fathom why you REALISTS would wish to exactly copy a subject as it is. Don't you know they have cameras for that? Ha!

Now for an objective criticism of this piece... The posterior is big, which SHOULD mean it's good, but it's far too shapeless and FLABBY. The same goes for those legs. Her butt and thighs have no delineation with which to grab the eye, it's just a doughy, dull, contiguous mass. Not inspiring what. So. Ever.
Her waist should also be much thinner than that. I mean, it's not that she's ugly because she's fat, but she's fat in a BORING and UNAPPEALING way. Dare I say... AVERAGE? NATURAL? Such tasteless plebeian concepts, hmph.
Also, watch that conservation of detail in the folds of skin as her torso twists. All you need are ONE or TWO lines, but you used FIVE. That's simply being a tryhard.
Now for the last item in this rather unappetizing menu- that face is simply atrocious. Just LOOK at the size of that nose, it's disgusting! The nose should be understated to the point of not being noticeable, or else you will make your subject look ugly and OLD. The number one rule for appeal is NEOTENY. Small nose, large eyes, and for crying out LOUD, no wrinkles or unnecessary lines! CONSERVATION. OF. DETAIL!

I suppose you think you're clever by being subtle and understated, that you're "progressive" and "understanding" for deigning to draw the unflattered female form... but *I* see right through that act. Subversion of a trope for the sake of subverting a trope is simply NOT clever. You get no bonus points from me for drawing unsexy women on purpose.
All in all, I rate this piece a FIVE out of TEN, because it is, above all else, like the very subject of this "art" work, AVERAGE. Heh, how very ironic.

Please strive to learn appeal and soul, and MAYBE I'll consider rating you higher next time. Good luck on your artistic journey, for I do believe you need it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:11:16 2020 No.4734286 >>4734152 She's a female, therefore everything is wrong with her by default.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:11:52 2020 No.4734287 >>4734283 Didnt read shit

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:12:41 2020 No.4734288 >>4734152 AAAHHH STOP POSTING WOMEN OR GET ME A GF NOW NOW NOOOOOOW

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:24:58 2020 No.4734307 File: 97 KB, 1008x1200, e5Edy4xyw-M-1008x1200.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4734288 Better yet, post men instead. It's the superior gender and may even get you a boyfriend instead.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:34:38 2020 No.4734320 >>4734152 She didn’t practice Loomis that’s why the figure is a bit twisted

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 01:40:49 2020 No.4734330 >>4734307 Sex. Men are superior sex. "Gender" is a vague, term made up to confuse people.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 02:27:08 2020 No.4734368 Her bones, and by bones I mean fat, are too big. >>4734283 Based.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 02:30:16 2020 No.4734374 >>4734152 She's clearly a contortionist

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 03:43:55 2020 No.4734442 My penis isnt inside her vagina

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 04:25:09 2020 No.4734486 >>4734152 It's not sitting on my face

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 05:08:03 2020 No.4734522 >>4734152 is this a photograph or painting?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 05:38:42 2020 No.4734555 >>4734152 too fat!

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 12:06:07 2020 No.4735157 File: 27 KB, 472x472, 1595028861996.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4734152 That looks wildly uncomfortable

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 12:28:28 2020 No.4735197 >>4734330 gender and sex are the same tho

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 12:40:49 2020 No.4735219 >>4734283 Based

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 13:03:55 2020 No.4735253 File: 20 KB, 626x565, 1594984047153.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4734330 I'll sex YOU if you don't shut the fuck up you stupid cunt

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 13:11:01 2020 No.4735262 >>4734283 BASADUX https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2Ok0Wx1bCE

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 13:15:29 2020 No.4735266 >>4734152 This isn't a photo?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 14:59:25 2020 No.4735435 >>4734227 Post yourself in it, stick man.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 16:44:36 2020 No.4735649 >>4734152 I would also like to know, >>4734165

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 16:52:15 2020 No.4735667 >>4735649 >>4734152 >>4734165 hahah can i get another reference like this haha to draw

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 19:55:20 2020 No.4736081 >>4734283 i love how you are mocking people who are like that by using bubble bass as the pic but people think you are serious

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 20:07:30 2020 No.4736108 >>4734283 this shit is why I come to /ic/ holy kek

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 20:21:32 2020 No.4736141 >>4736081 Ironically enough, it's ironically unironically based in its unironic irony

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 20:47:48 2020 No.4736189 File: 134 KB, 700x875, -KquBe7FJWY.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4734152 >posts a photo of a real person >whats wrong with this anatomy? I swear this board is full of braindead retards

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 19 22:29:15 2020 No.4736344 >>4734283 Hehe.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 00:50:18 2020 No.4736571 >>4734152 She looks like she is going to drown me in a lake. Hot.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 02:08:59 2020 No.4736640 >>4734152 Where is her penis

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 04:34:44 2020 No.4736808 >>4734152 too fat

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 04:37:17 2020 No.4736811 >>4734152 It's wrong

Anonymous Mon Jul 20 09:48:56 2020 No.4737347

>>4734152
>What's wrong with this anatomy?
She eats too much fat and sugar, doesn't exercise and probably drinks and smokes too. I can smell the stank wafting from her vagina and if I had to guess I'd say that she probably owns a minimum of three cats.
The anatomy would look a lot better if she had enough self respect to do the bare minimum required to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 10:35:53 2020 No.4737460 >>4736189 this photograph is very good, much too good for this thread

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 13:31:11 2020 No.4737766 >>4737347 hentai has rotted your brain

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 13:40:04 2020 No.4737791 File: 83 KB, 266x400, 1526073-b.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What's wrong with this anatomy? Seriously, if someone traced this everyone would bitch about how you need Loomis

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 20 13:43:10 2020 No.4737797 >>4734283 >animetrannies on suicide watch Based

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 01:29:04 2020 No.4739029 >>4734152 3DPD

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 03:40:58 2020 No.4739185 >>4734201 Do you have examples of this?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 19:35:15 2020 No.4740941 this image is repulsive

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 21 19:51:10 2020 No.4740963 >>4734283 i wish you would critic my drawings senpai

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 08:57:31 2020 No.4742062 >>4734152 Her face looks like Nicolas Cage

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 09:40:57 2020 No.4742121 File: 135 KB, 960x925, 46440652_2123796531010218_6749845069089472512_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4734152 loomis this

>>	WholeTetsuo Wed Jul 22 10:22:28 2020 No.4742176 >>4734152 If she didnt look like nicholas cage with a wig on, This would be sexy af

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 22 10:45:59 2020 No.4742211 >>4740941 It looks like it was taken with a phone camera in a dark shuttered room, the face as others noted doesn't help

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