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Post oil paintings, drawings, pastels, sculptures, or anything done in traditional media THAT YOU HAVE MADE for critique

>> No.4728655
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>>4728654
did paintings of the library today

>> No.4728657
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>>4728655
and some nudes

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>>4728657
this one came out pretty cool too

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>>4728665
and I painted this piece of shit, i don't even know what it is it was supposed to be Eve in the Garden i think?

>> No.4728747

Fuck this thread

>> No.4729270
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I need a bit of advice with my painting. I am trying to depict a chrome-like surface, but something just doesn't sit right with me. Perhaps because the horizon is level with it's reflection?

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>>4729270
I think you need to imply more opaqueness, even if the surface is reflective. The reflection should still be a little darker maybe. Is this picture helpful?

>> No.4729279

>>4729270
It looks nice though

>> No.4729347

>>4729277
I agree completely, if it weren't for the shadow it'd be mistaken for glass. Having the area in front illuminated would sell the opacity, but im afraid of disrupting the balance of the whole composition

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>> No.4730056

>>4730051
there are some things that could be changed or worked a little bit more but overall it is done. I kind of failed at the reflections. Couldn't mix the right color so i went for the one you see. Overall a fun piece though and a lot of work

>> No.4730444

>>4729270
Make it in blender for reference

>> No.4730455

>>4729270
Maybe you should try setting up a still life with a reflective object and paint it from life.
That way you can actually see what gives a reflective surface it's characteristic look.

>> No.4730456

>>4729270
There should be a subtle gradient along that white edge about the same width as the white itself. Making the red in the reflection not line up with the horizon would help composition.

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>>4728654
Drew a portrait for the first time
Before i only practiced parts of the face with soft pastel. CRITIQUE

>> No.4730461

>>4730458
Finish it.

>> No.4730467

>>4730051
Central figure needs some work, and the structure closest to the centre on the left looks like it’s on a different plane from the rest of the piece.

>> No.4730470

>>4730458
-Finish it
-You’re using it like a pencil. Blend.

>> No.4730474

>>4730461
>>4730470
You guys think its worth finishing?
Also im using an HB mechanical pencil

>> No.4730477

>>4730474
With a little bit tidier crosshatching it could be really nice. Finish it.

>> No.4730478

>>4728654
>>4728655
Your perspective isn't precise enough. Your work overall could use a lot more drawing practice

>> No.4730480

>>4730474
I think you should finish it so we can make a better assessment.
And it's always good to finish pieces and not give up too soon.

>> No.4730483

>>4728667
All of your attention went to the torso and face. Save some energy for limbs and necks.

>> No.4730484
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Catskills, NY acrylic

>> No.4730485

>>4730483
i ended up working the face the most because the reference was just her torso, and i kind of worked up and down the figure. I need to get back to drawing

>> No.4730486

>>4730484
The composition needs a lot of work, there’s no path for the eye to follow here.

>> No.4730508

>>4728665
Are you going for something semi realistic? Over all it’s nice but the left breast looks like it belongs in a hentai. If you’re going for that style it’s fine but if not, the nipple to way too rubbery.

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>>4730508
i paint that girl a lot, she has interesting breasts, this was the reference, apologies for the coom

>> No.4730517

>>4730510
Uhm sauce?

>> No.4730519

>>4730458

More loomis.

>> No.4730522

>>4730510
I was mistaken. Dang.

>> No.4730530

>>4730510
I once knew a girl with this type of breasts, she took photos of her naked for photography class in college, still not sure if brave or thot.

>> No.4730555

>>4730530
>still not sure if brave or thot.
probably just desperate for good grades with no artistic ability

>> No.4730561

>>4730517
>>4730522
u/perky-and-pink on reddit
her paintings sell like crazy, I've sold 6 paintings of her. I give her 5% of the sales but it's worth af

>> No.4730568

>>4730477
>>4730480
I dont want to do crosshatching i want it to be more natural. Also i dont wanna blend with fingers because it might end up looking like a deviantart OC. Imma have to learn natural blending with a mech pen. Thanks brothers.
>>4730519
Ok since you posted it in this thread too ill admit i should.

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>>4730510
>u/perky-and-pink on reddit
https://www.reddit.com/r/SimpleNudes/comments/hrd7qk/just_noticed_that_more_people_are_posting_to_this/

WTF is that in the bath with her in this photo?????????????

>> No.4730637

>>4730510
I'm going to paint that too.

>> No.4730647

>>4730637
>>4730634
sign up for her onlyfans, give her money she's cool

>> No.4730650

>>4730634
Someone's dead foot

>> No.4730653

>>4730647
ok, perky-and-pink

>> No.4730654

>>4730653
god i wish

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>>4730654
anyways here's some trees

>>4730484
looks cool but bigger filesize please

>> No.4730669

>>4730658
what's your reasoning for leaving each of your paintings so unfinished? Aside from the brushstrokes, that's a genuinely cool piece.

>> No.4730677

>>4730669
they're not sold on commission, any more work to them wouldn't raise the price any higher so it's kind of pointless. Even if it did raise the price my customers don't buy above the $150 price range for the most part. Better to have quantity than quality right now, especially in quarantine.

>> No.4730692

>>4730677
I think you could raise the price on your paintings if you put more time into them and kept innovating. Many fine-art pieces today still sell for thousands of dollars.

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>>4730692
maybe, i might raise by 7-8% today

>> No.4730829

>>4730658
Have to admit this looks really nice. The section where you can see some of the sky trough the tree is strange though. It doesn't match the style of the rest of the painting.

>> No.4730836

Do you post your work anywhere on social media? I'm not really into that but have recently started a Twitter account. Now I struggle to find good non digital art. Did I just fail to find what I am looking for or should I use another platform?

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>>4730752
I like really small things in paintings. For instance. I really like the ring finger on the left hand. The way shadow falls onto it. Looks great!

Fish dude here

>> No.4730916

>>4730654
Thought you hated white wimmin.
>>4730647
Yeah, no thanks, I don't support prozzies.

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Drew my gf’s bike today

>> No.4731039

>>4730467
yeah, both of those were things i was already thinking too bad i can't correct them when working with permanent media. The giant's lower body is kind of anatomically correct and the hands don't look correct either. I used a purple that was way too opaque for that structure but tried to water it down on the paper as much as I could. The reflections also don't look good but would be really hard to do for this sort of thing.

>> No.4732044

>>4730444
what is this blender you speak of??
>different poster

>> No.4732431

Did this with oil pastels. How can I improve?

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>>4732431

>> No.4732531

>>4732439
Subtler shine, it’s coming across as pretty gooey right now.

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Been a while.

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>>4732531
Thanks. I want it to be colourful but tried to blent it more in this one. Better?

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painted at the park again

>> No.4733174

>>4733123
I'm digging the path, a lot.

>> No.4733186

>>4733123
Your nature things are nice. So why do you keep painting nudes? Do you actually like it or is it just to sell something?

>> No.4733194

>>4733123
I really like everything in the bottom half, bar the fountain feature. Really beautiful, dude.

>> No.4733208

>>4733186
>Do you actually like it or is it just to sell something?
I sell so many, it's easy to lose sight of doing other things. They aren't big sales usually, but when people buy three of them at a time for $100-$150 each it's hard not to feel like that's all I should be painting.

The one saving grace is that nudes done at figure drawing sessions tend to sell as well, but I'm not doing many of those lately :(

>> No.4733258

>>4733208
>but I'm not doing many of those lately
Same here, used to draw at least once a month at a small art studio but haven't been there since march. I liked it a lot, was a great way to get better.

>> No.4733318

>>4733123
Did anyone talk to you at the park?
I haven't painted o/s for so long because of that, I 'm thinking of painting Wednesday when I go to collect some pictures from an auction house.

>> No.4733335

>>4733318
I haven’t had any problems I’m not particularly happy with seeing so many boomers walking around but you should be fine.

>> No.4733341

>>4733335
boomers not showing you the love, bri

>> No.4733346

>>4733341
Boomers need to stay the fuck home, they’re my customers I can’t have them die

>> No.4733348

>>4733346
gotta garnish those poker room dens with a little spice

>> No.4733349

>>4733335
WTF, boomers are alright.
Screaming kids in parks are much worse. And peoples dogs always stop snuffling around in my bags so I have painting, and lose the flow.
That reminds me, to consider getting headphones to wear.

>> No.4733355

>>4730752
this style is very effective, just introduce more facial expressions and moods

>> No.4733356

>>4730752
what influence am I seeing with this piece?

>> No.4733918

I couldn't find a supplies general but figured someone here might know. Why the fuck are all of the Copic refill inks sold out EVERYWHERE? I saw that they recently changed the refill ink type (which is annoying, I enjoyed knowing I'd basically only ever need to buy the various ink once for the rest of my life per color) but I haven't been able to find the old or the new refills anywhere. What the hell? Do I just buy new markers in the meantime? Seems like a waste.

>> No.4734554

>>4733918
I'm not big into markers anymore, but I heard there was a delay with getting the new refills into stores because of the pandemic. You could buy refills or alcohol inks from another brand in the meantime, but it might be hard to get close color matches, especially for the lighter shades.

>> No.4734573

>>4732878
Much better on many levels. Your edges could be a bit smoother, might be a good idea to outline in a pastel pencil of the same color if you have access to them.
Keep up the good work

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How the fuck do I make the second eye

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How the FUCK do i make the second eye?

>> No.4734772

>>4734740
Carve out everything around the eye first, the last thing you actually carve is the eyeball and you don’t so much carve it as imply it by subtracting the clay enough that it looks like there’s an eye. Keep adding clay and carving it out until it looks right

>> No.4735187

>>4734573
Thanks again. Can you recommend anything? The oil pastels are also very cheap and I only have a few colours, so I might buy more of those too as they are fun to draw with.

>> No.4736232

>>4734554
Ugh, that makes total sense so I can't be too upset. I guess now is a great time to try other brands.

>> No.4736419

>>4734740

A lot of miniaturists and sculptors I watch use small beads to serve as the base for the eye. Then place the muscle, fat and the lid of the eye around it.

>> No.4737809

>>4734740
The same way you made the first one

>> No.4737819

>>4737809
K

>> No.4738669

>>4735187
Faber Castell Pitt pastels are ok and not super expensive

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Painted with water soulable pencils. Its my first painting in many years, I made it in the clinic for alcohol withdrawal. Do you like it?

>> No.4739174

>>4733123
I really love this one

>> No.4739175

>>4738669

Pitt pastels are really good actually but this anon is using oil pastels. They are different kinds of media and I don't think these specific two can be succesfully mixed on the same surface.

>> No.4739179

>>4739172

You did well for a novice, maybe keep doing art instead of booze, eh? It's a positive outlet and you seem to have some natural aptitude for it.

>> No.4739183 [DELETED] 

>>4739172
Looks good, but I'm not sure what you meant by painting with water soulable pencils..

or maybe go back do drinking if it's fake

>> No.4739209

>>4739179
Thanks anon. I think painting will definetly help me with my new life. It makes me calm and gives me a new purpose. I appreciate your advice

>> No.4739220

Can someone drop the links to the watercolor resources?

>> No.4739230
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Some still life

>> No.4739255

>>4739172
That is really nice, anon

>> No.4739270

>>4739175
Should I buy the Faber Castell Polychromos then?

>> No.4739298

>>4739270

Polychromos are regular coloured pencils, those are not oil pastels either but are more likely to stay on a surface of oil pastels than soft pastels like the pitt pastels. I dunno man, if i were you i would ditch the oil pastels entirely, they never look good any way, and go for either of those other two mediums. The crux of a medium is its binder. oil pastels are super waxy and fatty so you can't really mix them with other media with a different binder and expect it to look good.

>> No.4739305

>>4739230
very nice. My only gripe would be that more edge variation (on the vegetables especially) could really push it beyond whst it currently is.

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>>4728654
HOW do i make a soft edge in watercolor.

>> No.4739334

>>4739298
Oil pastels have their weaknesses and strengths like any medium. Color wise they’re amazing.

>> No.4739335

>>4739315
Water.

>> No.4739381

>>4739334

If you say so. I've never seen an oil pastel work that doesn't scream 'amateur'.

>> No.4739388

>>4739335
True, that.

>> No.4739396

>>4739388
I mean like a transition. I’m assuming it’s just individual strokes?

>> No.4739444

>>4739396
Transition to what, another colour?
Wet the paper before you put the colour down, then everything will be soft where it is wet.

>> No.4739584

>>4739396

It's called 'washes'.

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>>4735187
try acrylic paint, or a pastel ground. a pink or raw umber. tone the paper with a wash of colour to eliminate the white specks, do your pastel art over it, and also buy a blender stump.

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>> No.4739898

>>4739669
Nope, can't make it out.

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Overall wasn't thrilled how this one turned out but I think I might be getting better with watercolor
-bones

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>>4739978
Light was messed up in the last one oops

>> No.4740069

>>4733356
Picasso probs

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i plan on doing some more nudes but they're getting very boring

>> No.4740371

>>4728654
Just want to say that I always lurk here and appreciate your work

>> No.4740427

If I just want to draw landscapes, any books to recommend? I get the impression that the usual ones (Loomis, Brigman, etc) are mostly for figure drawing.

>> No.4740434

>>4740427
any book about drawing, or light and shadow should work.

Landscape painting is all drawing and depicting forms and shapes with light and shadow. The colors end up being mostly arbitrary. If you can mix values you can mix colors for a landscape.

>> No.4740459

>>4740352
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DdPNnwZdiUU&feature=youtu.be
here's a timelapse of this

>> No.4740463

>>4740434
Which medium (watercolor/oil/acrylic) to start with for /beg/ painter?

>> No.4740488

>>4740463
acrylics are easy to handle but difficult to mix and get the color you want. also no edge work
oils are a bit more complicated to handle and expensive, but you can handle color mixing and edges the best

watercolor is hard

>> No.4740510

>>4740463
Most artists die still being shit at watercolor

>> No.4740528

>>4740488
>>4740510
Why watercolor is harder compared to the other two? I'll start with acrylic then.

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>>4740528
Watercolour looks friendly, and look like it will be cheap.
The you find out that mistakes can't be fixed, the paper is expensive, mounting a finished piece of work is expensive, the re-sale of a work is less than oil or acrylic, decent brushes are more expensive than, and last less than, an angel's breath.
Planning a watercolour, and then controlling the washes while they dry, takes a decent amount of effort and self control, most people lack any ability to do this. Even lasters of oil such as Edward Seago, would never let anyone watch him paint a watercolour for fear of being seen to mess it up.
DON'T buy a million different colours in oil or acrylic.
You can paint a lot of things with just titanium white, burnt sienna and ultramarine blue. Use those for a few weeks, see it you like it. If you chose acrylic you will only need to add brushes and canvases, as you can wash your brushes out in water, but do NOT let your brushes EVER dry out in acrylic, let them stand in the jam jar of water while not in use. Rinse with a bar of soap when finished and lay flat. Buy Winsor & Newton range for everything and you're good to go.

>> No.4740569

>>4740564
Sorry for spelling mistakes, didn't have glasses on and in middle of painting.

>> No.4740683

>>4740564
Thanks for the advice. Shouldn't I add a yellow paint to get the primary colors besides the ones you mentioned?

>> No.4740810

>>4739656
Turns out if your oil pastels are less old or cheap they work just fine for my purposes. The Polychromos also kind of work if only for the edges. Also having more than one red, yellow, and orange is nice. If I plan to draw something more serious though, I will come back to your suggestion.

>> No.4740821

>>4740564
>The you find out that mistakes can't be fixed, the paper is expensive, mounting a finished piece of work is expensive, the re-sale of a work is less than oil or acrylic, decent brushes are more expensive than, and last less than, an angel's breath.
kek
but watercolor is addictive. especially if you like to plan your paintings, solve puzzles, and have money to drop on good paper. you can get competent at it if you choose it as your first medium (mastery is a different beast.) i noticed that the people who complain most about watercolors generally started wtih oils which are easy-mode because it takes forever to dry and there's very little spontaneity in how it behaves. OTOH acrylics dry extremely quick, shifts color, and are difficult to use if you don't think fast enough. watercolors are somewhere in the middle.
>>4740683
>>4740528
i'd suggest you start with watercolor if you really want. a basic set of 5 paints will last you a while, but if you can't afford paper as a regular expense ($20-100 usd/ monthly, depending on how frequently you paint), go with oils first. don't bother with acrylics until you have a good understanding of color theory and can mix colors well.

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>>4740821
not the guy you were talking to, but I still can't comfortably use the hot pressed Arches pad. I have 3 pads kicking around, but the paper feels so different that the regular Canson watercolor paper I default to. I even started doing light washes on 80lb inking paper. Something about how absorbent the arches is throws me off. I've been trying to do a couple sketches a day in it.

Anyhow, here's a little dude I painted as part of something I send people monthly.

>> No.4741246

How do I photograph watercolor without it looking washed out?

>> No.4741329

>>4741198
yeah, you're feeling the difference between cotton and wood pulp. i don't like wood-based watercolor paper. i started out with strathmore and fabriano's budget lines which are made with that stuff and (in my ignorance at the time) thought fabriano and strathmore were terrible brands because i couldn't make the paint do what i wanted on them. i didn't realize there was a difference until read up on materials and bought a pad of arches cold press. cotton-based paper allows you to do manipulate edges and do a lot of techniques with layering, lifting, and blending. i'd say wood-based papers are best for direct painting. your technique reminds me of KJGs watercolors, you definitely shouldn't feel the need to splurge on cotton paper if you don't build up your paintings.

>>4741246
Low budget?: A flat surface, good camera (phone ok), and a lamp with a good broad spectrum bulb (CREE daylight 100w equivalent, or similar bulb with a high CRI rating. makes retouching easier) + photoshop
Best results: just get a scanner. A Canon Lide 300 or better should be around $50-70. larger pieces can be scanned in sections and stitched together automatically in photoshop with photomerge

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>>4741329
a sketch of mine, forgot to attach

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>> No.4741860

>>4741349
It’s confusing to look at, I can’t tell where to look.

>> No.4741871

>>4741503
>>4741505
>>4741506

These are technically good but a bit boring. The last one with the stormy sky is the only one that makes me feel anything.

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>>4730752
this painting has only been listed for 4 days and it's already drawn a crazy amount of attention to my ebay store. Sometimes the algorithm is very friendly. I ended up raising some of the prices for newer paintings

>> No.4742315

>>4742291
Are you able to make a living off of just selling paintings, or do you supplement that with a day job

>> No.4742363

>>4742315
idk we'll see. If I can make 100-150 nudes this year I think I'll have built enough of a customer base to do it full time and slowly raise prices. I'm NEET right now but paying for my own supplies and gas and other stuff. It's just gonna take a lot of painting because my prices are kind of low.

>> No.4742395

>>4742315
Are you not aware Brian is living with his/off of parents? Don't try to think this is making it...

>> No.4742409

>>4742395
My parents aren’t making the paintings for me, what do I look like, Picasso?

>> No.4742417

>>4741343
I fucking love this, do ylu have a twitter?

>> No.4742484

>>4741860
it's a sketch, not a finished painting
i take it you've never disemboweled an animal or seen one gutted?

>> No.4742535

>>4742409
No, but you are a grown man, living off their teats still. You're playing at being an artist, thinking that selling a few low value pictures will ever really sustain you if you had to pai for actual bills without parental handouts.
You couldn't do it, otherwise you'd not be living under their roof doing nothing else, at the grand old age of 27. Eternal NGMI.

>> No.4742541

>>4742535
Whoever told you to never accept help from other people was an ass hole. Leave the "adulting is hard" criticisms on reddit

>> No.4742543
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did a self portrait in a mask

>> No.4742550
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finally had a bit of time. totally out of practice. and materials. oil on an acrilyc practice book. no matter how shit i am i still love doing this
also, any advice helps

>> No.4742577

>>4742535
>parental handouts
The most American "insult" I've ever read.

>> No.4742582

>>4742541
Being an adult means standing on your own two feet. Living off of someone else's money means you're kept in the eye's of the world. Sorry you don't like truth. That's why the truth is known to hurt. I run my own business and sell a ton of paintings too, but I don't pretend to make enough from the trad art to live off of it, and I wouldn't tell others on here that's it's easy either. It can be done, especially if you sell your soul and churn out the shit that appeals to normies, which is hardly going to be anyone that is here in the first place. So that will make anyone from /ic/ relatively miserable. It's money + sell out, or expect to only make very modest sales. I know someone that makes over 100 thousand GBP a year, but they sell literal 'wall art' that everyone here would screech over. Yet they make so much money they can't spend it all. I just can't (yet) bring myself to do that.
Yes, it was a long essay, but let's stop pretending "I sold a painting!!!" will be enough to pay the bills.

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>>4742577
Not even American, kek.

>> No.4742592

>>4742582
my art is better than your friends Homegoods art, first of all, second of all at the rate I'm going I make above minimum wage where I live for the three months I've been selling.

"Making it" to /ic/ in a grand sense does not mean making $500k a year selling bullshit. Most people here would dismiss your friends success, and if you think making it to the average d/ic/k has anything to do with money, and nothing to do with being a good artist, you should really lurk more.

>> No.4742632

>>4742592
They're not my friend.
I've been selling trad for 5 years & I'm not in a gallery. You're being pretty naive after a quick first flush of success, but you might get lucky. You're already complaining about getting bored after a few months of painting nudes, good luck with that if you have to keep yourself at just about minimum wage, for what all of /ic/ apart from you thinks are terrible paintings. You might think selling your paintings means you're hot shit & a great quality artist, but so does that person I know, they think they're really talented just like you do, and would think your stuff is crap. So which one of you is right? Fuck knows. And I don't care.

>> No.4742639

>>4742632
I AM in a gallery, even.
Not typing any more, I am trying to work and have too much else to do right now.

>> No.4742646
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Do you have any advice on how to draw better clouds in this? After I used the fixiative they lost the little contour they had. I used soft pastels.

>> No.4742652

>>4742639
>anyways I’m a very busy man and don’t have time to talk
>is on the worst board on 4chan somehow
Every time

>> No.4742658

>>4742639
Also lol at you being in a gallery, have fun giving them 65% of your sales

>> No.4742720

>>4742652
I run my own business from home, both of use raised the children around the business hours.
>>4742658
30%, negotiated a flat fee. They wanted my works and that's the price they're taking. So yes, lol.

>> No.4742731

>>4742652
>>4742720
I'm just popping in here while I do a few bits of work, seeing what the kids are doing with theirs dinners, and the family are chatting. Looking at /ic/ before I paint. Been out in the sunshine scouting places to go plein air painting with the dog & easel, now it's time to work a little.

>> No.4742733

>>4742646
No idea about pastel, but I fix charcoal before I paint in oil, surely you sprayed too close to the picture to have dissolved the pastel?

>> No.4742754

>>4742731
>Been out in the sunshine scouting places to go plein air painting with the dog & easel, now it's time to work a little.
you sound like a faggot, no offense

>> No.4742767

>>4742731
This sounds like a horrible life

I sleep with my animu body pillow in my bedroom from childhood and surround myself with my waifus on 6 different curved monitors while I eat dominos delivery waiting for (You)s

>> No.4742821

>>4742754
I'm a girl, so not offended.
>>4742767
Takes all sorts. Good for you.

>> No.4742923

>>4742821
>I'm a girl, so not offended.
I won't even go there, but imagine

>> No.4742928

ur both faggots btw

>> No.4742985

>>4742395
Wasn't aware.

>>4742315
Ah, got it. Whatever dude. Fight the good fight.

>> No.4742992

Just read the saga of brain vs other guy while I was taking a shit.

Have a nice day everyone and be well.

>> No.4743026

>>4742992
>Have a nice day everyone and be well.
>Except you Brian no money you ever make or paintings you ever do will satisfy my insatiable appetite for being a crab towards other artists who work harder than me
ok then

>> No.4743059

>>4743026
Lmao, no EVERYONE have a nice day.

>> No.4743065

>>4742733
Not sure that's the problem. I redid the sky too much so it wasn't where I wanted it to be in the first place. And I can't do clouds in any medium, so all advice is appreciated.

>> No.4743279

>>4742417
i have an insta
https://www.instagram.com/inkwithketchup/

>> No.4743295

tfw the only thing keeping this thread bumped is shitty drama

>> No.4743313

>>4742646
If looks like you changed your mind on what kind of sky you wanted to draw several times. Soft pastels aren’t like oil or acrylic, there’s a limit to how much you can change what’s there before you end up with a chalky mess.

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Reviving thread.
Reposting from beg
Finished my army guy portrait
Critique me help me
>inb4 more loomis
Yes i know tell me more, how are the shadows? I had a hard time figuring out what to do with the lit part of the face so i just added lines for texture.
Fixed droppy ear from beg.

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>>4742646
My old painting. Not very good but im mostly proud of the clouds (i think theyre a bit to dark on the bottom). Trick is to hard press the white to add the fluffiness/highlights, a pastel pencil would be best.

>> No.4744188

>>4744141
The best thing I can say is just flip your image to see it with fresh eyes. Use your phone or something. Unless the reference looked like that, the position of the features are very skewed. Keep grinding.

>> No.4744194

>>4744188
Yeah i held the paper to a mirror and saw his right side is waaay too wide for that perspective, as if its melting off. Shouldnt have countinued the image at 11pm, ill start over but keep this one as it is my first.

>> No.4744353

>>4744145
The clouds are better than any I ever did but they fit a sunny afternoon or something, while in the reference I used it was a more or less solid cloud cover where the evening light made them look all shades of blue.
I will try to draw some of your clouds later in another work

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i posted this here about two months ago, when i painted it. I havent painted any faces since. but i plan to today. any advice on what i should do differently, what my mistakes are etc

>> No.4744512

>>4744441
The hair looks like it was added last and doesn't interact with the rest of the face. And the brim if that hat is too flat.

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i fell for the art meme.

>> No.4744542

>>4744512
the hair is tough to do. how do i make it interact with the face? some kind of blending where they meet, or more likee some reflections of the skintone? or just better texture and shading?

>> No.4744551

>>4744531
i love the way the edges arent strictly defined.
the foreground is realy good, the clouds seem a bit weaker to me

>> No.4744594

>>4730510
Damn

>> No.4744600

>>4744531
You fell for the painting meme, learn perspective ffs

>> No.4744604

>>4744551
thanks. i thought i had a good idea for blending for clouds but it didnt pan out.

>> No.4744674

>>4744604
it can be frustrating af when paint doesent quite behave the way you expect it to

>> No.4744677

>>4744542
More texture would help, but the level of texture in the hair right now fits the texture in the rest of the painting. If you changed the one, you would have to change the other. The left side is allright but as the ear is very dark, so it could be darker as well. Might be alright if the hair is suposed to be very white.
The right side is one nearly unifrom white. You have a very dark shadow on the forehead from the hat but none on the hair. For the hairline you could make it softer (like on the right) or draw very fine hairs, though that would probably be too much detail. The right ear is also strange. Don't know how to change that though.
And maybe try to fit the beard better into the folds of his face. Those are well done and look very natural to me.

>> No.4744771

>>4744677
holy shit i totally forgot to put a shadow on the hair on the right side. and the shadow on the left ear and hair dont mach. thanks, ill pay more attention to the relalation of things etc

>> No.4745313

>>4744600
It looks fine you Caucazoid

>> No.4745503

>>4744441
Make sure your proportions are accurate before you refine the piece and add in details. Pay more attention to textures, everything looks like it's made of the same plasticy material.
Nice contrast though, a lot of beginners struggle with not going dark enough for the shadows.

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Underpainting/draft

>> No.4746123

>>4745810
Finish it

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4746668

I tried gessoing the pre-stretched canvas I have to make it more absorbant, it's not very noticeable but I think it makes the surface more workable.

Also I'm gonna try to paint some 150k-300k twitter follower accounts. There's a ton of girls with OnlyFans accounts that retweet each other and it's pretty easy to just find a super popular girl to paint. I just have to hope to get retweeted.

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>>4746668
i finally got a retweet with this one

>> No.4748427

>>4746668
The composition is drawing the eye right to the slight muffin top in an unappealing way. It makes her look lumpier than she is.

>> No.4748429

>>4747764
Lighting sets a nice mood but the left arm is coming across as skeletal.

>> No.4748912

>>4747764

Your proportions are so fucked up. Her head is gigantic and her arm is deformed. You really fucking suck Briguy.

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>>4747764
if you made an effort to learn color theory all your wok would be 100 times better, cuz right now its all muddy colors and blegh

also proportions, goddamn proportion, study anatomy + perspective + color theor and you will level up super fast

or disegard wjhat im saying if you wanna just do your thing

>> No.4748965

>>4747764
Oh my god, what even IS this horror?

>> No.4748980

>>4730561
how much do they sell for?

>> No.4748983

>>4748427
>[
>>4748429
>>4748912
>>4748939
>>4748965
if it sells I've given up hope that normies care about things like "proportions" and "good art"

but hey at least I'll be making money

I get blackpilled everyday on how low the bar is to sell art.

>>4748980
$100-$250

>> No.4748993

>>4748983
>$100-$250

oh sweet loli jesus what the fuck

welp guess its time to dust off the old brushes and get some oil paints again

>> No.4748995

>>4748983
how do you sell them might i ask?

in person, through social media or a specific website?

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>>4748993
>>4748995
ebay. I've had a good week so far, sold paintings every day for the past four days.

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>>4749015
i think this one came out better than those other ones

>> No.4749287

why do people say you can oil paint without solvent, its far too thick that way.

>> No.4749296

>>4749287
i always use paint thinner

>> No.4749366

>>4728654
BEGONE, CUMFARTI!

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4749370

>>4749366
i tried doing more color grouping with this one

>> No.4749428

>>4749370

why does she have two mouths

>> No.4749557

>>4749428
Symbolism, women talk too much.

>> No.4749561

>>4749015
I'm happy for you.
Hope to sell something this year too, I've never sold anything before and been experimenting with oil so hopefully I have a bit of a portfolio in oils in a couple of months.

>> No.4749601

>>4749561
Work across multiple subject matters, and try to just make some pretty paintings. You'll be selling in no time!

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4749603

>>4749428
idk

>> No.4749628

>>4740463
Acrylic is good because it dries fast and is easy to clean up. You can learn the basics of painting without some of the problems a typical beginner might have with oil, its a lot easier to muddy oil paint or get frustrated with the slowness of it.
Watercolor also dries fast and is easy to clean up but it's a whole different beast and requires more forethought and knowledge of painting in general since for example you have to know where the lightest parts will be before you start, as opposed to oil and acrylic where you apply white paint to the whitest part and can generally change things around a lot more than you can with w/c

>> No.4749839
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First oil painting in a while, alot easier then i remember

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WIP
I think i may have made too much spot on her breast

>> No.4749851

>>4749287
I love to paint out of the tube

>> No.4749953

Do you have any advice on how to stop procrastinating and actually starting to draw and paint instead of just thinking about it? It's so intimidating and being confronted with the reality of my suckiness hurts.

>> No.4749958

>>4749953
Work from reference and it won’t be so scary. Working on traditional from your head is nigh impossible

>> No.4750219

>>4749953
by the time youve prepared your workspace youll feel like you have to do something with it, instead of ignoring it.

>> No.4750536

>>4749953
I usually do something easy like a quick sketch of something I want to practice before I move on to more serious pieces for the day. That way getting started is less intimidating.

>> No.4750747

>>4749953
Basically set yourself your own deadlines, that's really the only way to achieve things as a 'self employed' artist. Otherwise you'll get into the habit of "oh I don't feel like painting, i'll finish it next week". No bitch you're finishing that shit now

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morning. I bought a tube of gouache. I definitely fucked this up and made him look generally burned. More Gouache on the way though. I love how it feels.

>> No.4750840

>>4749847
also, cute. love birds.

>> No.4751709

>>4728667
I kinda like this

Just work on the skin tones, they're kinda chalky and bland. Also change that godawful puke green to literally anything else, an olive green or turquoise would work much better

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>>4729270
Fixed it for ya (my angles are probably slightly off but im phone posting, just do what works from the actual vanishing points) also make the white edge less of an outline, make it so there are only pops of white

>> No.4752244

>>4728747
Digital artfag detected

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>> No.4753846

>>4753753
Your paper is very warped. What kind are you using?

>> No.4753850

>>4751723
The shape is looking bent, I think it’s the left edge from horizon up. That edge needs to be cleaned up.

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>>4751709
any paint that touches that canvas will be me polishing a turd

>> No.4754271

>>4753886
Eyes way too far apart.
I can see where you were going with the shirt but that sleeve is just sloppy.

>> No.4754756
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4754756

Say what you want about Brian but he has a fun face to paint. Didn’t really get the likeness but I’m happy enough with the result for a first try at acrylics. Usually do digital and I’m fucked slow at mixing paints and shit, gonna need more mileage.

>> No.4754765

>>4754756
Thanks! I’m assuming this is shaun

>> No.4754813

>>4753846
Seems more warped than it actually is. Generic drawing paper. Not watercolorpaper.

>> No.4754839

>>4754756

Unironically far above anything Cumfarti has ever produced or ever will produce. Good job.

>> No.4754844

>>4753886

Yeah that's a FAS head. Terrible

>> No.4754850

>>4754756
why would you give that parasite any attention. hes a shit artist with a shit personality

>> No.4754904

>>4754813
Buy some decent paper, you’re shooting yourself in the foot.
At least mixed media.

>> No.4754911

>>4754765
How did you figure this out?? haha

>>4754813
Uh, you aren’t me. It’s watercolour paper, not drawing paper. As another poster said though I should probably used mixed media paper. I’m just used to using the shittest tools possible because I’m cheap.

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>>4753886
finished this
>>4754839
imagine thinking /trad/ artists are drama queens like /draw/ and /alt/ artists

>> No.4754942

>>4754911
I understand the impulse to go cheap but paper is not something you want to cheap out on. It doesn’t need to be super expensive but some mid grade watercolor paper would help a lot.
You can also reduce warping by
-taping down your paper with painters tape
-pausing less while painting so the ink pools less
-fully drying between layers

>> No.4754950

>>4754916
Nose looks a lot better but the highlight above the lip is making her look like she has a cleft palate.

>> No.4754974

>>4754950
I’m not personally seeing that, if that’s an issue it’s not as noticeable as the eye placement was

>> No.4754975

>>4754916
youre one of the biggest drama queen attention whores here you vacant eyed numale

>> No.4754979

>>4754916
That sleeve is exceptionally lazy. As is her eye.

>> No.4755006

>>4754979
I don’t know that that matters, you can get pretty abstract and loose with stuff that’s not the focal point. If anything is maybe tone done the value change between the sleeve’s highlighted side and shadow, the contrast probably draws the eye too much but imo it’s okay to let secondary/tertiary elements in an image devolve into interesting shapes.

>> No.4755012

>>4754916
Exceptional. I like the sleeve, but will you make it more 3D?

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>>4755006
>>4755012
i made the shirt a color instead of just the white of the gesso

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>>4755054
here's a high resolution version of it

>> No.4755098

>>4755054
>>4755067
Looks good. Things I'd point out: The shape on the left side of her neck (her right) is too contrasty, if it's just shadows on her neck. If it's hair, the hue is too skin colored.

The most important thing you could easily fix is to lighten up your blacks around the face, and keep your darkest blacks for the actual face - the eyes, nostrils and the line between the lips, cause it looks a bit flat right now. A final point would be to maybe lighten up the hair form in front because it feels a bit too dark and distracting, but that might just be your reference's poor lighting.

Love your hues though. Keep it up!

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>>4755006
What, like Sargent did? Careful you don't start referencing him, easy now....

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4755181

>>4755098
tried to define some of the wispy shadows on the neck more, and added those darks to the face (and lightened up her lips)

>> No.4755191

>>4755067
I really like the way you did the hair

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>>4755191
when i do hair it's 100% gauguin. hair and the way he painted background elements are 100% stolen from him. The rest is just a mish-mash of styles.

>> No.4755209

>>4755199
it's 0.002% gauguin and 99.998 % heavy handed /beg/ moron

>> No.4755212

>>4755209
something something 99% of /ic/

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>>4755181
this bit is nice

>> No.4755236

>>4755227
sure if youre shit at perspective and anatomy and color theory its not too bad.

>> No.4755241

>>4755236
Bruh

>> No.4755255

>>4755236
Post your work

>> No.4755261

>>4755104
Sargent did it very tastefully and conservatively, but in a more heavily stylised painting you can get away with even more, eg. merging objects at different depths within a painting, or reducing objects to just literal abstract shapes that only exist to aid the composition and don’t actually describe an object anymore.

>> No.4755264

>>4755236
>its wrong but i wont go further into it
your critique is as terrible as your perception of the picture.

>> No.4755271

>>4755261
You can basically pull a reverse Ingres, where the face is very detailed and the rest is loose, but you’ll be able to “believe” the abstract parts because there’s a part that’s very realistic. Ingres would do it the opposite where he’d make the clothes hyper real and make the face much more stylized, but you’d believe that was the persons face because the rest was so realistic

>> No.4755289

>>4755271
Can you name any examples of artists or pieces that demonstrate what you mean? From what I’ve seen of Ingres, it was all very much figurative and fairy “sensibly” rendered - nothing I would call too abstract anyway. I would think that if you have more detail to everything but the face, you might believe a face COULD be there, but your eyes won’t be drawn to the face as a focal point. Or they might because of the contrast, but they won’t stay there, because of the lack of interest.

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>>4755289
that theory of working threading through Ingres ended up skipping generations, Impressionists didn't do it, and were very focused on consistent brush strokes across the whole canvas, but Post-Impressionism is rife with examples of incredibly detailed moments in their work surrounded by flat shapes and abstract moments. Munch did it a lot, so did van Gogh.

It didn't become a thing again until Cubism, which was a movement based almost entirely on Cezanne's "unfinished" form focused later work and then later again in Abstract Expressionism with Basquiat. Cezanne in particular, and later Picasso, were notorious for having areas of a painting completely finished and rendered, and as it spirals out towards the edges of the canvas it becomes nothing but scrawled brushwork and underdrawing.

Basquiat would sometimes just leave half the canvas empty, with some hyper-drawn figure or cluster of detailed schematics.

this Ingres painting, where the face is practically anime, and this Basquiat drawing where it becomes a giant patch of flat black, are the same working theory.

>> No.4755319

>>4755227
I quite like her face, and I'm one of Bri's biggest leg pullers. She looks like shes had too many hits off the bong.
I really don't get the fascination with Gauguin though, his work is shonky AF.

>> No.4755324

>>4755304
I think Ingres was trying to flatter the sitter though, by putting vaseline on the lens, as it were.

>> No.4755341

>>4755304
I think for the most part we’re talking about and appreciating the same concept. I think I understand what you meant by a “reverse Ingres” now - certainly a far cry from the abstractions used in the compositions of some of those other names, but the same concept in a weird way. Thanks for the in-depth explanation.

>> No.4755349

>>4755181
100% improved the face. Awesome!
Still those shadows on the neck are impossible to read - for my brain at least. Try to check the values and the hardness/softness of those shadows on your reference.

if you're having trouble comparing the colors, check out how a traditional color checker works from youtube channel "draw mix paint". Keep at it, it's coming out really well!

>> No.4755408
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>>4755349
i decided to just get rid of the shadows entirely

>> No.4755451

>>4755408
Are you using a 'selfie' type ref, is that why the arm seems to lift up? Also, Gauguin was in a tropical climate, you can't translate those light conditions to ordinary references.

>> No.4755467
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4755467

>>4755451
this one is the one I always come back to for reference on background elements. He'd put bounding lines around quadrants of color and break it up with brushstrokes that lead into flatter planes of color. It gives a weird "swirling" effect to his backgrounds that makes them look unlike static walls and more like relief sculptures or knotted fabric. A really bizarre effect that he refused to stop doing once he learned how to do it. It can be seen all over his work. It was this strange affect where he never wanted his whole painting to look like something, he wanted areas you'd be confused by because they were so overly decorative.

>> No.4755472
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4755472

>>4755467
this painting by him is also notoriously ridiculous and impossible to read at first glance, and that "knotted" brushwork is all over it

>> No.4755536

>>4755467
Not getting those backgrounds. Are you interpreting this yourself, or is this some considered art history about PG? It always looks like his backgrounds are a right muddle up.

>> No.4755608

>>4740488
You can get hard and soft edges with acrylics though. Just in different ways than oil. One is by adding fresh paint to the edges of each color and kind of zigzaging to blend or, what i find to work best is drybrushing/scumbling the edges.

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>>4755408
much better imo.

hate to do this at this stage, but her forehead, hairline and top of the head look a bit squashed together. Maybe recheck those proportions, much easier to add some extra hair shape on top than to take away though. just my 2 cents. solid image, anyway you decide though :)

>> No.4755852
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4755852

Monarch butterfly

>> No.4755906
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I like making sculptres but not sure if its something i should fully pursue or do as a hobby.

>> No.4755911

>>4755199
shit hands, ngmi.

>> No.4755919
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4755919

>>4755852
Compositionally, I'd have the butterfly on the right (her left) radiating from her, like the ones on the left, since the right one is too static and vertical.

Otherwise it's a pretty neat picture. Nice work!

>> No.4756112

>>4742550
I like it but try to do strokes instead of dots

>> No.4756363
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4756363

Ok, i will buy better paper.

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>>4756363
cool landscape. that yellow middle ground really communicates the land. I don't know how realistic or how impressionistic you want to go with this, but in case you want to make your image more realistic, you can use atmospheric perspective to create the illusion of depth. Practically, the further away something is, the more air and dust particles are between your eye and your subject, which makes the whole thing tinted with sky color, and also washes out the crisp contrast you'd find in a foreground element.

In your furthest away mountain, the darkest color should be much much lighter, and its contrast dialed down.

pictured: atmospheric perspective irl. Notice the value spectrum compressed, and the sky color tint as the distance from the subject grows

>> No.4756512

>>4741343
bro your stuff go so fuckin hard damn i love this

>> No.4756750
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Can someone ID the media being used here for the colors, is it pastel or some kind of mixed media? I'm finally getting into working with colors and I'd love to start digging into whatever medium Akemi Takada uses to create these super comfy palettes.

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>>4756750
Another example of the medium in question

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first time using watercolors since kindergarden and honestly it was an excruciating experience with colours constantly feeling like they're drifting out of my control. also i have no idea what to do about the hair. it's supposed to be while and the while coulour i have available just in't white enough.
probably should've tried to colour something simpler

>> No.4756926

>>4756750
>>4756755
Isn't this fully digital?

>> No.4756929

>>4756765
>colours constantly feeling like they're drifting out of my control
That's normal and that's what watercolors are liked for.
>coulour i have available just in't white enough
You are doing it wrong. There is only one real white color in watercolors - color of paper. Yes, you need to never paint over white areas. It is one of the hardest things while working watercolors but it does gives most pleasant results.

>> No.4756946

>>4756755
Watercolor and maybe some ink

>> No.4756952

>>4756765
>>4756929
You get more control as you practice and are able to predict the flow.
There’s no shortcut to it unfortunately, and it can take years depending on how far you want to go.

>> No.4756955
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4756955

Why does beige colors are so hard to mix?
I had to use three base colors in mix, isn't there some shortcut?

>> No.4757119

>>4756955
Well, beige is light brown, a tertiary colour, so what did you expect? That looks close to raw sienna though.

>> No.4757147

>>4739230
really nice anon

>> No.4757181

>>4756926
As far as I know this artist works trad.

>>4756946
Thanks, mate

>> No.4757529

>>4756929
>>4756952
i see, thank you for your insight.

>> No.4757706

>>4756750
>>4756755

Looks like gouache

>> No.4759338

>>4728654
Every time i try to use watercolor i fail

how the fuck do i do this?

>> No.4759476

>>4759338
Be specific.
Is the paper warping or disintegrating? Is it just blotchy? Are you having issues with muddy colors?

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4759483

It's getting hot in here.

>> No.4759568

>>4756750
>>4756755
Ink for the outlines, probably poster color for the colors, it's somewhere in between a watercolor and a gouache. It's what was mainly used to paint anime backgrounds before digital.
Could also involve some mixed media with pastel, but the main portion of these pieces is painted, especially the characters.

>> No.4759576

>>4756955
I usually add a small amount of violet to my yellow to get beige. Of course, that is only quicker if you have a violet on your palette.

>> No.4760144

>>4759483
great forms

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I feel dumb for not being able to tell but what does Sushio use to color his sketches? I feel like it's either colored pencils or markers but I'm not sure. His sketches are so simplified but as an animator I envy his ability to be so loose yet solid in his drawings.

>> No.4761074
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4761074

stippling bros where we at

>> No.4761499
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4761499

hello uh does anybody to at-home printmaking? I'm having just an awful time with speedball's water-based block printing ink and cushioned baren. When just printing a lino block onto reeves, it's evident that the paper isn't catching all the ink. And then when I dampen it, it still doesn't print very well, even after I press/rub with all my might. I learned to hand-print with oil-based ink (on reeves) and it was extremely easy

>> No.4761547

>>4761499
nevermind!! I switched to a wooden spoon and now they literally print perfectly lol the speedball cushioned hand-press is just garbage

>> No.4761569

>>4760546
Coloured pencils, not the right texture for marker.

>> No.4761574

>>4761074
The tentacle texture is too much like the head texture which makes it hard to read. It’s a shame because the stippling is actually pretty good.

>> No.4761690

>>4761574
i'll remember this for the next drawing, thanks !

>> No.4762040

oil paint dudes help me out?
say you paint a sky. then you want a tree on the next plane.
you cant really wait for the sky to dry, it has t. white in it, itll be days.
so you paint a trunk into the sky? but dark on light doesnt work so well when its wet.
am i supposed to be adding more oil to help it go over without mixing?
am i supposed to allow for the trunk, paint that first, then awkwardly paint sky around it?

>> No.4762048

>>4762040
Depends on the picture you're painting, let us see it. If the trunk/tree is a major part of the composition, I usually indicate where it goes with a sketchy underpainting in fast drying transparent colours ie mixed with some turps.

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>>4762048
kinda like this, but imagine the tree on the left isnt cut off abruptly

>> No.4762068

>>4762055
I would have indicated those right hand branches, and the tree, and put sky holes back in when painting the sky, allowing for a bit darker sky colour in between branches.
Your best bet for getting the branches to look right is to paint them, and cut back into them with the sky colour to get the thinness you want, then put the leaf marks in last.

>> No.4762103

>>4762068
hm thanks.