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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4696915
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4696915

Just checking if her head looks too big or anything else is out of proportion.

>> No.4696936

>>4696915
Looks alright to me and ready for inking

>> No.4697008

>>4696936
Nice, thanks anon!

>> No.4697065
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Tried to draw fanart for HoMM2 but it is hard to reproduce with traditional media unless using oil paints.

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This is the only general that I think falls under the style of what I do, but even then im not 100% sure

>> No.4697389

>>4697375
Try reddit

>> No.4697392

>>4697389
Try fuck you

>> No.4697404

>>4697375
What you do is a mess right now. The idea is nice but your image has no focus. The only thing that can kinda work as focus is the black in the bottom right. You need to work on your line weight and plan the picture in advance not just fill the canvas to the brim. Set a nice large simple geometrical figure and try to make your ornaments work into it.

Spiral, circle, triangle and so on. You still can do a lot of different things but they should feed into each other.

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>>4697404
The idea behind it was to be a long-term stream-of-thought style illustration. I regret not seeking advice sooner, I've been working on it for quite some time, and it feels bad to stop when it is so close to completion.

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>>4697375
>>4697433
I really like it, but those three faces are the only part that really drag it down... they feel off compared to the rest of the drawing

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>> No.4697824

>>4696915
I think you just need to improve the jaw shape really, everything else looks nice.

>>4697068
Your coloring and rendering is super nice, but I feel like the perspective of the arms and head is really off. The head especially just needs a better skull shape I think, he has 0 forehead and the bangs look like they aren't attached to the head at all (almost like a wig). Did you use a 3D model as your pose reference?

>> No.4697878

>>4697824
>>4697824
>Your coloring and rendering is super nice, but I feel like the perspective of the arms and head is really off. The head especially just needs a better skull shape I think, he has 0 forehead and the bangs look like they aren't attached to the head at all (almost like a wig). Did you use a 3D model as your pose reference?
Thank you, I didn't use a model this was actually the very first pose I have ever done from imagination actually. You can see the under drawing here javascript:quote('4672761');
The shoulders, clavicle, breast line, illiac crest, etc were all on a parallel line for perspective purposes. Maybe the clothing is obscuring that but you can see where the shoulders are in the underdrawing. Maybe the hair does look floating? My idea was that there would be a small amount of wind generated from him using magic, and that would cause a small current of air to lift the hair up, tease the garment, and whip around the hair in back to create movement. If you look at the underdrawing there is a forehead, this character has massive bangs and generally shaggy hair so I tried my best to push that feeling and error on the side of the more dynamic.

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>>4697878

>> No.4697990
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WIP

>> No.4698012

>>4697524
what program and brushes are you using, anon?

>> No.4698030
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>>4695521

Another try at this drawing, this is more like what I had in my head

>> No.4698042

>>4698012
looks like a standard hard triangle brush with pressure opacity

>> No.4698100
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Practicing color

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>> No.4698151

>>4698100
that's great.

W-which materials did you study with?

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I never draw people I’ve just kind of started drawing faces, how is it looking so far?

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>>4697375
>>4697433
Are you the anon that drew this? Either way, your art's refreshing, don't listen to anybody telling you to go away.
I like the chaos in this and it feels fairly controlled, as if each element belongs to a "zone." Abstractions are juxtaposed with sudden intense black shapes that break up the monotony, notably that "eyeball." I think the drawing could have used more of those concrete black patches, around the bottom-center for instance. A good test is, How much of this is readable in the thumbnail? Only a few eyecatchers are needed and the rest can fade into abstraction.
I think in parts, you could be a little more careful with your lines. The lightbulb growing out of the flowers in the top right is an example. It's not a huge deal in a complex drawing like this, but just, if a little more care was put into the details.

>> No.4698197

>>4698151
Aside from fundies, I mostly study artists I like in twitter.
I also try to emulate the speedpaint videos I find in youtube.
I created my own way of work from there.

What surprised me is that this video here is similar to what my flow is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l60Zac7YZVY

>> No.4698206

>>4698140
woah, i'm a beg but i like this a lot?
where can i see more of u

>> No.4698216
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For some reason I am really struggling with this one even though it is pretty generic anime pose.
What can be improved?

>> No.4698294

>>4698216
stop chicken scratching

>> No.4698304

>>4698294
I really don't care for rough sketch.

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dmcv fucking sucks

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>> No.4698533

>>4698140
You probably can go with less rounded shapes on the abdomen/torso and arms/hands. Girl is too thin for implying fat.

>> No.4698564

>>4698321
nice floating heads nerd

>> No.4698578

>>4698564
heh, gottem.

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>>4696762
shit! i missed an entire thread again...
i'm gonna make a twitter this weekend. (twitter is the new tumblr, right?)

>> No.4698736

>>4698321
Is this all you do?

>> No.4698752

>>4698564
>>4698736
the next level of ic critique is complaining about the things you don't draw more than the things you do

>> No.4698757

>>4698752
Just a bunch of floating heads doesnt lead to much to critique

>> No.4698764

>>4698757
mm ye but why you complaining about it tho

>> No.4698769

>>4698764
Cause I want to

>> No.4698775

>>4698769
seethe

>> No.4698785

>>4698775
lol

>> No.4698786

>>4698785
>

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>>4698656
NICE

>> No.4699036

>>4698321
A

>> No.4699061

>>4698140
long girl is long

>> No.4699087

>>4698197
Thankf for you answer, appreciate it

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>>4698216
Which part of the pose are you struggling with? it looks pretty good to me, aside from some very slight stuff that would probably be handled in clean up. I had a go at the pose anyway in case it might help.
I had her lean forward a bit and tilted her shoulders away from us so it looks like she's putting her weight on her arm. I brought the far arm up to make a cleaner silhouette, too. I think the perspective on her chest is a little off, if we're eye-level with her then her chest should be tilted the other way. If you try to sit on your legs like she is, you'll notice too that your feet rest underneath your butt and that they don't extend so far out. all pretty minor stuff, I think you're fine to continue it into clean up/colour as is

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pirate guy

>> No.4699195
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>>4698374
hmm... better or worse? Honest question. Im not the original artist.

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borger

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>>4699195
better

>> No.4699227
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4699227

How do I get dnd nerds to hire me for their character art?

>> No.4699289

>>4699227
blog?

>> No.4699373

>>4699195
Worse.

>> No.4699449

>>4699289
https://www.instagram.com/thehalfdigestedboy/
Bless

>> No.4699476
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>> No.4699511

>>4699195
Congrats, you turned her into an oblivion character

>> No.4699629

>>4699227
Post over at /tg/ or in /vg/ game threads. Post your OC when you make a post or draw a couple of anons characters for them. When they ask where the art is from or where you post your stuff direct them to you.

>> No.4699670

>>4699476
holy shit his feet look like hooves why does this keep happening to me

>> No.4699692

>>4699449
>he's an acab retard
almost followed you

>> No.4699697

>>4699195
Looks better, don't listen to these subhumans.

>> No.4699715
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I did another drawing trying to capture the style from FLCL. crossposted from /asg/
>>4699195
I think either works, if I look at the original for a while and then switch to yours the features seem too far apart, but then if I look at yours for a while and switch to the original the features on the OP look all scrunched together.
>>4699197
great style, burger looks JUICY. I don't think you need quite so many little marks all over, looks maybe a teensy bit too messy.
>>4699227
awesome drawing, super killer design sense. you gotta put yourself out there. this style would definitely do well with comix-aligned dnd players and people who buy dungeon synth cassettes
>>4699476
looks pretty good for a model sheet, the muscles seem well researched. am I looking at it wrong, or does he have four arms? having one pair lifted up would make it more clear, I think

>> No.4699718

>>4699715
6 arms

>> No.4699753
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>>4699718
>>4699476
I think I can see it, how there's the elbows on the outside and a second set of arms on the inside, but I don't think it reads super easily. maybe look up a reference of Machamp, he only has four arms and they're always doing different things/in different places to make it super clear.
also I did a super tiny nitpicky drawing regarding his fists. when you make a fist, your index finger actually gets tucked in behind the webbing of your thumb to obscure it slightly. look up some pictures of that or do it with your own hand for reference. hope this drawing helps too maybe.

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>>4696762
she's mean, she's had a bad weekend, and someone's getting beat up for it.

>> No.4699938

>>4699935
This is nice. Now you need to draw the beatings.

>> No.4700063

>>4699715
Blessings brother

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help, the pose sucks and I don't know why

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>>4698030

>> No.4700232

>>4700220
Dope, pixel brush always looks juicy

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>> No.4700401

>>4699130
Thanks a lot. Though I've already translated it to watercolor paper with slight fixes.

>> No.4700409
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i did a study

>> No.4700421

>>4700315
comfy

>> No.4700435

>>4699195
Theres no right answer when it comes to stylization

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>> No.4700846

>>4700315
That's a cool beetle drawing...but is that "juice" that's spilling out?

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>>4699715
thanks dude. the burger is probably the most rendered thing i've done in awhile lmao.

>> No.4701018

>>4700447
right looks haggard. why draw a boy if not to draw a cute one?

>> No.4701047

>>4699227
DND players and dungeon masters commission several things.
1- art of characters and NPCs. most common obviously. you draw typical adventurers, manly human barbarians, sneaky elf thiefs, cat person bards, sometimes anime and furry people or whatever but theyre in leather or plate armor.
2- artwork of places, cities, dungeons, whatever. if you can draw detailed maps of countries, continents, and cities people will pay for this too. but sometimes DMs want landscape drawings when their players come across a new city for the first time, from the horizon, or they want to show their players what the inside of the inn looks like, or what the bustling street looks like in the capital city they arrived in. etc etc. Sometimes applies to hazardous areas, dungeons and the like
3- art of villains/enemies. can be giants, monsters, sphinxes, liches, evil wizards, werewolves, whatever
4- art of battles/triumphs/tragedies. basically put everything above into one image. if some really big event happened in the game, sometimes people will want to pay someone to draw that event, like a character sacrificing themselves to heroically slay a dragon

>> No.4701301

>>4701047
This is really useful, thanku friend, I think focusing on character interaction and framing them within a larger interesting composition is next up.
generally there’s an instinct to focus too much on figures and portraits without thinking about storytelling, settings and comp enough desu

>> No.4701303

>>4699715
I absolutely thought this was just a cap from flcl until I read the post, good stuff

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>>4698374
tried as well

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>> No.4702172

>>4697375
Sasha?

>> No.4702189
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>> No.4702209

>>4702123
Scary, but cool. Colors are good

>> No.4702234
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I know something's wrong but I can't put my finger on it, I want to do the final outline but this is not good enough, any help appreciated

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Guys!? Help

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Guys? Help, fuck!

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>>4700232
thanks a lot anon!

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>>4702234
nvm I think I fixed it myself

>> No.4702321
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I will never get better at values,

>> No.4702324

>>4702321
not with that kinda attitude

>> No.4702326

>>4702321
I'm not an expert but aren't value studies supposed to use FLAT areas of gray (and try to make it read clearly with just that)? I see a lot of highlighting everywhere, this looks nothing like the value studies I've seen from other artists.

>> No.4702327

>>4702321
Loser

>> No.4702328
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I spent an unreasonable amount of time on this one, only to completely give up once I reached the background elements, haha.

>> No.4702333

>>4702324
>>4702327
>be anon
>see people trying their best needing help
>ignore them
>someone complains
>REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
every time

>> No.4702338

>>4702189
Good job anon, I wish I could draw like this

>> No.4702339

>>4702327
thanks

>>4702326
Well it's not really a study, but also you don't have to do the thing where you break it into 5 shades or whatever, there's countless artists who just keep adding and subtracting until they're done. I've tried the other way and it usually comes out even worse.

>> No.4702344

>>4702333
The irony

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>>4702189
really cool lineweight, blog? I'd love to see coloured pieces from you
>>4700999
that's a really solid piece so far. great work
>>4700220
this kind of style is always so charming, simple yet effective, I really dig it anon

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>>4702189
Are you?

>> No.4702408

>>4702321
Don't be scared of really dark dark and really light lights. stop using so many grays you dummy

>> No.4702458
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Sketch and reference
I changed it a bit tho

>> No.4702476

>>4702408
But I did and it just looked splotchy!

>> No.4702491

>>4702393
Thank you! I think yours is pretty clean and well done.. shading specially great

only issue i would point out is maybe the ears are too small and one is bigger than the other... but her face is pretty appealing.

>> No.4702515

>>4702476
Now it looks fujxin splotchy you tard, try harder

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>>4702321
look up "value grouping", might help you

>> No.4702548

>>4702491
oh, it's incredible how I didn't notice it earlier. Thanks a lot for pointing it out, I really appreciate it!

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>> No.4702835

>>4702407
Not me, sorry.

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>>4702393
Thanks!
My coloring game is still pretty weak (or at least not at the level I wish it to be), but here's one I did some time ago.

>> No.4702845

>>4702838
that stark white rimlight isn't great

>> No.4702855

>>4702845
It could definitely be better. Thanks for the feedback!

>> No.4702913

>>4702407
yes, me

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>> No.4702954

>>4702838
yeah I see what you mean. I still think it's very good, but you could go much harder on that shadows. But overall really nice work, if you have a twitter/insta I'd love to follow you =)

>> No.4702957

>>4702954
I don't post that often, but the interest is greatly appreciated. Thanks! ^_^
Insta: @mackenziko

>> No.4702990

>>4702667
Looks neat, do you have a blog?

>>4702838
Not the anon that requested it, but the colors do look nice
Maybe it's just me, but her face looks more like Brigitte from Overwatch. Not that I have a problem with that, in fact Brigitte would look great in Mai's outfit
Do you have a site where you upload your stuff besides artstation?

>> No.4702993

>>4702838
Soul
>>4702667
Souless

>> No.4703049

>>4702458
Personally I think you should have saved her expression. It's too generic and neutral with open eyes.

>> No.4703054

>>4702990
I purged my Twitter account, and kept my Instagram for stalking purposes mostly.
Deactivated FB and use it only for the Messenger function.

I was never even that great with the social media game, but I found myself getting too obsessed with numbers and getting less productive. ^_^;

>> No.4703079

>>4698321
you might benefit from stepping away from simplification, your drawings are nice but they don’t feel like theyre the best you can do, and you’ve been doing that for months now

>> No.4703098

>>4702123
you could maybe tone a lot of the highlights back a bit, they’re a bit overbearing right now

>> No.4703111

>>4702321
I like the idea and composition, don't give up yet.

>> No.4703119

>>4702667
>no nose
why you gotta do this to machiru....

>> No.4703127

>>4702321
This could be a seriously cool piece. I want to see this finished.

Use the theme to your advantage. Make the background smoky or add lots of smog.
Remember to use atmospheric perspective also. The foreground should be the darkest, most colorful section of your piece. The farthest buildings should be the lightest

>> No.4703128
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4703128

>>4702234
I think your drawing could benefit by pushing your character's pose a bit further.
It's not THE way to fix drawings, but it's a nice method to rely on.

The pic I added are just suggestions, but hopefully it helps.

>> No.4703141

>>4703128
Not that Anon. Is there a way to pay someone to redline/do stuff like this for my drawings? I am sick of never getting redlines/crits and I am losing my mind because I can't see what I'm doing wrong

>> No.4703150

>>4703128
excellent redline, Anon!

>> No.4703288

>>4703141
I think specifically asking for a redline when you post your work helps. Also pointing out which parts in particular you're having trouble with

>> No.4703296

>>4703288
I noticed that people who post to the draw thread, alt thread, and sexual alt thread get redlines much more often than in the /beg/ thread. But I'm still very much a /beg/ and I don't want to post art where it doesn't belong

>> No.4703319
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:^)

>> No.4703325
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>>4700315
cool.

>> No.4703330

>>4703128
Wow, thank you. Yes, I realized the pose was stiff and lacked energy and flow. I was too focused on cosntructing a correct model and I completely forgot. Awesome anon.

>> No.4703336

>>4703325
Pull the ear down.

>> No.4703346

>>4703296
>weebs and coomers are more involved in 4chan activities than others
color me surprised

>> No.4703348

>>4703336
Not that anon. I think the ear is correct, but the eye is wrong

>> No.4703399

>>4703348
Eye is bad, yeah. I became very lazy with faces.

>> No.4703429
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>>4696762
Posted this last thread, but I've been busy with a move so got nothing else to show.

>> No.4703440

>>4703429
it's barely even /ic/, but good aesthetics nonetheless. I think you could get a decent following and merch sales with this kind of content if you figure out a cohesive branding.

>> No.4703441

>>4703346
What?

>> No.4703447

>>4703440
Not sure what you mean, but thank you?

>> No.4703449

>>4703447
it's an edit of various manga panels and other assorted materials, right?

>> No.4703466

>>4703447
I mean the doorway is, but I drew the majority of the image myself. Hell, I even took a few of the pictures in the montage.

>> No.4703471

>>4703466
meant for
>>4703449

>> No.4703523
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4703523

Still has flaws but can't waste too much time on a single piece, gotta go fast.

>> No.4703537
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4703537

at least I drew something today

>> No.4703542

>>4702533
>>4703127
Thank you, I might just lasso things and play with the the brightness/contrast. It always messes me up that things in the foreground are darker than the background, but they can also be lighter.

>>4703111
Thanks, that means a lot.

>> No.4703544

>>4702949
I see a future for you as a graphic designer for a corporation who wants to appear "woke"

>> No.4703562
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>>4703537

>> No.4703594
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>> No.4703618

>>4703325
Blog?

>> No.4703628
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4703628

any critique ?

>> No.4703642

>>4703325
fix the face
she looks a star trek space aspie dyke

>> No.4703666

>>4702993
Souless

>> No.4703673

>>4697433
i like it anon

>> No.4703674

>>4697488
fucking loved those games... wish they'd make new ones.. or if sony could get the rights to jsrf and put in psstore

>> No.4703686

>>4703628
Very bad perspective. Cut the image off at the top third to make it landscape

>> No.4703692

>>4703666
Souless

>> No.4703710 [DELETED] 
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>>4698374
I tried it too

>> No.4703723
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>>4698374
>>4699195
>>4701767
Is this better
also not original artist

>> No.4703735

stop fucking up that man's drawing you retards

>> No.4703744

>>4703544
No I don’t want to be woke. The girl was just in a pose book I found. My biggest influences are weird/funny/crude alt-manga.

>> No.4703765
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4703765

Tried a new medium so this was a bit tricky. I could've done a better job with the hair as well

>>4703049
Thanks for the feedback anon, I'll keep that in mind.

>> No.4703769

>>4702949
I wish i could draw like this man, i love how each pose looks different but still recognisable and unique where nothing gets lost

>> No.4703773

>>4703642
>star trek space aspie dyke
So, s-tier waifu status?

>> No.4703777

>>4703744
The first thing that came to my mind was "woke" when i saw it as well. You might want to work on your style a bit more and learning more anatomy wouldnt hurt either.

>> No.4703780

>>4703769
Thanks Anon! I have practice with making comics and just trying different poses.

>> No.4703781

>>4703773
only if the s in s-tier stands for shit

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this is probably some of the best art i think i made

>> No.4703784
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>>4703782

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>> No.4703788
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>> No.4703789

>>4703325
Seconding >>4703618

>>4703319
Took me a second. Nice

>>4703786
I like it

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>> No.4703797

>>4703794
I get that your art is trying to be deep but the anime style ruins it

>> No.4703799
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>>4703797

I can't help it

ever since i took 3 hits of acid on top of a shroom chocolate in college

well i haven't been convinced the acid ever left my system and now my brain forgot how to draw realistically which i could all my childhood

pic related was me in high school doing a study of my dads office

i peaked too early man it friggin sucks

ive tried drawing upside down and everything, i can't shake the stupid anime acid eyes

>> No.4703811

>>4703765
very cute

>> No.4703824

>>4703799
Пиздишь

>> No.4703828
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4703828

how do i improve this

>> No.4703874
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4703874

Damn chinese paper

>> No.4703882

>>4700185
who's your inspo, I feel like I can guess it but I wanna hear you say it

>> No.4703937

>>4700999
>>4698180
>>4702123
>>4702393
>>4702458
u guys have blog

>> No.4703948

>>4703937
@grave.dweller99 on instagram

>> No.4704012

>>4703054
Sad to hear that, but understandable

>> No.4704023

>>4703128
I really like those poses (and style). Blog?

>>4703874
Fineliner + Watercolor or markers? Blog?

>> No.4704035
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4704035

>>4703882
I haven’t really been seeking inspiration from other artists lately to be honest. I’ve been pretty happy with my stuff so I haven’t needed to find outside inspo. Who did you have in mind?

>> No.4704039
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4704039

Put some colors on my Psyclocke tribute. What do you think fellas?

>> No.4704091

>>4704012
>>4703937
>>4704023
>>4702393
It's @mackenziko on Insta. :)

>> No.4704126

god fucking dammit clayton is here isn't he

>> No.4704132

>>4704126
Clayton who?

>> No.4704137

>>4704132
from the fgc, saw he just liked kenzie's recent post, drawing some conclusions

>> No.4704159

>>4704126
>>4704137
Take your meds, schizo fuck.

>> No.4704189

>>4704159
kys

>> No.4704229

>>4704189
after you

>> No.4704279
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4704279

What a rough ink job, biting the learning curve with new tools

Color tomorrow

>> No.4704325

>>4704279
Nice!

>> No.4704400

>>4704279
Now I can see the appeal of your work.

>> No.4704421

>>4704279
nice, how did you get that good at working the planes? was it drawabox or something else?

>> No.4704423

>>4704279
Nice. What did you ink this with?

>> No.4704468

>>4703723
Worst of them all

>> No.4704663

>>4704035
amazing... i love your stuff!!

>>4704279
great job!! looks very appealing

>> No.4704664

>>4704035
Finally something different.

>> No.4704688

>>4704023
Watercolors.
@HMurabito on twittor

>> No.4704710

>>4703937
@manu.stuff in instagram
@manuartx on twitter

>> No.4704754

>>4703799
But that does look like a highschooler painting also. How about you actually try to improve instead of a excusing yourself with hurd hurd deep

>> No.4704776
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4704776

wip C&C

>> No.4704794

>>4699195
Better objectively

>> No.4704938
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4704938

The work continues. Most recent pages.

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4704941

>>4704938

>> No.4704942
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>> No.4704944
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>>4700447
gave up on fire

>>4701018
i was going for cute and haggard :c

>>4703765
blog

>>4698156
also blog

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>>4704999
meant to post one without fire

>> No.4705050 [DELETED] 

>>4698156
>>4703765
blog

>>4700447
gave up on fire

>>4701018
i was going for haggard and cute :c

>> No.4705053
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4705053

>>4698156
>>4703765
blog

>>4700447 (You)
gave up on the fireball

>>4701018
i was going for haggard and cute :c

>> No.4705192

>>4703735
His drawing is 60% forhead you artlet

>> No.4705222
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4705222

a quick drawing

>> No.4705261
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>> No.4705295

>>4705222
Cute!

>> No.4705484
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4705484

>>4705261

>> No.4705559
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4705559

sketch for fun

>> No.4705666

>>4705484

>>4705261 here, should I take this as fanart lol

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4705668

drawthread requests

>> No.4705718

>>4697068
the mouth looks a little too big

>> No.4705769
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4705769

空の大きなコンサート

>> No.4705771

>>4700115
the pose seems fine to me

>> No.4705778

>>4700185
aren't we seeing to much of the top of her head? her face seems to be facing us.

>> No.4705783

>>4700409
well, she looks high as fuck

>> No.4705795
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4705795

>>4704279
Done, but I want to do the shoes and skirt again. The coloring was going well until I did the hearts and the moons, I should have just left it blank.

>>4704325
>>4704400
>>4704663
Thanks

>>4704421
Trial and error I guess, there’s a lot of fudge work in there that is not really correct

>>4704423
Just got a rapidograph and was trying it out on Bristol board

>> No.4705797

>>4702189
the way that the thumb is holding the sword is a little weird, and I not sure if we should be seeing so much of the ass cheek from this view, it looks almost facing forward, because we can see the start of the right cheek in the middle of the leg, but it is hard to tell the position because the shirt

>> No.4705799
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4705799

leighton studies
>>4703079
>you might benefit from posting in a different general
nice try bubba

>> No.4705807

>>4702393
I think the hair should have a little more volume

>> No.4705813

>>4702458
I think that drawing the lower legs with straight lines would fit more your style. I mean without the bumps to represent the knee or the calf muscle.

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>> No.4705839

>>4703797
the problem isn't anime, the problem is that it is beg as fuck

>> No.4705849

>>4705222
if not by that hand it would be 10/10.

>> No.4705850
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4705850

I like this thread, have a piece

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>>4705824

>> No.4705880
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>>4705824
I think the head is a little too wide.

>> No.4705910

>>4705850
her eye is to forward. but since it is not a human I don't know if it is intentional.

>> No.4705949
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4705949

>>4696762
In concept for a character right now and just want to know if this is a good position to design from? (As for why the pose is so boring, that's pretty obvious. I mean.. its character design..)

>> No.4706076
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>> No.4706096

>>4706076
I like it, but that space right under her boobs looks all sorts of messed up lighting-wise.

>> No.4706108
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4706108

>>4705949
ok welp here's some doo-doo character design art. I need to work on coloring and clothes physics so badly :C

>> No.4706125

>>4705880
mad hatch!

>> No.4706129
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4706129

This is from when I discovered that HVC exists

>> No.4706141

>>4704035
Good fucking shit, blog?

>> No.4706151
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4706151

starting this one

>> No.4706256

>>4706151
how does she carry the dogs on her bike

>> No.4706276
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4706276

>>4703937
@sandsocks on twt

>> No.4706297
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4706297

>>4702949
Here’s more from me.

>> No.4706307

>>4705222
saved!

>> No.4706328

>>4706151
nice composition and perspective. you got a blog?

>> No.4706331

>>4706307
You don't just archive these entire threads to your pc and keep them ordered by date with an individual folder attatched for the max'd res images?

>> No.4706353

>>4706331
not really..?

>> No.4706370
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4706370

>>4705795
guilty pleasure drawing - i just wanted to draw it again

>> No.4706386
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>> No.4706411

>>4706256
good question, I think im going to give them a harness and a carry box on the back
>>4706328
thanks anon, you can see more of my work here: marcoluna.co

>> No.4706451

>>4706386
Yes. Keep drawing cute girls. Fuck the guy that says you're not interesting with a rake

>> No.4706454

>>4706386
Thin ice

>> No.4706465

>>4706386
MODS
MODS
MODS

>> No.4706470

>>4706386
wtf dude

kys

>> No.4706471

>>4706386
Enjoy your mini vacation from this place ;)

>> No.4706477

>>4706386
MOOOOOOODS

>> No.4706506
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>> No.4706511

>>4706386
The entirety of her figure including her hair has been petrified with wood.

>> No.4706512

Is there a single person on this board that isn't a pedophile?

>> No.4706516

>>4706512
Shh don’t say the P word, it pisses them off.

>> No.4706519

There is a drawing of two horses with erect, throbbing penises in the /salt/ thread and no one said anything about it despite zoophilia.
Pray I don't meet you cherrypicking niggers irl.

>> No.4706525

>>4706512
Yeah it's me

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4706554

>>4700999
would it offend you if used your nice image with a shitty meme on top of it?

>> No.4706557

>>4706386
blog?

>> No.4706561

>>4706454
>>4706465
>>4706470
>>4706471
>>4706477
>>4706512
>>4706516
I’ll delete it, on the condition that at least one of you posts your work.

>> No.4706565

>>4706506
I like it, got a blog?

>> No.4706572

>>4706386
WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER BODDYYYY YYIIIIIKESSSS BRO

>> No.4706581

>>4706554
ah. Now THIS is true art.

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>> No.4706694

>>4706386
It is rare to see a man of culture here. Don't listen to brainwashed gays and please continue.

>> No.4706771

>>4706386
A man of culture indeed, but the tummy looks awful like a saggy skinbag. I get it you were going for looking realy soft and delicate, came out way too fucking soft like somebody stole her guts from under her skin.

Find some beach fashion reference. Or c*ndydoll

>> No.4706775
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4706775

>>4706771
GTFO PEDO

>> No.4706778

>>4706386
>>4706771
Also place the beasts way lower, the top of her tits should be where the bottom on your pic is.

>>4706775
Make me, normie.

>> No.4706786

>>4706778
You alredy did it. Go fuck your underage siblings, sweet home alabamer.

>> No.4706790

>>4706778
BEASTS ARE LOWER, FAR WAY DEEPER IN THE DUNGEON

>> No.4706792

>>4706778
Burn in hell pedoshit

>> No.4706801

>>4706792
Agreed

>> No.4706809

>>4706801
>>4706792
>>4706786
>>4706775
Kek I didn't know the normie problem got this bad. Gotta start drawing lolies too to piss you off.

>> No.4706816

>>4706809
Body of hers hadnt reached reproductive stage, how you can even coom on this.
Fapped on furries, futas, etc.
So the matter of "normieness" is determined only by fact do they fap on lolis or not?

>> No.4706820

>>4706809
They are just trolls though. I doubt there are people here who seriously have problem with distinguishing drawings and reality.

>> No.4706826

>>4706816
I know it is hard to believe when you are brainwashed especially but you don't necessary need to fap on something to appreciate it.

>> No.4706831

>>4706809
Gonna be living rent free in your head for a while, pedo.

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4706832

>>4706386
I'd say when rendering the forms, dont overstate each bump- try to keep the larger cylindrical form of the torso, and use smaller value variations and edges to define the bumps. Good test is to check the thumbnail to see if it reads how you intend it to.
pic i've smoothed everything out but in principle, the form values should not be far from this.

>> No.4706845
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4706845

Did a study of a wrestler I like.
I have a hard time with colors, so painting is something I've been doing to escape my comfort zone.
How'd I do?

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>>4706832
Ah, this is helpful thanks a lot. I do tend to over complicate in the painting process. Made some changes myself, gonna leave it at this and move on, but thanks for the input.

>> No.4706861

>>4706519
Really? Then go report that shit, dipshit, i’m not a coom brain retard like you who uses /salt/.

>> No.4706873

>>4706519
Salt is the garbage bin for the ugly shit, tublr nose gay shit, gay countriballs and the rest of the cringe.

Lolies are fine here.

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>>4706832
Ah I see, this is helpful. I do tend to overdo it when painting. Thanks for the advice, made some changes accordingly. Leaving it here and moving on.

>> No.4706887

>>4706873
Go ahead and post it here :^).

>> No.4706905

>>4706561
>Lolifag and PYW crab
You're the king of trash

>> No.4706911

>>4706589
Could just be me but the rifle looks a little bent

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>>4706905

>> No.4706949

>>4706938
Wow the actual retard posted a naked loli. Enjoy your ban :^)

>> No.4706954

>>4706565
@lunydoobles on twitter

>> No.4706966

>>4706949
>i-if he gets banned we win, right?
you still haven't posted work, ngmi-kun :)

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Holy SHIT
Crybaby retards fucking MOGGED by actual artist LoliChad
All they can do is respond with insults as they cower in fear, barking from the safety of their den

>> No.4706972

>>4706966
>Y-you haven’t posted your work, so I win
Your response is to tell others to pyw when told you’re getting banned for breaking the rules? Fucking hilarious

>> No.4706976

lmafo dare

>> No.4706981

>>4705795

You're getting good, tableguy.

>> No.4706985

>>4706506

Beautiful. It looks like traditional media but is it really? I would love to see more by you.

>> No.4706987

>>4706972
He's proving the point that the people that rave and rant about pointless things and arbitrarily change rules to suit themselves are SHIT at the activity that they're raving about.
You are GARBAGE.
YOU'RE A FUCKING PIN BRAINED HILLBILLY LIVING ON A FARM.
WE ARE GODS COMPARED TO YOU.
YOU ARE FIGHTING A WAR WITH NO END YOU FUCKING SLAVE.

>> No.4706993

>>4706987
Anon, you’re overthinking this shit. Quit acting like a schizo.

>> No.4707009

>>4706993
dilate, etc.

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>> No.4707024

>>4707016
the body proportions are too tumblr for my taste and it's clear that your fundies are shaky at best, but the face is cute and you have a nice unified aesthetic.

>> No.4707029

>>4707009
Seethe

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>>4707024
what do you mean too tumblr? Like too lanky?
I still hate that i cant find a decent balance between anime-ish and realism , and my line weight is shit XD

>> No.4707038

>>4706985
thanks anon, clipstudio's got some nice textures for its brushes

>> No.4707056

>>4706809
>Your a normie if your not a pedophile
Neck yourself.

>> No.4707063

>>4707037
I mean it's got the typical broad, blocky man shoulders that don't connect properly to the neck. the one you posted here is a lot better though, so whatever.

>> No.4707066

<tumblr tier draws appear after tumblr tier replies
Dios mio

>> No.4707089

>>4707023
blog

>> No.4707103

>>4707089
milchtu-ete on tumblr

>> No.4707110

>>4707103
or rotten.milchtuete on insta i post more on there

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>>4706966
Based

>> No.4707146

>>4707123
You do realize you can reset your IP in 5 seconds and post again, right? There is a reason "janny works for free" is a meme.

>> No.4707149

>>4707056
It is pretty much the same that "you are pedophile if you don't hate lolis" you two-faced faggots using though?

>> No.4707154

>>4705222
Please y beg of you! Fix that hand it's really cute! Fix the fuckin hand!

>> No.4707156

>>4706108
No anon, do some live drawing studies, read a book, try harder

>> No.4707159

>>4706129
No neck, down syndrome proportions. Cute eyes tho

>> No.4707202

>>4706386
redditors be seething, absolutely based.

>> No.4707206

>>4707149
>Uses absolutes
>Gets upset when someone else uses absolutes
You pedoniggers get so assblasted when people don't want your mental illness around, its hilarious.

>> No.4707244

>>4707206
Did you forget to take your pills today? I don't even understand what are you talking about.

>> No.4707246

>>4707159
Thanks I'll have it in consideration for next drawings.

>> No.4707257

>>4707244
>Pedonigger is fucking retarded.
If your going to sit on a board and argue with people all day over whether or not people should tolerate your mental illness, then you might want to grow some braincells.

>> No.4707259

>>4707257
did you switch from lolinigger to pedonigger, furry friend?

>> No.4707291

>>4707257
Who are you talking with you schizo?

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>> No.4707410

>>4706386
unironically based

>> No.4707422

>>4706886
that looks a lot better, very nice

>> No.4707505

>>4707257
Looks like the retards from /dad/ are leaking out. Go back to your containment general, furfaggot.

>> No.4707537

>>4706911
I'll have to straighten them out when cleaning up.
Thanks for the feedback! ^_^

>> No.4707549

>>4707149
I dont hate loli's myself, but even though I haven't even done a single commission yet and still have far more practice to do, I wouldnt make a loli for anything below 1k. I seriously don't want to give pedos fap material and sacrifice my dignity unless I need money for my financial situation. The fact you'd do it for fun is.. Well, let's just say not normal and its more than just "not hating" loli's.

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>>4707549
You're right.
He's a chad just like the rest of us.

>> No.4707633

Furfags and tra*sfaggots still seeting hours later.

>> No.4707656

>>4707633
Furfag here, please don't lump me with transfaggots.

>> No.4707893

>>4707390
Based non-pedophile anon

>> No.4707905

go go go >>4707902

>> No.4707999

>>4707146
if you have dsl. but noone is that poor anymore are they?

>> No.4708023

>>4707999

No nigga turn on/off airplane mode.