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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>>4641315
drawing a did during a drug trip.

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trying out a tablet

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>> No.4641470

is it normal for the pen to leave scratch marks? or am i just going to hard on it?

>> No.4641476

>>4641470
You're pressing too hard.

>> No.4641498

>>4641315
I can't believe ren got OP twice

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idk

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>> No.4641586

am i ruining this thread with non related anime shit?

>> No.4641615

>>4641586
Nah it's fine

>> No.4641655

>>4641586
diversity is our strength

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>>4641586

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Tear me apart please

>> No.4641819

>>4641813
Pose is a bit stiff.

>> No.4641831

>>4641813
not enought cock is hanging out

>> No.4641845

>>4641813
That hand position is a little awkward and impossible for what he's doing, don't you think?

>> No.4641900

>>4641813
what a nice fluffer

>> No.4641938

>>4641315
And this faggot got to be op again, great. I can't stand looking at his ugly faggot ass drawings.

>> No.4641948

>>4641813
His left hand doesn't go into his forearm smoothly. Looks like it's attached by a third bone. His right arm is too short on the forearm and too long on the upper arm.

>> No.4641979

>>4641414
dude drugs lmao xdd

>> No.4642094
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>> No.4642110

>>4642094
sex

>> No.4642228
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>>4640777
>didn't like your 'rainbow' shit to begin with but its grown on me
Heh, I think I was over doing the rainbows at first. I like flying under the radar, getting (You)s is rarely a good thing

> smaller sets or anything you highly recommend
I bought ~150 copics off ebay for like $400 way back. It was a good investment. Stylefile colors dont look remotely close to the cap color, they also set into a very different shade, and they are inconsistent marker to marker. They are cheap and good for sketching and quick draws.

> light blues and purples
My go to blues and purples: B60, B00, B01, B02, B93, B24, B99, BG72, BG78, V05, V06, V12, V91, V95, V99. I feel like blue purple and orange have the highest dynamic range in color. Red/Pink/Green/Yellow all look the same to me.

>>4640233
Played around the colors a bit

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Posted this twice and still no feedback anything appreciated

>> No.4642350

>>4642228
What's with all the shovels lately?
p.s.
draw more robots

>> No.4642375

>>4642340
too cute for this board.

>> No.4642546
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new style test
face cute?

>> No.4642562

>>4642546
face cute

shade smooth, shade nice

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>>4642562
thanks here is more detail
i think this is enough detail

sorry for only face but people complain all the time so i wanted to find improvement

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putting style into practice

>> No.4642698

>>4642546
Oh I think you're on to something here! It's a lot cuter than your previous attempts, asukafag. I think the hairline is a little high for where the face is sitting but that's my only gripe. Keep working hard!

>> No.4642710

>>4642675
Something about this feels a little off. It looks like she's pulled her head off of her body and is holding it over her chest.

>> No.4642744

>>4642675
This nigger is really trying. You gonna go far kid

>> No.4642797

>>4642585
>>4642546
the less detailed nose makes it cuter. Nice job

>> No.4642897

Any recommendations on resources/tutorials/vids/books for stylized character design? For an action adventure game, think retro Zelda.

>> No.4642905

>>4642675
You've been improving a lot over the past few months. I believe in you Dairenke!

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>> No.4642927

>>4642925
ummm hot?

>> No.4642950

>>4642925
fUCK I WANT A BEEFCAKE BF

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>> No.4642976

>>4642925
good shit right there

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>>4642228
Fucking lace shirt and crocheted socks. I wish she was wearing no shirt and fishnets

>>4642350
Shovels are from animal crossing, there are only 4 tools worth posing with

> draw more robots
I’m going to try to finish 30 of these outfit drawings, then force myself to move on

>> No.4642994

>>4641498
the ego rush he gets from this will keep him from drawing anything for the next two months lel

>> No.4643031
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So I am studying anatomy and doing a study on a body builder and was curious if this is correct? The subject has very little fat and I cant tell. Does the Latissimus dorsi fit underneath the brachais and above the tricep? The Teres Major also attaches just above the Latissimus dorsi as well right?

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>> No.4643033

>>4642973
her eyes are looking past me not at me

>> No.4643035

>>4643032
cute

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>>4643031
Why are you asking this here? Anyways, hope pic related helps.

>> No.4643056

>>4643048
What is the best thread to ask this in? I didn't see one, and then decided since I am used to posting here this would be the best spot. I get that most people here have no fucking clue about anatomy (sorry guys) but the few that do are very very skilled.

>> No.4643059

>>4643056
Honestly, I don't really know. Probably better to just make your own thread. There's plenty of threads out there wasting space anyways.

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>>4643031
Yes, the lats originate along the spine and waist and inserts at the humerus, slipping in between the coracobrachialis and the triceps. The diagram you posted is somewhat strange, I don't think I've ever seen it rendered like that. It's not wrong, I don't think, but on every figure aside from the muscular one it looks kinda funky.

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>>4643071
Here's a photo I found that shows it off pretty decently. You can see the biceps, the coracobrachialis just below it, and then the lats coming in front of the triceps, making a triangle for the armpit.

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>>4643033
so something like this?

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>>4643071
>>4643077
Not the guy you're responding to, but this is very helpful, thank you.

>>4643083
See pic. I don't really know any tricks other than when one eye is touching the edge, the other is most likely in the middle. Obviously, they should be independently focusing on the object in question (the viewer), but in your case she looks cross-eyed like she trying to look at something close to her face.

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>>4643105
>>4643083
Quick shop

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love the way this looks any idea how it was made?

>> No.4643150

>>4643031
>brachais
Coracoid Brachais thats what I was thinking about.

>> No.4643155

>>4643077
>>4643071
Thank you senpai, I am doing Hamptons anatomy program and thats one of the things he actually leaves out.

>> No.4643167

>>4643105
ah i see
>>4643126
yes it does look more natural thanks

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help me

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maryo

>> No.4643277
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someone who is good at color and light please help

>> No.4643470

>>4643277
Hard to look at because of how saturated the red is. Even if you want a bright red wall, don't go that extreme. Reserve extreme saturation for small areas.

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>> No.4643503

>>4643138
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/643777020

>> No.4643571

>>4642375
facts, that gets ignored while trash like >>4642925 and >>4642675 gets praised. you’re wasting your time here if you draw anything besides dick and trannies

>> No.4643644

>>4642340
He's too cute. Can I draw him?

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>> No.4643681

>>4643680
You're getting there. Her eyes look droopy af though like she's drunk or something

>> No.4643684

>>4643477
cutie

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>> No.4643810

>>4643138
>any idea how it was made?
Nobody talks like that, you knew there is a twitch vod, why the fuck would you do that?

>> No.4643822

>>4643680
Now work on more realistic hair.

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cute boy break!!!!!!!!!

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help

>> No.4644535

>>4643032
Aww cute

>> No.4644541

>>4644501
Thought you had to be 18+ to use this site.

>> No.4644554

>>4644541
what?

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>> No.4644756

>>4643766
Love this
Loved your Mushroom girls
My fav is still the chubby black chick and the muscle russians though

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4644767

>>4641315
I was feeling confident until I saw the end product.

>> No.4644770
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How are the poses? how can I make it more interesting as I go?

>> No.4644774

The standards for /alt/ is even lower than before....

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>>4642340
i like. but i think you can improve the hat/hair (idk).

>>4643032
nice.

>>4643477
i like your style!

>>4643680
this dude is getting really good. keep it up!

>>4644046
...you should really try improve your folds.

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>>4642985
I keep overworking the coloring and making it muddy. Gotta move on

>> No.4644885

>>4644461
Cute boys!

>> No.4645413
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>> No.4645427

>>4645413
Lovely

>> No.4645544
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Testing character design stuff.
This guy walks up to your gf and slaps her ass, what do you do?

>> No.4645556

>>4645544
pls take me instead

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>> No.4645568
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>> No.4645601

>>4645568
cute!

>>4645544
I am the gf

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>>4641315
I'm always terrified of coloring things. Whenever I try to they always end up looking too saturated, with colors clashing with each other, but when I try to desaturate the colors it looks boring and dull.

How do I improve my color choices? Every video I see just glosses over it with "pick a flat color and paint it in" and heads straight into shading and highlights, but all I wanna do is flat color my stupid shit.

>> No.4645718

>>4645544
Well, now that my role as the alpha male in the relationship has been stripped from me so viciously, my mind and body will transition to female, automatically leading me to fight my ex-gf for alpha female status.

>> No.4645725

>>4644770
Perspective, the right view can make an boring pose into something more dynamic

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>>4645714
Reference, man! Find something in a style you like, with colours you think look good, and copy them wholesale. Try to get a feel for what colours they're using and where they're using them. Don't be afraid to fuck around, even if it doesn't look good (especially if it doesn't look good)

>> No.4645764
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Mikon

>> No.4645794

>>4645568
Is that kamille

>> No.4645821

>>4645732
I'm gonna try this, thanks bro. I just always kinda assume that I'm gonna find some sort of book or course about it instead of having to re-invent half the wheel, you know? But that makes absolute sense since this is a matter of taste.

>> No.4645877

>>4645714
>>4645821
This video helped me with color schemes, maybe it'll help you too:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qj1FK8n7WgY

>> No.4646030

>>4645764
Don't be afraid to use the whole sheet.

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>> No.4646140

>>4646049
there she is

>> No.4646254
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This one got me really nostalgic

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>>4643477
>>4641699
blog

>> No.4646470

>>4646392
https://twitter.com/ArtKlinck

>> No.4646484

>>4644834

Is there any way in particular I can improve the folds? I do want to improve, but I'm not sure how to get there, even after studying folds from actual photos.

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>> No.4646549

>>4645794
yes

>> No.4646612

>>4646529
Looks shittier than usual.

>> No.4646618

>>4642675
keep on going.
you're gonna make it.

>> No.4646622

>>4643477
I really like the way you draw.
It makes me feel happy.

>> No.4646631

>>4643766
the way you stylized it's face is really appealing keep it up.
>>4643680
Lefty and hair need some work but you're getting there keep going !
>>4644461
very cute
>>4644046
this simplistic style has a lot of potential, don't give up.
>>4644501
The guts and clothes could stand to be shaded more to add more depth, but other than that i really like the vibe this gives up
>>4644834
I really like how you redo some lines on purpose, I'm trying to learn how to do that in an appealing way

>> No.4646642

>>4645413
very cute don't give up !
>>4645544
are you the guy who used to get shit on, in the porn threads, if so, don't give up ! even if you're not, don't give up !
>>4645568
I like your lines
>>4645652
keep on going subu, this is gonna turn out great.
>>4645732
These are some nice fish dude, i really like the vibe they give off, it's appealing af.
>>4645714
cool.
>>4646049
I'm excited for the new ratchet and clank too.

>> No.4646672

>>4646631
>>4646642
Why are you telling people not to give up? Projecting much?

>> No.4646679

>>4646672
yes

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>> No.4646911

>>4646631

>>4644046 here. Thanks for the feedback. Just continuing to grind the style, hoping to refine it as time passes on. People say I need to work on clothing folds, so I guess that's the next project, doing clothing studies. I just wish I understood drapery better.

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>>4646642
Nope, that isn't me! But thank you very much regardless, I've never considered giving up though. I am happy with my abilities and just want to keep improving like everyone else.

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>>4643766
>>4644756
Thanks anon! I'm truly glad that someone loves my stuff.

>>4646631
Thanks! I enjoy drawing faces.

>> No.4647018

>>4646631
>>4646642
W-what about me anon?

>> No.4647058
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Is fur stuff allowed here

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>>4644872
Pineapple outfit

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>>4647075
Too many tangents. Pineapples are surprisingly green - who knew

>> No.4647913

>>4647861
her poor eyes!

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4648006

>>4646918
Quick edits for ya

>> No.4648130

>>4648006
you made it worse retard.

>> No.4648139

>>4648006
MY GIRL, WHAT HAVE THEY DONE TO MY GIRL

>> No.4648146

>>4648006
although the original one has bug eyes/soulless or whatever, this one looks like she has some kind of down syndrome.

The hands looks fucking gay as well. Go kill yourself

>> No.4648176

>>4648006
Fuck off, subu, you talentless retard

>> No.4648182

>>4648006
ban trannies from this board already

>> No.4648192

>>4648006
all your faces look stiff. Ugly. Formless, and Flat. Sick and tired of seeing your shit. Please just die you fucking boomer.

>> No.4648198
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>> No.4648225

>>4648006
You made her into a dude bro..

>> No.4648237

>>4648176
That isn't me.

>> No.4648488

>>4648006
LMAO WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY DRAWING YOU FUCK

Made me smile, 10/10. Nice boobs

>> No.4648508

>>4646672
Why do you hate people telling others not to give up? Have you been in the crab bucket for so long that you've forgotten that people are actually nice to each other in the real world?

>> No.4648770

>/alt/ is full of begs now

>> No.4648773

>>4648770
>now

>> No.4648991

>>4648770
It always was, except most of the good ones have left by now. Now go back to beg, you salty crab.

>> No.4649039
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4649039

How old is everyone here?

>> No.4649048
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4649048

cordyceps mushroom necromancer WIP

>> No.4649075
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4649075

Am I getting better?

>> No.4649135

>>4648991
so true.

>> No.4649136

>>4649075
Not if you keep drawing the same thing. Nice stuff though.

>> No.4649178

>>4649136
I did the goat yesterday >>4646424 and thought I would try applying what I learnt by actually drawing hair for once. idk it's hard to actually want to draw things other than this shit. I need more study photos that look cool like the goat

I also still need to work on anatomy or whatever, but practice seems to be helping

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>>4648237
if you're not lying it just goes to show how unoriginal your shitty anime drawings are kek

>> No.4649315
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4649315

Redlines/Critique appreciated, gonna try to enter the AL Fanart Contest thingy with this. Feel a bit strained on it at the moment, hopefully I can do better in the morning with a fresh pair of eyes.

>> No.4649694

>>4648991
>salty crab
why would i be salty about you talentless faggots

>> No.4649724

>>4649694
pyw. you won't because you're jealous beg

>> No.4649754

>>4649724
again there's nothing to be jealous of (you)
>pyw
will that fix your shitty drawings?
>beg calling someone a beg

>> No.4649762

>>4649315
Yilx sempai, what did you use in terms of study material to get to your level? How would you recommend going through them?

>> No.4649765
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>> No.4649798

>>4649754
You're confirmed for shitty beg. Nothing to see here.

>> No.4649889

>>4648006
kek
>those sausage fingers
Lmao fuck off Kyle

>> No.4649912
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4649912

A little somethin or whateva

>> No.4649917

>>4646918
very admirable keep up the good work

>> No.4649920

>>4647018
You too ( ´ ▽ ` ).。o

>> No.4650019

>>4649798
>i win bye bye
drawfags are truly pathetic

>> No.4650086
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>>4641315
i drew my favorite jew

>> No.4650192

>>4650086
I'd do lewd things to him

>> No.4650274

>>4649762
Vilppu's videos were all of excellent help to me in terms of understanding things.

>> No.4650283

>>4650274
kek no offense dude you still haven't really improved after all these years. Your faces are still child doodles lul. Or at most like slightly above beg? I'm not crabbing or anything, just want to tell you the truth man.

>> No.4650389

>>4650283
I feel you; haven't really done "proper" practice for a good while now, been working on commissions and patreon pieces almost back to back with an occasional personal piece in-between.

>> No.4650396
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4650396

oh shit I think I found my thread! none of the other really fit what I wanted to post.

Thoughts on this style?

>> No.4650398

>>4649048
thats fuckin sick

>> No.4650420

>>4650283
Snip snip

>> No.4650487
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4650487

some snails yeye

>> No.4650490
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>>4650487

>> No.4650493
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I WANNA DRAW DAMMIT

>> No.4650496

>>4650490
nice I like it!

the snail seems a little less soft that most snails would, there would be depression and his body would wrap around the branch a bit.

Just a note on something that might make it better, I really like it.

>> No.4650511

>>4650496
thank you anon. friend found a neat snail today so i wanted to draw them more. i'll keep that in mind for the future.

>> No.4650514

>>4650511
thanks bro, what do you think of mine? Havent gotten any feedback for it yet
>>4650396

>> No.4650534
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4650534

havent posted here in a long time

>> No.4650551

>>4650534
i like it, do you have any finished stuff? id be interested to see

>> No.4650570
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>>4650551
Not really no, I have no idea how to render/colour so sketches on 400x400 canvases are usually the best i can do kek. hoping to learn to colour soon though

>> No.4650583

>>4650570

If you're down you should try tracing it with clean lines and then just adding flat colours for the hair skin jacket and shirt.

Something tells me that line art like that doesn't need any fancy colouring or complex shading and that even flat tones will work.

>> No.4650594
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4650594

Did some proper painting on this one, I hate the fact that so many possible stories and drawings come to my mind and I can't choose to instantly draw everything kek

>> No.4650600
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>>4647913
It’s part of the outfit

>>4647861
I’m too scared to erase. I’ve never inked anything so small. Delivered with full res paper grains

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>>4650583
Okay I was going to do a lineart but then I got lazy because I don't actually know how to detail a face "laughing" without it looking like shit so I just tried to put colours on it

>> No.4650615

>>4650610
Hell yeah bro, sick.

>> No.4650667
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>>4650600
Proportions are a little off, will have to fix it later

>> No.4650678

>>4650667
that's really good, do you have a blog or something?

>> No.4650703

>>4650667
alright bro, I've seen your art for a couple of years now. Here's what I've got to say.
What I like:
You have very dynamic figures. Your linework is great and you show a great deal of imagination when it comes to the colours and the outfits. Gotta also mention how much you actually draw. Seems like every other day you finish something. That's impressive.
In this particular drawing I really like the hands btw.
What I have problems with:
Your faces irk me. Especially in the front view. I'm not a fan of pointy chins and overly big eyes. Is Jonen Vasquez an Inspiration to you? Oddly enough, I find your faces in profile view pretty good actually.
Something else I don't like is how thin the legs are mostly. Of course I don't mind thin women but yours are another league enitrely. Spider legs, I tell you.
Last thing has to do with lines. I think there are too many corners and spikes overall which often make the characters look like robots. Curves are what makes things look natural.
I don't know how much of this is just personal preference but yeah.
Just know that the pros way outweigh the cons. Keep it up!

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>>4650192

>> No.4651118

>>4644461
Dilate.

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>>4646954

>> No.4651849

>>4650703
Not the table guy, but wow that's a nice breakdown of someones style in a constructive way. This place needs more people like you!

>> No.4651936

>>4650703
ok do me now

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>>4641315
what should I focus on? more layers of colour??

>> No.4652116

should I not be posting if i'm beg

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>>4646484
theres is a lot of tutos about dat. im gona try redline you.

>>4646631
thanks

>>4645568
nice.

>>4647505
awesome work.

>>4649912
good moviment.

>>4650534
nice.

>> No.4652175
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4652175

Wondering whether I should ink this one, what do you guys think?

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>>4644046
>>4646484
>>4652169
try not to make the folds randomly, most of them are where the body bends.

>> No.4652223
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4652223

>>4652175

Easy on the shading bro. Looks like her skin is sinking way into her body

>> No.4652235

>>4652169
thanks friend, love how charming your piece is

>> No.4652293
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>>4649765

>>4652034
maybe cleanup?

>>4650594
just stick w one or keep track/write of those ideas instead of just having them in your head anon

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>> No.4652353
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>> No.4652355

>>4652353
Neck.

>> No.4652584

>>4652169
This is really nice, do you have a blog?

>> No.4652615

>>4652169
>>4652208

Cool, somebody took the time to finally redline my work. Thanks anon, this is really helpful. I'm going to use this in future works and fix the current WIP I'm doing.

>> No.4652648
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4652648

On going

>> No.4652657

>>4650534
>>4650570
Lugosi kill your self. You still haven't improved in all these months.

>> No.4652792
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4652792

Crudely sketching some character designs for a one-off comic.

Its not actually porn.

>> No.4652861

>>4652792
still coomer art anon

>> No.4652868

>>4652861
I want the comic itself to be anti-Coomer in a way, even with Gimpman and Madame Tatas von Poontang.

>> No.4652928
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4652928

tried to use loomis while also referencing from spirited away, i know it's super messy but hows the form/structure?

>> No.4652937

>>4652355
give him a break, he's never seen one before

>> No.4652941
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4652941

>>4652928
good shit niqqa

>> No.4652949

>>4648006
wtf did you make her a tranny you faggot..
kys

>> No.4652957

>>4642985
pls draw robos :.(

>> No.4652994

>>4652353
Neck, bro. Other than that it'd look pretty good.

>> No.4653000

>>4652351
Very cute, but either work on a less textured surface or draw larger so that the texture doesn't become too distracting.

>> No.4653005

>>4653000
I second this, good points. The texture is cool, just a bit distracting like anon said

>> No.4653089
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slow but coming along

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>>4652657
someone's angwwwy
i'm sorry i didn't improve sir i didn't mwean it :(

>> No.4653124
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>> No.4653144
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>> No.4653204

>>4653144
very cool concept, although the perspective on the ghost shadow things isn't fishbowled like the rest of it

>> No.4653305

>>4643644
Thanks
Yes but its a girl. or a boy. It doesn’t matter

>> No.4653307

>>4642375
>>4644834
Thank you

>>4644571
This is awesome!

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>>4653089

>> No.4653630
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>>4652353
i changed

>> No.4653652

>>4653630
Added a neck but still didn't move the head up lmao

>> No.4653724

>>4651849
thanks! I'm doing my part :D

>>4651936
which one are you?

>> No.4653750

>>4653724
how do you not know, anon? how do you not know...

>> No.4653787

>>4653089
Blog?

>> No.4653803
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>> No.4653810

>>4647505
Godtier

>> No.4653822
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4653822

Character sketch of a frog adventurer prince, flies around the world exploring with his peregrine falcon “dragon”.

>> No.4653826

>>4653822

Blog?

>> No.4653836

>>4653826
I post occasionally as navarysart on Instagram!

>> No.4653941

>>4653787
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/59879
https://twitter.com/Godsh0t

>> No.4653997
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4653997

would anyone be able to redline this/ tell me how I can improve the anatomy on this? I want to know if there any obvious things I can fix that I am not able to see right now.

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>> No.4654113
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4654113

drew this for the /cgl/ drawthread, this is what it looked like before I second guessed myself and redrew the face (which ended up worse)

>>4653822
>>4653836
holy hell I love this. your creature design is beautiful.

>> No.4654135

>>4653803
luv u

>> No.4654318

>>4644562
All your female faces are horrible. You need Jesus. Or at least the InCase style training where he spent like 3 months drawing nothing but female faces starting with realistic ones.

>> No.4654330

>>4654009
Really good. But I'd say the left foot needs to be planted properly as character clearly not running.

>> No.4654337

>>4646706
post more plant girls
>>4647505
really like this one

>> No.4654359

>>4653997
Make the head smaller/torso longer. Your gonna end up with her being maybe 6 heads tall with what you have. You wanna aim for the figure being atleast 7 heads tall if you want your anatomy to be somewhat correct. Your doing stylized anatomy anyway, so your shouldn't be too hung up on it unless your aiming for more realistic proportions.

>> No.4654369
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Wip:)

>> No.4654388

>>4653836

Cool cool, am now following you after looking at your other stuff. This is good shit.

>> No.4654390
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4654390

>>4650667
I’m still chickening out on pushing the values harder. What am I so afraid of?

>>4650678
https://twitter.com/tableguyart

>>4650703
Thanks for the legit crit!

> Jonen Vasquez an Inspiration to you
No, i’ve never really looked at his stuff, but anons always ask me

> Spider legs
Yea... i like really thin legs... i study lots of kicdoc and smymji6, i think could go thinner... but I’ll put some more meat on next time.

> many corners and spikes overall which often make the characters look like robots
I think I am supposed to be drawing robots and not organic shapes. Any good inspo for curvy line work?

> really like the hands
Hands are usually my favorite part because they are the most mecha body part.

> Your faces irk me. Especially in the front view
Likewise faces are my least favorite part because they are the least mech part of the drawing. I’m just trying to survive and put something on paper to complete the drawing.

> Seems like every other day you finish something. That's impressive.
Thanks - drawing a lot is really the only goal I want to achieve.

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>> No.4654515

>>4652342
This is cool despite the background making my eyes burn, i really like the forms. Blog?
>>4652351
This looks so cute, nice shapes too. Blog?

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>>4641499
cont. Broke up with my only gf earlier this year and let me tell you it is terrifying. Shes a complete psycho, she calls me dead in the night and im afraid she might come to my house.

>> No.4654518

>>4654516
h-hot

>> No.4654612

>>4653997
Helltaker fanart, right?
Anyways, looks cute. Blog?

>> No.4654621

>>4653997
The breasts are a little too saggy in my opinion, the rest looks allright for inking/lineart

>> No.4654647
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4654647

Took a short break to vilppu, did this today, now I'm going back to studying.

>> No.4654713
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R8
What should I do before i call it finished?

>> No.4654727

>>4654713
/beg/

>> No.4654736

>>4654713
delete all traces of it and go to church on sundays.

>> No.4654749
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>>4654359
Thanks for the feedback. I settled with making the head a little smaller after going back and forth about lengthening the torso.

>>4654612
twitter.com/drawbuster is the only place I ever post my stuff. I'm usually on Drawpile most of the time.

I know Helltaker fanart is a meme at this point but I guess doing the popular thing boosts your visibility nowadays. Also it gets me to start drawing more so that's always a plus.

>> No.4654836

>>4654647
post blog, fag

>> No.4654923

>>4653803
Orenji?

Have you been surpassed yet?

>> No.4654925

>>4654516
That's a HUGE thigh gap

>> No.4654926

>>4654713
Remove those lines holy fuck

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Bort.

>> No.4654993
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4654993

>>4654390
I broke my pencil while i was drawing her left arm. I forgot that I needed to fix it before inking. Whatever.

5 more to go

>> No.4655054
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4655054

Im making fast grey-scale commissions to pay for my cat's operation and a friend asked for a Chibi Kaiba. I dont do chibis but I was kinda desperated. Is this the chibi aesthetic?

>> No.4655066

>>4653997
this looks like you copied

>> No.4655092

>>4655066
I'll take it as a compliment! I've just been looking at a ton of contraposto pose and various other references and tweaking it here and there. I was also looking at the game creator's character sheets for reference. Still trying to figure out what to do with left arm.

>> No.4655157

>>4649048
i like this

>> No.4655163

>>4654836
_98fumi on twitter

>> No.4655165

>>4652351
make a game or some fakemon. your art is so creative it would be perfect.

>> No.4655168

>>4655054
why'd you post the PS5?

>> No.4655169

>>4655163
>16k followers
damn. Maybe there's something to this clown anime girl thing.

>> No.4655196

>>4655168
Ps5 lite

>> No.4655264

>>4642228
what was your twitter again? I deactivated mine a while ago and forgot your handle

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4655286

>>4654749
Good job anon. Your gonna make it, keep working on those fundies, you'll get there.

>> No.4655323

>>4655264
nvm found it. The power of reading the thread is astounding!

>> No.4655337

>>4654923
surpassed at what?

>> No.4655346 [DELETED] 

>>4654993
Sketch done. Let me know if I need to tweak anything before I ink tomorrow.

>> No.4655349
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>>4654993
Sketch done. Let me know if I need to tweak anything before I ink tomorrow.

>> No.4655354

>>4655349
the bum looks long, like it's being stretched out, not up and down but like it's being pulled away from her pelvis.

>> No.4655356

>>4652351
What do you use and blog?

>> No.4655369

>>4654925
Its so that even you might be able to hit the cervix

>> No.4655377

>>4654516
R.I.P OP. Killed by his yandere gf

>> No.4655438
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>>4654515
>>4655165
>>4655356
Thanks, this was watercolor and brush pen on the only watercolor paper I had lying around at the time, which was way too rough. I’m @ohheythatfisher on Twitter

>> No.4655439
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>> No.4655445
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>>4654516
Cute gem crotch

>> No.4655645

>>4655439
love this, how did you do it?

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>> No.4655750

>>4652648
looks cool, whats it for? blog?

>> No.4655844

>>4654749
>Helltaker
What's that?

>> No.4655851
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God I hate drawing armour. This is my first time.

>> No.4655853

>>4655844
Some short waifu collector game that gain popularity pretty fast.

>> No.4655865

>>4655844
flavour of the month easy fanart fodder dating sim.

>> No.4655867

>>4650534
Account?

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>> No.4656006

>>4655645
In procreate I made a layer of noise (it should be in the effects menu). I makes it out, scaled it up, used the sharpen effect, then used Crystalize in the liquify tools with max strength and brush size, and held it in place over the vial for a while

>> No.4656060

>>4655904
looks weird with the ear there, know what your going for but face feels like a pancake

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>>4656006
had a blast, my eyes hurt.

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Did I mess up the neck height / width of the face in this piece? I don't get it.

Also, is the problem with my pieces the low opacity of the brush or not enough layers or paint?? I dont get it, the same problem I have here >>4652034.

Should I try only working in grayscale before going into colour?? Push my darks??? I am lost

>> No.4656215

>>4656102
Hah that came out great

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>> No.4656365

>>4656349
Is this for a project?

>> No.4656414

go go go >>4656412