Sexual Alternative Art / Stylization Thread

[Anonymous No.4620324]

Previous Thread: >>4603323

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime lewds. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.

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[Anonymous No.4620432]

>>4618635
I'm not even into furry shit, let alone zoophilia. I think pedophilia is still the most garbage of all of those.

[Anonymous No.4620459]

>>4620432
What a way to start a new thread

[Anonymous No.4620472]

>>4620432
Based

[Anonymous No.4620475]

>>4620432
let it die for fucks sake. You haven't convinced anyone of anything except how obnoxious you can be.

[Anonymous No.4620482]

>>4620432
OP here. Why prop up this thread responding to someone from another? It makes more sense to just let these run their courses.

[Anonymous No.4620570]

critique me this time ffs

[Anonymous No.4620574]

>>4620570
U gave her a dick, thats not how anatomy works anon.

[Anonymous No.4620633]

>>4620574
Wow thank god you told me. I would be lost otherwise.

[Anonymous No.4620656]

>>4620459
>>4620475
>>4620482
If my obnoxious attitude will serve to drive pedos away then I'll keep that up.

[Anonymous No.4620669]

>>4620570
Just for that futa abomination you get a grade of gay/10.

[Anonymous No.4620672]

>>4620656
Okay Karen

[Anonymous No.4620683]

Op pic frightens and offends me. But it still makes my peepee grow.

[Anonymous No.4620745]

[Anonymous No.4621254]

Hey anone have any resources on applying lighting to the human figure? i understand the basics of lighting but not really how im supposed to use it with people. at least outside of super basic stuff.

[Anonymous No.4621274]

>>4620745
The tip of that dick is mega wrong.

[Anonymous No.4621289]

best I can do while horny, you guys are really focused... guess I'm too old for this stuff

[Anonymous No.4621296]

>>4621274
Supposed to look like she's twisting it a little. But yeah I know what you mean

[Anonymous No.4621551]

>>4620745
So you also fantasize about a ghost foot stomping on your balls while getting a hand job that nearly rips your dick off and disembodied Jessica Rabbit lips go at you like a school of piranhas?

Patrician.

[Anonymous No.4621729]

>>4621289
really great stuff. keep us posted

[Anonymous No.4621744]

>>4620324
I did something similar on a nature walk
I fucked a sapling and came all over it
was on private property so it had the added thrill of being shot at any moment
on my walk back I felt as though the larger evergreens were judging me as a sapophile

[Anonymous No.4621842]

>>4621744
I used to have a buddy with an insanely hot wife. He got in a motorcycle accident and was pretty much a vegetable. I was at the house a lot helping out the wife and kids. As the months went on, she was obviously getting deprived sexually, and she started making suggestions that we should hook up. I ignored it for weeks, but one day right there in front of him, she told me to meet her in the next room and fuck her brains out. As she walked out, I stood there in moral crisis. My buddy was on one side in a coma being fed through a tube, and on the other side she was calling me over: “Come and get me anon, I’m on the floor waiting for you”. I couldn’t help it. I looked at my buddy and cringed a little, hoping he wasn’t conscious enough to hear all this. Then I walked over and put my hand on the doorknob. Open the door. Get on the floor. Everybody walk the dinosaur.

[Anonymous No.4623313]

fuck me if I can try and learn with /ic/

[Anonymous No.4624509]

>>4621744
I’m going to need the details on this.

[Anonymous No.4625130]

My todays sketch. Guys how fast i could get through basic books like norling, loomis etc while neeting? 12h a day and i would be done in a few months? Ive been drawing a lot as a hobby but never bothered to learn fundamentals and now im unemployed thanks to virus.

[Anonymous No.4625426]

sketch i made last night

[Anonymous No.4625431]

Dexter's mom

[Anonymous No.4625625]

>>4621551
Kek

[Anonymous No.4625800]

>>4620745
BEAUTIFUL

[Anonymous No.4628313]

Some doodles for a friend

[Anonymous No.4628320]

>>4628313
yiff in /trash/ together with your friend

[Anonymous No.4629581]

>>4628313
Messy lines. Do the sketch with low opacity pen at a relatively large size and then either sculpt the lines with higher opacity strokes or make a new cleaner line layer over the sketch. You take 20 strokes to make a simple line. Practice finishing a long line in 1-3 strokes.

[Anonymous No.4629587]

Normally I draw with really thick black lineart but I’ve been wanting to try out some more painterly stuff with extremely thin lines or no lines at all. Don’t really know what I’m doing though. Anyone know any good places to get started on this kinda stuff?

[Anonymous No.4629593]

>>4628313
Honest question. Do people like you really find faces of animals more attractive than faces of humans? What's going on inside your head when you draw things like that?

[Anonymous No.4629629]

>>4629587
Do the lines and then turn their opacity down to like 20% so u can just barely see them. Use them as a guide to help with painting values till you can eventually turn the lines off.

[Anonymous No.4629632]

>>4629587
Do the lines and then turn their opacity down to like 20% so u can just barely see them. Use them as a guide to help with painting values till you can eventually turn the lines off. Also your background gray is too dark. It should be about 50% between white and black

[Anonymous No.4629684]

>>4628313
I'm digging the extreme perspectives on these. You've got a good grasp of portraying form from very steep angles, especially for that bottom drawing. The top drawing might need a little more work though. I think the mons pubis would make the contour of her vag protrude outwards a little instead of being shaped like a depression as you have it now.

[Anonymous No.4629698]

>>4625431
It looks to me like you're drawing each line as a series of tiny segments (sometimes this is called "hairy lines"). Try drawing each line in one smooth motion, using your elbow and/or shoulder to control the movement instead of your wrist.

[Anonymous No.4629703]

>>4621289
Very nice, your lines are great and it feels very dynamic. I feel like maybe the face/head could use some work but I'm not sure what exactly seems off about it. Maybe it's just a stylistic preference of mine.

[Anonymous No.4629718]

>>4620570
The biggest issue is just that the anatomy sucks man. Proportions, shape, and gesture all need a lot of work. The second biggest issue is that I don't even understand what the character is supposed to be feeling. Is she enjoying herself? Does she not like this? The hand on hip pose seems standoffish or sassy but she's making a face like she's having an orgasm, which is just very confusing. People don't jerk off while standing like that.

[Anonymous No.4630112]

[Anonymous No.4630166]

>>4629718
Wow, some actual critique. Thank you.

[Anonymous No.4630479]

>>4620324
I wish I called myself honey instead of you stupid fuck face

[Anonymous No.4630834]

Color temp on my tablet is a little fucked, had a bit of difficulty adjusting the colours on my main monitor

[Anonymous No.4631271]

>>4630834
Poorest attempt at foreshortening I've seen

[Anonymous No.4631302]

>>4631271
i actually thought it's a midget

[Anonymous No.4631312]

>>4630834
>>4631271
lol, throw me a bone, it ain't that bad

[Anonymous No.4631325]

>>4629703
Cheers for the feedback! It is not really a matter of taste about the face but errors on my side, I tried to tilt her head back but the almost frontal view made it difficult for me to do a good foreshortening, made me understand I've got to study more

[Anonymous No.4631329]

>>4631312
It’s fucked desu, I still like it tho

[Anonymous No.4631487]

[Anonymous No.4631492]

>>4628320
I go to the drawthreads sometimes
>>4629581
Thanks for the advice but they're just messy doodles inherently, I've got some others with cleaner lineart as you mention
>>4629593
It's more about the stereotypes that go behind each animals face, it's great for styorytelling. That aside, personally I find drawing humans a bit boring since there's only so much you can do with their skin tones, while animals posses a wider range of color opportunities and shapes.
>>4629684
Thank you, top drawing was the least effort one but I'll have in mind positioning for my next ones.

[Anonymous No.4631495]

>>4631487
NOOOOOOOOO BUT D-D-DIGITAL MEANS YOURE A BAD ARTIST WITH NO SOULLLLLLL

fucking hypocritical faggot rat

[Anonymous No.4631641]

>>4630834
>>4631271
>>4631302
>>4631329
Is the biggest contention people have the leg? Other than some proportions maybe the rest looks fairly on model to me.

[Anonymous No.4631658]

>>4631495
post your work

[Anonymous No.4631664]

>>4631658
begone cumfarti
imagine being so insecure you shit on digifags for years and then casually post that like its nothing

[Anonymous No.4631707]

>>4631664
yeah imagine me drawing that in pencil in 3 minutes and then coloring it in photoshop in 30 seconds. the NERVE of this man

[Anonymous No.4631735]

Morning, lads, how's the weather?

[Anonymous No.4631762]

>>4631707
imagine bragging about this

[Anonymous No.4631771]

>>4631707
For what is clearly a photo-referenced sketch this is just about beg tier

[Anonymous No.4632119]

>>4631735
Well you’ve got horror down pat

[Anonymous No.4632139]

>>4631707
i dont have to because you've been shitting on digital and lording it over everyone that you paint for years and called people retards and worthless for using digital and WOWEE turns out youre a massive fucking faggot with no real positions on anything. but we already knew that

[Anonymous No.4632147]

>>4632119
foreall… that shits finna gimme nightmares

[Anonymous No.4632212]

>>4630834
Tbh I kind of just want to move on and can't be arsed to mess around with it too much but does this at least fix the leg a little bit

[Anonymous No.4632232]

>>4632212
Fuck, I think it just looks more like a clubfoot now, lol. Oh well.

[Anonymous No.4632427]

[Anonymous No.4632433]

>>4631487
take another look at how the neck connects to the torso.
Also, it's pretty interesting how this looks exactly like your traditional stuff. I immediadely recognized you.

[Anonymous No.4632436]

>>4631735

[Anonymous No.4632437]

>>4632427
Woah, holy shit. Gains goblin, your faces are getting better.

[Anonymous No.4632439]

>>4632437
thanks i've been trying to work a bit on the noses and eyes,

[Anonymous No.4632467]

>>4632427
unironically gmi, been here since you posted shit everything and not gonna lie i saved a bunch of them since i thought they were hilarious

[Anonymous No.4632577]

>>4632437
don't lie to him like that lmao

[Anonymous No.4632654]

>>4632437
Maybe in another 3 years he finally starts to work on his line weight.

[Anonymous No.4632806]

Weekend project. Gonna redo the nose, and something about the dude feels "off" but I can't place it.

[Anonymous No.4632830]

>>4631664
BEGONE CUMFARTI

[Anonymous No.4632846]

>>4632139
>NOOOOOOO YOU CANT DO DIGITAL ART UNLESS YOU THINK ITS THE FUTURE
>IM MAKING A COMIC NOOOOOOO BRIAN CANT BE BETTER AT SOMETHING HE DOESNT EVEN LIKE

[Anonymous No.4632979]

>>4632806
- Guy’s chest is too narrow. You can see this most clearly with his pecs
- The line for his pec extends too far up on the far side. There’s no room for his shoulder.
- Try making a fist while flexing your wrist like that. Its very difficult and your hand feels like its trying to open up. To get a strong grip his wrist should be straight.
- Girl’s shoulders look too narrow, esp. for the far shoulder
- Girl’s neck shouldn’t flare out so much at the base

These are some small things that I think could help to improve the drawing. However I think there’s still problems with the overall gesture that I can’t explain very well. The poses just feel kinda stiff. My best advice to you would be to find some reference images similar to this pose and try to identify how you can use them to make your drawing more dynamic. I think you’ve got some good potential, it just feels a little rigid.

[Anonymous No.4632986]

>>4632427
Damn, you are nothing if not dedicated. Your stuff looks quite a bit better than the last time I was in one of these threads.

[Anonymous No.4633020]

>>4632979
Excellent, thanks. I'll see what I can do.

[Anonymous No.4633194]

>>4632436
NOOOOO NOT MY BLACKBULLERINO! NOT THE HECKIN KOKUGINEROOO!

[Anonymous No.4633264]

>>4632986
Seriously, Goblin is kind of inspiring. When he started his art was absolutely repulsive (still is lol) but despite all the abuse he keeps posting here and steadily improving.

[Anonymous No.4633352]

>>4633264
Does anyone have any of his older shit?

[Anonymous No.4633425]

>>4633352
No. His stuff is like Necronomicon or FATAL it should never get around your own art or it will rape it and then infect with different crippling diseases.

[Anonymous No.4633759]

[Anonymous No.4633987]

>>4633352
this is, if i remember right, the first thing i ever posted on here

[Anonymous No.4633995]

[Anonymous No.4633997]

>>4633987
I actually don't think it's that bad, though I'm kind of mentally fatigued to where everything looks better than my shit. When was that posted and how long had you been drawing? Also, obligatory
>OH NO NO NOOOOOOO AHAHAHAHAHA

[Anonymous No.4634005]

>>4633997
timetag says i drew it in 2017, and i've been doodling all my life, but around then was when i started to actually try to learn shit

[Anonymous No.4634261]

>>4633987
the relative lack of muscle detail makes this a lot more appealing, and the face has a lot of soul. perhaps you could incorporate the same skin smoothness in this in some of your more feminine bottom characters? it makes them look more attractive and delicate (to me at least). the way that you add lines for each and every muscle without making them a more faded color or making the lines especially can be distracting. could be fine on firnez and characters like him though

[Anonymous No.4634274]

>>4634261
you make a decent point about the smoothness, i'll try to go for something like that in my next pic

[Anonymous No.4634764]

>>4633987
Looks a lot like a certain old drawing made by deathalice on dA

[Anonymous No.4635741]

>>4634764
i think i remember someone on here thinking i was them way back when i started posting here, dunno if it was them or someone else, hard to remember alongside all the theories as to whether i'm a man or woman and that insane guy who thought i was a jew agent working to turn men gay with my drawings of twinks getting plowed

[Anonymous No.4637370]

sup /salt/ critique my futa hircine

[Anonymous No.4638132]

>>4620324
Can I post stuff like that on DA? I knew a guy with 2 000 followers who was drawing more extreme stuff there and his works were not wiped from the web site

[Anonymous No.4638325]

>>4638132
Nudes are allowed on deviantart as long as there is no sex depicted and It's tagged as mature content

[Anonymous No.4638640]

What does the environment need to look more like a bondage dungeon/ living room?
I'm afraid that there isn't a way to add shit to the panels without cluttering them up.