Feedback in my latest ilustrations.

[Anonymous No.4583902]

I dont want do get buried in a randon feedback post, that is why im doing one myself. I listened to the things you say to me and I saw a big change. Thank you for that

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[Anonymous No.4583911]

The eyes are weird in this one i know.

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[Anonymous No.4583915]

>>4583902
you killed a thread to post this garbage when you could've just posted in /beg/

[Anonymous No.4583916]

[Anonymous No.4583919]

>>4583915
yes ok, but atleast tell me what is wrong! i know my art is garbage but i post here to have feedback.

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[Anonymous No.4583923]

>>4583915
Faggot

[Anonymous No.4583925]

>>4583902
I really don't like the the first you posted. The first looks like you stuck too close to a ref and the second is just unappealing/disgusting (on purpose?)
>>4583915
This is at least high /beg/ tho

[Anonymous No.4583929]

>>4583925
the second one in unappealling for the lines, color, composition? or as a whole

[Anonymous No.4583937]

>>4583902
Absolute trash, ugly model, amateur use of black in the skintones, idiotic composition
>>4583905
Can't tell from the face if it's an abortion fresh out of the trash can of an abortion clinique, or if it's the person who had the abortion, or if it's in the process of the abortion itself. Idiotic shapes floating in the background.
>>4583908
This post is scarier that the previous two pictures. And that says something. Not opening it up again for I don't want to have nightmares tonight
>>4583911
From this pictuer it becomes clear you have no idea how to use fleshtone, and how to place an object in a light environment.
>>4583912
Ackchually """okay"""
>>4583916
Cool. Please only paint monsters and don't attempt to depict real human faces ever again, and you're good.
>>4583921
The tree and the leaves are nice, but the trees are basically just cylinders and the leaves come from a preset brush. Again, this person shows they have no idea how to place object in 3d space, AND attempts to do edgy Kim Jung-Gi perspective? This is worse than Moderndayjames. It really doesn't make it better, cramming in as many references in there as possible, it doesn't hide, but exacerbate the bad drawing skills.

[Anonymous No.4583946]

>>4583937
pyw

[Anonymous No.4586784]

>>4583902
1. The plight of amateur artists is having a big fancy brush pack and relying on texture before even figuring out how to work the flat round
2. Everything gives off the feel that it has no inspiration or any kind of purpose behind it, just "oh im gonna be an artists this is what artists do right"

[Anonymous No.4586874]

>>4583902
When you just watched the proko video about merging details in shadows...

j/k..looks great