Alternative Art / Stylization Thread

[Anonymous No.4561259]

Previous >>4545478


What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.4561288]

[Anonymous No.4561290]

>>4561288
I swear I've seen this before.

[Anonymous No.4561292]

[Anonymous No.4561326]

>>4561259
Made some stickers. Here's Vanilla.

[Anonymous No.4561327]

>>4561326
Strawberry.

[Anonymous No.4561328]

>>4561327
And the admittedly unfortunate looking Chocolate.

[Anonymous No.4561632]

eyes

[Anonymous No.4561637]

yes

[Anonymous No.4561641]

[Anonymous No.4561797]

thoughts?

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[Anonymous No.4561872]

>>4561641
I really like that, good title too

[Anonymous No.4561919]

dinkin

[Anonymous No.4562118]

>>4561632
A lot of interesting concepts in this.

[Anonymous No.4562189]

[Anonymous No.4562304]

[Anonymous No.4562411]

Parody of something in latin.

[Anonymous No.4562578]

In the summer time

[Anonymous No.4562589]

>>4561797
I love how you've rendered the hair, but the eye proportions are throwing me off. If you shrink the right one and maybe move it a little bit up, It'll be perfect for me

[Anonymous No.4562847]

[Anonymous No.4562871]

just copying >>4559268

[Anonymous No.4562883]

>>4562847
Pretty cool.

[Anonymous No.4562960]

[Anonymous No.4563028]

I don’t know how to digitally color that well, are the ctrl paint videos still good for a beginner to follow?

[Anonymous No.4563047]

>>4563028
Trade secret ;)

[Anonymous No.4563069]

[Anonymous No.4563076]

:)

[Anonymous No.4563082]

final

[Anonymous No.4563350]

[Anonymous No.4563353]

>>4563069
>>4563076
>>4563082
Blog? These are hilarious

[Anonymous No.4563413]

>>4561919
:o

[Anonymous No.4563612]

>>4562304
looks pretty sick. Blog?

[Anonymous No.4563765]

>>4562411
>>4562960
great stuff

[Anonymous No.4563916]

>>4561919
hi grant my wife is such a fuckin bitch you know?

[Anonymous No.4564004]

[Anonymous No.4564031]

>>4562189
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4564036]

>>4563765
Cute but take it easy with those soft edges, especially towards the chest. Looks muddy.

[Anonymous No.4564076]

[Anonymous No.4564082]

>>4564076

[Anonymous No.4564085]

>>4564004
Love the forearms

[Anonymous No.4564139]

Still getting my digital coloring sea legs.

[Anonymous No.4564142]

[Anonymous No.4564163]

>>4564004
Left arm looks wrong, too short and it looks awkward where the shoulder and the neck connect.

[Anonymous No.4564182]

>>4561259
practice page from today

[Anonymous No.4564388]

>>4564182
I like the stuff you've been posting, do you have any blog?

[Anonymous No.4564391]

>>4564388
sure do
https://twitter.com/GoblinKingArt/media

[Anonymous No.4564408]

>>4563612
@lunydoobles on twitter

[Anonymous No.4564448]

>>4564076
>>4564082
this guy has talent but it's always the same half assed doodly shit

[Anonymous No.4564558]

>>4562411
bodoque uchiha y tulio uzumaki

[Anonymous No.4564597]

[Anonymous No.4564598]

>>4564004
Your style just has no appeal or sense of shape design

[Anonymous No.4564645]

I feel as though my male character designs are never up to par or as interesting as my female designs any resources on interesting character design?also what direction do i take this dude?

[Anonymous No.4564670]

Yes Yes Yes

[Anonymous No.4564827]

eh

[Anonymous No.4564831]

>>4564597
What even is this pose.

[Anonymous No.4564834]

>>4564645
These three give me very different vibes. 1 looks like he's competent and level-headed, 2 looks more like a charismatic/laid back type and 3 like an angsty anti-hero/villain with tragic back story.
What type of character are you going for?

What kind of male characters/character designs do you like in general? you probably learned to design female characters by imitating things you found compelling in other people's artwork, so just do the same with males. Focus on what is cool/interesting/badass to you and what kind of character that conveys, then practice incorporating that into your own art.

[Anonymous No.4564883]

>>4564834
I was aiming with the latter as a sort of rival to the main character. he's supposed to be a more authoritarian pragmatic rule follower as oppose to the more rebellious MC but the more I think of it the more the dynamic is literally just Dante and Virgil.

[Anonymous No.4564885]

>>4564448
that's the appeal

[Anonymous No.4565143]

Another mermaid for today. Been doing one a day, to sort of let things flow naturally by the end of the month.

[Anonymous No.4565163]

[Anonymous No.4565216]

Dummy

[Anonymous No.4565259]

>>4562578
>>4564670
I really like these but they make my eyes burn

[Anonymous No.4565377]

Last 3 things that I drew

[Anonymous No.4565378]

[Anonymous No.4565381]

[Anonymous No.4565391]

>>4565143
I like her elongated torso. Makes her look more creature-like. What fish species is she based on?

[Anonymous No.4565402]

>>4564670
love the simplicity, blog?

[Anonymous No.4565540]

[Anonymous No.4565542]

[Anonymous No.4565596]

going to color next

[Anonymous No.4565664]

>>4565259
Which color should I use?

[Anonymous No.4565676]

>>4565402
https://twitter.com/YebureYatog Just started posting yesterday.

[Anonymous No.4565789]

>>4565391
Thanks, I based her design on this fish, Helfrich's Dartfish that I found in pinterest

[Anonymous No.4566248]

Some items for Portfolio


>>4565542
Incredibly tasteful. Blog please?

[Anonymous No.4566738]

>>4566248
twitter.com/twxwx7

[Anonymous No.4566821]

[Anonymous No.4567017]

>>4564031
Not much @nayanderu02

[Anonymous No.4567056]

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[Anonymous No.4567229]

>>4562589
thanks I was trying to figure what was off to me and that was definitely it!

[Anonymous No.4567248]

[Anonymous No.4567378]

Done with this.

[Anonymous No.4567436]

>>4565664
The colors are too saturated, check Jet set radio art it uses a similar palette but it's not so bright it hurts.

[Anonymous No.4567456]

>>4567248
daniel a qt

[Anonymous No.4567460]

>>4565216
dummy <3

>>4565540
>>4565542
pretty

[Anonymous No.4567470]

>>4567456
thanks anon

[Anonymous No.4567472]

>>4562189
Nice to see your work again!

[Anonymous No.4567590]

i want to make more dynamic stuff

[Anonymous No.4567802]

Paint and Mouse.

[Anonymous No.4567805]

Just realized I didn't post the finished drawing here, there you go.
I should be stronger for the next one since I've decided to use refs

[Anonymous No.4567877]

>>4567805
Is this fanart or your own project? I rather like the characters, but the piece as a whole doesn't look finished and kind of all over the place. I know people complain a lot about turd polishing, but you seem to have the opposite problem. You can't (and shouldn't) go all out on every piece of course, but it's important to learn how to finalize an illustration too. This looks like it's going to be a cover page for something, so you want it to look it's best to attract readers. Take some time and patience and really go in there and clean things up until it doesn't look messy anymore. The boat is especially jarring because everything else has outlines.

Re-consider the placement of "Astra" too, it looks compositionally awkward bumping up against her head like that. Is this narration? A characters name? The Title?
If you want to do comics you need to stop thinking of text as an afterthought, it's something you have to consider right from the start when figuring out your layouts.

[Anonymous No.4568103]

>>4567877
I'm saving this advice, thanks mate. They're original characters, and I've been noticing exactly that I can't never really "finish" a piece. I'm sure some of my drawings have had enough elements to be finished into something good but I dunno how.
"Astra : The Flying Sea" would be the title but you're right it was an afterthought.
I'll try to make this other one a truly finished piece then, I'm a bit more confident with it

[Anonymous No.4568145]

>>4561259

[Anonymous No.4568204]

>>4568103
Composition already looks a lot better for a title page. Most artists suck at vehicles and you clearly have an interest in them, so that's a good choice for a piece to show off your skills with - much better than the 'I don't know what I'm doing' beach BG on the previous one. (With that said, don't permanently avoid enviroments either, practice those too - scenery is important for storytelling.)

As for finishing things, >>4567805 has a lot of areas where something isn't colored in all the way to the lineart, leaving the background to peak through - that gives the whole thing a sketchy look.
The girl's blouse looks like you put a lot more time and effort into rendering it than other parts of the image. Not saying you have to bring every little detail of a piece to the same level of finish, but you should genereally have a similar level of detail and neatness on important elements, so you don't want the face and hands to be messier or more simplefied than the clothing.

Try to avoid these issues and take your time with this one. You'll get quicker at polishing things with practice, so don't worry if it takes you an eternity the first time around.
Also watch some vids from artists you like to see how they take a piece to the next level if you can.

[Anonymous No.4568273]

Had to do this for my college project, It’s been a while since I’ve coloured with pencils ^_^

[Anonymous No.4568295]

[Anonymous No.4568307]

>>4568273
the colors suit your style! Not quite sure what's going on with the figure, but I'm guessing it's some sort of horror thing and makes more sense in context with your project?

[Anonymous No.4568319]

>>4561259

[Anonymous No.4568320]

>>4568319

[Anonymous No.4568321]

>>4568320

[Anonymous No.4568497]

>>4561919
ohh i like

>>4562189
cute

[Anonymous No.4568517]

>>4568319
>>4568320
>>4568321
Your art never ceases to amaze me, i think you are the most creative anon i have seen.

[Anonymous No.4568542]

>>4561259
Is this a guy turning into a were-fish?

[Anonymous No.4568553]

>>4568321
Blog? I love this

[Anonymous No.4568670]

>>4564831
>>4564597
it's cover up my bad anatomy with huge cloth pose

[Anonymous No.4568675]

[Anonymous No.4568688]

>>4568675
BASED getterCHAD

[Anonymous No.4568760]

>>4568517
that's just really flattering anon... thank you very much...

>>4568553
thanks
https://twitter.com/pantsu_ripper

[Anonymous No.4568781]

>>4568760
No offense, but you hide your /beg tier art behind the backgrounds and obscure/unusual imagery you put in your drawings.

[Anonymous No.4568814]

>>4568781
weird that you think so, I am not trying to hide my beg tier drawings and don't really put much thought into them at all beyond having a girl in there...

[Anonymous No.4568854]

[Anonymous No.4568893]

>>4568781
style over substance.
we are talking about art, so this is not really a problem.

[Anonymous No.4568904]

>>4566248
WIPs

[Anonymous No.4568931]

>>4568904
very effing great anon!

[Anonymous No.4568952]

>>4568542
I think it's a girl, the artist who drew it last thread said it was for 'mer-may' where artists draw mermaids. Except his entry was meant to be a subversion with the mermaid being a science experiment gone wrong.

[Anonymous No.4569163]

thoughts?

[Anonymous No.4569173]

>>4569163
cute

[Anonymous No.4569194]

>>4569163
She looks unhealthy and there should be at least one eye distance between eyes

[Anonymous No.4569204]

>>4568273
Managed to squeeze this out tonight, the design was fun to do!

[Anonymous No.4569355]

I like samurai maids with sneakers

[Anonymous No.4569363]

did this yesterday... i hate the colour - still nearly 0 color-theory the past.. only drawing atm..

[Anonymous No.4569372]

>>4568781
shut up whitebox

[Anonymous No.4569380]

>>4568781
The fuck are you on about?

[Anonymous No.4569438]

Whitebox here. Create better bait next time.

>>4568781
The moon from Majoras Mask is hardly disturbing, anon.

Try two characters with their lips and eyes sewn shut (with the girl wearing one eye as a pendant) and an insane, suicidal cat.

>>4568814
Anons here have been going crazy as of late.

I like what you got. The color palette reminds me a lot of Invader Zim and the use of curvilinear perspective reminds me of an artist I stumbled upon recently (pic related). It'd be interesting which direction you take this.

[Anonymous No.4569439]

>>4569355
Homework done in under 60min, time to go play again

[Anonymous No.4569443]

>>4569355
damn those faces though.

[Anonymous No.4569445]

Whitebox here. Create better bait next time.

>>4568781
The moon from Majoras Mask is the most disturbing thing the artist has rendered, anon.

Try two characters with their lips and eyes sewn shut (with the girl wearing one eye as a pendant) and an insane, suicidal cat if you want to go after someone for horror content.

>>4568814
Anons here have been going crazy as of late.

I like what you got. The color palette reminds me a lot of Invader Zim and the use of curvilinear perspective reminds me of an artist I stumbled upon recently (pic related). It'd be interesting which direction you take this.

[Anonymous No.4569454]

[Anonymous No.4569455]

>>4569372
? who the fuck whitebox

>>4569380
you're free like his work, I'm only pointing out that his faces and anatomy look p subpar

[Anonymous No.4569467]

>>4569355
do you have a bug fetish?

[Anonymous No.4569468]

>>4569445
Woof woof

[Anonymous No.4569472]

Probably tame enough to post outside of /salt/

[Anonymous No.4569496]

I'm going to sleep now and will check it out with a fresh head. How bad does it look?

[Anonymous No.4569500]

>>4561288
>>4561290
griffith

[Anonymous No.4569512]

>>4569445
>The moon from Majoras Mask is the most disturbing thing the artist has rendered
this, i have no idea why would he use a textured brush for the moon and did so sloppy

[Anonymous No.4569520]

>>4569454
iz that cropped? Nice work btw

[Anonymous No.4569532]

>>4569512
i could've done something with it but instead just put some random filter on it... kind of struggling with being lazier than normal with the drawings these past few weeks, as you can see from the stuff posted here...

[Anonymous No.4569562]

>>4569532
take a break and watch something or play some vidya it might give you some new inspiration

[Anonymous No.4569583]

>>4569562
>watch something or play some vidya
that's literally the problem

[Anonymous No.4569584]

art trade for a friend

[Anonymous No.4569586]

>>4569584
that's really well done anon... the dress looks awesome

[Anonymous No.4569620]

>>4569583
bro don't tell instead of looking for inspiration while watching anime you turned off your brain and just binge watch it...i can't really judge you since it took me 5 months to get my ass off and force myself to draw something at least you still draw even if it's lazily done, i guess

[Anonymous No.4569634]

>>4569454
Really nice. Waiting for it to be polished

[Anonymous No.4569650]

Any suggestions for the composition? I kind of want to fit more of the mech in.

[Anonymous No.4569659]

>>4569620
nah its games that turn off my brain... i am getting back into it tho... i did need a break

[Anonymous No.4569666]

[Anonymous No.4569680]

>>4569650
why do I always get a "22 year old go-getter" vibe from your wips

[Anonymous No.4569684]

>>4568321
Soul

[Anonymous No.4569789]

Eat more eggs

[Anonymous No.4569794]

>>4564598
what the fuck does that even mean? Are the people still seething about whiteboxe's shitposting?

[Anonymous No.4569800]

>>4569789
wow cute!

[Anonymous No.4569806]

>>4569789
Hola amigo hispano. Cute gril, it looks much better with less saturated colors.

[Anonymous No.4569809]

>>4568781
His style and the fact he tries to experiment and do something different and interesting has more merit. His art really stands out in originality.

[Anonymous No.4569811]

>>4569496
I didn't went to sleep. I will now haha

[Anonymous No.4569898]

>>4568904
Blog?

[Anonymous No.4569900]

Yes traveling

[BCS !zYWrhqMVos No.4569911]

>>4561259


Do western cartoons go here too?

[Anonymous No.4569912]

>>4569583
At least you're still drawing dude. I completely shut down when I'm distracted

[BCS !zYWrhqMVos No.4569920]

>>4569912

me too, I scribble a circle and just sit there for hours, stuck. I'm deeply depressed right now.

[Anonymous No.4569934]

>>4569163
/beg/

[Anonymous No.4569938]

>>4569650
Since it’s Armageddon chin getter, I would cover him up as much as possible. Ugly-ass nigga

[Anonymous No.4569946]

>>4569898
https://www.instagram.com/jordi_milian/

[Anonymous No.4569954]

>>4569946
>>4568904
This is some good shit, do you work on mobile games?

[Anonymous No.4569971]

>>4569954
Thanks, and nope, but I do this just in case some day I need to aply for a mobile company

[Anonymous No.4569984]

>>4569971
You should apply right now, don't wait.

[Anonymous No.4569998]

>>4569659
good luck bro

[Anonymous No.4570040]

>>4569984
I already have a job :)

[Anonymous No.4570058]

>>4569806
No, it wont look better.
AJUA!

[Anonymous No.4570070]

>>4569789
really cute!

[Anonymous No.4570100]

anyone on /ALT/ doing Marco Bucci's character design competition?

[Anonymous No.4570255]

>>4569684
thank u...
>>4569998
you too, that is really good stuff

[Anonymous No.4570271]

>>4570100
thats such an ugly concept art lmao
>serial killer brute with cargo pants and a samurai sword

[Anonymous No.4570358]

>>4568273
Reminds me of Siam from Silent Hill. The monster with the Husband and Wife tied up together.

[Anonymous No.4570430]

>>4567590
some color

[Anonymous No.4570443]

>>4570271
agree. but literally everything else is amazing

[Anonymous No.4570445]

>>4568307
Thank you so much! Yes, we have a lot of freedom with this project, the topics I chose were horror and the subconscious so I'm writing about Silent Hill for a part of it. This is one of the enemies from the game
>>4570358
Oh! I'm not really familiar with the games made after Team Silent, but I definitely see the resemblance :)

[Anonymous No.4570452]

>>4569363
me gusta

[Anonymous No.4570457]

>>4568542
>>4568952
I find that creepy more than anything else

[Anonymous No.4570563]

Does the perspective or anatomy looks odd? I didn't do proper measurement beforehand and it made the whole process way more tedious.

[Anonymous No.4570575]

>>4570563
Asukafag is that you? Everything seems ok, except the legs.

[Anonymous No.4570601]

>>4570575
Nah I'm no asukafag, just some randos. Thanks for pointing that out btw, just tried the pose on mirror and I can see that the lower leg need adjustment.

[Anonymous No.4570607]

>>4570575
Her hands are too stiff.

[Anonymous No.4570614]

>>4570563
how the legs connect to the body, feels weird.
everything else is good. (and from the thumbnail I too thought you were asukafag)

[Anonymous No.4570757]

>>4570563
Update before bed

[Anonymous No.4570802]

>>4570757
cute!!

[Anonymous No.4570880]

>>4568542
>>4568952
It's supposed to be a chick with short hair, but yeah, long and short of it is it was for Mermay, and it was the idea that mermaids weren't born, that they were made . I always inadvertently draw ugly looking people so I guess they're kind of androgynous.

Pretty wild seeing my garbage as the OP though.

[Anonymous No.4571009]

>>4569204

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[Anonymous No.4571089]

>>4570430
real nice anon

[Anonymous No.4571143]

I'm not really a furry artist, but I wanted to try that thisfursonadoesnotexist draw challenge.

[Anonymous No.4571146]

>>4564004
try looking at her and think about how extending yourself that far before hitting anything is disadvantageous in an actual fight.
to generate momentum and impact, you dont stop your punch at the point of impact, you generate force by following through. if she's fully extended, and still doesn't connect, she's going to fall on her face

[Anonymous No.4571148]

>>4571035
soul

[Anonymous No.4571150]

>>4571146
This. It's called a "hook" for a reason.

[Anonymous No.4571187]

>>4568854
You got carried away with stylizing the mouth, it looks like something out of a Ctrl+Alt+Del comic.
The general outline of the face is also too cartoony, give a bit more definition to the left cheek + chin area.

[Anonymous No.4571219]

god dam i had so much trouble with her face. why does it still look like shit.

[Anonymous No.4571291]

[Anonymous No.4571475]

>>4571291
Nice panels, looks real good man. Blog?

[Anonymous No.4571478]

>>4571219
That's a nice man

[Anonymous No.4571484]

>>4570757
Looks nice! I like you fixed the hand while maintaining the style.

[Anonymous No.4571488]

>>4570880
Looks cool. You got a blog?

[Anonymous No.4571497]

>>4571488
Aye, I do (and ty).
twitter.com/vshtone

[Anonymous No.4571554]

>>4570614
>>4570575
Why are you obsessed with that polish fag

[Anonymous No.4571560]

>>4570880
Be more proud of ur art

[Anonymous No.4571588]

>>4571560
I hate everything that I create. I always start off enthusiastic but by the end what I thought was good looks like complete shit only a few hours later. I don't know what's wrong with me or if this is something other artists experience or how to get over it.

[Anonymous No.4571597]

>>4571588
yeah that's like the majority of us
why do you think anons here are so belligerent

[Anonymous No.4571610]

>>4571588
It you end up finding faults that means you're growing as an artist, and you're refining things with practice. I've learned the most with the pieces I dislike the most.

[Anonymous No.4571616]

[Anonymous No.4571650]

>>4571616
Fixed the dwarf and tall guy's face

[Anonymous No.4571652]

>>4571616
Fixed the dwarf and tall guys face since uploading this

[Anonymous No.4571689]

>>4570430
really good, love the pose and the perspective choice

[Anonymous No.4571756]

one of my last sketches

[Anonymous No.4571882]

>>4569439
Tentaclegrape hat

[Anonymous No.4571888]

>>4569443
i still have no solutions for this

>>4569467
I like bugs

[Anonymous No.4571909]

>>4571882
blog?

[Anonymous No.4572029]

Doodles made on flockmod.

[Anonymous No.4572061]

>>4569163
being obsessed with mass shooters is a sign that you want to be one.

[Anonymous No.4572081]

>>4572061
That's the most retarded thing I've seen
>heh so you like girls? Take these pills and cut your dick off :^)

[Anonymous No.4572089]

>>4571219
Big jaw and big necc. I made a quick edit that may help you. Probably has other minor mistakes that I'm not able to see.

[Anonymous No.4572167]

right hand needs a ref
Do the breasts seem fine? Feel like they're off but I can't tell

[Anonymous No.4572467]

Roughing out an idea.

[Anonymous No.4572494]

>>4561872
thanks anon

hue

[Anonymous No.4572507]

>>4561288
berserker vibes
>>4561641
love this
>>4561919
>>4562411
>>4562578
>>4563350
>>4567056
>>4567378
>>4568295
>>4568320
>>4569659
>>4569789
>>4572029
<3

[Anonymous No.4572577]

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[Anonymous No.4572594]

>>4572593
This is so cute anon. Do you have a Deviantart/Twitter?

[Anonymous No.4572595]

>>4561259
I feel like I'm missing something or made it worse.

[Anonymous No.4572596]

>>4572595
Previous version for comparison.

[Anonymous No.4572599]

>>4572593
You are gonna make it. Love the simplicity and color pallete

[Anonymous No.4572608]

>>4572594

Thank you! Yeah, I go by @/azaraknyal. I vary between some art styles, I'm sure that you'll see that.

[Anonymous No.4572616]

>>4572593
This could work like an album cover.

[Anonymous No.4572731]

>>4572595
You definitely showed the forms more in this one but I think the problem really is the under drawing.
One of the first things I noticed is her uneven collar bone.

[Anonymous No.4572759]

did this instead of studying and doing chores.

[Anonymous No.4572774]

>>4572081
Its quite literally a common thing among all mass shooters.

Dylan Roof, Nikolas Kruz and even Adam Lanza all were obsessed with other mass shooters, particularly the one carried out by Dylan and Eric.

[Anonymous No.4572781]

[Anonymous No.4572823]

>>4572595
The problem is that you've got cool shadows on the body, and then warm shadows on the hair. It's throwing the entire drawing into disharmony.

Change the shadows on bod to a warmer, pinkier tone and it'll make an immediate difference.

[Anonymous No.4572890]

>>4571616
Trying to shake the rust off

[Anonymous No.4572928]

>>4572595
Remember.
Cool light = warm shade
Warm light = cool shade

[Anonymous No.4572933]

>>4572759
Made me lol. Very nice work anon.

[Anonymous No.4572973]

shits going down tonight

[Anonymous No.4573093]

[Anonymous No.4573108]

>>4573093
Those tiddys don't have enough gravity for the low force she's putting out

[Anonymous No.4573126]

>>4573108
I hoped that the hair would show that she is in the motion

[Anonymous No.4573350]

[Anonymous No.4573365]

>>4573350
RUINED

[Anonymous No.4573370]

Thots?

[Anonymous No.4573384]

>>4573370
10% technique
90% zoomer stylization

[Anonymous No.4573391]

>>4573384
Make it more boomer?

[Anonymous No.4573414]

>>4571148
I've noticed a pattern on this board.
>work that features children almost always gets responded with "soul"

[Anonymous No.4573419]

>>4570443
a shame the whole course is on how to build a good character design

[Anonymous No.4573422]

>>4568497
Chronicle?
Pretty neat

[Anonymous No.4573427]

Line work version

[Anonymous No.4573431]

>>4573384
>10% technique
>90% zoomer stylization
aka this entire thread?

[Anonymous No.4573453]

The random box is there because I wanted to put a little editor's note to sell the graphic novel look
I just haven't figured out what to put in it
>>4571689
>>4571089
Thank you!

[Anonymous No.4573526]

>>4573427

[Anonymous No.4573605]

>>4573093
great job!!

[Anonymous No.4573693]

>>4573526
I’d be looking because I’d be scared of the teeth too, it’s horrifying

[Anonymous No.4573806]

really like how this turned out

did it with markers and then scanned and edited

[Anonymous No.4573950]

[Anonymous No.4573956]

[Anonymous No.4574279]

Loomis was right s hogarth perspective villppu, multy approach education system. Sleep no.1

[Anonymous No.4574454]

>>4571882
I got really into the ripped stockings, and i let everything else go wayside

[Anonymous No.4574513]

>>4572890
Looks really comfy anon

[Anonymous No.4574549]

>>4574454
blog.

[Anonymous No.4574567]

>>4571291
I remember you, love your lolis

[Anonymous No.4574580]

my ocs (a colonizer boy and a tribe girl)

[Anonymous No.4574628]

>>4573956
Unnatural pose. You don't lean away from the hand that you lean your face on.
Try to do your poses infront of a mirror to get a better understanding.

[Anonymous No.4574734]

Does anyone know how to achieve this kind of texture on CSP. The one shown in the lines.

[Anonymous No.4574740]

>>4574734
Its just a textured pencil, you can find plenty on the CSP asset store for free or just look them up online

[Anonymous No.4574782]

>>4574549
>>4571909
Blog here https://twitter.com/tableguyart

>>4574454
Are garter socks real? They are very hot. I made garter gloves to match.

[Anonymous No.4574784]

>>4561259
Some concept art for my game.

[Anonymous No.4574808]

>>4574740
I'm asking how to achieve a similar kind of texture on my own brushes. Not how to use the asset store to get textured pencils

[Anonymous No.4574906]

>>4572890
Looks really cool, you got a blog?

[Anonymous No.4574910]

>>4574580
I really like this, good work

[Anonymous No.4575001]

frefrefre

[Anonymous No.4575090]

>>4561259

[Anonymous No.4575223]

Sketched this on my phone in twenty minutes.

[Anonymous No.4575419]

One hour mark.

[Anonymous No.4575438]

[Anonymous No.4575552]

>>4574580
you have very very nice lines, blog?

[Anonymous No.4575561]

>>4575419
Very nice. But some of the areas are a bit flat and lack form. It looks like someone painted features on a stump of wood. Especially the mouth, left jaw and left cheek bone. This is not a shading issue either, it's that the shapes themselves lack dimensionality. I would suggest erasing the entire left (our right) side of his face and retrying to structure while keeping the perspective in mind.

[Anonymous No.4575564]

>>4574784
I love the pristine white human teeth. Gives the monster a human aspect which makes it much creepier.

[Anonymous No.4575576]

>>4561259
I feel like the perspective is a bit fucked

[Anonymous No.4575618]

A little more patient with the sketch on this one.

[Anonymous No.4575754]

An hour in.

[Anonymous No.4575757]

I hope this doesn't come across as too juvenile and edgy, I'm in the process of designing a Masahiro Ito inspired monster for my project, my first time drawing anything symbollic lol

[Anonymous No.4576080]

Taking a break from commissions to draw mechs

[Anonymous No.4576099]

Do you guys rike it?

[Anonymous No.4576116]

>>4576099
are we looking her on a window and we are her?

[Anonymous No.4576148]

dragon quest

[Anonymous No.4576207]

>>4575757
WIP

[Anonymous No.4576213]

>>4576116
you mean a mirror?

[Anonymous No.4576362]

>>4576207
Didn't mean to spam, sorry

[Anonymous No.4576363]

>>4575552
https://twitter.com/tsflipp

[Anonymous No.4576364]

>>4576362

[Anonymous No.4576385]

>>4576099
shes cute, try and give her hands more form

[Anonymous No.4576574]

>>4564831
I based it on a reference image.

>>4568670
Damn, didn't know I wasn't allowed to draw clothes until I've mastered anatomy

[Anonymous No.4576615]

>>4574808
Woah! check out this huge faggot!

[Anonymous No.4576632]

I know it's boring but please help me at least make it look right.

[Anonymous No.4576647]

>>4576632
Eyes seem high. Gives him a caveman look.

Bow might need to be tilted a bit to a more vertical orientation based on how I'm reading the arrow and where the string would fit under his arm. You may have to play around with it a bit and find what looks good.

Looks good otherwise though

[Anonymous No.4576670]

>>4571475
>>4574567
thank you
i'm not on blog.

[Anonymous No.4576916]

>>4576647
Thanks anon, you saved me an anxiety attack.

[Anonymous No.4576919]

>>4575090
very nice

[Anonymous No.4577303]

>>4561259
I want a new thread already

[Anonymous No.4577570]

new bread now
>>4577567
>>4577567
>>4577567

[Anonymous No.4577625]

>>4564004

[Anonymous No.4577714]

>>4572596

>>4572823
You have a point there.

>>4572928
Is that for contrast or is there a scientific reason for that?

[Anonymous No.4578194]

>>4576670
Stellar stuff, I hope you'll post more frequently