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4536405 No.4536405 [Reply] [Original]

What do you think is wrong with this piece?

>> No.4536415

I can't stand his faces.

>> No.4536420

>>4536405
Isn't that the gaymergirl pee producer?

>> No.4536423

Freckles

>> No.4536435

>>4536415
Maybe he's trying to represent trannies in an honest way.

>> No.4536437

>>4536405
not enough armpit hair, otherwise perfect

>> No.4536461

>>4536405
That boob placement, the fuck!?

>> No.4536486

>>4536405
Ugly faces, ugly tits, gay, bad boring sex because he's bored enough to force a smile for the camera

>> No.4536499

>>4536405
the subject matter

>> No.4536561

>>4536405
The perspective on the table is the only problem I detect
Thd rest is up for debate but proportion perspective value and anatomy are pefectly fine

>> No.4536569

The ear?

>> No.4537029
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4537029

so many things are wrong here. Made a quick fix on some of the biggest issues according to my taste. because bored. Should pay me for doing this :P hope this helps.

>> No.4537071

>>4537029
Definitely better, which is odd for /ic/ edits, except your retarded tits.

>> No.4537081

>>4537029
The only thing you fixed was the right knee, everything else you did sucked the soul right of the original

>> No.4537089

>>4537029
Your version has no soul

>> No.4537096

>>4537081
>>4537089
He fixed the wonky face and the massive tranny deltoids, you blind faggets

>> No.4537097

>>4536405
Women's don't have penises.

>> No.4537133

>>4537081
i fixed a lot more than that noob. And to be honest im not gonna put that much more effort on some random wonky ass drawing in /ic/ shit perspective and bad anatomy does not mean soul. Get your fundies right. I put it in the right path, the original artist who drew this is probably going to take a few notes. You need to develop your eye more.

>> No.4537134
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>>4537097
the only correct answer

>> No.4537139

>>4537029
now replace the cock by a strap-on

>>4537096
he also removed the armpit hair

>> No.4537186

>>4537097
In 2020, they do.

>> No.4537189
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4537189

Hey guys, I study his faces so I can become as good as him.
How am I doing so far?

>> No.4537204

>>4536405
that is posted on ic instead of aco and worst, trying to make fun of one of the most relevant coomer artists in this generation

t. incase

>> No.4537218

>>4537029
wow

>> No.4537261

>>4537029
You improved her face and ruined the tits

>> No.4537305

>>4537029
Congrats anon, somehow you manage to fix an unfixable piece of trash.

>> No.4537315

>>4536405
Nothing important

>> No.4537325

>>4537189
Haha so funny and ironic xddddddddddxdxdd

>> No.4537333

>>4537029
>>4537096
I prefer your version, however this kind of fixes based on personal taste are meaningless.

>> No.4537348

>>4537333
No shit Sherlock

>> No.4537390

>>4537097
reality is often disappointing

>> No.4537411

>>4537029
good fix
left is la creatura

>> No.4537591

>>4537029

Hello, Based Department?

>> No.4537596

>>4537325
>no fun allowed

>> No.4537613

>>4537029
Thank you, that mouth was killing me.

>> No.4537636

>>4536405
Her dick isn't big enough

>> No.4537649

>>4537596
Is not funny.

>> No.4537675

>>4537649
Don't worry, most autists like (you) have a hard time understanding humor.

>> No.4537818

>>4537029
good shit ruining her torpedo tits for your boring soulless ones

>> No.4537828

>>4537081
>THE SOUL THE SOUL YOU REMOVED THE SOUL THE FUCKING SOUL
what is this retarded meme?

>> No.4537906

>>4536405
I've never seen a 'dickgirl' drawn like such a realistic tranny before. It's got the hairy body, manface, muscles, and everything. It's personally not my thing, but I appreciate the honesty.

>> No.4537924

>>4536405
The tit on the left looks like a U drawn on the body, no volume at all. The head is floating and the right shoulder is wayyyyy too big.

>> No.4537931

>>4536461
This. It looks like he used several refs from different angles. The tit toward the left of the frame makes no sense its pointing straight down.

>> No.4537941

>>4537029
Your tits are still weird. Everything else is better though. You're tits look like melty pecks with nipples painted on in the wrong space.

>> No.4538206

The cum. Every dick pic has this weird white goo sticking off the ass.

This one isn't that bad, but so many cartoons are obsessed with that style.

>> No.4538340

>>4537596
No, fuck off

>> No.4538342

>>4538340
lol

>> No.4538350

>>4538206
Well how would you draw semen coming out of someones asshole since you seem to know so much about that, gaylord?

>> No.4538491

>>4536405
Conveniently hidden hands and feet.

>> No.4541416

>>4536405
>armpit hair
>no pubes
shame

>> No.4541525

>>4541416
I appreciate this combo because it's extremely rare.

>> No.4541645

>>4537029
take this all with a grain of salt because i'm absolute beg but i guessed maybe my thoughts are worth something. and if they're incorrect please correct me.

It's a good edit, but it looked like you made her a little stiffer. In the first one she looks like she's pulling out, but in your edit the post orgasm penis looks better and like it's being pulled out. For those who are getting bent out of shape about the tits, when someone orgams their boobs inflate so I think it's fine. idk if this is a tranny though so the torpedo tits are probably implants which is what the original artist wanted. They're in a locker room which suggests a more muscled look which you rendered over. She is taking an angled selfie and her arm placement suggests your rerender of her face is more accurate. Both ops pic and yours, in my opinion, looks like she's a little off balance, but in op's drawing the butt sticking out with the muscle definition on the thigh make up for that. but you took that away. That's fine, but maybe you could have done something with the left arm to add to the balance. idk

>> No.4541675

>>4541645
>I'm absolute beg but i guessed maybe my thoughts are worth something. and if they're incorrect please correct me
I will be happy to correct you. Your beg thoughts are indeed worthless.

>> No.4541698

>>4541675
to you, because you don't even draw lol

>> No.4543747

>>4537029
>removing the armpit hair
fuck off
everything else is great

>> No.4543749

>>4536405
Face looks like el ogro, pretty weird considering the rest

>> No.4544297

>>4543747
yikes

>> No.4545099

>>4536405
>What do you think is wrong with this piece?
It’s not me on the right.

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>>4536405
This stays up but i get banned for 2 weeks for posting something like pic related? Fuck you all you dog faced baby fuckers

>> No.4545114

>>4545105
and you will get banned again

>> No.4547003

>>4537029
you ruined the tits

>> No.4547203

>>4537189
Mouth needs to be closer to the bottom of the chin.

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>>4541645
>i'm absolute beg

Why the FUCK would I read past that point anon?