Alternative Art / Stylization Thread

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Alternative Art / Stylization Thread Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:19:05 2020 No.4515478 [Reply] [Original]

Previous >>4501795
What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:20:22 2020 No.4515482 >>4515478 Make /alt/ great again

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:21:48 2020 No.4515490 >>4515482 pls no meltdowns

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:28:31 2020 No.4515522 File: 822 KB, 1000x1300, mugi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Aaah OP image is gorgeous I drew Mugi for a friend's birthday

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:41:16 2020 No.4515574 File: 584 KB, 750x1000, 2104.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How do i stop going turbo autism mode when it comes to the render

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 20:44:31 2020 No.4515588 >>4515478 Artist? Blog?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:15:31 2020 No.4515694 Trash OP, look at those fucking legs lol

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:16:39 2020 No.4515700 >>4515694 Pyw

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:19:55 2020 No.4515712 >>4515694 >whats stylesation

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:20:18 2020 No.4515715 >>4515694 Post your legs.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:32:00 2020 No.4515744 >>4515694 This is probably from that fucker that only draws sketchy loli bodies with no arms or legs and keeps saying how he's the best artist in /alt/.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 21:32:08 2020 No.4515745 >>4515715 And feet hehe...just to make sure hehe

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 22:08:42 2020 No.4515842 File: 334 KB, 981x948, gbtv5.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] funny ha ha

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 22:11:44 2020 No.4515850 >>4515842 Btfo underage furfag

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 22:12:43 2020 No.4515853 File: 137 KB, 828x1068, 21EE5703-749B-4913-BA5B-BAC2B3801C22.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pleasantly surprised with how this is coming out. :) Still in its beginning stages of course.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 22:15:27 2020 No.4515857 >>4515850 >btfo retard doesn't know what btfo stands for

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 23:08:27 2020 No.4515962 >>4515745 based

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 23:30:16 2020 No.4516001 File: 467 KB, 935x1260, handfairy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 23:36:38 2020 No.4516014 >>4516001 Go to /beg/

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 21 23:38:15 2020 No.4516020 >>4515478 Nice OP image. Reminds me of Disgaea and something else that slips my mind. Anyone know?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 00:46:30 2020 No.4516096 >>4515574 what do you even mean by that

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 00:54:06 2020 No.4516101 >>4516001 Is she picking her nose?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 00:56:33 2020 No.4516102 >>4516020 Disgaea and Death Note? Castlevania Judgement for wii?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 00:59:29 2020 No.4516106 File: 508 KB, 1535x1768, IMG_20200420_143136_617.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This was a nice experiment

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 01:01:08 2020 No.4516108 >>4516096 Maybe he means spending days mixing techniques making it a fucking clusterfuck

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 01:04:27 2020 No.4516113

>>4516108
It doesn't even look like a clusterfuck, kind of looks like he just straight up used a multiply layer for shading and a normal raster layer for the lighting with an additional layer for the slight airbrush effect. Sort of looks like he also used an overlay layer. That's like what, 3-4 layers total?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 01:42:05 2020 No.4516178 >>4516102 Neither of those. Eh, I'll figure it out one day, next fukin year at complete random, likely.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 01:53:16 2020 No.4516192 >>4516113 I'm just trying to understand what his post was about. Maybe it was unrelated to the image

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 01:55:42 2020 No.4516199

>used to have trouble drawing nose from different angles that isn't just 3/4, front, or portrait
>someone suggested sculpting last thread
>fuck around with sculptris for a bit, make some heads for shits and giggles
>drawing a nose at different angles is for some reason a little easier now

fuck me, thanks for the advice, anon. Definitely gonna start making some heads for practice sessions and shit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 02:23:30 2020 No.4516230 >>4516178 Bloodstained

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 02:28:42 2020 No.4516235 >>4516199 That's an interesting method. Know of any good low maintenance molding materials? Something I could play with on my desk without a mess?

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 03:06:53 2020 No.4516284

>>4516235
different anon here.
super sculpey in my experience is a good balance of durability and clay softness, it's hard enough that you can give it a lot of detail but soft enough to be pliable. Personally I like physical sculpting, it's more fun. You should try to use bamboo tools if you can, they feel nice.
There are a lot of different modelling clay brands that offer their own level of hardness and brittleness, I've seen some people use Fimo clay for miniature scale models.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 03:14:14 2020 No.4516295 File: 427 KB, 1269x2417, B102D7CC-86B5-4785-8404-D3E4FE456FD5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 03:25:38 2020 No.4516314 File: 784 KB, 1658x1273, F1448517-347F-45C3-BFC1-280769F38117.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying to stay consistent

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 03:54:21 2020 No.4516353 >>4516295 resize your shit squidfucker

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 04:13:03 2020 No.4516377 >>4516353 How do you do that?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 04:22:33 2020 No.4516388 >>4516377 honeyview

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 05:28:26 2020 No.4516462 File: 306 KB, 2348x1305, image0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Planning on sending a new character on an adventure.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 05:38:31 2020 No.4516474 >>4516284 Thanks! I mainly work with weird, xenomorphous designs, and I think this would help me conceptualize their forms better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 06:09:52 2020 No.4516514 >>4516096 >>4516108

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 06:46:47 2020 No.4516564 >>4515478 Fuck i'm jelly

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 06:52:02 2020 No.4516571 >>4516564 Of?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:37:57 2020 No.4516662 File: 523 KB, 600x900, Cerise Pinup.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:40:48 2020 No.4516663 File: 482 KB, 1250x1700, hqdefault.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Hey I'm workin on this here coom character, but it ain't turnin out quite how I want it. advice?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:42:40 2020 No.4516666 >>4516663 Hear sweater is made out of shiny plastic. You gotta work on materials.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:45:56 2020 No.4516668 >>4516666 Yeah I did it to boost coomer appeal but it does look off.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:54:44 2020 No.4516680 >>4516662 how do you create this awesome shading Anon?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:55:02 2020 No.4516682 >>4516663 nipples are too low

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 07:57:08 2020 No.4516683 >>4516663 what do you think is wrong with it?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:00:11 2020 No.4516689 File: 858 KB, 1201x1700, fa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4516683 it's a far cry but preferably something one of them Japanese fellers

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:00:55 2020 No.4516693 >>4516663 Are you sure this is your art? Looks too good to be /ic/

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:02:50 2020 No.4516695 >>4516693 t. coomer

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:15:46 2020 No.4516709 File: 251 KB, 850x913, clown cat.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hi alt frens how is life holding up?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:23:09 2020 No.4516723 File: 32 KB, 865x526, 22.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:24:01 2020 No.4516726 >>4516693 pyw

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 08:33:23 2020 No.4516738 >>4516663 Lmao nice hands nerd

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:03:33 2020 No.4516808 >>4516014 I disagree

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:28:20 2020 No.4516871 >>4516663 add a strand of pubic hair on her mouth, increase face blush (don't forget the ear blushes, japs love that shit), add sweat streaks to inner thigh, add gratuitous amounts of airbrushed breath/sweat "smoke"

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:40:16 2020 No.4516894 >>4516738 I genuinely don't see the issue can you draw how they should look? they're not completely rendered yet.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:45:16 2020 No.4516901 is this /alt/ or /beg/? it's honestly hard to tell.

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:46:27 2020 No.4516906

>>4516663
>>4516871
You don't have to add in the pubic hair on the mouth shit, it's just a suggestion. I guess what I should really say is that you should try to incorporate layered storytelling into your coom art, since that tends to hold up a lot better compared to just a pin-up pose of a girl in a vulnerable or compromising position, or worse yet just a drawing of a girl with huge tiddies with nothing else to give it a unique flare.

All I'm seeing right now is just a girl telling off the viewer over some piece of paper, you need to add in some additional element to give it that coom-art status, big tiddies just don't cut it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:51:40 2020 No.4516923 >>4516663 i am not sure why nobody pointed it out, but nipples should not point down in this position, unless she has granny tits

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 09:52:46 2020 No.4516926 >>4516901 post better content or gtfo, crab

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:00:21 2020 No.4516942 >>4516693 This is surprisingly made by an /asg/tard.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:01:20 2020 No.4516946 >>4516462 sword graveyard is such an overdone cliche yet it always stays cool somehow

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:02:50 2020 No.4516950 >>4516462 >Not some dude with a walking stick

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:04:38 2020 No.4516955 >>4516571 his skills

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:05:09 2020 No.4516957 >>4516942 How is it surprising that someone that draws anime posts in the anime thread lmao

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:05:52 2020 No.4516961 >>4516689 kantoku is a god, you can't touch him

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:07:57 2020 No.4516966 >>4516957 Not him but to be fair, most of /asg/ is literally beg tier so i didn't see that coming

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:09:05 2020 No.4516970 >>4516957 No i mean of this quality. The average /asg/tard are worse than /beg/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:09:30 2020 No.4516973 >>4515522 kyoot >>4515574 blog?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:09:33 2020 No.4516974 >>4516961 I'm still young I got time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:32:43 2020 No.4517047 >>4516970 >>4516966 >>4516942 don't bully /asg/, the day of reckoning will come

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:40:54 2020 No.4517074
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>>4516663
>>4516689
Honestly I think you are pretty close, way better /asg/ art than I can make in general. Coom wise especially those boobs look really juicy and that (covered) midriff is hot!

As it has been said the suit she wears looks like it would be some wet skin tight swimsuit instead of a business suit. However since this is coom art so I guess this can be overlooked because it does make her looks sexy.

What I can say is that the lights are inconsistent, the face indicates a major light source from the right side yet the rest of the body seems to have the light coming all over. I know these artworks are created with studio lighting in mind having proper rim lights on both sides behind, one from above and a softer from the front etc. But the more you add the more complicated it will be to render and more disjointed it will feel when it is not rendered correctly. The more details you add the more there is room for error.

I would also suggest adding a proper background so that white background does not blind the viewer from appreciating all the subtle values you have spent so much care in rendering.

I tried here but unironically I think I just made it worse.

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>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:44:56 2020 No.4517081 >>4517074 lol

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:45:06 2020 No.4517082 File: 210 KB, 1000x1545, Kipkerstrommfightforthefutureposterv2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4515478 I came in a bit late to the last thread.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 10:48:22 2020 No.4517084 >>4517082 this is cool especially the colors and composition and I like the dudes design but the girls jaw I think needs a revamp her face is making the design unappealing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:09:24 2020 No.4517124 >>4517084 That's an interesting point. The jaw is the problem? Is it too blocky?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:18:35 2020 No.4517144 File: 3.38 MB, 4093x2894, waterlog.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Tryna nail down an art style for a comic

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:19:39 2020 No.4517149 >>4517144 Neat. What's it about?

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:44:15 2020 No.4517213

>>4517149
Hmm. In as little words as possible...
Grimdark, fuedal eastern fantasy set in a world where briny demons swim through an ethereal ocean that overlaps with our world.
By inbibing of the flesh of a particular eel and letting it eat your large intestine and take its place like a parasite (an EXTREMELY painful process) it will allow you to use the same abilities as these demons.
The stories are about these eel warriors and their struggles.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:45:44 2020 No.4517219 >>4516973 @rockset123321

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:47:33 2020 No.4517223 >>4517213 Fukin awesome, lad. Got any more stuff/blog?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:48:28 2020 No.4517227 >>4517213 literally bioshock.

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:56:12 2020 No.4517253
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>>4516974
Just bullying you a little, my idol is a god too so i know that feel, half way there already.
How long have you been drawing?
Right now it look okay, but still in mediocre tier, it still lack alot of refinements in a pro's work. Pose, line weight, the way you render. Just keep drawing.
For now i suggest fixing her chest, what you have is what i call boob pockets.
Also start learning BG

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:58:12 2020 No.4517264 >>4517213 That's rad, dude. Hope you share more from it as it comes along. Web or Print?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 11:59:23 2020 No.4517270 >>4517253 >still in mediocre tier Man. I'd love to get to mediocre tier.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:01:45 2020 No.4517278 File: 123 KB, 1280x720, Vin.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4517213 >>4517144 where will i be able to read it? also the character with the glasses reminds me of an older Vin from jak 2

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:06:37 2020 No.4517296

>>4517223
Thanks, not yet though
>>4517227
Yeah kind of hey. I never really thought about it as I never finished that game. In my head its more ritualistic and less scientific. The ethereal ocean also cannot be seen or felt by normal people. I guess originality is dead though. You've seen one sea slug story you've seen them all
>>4517264
I'll try. Now that the virus has hit I have time to actually work on things.
>>4517278
I haven't really gotten that far. I need to scope out what sites are good. If you have any recommendatioms I'm all ears

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:08:40 2020 No.4517304 >>4517296 i was just pulling your leg, besides the slug thingy in the stomach your idea is pretty fucking original and based dare i say.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:11:23 2020 No.4517311 File: 478 KB, 1003x752, Finished skull study.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4515522

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:16:52 2020 No.4517328

>>4517304
Thanks. I'm just on edge most of the time because I can't count the amount of times I get an idea for something. Think its rad and start developing it before I realise I'm just copying another series I completely forgot existed.
Making stories is hard.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:22:42 2020 No.4517345 >>4517328 Everything starts out as a bit of a ripoff of something you like. It's where you take it that matters.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:24:32 2020 No.4517348 >>4517328 it's 2020 already, everything is a rip-off of something, there's no such thing as a real original. It's how you use them.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 12:31:00 2020 No.4517357 >>4517345 >>4517348 True true. Thanks for the pep talk anons. I'm going to try and keep consistent with some of these threads and see if I can't get this style off the ground. Give it some land legs

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 13:48:04 2020 No.4517492 File: 14 KB, 190x266, download.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4516950 I'm not trying to get hired as a concept artist

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 13:51:03 2020 No.4517499 >>4517492 > all concept art is sci fi exoskeleton dudes all you did was just confirm you're a NGMI and have zero experience lol

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 13:53:41 2020 No.4517507 File: 307 KB, 1062x678, 1529479177753.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4517270 Keep at it anon one day you'll be just as mediocre as the rest of us!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 13:56:23 2020 No.4517516 File: 639 KB, 1366x768, Artboard 1 thorr.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:02:12 2020 No.4517535 >>4517507 >anime shit >>>/beg/

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:22:03 2020 No.4517582 >>4516709 did you draw this? if so, do you have any media

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:24:32 2020 No.4517589 >>4517535 Thats rude...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:25:17 2020 No.4517590 File: 19 KB, 973x980, first-chan.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pixel art threads are so trash.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:34:03 2020 No.4517607 File: 347 KB, 1062x678, Gambatte!.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4517507 oh hey someone saved my image

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:34:41 2020 No.4517610 >>4517590 Much like your art

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:34:51 2020 No.4517611 >>4517607 I liked the style and saved it to my inspiration folder lmao

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:35:35 2020 No.4517612 >>4517582 yeah i did, i touched it up a little tho theres a refined version on the draw thread >>4517493. What do you mean by media?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:39:35 2020 No.4517623 >>4517611 oh no I just made the "definitely" part ahahaha

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:41:41 2020 No.4517631 File: 327 KB, 1062x678, drawing1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] this was the original

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 14:57:03 2020 No.4517670 >>4517610 Tell me what's wrong, I love crit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 15:18:40 2020 No.4517710 File: 1.58 MB, 1401x1548, 4-5-2020(4).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm probably not gonna work on this anymore, but if there's like any glaring flaws apart from the hands please feel free to eviscirate my asshole

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 15:19:14 2020 No.4517714 >>4517670 Theres not much to say if theres no ambition in your work.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 15:20:48 2020 No.4517718 >>4517714 nigga what? your criticism is donkey dick

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 15:26:34 2020 No.4517738 >>4517710 Weird neck. Ear on the left shouldn't be visible.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 15:27:13 2020 No.4517740 >>4517144 blog ?

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 17:28:02 2020 No.4518041
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Ok whats the play? (I haven't implemented every correction yet.
which is preferable
1. intentionally ridiculous
2. down to earth
if its neither I'm perfectly willing to revamp things

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 17:31:08 2020 No.4518054 >>4518041 Are those suppose to be nipples pocking out of her chest? If so, wrong placement there

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 17:34:56 2020 No.4518071 >>4518041 Post blog, fag.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 17:44:16 2020 No.4518097 File: 618 KB, 1225x1258, 04222020.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think I might be autistic...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 17:51:49 2020 No.4518119 >>4518097 You didn't realize it as soon as you willingly clicked on this website? add stupid to the list.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:00:53 2020 No.4518151 >>4518041 2 but you need to tone down the nipples a bit because they won't show through like that. Just slightly though.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:04:14 2020 No.4518159 >>4518041 >nipples peaking through 3 layers of fabric, 2 of which are incredibly thick lmao fucking coomer.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:06:19 2020 No.4518167 >>4518041 2 seems like the better option here, it makes sense ig. plus it looks better

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:06:53 2020 No.4518171 >>4518041 left catches eye a lot more

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:11:57 2020 No.4518190 >>4518041 >all these coomers in denial calling you coomer for having nipples see through >not realizing the actual flaw is how you can see her fucking navel, muscles and hipbones as if she is wearing latex

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:13:05 2020 No.4518195 >>4518041 they're gonna love this on r/mendrawingwomen!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:26:35 2020 No.4518228 >>4518041 Stop thinking with your dick for once in your goddamn life. Nipple and navel poking through that much fabric looks absolutely retarded.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:47:06 2020 No.4518269 File: 2.64 MB, 1337x1568, catgirlsandchill.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just chillin

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:53:16 2020 No.4518284 >>4518269 What’s the texture settings on the fur you used what brush etc.

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:53:56 2020 No.4518287
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>>4518269
Is she talking to a random corner is pace or is she avoiding the viewer by looking away trying to be bashful? Hate it when you fucks do this shit it either shows you're intentionally avoiding to have the eyes focused on something because you can't draw ellipses or you have the 'tism and can't even make eye contact with a fictional character you make yourself. This looking at a random corner in space needs to stop.

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 18:58:52 2020 No.4518298

>>4518287
She's trying to be bashful but I guess it didn't read right. Probably should've pushed the eyes further to the left to make it more obvious.
I just colored it with a sketching/lineart brush I use called SU-Cream Pencil, but everything is just the Turnip Pen in CSP.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 19:09:02 2020 No.4518328 >>4518284 Oops, forgot to link you to >>4518298

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 19:26:19 2020 No.4518366 >>4517612 He means social media

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 20:01:54 2020 No.4518448 >>4518287 Calm your autism

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 20:17:06 2020 No.4518486
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>>4518041
Don't you understand that the appeal of the outfit youre drawing is what it doesn't show? You are robbing the viewer the pleasure of imagining. If youre going to draw latex wear, then just draw latex wear. Rough 5 min edit but add some weight to her breasts by not making the top part so full, especially if her nipples point down, that implies sagging, so give her breasts some weight.

If this is an OC, Id reconsider her design a lot anon. What does she bring to the table that is unique to only her, that justifies you drawing her specifically and not some fanart of a busty anime girl? It doesnt have to be some magical trait, but as of right now the design is bland and unmemorable, especially coupled with your generic style. This sounds really harsh but youre on a decent path anon, especially with the face.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 20:23:17 2020 No.4518511 >>4518486 Looks like copying only anime didn’t help him, kek.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 20:45:02 2020 No.4518578 File: 114 KB, 850x1056, sample_43845ad3543ad01f8831a696bc8e490e.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4518041 is she wearing a sweater or a swimsuit?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 20:48:35 2020 No.4518596 >>4516001 nose is that you?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 21:18:23 2020 No.4518658 File: 372 KB, 630x840, Chai Tea Latte.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 21:52:15 2020 No.4518732 File: 550 KB, 2047x1408, EQMoo_-UwAARNZI.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4518486 This is a good post

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 21:58:02 2020 No.4518743 File: 228 KB, 1050x1050, why.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bill gates the foreskin emperor

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:09:25 2020 No.4518870 File: 377 KB, 1600x1200, Comic56.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:13:45 2020 No.4518877 >>4518870 >thas it mang

Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:19:29 2020 No.4518890
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How am I doin here?

The shit I see wrong on immediate is how her left leg blends in with the big guys left (his right). I also see how you can't tell that the chick is a chick.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:29:08 2020 No.4518901 >>4518041 Anon this is solid.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:33:15 2020 No.4518907 >>4518041 FIX YOUR FUCKING BOOB POCKETS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:37:39 2020 No.4518914 File: 2.07 MB, 960x1440, Ahiru.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I know the pose is awkward, I'm more concerned with the background because I rarely paint anything.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:37:46 2020 No.4518915 >>4518890 took me the longest time to figure out there were two figures. you need some contrast. that will fix a lot

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:38:47 2020 No.4518917 >>4518732 blog plz Please

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:45:54 2020 No.4518935 >>4518269 seeing your stuff always motivates me to study

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:47:27 2020 No.4518941 >>4518890 Fuck is going on

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 22 23:54:48 2020 No.4518961 >>4518915 Big oof. I'll work on that in the future. It's hard tho, I don't have access to color or any form of shading tho. I'm strictly working with lines, which is kinda poopy. I gotta spare on blacks to lol. Any small tips for that?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:04:24 2020 No.4518986 >>4518961 unfortunately i don't work with traditional or lineart even. best of luck tho

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:18:08 2020 No.4519004 What do you guys put your canvas resolution at? I'm using 4000x4000 thought I feel like it might be a little overkill for just line work.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:22:58 2020 No.4519012 >>4519004 >4000x4000 Jesus, i always draw small because large canvas make me feel weird. Anywho, as long as it work, 4000x4000 is like a baby compare to some of the artists on pixiv.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:23:11 2020 No.4519013 >>4519004 Yeah that's overkill. 1k or 2k is enough.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:31:59 2020 No.4519028 >>4519004 No, that's alright. Just because the other guys have potatoes that can't run big canvas it doesn't mean you shouldn't use one. Many mangaka use 7000 something px canvases.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:33:54 2020 No.4519032 >>4519004 Bigger is better, if your computer can handle a higher res, use a higher res. I use 6000+ px for paintings sometimes

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:38:08 2020 No.4519037 >>4519028 >>4519032 What's the pros of bigger canvas? Won't that just show your errors more clearly

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:43:07 2020 No.4519039

>>4519037
>Won't that just show your errors more clearly
Quite the opposite, many messy mistakes you make in the lineart/coloring that are very noticable at 100% res will be near invisible when you shrink it down for normal viewing, at 25%-50% of the original resolution. Just try doing clean lineart with a 1 pixel brush vs with a 20 px brush, the difference is obvious.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:48:37 2020 No.4519044

>>4519039
Interesting, guess i will try drawing in bigger canvas.
>will be near invisible when you shrink it down for normal viewing, at 25%-50% of the original resolution
So i should scale the picture down after finishing? I noticed some artist that draw large as fuck doesn't scale the works down.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 00:57:26 2020 No.4519051

>>4519044
>So i should scale the picture down after finishing? I noticed some artist that draw large as fuck doesn't scale the works down.
If you want to have the full resolution up, throw it up. But most people are only going to be viewing the image at smaller dimensions, as sites like Twitter automatically display images at a lower resolution. If you want to upload your full sized images you can go ahead and do that, but most people will view scaled down versions that will better fit their screens, due to the sites they view them on.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:04:56 2020 No.4519059 File: 222 KB, 647x993, tumor.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm angry NGMI crab, so have a tumor.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:29:43 2020 No.4519086 File: 832 KB, 1240x1754, Untitled15_20200423012654.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] An anatomy study.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:36:55 2020 No.4519093 File: 136 KB, 497x800, orion2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i think this looks pretty good

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:43:08 2020 No.4519101 >>4519093 read the sticky

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:45:37 2020 No.4519104 File: 24 KB, 400x400, 1554188961165.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I ordered a new sketchbook, kind of nervous my traditional art skills are going to be shit tier. I haven't touched a pencil in like a year.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:45:50 2020 No.4519105 >>4519059 Not /beg/

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:45:51 2020 No.4519106 File: 224 KB, 859x960, 1587585425090.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519101 no.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:48:11 2020 No.4519111 >>4519093 Fuck off underage furfag.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:48:40 2020 No.4519112 >>4518658 the right boob is a lot smaller. from your sketch i think you had it right initially.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 01:53:05 2020 No.4519123 File: 856 KB, 900x856, 1587588875723.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519111 no.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 02:41:54 2020 No.4519188 File: 620 KB, 1200x900, 7DCE1E42-4AEE-4217-8DFA-824747180911.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Face practice

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 02:47:03 2020 No.4519190 >>4519188 The features aren't siting on the head right, try practicing the Reilly Method.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 03:27:29 2020 No.4519222 >>4518658 head is way too big and the chest area is too small.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 03:30:03 2020 No.4519225 So I'm getting kind of sick of drawing on a screenless tablet. What are your guys thoughts on a ipad with pencil over something like a cheaper wacom?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 03:34:31 2020 No.4519228 >>4519225 >ipad don't waste your money. just find a 15 year old HP tablet and install photoshop on it. that's what i use.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 03:41:28 2020 No.4519237 >>4519225 I like it and think it’s worth it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 03:54:00 2020 No.4519246 >>4519225 I used to have an old thinkpad tablet pc. They're sturdy and comfortable to use.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:00:20 2020 No.4519252 File: 109 KB, 1080x1440, FB_IMG_1587587008822.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Tried sketching something less stiff.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:05:15 2020 No.4519256 >>4519093 Reminds me of Asscastle. Take that as you will

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:09:42 2020 No.4519258 File: 58 KB, 1212x972, kneecaps.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519256 ugh people always say that but i guess it's understandable because i took a lot of inspiration from cate wurtz's art

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:13:27 2020 No.4519264 >>4519258 It's a cute style, but don't fall into that bad habit of only pushing out essentially doodles and sketches, which I see with a lot of similar artists. It looks good as it is (for quick drawings) but that's also staying into a comfort zone.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:17:17 2020 No.4519268 >>4519252 I like

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:17:19 2020 No.4519269 >>4519264 well every time i try to draw something better it comes out looking stiff and awkward because i don't know shit about anatomy, so i'm sticking to basically doodles at the moment

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:21:09 2020 No.4519275 >>4519269 Then learn anatomy and keep drawing more

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:31:57 2020 No.4519287 >>4519269 That is the definition of a comfort zone. Cartoony doodles are fun, but if you don't want to be stuck with that for the next 50 years, now's a good time to start.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:32:03 2020 No.4519288 >>4519275 how do i learn anatomy

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:34:24 2020 No.4519294 >>4519288 You read the sticky like someone already told you to, nimrod

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 04:43:01 2020 No.4519311 File: 181 KB, 1152x2048, 1512169514018.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519269 you can learn anatomy and other fundamentals and integrate it into your style to make it more appealing like tkmiz. also try drawing backgrounds or something

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 05:10:50 2020 No.4519359 File: 345 KB, 1000x1000, awerty2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 05:46:51 2020 No.4519401 File: 37 KB, 215x235, IMG_7023.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4516709 Blog? Looks cute af

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:14:12 2020 No.4519533 File: 394 KB, 598x564, 1572581907006.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Do you guys talk about me when Im not here?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:15:41 2020 No.4519538 >>4519533 Yes ilya

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:22:02 2020 No.4519554 >>4519538 Im not Ilya, Im just in a lot of pain. I'm kinda losing my reason for meaning. You know?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:22:33 2020 No.4519555 >>4519554 wanna talk buddy?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:24:02 2020 No.4519557 >>4519554 Sauce of the picture pls

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:25:12 2020 No.4519559 >>4519554 didn't expect this cutesy cartoons thread to suddenly get heavy.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:26:50 2020 No.4519561 File: 313 KB, 943x708, your new reason.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519554 Here's your new reason.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 07:30:49 2020 No.4519569 >>4519401 https://www.instagram.com/_mou_art_/ used to have a bunch of trad irl life drawings but i decided to archive and start over digitally.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 08:01:16 2020 No.4519633

>>4519554
What if the only possibility to find meaning was in the struggle?
Without duress nothing thrives in this world. This is connected to our very existence, as we are the process of evolution.
Without that your muscles become weak, your brain stupid, your will feeble.
And the elites have created a new culture, where being strong, intelligent and independently minded are bad things.
They pretend these are unfair advantages on others, they are violent, they are based on old ideas that are toxic and so bad for you.
Meanwhile you can see that most people that succeed are quite scummy, they do dirty-handed things, don't respect the laws, all the while preaching this ideology.
You can see that with all the elites, the Bezos who construct a system to exploit people and avoid paying taxes, while pushing moralizing policies through the Washington Post.
Leonardo Di Caprio who burns the equivalent of small countries while preaching about climate change.
Jim Carrey who essentially suicided a girlfriend, and then goes on to say how bad orange man is.
They robbed you of any chance to get out of your depression, and you can only feel more miserable because your body and your mind, deeply, understand that there is no way out in this carefully constructed mind-prison.
You can try the "mental-health" approach. All it is is a way to try to tame your human nature to conform to this dysfunctional society that is destroying you.
Your best hope on this route is to become a drugged caged animal always on the verge of snapping, and thus always desperately clinging to "positivity", "mindfulness", or any other crutch that will be recommended by the specialist you'll see. Because deep inside, your mind understands what is really going on.
The only way out is to reject that system and enjoy the struggle. You really need to enjoy it, because there's not so much else in life.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 08:13:17 2020 No.4519641 >>4519554 I am thinking about you and sending you good vibes, Anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 08:37:43 2020 No.4519671 >>4519554 > I'm kinda losing my reason for meaning. You know? imagine needing a meaning in life and not just plowing trough it with sheer force of retard strenght

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:27:58 2020 No.4519729 File: 728 KB, 940x1037, faye1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4515478 I did these gothic ink-look pages recently but I'm worried they don't grab as much attention as even flat colors. Maybe I could try color screentones?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:29:35 2020 No.4519731 File: 781 KB, 940x1037, faye2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519729

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:37:19 2020 No.4519739

>>4519729
>>4519731
I like these a lot, but it is missing something. I don't think it needs screentones, I think it needs a lot more black; the characters are just on white for most of it. Adding heavy shadows and more details in the background might pull it together.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:43:14 2020 No.4519751 >>4518914 God this is really cute, blog?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:50:40 2020 No.4519760 >>4519739 that makes sense, thank you. I'll look at Mike Mignola's ink stuff again for how he handles non-distracting but still appealing backgrounds.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:53:04 2020 No.4519764 File: 100 KB, 750x728, 157624645765865.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519554 >You know? I don't. I don't feel anymore. It has upsides tho haha

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 09:57:12 2020 No.4519769 >>4519751 Thank you very much, but no blog

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 10:27:40 2020 No.4519809 File: 621 KB, 1358x1576, lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4517144 some more sketches

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 10:31:30 2020 No.4519817 >>4518914 mind if I ask what program/equipment you're using?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 10:33:35 2020 No.4519824 >>4519252 this is so much better then your usual stuff. with another two or three years of fundamental skill increase i think you could be very good. study more!

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 10:34:43 2020 No.4519825 >>4516663 It's obvious. Get rid of the glasses or no coom can be made.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 10:47:39 2020 No.4519854 File: 152 KB, 366x476, 1587609169723.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Asuka

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:00:39 2020 No.4519877 >>4517124 Looks like a pussy

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:02:03 2020 No.4519878 >>4517670 You're bland. Your style is boring and forgettable

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:03:05 2020 No.4519880 >>4519809 >toothy smile with gums >followed by a snarl expression what is this, amateur hour?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:04:15 2020 No.4519881 >>4519809 Cute eel.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:04:22 2020 No.4519882 >>4517670 If you try to imagine her other eye on her face it doesn't fit, or rather it does fit but they are way too big

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:07:33 2020 No.4519888 >>4519880 Well I mean... I am an amateur so yes

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:30:00 2020 No.4519910
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>>4518486
Ok I feel like I've addressed the issue with the tits and abdomine. I agree the design is bland I'll fix it some other day. Any advice for crafting an appealing background.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:43:28 2020 No.4519938

>>4519910
you removed the nipples after the bullying from the reddit feminists, but you kept the wool material being treated like latex, perfect choice.

The anon's bad edit fixed the ligthting on the shirt's sleeve in a good way, that's a thing you should take from it.
Otherwise fix the skirt, folds are bad and the "crotch lines" make no sense and look bad.

Since you have purple colors, default choice is split complementary, so go for yellow. Sakimichan method is take a picture, trace it, fix colors, bam. Yellow light getting in a classroom should be easy enough to find. Add lens blur to hide shortcomings.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:54:12 2020 No.4519957 File: 87 KB, 429x1280, AA786653-F986-4344-B20E-6467BCAB7BE7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 11:57:59 2020 No.4519969 >>4519938 >Coomfaggot seething

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:01:06 2020 No.4519980

>>4519957
Your stuff is always nice to see. But I do have to say a lot of it being toned similarly gives it a very "samey" feeling across the entire figure. The faces in particular are always very muted in expression so while the anatomy and colours are righteous, I don't find myself feeling any particular emotion while viewing these. I'd like to see how you do backgrounds as well.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:05:50 2020 No.4519997 >>4519957 Can you share your blog

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:07:03 2020 No.4519998 >>4519957 ngl thats a cute penis

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:13:33 2020 No.4520016 >>4519938 >the bullying from the reddit feminists Are you stupid? Nipples physically can't be in the place where he drew them before

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:14:49 2020 No.4520021 >>4519998 if thats a penis for you......

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:15:53 2020 No.4520023 >>4520021 Coomfaggots are genuinely retarded.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 12:18:27 2020 No.4520031 File: 918 KB, 1240x1754, Untitled15_20200423121403.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:03:04 2020 No.4520178
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>>4519969
>>4520016
You are literally retarded. Go look at cow tits like Hitomi Tanaka and you will see pictures with nipples in that position.
The issue is that they would never poke that hard through the fabric.
I said it's a stupid choice because he kept almost everything, the exaggerated proportions, the swimsuit-like clothing, etc, but removed the nipples.
It's like DOA that kept the waifu-baiting while covering up the sluts, it just alienates both sides.
If the guy wants to do coom art, he's not going to get your approval in any case, so he might as well just tell you to get fucked.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:04:36 2020 No.4520181 File: 240 KB, 741x1024, Anri+okita+_e20fdd453a4e8eae32f1f1d35b02a620.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519910 another ref to help you besides >>4520178

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:10:43 2020 No.4520206 >>4518743 dare i say it? based gains goblin.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:11:58 2020 No.4520212
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>>4519910
This one is a very good ref, there's a skirt, you can clearly see where the nipples are located. Just go look at good refs instead of asking retards who have never seen a woman in their lives.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:15:06 2020 No.4520220 >>4520212 I get that you have shit taste, calm down sperglord.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:30:57 2020 No.4520246 >>4519957 >Another standing, facing front pose

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:37:11 2020 No.4520262 >>4520246 >another floating-in-air pose >another sitting pose I can do it too

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:45:22 2020 No.4520286 >>4518159 I used to have similar uniform on high-school and you definitely can see the neepers, if they don't use a bra, not as exaggerated ofc, but I'm willing to let it slide as an stylistic choice

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:47:57 2020 No.4520294 >>4519104 Sketchbooks are supposed to be disposable it dose not fuckin matter what you draw on it

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:50:00 2020 No.4520302 >>4519252 I really, really, like it, but keep in mind the silhouette and the overlapping figures , the hand it's hard to read behind all those tangents

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 13:58:41 2020 No.4520331 File: 89 KB, 800x598, dood2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:04:10 2020 No.4520355 [DELETED]

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>>4520246
It’s definitely a bit of a comfort zone, gonna try to break away from it.
>>4519980
Thanks, you’re right, inthink I default to the stoic female expression most of the time cause I tend to focus on the body more. Gonna have to try and draw more situations that call for expressive faces.

Thanks for the thoughts, here’s more.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:08:38 2020 No.4520374 [DELETED]

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>>4519980
Thanks, you’re right, I do tend to go with a pretty stoic expression, I think I get so focused on the body that I tend to forget the face.
>>4520246
It’s definitely a comfort zone, gotta try to break away from it for sure.

Thanks for the thoughts, here’s another.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:17:05 2020 No.4520402
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had problems with my internet, I'm happy the drawing is liked.
>>4515694
I don't understand legs, I just can't feel them. I've read about them, drawn them from reference and imagination but it never clicks.
>>4515588
mothesstuff on instagram
>>4516020
Alucard and Koumajou maybe, it's what I kept thinking about while drawing it.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:17:49 2020 No.4520407
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>>4519980
Thanks, you’re right, I do tend to go with a pretty stoic expression, I think I get so focused on the body that I tend to forget the face.
>>4520246
It’s definitely a comfort zone, gotta try to break away from it for sure.

Thanks for the thoughts, here’s another

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:20:17 2020 No.4520418

>>4519957
You have really good drawing skills, but your art is sort of boring to look at desu.
Even when you make different characters you draw the same body, with type the same face, with very similar floating in a void poses with everything you post.

Would love to see you do something more interesting with your characters acting or some BG or environmental details to ground your characters in. It seems you have the skills to do it.

>>4519980
I agree with this anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:31:01 2020 No.4520452 >>4519359 Need more dynamism but looks good overall

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:47:19 2020 No.4520506 >>4519854 blog

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 14:47:58 2020 No.4520510
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>>4520178
>>4520181
>>4520212
You have no idea what you're talking about. Doesn't matter how saggy/large the breasts are or how naturally downturned the nipples are, their placement will never be like that when wearing a bra or tight top, as is clearly the case in the drawing in question. Bottom line, if it looks bad it is bad. And I love cowtits.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:00:57 2020 No.4520564 >>4520510 Holy shit a smart and reasonable coomer.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:08:39 2020 No.4520589
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>>4520407
>>4520418
I agree, I have to start going more crazy with my compositions/ideas. I feel some stagnation. Pic related was lost to last thread, I think it’s one of my stronger pieces as of late. Thanks again.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:09:09 2020 No.4520590 >>4519554 I have prayed for you anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:23:29 2020 No.4520622 File: 1017 KB, 1668x2388, 3F283F7F-5123-40A9-AD2F-2890442119BF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520589 Some sketches

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:24:44 2020 No.4520629 File: 1.54 MB, 2156x2384, 5F4C3570-8276-4935-BFC1-B69322DC1048.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520622

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:27:40 2020 No.4520635 File: 1.09 MB, 2388x1668, 9B45B3DF-A654-42F8-A69E-63665B3BE38C.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520629 Need to get back to being this loose and free, or maybe hit up some studies. Anyway, done spamming.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:28:03 2020 No.4520638 >>4520589 >>4520622 >>4520629 Very nice. You've got it, dude. Just stop being lazy lol. Why cheat yourself out of making even more interesting art, right?

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:35:33 2020 No.4520657
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>>4519633
retard, what's enjoyable about suffering? I can't bare to read this nonsense. You can learn lessons without suffering, you can enjoy good things without any pain or force upon yourself, enjoy peace without guilt.

>>4519533
pic related

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:36:16 2020 No.4520660 File: 83 KB, 1000x558, Breast.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4515478 Anyone have sauce for this?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:36:45 2020 No.4520663 >>4520657 What's the story behind that post and why did the tranny jannies delete it?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:36:57 2020 No.4520664 >>4520638 Just let him draw whatever he wants. Art is a personal thing. Not everyone is obsessed with making it and impressing other people.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:38:18 2020 No.4520667 File: 944 KB, 1240x1754, Untitled15_20200423152634.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Did this study in about four hours. There is so much more I could do, but with a full commission backlog I have to stop this piece.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:42:00 2020 No.4520680 File: 386 KB, 894x881, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520402 really cute stuff!

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:43:45 2020 No.4520683 File: 213 KB, 480x270, Pool Party wip1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Working on my perspective/lighting game, gonna try and render this one out really well.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:44:52 2020 No.4520684 >>4520663 It's part of random /jp/ shitposts. That very one took off for whatever reason, and it's deleted because the janitor is a schizo.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:48:35 2020 No.4520697 File: 2.45 MB, 1920x1080, Pool Party wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520683 I really did post the wrong file, huh?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:50:16 2020 No.4520704 File: 1.23 MB, 5000x2855, 1 30 copy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4519729 >>4519809 >>4520589 give me the blogs.... now

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 15:59:32 2020 No.4520717

>>4520510
You can see the nipples are oriented downward on the topless picture.
She clearly does not wear a bra otherwise the lower part would be rounder in order to push the breast upwards.
The ogive shape is something you can see in the first picture, and it's common to exaggerate this way in h-stuff, like Turtle Fish Paint.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:03:32 2020 No.4520725 File: 3.45 MB, 2100x3150, 1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished rendering the first page of a comic i'm trying to make. What do you guys think?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:05:39 2020 No.4520729 >>4520697 /beg/

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:06:15 2020 No.4520731
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>>4520638
Thanks for the thoughts and encouragement, it’s appreciated. Here’s a quickie with keeping it fresh and dynamic in mind. Gonna try to push forward again.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:12:11 2020 No.4520748 >>4520729 Oh darn, I thought that I might've been able to post here. Could you at least give me some pointers?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:23:09 2020 No.4520769 >>4520748 Don't listen to him, it's good But you fucked up proportions in the perspective

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:27:13 2020 No.4520778 >>4520769 Thanks man, and yeah- looking back, the torso is a bit long if you take the camera angle into consideration, and the legs are stubby. I'll be working on those for sure.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:28:11 2020 No.4520781 >>4520622 Bro that guy has a pussy

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:29:15 2020 No.4520782 >>4520697 Are you trying to do a fisheye?

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:34:27 2020 No.4520793
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>>4520782
I suppose, I guess that might be the term for it. Going into it, I wanted to focus the camera on her hips, pushing her legs and upper torso back in space. I didn't have any references for this, so it's all just what I could think up :V

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:37:10 2020 No.4520798 >>4520793 Invert your horizontal arcs/curves, that'd make the piece easier to read as fisheye. Might be a bit too late at this stage though.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:37:36 2020 No.4520799 File: 550 KB, 1300x1500, hqdefault.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thanks for the help anons it's not great but I learned alot. I just wanna finish this shit

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:40:24 2020 No.4520807 >>4520798 I'll keep that in mind for the next time I do some experimental stuff :] Thanks

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:41:43 2020 No.4520811 File: 237 KB, 1000x562, lin.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Player character for my little solodev project. I think I could stick with this style, even when drawing more realistic characters.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 16:51:58 2020 No.4520834

>>4519555
>>4519555
>>4519557
>>4519559
>>4519561
>>4519633
>>4519671
>>4519641
>>4519764
Thanks guys, I am exhausted and at night time its just worse. Next time I post and there are problems can you just point them out individually please, like x needs forshortening, x muscle doesn't attach like that? I'm a hard worker but I can't see the problems you guys see.

I am going to start community college figure drawing class because I think its going to help. I need to start my life over in so many respects, but I'm getting older and wondering how much time I really have to start it all again. I'm already past 25 and not really expecting to ever make money at this, I just want something to show for my life beyond consumption and isolation.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 17:08:44 2020 No.4520887 >>4520799 forget the coomer part im just really digging her expression. good job anon

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 17:08:49 2020 No.4520888 File: 104 KB, 802x600, dood3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4520331

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 18:20:47 2020 No.4521111 >>4520680 blog please, this is great.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 18:45:14 2020 No.4521187 >>4520704 i'm the comic guy https://twitter.com/McLinskeyArt

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 19:11:13 2020 No.4521311 >>4520178 Your comparing a thin tank top to a bra, a dress shirt and a sweater you mouth breathing coombrain nigger.

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 19:24:43 2020 No.4521348

>>4521311
I understand the criticism with the nipples it did look pretty dumb. but I also think you're allowed to exaggerate in places for stylization purposes. that's what I sought to do with the final drawing the nips are no longer pronounced and this time it actually looks like wool but no sweater vest could function like that unless you literally held it back. this is done intentionally so that the figure is apparent without beating you over the head with the abdomine or any of that shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 19:44:21 2020 No.4521387 >>4520799 You listened to advice without making a fit like other anons, gmi.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 19:46:37 2020 No.4521395 >thread almost hit bump limit and most posts are art posting and help there is still hope

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:07:57 2020 No.4521456 >>4518695 why is her ass crack visible through the skirt? even if it was a wedgy it makes no sense

Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:12:52 2020 No.4521466

>>4519817
Clip Studio Paint on a Cintiq with the typesprite brush pack. Don't try to learn from me though, I have no idea what I'm doing.

>>4519854
Her eyes are a bit high on her head, and it looks kinda weird having them so open. It seems you're trying to apply realistic anatomy rules to anime but it rarely works; usually eyes are less than halfway up the face because it makes them look cuter, and if you draw realistic eyes but widen them to look like anime eyes, it just looks like they're staring (this is what a lot of cosplayers do). I'd either go all in on realism or make it more anime. Otherwise I like it, your lines are really nice and the hair's got a great flow to it.

>>4520589
Do you use one tone with differing opacities or choose different tones for each value?

>>4520667
Not sure you need the construction, final lines might look good enough on their own.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:19:46 2020 No.4521487 File: 63 KB, 408x645, ezgif.com-crop_4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I like fish, what does that make me?

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:33:31 2020 No.4521528 >>4521487 /beg/

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:49:33 2020 No.4521581 >>4520660 frank cho I think

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 20:49:58 2020 No.4521583 File: 76 KB, 465x560, process.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 21:42:01 2020 No.4521750 File: 878 KB, 1716x1036, edelgard4bb4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I've been playing too much vidya(first time dark souls on the switch), but quickly finished this to move on.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 21:46:13 2020 No.4521758 >>4521750 Man i'm jelly of how fast you improve

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 22:33:25 2020 No.4521880 File: 296 KB, 993x695, Fight Scene Roughs.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some quick roughs for a fight scene.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 22:44:31 2020 No.4521898 >>4521880 ...Is this sequential? Because I have no goddamn clue what's happening.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 23:29:16 2020 No.4521991 >>4521898 An argument turned violent between two characters, a spunky redhead and a dark elf. Both are spellswords.

>>	Anonymous Thu Apr 23 23:41:23 2020 No.4522016 >>4521991 you need to storyboard this way better because I can't tell who the characters are, how many there are, or what the fuck is happening

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 02:23:29 2020 No.4522343 File: 1.66 MB, 1024x1399, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tryna do some more fantasy painting durin quarantine, any redraws or redlines welcome

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 03:53:13 2020 No.4522538 File: 39 KB, 870x518, 33.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 07:37:17 2020 No.4522880 File: 329 KB, 724x1023, kyoka.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] personal wip

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 07:43:15 2020 No.4522894 >>4522538 You okay anon? Things will get better

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 07:45:15 2020 No.4522899 >>4522538 literally me rn

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 08:55:11 2020 No.4523027 File: 365 KB, 750x859, russian pinocchio inspired clown.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I never once in my life ever wanted to go out on a sunny day, but being forced to stay indoors is definitely different from willingly doing so.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 11:42:37 2020 No.4523337 File: 157 KB, 1113x746, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fcuking

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 12:21:49 2020 No.4523449 File: 1.19 MB, 780x1120, Fubuki_Manga.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4517253 >For now i suggest fixing her chest, what you have is what i call boob pockets. He should keep it, there's no need for a 100% realistic approach.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 12:51:21 2020 No.4523523 File: 185 KB, 745x1200, Mario1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 12:57:18 2020 No.4523540 >>4523523 >/beg/

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 13:04:02 2020 No.4523561 >>4523540 >[HEADCANON]

Anonymous Fri Apr 24 13:38:08 2020 No.4523652

>>4519882
Oof this is very true, I first drew her with without hair, but when I added the fringe I felt like I wanted to emphasis her other eye, but now I see I definitely went overboard. I probably only added a pixel or two in height & width but with pixel art that quickly changed proportions. Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 13:42:25 2020 No.4523659 File: 1.82 MB, 1600x1200, Q.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Spent forever on this, not sure I learned anything.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 13:55:55 2020 No.4523700 File: 170 KB, 386x438, Sculpting the shit out of it.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Too much coom, not enough testosterone.

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 15:44:08 2020 No.4523989 >>4521750 great colors

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 16:23:31 2020 No.4524105 >>4518732 blog?

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 19:34:50 2020 No.4524547 >>4523989 >>4521758 thank you friends

>>	Anonymous Fri Apr 24 19:39:22 2020 No.4524554 go go gog gogogog >>4524552

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 25 02:10:49 2020 No.4525478 File: 3.03 MB, 1337x2256, scathach.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4522343 ehhhhh

>>	Anonymous Sat Apr 25 04:00:21 2020 No.4525650 File: 1.24 MB, 1500x1500, kip river.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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