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Previous >>4447289

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4454803
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:p

>> No.4454971

>>4454803
That pixelation is such a neat idea.

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>>4454791
I can't paint so I'm comfort zoning on ink damn

>> No.4455003

>>4454999
cute! work on that perspetive though

>> No.4455009

>>4455003
how do you mean ?

>> No.4455282
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>> No.4455338

>it's another page of half assed self-aware edgy doodley shit

>> No.4455398

>>4454803
>>4454999
>>4455002
>>4455282
These are beautiful bois. blogs?

>> No.4455741

>>4454791
Congrats to saber pointer anon to making it to the OP pic, i love your work.

>> No.4455817

>>4454999
Fantastic stuff, anon.
>>4455003
Oh, stfu lol. It's obvious the derpy deformation is intentional. It gives a ton of character to the artwork.

>> No.4455826

>>4453909
Blog?

>> No.4455991
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post it girl

>> No.4456022
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4456022

Should i color this?

>> No.4456097

>>4454803

holy freaking blog?

>> No.4456150

>>4455817
cope

>> No.4456163

>>4454803
>>4454999
Thread started nicely. Give blogs my dudes.

>> No.4456193

>>4456022
Look at it as an opportunity to practice your coloring. If you're on the fence about it, it can never hurt to try something new and see what works.

>> No.4456242
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A commission :>

>> No.4456286

>>4456242
>even the underage fell to the coomer side

>> No.4456333

>>4456286
There is nothing wrong with porn shut up already you fucking computer

>> No.4456338
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>>4456333
>There is nothing wrong with porn shut up already you fucking computer

>> No.4456341

>>4456333
>>4456338
Why do we have this arguement every thread.

>> No.4456346

>>4456286
>>4456333
>>4456338
>>4456341

Hate to be misleading- the drawing isn’t of some dirty old man’s OC who’s planning to wank to it later, I was commissioned by a girl on Instagram who’s into alternative fashion. This is just one of her looks, just putting that out there

>> No.4456353

>>4456150
Don't cry. I'm sure someday you'll acquire taste as well.

>> No.4456390

>>4456242
Very nice. Your hatching has improved.

>> No.4456426

>>4456341
Crab-derailing. From both sides.

>> No.4456469
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4456469

Made a Lulu.

>> No.4456517

>>4456469
I love the top half and most the bottom half. That leg and foot don't look right to me. I'd do some red lines if I were at my tablet but for the way the dress sits on the ground it implies a sense of depth that the leg doesnt give me. It looks 2d in comparison.
The rest looks good though

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>>4456517
yeah, pretty shitty leg. Lately I've been very lazy, I tend to flatten and do lots of bad shortcomings.

>> No.4456615

>>4456242
Pretty nice! Do you use a ruler for the hatching?

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>>4456193

>> No.4456671
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>>4456193

>> No.4456715

>>4456390
That’s really nice to hear! Thank you anon :)
>>4456615
I don’t, am I allowed to take that as a compliment? :’D

>> No.4456740

>>4455741
thank you for liking my work

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>> No.4456748

>>4456715
Yes, it looks so clean.
>>4456627
Cuteee

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>tfw spent 20+ years of my life doing traditional lineart and now can't escape the lineart mentality
I want to learn to paint properly but I l i t e r a l l y don't know where to start or how to roll back years of creating art with a with pencil and pen only. Lazy multiply layers are an easy escape but I'm never a big fan of the finished product. Somebody slap some advice into me.

Anyway, I finished this.

>> No.4456801

>>4456791
Your cutest, most appealing work yet.

>> No.4456804
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help me

>> No.4456815

>>4456346
I will wank to it anyway

>> No.4456820
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Pastry chef transformer

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>>4454791
What are some tips on improving the colors in a picture?
I want my art to bbe more colorful and bright but I tend to make everything too dull or WAY-oversaturate.

I was thinking making a custom filter somehow or something so I can adjust it after the pic is done? Any ideas help

>> No.4456828

>>4456801
Hnnng thank you.

>>4456820
Wasn't a fan of the colours you used in your last two pieces, but this is fantastic. Your output is great too.

>> No.4456895

>>4456610
Hey for what it is it's rad. Can you post some more or have a place you upload your stuff?

>> No.4456913

>>4456671
Looks good! Blog?

>> No.4456943
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>>4454791
How what are some specific things I can do to make these better?

>> No.4456950

>>4456791
Seconding this question because I took a similar path.

>> No.4456995
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4456995

Some more animal crossing stuff.

>>4456627
>>4456820
>>4454803
Amazing!

>> No.4456998

>>4455826
>blog
twitter.com/subudraws/
>>4454106
>line shadow effect
Duplicate your lineart, change the copied lineart to dark red.
Then apply a Gaussian blur around 3-6 pixels and set the layer to Multiply.

>> No.4457010

>>4456346
>Dressing like a E-thot is considered Alternative fashion.
I feel fucking old.

>> No.4457013

>>4456791
>>4456950
Also did traditional lines with no color for most of my life. I still think in terms of line first but painting doesn't scare me so much anymore. What I did was try many different techniques until one stuck. Specifically I had to find a brush that could "cut" (draw) and "smooth over" (paint, soften edges) all in one. Eventually using that, I just kinda naturally stopped using all the layers and modes and sliders and shit and focused on the drawing, or painting. Painting is actually fun when you treat it as an extension of drawing instead of a collection of folders and adjustments. Painters understand this, it's drawers who have to beat it into their heads.
Try drawing on fewer layers and merging often. It's going to be hard for a long time, you're going to hate it. But just keep trying different things until something works. Eventually you get to a point of confidence where you know if you make a mistake, you can just redraw/repaint it, you don't need to sliders and layers and all that.

>> No.4457049

>>4457013
Thanks for this anon.

I don't know if you can relate to these feelings at all but I think the thing that scares me the most about this process is knowing that I'm fairly competent at one of area of drawing, and am having to come to terms with the fact that I'm dogshit in another, arguably more vital area. I'll try out what you've suggested though. Fingies crossed.

>> No.4457061

>>4457049
Can definitely relate, there's still tons of holes in my knowledge and it's never easy confronting them. I think everybody has to deal with that. One thing though is, you overcome one challenge that gives you the confidence to overcome the next. So best just to face it and when you hit a wall, take a break and then try a different approach.

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>>4456822
you could study colors of artists you like and try to copy their palette, i learned a lot by just doing that by eye, also color theory, its good to know how to pick colors pic related

>> No.4457128

>>4457010
>Ephebophiles can finally live their dreams in peace

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todays drawpile stuff

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todays drawpile stuff

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>>4454791
Cyke.

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>>4456820
I lost my way - done for today, gotta do 4 tomorrow

>>4456828
>Your output is great too
Quantity over quality...

>> No.4457151

>>4457010
>Ephebophiles can finally live their dreams in peace

>> No.4457160

>>4457094
gib part 2

>> No.4457175

>>4457149
>>4456820
your improvement is staggering. i think you stagnated for a bit a while back but you’ve been making really good stuff lately

anyway with all this coomer shit, i never thought i’d see the day where people on 4chan of all websites are afraid of a little porn

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Drew some shortstacks

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>>4457209

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>>4457209

>> No.4457247

>>4457209
Go to /beg/, not /alt/

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>>4457209

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>>4456242
gift for friend

>> No.4457273

>>4457261
unrelated to its use in this thread, but I fucking love this reaction image (and politics aside)

>> No.4457280

>>4457263
>personal
>not personnel

>> No.4457287
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something im working on

>> No.4457288

Where’s Jay??

>> No.4457303
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>> No.4457631

>>4457209
based

>> No.4457642

>>4457303
Shoo shoooooo

>> No.4457660

>>4457303
Shoo shoo gainz goblin

>> No.4457662

>>4457303
Ur trying new stuff which is cool

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hands are more fun when they are girls

>> No.4457698

>>4456995
Looks neat!

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>>4457209

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I normally lurk these threads, but the lockdown is driving me insane.

>> No.4457714

>>4456913
instagram.com/nicolajma

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>>4457713

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>>4457716

>> No.4457721

>>4457209
Well I like it

>> No.4457775
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What character design do you prefer. what kind of personality do you think is conveyed from both designs and how do feel they stand in relation to the cat women as a duo?

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>>4457147
Kabuki Warriors.

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>>4457209
obbai lolliee

>> No.4457887

>>4457303
I’m still rooting for you. This is one of your better pieces in terms of gesture

>> No.4457900

>>4457775
I can't understand shit but the first one looks younger and crazier while the one below more reserved and older, i like the first one more. The cat girl looks a bit generic.

>> No.4457932

>>4457209
tits too big

>> No.4457952
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4457952

hello, everyone.

>>4457775
I like the boots a lot.

>> No.4458006
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Hello, /alt/, it's been a while.

>> No.4458032

>>4458006
these arent gross or bad just really boring and cliche, try doing something more inspired next time

>> No.4458040

>>4458006
cringe

>> No.4458045

>>4458032
>>4458040
Thank you! They do look a bit boring to me but I'm not sure how to fix it at this point.

>> No.4458065

>>4457209
Ignore the crabs, and do what you like to do. Blog?

>> No.4458073

>>4458045
Rage is the best looking one. Other than that, I have no input. It looks the most dynamic.

>> No.4458217

Does anyone else come across the issue of their phone creating a far more saturated image to the detriment of your drawing because that keeps happening and I hate it how do you metigate this?

>> No.4458235
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I am trying to change my style. I just can't do western anymore as it seems generally unpopular and i can't rationalize busting my ass trying to do it anymore. The left is my typical style of sketching before painting. The right is where i spent about 45 mins going over it. I have little experience trying a more cartoony style. Does right look more appealing than left and what can i do to improve the right one?

>> No.4458261

>>4458217
There isn't, you just have to calibrate the monitor you use to draw on and check with your friends to see if they're seeing the same thing.

>> No.4458275

>>4458006
Post more

>> No.4458278

>>4458235
First off /beg/ and second make your art simpler.

>> No.4458302

>>4458278
You're delusional.

>> No.4458306

>>4458278
Point out why its /beg/.

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Quick sketch I did this morning. Thoughts?

>> No.4458322

>>4458278
you're braindead retarded post what you consider not beg?

>> No.4458349

>>4458306
stiff, poor anatomy, overfocused on line quality whilst failing to understand the form those lines convey. if youre worth half a damn you should be able to see that this is is beg at a glance

>> No.4458375

>>4458349
You should have stopped with stiff and i would have believed you. But saying its poor anatomy and you outed yourself as a know nothing crab.

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Some kind of bunny guerrilla warfare commander I guess

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i dunno <.<

>> No.4458558

>>4458454
>>4458318
>>4457952
>>4457717
>>4457716
>>4457713
>>4457303
soul
>>4457263
>>4457287
>>4457669
>>4457775
>>4457794
>>4458006
>>4458235
>>4458447
soulless

>> No.4458566

>>4458306
Just like that anon said, it’s stiff and face is uncanny, saying you don’t know anatomy is just reaching though.

>> No.4458583

>>4458306
its really not, that motherfucker probably got yelled at by his mom. Id like to see you render it keep going !!!

>> No.4458604

>>4458558
Get out.

>> No.4458609

>>4456022
I find this charming as fuck anon. Makes me miss going to the roller rink

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>>4457209

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>>4457175
Thanks

>>4457149
Just 3 more to go, I think I am going to make it

>> No.4458715

>>4457209
Please give blog. This is very relevant to my interests.

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>>4458675
any tips on improving?

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>>4458675
Time to color

>>4458803
>tips on improving
Just draw - maybe more specifically ‘want’ to draw. Then you will want to do studies to improve your drawings and you will want to draw to put ideas on paper.

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etchy sketchy

>> No.4458933

>>4457303
Good fuckin work, I can't wait to see the day you realize how fucked your heads are, but good work

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>>4458882
Simple coloring - next!!

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Pepe I did

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>>4458991
Kobold doodle

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i've been trying to improve on my style, i can't do realism so i stick to this. opinions?

>> No.4459020

>>4458997
/beg/

>> No.4459026

>>4458770
her face and hair pisses me off

>> No.4459058

>>4457247
>trying to force people into /beg/
you truly are the worst type of crab.

>> No.4459090

>>4458997
I know this is really annoying to hear but I really would look in to loomis for this one the character lacks alot of anatomy. I know it's more stylized but still. I like the hair coloring also come on man going into it with the mentality of "I can't do realism" is really lame. it's hard I know but mentality is probably playing a big factor in that try simplifying the process through line gesture and shapes.here is a good place to start good luck fundamentals are important. stylization is hard but hopefully this helps.http://illustrationage.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/andrew-loomis-fun-with-a-pencil.pdf

>> No.4459092

>>4459058
Go to /beg/ and stop seething, retard.

>> No.4459095

>>4459090
i am so fucking sorry for the length of this shit. -_-

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>>4458997

>> No.4459099

>>4457209
Dibs on the middle one

>> No.4459125

>>4458997
>can't
You mean you're an undisciplined POS who drops something because it's not easy and you cant get it right on the first try

>> No.4459147

>>4457273
same

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>>4458973
It’s too late now, but any tips on drawing lace so that it doesn’t look like a rats nest of pubes?

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>>4459154
Colored - just. one. more...

>> No.4459359

>>4459240
mmhm... The one without color looks better, but it's just my opinion
Keep it up anon

>> No.4459385
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Getting ready to start painting this

>> No.4459518
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4459518

I tried drawing PriChan girls.
This is the way I usually draw their bodies. I'm going for stylised cute, not sexy. Lineart is the G-pen in clip studio. The ruffles and braids are quick and cheap.
Maybe looking to improve drawing clothing or bodies.

>> No.4459519
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>>4459518
Coloured version. (No shading)

>> No.4459524

>>4459240
Looking really great! I enjoy your color choices a lot.

>> No.4459539
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4459539

Took a few years off from drawing and recently got back into it. Probably the worst decision of my life imo but here's a gal from a MOBA I play.

>> No.4459547

>>4459539
Her pecs are so well defined

>> No.4459565

>>4459547
,:< I usually draw buff guys/gals but this one is supposed to be a doll so the figure is more stiff

>> No.4459575

>>4458675
>>4458973
>>4459240
I really love your work, it'd be so cool to see you doing character or even environment design for vidya games. Curious if you have any long term plans?

>> No.4459607

>>4459518
>>4459519
>>>/beg/

>> No.4459618

>>4458235
I like left. Please don't become a weeboo fag.

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>>4459636

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>>4459638

>> No.4459777
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>>4459240
So close - just going to finish it off quick. There was going to be a BG, but fuck it

>>4459359
Ya inks are still better

>>4459575
>Curious if you have any long term plans?
Thanks, no plans, just draw i guess

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>> No.4459896

>>4459877
Blog?

>> No.4459908
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>>4459877
Maybe something like this?

>> No.4459924
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>> No.4459959

>>4459896
Here you go.
https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>>4459908
Thank you.

>> No.4460003
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>>4459777
Jesus fuck, my shoulder is sore.

I did all 31 mechs - I’m finished, done, complete, end, pencils down

I gotta take a break...

>> No.4460010

>>4460003
Your bots exist in some bizzaro world where butterflies are the new standard currency.

>I gotta take a break...
No such thing.

>> No.4460011

>>4460003
This one is quite pretty.

>> No.4460012

>>4460003
nice, such clear growth over the month.

>> No.4460035

>>4460003
Incredible work mate, every single one is fantastic

>> No.4460077
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4460077

Dragging myself out of my comfort zone

>> No.4460082
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Generic premise

>> No.4460084
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>>4460003
>>4460003
>>4459959
>>4460011
>>4459893
>>4459877
>>4459639
>>4459638
>>4459524
>>4459519
>>4459240
>>4459154
>>4459090
>>4458882
>>4458882
>>4458803
>>4458770
>>4458566
>>4458558
>>4458447
>>4458306
>>4458073
>>4457952
>>4457794
>>4457873
>>4457700
>>4457713
>>4457669
>>4457303
>>4457263

*COUGH COUGH COUGH*

>> No.4460222

>>4458006
welcome back david
try joining /dad/ and the furchad army

>> No.4460255

>>4460084
fuck off infectedfag

>> No.4460261
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>>4460084
Keep trying weak shit, you can't touch this

>> No.4460264

>>4459924
Would tbqh

>> No.4460268

>>4460010
>butterflies are the new standard currency
Several of the mashup inpos had butterflies in them... it was all butterflies, flowers, gothic arches, and frilly dresses, not my usual comfort zone

>>4460011
>>4460012
>>4460035
Thanks! It was a fun month

>> No.4460295
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4460295

sketches count, right?

>> No.4460305
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>> No.4460507

>>4458997
Read Keys To Drawing.

>> No.4460521

>>4460484
ndr love ya

>> No.4460526

>>4458318
kek, recognized you from ng.

>> No.4460529

Cough cough

>> No.4460531

>>4460484
*cough cough*
blog?

>> No.4460659

>>4460484
Fuck you i like it

>> No.4460662

>>4460484
IS THAT A FUCKING NIPPLE?

>> No.4460665

>>4459777
I love your poses... I wish I could be half as consistent as you...

>> No.4460668

>>4460305
AWESOME STUFF

>>4460484
HOLY SHIT HOTE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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>>4459893
Update

>> No.4460918
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>>4459893
Update. Any suggestions to improve the silhouette?

>> No.4461030
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>> No.4461050

>>4461048
Literally downgrade

>> No.4461097

>>4461048
Literally upgrade

>> No.4461105

>>4461048
you literally just changed brush and decided not to color the iris.

>> No.4461106

>>4461050
she just has bigger tits

>> No.4461107

>hatch poster is a shitposter who got infected
That's a yikes from me.

>> No.4461149

>>4456022
maybe

>> No.4461153

>>4461106
Exactly.

>> No.4461157

>>4457209
POST MORE FFS

>> No.4461170

>>4461048
Are you on lockdown? This upload-rate is crazy

>> No.4461247

>>4461106
also looks like she has not aged well at all.

>> No.4461256

>>4460484
Muh dick

>> No.4461292
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I'm stuck with this piece because my character's hair is tricky
So I'm gonna take a break, in the meantime I would appreciate some comments and critics
The good and the bad
Or is it too rough yet?

>> No.4461295

>>4461048
I like the one on the left, if's more cutesy than slutty.

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>>4457013
So I've been following your advice.

This is literally the first thing I've ever attempted to paint in my life and surprisingly it's not going as horribly as I thought it would. Progress is slow, but I'm intending to keep working on this until it's all fully rendered. I'm still separating some pieces onto separate layers (hair, face, dress), but I think that's pretty normal? idk, I've never done this before.

Anyway, thanks for your advice! I feel like I've just had a whole other world open up to me where I finally get to do all the weird creepy art I've always wanted to do.

>> No.4461327

>>4461292
god i wish that were me

>> No.4461356
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4461356

Quick doodles of an old character

>> No.4461385
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Thoughts?

>> No.4461387

>>4461385
what the hell

>> No.4461397

>>4461387
Hell the what

>> No.4461419
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4461419

My messy lines are an embarrassment.

>> No.4461426

>>4461419
YOU DREW THE HANDS

(gj)

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>>4458454

>> No.4461498
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wip i've been working on over today and yesterday

>> No.4461526

>>4461318
Awesome dude! That really is a huge leap forward. I'm glad you told me the advice was useful. Can never tell if what I say made any difference. As for
>I'm still separating some pieces onto separate layers (hair, face, dress), but I think that's pretty normal? idk, I've never done this before.
Yeah, that's normal. I do it that way myself, keeps the larger elements clean and separate. But some artists like things to bleed together. In the end it's about experimenting and doing what feels right in the moment. No wrong answers.

>> No.4461527

>>4461419
blog?

>> No.4461536

>>4461419
Super cute! Not embarassing at all.
You should try coloring it though

>> No.4461560

What's a nice, easy to use line brush for doing thicker lines in Sai2? Want to play around with cartooning a bit.

>> No.4461590

>>4461527
_98fumi

>>4461536
coloring scares me, but ive been working on it

>> No.4461599

>>4461590
wow nice stuff Can I ask how long it took you to get this good?

>> No.4461604
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>>4457160

>> No.4461606

>>4461590
sorry for spamming, but may I also ask what kind of bunny you have? I used to have a holland lop, but your bunny is so cute and looks a little different from the average holland lop. I really want to get another bunny after ours passed away recently..

>> No.4461631
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>> No.4461647
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Quick sketch of an OC

>> No.4461687
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>>4457209
I wanted to try a slightly more 90s aesthetic, Also put a referent for how tall the shortstacks are. What do y'all guys think?

>>4458065
>>4458715
While I do have a pivix, the stuff on their looks nothing like what I posted.

>> No.4461697

>>4461696
Makes my pp the big pp

>> No.4461974
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Tired of working on this so I think I'll call it done for now

>> No.4462084

>>4461498
And then you're gonna post it on some social saying "how much fun" you had drawing it, calling it only a sketch if you don't like it enough, and saying how much you're excited for the nier remastered. I hope you won't do any of this

>> No.4462094
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>>4457794
Goons.

>> No.4462129

>>4461687
i like it
upon seeing that AC bunny day guy i immediately thought of robbie

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designed this nose alien guy as a joke but now want to actually want to learn how 2 draw scifi ships and creatures!

>> No.4462143

>>4461498
I love Kainé and I love this drawing

>> No.4462149

>>4461974
You can definitely push this further. Regardless, nicely done

>> No.4462191

>>4462149
Yeah, there is a lot of stuff I am not sure how to handle. I want to find a good blend of painting and graphic appeal but it's not working, so I figure its best to leave it be and come back when I know what I'm doing.

>> No.4462233

>>4462131
the whip sword is really cool but it doesn't match the characters design at all

>> No.4462242
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>>4462233
it's because the character is a 'metal speaker' who are people who can control metal, i designed a 'sword lance' that they'd use that could act as short coiled sword or extend out like a lance

>> No.4462361

>>4462141
Can he smell my fear and my braaps as well?

>> No.4462364

>>4462141
>in a brapp-laxy far far away...

>> No.4462379

>>4458770
You wouldn't happen to be into tsutomu nihei's stuff would you?

>> No.4462383

>>4460305
Really love this perspective and rough linework

>> No.4462393
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I don't usually draw things like this, but I did this time.

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>>4461419
>ugu my render is shit uwu my linework sucks
Shut the fuck up plsease shut the fuck uptw

>> No.4462446
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I guess this goes here

mood painting w/ asset from an old style experiment

>> No.4462474
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finally came back to this

>> No.4462484

>>4462084
Nah I'm gonna keep working on it. Got the time to do so, so why not. Plus it has been fun, haven't done something proper in a long time
>>4462143
Same bruh and thank you

>> No.4462488

>>4462191
simplicity in objects and environment is fine because you're focusing on shape and color and texture with a more graphic style. the issue is your figures. no matter what you're drawing they always stand out as stiff or ugly. you should either seriously crack down on figure stylization or cut them out entirely - though i know this is useless advice to give because ive seen anons tell this to you over and over and you dont seem to take it to heart. the figure in this particular piece isn't bad at all technically but the way you stylized is so unappealing..

>> No.4462499
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presenting daniel

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another daniel

>> No.4462510

>>4459638
this is
veryvery very very very very nice
very very nice
2049

>> No.4462516

>>4456943
If you're going to make the upper body muscular the legs have to be muscular too

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>>4454791
I've been trying to force myself to draw shadows with thick, opaque brushes. I don't know why I'm doing this, I think I saw it mentioned somewhere.

>> No.4462536

>>4462393
very cool work my dude. she's a bit too broad shouldered for my taste, but otherwise good job.

>> No.4462657

>>4461696
The ginger is the only one who doesn't look like an oppai loli. As a shortstack aficionado myself, I personally think you drew the legs of these girls a little too long in comparison to their bodies. Without that Seinfeld looking dude in the background I'd have a hard time telling that these are shortstacks.

>> No.4462662

>>4462141
I love everything about this, especially the little nose-emblem kneepads. Hell, you could probably make races based off of the five senses.

>> No.4462665

>>4462141
>nosebro
are you some kind of nosebro simp

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Whew, finally done with this one. Gonna take a break then get back at the last portrait.

>> No.4462986

>>4462929
/beg/

>> No.4463019

>>4462986

Pyw

>> No.4463021

>>4461974
Very nice, cute boi

>> No.4463046

>>4460077
>>4460082
makes me melancholic, nice work anon(s)

>> No.4463172
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Feel like I made some anatomical mistakes that I'll only see when I reopen the file next week or so.

>> No.4463195

>>4461050
>>4461097
In terms of style you can prefer whichever one you want, I see the one on the right as an improvement because it's closer to my original intention
>>4461105
>>4461106
>>4461153
I disagree anons :v, though the changes aren't obvious I did adjust some of the design details and changed up the proportions to better fit the image I had in mind
>>4461247
I wanted a mature, aged look with the first sketch, it just didn't work because I didn't know how to stylise correctly and only drew the face that I was comfortable with.
>>4461170
I am, haha
>>4461295
You're justified in having that opinion anon, I guess I should've read the room better when posting since I know that innocence and youth in female characters is very favoured here. But personally I definitely see the sketch on the right as an improvement because my original idea was to draw a mature, extravagant and confident woman- the first one just doesn't speak that

>> No.4463211

>>4463019
Seething /beg/

>> No.4463497

>>4463195
No one knows this character, so if the new one fits your idea better that's all well and good. This place does dislike mature women.

>> No.4463505
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4463505

What can i do to improve this piece ?
How do i make it more appealing ?

>> No.4463507

>>4463505
less chicken scratch, more loomis

>> No.4463519

>>4461974
Make more studies of textures, more gestures, volume, etc. You've been at this level for a while, which is adequate I guess, but I feel you can get more oomph.

>> No.4463555

>>4463211
NTA but post your work. Let's see if you can do better.

>> No.4463579

>>4463505
>>4463507
It's a rough sketch bro :(
I mean in the sense of anatomy and color choices features. How can i make it more appealing ?

>> No.4463586
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4463586

drawpile stuff

>> No.4463587

>>4461498
Fix up the perspective with the left leg and right arm. The knee and calf on the left leg are way too skinny, it looks like she has all meat in her thighs and anorexic, dying lower leg.
For the arm, replicate the pose. You'll notice you have to put your upper arm forward in order to have your elbow resting anywhere near your knee. Correct the rendering so it reflects the upper arm pointing towards the knee, instead of towards the ground like you have it here.

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>>4463586
smaller vers

>> No.4463645

>>4463587
tyvm anon, been trying to fix the leg for a while but thanks for pointing out the arm

>> No.4463736
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I don't know, In one hand this looks like shit, in another I fucking love doing this and I feel like it could get cool if I crack the fucking puzzle and pull the style off.

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>>4463736

>> No.4463792

>>4457247
>>4458278
>>4459020
>>4459020
>>4459607
>>4459092
>>4462986

Just FYI to all the summerfags and new people in here. This guy is the board troll known as Salty-Kun. He's been saying the same unhelpful shit for years and never actually gives any real critique. Ignore him.

>> No.4463795

>>4463792
>summerfags
>spring just started
huh?

>> No.4463807

>>4463795
All the kids have early extended summer cause of virus. So yea they are summerfags.

>> No.4463808

Can I post my shitty animation here since the animation thread is gone rn?

>> No.4463810

>>4463808
Make a new animation thread?

>> No.4463811

>>4463810
I don't wanna fuck it up, I've never made generals.

>> No.4463814

>>4463811
>this is your average /ic/ poster

>> No.4463821

>>4463811
Anon, I...

>> No.4463836

>>4463811
You adorable little thing.

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4463867

>>4463807
>coronasummer started a year after I graduated highschool
Its not fair

>> No.4463900

>>4463811
just copy paste the last OP and link the previous thread

>> No.4464026
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>>4463172
Her head may be too big.

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>> No.4464108

>>4464026
It's not her head that's the problem, it's your values, she doesn't look like she belongs in that environment at all. Either she needs to be darker or the background needs to be lighter.

>> No.4464112

>>4463736
The puzzle you need to crack is painting with reference in grayscale before you even attempt colour. You need to walk back to move forwards.

>> No.4464118

>>4458675 #

Blog please? I loved everything i saw from you here

>> No.4464128
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4464128

>>4458895
sketchy etchy

>> No.4464138

>>4464128
>>4458895
Nice stuff, I really dig the mecha/sci-fi design you did there.
Your work also has a good sense of gesture too.

>> No.4464158

>>4463596
I really like the face but it took me a while to realize what was going on

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I just can't stand being in /b/ drawthread anymore. You guys mind if i crash here?

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>>4464256
Also tfw the silhouette of your drawing looks more interesting than the actual drawing...

>> No.4464276

>>4464256
>>4464263
Actually nvm, it seems /i/ is more of my skill level.

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>> No.4464370

>>4464026
what, did you not notice the nose?

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>>4464511
n e w
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>> No.4464566

>>4461356
love this

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ms cunny

>> No.4464699

>>4462431
have you considered though that maybe my art is mediocre (not bad, just ok) and im trying to avoid unsolicited crit? haha

>> No.4464729

>>4462488
I don't take it to heart cause I get just as many people who seem to enjoy my style, or at least tolerate it lol. If you don't like it that's fine, but I'm not gonna change the way I draw things just to appease another person. I'd be happy to hear out any advice you have on my figures if it's more substantial than the stylization is bad, because that alone tells me nothing.

>>4463021
Thanks, anon

>>4463519
Yeah, been slowly working on more studies to try and figure things out but progress is slow. Mainly just did this to warm myself up to painting again, I'll try to push myself harder with my next painting since I wasn't feeling this one.

>> No.4465109

>>4464118

He goes by tableguy if you want his blog.

>> No.4465282

>>4462474
just draw it again my dude

>> No.4465525

>>4455002
Based bloodbro